1. Dusty's Hard (4,72 stars, 291 notes)
2. Easy (2,06 stars, 155 notes)
3. Insane (4,98 stars, 443 notes)
4. Normal (3,77 stars, 205 notes)

Krisom wrote:

b) An easy difficulty

hold on while I make one then

372,173,60799,1,0
256,192,60976,12,4,62211

376,256,60799,2,0,B|384:344|336:392|256:407|176:392|128:344|136:256|136:256|136:248,1,400

Dusty wrote:

01:06:800 (1,2,3,4) - Trust me, no one will care that you broke distance snap here to do this :p

Dusty wrote:

Well, while I still feel like modding... mod post go

I'm not in the tags on all the diffs :p
(yay, free kudosu!)
Kudosu given, Ignored the rest of the post, now GET OUT OF MY GRASS!

[Easy]
OD+1 plays better IMO
I don't really see a difference, so I suppose I'll raise it

01:00:799 (3,1) - Well, during that spinner you can see that green slider :/
maybe delete that spinner and make (3) a rainbow slider?

open the .osu and delete these two lines:

372,173,60799,1,0
256,192,60976,12,4,62211

and add this one where that other one used to be:

376,256,60799,2,0,B|384:344|336:392|256:407|176:392|128:344|136:256|136:256|136:248,1,400

If you do that, you need to move the green combo up.OR flip it horizontally, wich is what I did

01:06:800 (1,2,3,4) - Trust me, no one will care that you broke distance snap here to do this :p Anyway, It's not necesary to break the Distance snap in torder to make that. How could I miss that :S?
01:07:859 (4) - finish? Done Also the kiai time sections need more finish IMO as well <_< I'm not a bif fan of the finish hitsound, I may add some more though
01:31:505 (2) - This looks like it's closer to (1) than to (3) even though it really isn't. (it's an optical illusion) Move it right? Nah, I like to mess with the player's minds.
00:15:976 (1,2,3,4) - oh right, this is symmetrical to 01:06:800 so change it here, too? ^^
02:04:329 (1) - Break distance snap and move it below the green slider? FFFFFFFFFFFFF- No D:
02:09:976 (1) - add a repeat maybe? Nah

[Normal]
00:10:152 (1) - Maybe add some hitsound onto the beginning of the slider? Right
00:31:152 (1,2,3) - maybe increase spacing to 1.0x? I like how these triangle jumps play in Insane I'll keep these
00:50:564 (1) - down a grid? Done
01:00:799 (1) - add a finish maybe? Done
02:39:270 (2) - up 1 or 2 grids, whichever gets it centered like this? Done
02:42:093 (2) - down a grid? Done

[Dusty's Hard]
flawless just kidding

[Insane]
I suck at osu! so I can't really mod this
Well, I cant really play this

00:03:446 (1,2,3) - Up so it's not overlapped by the blue slider? Do you really notice this?? I'm amazed o_o
00:04:505 (1) - place in the center of that triangle? =_= Distance snap
01:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this waaay further down? like if it were a Ctrl+J of the previous combo Meh, I like it there.

Teras wrote:

Hey!

Easy and normal looks fine. So I will mod the other ones Later. Because i don't have time atm.

But I found this when I checked through all diffs.

Why all these inheriting sections at the end in Dusty's Hard? D: It makes the volume fade with the music =3=
You could remove some of them >.>

Also, you will have to resize the BG. (I don't know the smaller version). But the bigger one is 1248 x 768. So you should look out for the smaller size. Yeah, I should probably search for another BG =-=

Star* For now. Mod will come later

DiamondCrash wrote:

Great song. Done in the right style as well.

General;
What is with that hitcircle? Is it really necessary?
Wich one o_o? The black hitcircle overlay? I like it black D:

Easy;
Enjoyable, good job with this.Thank you ^^!

Dusty wrote:

01:06:800 (1,2,3,4) - Trust me, no one will care that you broke distance snap here to do this :p

DO THAT Done alredy

Normal;
Slider speed seems a little fast.May change If someone else suggests

Hard;
Good stuff, little untidy in places.

Insane;
00:11:035 (3,4,5) - If you play this, you'll notice the stack looks a little untidy. Move this stack right and down one grid so that the top is in the middle of the slider. Moved one grid down and right
00:58:858 (1,2,3) - Same for this stack. Ok :3
and so on.
Choruses are really well thought out in terms of placement and not overmapped which is a relief.Thank you!

arken1015 wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:741 (1) - [Suggestion] Make symmetric via y-axis? I'd have to break the distance snap :<
00:55:152 (3) - ^ Done

[Normal]
Fine to me :3

[Insane]
00:03:446 (1,2) - [Suggestion] Make symmetric via y-axis? I'll pass on this one ^^!
00:31:505 (2,3) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:42:799 (2,3) - How about move 1 grid left?
01:19:505 (2,3) - How about move 1 grid right?
01:30:799 (2,3) - How about move 1 grid left?
Done all of the avobe



Seems good song :3
Anyway, good luck :3

Kecco wrote:

•Insane•
Maybe the overall is too high. What do you think about reducing it?
I was thinking this myself, Done

00:57:094 (3) - 1 grid down? (lv3) =/
00:58:858 (1,2,3) - 1 grid left? (lv3) =/ Half grid.
02:03:623 (3,4) - They are not so much visible. Kept them, sorry
02:07:682 (3,4) - 2 grid up so that It'll have the same position of 02:06:799 (4) - ? Done


Just those, other diffs are good.
Very very GoOd mAp~
StaR~

RandomJibberish wrote:

Cool map. Here are all the problems I found...
General:
Needs a hitcircle.png or it's unrankable. I made this one that looks pretty good with your overlay you can use if you want, or just stick the default in the folder.

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ca0b5]hitcircle.png[/attachment:ca0b5]

I love it, thanks ^^!


Normal
I think you should put in some 1/2 notes to fit the music better, you've smoothed out some rythms which makes sense in an Easy but isn't really neccesary in a Normal... I'm scared by increasing much the star rating and being forced to lower the HP or the OD <_< I ended up adding like, 2 circles for the entire diff, I suck, I know, I know XD!
00:51:446 (2) - Make this a slightly larger semicircularish shape then separate it away from the sliderend before like this , the overlap is ugly. Don't worry about it breaking distance snap my a grid or two, it won't be confusing to play. What about it now?
00:52:152 (3) - Stack this on (1)'s end Done, thanks ^^! I can't belive I missed this

Insane
Reaaaaallly needs a lower OD. Awesome otherwise though
Was cut by you fixing that lol

Really awesome map, star.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  A bit hard for a Easy imho.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:22:682 (1) - extend to 00:25:505?

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  A bit hard for a Normal imho
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:22:682 (1) - extend to 00:25:505?

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I "wow"'d at the massive inherited sections spam at the end. Are that many actually necessary to get that fading sound? xD
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:17:564 (4,5) - 01:29:211 (5) - 02:25:681 (5) - misreadable for a 1/2 spacing

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:11:035 (3,4,5) (and the others) - great use of stack. Also, stack leniency 0.4 is absolutely the best one for this map.
  Great job here.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:22:682 (1) - guess what? extend to 00:25:505?

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  A bit hard for a Easy imho. It is =_=
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:22:682 (1) - extend to 00:25:505?

- Normal:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  A bit hard for a Normal imho I think this one is nice, In fact, I'd like to add even more 1/2 notes, but THEN it would be a hard
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:22:682 (1) - extend to 00:25:505?

- Insane:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  00:11:035 (3,4,5) (and the others) - great use of stack. Also, stack leniency 0.4 is absolutely the best one for this map.
  Great job here. It would look horrible wihout DC's help >w<!
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:22:682 (1) - guess what? extend to 00:25:505?

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Nothing else to say.
This already feels like a ranked map imho.
You shouldn't have problems.

Teras wrote:

Why all these inheriting sections at the end in Dusty's Hard? D:
You could remove some of them >.>

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Dusty's Hard:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I "wow"'d at the massive inherited sections spam at the end. Are that many actually necessary to get that fading sound? xD
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:17:564 (4,5) - 01:29:211 (5) - 02:25:681 (5) - misreadable for a 1/2 spacing

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Kecco wrote:

•Dusty's Hard•
00:03:093 (7) - New combo.
00:03:446 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:03:799 (1) - ^
00:04:858 (1) - ^

arken1015 wrote:

[Dusty's Hard]
01:22:682 (2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
01:33:976 (2,3) - ^
02:30:446 (2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
02:45:976 (1) - lol, Fade Out!!!

Dusty wrote:

And here's updated version

Kecco wrote:

Recheck.
From your fixes appeared others ones.

•Insane•
00:11:035 (3,4,5) - 1 grid left and 1 grid up The editor makes this look ugly, but when playing, (3) is centered in the previous slider
00:59:388 (4) - This slider is not centred, it needs a fix without using the "Grid snap". Well, I was hoping someone else agreed with me in this. While DC suggested moving 00:11:035 (3,4,5) to make it centered, moving 00:58:858 (1,2,3) doesn't make a big diference AND (3) is then too far away from (4), making it look uncentered. I fixed everything, It should look better now.

...

Teras wrote:

The only thing actually bugging me now is the combo colors. They are hard to see at some spots in the map ;_;

Blue Dragon wrote:

Hihi!

Easy
Nothing here.


Normal
00:29:388 (3) - Move down this point of the slider to make it prettier?
Done

Insane
00:10:505 (3,4,5) - Put them here.
While playing, it looks completely different.
The left image shows your spacing, the right one shows how it is now. aka: not changed >_<



This is a incredible map! :O Awesome sliders and patterns. Star!

Dusty wrote:

updated

Sushi971 wrote:

As I promised, you catched my attention

[Easy]
look at this spinner : 00:22:682 (1) and this one : 01:13:152 (1) . they are mapped on the same thing, with different timings. choose one.
Made the first one start earlier

[Normal]
Same thing as Easy. choose a timing for the two spinners.
Same as normal, this time I made the first one look like the second one, though.
02:45:799 (1) - start this 1/2 beay earlier, looks better
True ;_;

[Insane]
curves!
nothing to say~


Hey, I really like the song and the map. I appreciate the work on the curves and all the stuff. Here's a star, your map deserves it

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All DIffs~
- I think you should change the combocolors... Blue and Red (this one not that much, but maybe because of the background) make a so weird contrast with the black approachcircle :/ and sometimes (like on Insane) it's hard to notice them. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11786)
AAAH, It's just that I love the curent Red/Blue/Green/Yellow color scheme >_<"! I'll try with a light Blue, please give me feedback on this one. The red color may be changed later, I'm just not sure about it >_<"

~Easy~
- Add Dusty to Tags here~
Whoops

01:13:152 (1) - Shorten 1/1 note. The next note is too close to the end of the spinner (Remember it's an Easy~ give newbies some time to recover x3) >_< My bad. I don't like how it follows the music, but this easy is hard enough for an easy.

~Normal~
02:02:917 (1) - Hmm... I'm not a fan of having jumps on Normal diffs...
02:05:741 (1) - ^
Completely readeable, I suppose <_<, Not changed, sorry
02:41:035 (1) - Flip vertically? Not done D:

~Insane~
- I'd say to decrease OD 1 tick... but meh, up to you xD Actually, the OD was one grid higher when I submitted, I must say, I'mm a fan of high ODs DX!

00:11:035 (3,4,5) - Center them with the slider (Yeah that's nazi I know ;w;)They are centered. I alredy explained this. The stack makes it look better when playing when it's spaced like that. Don't worry, it is not nazi, but it's completely different when playing XD!

Nice map!! *star*

Dusty wrote:

fixed & fixed & :p and some other stuff too

Shinxyn wrote:

Dark circles hard to see ><! oh well~
>_> <_< be safe and add an approachcircle.png too?My bad, I must say I saw this coming >_<
/me sees extra space in tags for some reason
Extra space? The full name of the song is "The Only Difference Between Matrydom and Suicide is Press Coverage", but I cannot add that long name. I've heard it as just "The Only Difference", though, so I added it like that... >_> Is that what you meant with "extra space, right?"

Easy-
00:53:741 (1) - I don't mind the claps that much, but... its the only ones like this on this diff...? <_< touché
01:38:917 (1) - ....1/2 is early, 1/4 is late... eh.. not 1/6... end on 1/8?? o_o
02:09:976 (1) - have the end quieter? or nearly silence it...? Done
02:45:976 (1) - have is gradually silence instead of instantly? :S Done
~~ Fair enough, could use some more finishes near end Added some <3

Normal-
00:10:152 (1) - clap here sound extra :< remove please I knew it >_<!"
00:50:564 (1,2,3) - this part totally ruins this map's pace! xD ...It does? How o_o" Please explain that to me Shinxyn-sama ;_;!
01:38:917 (1) - same as Easy ><? Technically, I could now say that I'm a pro, mapping on 1/8 :3
02:45:799 (1) - ^ Done
Fine, could also use finishes near end. (... like Insane has!) <3

Insane-
00:36:270 (4,5,6) - add the custom whistles?... at least on 6 ><! Done
00:47:564 (4,5,6) - ^ (same for the next two kiai times...?)
01:38:917 (1) - same as Easy/Normal?
02:03:623 (3,4) - gah, make theses new combo or spread them out a bit so it's more visible (same colour sliders aren't easy to see ><) Gah?! the hunky norwegalicous supermodel is here ?! (I'm I the only one who sees the Fairly OddParens <_<?) Oh yeah, sone
02:45:799 (1) - same as Easy/Normal... just don't overdo it like Dusty's xD Ok XD!
Great~!

Hmm, yea, willing to bubble this~

0_o wrote:

Easy
02:09:976 (1) - Shorten by 1/2 and remove the "whistle"? It sounds kinda weird ending where it does now. I'll wait on Shynxin-sama's opinion on this one. I'd keep it as it is, though.
02:21:270 (1) - This note is a little awkward since it feels like it should be 1/2 sooner. I know that it's Easy and you're trying to avoid offbeats but in this case the player has heard the chorus several times already so they would have a pretty good idea where to hit it. So I would move it 1/2 back and add a note at 02:21:623. Not done D:, sorry, this easy it's hard enough as it is now >_<
02:36:093 (1) - Maybe consider moving this from the centre? Newbies might have trouble with it since the hitburst from the spinner covers up the note. Not a huge deal though, so your call. Done

Everything else is pretty solid. Nice song too ^_^ Have a star.

Krisom wrote:

Please wait until jockey mods this, also, I don't know what Dusty-sensei may do with his mods, so I'll just wait for now...

Krisom wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

/me sees extra space in tags for some reason
Extra space? The full name of the song is "The Only Difference Between Matrydom and Suicide is Press Coverage", but I cannot add that long name. I've heard it as just "The Only Difference", though, so I added it like that... >_> Is that what you meant with "extra space, right?"
no, I literally meant there's an extra space- between "out" and "Between", no big deal, just something I saw at glance xD
Normal-
00:50:564 (1,2,3) - this part totally ruins this map's pace! xD ...It does? How o_o" Please explain that to me Shinxyn-sama ;_;! Ah, cuz the map was following a nice slow pace (notes were a beat apart), then here, suddenly it has beats 1/2 apart plus the non-distance-snap spacing, which was quite sudden :(

Krisom wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

/me sees extra space in tags for some reason
Extra space? The full name of the song is "The Only Difference Between Matrydom and Suicide is Press Coverage", but I cannot add that long name. I've heard it as just "The Only Difference", though, so I added it like that... >_> Is that what you meant with "extra space, right?"
no, I literally meant there's an extra space- between "out" and "Between", no big deal, just something I saw at glance xD
Will fix after jockey's mod. Promise D:!
Normal-
00:50:564 (1,2,3) - this part totally ruins this map's pace! xD ...It does? How o_o" Please explain that to me Shinxyn-sama ;_;! Ah, cuz the map was following a nice slow pace (notes were a beat apart), then here, suddenly it has beats 1/2 apart plus the non-distance-snap spacing, which was quite sudden Well, Im not really willing to change the 1/2 beat, but I suppose I could try harder at remaking that non-distance snap. Will fix after jockey's mod.

shinxyn-sama? D: what the?

Dusty wrote:

well, I fixed everything except the end slider

1. I understand the short name, though I'm usually picky about capitalization. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Panic!_at_the_Disco tells me "At The" shouldn't be capitalized.
2. Offset sounds more like 102.

Krisom wrote:

105 for Gens...98 for jockey

Krisom wrote:

jockeytitan