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ZUN - Inada Himesama Ni - Piano Solo

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brikel
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 12일 토요일 at 오전 4:52:09

Artist: ZUN
Title: Inada Himesama Ni - Piano Solo
Source: Touhou
Tags: toho project dojin samijul lrasl
BPM: 165
Filesize: 6657kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Sweet Taiko (4.16 stars, 484 notes)
  2. Hard (4.35 stars, 311 notes)
  3. Normal (3.01 stars, 241 notes)
  4. Ra's Diff (4.54 stars, 315 notes)
Download: ZUN - Inada Himesama Ni - Piano Solo
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This map is my second.
This map is touhou 10th's 1stage boss theme.
This song is piano solo. So you may feel boring.

Thanks for
samiljul, DJ KRZY, youngdow, lRasl, NatsumeRin, Kecco, Colin Hou, Frill, MittenMasterzz, kino77, Leorda, wmfchris, Shinxyn, DJPop, minyeob, Alace
Last edited by brikel , edited 22 times in total.
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
a

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [BPM].osu
Mapper 31
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Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
ddddddddddddd

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [Taiko].osu
MOM
113 posts
Joined January 2010
MOM
good.... :)
hian_old
193 posts
Joined August 2009
hian_old
노래 좋코~ 느낌 좋코 ~ 별
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hian_old
193 posts
Joined August 2009
hian_old
완성어엉

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [hian's Hard].osu
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
[General]
- Add samiljul and hian to tag
- Every single note has whistle as hitsounds, which is bad. Generally, it is not good to spam hitsounds. I would advise the use of scarce hitsounds on this one, since it is not that necessary to make the song better.
- I can't understand what rule you applied for new combos, I suggest that you make new combos every two stanzas, etc.


[Normal]
00:04:670 (7) - Stack with end of slider 5?
00:06:488 (5) - Stack beginning with note 1?
00:35:076 (4) - Align vertically with note 2?
02:15:187 (1) - Remove?
02:37:140 (1) - ^


[Hard - short version]
00:10:125 (3,4,5,6) - I see no reason for the notes to be arranged according to 1/3. I suggest making it according to 1/4.
00:13:761 (1) - ^
00:42:289 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:44:007 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:08:344 (6) - ^
01:17:588 (3) - ^
01:19:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:686 (6,7,8,9) - ^
00:19:216 (5,6,7) - Maybe keep up with the 0.8x spacing? Just a suggestion
00:23:396 (4,5) - Make these circles instead of sliders? Just a suggestion
00:39:198 (10,1) - Spacing
00:48:788 (8) - Slider length is wrong, the end should be on the white tick instead of the blue tick
00:52:226 (x) - Add a note? Just a suggestion
00:55:642 (7) - Does not fit the rhythm of the song, fix this slider
01:25:037 (1) - Slider length is wrong, the beginning should be on the white tick instead of the blue tick
01:26:322 (4) - Make this a non-repeating slider with both ends on the red tick


[Taiko]
Looks incomplete, I can't mod Taiko maps anyway XD

Star~
maypiano
57 posts
Joined October 2009
maypiano
후후후
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
abc

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [Sweet Taiko].osu
brikel
559 posts
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brikel

samiljul wrote:

abc
Thank you~~ :) :)
brikel
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brikel

DJ KRZY wrote:

[General]
- Add samiljul and hian to tag
- Every single note has whistle as hitsounds, which is bad. Generally, it is not good to spam hitsounds. I would advise the use of scarce hitsounds on this one, since it is not that necessary to make the song better.
- I can't understand what rule you applied for new combos, I suggest that you make new combos every two stanzas, etc.


[Normal]
00:04:670 (7) - Stack with end of slider 5?
00:06:488 (5) - Stack beginning with note 1?
00:35:076 (4) - Align vertically with note 2?
02:15:187 (1) - Remove?
02:37:140 (1) - ^


[Hard - short version]
00:10:125 (3,4,5,6) - I see no reason for the notes to be arranged according to 1/3. I suggest making it according to 1/4.
00:13:761 (1) - ^
00:42:289 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:44:007 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:08:344 (6) - ^
01:17:588 (3) - ^
01:19:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:33:686 (6,7,8,9) - ^
00:19:216 (5,6,7) - Maybe keep up with the 0.8x spacing? Just a suggestion
00:23:396 (4,5) - Make these circles instead of sliders? Just a suggestion
00:39:198 (10,1) - Spacing
00:48:788 (8) - Slider length is wrong, the end should be on the white tick instead of the blue tick
00:52:226 (x) - Add a note? Just a suggestion
00:55:642 (7) - Does not fit the rhythm of the song, fix this slider
01:25:037 (1) - Slider length is wrong, the beginning should be on the white tick instead of the blue tick
01:26:322 (4) - Make this a non-repeating slider with both ends on the red tick


[Taiko]
Looks incomplete, I can't mod Taiko maps anyway XD

Star~
all complete
Thank you~ :)
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
a

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [BPM].osu
youngdow
321 posts
Joined May 2009
youngdow
Here is BG :)

And fix unsnapped note ^.^

brikel
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brikel

youngdow wrote:

Here is BG :)

And fix unsnapped note ^.^
Thank you youngdow~~XD
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
My WIP diff :)

+Star

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [Ra's Diff].osu
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[Taiko]
...yay really sweet. 6 100s at first try. for a moment i just can't believe it's "31's taiko"
00:34:410 (82) - d?
00:51:550 (137) - d?
00:51:892 (138) - k?
01:07:146 (188) - d?
02:35:419 (447) - d?
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko]
...yay really sweet. 6 100s at first try. for a moment i just can't believe it's "31's taiko"
00:34:410 (82) - d?
00:51:550 (137) - d?
00:51:892 (138) - k?
01:07:146 (188) - d?
02:35:419 (447) - d?
Thank you for your help~~ :) :)
Ra-s
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Ra-s
! :)

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [Ra's Diff].osu
brikel
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brikel

lRasl wrote:

! :)
Thank you Ras~~ :) :)
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
-What do you think about silencing the sliderslide.wav?
-What do you think about changing the background since the current has a very bad resolution.
Timing : Add a red timing section here 00:53:236 and Resnap All Notes., then recheck the whole map.

The map is good for me, just those issues.

Nice map~
Star~
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
-What do you think about silencing the sliderslide.wav?
-What do you think about changing the background since the current has a very bad resolution.
Timing : Add a red timing section here 00:53:236 and Resnap All Notes., then recheck the whole map.

The map is good for me, just those issues.

Nice map~
Star~
Thank you Kecco. :)
I don't think custom sound and i exchange my map's BG. :)
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. I suggest do something about the left and right side of the BG, it's not clipped well.
  2. add lRasl samiljul to all diffs' tags.
[Normal]:
  1. decrease the volume to 50%
  2. 00:19:579 (5) - move the end way point 1 grid up
  3. 00:25:272 (8) - quite off, check the bpm
  4. 02:47:299 (1) - finish?
[31's Sweet Taiko]:
  1. I can't mod Taiko sorry :3 but consider the volume
[Hard]:
  1. decrease the volume to 50%
  2. 00:43:323 (7) - remove the whitle on the slider
  3. 02:47:299 (1) - finish?
[Ra's Diff]:
  1. unsnapped notes exist.
  2. 02:50:181 (1) - quite off... you should turn to a pro timer for help.
star~
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
It's probably not PERFECT, but it seems better than what you have right now:

BPM: 165.00 Offset: 2,127
BPM: 147.00 Offset: 19,579
BPM: 131.00 Offset: 21,153
BPM: 126.00 Offset: 23,062
BPM: 125.00 Offset: 24,582
BPM: 175.00 Offset: 28,230
BPM: 175.00 Offset: 50,161
BPM: 159.00 Offset: 164,012
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 165,473
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 167,206
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 167,792
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 168,318
BPM: 124.00 Offset: 170,197

Or you can copy this into the .osu files:

[TimingPoints]
2127,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
19579,408.163265306122,4,2,1,100,1,0
21153,458.013265306122,4,2,1,100,1,0
23062,476.193265306124,4,2,1,100,1,0
24582,479.993265306124,4,2,1,100,1,0
28230,342.862857142854,4,2,1,100,1,0
50161,342.862857142854,4,2,1,100,1,0
164012,377.357142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
165473,428.557142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
167206,428.571428571429,4,2,1,100,1,0
167792,428.571428571429,4,2,1,100,1,0
168318,428.557142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
170197,483.857142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

Lybydose wrote:

It's probably not PERFECT, but it seems better than what you have right now:

BPM: 165.00 Offset: 2,127
BPM: 147.00 Offset: 19,579
BPM: 131.00 Offset: 21,153
BPM: 126.00 Offset: 23,062
BPM: 125.00 Offset: 24,582
BPM: 175.00 Offset: 28,230
BPM: 175.00 Offset: 50,161
BPM: 159.00 Offset: 164,012
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 165,473
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 167,206
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 167,792
BPM: 140.00 Offset: 168,318
BPM: 124.00 Offset: 170,197

Or you can copy this into the .osu files:

[TimingPoints]
2127,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
19579,408.163265306122,4,2,1,100,1,0
21153,458.013265306122,4,2,1,100,1,0
23062,476.193265306124,4,2,1,100,1,0
24582,479.993265306124,4,2,1,100,1,0
28230,342.862857142854,4,2,1,100,1,0
50161,342.862857142854,4,2,1,100,1,0
164012,377.357142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
165473,428.557142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
167206,428.571428571429,4,2,1,100,1,0
167792,428.571428571429,4,2,1,100,1,0
168318,428.557142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
170197,483.857142857143,4,2,1,100,1,0
Thank you Lyby~! :)
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
[Normal]

00:22:069 (6,7) - 1grid left

They are since the combo are too long~
00:25:301 (1) - New combo?
00:52:561 (5) - ^
00:58:046 (5) - ^
01:09:018 (5) - ^
01:38:162 (6) - ^
02:06:619 (4) - ^
02:23:076 (5) - ^

[Hard]

00:19:579 (6) - New combo?

[Ra's Diff]

Good.


Fun map.

+Star
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. I suggest do something about the left and right side of the BG, it's not clipped well.
  2. add lRasl samiljul to all diffs' tags.
[Normal]:
  1. decrease the volume to 50%
  2. 00:19:579 (5) - move the end way point 1 grid up
  3. 00:25:272 (8) - quite off, check the bpm
  4. 02:47:299 (1) - finish?
[31's Sweet Taiko]:
  1. I can't mod Taiko sorry :3 but consider the volume
[Hard]:
  1. decrease the volume to 50%
  2. 00:43:323 (7) - remove the whitle on the slider
  3. 02:47:299 (1) - finish?
[Ra's Diff]:
  1. unsnapped notes exist.
  2. 02:50:181 (1) - quite off... you should turn to a pro timer for help.
star~
Thank you Colin hou~! :)
brikel
559 posts
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Topic Starter
brikel

Frill wrote:

[Normal]

00:22:069 (6,7) - 1grid left

They are since the combo are too long~
00:25:301 (1) - New combo?
00:52:561 (5) - ^
00:58:046 (5) - ^
01:09:018 (5) - ^
01:38:162 (6) - ^
02:06:619 (4) - ^
02:23:076 (5) - ^

[Hard]

00:19:579 (6) - New combo?

[Ra's Diff]

Good.


Fun map.

+Star
Thank you Frill~ :)
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
[31's Taiko]

When I say D I mean Don, or Red.
When I say K I mean Kat, or Blue.

00:13:672 - Remove the ddd. Place a k at 00:13:763 in it's place. (That ddd doesn't even fit in the song)
00:51:532 - Maybe make this a finisher, and start kiai.
01:12:104 - End Kiai if you decide to add it.
02:28:819 - Remove the kd. Add a K or D at 02:28:905 in it's place. Either will sound fine.
02:33:105 - Remove this K.
02:38:077 - Unsnapped note, snap too -> 02:38:162.
02:38:591 - Remove this K.
02:47:420 - Remove this? It sounds bad, but it sounds bad without it too. Your choice.


Nice peaceful map and song. Star~
[Dango]
841 posts
Joined December 2009
[Dango]
옛다.
Kim Jin Seok
369 posts
Joined December 2008
Kim Jin Seok
[31's Taiko]
00:13:672 (33,34,35) - 아무리봐도 좀 어색하달까..
01:29:934 (258) - 너무 ㄷㅋㄷㅋㄷ만 쓰면 좀 단순해보이니 이쪽부터 패턴에 변화를 주는건 어떨지..

+Star
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

MittenMasterzz wrote:

[31's Taiko]

When I say D I mean Don, or Red.
When I say K I mean Kat, or Blue.

00:13:672 - Remove the ddd. Place a k at 00:13:763 in it's place. (That ddd doesn't even fit in the song)
00:51:532 - Maybe make this a finisher, and start kiai.
01:12:104 - End Kiai if you decide to add it.
02:28:819 - Remove the kd. Add a K or D at 02:28:905 in it's place. Either will sound fine.
02:33:105 - Remove this K.
02:38:077 - Unsnapped note, snap too -> 02:38:162.
02:38:591 - Remove this K.
02:47:420 - Remove this? It sounds bad, but it sounds bad without it too. Your choice.


Nice peaceful map and song. Star~
Thank you for your moddig ~ :)
brikel
559 posts
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Topic Starter
brikel

Kim Jin Seok wrote:

[31's Taiko]
00:13:672 (33,34,35) - 아무리봐도 좀 어색하달까..
01:29:934 (258) - 너무 ㄷㅋㄷㅋㄷ만 쓰면 좀 단순해보이니 이쪽부터 패턴에 변화를 주는건 어떨지..

+Star

몇개 바꿧습니다. :D
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
Fixed

Download: ZUN - inada himesama ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [Ra's Diff].osu
Hurude Rika
Hurude Rika
hm?
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~Normal~
00:22:985 (7) - Snap this note on the next timing section (00:23:062)
01:10:732 (5) - New Combo.
01:21:704 (x) - Add a note here?
02:43:991 (1) - Snap this note to the next timing section (02:44:012)

~31's Sweet Taiko~
- OMG! It's a Taiko H!! You can't see things like this everyday~ Also: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12024 *jumps on happiness*

00:22:985 (58) - Snap this note to the next timing section (00:23:062)
02:47:420 (478) - Move 1/4 earlier.

~Hard~
00:09:399 (5,6,7,8,9) - A bit confusing like that. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12029 (8) is stacked under (5).
00:50:503 (1,2,3,4) - Fix Spacing.
01:04:904 (5,6,7,8) - These jumps are a bit random imo... Anyways, if you're going to leave it, New Combo on (6).
01:06:961 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Fix Spacing.
01:15:189 (8) - New Combo.
01:15:532 (9,10,11) - Fix Spacing.
01:21:704 (x) - Add a note here?
01:37:476 (6,7) - Don't change the spacing on the same combo >.<
01:38:505 (2) - Move the reverse arrow point away from circles.
02:01:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here... don't change the spacing on the same combo, fix (1,2).
02:41:247 (5) - New Combo.

~Ra-diff~
00:17:399 (2) - Fix Spacing.
00:36:115 (3) - New Combo.
01:04:561 (7) - ^
01:28:561 (5) - ^
01:29:247 (7,8) - these two are almost out of the playing zone D:
01:31:647 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12032 (just following the pattern, maybe you'd want to delete the New Combo on (1) too)
01:45:019 (4) - New Combo.
02:17:248 (7) - ^
02:50:197 (1) - Snap to 1/4.

Nice map, so relazing song <3 *star*
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~Normal~
00:22:985 (7) - Snap this note on the next timing section (00:23:062)
01:10:732 (5) - New Combo.
01:21:704 (x) - Add a note here?
02:43:991 (1) - Snap this note to the next timing section (02:44:012)

~31's Sweet Taiko~
- OMG! It's a Taiko H!! You can't see things like this everyday~ Also: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12024 *jumps on happiness*

00:22:985 (58) - Snap this note to the next timing section (00:23:062)
02:47:420 (478) - Move 1/4 earlier.

~Hard~
00:09:399 (5,6,7,8,9) - A bit confusing like that. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12029 (8) is stacked under (5).
00:50:503 (1,2,3,4) - Fix Spacing.
01:04:904 (5,6,7,8) - These jumps are a bit random imo... Anyways, if you're going to leave it, New Combo on (6).
01:06:961 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Fix Spacing.
01:15:189 (8) - New Combo.
01:15:532 (9,10,11) - Fix Spacing.
01:21:704 (x) - Add a note here?
01:37:476 (6,7) - Don't change the spacing on the same combo >.<
01:38:505 (2) - Move the reverse arrow point away from circles.
02:01:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here... don't change the spacing on the same combo, fix (1,2).
02:41:247 (5) - New Combo.

~Ra-diff~
00:17:399 (2) - Fix Spacing.
00:36:115 (3) - New Combo.
01:04:561 (7) - ^
01:28:561 (5) - ^
01:29:247 (7,8) - these two are almost out of the playing zone D:
01:31:647 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12032 (just following the pattern, maybe you'd want to delete the New Combo on (1) too)
01:45:019 (4) - New Combo.
02:17:248 (7) - ^
02:50:197 (1) - Snap to 1/4.

Nice map, so relazing song <3 *star*
soooo looooong poosst xP.
But your advice is so goood. Thank you~~ :)
chocomint
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
202 posts
Joined June 2009
chocomint
좋네요~
star~
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~!

[Normal]
Hitsound and volume mod
SPOILER
00:02:127 (1) - Whistle?
00:03:581 (5) - ^
00:05:036 (1) - ^
00:06:490 (5,6) - ^
00:07:945 (1) - ^
00:09:399 (5) - ^
00:10:127 (6,7) - Remove whistle?
00:12:672 (4) - Whistle?
00:18:127 (1) - ^
00:30:630 (1) - Remove finish?
00:41:601 (1) - ^
00:54:961 (7) - ^
01:16:218 (8) - ^
02:38:505 (2) - ^
02:41:933 (8) - Finish?

00:02:127 (1) ~ 00:25:301 (1) - Volume 40%?
00:50:503 (1) ~ 01:12:104 (5) - Volume 60% and KIAI ?
02:04:562 (1) ~ 02:24:790 (5) - ^
02:26:505 (1) ~ 02:46:330 (4) - Volume 40%?
02:47:206 (1) - Volume 20%?
Comobo mod
SPOILER
00:13:036 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:13:763 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
00:16:672 (5) - New combo?
00:18:127 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:19:579 (5) - New combo?
00:51:532 (4,1) - Switch new combo?
00:57:018 (4,1) - ^
01:07:989 (4,1) - ^
01:32:675 (4) - New combo?
01:54:619 (4) - ^
01:55:991 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:05:591 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
02:27:533 (4) - New combo?
00:25:301 (1) - Move to 00:18:127 ?
00:48:801 (3) - Right under 2?
00:50:161 - Remove this red line? Its not necessary.
02:47:848 - Red line is not necessary in spin,remove them all?

[Hard]
Volume mode as Normal?
Clap sounds odd,remove them all?
Remove red tick in spin and unnecessary?

Comobo mod
SPOILER
00:13:036 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:13:763 (3) - New combo?
00:16:672 (5) - ^
00:21:153 (4) - ^
00:29:601 (4,1) -Switch new combo?
00:32:344 (6) - New combo?
00:51:532 (4) - ^
00:54:275 (5) - ^
00:57:018 (4) - ^
00:58:046 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
01:07:989 (4) - New combo?
01:15:189 (1) - Switch new combo?
01:18:961 (5) - New combo?
01:32:675 (3) - ^
02:27:533 (4) - ^
[Ra's Diff]
Volume mode as Normal?
Remove red tick in spin and unnecessary?
01:03:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move them closer?
02:16:562 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:45:427 (3) - Remove clap?

Star~
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

kino77 wrote:

Hi~!

[Normal]
Hitsound and volume mod
SPOILER
00:02:127 (1) - Whistle?
00:03:581 (5) - ^
00:05:036 (1) - ^
00:06:490 (5,6) - ^
00:07:945 (1) - ^
00:09:399 (5) - ^
00:10:127 (6,7) - Remove whistle?
00:12:672 (4) - Whistle?
00:18:127 (1) - ^
00:30:630 (1) - Remove finish?
00:41:601 (1) - ^
00:54:961 (7) - ^
01:16:218 (8) - ^
02:38:505 (2) - ^
02:41:933 (8) - Finish?

00:02:127 (1) ~ 00:25:301 (1) - Volume 40%?
00:50:503 (1) ~ 01:12:104 (5) - Volume 60% and KIAI ?
02:04:562 (1) ~ 02:24:790 (5) - ^
02:26:505 (1) ~ 02:46:330 (4) - Volume 40%?
02:47:206 (1) - Volume 20%?
Comobo mod
SPOILER
00:13:036 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:13:763 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
00:16:672 (5) - New combo?
00:18:127 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:19:579 (5) - New combo?
00:51:532 (4,1) - Switch new combo?
00:57:018 (4,1) - ^
01:07:989 (4,1) - ^
01:32:675 (4) - New combo?
01:54:619 (4) - ^
01:55:991 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:05:591 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
02:27:533 (4) - New combo?
00:25:301 (1) - Move to 00:18:127 ?
00:48:801 (3) - Right under 2?
00:50:161 - Remove this red line? Its not necessary.
02:47:848 - Red line is not necessary in spin,remove them all?

[Hard]
Volume mode as Normal?
Clap sounds odd,remove them all?
Remove red tick in spin and unnecessary?

Comobo mod
SPOILER
00:13:036 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:13:763 (3) - New combo?
00:16:672 (5) - ^
00:21:153 (4) - ^
00:29:601 (4,1) -Switch new combo?
00:32:344 (6) - New combo?
00:51:532 (4) - ^
00:54:275 (5) - ^
00:57:018 (4) - ^
00:58:046 (1,2) - Switch new combo?
01:07:989 (4) - New combo?
01:15:189 (1) - Switch new combo?
01:18:961 (5) - New combo?
01:32:675 (3) - ^
02:27:533 (4) - ^
[Ra's Diff]
Volume mode as Normal?
Remove red tick in spin and unnecessary?
01:03:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move them closer?
02:16:562 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:45:427 (3) - Remove clap?

Star~
Thank you for your help >_<
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
1) Should the title are capitalize to "Inada Himesama Ni (Piano Solo)"?
2) Delete osb and full submit

[Timing]
Many offset is diffrent on each diff!
Look the red line :





You should make the offset is same for other diff

[Normal]
00:06:490 (5) - Move it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12577
00:13:763 (1) - Make symetric?
00:30:287 (x) - Add note?
00:48:801 (3) - Not stack with 2 at the end
01:02:504 (4) - Stack with 3?
02:19:305 (7) - Make parallel?
02:32:333 (4) - ^
02:40:562 (5) - ^

[31's Sweet Taiko]
This taiko diff is getting boring because no object at red/blue tick between the notes, please add an object in red/blue tick like 00:58:904 (162) and 02:50:317 (483)

[Hard]
00:47:430 (2) - Make parallel?
01:36:790 (5) - Make symetric?
01:57:362 (5,6) - Move 1 grid up?

[Ra's Diff]
Fine~

Good song
STAR
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
*watching World Cup----*

Nice song and credit to this song~
[Taiko]
Really nice and suits the piano piece although boring for me.

[Ra's diff]
0:10:854 (5) left+up 1 grid
2:28:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing of (1,2) different from (2,3), (4,5) different from (5,6)?
AWESOME

[hard]
0:09:036 (2) down 1 grid
0:19:581 (1) make this symmetrical?
0:42:973 (6) right 1 grid
0:45:030 (1,2,3,4) move this to the center?
1:57:362 (5,6) up 1 grid

star^2
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
1) Should the title are capitalize to "Inada Himesama Ni (Piano Solo)"?
2) Delete osb and full submit

[Timing]
Many offset is diffrent on each diff!
Look the red line :





You should make the offset is same for other diff

[Normal]
00:06:490 (5) - Move it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12577
00:13:763 (1) - Make symetric?
00:30:287 (x) - Add note?
00:48:801 (3) - Not stack with 2 at the end
01:02:504 (4) - Stack with 3?
02:19:305 (7) - Make parallel?
02:32:333 (4) - ^
02:40:562 (5) - ^

[31's Sweet Taiko]
This taiko diff is getting boring because no object at red/blue tick between the notes, please add an object in red/blue tick like 00:58:904 (162) and 02:50:317 (483)

[Hard]
00:47:430 (2) - Make parallel?
01:36:790 (5) - Make symetric?
01:57:362 (5,6) - Move 1 grid up?

[Ra's Diff]
Fine~

Good song
STAR
Thank you Leorda >_<
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel
:)

wmfchris wrote:

*watching World Cup----*

Nice song and credit to this song~
[Taiko]
Really nice and suits the piano piece although boring for me.

[Ra's diff]
0:10:854 (5) left+up 1 grid
2:28:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing of (1,2) different from (2,3), (4,5) different from (5,6)?
AWESOME

[hard]
0:09:036 (2) down 1 grid
0:19:581 (1) make this symmetrical?
0:42:973 (6) right 1 grid
0:45:030 (1,2,3,4) move this to the center?
1:57:362 (5,6) up 1 grid

star^2
Wow... Your advice and star are good >_<
Thank you wmfchris :)
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Piano~
Theres a constant static noise in the background, I hear it clearly with headphones on, is there any way you could get a better mp3? if not (plus moving all those timing panel could be risky), I think it's fine... sorta.. probably from the recording of this...?
I don't think the kiai fits this song at all...
mmm, the BPMs Lyby gave you were whole numbers, most of the BPM's I see on your map aren't (they're rounded to look like the whole numbered bpm, but they're off... hold Ctrl when looking at them), manually change them to whole numbers (via the Timing Panel) then resnap? Or were they not whole on purpose...?

Normal- hmm, would work with -1 OD, but fine
00:25:301 (1) - finish doesn't sound good here ><
01:48:105 (1) - D: the whistle slider slide sounds bad... I highly doubt they're on purpose :<
01:59:076 (1) - ^
02:10:048 (1) - ^
02:15:876 (2) - ^
02:47:420 (1) - start this on the 1/1 (uhh on the unherited timing panel)?
Okay

Hard- so... many... extra notes..
00:18:672 (3) - remove this please!
00:20:599 (2) - ^
00:23:062 (1) - snap the end onto the red 1/2 on the new offset and remove the finish
00:30:287 - hmm might as well add a note?
00:43:315 (7) - remove whistle slider slide sound~
00:57:703 (3) - ...add whistle? keeping up a whistle pace?
02:32:333 (6) - imo, remove the finish at the end of this, it doesn't fit this no-hitsound part well :P
02:45:901 - add note?
Okay~

Ra's- .......why 1/3? As far as I can tell, this song doesn't venture of the 1/2 pace
Oh, this diff doesn't have a preview point
00:10:127 (3,4,5) - ~.~ why is 4-5 spaced so differently?
Hmmmm yea... the 1/3 plays kinda odd, since I don't hear anything close to 1/3 in the music...

Taiko seems fine
Hmmmm....
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
don't kudosu this post.

Inada Himesama ni << not capital.

gl !
brikel
559 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
brikel

Shinxyn wrote:

Piano~
Theres a constant static noise in the background, I hear it clearly with headphones on, is there any way you could get a better mp3? if not (plus moving all those timing panel could be risky), I think it's fine... sorta.. probably from the recording of this...?
I don't think the kiai fits this song at all...
mmm, the BPMs Lyby gave you were whole numbers, most of the BPM's I see on your map aren't (they're rounded to look like the whole numbered bpm, but they're off... hold Ctrl when looking at them), manually change them to whole numbers (via the Timing Panel) then resnap? Or were they not whole on purpose...?

Normal- hmm, would work with -1 OD, but fine
00:25:301 (1) - finish doesn't sound good here ><
01:48:105 (1) - D: the whistle slider slide sounds bad... I highly doubt they're on purpose :<
01:59:076 (1) - ^
02:10:048 (1) - ^
02:15:876 (2) - ^
02:47:420 (1) - start this on the 1/1 (uhh on the unherited timing panel)?
Okay

Hard- so... many... extra notes..
00:18:672 (3) - remove this please!
00:20:599 (2) - ^
00:23:062 (1) - snap the end onto the red 1/2 on the new offset and remove the finish
00:30:287 - hmm might as well add a note?
00:43:315 (7) - remove whistle slider slide sound~
00:57:703 (3) - ...add whistle? keeping up a whistle pace?
02:32:333 (6) - imo, remove the finish at the end of this, it doesn't fit this no-hitsound part well :P
02:45:901 - add note?
Okay~

Ra's- .......why 1/3? As far as I can tell, this song doesn't venture of the 1/2 pace
Oh, this diff doesn't have a preview point
00:10:127 (3,4,5) - ~.~ why is 4-5 spaced so differently?
Hmmmm yea... the 1/3 plays kinda odd, since I don't hear anything close to 1/3 in the music...

Taiko seems fine
Hmmmm....
Thank you Shinxyn.>_<
Maybe the static noise is piano pedal sound. And the song has 320kbps
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
Update;

Download: ZUN - Inada Himesama Ni - Piano Solo (brikel) [Ra's Diff].osu
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
내 태고맵 지워줘요
brikel
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Topic Starter
brikel

samiljul wrote:

내 태고맵 지워줘요
엥/ why?
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31

brikel wrote:

samiljul wrote:

내 태고맵 지워줘요
엥/ why?
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