From my queue~
[General]
I really love the background image but it doesn't fit the song at all. I'd strongly recommend changing it to something...softer. Thanks for the desktop wallpaper though.
[Clumsy]
00:00:418 - Consider adding a note here?
00:02:183 (1,2,3,4) - delete and ctrl-shift-D to create more symmetrical ones. Squares by hand are hard
00:05:713 (1) - NC
00:11:595 (1) - delete NC
00:28:654 (4) - Change to a circle. the slipslide feels out of place
01:19:046 (1) - Split up or change into a different shape (feel free to ignore this one)
01:32:575 (3,4) - Blanket better
01:55:418 - AIBAT says this break is too long and I think I agree, it's a lot of downtime
02:32:771 (1,3) - stack
02:38:458 (2,2) - stack
02:53:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - WOW THAT TECHNIQUE! The sort of jumping half stream whatever that is...holy cow I'm so impressed, that might be the coolest thing I've ever seen in a map. Shooting a star to you just for that
02:53:752 (4,8) - Consider dropping these two down a bit though so it flows better
03:16:399 (6,8) - delete these two and move 7 down. The stream doesn't really fit
03:28:752 (4,1) - That space is brutal. It's not wrong. But jesus.
03:35:516 (1,2) - Blanket
04:07:477 (3,5) - stack
[General]
I really love the background image but it doesn't fit the song at all. I'd strongly recommend changing it to something...softer. Thanks for the desktop wallpaper though.
[Clumsy]
00:00:418 - Consider adding a note here?
00:02:183 (1,2,3,4) - delete and ctrl-shift-D to create more symmetrical ones. Squares by hand are hard
00:05:713 (1) - NC
00:11:595 (1) - delete NC
00:28:654 (4) - Change to a circle. the slipslide feels out of place
01:19:046 (1) - Split up or change into a different shape (feel free to ignore this one)
01:32:575 (3,4) - Blanket better
01:55:418 - AIBAT says this break is too long and I think I agree, it's a lot of downtime
02:32:771 (1,3) - stack
02:38:458 (2,2) - stack
02:53:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - WOW THAT TECHNIQUE! The sort of jumping half stream whatever that is...holy cow I'm so impressed, that might be the coolest thing I've ever seen in a map. Shooting a star to you just for that
02:53:752 (4,8) - Consider dropping these two down a bit though so it flows better
03:16:399 (6,8) - delete these two and move 7 down. The stream doesn't really fit
03:28:752 (4,1) - That space is brutal. It's not wrong. But jesus.
03:35:516 (1,2) - Blanket
04:07:477 (3,5) - stack