Deif wrote:

Hihi! I'm afraid I need to DQ this beatmap in order to polish that CtB diff:

Inappropriate usage of some structures:

1. 01:02:777 (3,4) - and its twin at 04:24:157 (3,4) - Potential flow-breaker. It plays better if the 1st triplet is at the very right of the screen, while the 2nd one makes the catcher go to the next slider (like a "\"-shape, more or less). Oh no, this couldn't be a big problem though, it was 100% intentional and I wanna let players 'stand' on there with following its background music. I think its flow is better than your suggestion, also it became more harder. I can catch with mine consistently but not with yours Just reduced the distance between 04:24:156 (3,4) - instead.
2. 01:29:328 - until 01:40:363 - This section has a lot of potential of HDash placement, but it lacks of balance. Some sections with the snare sound have no HDash, and some others just use too many/senseless ones. remaked.
3. 01:47:259 (1,2,1) - 01:47:949 (1,2,1) - Uncomfortable to play, due to the dash hits. It's not as continuous as in Genryuu Kaiko, where you only had to let the dash button pressed in order to catch them all. fixed.
4. 03:41:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overmapped + bad flow. It needs continue dash hits in order to get all of them, and even though you probably won't so make sure to improve it. Only the 1st half of the stream should have 1/2 beats, where the 2nd half is the real 1/4 stream. Looks much better like that and fits the melody. I'd call them as 'double dash', which are players must tap dash key with twice to catch them all and it feels really fun and not really bad. I think those patterns are good enough to use for ranked overdose maps. But agree with overmap section, I've changed with the 1/2s in first half of the part. Didn't you say totally same thing with these in my daze Overdose? It was happened in 1 year ago, and now CtB players' average skills were increased again(for example, #80s ranked user got only 1 miss on my P8107 Nervous Breakdown diff), so isn't it fine with using advanced one?
   
   EDIT : Alright, I gathered some testplayers with #50~#200 ranked, and all they said it's fine and not really uncomfortable to catch. See, it was just an 'additional dash', not a serious issue of the difficulty.
   
   tl;dr : Those structures are completely playable for #200s users either, it's not an issue, just an advanced challenge pattern.

Timeline errors:

1. 00:49:328 (1) - I don't understand the usage of a 3/4 slider, when the melody suggests to use a 1/2 one with the sound at 00:49:501 - . fixed
2. 02:35:190 (4) - Uncorrect beat snap. Those are 1/4s. No, listen again carefully. There're 1/3 sounds on its background music. But removed 02:35:104 (3) - instead.
3. 02:44:501 (4,5) - They're not 1/8s but 1/6s: http://puu.sh/hT47G/e0f7c3a436.jpg done.

Inaudible hitobjects:

1. 00:01:053 (1,1,1,1) - Make at least the head of the slider audible/add a hitsound. Otherwise it's unrankable.
2. 04:50:708 (1,1,1,2) - Same here, plus you might fix what you mentioned somewhere else =) all done.

Additional modding:

1. I'd avoid using so many anti-flow patterns. There were some spots in the kiais where it's literally frustrating to play due to the continuously sharp direction changes. Some remarkable ones are: 00:56:225 (1,2) - , 02:02:777 (2) - , 02:52:087 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ,... Those anti-flow patterns are nerfed version. I'm sure it's catchable enough and not like Sentimental Skyscraper in Hollow Wings' map. But 02:52:087 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this one and 02:02:777 (2) - this one have fixed with easier flow.
2. 02:23:121 (1,2,3,1) - The intention of the pattern is nice, but it resulted in being quite extreme. What about curving a bit more those lateral sliders? done
3. 03:30:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's maybe my personal view, but the 1/3 beats would look cool to be mapped there instead of the current ones (take this timeline as a reference if you decide to change it, sliders and stuff are okay): http://puu.sh/hT4Sq/8c9d24dcee.jpg Yea, I've tried it before but looks like it's not friendly with my style and its rhythm is totally same as Skystar's std diff.
4. 05:15:794 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I know it's about filling up the last seconds to cover the 5:00, but the jumps feel totally random. A simple spinner would've worked (start at 05:15:535 - ). Not really good finale imo. This should be the last gateway to users who aim for pass/FC.

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Look for some more good testers. I counted only 3 mods in the thread, but it'll need some more. From now on the BNG will handle this, so good luck!

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