Girls Dead Monster - Thousand Enemies (Full ver) · forum

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-18T13:57:22+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月19日 at 22:26:26

Artist: Girls Dead Monster
Title: Thousand Enemies (Full ver)
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: eri yui kitamura yuinyan
BPM: 164
Filesize: 4937kb
Play Time: 04:33
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.83 stars, 634 notes)
Insane (4.88 stars, 641 notes)
Normal (2.93 stars, 309 notes)

Download: Girls Dead Monster - Thousand Enemies (Full ver)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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no.7 map

Last edited by Clare 2010-05-19T14:28:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

eveless

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eveless 2010-05-19T06:22:07+00:00

GOOD MAP~

STAR~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-05-19T09:47:32+00:00

Just Suggesttion If feel weird or don't like plz ignore this ^^

Hard

00:30:685 (1) - > 00:30:502 ?
01:10:198 - add note ?
02:24:283 (2) - return slider 1 time ? and 02:24:649 (3) - move to 02:24:832 ? and move 3 to start point? (2)

Insane

01:10:198 - maybe add note here ? I think match with music
01:24:283 - ^
01:25:198 (1) - stop at 01:26:661 ?
01:55:198 (2) - try to delete this not and start spin ~ 01:55:929 ?
02:39:832 (1) - stop at 02:41:295 ? (I know you follow vocal , but i like to finished with song ^^ just suggestion)

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-05-19T10:07:23+00:00

ncie ^^

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-19T10:14:22+00:00

S i R i R u wrote:
Just Suggesttion If feel weird or don't like plz ignore this ^^

Hard

00:30:685 (1) - > 00:30:502 ?
01:10:198 - add note ?
02:24:283 (2) - return slider 1 time ? and 02:24:649 (3) - move to 02:24:832 ? and move 3 to start point? (2)

Insane

01:10:198 - maybe add note here ? I think match with music
01:24:283 - ^
01:25:198 (1) - stop at 01:26:661 ?
01:55:198 (2) - try to delete this not and start spin ~ 01:55:929 ?
02:39:832 (1) - stop at 02:41:295 ? (I know you follow vocal , but i like to finished with song ^^ just suggestion)

nice suggestion
thank you^^

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-05-19T11:17:34+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
啪啪啪啪啪啪啪，你有什么不好的联想了么，对啦！……泥马还没加hitsounds就pending。。。那么肯定是不mod hitsounds了233
BG图尺寸不规范，请调整。
。。。4分33。。233

[Normal]
00:39:832 (4) - 这里开始不加几个音不舒服斯基，见图。

01:13:490 (4) - 按照前面的规律这个是new combo吧。。
02:04:344 (2,1) - 自重
02:28:124 (4) - new combo
04:04:710 (4) - ^
我能理解复制粘贴的心情，但是……能别做别做吧。

[Hard]
00:29:954 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing.
00:36:173 (5,6,7,1) - ^
00:37:088 (2,3,4) - ……各种nazi？
01:05:990 (7,8) - 接连不断。
01:06:722 (1,2) - 就是这样的。。。
01:10:015 (3,4) - ……
01:31:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - 叠太多不好吧。
01:40:380 (6) - 不是上一格吗。。。
01:50:807 (4,5,6) - 各种nazi.
02:00:319 (7) - 难道不是要和3重上。。
02:10:563 (1,2,3) - 蛋痛
卧槽我能理解复制粘贴心情但是已经Hard了。。。

[Insane]
只观赏了一遍。I难度mod spacing比较没意义。。。hitsounds。。。nothing。。。

Asutarotto

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Asutarotto 2010-05-19T11:44:26+00:00

Hello

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
----------------------------------------------------------------------------

[General]
没加hitsound……

那就帮我省了点工夫XD

[Normal]
00:29:588 (1,2,3) - 改成下面这样是不是更贴合人声？

SPOILER

00:44:222 (1) - 是不是分成2个slider比较好？
00:51:905 (6) - 往上一格，往右一格
01:35:076 (4) - 往下一格
01:42:759 (1,2,3) - 去除new combo?
01:44:222 (4) - new combo?
02:06:539 (6) - 往下一格，往右一格
02:28:124 (4) - new combo?
03:00:319 (6) - new combo?
03:35:442 (1) - 拆成2个slider?
03:43:125 (6) - 往下一格，往左一格

Hard
似乎太难了一点?毕竟分数和Insane都差不多了……
希望能减少一些note…两个一千四五百万的难度，BAT肯定会要求你删掉一个……

Insane
这么鬼畜的玩不了XD……也没有明显问题吧

nice map~Star

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-19T13:16:03+00:00

all fixed
add the hitsounds

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-05-19T13:33:08+00:00

modded in QQ
nice rhythm

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-05-19T15:03:41+00:00

IRC Modded with add break time on Normal.. + OD on Hard for don't make it to be overlapping and I prefer If Hard don't need to play with HR for make it to be easy to read and some suggestion at hitsound + some suggestion for next map of Clare , and some wrong spacing on Insane

other thing seem fime to me, And Insane is funny tho :3

Take my star

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-05-19T16:05:13+00:00

[General]:

很奇怪你启用了C1但是没有找到任何.wav... 难道说是我下载好osz之后加的? 如果没有的话我这里有个normal-hitclap.wav你可以拿去试一下放在文件夹里就可以了
Download: normal-hitclap.rar
嫌break长那就在快开始的地方加个spinner :3

[Easy]:

用记事本打开.osu文件找到//Storyboard Sound Samples 然后回车另一起行输入以下内容:
- Sample,79716,0,"normal-hitclap.wav",70
  其中Sample这个名字随意 79716是1分19秒16转成秒制(同offset) normal-hitclap.wav是SB音效使用的wav文件名 70是音量
然后类似的把01:20:447 01:21:179 01:21:911 01:25:569 01:26:301 01:27:033...等时间加上去(slider的中间的slidertick也能用这种方法不过很多的话不如用C2替换normal-slidertick.wav好使)
SB音效使用后记得每次保存后查看一下文件夹内有没有生成.osb文件如果生成了及时删掉否则会影响其他难度
02:22:277~02:33:627 中间是每个白线都是一个clap 类似的段落不再指出其他难度也是如此

[Hard]:

其实这首歌全部用normal就可以的最多比较柔的地方降下音量
01:47:886 (2,3,4) - spacing 肯定还有很多地方...记得全部看一遍然后关掉grid snap调整下
01:16:057 (T) - 加note
03:51:728 (T) - ^
04:33:801 (T) - ^

[Insane]:

01:44:228 (T) - 加note
01:56:850 (T) - 加个slider 在01:57:033结束
01:58:313 (T) - ^ 01:58:496 (1) 处结束(原来的circle移除)
04:33:801 (T) - 加note

以上全部是建议结束

Star~

NanaDesu

NanaDesu 2010-05-19T18:13:36+00:00

nice map

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-20T01:33:00+00:00

修好了部分note沒加上 :3
音效有放進去需要重下

LKs

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LKs 2010-05-20T11:47:10+00:00

你是让我mod这张map吧？。。。

G

不开1，2，3倒数吗

建议用和你这clap一样的slidetick

Normal

slidertick不太好，有的正好在clap点上

[00:41:301] finish
[00:41:850] clap
[01:10:569] 去掉clap （这是为了和后面有对比
[01;13:469] 同上
[01:16:423] 同上
[02:04:716] finish?
[02:13;130] 这里忘了加clap
XD 20秒的break，有个性我喜欢
[03:41:301] finish

Hard

[00:29:777] 向下一格

Insane

kiai点加finish?

star

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-21T00:59:52+00:00

LKs wrote:
你是让我mod这张map吧？。。。

G

不开1，2，3倒数吗

建议用和你这clap一样的slidetick

Normal

slidertick不太好，有的正好在clap点上

[00:41:301] finish
[00:41:850] clap
[01:10:569] 去掉clap （这是为了和后面有对比
[01;13:469] 同上
[01:16:423] 同上
[02:04:716] finish?
[02:13;130] 这里忘了加clap
XD 20秒的break，有个性我喜欢
[03:41:301] finish

Hard

[00:29:777] 向下一格

Insane

kiai点加finish?

star

修好了~感謝

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-05-21T09:19:49+00:00

Long x-x
20sec break..... oh well..

Normal-
00:29:777 (1) - felt this could/should star on the white tick (00:29:594) instead... or at least reduce one repeat (since next notes follow vocal)
That's all. Good~

Hard- 10mil difference from Normal, haha
00:33:069 - add note? maybe, just felt like small gap that could be filled
I find the soft sections a tad bit too quiet... Normal's volume for soft section sounds better
Great~

Insane- feel a bit fast for the song, but it's fine after getting used to it
15mil D: but thats just cuz song is long...
Same as Hard in terms of soft hitsound volume
Would prefer new combos for the spacing change jumps, but no big deal.
Nothing specific I wanna point out, good.. (didn't wanna add more notes as it is.. xD)

02:33:984 - imo, kiai should end here or end of this spinner
04:10:569 - ^

The maps are a tad bit messy in some parts, but nothing that interferes with playing, and feel that there could be more finish hitsounds

Good Job~~

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-21T14:11:48+00:00

Shinxyn wrote:
Long x-x
20sec break..... oh well..

Normal-
00:29:777 (1) - felt this could/should star on the white tick (00:29:594) instead... or at least reduce one repeat (since next notes follow vocal)
That's all. Good~

Hard- 10mil difference from Normal, haha
00:33:069 - add note? maybe, just felt like small gap that could be filled
I find the soft sections a tad bit too quiet... Normal's volume for soft section sounds better
Great~

Insane- feel a bit fast for the song, but it's fine after getting used to it
15mil D: but thats just cuz song is long...
Same as Hard in terms of soft hitsound volume
Would prefer new combos for the spacing change jumps, but no big deal.
Nothing specific I wanna point out, good.. (didn't wanna add more notes as it is.. xD)

02:33:984 - imo, kiai should end here or end of this spinner
04:10:569 - ^

The maps are a tad bit messy in some parts, but nothing that interferes with playing, and feel that there could be more finish hitsounds

Good Job~~

fixed~ good Suggestion!! thank you!

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-05-21T15:15:21+00:00

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you must make them at least E I I

[Normal]

• 00:29:594 (1,2) - Spacing
• 00:48:618 (x) - Add a brsak

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-21T16:15:17+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you must make them at least E I I
[Normal]

• 00:29:594 (1,2) - Spacing
• 00:48:618 (x) - Add a brsak

fixed! thank you
i think N I I is fine,because my ''Crow song''is N I I

Mystearica

Mystearica 2010-05-21T17:32:51+00:00

随便看一下路过

Vikon

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Vikon 2010-05-22T10:33:57+00:00

[General]
1) 因為歌太長，我看[Hard] 和 [Insane]的分數也過千萬了，我不肯定這會否導致歌只能變為approval，而非ranked.

[Normal]
00:35:447 (1) 拉下一點，使它與(3)成水平線?
02:45:508 至 02:55:204 這一段用soft-whistle伴奏好嗎? 只用普通hitsound有點單調。
03:20:813 不知怎的，看到這個長的2個break中間只有一個note.,好像有點不爽囧, 於是我嘗試在03:21:179 (x) 那裏加了一個有clap的note
然後又覺得後面的break要等太久，於是我就重複在每2條白線上，加一個有clap的note, 由03:21:911 至到 03:32:155, 可以考慮一下...
03:43:130 (6) 這個(6)好像要拉下一點,雖然明白你想連貫(5,6,7,1)，但卻使到之前的五角有點扭曲。
04:19:716 (x) 在這裏加個有clap的note?
04:25:569 (x) ^

[Hard]
00:40:935 (5) 在這裏加clap?
01:04:716 (1) 拉上一點，與(6)成水平?
02:45:691 至 03:05:996 這段用soft-whistle伴奏?
或，剛想到，可以做一個漸進效果，只在02:57:399 至03:05:996加soft-whistle?
03:05:447 (6) 在 03:05:813 終止?
03:20:813 建議如[Normal]

[Insane]
02:41:393 多餘的timing section!?
01:20:630 (2) 考慮把這一tick變成靜音?
02:45:691 建議如其餘2個diff.
03:20:813 ^

最後,Star~

Clare

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Clare 2010-05-22T14:57:09+00:00

Vikon wrote:
[General]
1) 因為歌太長，我看[Hard] 和 [Insane]的分數也過千萬了，我不肯定這會否導致歌只能變為approval，而非ranked.

[Normal]
00:35:447 (1) 拉下一點，使它與(3)成水平線?
02:45:508 至 02:55:204 這一段用soft-whistle伴奏好嗎? 只用普通hitsound有點單調。
03:20:813 不知怎的，看到這個長的2個break中間只有一個note.,好像有點不爽囧, 於是我嘗試在03:21:179 (x) 那裏加了一個有clap的note
然後又覺得後面的break要等太久，於是我就重複在每2條白線上，加一個有clap的note, 由03:21:911 至到 03:32:155, 可以考慮一下...
03:43:130 (6) 這個(6)好像要拉下一點,雖然明白你想連貫(5,6,7,1)，但卻使到之前的五角有點扭曲。
04:19:716 (x) 在這裏加個有clap的note?
04:25:569 (x) ^

[Hard]
00:40:935 (5) 在這裏加clap?
01:04:716 (1) 拉上一點，與(6)成水平?
02:45:691 至 03:05:996 這段用soft-whistle伴奏?
或，剛想到，可以做一個漸進效果，只在02:57:399 至03:05:996加soft-whistle?
03:05:447 (6) 在 03:05:813 終止?
03:20:813 建議如[Normal]

[Insane]
02:41:393 多餘的timing section!?
01:20:630 (2) 考慮把這一tick變成靜音?
02:45:691 建議如其餘2個diff.
03:20:813 ^

最後,Star~

修了部分...note不能再加了再加分數太高了...還是感謝~