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Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed

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choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 09 de febrero de 2011 at 18:58:12

Artist: Miley Cyrus
Title: Can't Be Tamed
Tags: Hollywood Record Anto
BPM: 117
Filesize: 16773kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Anto's Insane (4,99 stars, 462 notes)
  2. Easy (2,01 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Hard (4,44 stars, 313 notes)
Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed
Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi! :)

This is my 3rd beatmap, my other beatmaps were very very very bad, but i think this is better :) I spent too much time on it ;)
Hope you enjoy it! :D

-02-6-10: I start to make it again, hard was very bad.


Easy: Finished.
Hard: Finished.
Anto's Insane: Finished.

Mods please, check it :)

Thanks to everybody for modding :D

-29-06-10: Added video, thanks to ezek for make it for me ;)
-03-07-10: Thanks to j35u5891221 for help me with hitsounds ^^
-17-07-10: I made Normal and Easy as long as hard :)
-21-11-10: Revived ^^
-21-11-10: Map until the end in all difficulties and added a better video (I love it <3).
-23-11-10: Added a little pulsation ^^
-02-12-10: Added Anto's Insane (: Thanks for the diff.
-05-12-10: Deleted normal (It was too easy for a normal) and make easy more difficult.
-23-12-10: Little changes on Storyboard.
-09-01-11: Thanks to Card N'Force for mod :D

People who download before 23-12-10, Redownload, please ^^
Last edited by choche_old , edited 72 times in total.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
BPM; 117
Offset; 2491

There is no need for multiple timing sections in this song, so delete all other red timing sections apart from the first one.
chibi-lucky
22 posts
Joined April 2010
chibi-lucky
Positive Feedback- Yay! You did something I liked.
Suggestions- You can fix em or leave em.
Map Error: FIX THIS NOW!

Overall:
Use Grid level 3 : View>Grid Level>3
Open your AIMod and correct all your spacing errors: File>Open AIMod

Easy:
00:19:423 (1-5) - Space these out waaaay more.
00:25:065 (1) - 00:30:065 (1) - ^
00:27:373 (1) - Move to the previous white tick.
00:28:270 (1) - ^
00:32:886 (3) - ^
00:33:399 (4) - ^
00:34:424 (6) - ^
00:36:989 (3) - ^
00:39:553 (1) -^
00:30:065 (1) - Move to the next white tick.
00:42:887 (2) - ^
00:44:425 (3) - ^
00:46:349 (4) - ^
00:42:246 - Shorten this slider to the previous white tick.
00:43:015 (2) - ^
01:01:991 (7) - ^00:44:425 (3) - Extend this slider to the next white tick.
00:48:272 (1) - Move this to the next white tick and shorten it by half, but end it on another white tick.. Insert a break for duration of the would-be spinner.
chibi-lucky
22 posts
Joined April 2010
chibi-lucky
Positive Feedback- Yay! You did something I liked.
Suggestions- You can fix em or leave em.
Map Error: FIX THIS NOW!

Overall:
Open your AIMod. Fix those errors.
Use Grid level 3
This is waaay too easy for normal. increase your HP drain, make the circles smaller, or increase the required accuracy. preferrably all three.

Normal:
00:01:088 (1-3) - What is this? It's not even.... there in in the song. remove this.
00:17:885 (7) - This slider is very wrong. remove it and put something else there. anything else. Just don't use the blue ticks.
00:21:859 (9) - ^
00:23:526 (10) - If your changing that slider, move this further away.
00:24:167 (1) - Move to previous white tick.
00:52:375 (1) - ^
01:21:352 (2) - ^
00:26:475 (6) - Move to next white tick.
00:48:528 (1) - ^
00:49:041 (2) - ^
00:55:195 (2) - ^
01:16:736 (1) - ^
01:21:864 (3) - ^
01:24:942 (3) - ^
01:25:967 (5-8) - ^
01:32:122 (1) - ^
00:27:116 (1) - move to previous white tick and shorten to previous white tick.
00:43:528 (5) - Move this further from 4
00:53:272 (3) - Move this further away from 3
00:59:939 (1) - Shorten this slider by a few beats and place hit circles on the white ticks.
01:08:658 (1-4) - space these out more.
01:33:788 (1) - 01:49:687 (4) - ^
01:24:044 (1-10) - space these out waaaay more and start a new combo at 5.
01:46:225 (1) - 01:49:687 (4) - delete all these.
01:45:584 - start a spinner here, 01:49:174 - end it here.
chibi-lucky
22 posts
Joined April 2010
chibi-lucky
Positive Feedback- Yay! You did something I liked.
Suggestions- You can fix em or leave em.
Map Error: FIX THIS NOW!

Overall:
AIMod.
Grid Level 3.
Remove all your kiai time. it's all used wrong.
Did you change the BPM for this one? put it back like the rest of them. They all feel so off...

Hard:
00:02:242 (2) - Remove this.
00:00:960 (1) - extend to the next white tick.
00:03:396 (5) - ^
00:26:988 (4) - ^
00:27:501 (1-5) - ^
00:30:192 (7) - ^
00:31:219 (1) - ^
00:32:758 (2) - ^
00:33:783 (3) - ^
00:36:861 (1) - 00:40:834 (3) - ^
00:09:679 (4-5) - move this further from the rest of the combo.
00:22:629 (1) - move to previous white tick.
00:42:246 (1) - ^
00:31:219 (1) - extend this to the next white tick.
00:42:246 (1) - 00:48:144 (4) - redo all of these, they're too off beat for me to make a suggestion.
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
A lot of thanks, I'll make it :)
balvag
22 posts
Joined February 2009
balvag
Easy

00:34:456 (6) -Move to the previous white tick
00:37:020 (3) -Move to the previous white tick
00:46:080 -Extend slider to the next white tick
01:20:268 -Extend spinner to the next white tick

Normal

00:27:106 -Shorten the slider on the white ticks
01:20:781 (1-2) -Move to the next white tick

Isn't it TOO easy for a normal difficulty?

Hard

00:12:234 (4) -Align
00:12:747 (1-4) -Align with the notes of the previous combo
00:17:875 (1-2) -Align
00:23:516 (2-4) -Align everything to a straight line
00:25:055 (1-5) -Align the notes to the middle of the grid
00:31:208 (1) -Remove this note (??).Something isn't right for me there
00:33:773 (6-8) -Align
00:41:645 -Extend spinner to the next white tick
00:51:208 (1) -Align the note with the previous slider
01:21:123 (2) -Move 1/3 forward
01:21:294 (1) -Move 1/3 forward

Those are my suggestions.By the way first time I ever post suggestions for a beatmap, so if there is something I didn't wrote down correctly...flame me! :oops:
Last edited by balvag , edited 1 time in total.
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
Spanish Mod:

[*] Importante
[ ] Sugerencia


General:

- Elimina "miley", "cyrus", "Can't", "Tamed" de los tags no son necesarios pues estan en el nombre de la cancion. [*]
- Agrega un Preview Point adecuado, actualmente es: PreviewTime: -1 (En el archivo ".osu") sugerencia: PreviewTime: 42491. [*]
- Define bien las dificultades. [**]
- El wallpaper se ve de muy baja calidad intenta buscar otro.[*] Sugerencia:
SPOILER
ATTACH[Miley_Cyrus_2 (1024 x 640).jpg]

Easy:

-Usa Beatsnap Divisor: 1/2
00:10:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Usa Distance Snap en toda esta zona :s. [*]
00:17:619 - 00:19:157 - El break es muy corto lo mejor es eliminarlo. [*]
00:26:090 (2) - Elimina New Combo.
00:26:593 (3) - ^.
00:28:132 (1) - ^.
00:28:388 - El break es muy corto.
00:30:183 (1) - Elimina New Combo.
00:43:516 (1) - Arregla el espacio. [*]
00:45:567 (1) - Elimina New Combo.
00:59:939 (5) - New Combo
01:28:648 (8) - Elimina el 8 y agrega un spinner que termine en 01:31:981.

Normal:


-Usa Beatsnap Divisor: 1/4
-Resnap a todas las notas, Luego arreglas lo que sigue:
00:06:593 (1) - Arregla el espacio entre notas [*]
00:08:644 (1) - ^ [*]
00:09:670 (3) - ^ [*]
00:17:362 (6) - La nota está muy arriba, intenta moverla a un lado.
00:17:875 (1,2) - Arregla los espacios entra las notas [*]
00:19:414 (1) - ^ [*]
00:21:978 (1) - ^ [*]
... Intenta usar mas Distance Snap en esta dificultad hay muchos errores en cuanto espacios entre las notas.
00:40:952 (3) - La nota está muy arriba
00:41:465 (1) - Elimina New Combo [*]
00:42:491 (3) - New Combo [*]
00:43:516 (3) - La nota está muy arriba
00:59:930 (1) - Que el spinner termine en: 01:02:494
01:23:003 (1) - Elimna New Combo [*]
01:24:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Las notas estan muy juntas usa Distance Snap
01:43:530 (5) - New Combo [*]
01:48:986 (1) - Muevelo al tick blanco y que termine en 1:56:340

Hard:


-Usa Beatsnap Divisor: 1/4
-Resnap a todas las notas, Luego arreglas lo que sigue:
00:09:670 (1) - Muevelo a un costado [*]
00:09:670 (1) - Elimina New Combo
00:20:952 (1,2) - Muevelos a otro lugar [*]
00:27:619 (1) - Muevelo al tick blanco y que termine en : 00:31:208
00:35:311 (1) - Arregla el espacio
01:02:750 - 01:03:904 - El break es muy corto
01:04:802 - 01:06:212 - ^
01:16:725 (1) - Muevelo al tick blanco
01:20:781 (1,2,1) - Unsnapped [*]
01:30:525 (1,1) - ^
01:56:849 (4) - Elimina esta nota
01:57:020 (1) - Muevelo al lugar donde estaba la nota 4
02:00:952 (1) - Haz que el spinner termine en el tick blanco.[*]
02:05:055 (1) - ^ [*]
02:09:157 (1) - ^ [*]
... Revisa las notas en las que utilizas New Combo.


baby_crazy
2 posts
Joined February 2010
baby_crazy
I love it, it's very good. I hope the mods will rank it ;)
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

Oh,what a cutie on the BG...

You need more work on it.

Use distance snap,you need to fix your random placement.
Like this:
[Easy]
00:13:773 (7) - Why it's much further then others ones?

Also,try to follow the rhytm better,try to do like this:

[Easy]
00:02:491 (1) - Add a note
00:05:055 (2) - Move to 00:04:029.
00:07:114 (4) - Move to 00:06:080.
00:08:132 - Add a note.

You also need to follow the lyrics somehow:
[Easy]
00:18:901 - Add a note here.

And don't think that easy difficulty must contain very few notes,no.Put just single circles,no.The point is to follow the rhytm or lyrics,and make your map easy to read.That's the point of successful map.

So,well,you can fix by yourself,wait for another modding or remap once again.

Just wish you good luck,have a star~
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
Move to "Pending Beatmaps" (seems complete to me)...delete osb file. and fullsubmit
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
wenas

En rojo cosas que deberias cambiar, En azul sugerencias

[General]
-En todas las diff. abre "Timing panel setup", luego dentro de la pestaña "timing" revisa los "Timing points" que estan despues del primero, deberian tener la casilla "Inherit previous timing settings" abilitada, de esta forma solo tienes un timing point con el bpm y los demas solo se acoplan a este.
-La imagen de fonde de pantalla deberia ser 1024x768
-Agregar "Preview Point" en todas las diff. te falta hacerlo en Hard
-Muchos claps, agrega algunos finish al final de los spinner y algunos hit notmal (sin clap), por ejemplo en 01:06:596 (1,2,3) en Normal, puede agregar finish en (1), whistle en (2) y (3) dejarlo sin hitsound, trata de ser un poco mas creativo (aunque yo soy bien malo con los hitsounds <.<)


[Hard]
-01:05:571 (5,6) Aumenta el espacio entre estos dos circles

En general creo q esta bn, no perfecto, pregunta por ahi por mas mods =3
Sldos.
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Remove hannah montana disney from Tags because this song is not from HM series or from a Disney films/series.
You can put "Hollywood Record" as a tag.
02:12:918 - 02:48:019 - Delete this part from the .mp3 since you haven't mapped it.
Kiai Time is expected to be the same in every difficulty.

[Easy]
Overall Difficulty confuses me. Raise it +2-3
00:43:516 (1) - Flip horizontally.
00:45:567 (2) - Up 1 grid (lvl 1).
00:46:080 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:13:260 (6) - New Combo.
01:23:003 (1) - Spacing.

[Normal]
00:03:516 (2) - 3 grids down, 2 left (lvl 1).
00:13:516 - Remove this Break Time and map it.
00:15:824 (3) - New Combo.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
General;

Please use grid snap 3 from now on; bigger grid squares lead to horrible spacing.
Kiai time should be uniform across all diffs.

Easy;

00:06:593 (4,5) - 1/1 backwards, respace accordingly?
00:18:901 (7,1) - Spacing.
00:27:619 (4) - New combo.
00:37:362 (break) - Make this break longer by deleting the orange and green combos either side of it.
00:45:567 (2) - This is a horrible overlap.
00:46:080 (1) - 1 less repeat.
00:48:644 (1) - Extend by 1/1.
01:10:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This would be tough in an easy.
01:22:490 (4,1) - Spacing.

Normal;

You need to find room for a break here.
00:05:567 (1) - No new combo.
00:07:619 (1) - ^
00:13:773 (break) - Fill in this break.
00:18:901 (3,1) - New combo on the three, not on the 1.
00:33:260 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:36:337 (4,5) - ^
01:05:055 (break) - Fill it in.
01:29:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - SPACING.
01:38:388 (1,1,1) - ^
01:48:986 (1) - Delete.
01:49:157 (x) - Circle here.

Hard;

This really isn't terribly hard, I would suggest you try mapping it to the lyrics.
00:18:901 (1,2) - Spacing.
00:20:952 (1,2) - ^
00:31:721 (1,2,3) - ^
00:34:798 (7,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
Stopped there, this diff is a mess.

Call me back once you have that done, still not worthy of a star.
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks for all the mods! :D

DiamondCrash wrote:

00:33:260 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:36:337 (4,5) - ^
It's distance snapped.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
SPOILER
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

DiamondCrash wrote:

SPOILER
o.o I did it with distance snap :S
Shelita19
2 posts
Joined May 2010
Shelita19
Esta genial x3 me ha gustado mucho ;)
Neethime
168 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
[General]
Well, at first I suggest that you'd better use grid level 2 or 3 since 1 may cause many small spacing mistakes.(But all the modding below is according to level 1)

[Easy]
00:06:593 (4,5) - why not move them 00:06:080?
00:09:670 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:17:362 (6) - try to move this lower, it's half in the HP bar
00:29:157 (5) - ^
00:58:901 (3,4) - hidden notes in easy may make beginners confused.
01:08:132 (5) - new combo.
01:15:311 (10) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:926 (3) - 1 grid down
00:27:106 (1) - try to divide this slider into two or more
00:44:542 (6) - new combo
01:43:516 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
HP and OD -1
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Must
Should
Suggestion

[Easy]
01:23:003 - distance
00:16:849 - ^
00:18:901 - new combo
00:19:414 - remove new combo
00:54:798 - ^

[Normal]
00:20:439 - remove new combo
01:38:388 - ^
01:40:439 - ^

[Hard]
00:46:080 - remove new combo
00:51:208 -This notes are too close. Make please more distance between circles
01:08:132 - add streams
01:30:525 - remove new combo
01:41:978 - ^
01:56:849 - remove spinners and add notes
Don't be lazy map whole the map. this is hard man :: )

Star~
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 1 time in total.
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everybody for the mod, I'm trying to do all :)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

01:08:132 - add streams
I don't know what do you want to say with "streams".

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[01:56:849 - remove spinners and add notes
I thinks is very difficult to put some notes here... I'll try it, but i think that i will put the spinners... Thanks :3
hyperluigi
69 posts
Joined October 2008
hyperluigi
En general está bastante bien.

[Easy]: En general los espacios no me acaban de convencer. El ritmo está bien
00:16:337 (4) - Mover 2 grids (cuadraditos) a la derecha y 1 arriba
00:16:849 (5) - Ponerlo simetrico a 4 (la discancia es la justa)
00:17:362 (6) - Si haces lo anterior, yo pondria el 6 justo encima del 3
00:17:875 (7) - Encima de 6 (si no te gusta como quedan estos 4 circulos, no los cambies si no quieres)
00:18:901 (1) - Un cuadradito arriba
00:58:901 (3,4) - Un cuadradito a la izquierda

Uf, esq es dificil, el spacing está a veces a 0,7; otra a 0,8 y otras a 0,9 y no sé como lo has ordenado...
Es mas o menos lo que puedo decirte. Es easy, por tanto la distancia deberia ser regular, o algo menos pero mas simétrico.
Si quieres probar, te recomiendo poner todo a una misma distancia (pulsas alt y con la ruleta del raton ajustas la distancia y luego activas el distance snap) 0,7 o 0,8 está bien, aunq si quieres una el 1,0% para que coincida con la distancia de los sliders.

[Normal]
00:15:824 (3) - nuevo combo

En está puedes tener un poco mas de libertad con el espacio, pero no mucho, porq todavia es una dificultad bastante facil o por lo menos debería.

[Hard]
01:30:183 (2) - yo la pondria en 01:30:354
01:56:849 (1) - Son muy cansados los 4 spins al final, mira a ver si puedes sustituir almenos 2 de ellos (puedes usar sliders, por ejemplo) y si no, lo dejas así, (este es mas opinion mia, porque no me gustan mucho los spins. xDDD)

La Hard me gusta mas, pero un poco facil para mi gusto. Hay algun saltito pero si no los tuviera dejaria de ser hard.

Star ;)
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
I don't know what do you want to say with "streams".
Well ok.

I suggest to replace sliders to streams:

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/4656 ... ot107z.png
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
Re-Check~

[General]
  1. - I see that u added something to the OSB file , but those scripts are not working , I suggest you to delete OSB file and full submit, or catch me in-game chat I'll help u with the storyboard.
  2. Remove letterboxing in breaks
  3. I'm not sure if Hollywood Records should be used in the Tag Box

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:439 (3) - This note overlaps with the HP Bar , move it pls.
  2. 00:21:465 (4) - Suggestion: Move it
  3. 00:29:157 (6) - ^
  4. 00:48:644 (1) - Finish it in 1/1
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:285 (X) - Suggetion: Add a note
  2. 00:43:516 (5) - Suggestion: Delete Clap and add Finish
  3. 00:45:567 (3) - ^
  4. 00:47:619 (3) - ^
  5. 00:51:721 (3) - ^
  6. 00:53:773 (X) - Add a note and ^
    (Suggestion: Use finish in the notes where the voice says: "tame" in the next chorus too)
  7. 01:04:713 - The break is too short ,Suggestion: add a spinner from 01:05:055 to 01:06:080
  8. 01:28:132 (5,6) - Suggestion: Move them.
  9. 01:32:234 (1) - Spacing
[Hard]

  1. Watch the Combos
Star**
kaouji
92 posts
Joined February 2009
kaouji
i guess you need to use more sound effect.

easy
00:17:875 (7) too cliose to the hp bar

normal:
01:28:132 (5.6):almost touch the hp bar

hard:
00:51:208 (1) too close to the edge
00:59:926 (1,2) ↑
01:30:525(3,1) too far
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
hihi~~

[Easy]
00:27:619 (4) - new combo
00:54:798 (4) - ^

[Normal]
fine :D

[Hard]
01:39:414 (X) - add note?

hmm..i thinl you'd make all :P

good
star!
ChristosGalatsi
3 posts
Joined April 2010
ChristosGalatsi
Perfect :D
Must be ranked :)
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everybody for modding :D
ChristosGalatsi
3 posts
Joined April 2010
ChristosGalatsi
Here , i made changes on your map .. :)

Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (ChristosGalatsi) [Normal].osu
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

ChristosGalatsi wrote:

Here , i made changes on your map .. :)
A lot of thanks for make a difficult for my map :3

EDIT: Sorry, but i won't add it because it's not distance snapped.
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
I love this beatmap! 8-)
Last edited by ZekeyHache , edited 3 times in total.
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
lzy
go rank it:33
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
Aqui esta el video se mira algo feo pero es por que tiene que medir menos de 5 mb[attachment=0:690fc]VIDEO.rar[/attachment:690fc]
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old

ezek wrote:

Aqui esta el video se mira algo feo pero es por que tiene que medir menos de 5 mb[attachment=0:82387]VIDEO.rar[/attachment:82387]

Muchas gracias por hacerme el video, no tenias porque hacerlo :D
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
[Easy]
00:28:644 (2,3,4) - Make a better triangle
00:37:106 - Why the hell you would even put break time here?
00:46:080 (1) - Split the sliders into two
00:59:414 (4,1) - Nice jump, bro
01:11:721 (3,4,5,6) - ^
Btw, too many hit circles =[ Change some to sliders

[Normal]
Some spacing problems

[Hard]
Doesn't even seem like hard =[
Also some spacing tbe
AllyGORE_old
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Joined March 2009
AllyGORE_old
Well, I don't really know anything about making maps.
But you asked for my feedback, and I will give it from my point of view.


Easy: This map was good. It'll really let beginners have a chance at playing the map, but still be challenging for them. Approved (By Ally)
Normal: Good for when you are done with Easy. I can't really give too much feedback though, cause I found it too easy for me personally. But Normal isn't my level. But it was good. The timing was good from what I could tell, and switched it up well from Easy. Approved (By Ally)
Hard: Hard was good, it was challenging, and switched it up. But I felt it could be switched up more. I was bored at a few parts. But timing was good. The speed was good too, and I like the placement of the circles. I hate with some maps where it's fast but the circles are spaced out too far everywhere even though the beats are close together. You don't need to fix this though.I feel the map is fine now. Approved (By Ally)

To maybe help with the Hard map (I don't want to put more work on you though) is maybe create a fourth map for the song. Switched up a lot, and such. An insane of sorts? That's all I really have to say. Except for a job well done. :) And for your 3rd map, good job! I've only TRIED making a map once, and even with the tutorials got frustrated and quit. :D
For this, I give an overall Approval from Ally.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Hola...moddearé en inglés...

uuhmm...well...Overall Timing: Fine!

i modded sounds, cuz you requested it...now it sounds fine, according to the rhythm, and you were abussing from Claps Hitsounds...now with this file, now will be better...Also i made really few fixes in some parts (i shouldn't did that), because there was parts that make the song loses its rhythm and makes harder to reorganize sounds and in the end, i added some items because spinners were too Long (and still there are long spinners but i'll mod it later, when i'm not that busy).

P.S: i'll mod the song later (overall, spacing, combos, etc...). Star~~ and Good luck!!

Here's the file...

Download: Miley Cyrus - Can't Be Tamed (choche) [Hard].osu
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Allygore: A lot of thanks, I tried to make an insane, but it was impossible for me :S. Thanks for your mod :). If you see my first and my second beatmaps, you will see that they're on the graveyard, They were very bad. So you have to try to make a beatmap again :)

j35u5891221: ^^ Ya que haces el mod en ingles te contestare en ingles xD. A lot of thanks, I work a lot in this beatmap, but i'm very very bad with hitsounds xD :)
mxobetis14
2 posts
Joined February 2010
mxobetis14
Oh! I love this song, and the beatmap it's perfect!!
I hope this will be ranked ;)
luck!
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
Here's your star :3
Bittersweet
2,031 posts
Joined February 2010
Bittersweet
Easy:
00:32:234 (2) - 00:32:234 (3) - two notes in the same place. uhn. remove one of then (obvious)
good diff, anyway.

Normal: no problems :3

Hard: no problems. maybe decrease the drain rate by 1? just a suggestion, but minimal, since it's not too hard~~


good enough for me, anyway. Star :3
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Thanks to everybody for modding and for the stars :)

Bittersweet wrote:

Easy:
00:32:234 (2) - 00:32:234 (3) - two notes in the same place.
-I didn't see it! o.o Thanks! ^^
hyperluigi
69 posts
Joined October 2008
hyperluigi
Normal
00:37:020 (6) - Está bien ese circle? (por si no lo has visto o por si desde el principio pensabas dejarlo así) ^^
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
borra el archivo .osb de la carpeta del beatmap

Hard
00:25:909 (7,8,9,10) - esta un poco confuso esto, podrías stack 7 y 8, y no 8 y 9 ^^
01:30:525 (3) - elimina esta nota
la dificultad esta técnicamente bien, pero creo que podrías seguir un poco mas el ritmo de la canción, coloca mas notas de 1/3, porque esta un poco monótono en algunas partes, como por ejemplo de aquí 00:43:516 hasta aquí 00:57:875 >< escucha mejor la canción, creo que podrías hacer un buen ritmo en esta parte aparte de colocar notas en cada un beat ^^

Normal
muy alto el HP drain y el overall difficulty
01:49:670 (1) - como que el spinner no pega en esta parte, mi humilde opinión @.@

Easy
00:31:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no saltos en easy ><
00:39:414 (1,2,3) - trata de que el espacio entre notas sea igual
01:16:593 (1) - empieza el spinner en el tick blanco

Star
Pokie
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2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
General
  • - Your BG size is 1024x640 now, you must resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600
    - Disable countdown on all diffs
    - Move preview point to 42149 will be better

Easy
[list:a72f9]00:04:029 (2,3,4,5) - Place them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17066
00:29:157 (3) - spacing
00:45:567 (2) - use finish instead
00:47:619 (2) - move it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17068
00:58:901 (1) - new combo?
01:08:644 (2) - use same distance as 01:09:157 (3,4)


Normal

00:53:602 (4) - weird
01:49:157 (1) - place it on centre?


Hard

01:22:832 (6) - spacing
01:47:106 (1,2) - use 1/2 beat slider instead?




Not much to say, ummm...try to map full version next time :D

....and have your resized BG :3
http://puu.sh/36G
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Background name very long.
Incoherent difficulty lengths

[Easy]
This diff is too short, map it to the end, make it as long as [Hard]
00:17:362 (6,7) - Spacing
00:28:644 (2,3) - Try to avoid changing the spacing distance on an Easy diff (and try to avoid it overall)
01:05:567 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
01:10:696 (1,2,3) - Spacing, Another obvious one, im amazed that its at 25 SP and still has theese errors.
01:12:747 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:21:978 (3,4,1,2) - Uneven spacing, dont go switching spacing on Easy diffs

[Normal]
Diff is too short, make it as long as [Hard]
01:16:337 (5) - Out of bounds.
01:27:619 (4,5) - Spacing
01:33:260 (3,1) - Mini Jump? i think it's not good to put "mini" jumps
01:36:849 (3,4) - Spacing
01:38:388 (1,1) - No new combo
01:49:157 (1) - Anti-Jump? please avoid theese.

[Hard]
I expected this one to be at least till the end of the song, but if this is your longest diff, there's not much i can ask you for here.
00:27:448 (1) - I'd understand if this was an Easy, but what's the point of a spinner like this when lyrics and instruments still have a steady rythm?
00:39:414 (1) - This spinner can be split as well.
01:32:234 (2,3) - Spacing

Ok i dont wanna add another star to a map with this many errors, speacially the obvious spacing errors, decide what you wanna do, but this map is at an unrankable state right now, if you want a star, you can PM me for a remod after you fix the issues
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
A lot of thanks for modding, I'm going to start to make all the things you have said :D

-Specially thanks to pokie for the BG <3
braian5234
230 posts
Joined April 2010
braian5234
I Love Miley :D
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Hmm Let's see
[osz File Scan!]
Fine
Your mp3 is longer than the part you have mapped, consider cropping the mp3

[Hard]
00:10:696 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All theese notes are all 1/1 the singer's not singing on 1/1 so why have 1/1s on a Hard? (Yes i know your probably following the main beat but that can be done on easier diffs)
00:29:670 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Theese also are a bit boring for a Hard.
00:39:414 (1) - I notice this spinner is still here. Feels awkward as there's still steady rythm going so i dont see the point of a spinner.
01:11:550 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid uneven stacks like this
01:16:337 (1) - Another awkward spinner, there's nothing in the song that hints me to a spinner here.
00:18:901 (1,2,1) - You could try smaller repeat sliders.
02:09:670 (2) - Theese could be split into 2 spinners

[Normal]
01:15:824 (4,5) - Spacing error
01:34:285 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:48:644 (3,4) - Spacing error
The last sections could be split into many spinners

[Easy]
00:06:080 (4,5) - Spacing error
00:17:362 (6,7) - Spacing error

You sill have spacing issues, please remember the golden rule: "For equal spacing on the timeline, the distance between notes must be the same" Once again, i cant give star, please work on it more and PM me again when you have fixed it
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
choche_old
Ok, i'll make all the things you said except this:

Sakura301 wrote:

01:16:337 (1) - Another awkward spinner, there's nothing in the song that hints me to a spinner here.
I like this spinner >.<

A lot of thanks for modding :D I'll call you when I do that :)
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