Type-Moon - Severe Person · forum

Deye

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Deye 2010-05-12T14:17:21+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月5日 at 11:48:35

Artist: Type-Moon
Title: Severe Person
Source: Melty Blood
Tags: [Shalon]
BPM: 161.5
Filesize: 2740kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:

[Shalon]'s taiko (4.87 stars, 260 notes)
Hard (4.82 stars, 186 notes)
Insane (4.99 stars, 293 notes)
Normal (3.1 stars, 94 notes)

Download: Type-Moon - Severe Person
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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=_,= =_,= =_,= =_,= =_,=

(I like jump~ lol

Normal done.
Hard done.
Insane done.
[Shalon]'s taiko done.(by [Shalon])

Last edited by Deye 2010-12-05T03:51:17+00:00, edited 48 times in total.

maay

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maay 2010-05-13T12:07:16+00:00

You should add "Melty Blood ActCadenza Version B" as source. Maybe just "Melty Blood".
[Hard] seems fine for me, but maybe you forgot this one:
01:00:229 (1): add finish hitsound

so yeah, fiun map to play and GJ with the hitsounds. Gonna edit later to mod the other diffs you're gonna add but have a star for now.

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-05-14T03:26:34+00:00

[General]
倒数321没用的话去掉吧。
图片640*480？另外图片名称奇囧。。。

[Normal]
有些挤的感觉。我个人意见是slider太慢造成的。
slider tick rate:1，现在太毛毛多了。即使是玩slidertick sound应该也够用了吧~？（但如果调了slider velocity，记得核对这项数值）
个人而讲0.5x部分并不会make sense。

[Hard]
还是觉得slider慢。
自带clap做节拍器打在这里感觉不好。
四分音不要老是冲长白线开始，会无趣的。
00:27:024 (1,2,3) - 不理解，我觉得费不少劲摆这个造型，却不会因此得到什么正面评价，是很无趣的事。。。

只是一些偏于总体印象的评价……等pending再细看吧。

Deye

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Deye 2010-05-14T03:55:43+00:00

SuperMaay wrote:
You should add "Melty Blood ActCadenza Version B" as source. Maybe just "Melty Blood".
[Hard] seems fine for me, but maybe you forgot this one:
01:00:229 (1): add finish hitsound

so yeah, fiun map to play and GJ with the hitsounds. Gonna edit later to mod the other diffs you're gonna add but have a star for now.

I only have a .mp3...
thanks~

Deye

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Deye 2010-05-14T04:00:40+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
倒数321没用的话去掉吧。
图片640*480？另外图片名称奇囧。。。

[Normal]
有些挤的感觉。我个人意见是slider太慢造成的。
slider tick rate:1，现在太毛毛多了。即使是玩slidertick sound应该也够用了吧~？（但如果调了slider velocity，记得核对这项数值）
个人而讲0.5x部分并不会make sense。

[Hard]
还是觉得slider慢。
自带clap做节拍器打在这里感觉不好。
四分音不要老是冲长白线开始，会无趣的。
00:27:024 (1,2,3) - 不理解，我觉得费不少劲摆这个造型，却不会因此得到什么正面评价，是很无趣的事。。。

只是一些偏于总体印象的评价……等pending再细看吧。

其实到现在我都不知道这曲子是啥里面的……背景图也是问百度娘要的……

slider tick rate:1，现在太毛毛多了。即使是玩slidertick sound应该也够用了吧~？（但如果调了slider velocity，记得核对这项数值）
个人而讲0.5x部分并不会make sense。
这段没太明白……

另外，clap音确实不太美，不过我没有偷到更合适的clap音……或者直接用那个tick音？

thanks~

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-05-21T05:37:33+00:00

我的亲哥 CLAP不要老是连放放鞭炮吗？用normal-normalhit或者soft whistle代替试试
你之前那个音效多好啊
hard OA+2 你以为这是NORMAL啊亲哥

LKs

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LKs 2010-06-02T13:17:45+00:00

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-06-03T05:14:49+00:00

Type-Moon

Deye

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Deye 2010-06-03T11:48:03+00:00

gdeath wrote:
Type-Moon

done.

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-06-04T16:47:47+00:00

自带的soft clap很适合这歌别用哪个自定义的很奇怪

Faust

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Faust 2010-06-20T16:21:24+00:00

Hey listen. This track is NOT by TYPE-MOON. DO NOT list the company as the artist.

http://vgmdb.net/album/13254

Raito is the one who arranged the tracks, and therefore he should be the artist, the source will be Melty Blood Actress Again, to avoid future mislabelling under "Melty Blood".

Please use VGMDB in the future if you need to get the source/artist.
Also, Supermaay, this is the Actress Again version, not the version from Act Cadenza.

Faust

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Faust 2010-06-24T15:18:13+00:00

Keep it to Type-Moon for consistency. The other Melty Blood maps have all listed Type-Moon as artist already, so yeah, for the sake of the community. I suppose Type-Moon isn't exactly wrong either since the album is published under their name. Sigh.

Alace

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Alace 2010-09-03T12:51:31+00:00

back to WIP

Dyi_old

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Dyi_old 2010-09-03T12:53:58+00:00

俺很忙啊= =

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-09-03T18:24:08+00:00

!!@@!@!@!@

ZHSteven

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ZHSteven 2010-09-15T17:25:49+00:00

HI~XD
这堆绿线看着我头大。。。lol~
normal:
[00:23:681] - (4) 1gird left and 2 grid down(1),(2) same
[00:53:768] - (7) 1 grid down and 1grid left
[00:54:139] - (1) 移动到[00:54:511]
hitsound mod~

SPOILER

其实我有点不明白为什么有了costom 的clap，中间还出现原始的。。听着很别扭。。
[00:07:337] - (2)这clap去掉好点。。或者可以变成whis?
[00:13:280] - (3)^
[00:19:223] - (3)^
[00:25:167] - (3)^
[00:54:882] - (2)^
[01:00:826] - (3)^
[01:06:769] - (3)^
[00:10:309] - (2)加个whis好点吧~~
[00:22:195] - (2)^
[00:57:854] - (2)^
[01:09:740] - (2)^
[00:16:252] - (1)这里结尾whis去掉
[00:28:565] - (1)^

[01:02:683] - [01:05:654](2),(5)和(3),(6)的结尾处clap(custom)~

精力不足了。。hard 和insane都不是我能玩的东西。。无力。。

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-16T11:11:00+00:00

Maybe source is Melty Blood.. Isn't it?

I remember I heard this song when I play MBAC.

nice song, star.

Faust

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Faust 2010-09-16T11:16:47+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
Maybe source is Melty Blood.. Isn't it?

I remember I heard this song when I play MBAC.

nice song, star.

Yes, which is exactly why I made sure I mentioned it in my post on the previous page.

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T05:18:48+00:00

ZHSteven wrote:
HI~XD
这堆绿线看着我头大。。。lol~
normal:
[00:23:681] - (4) 1gird left and 2 grid down(1),(2) same
[00:53:768] - (7) 1 grid down and 1grid left
[00:54:139] - (1) 移动到[00:54:511]
hitsound mod~
SPOILER
其实我有点不明白为什么有了costom 的clap，中间还出现原始的。。听着很别扭。。
[00:07:337] - (2)这clap去掉好点。。或者可以变成whis?
[00:13:280] - (3)^
[00:19:223] - (3)^
[00:25:167] - (3)^
[00:54:882] - (2)^
[01:00:826] - (3)^
[01:06:769] - (3)^
[00:10:309] - (2)加个whis好点吧~~
[00:22:195] - (2)^
[00:57:854] - (2)^
[01:09:740] - (2)^
[00:16:252] - (1)这里结尾whis去掉
[00:28:565] - (1)^

[01:02:683] - [01:05:654](2),(5)和(3),(6)的结尾处clap(custom)~
精力不足了。。hard 和insane都不是我能玩的东西。。无力。。

done.thanks a lot.

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T05:22:33+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
Maybe source is Melty Blood.. Isn't it?

I remember I heard this song when I play MBAC.

nice song, star.

done. thanks~

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T05:28:21+00:00

Faust wrote:
[Shalon] wrote:
Maybe source is Melty Blood.. Isn't it?

I remember I heard this song when I play MBAC.

nice song, star.
Yes, which is exactly why I made sure I mentioned it in my post on the previous page.

thanks very much.

but i don't know how to change it, would you give me a specifically changes?

sorry for my poor english.

Faust

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Faust 2010-09-17T05:57:06+00:00

Well when you go into Editor, press F4, you can type in the correct source and artist there. Remember to do the same for all Difficulties, and then do a full-submit.

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T06:03:56+00:00

Faust wrote:
Well when you go into Editor, press F4, you can type in the correct source and artist there. Remember to do the same for all Difficulties, and then do a full-submit.

I mean, What should I fill in?

like this------->>

Faust

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Faust 2010-09-17T06:04:36+00:00

Dr_dy wrote:
Faust wrote:
Well when you go into Editor, press F4, you can type in the correct source and artist there. Remember to do the same for all Difficulties, and then do a full-submit.
I mean, What should I fill in?

like this------->>

Yup, like that.

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T06:08:04+00:00

Faust wrote:
Yup, like that.

That's all? Thanks a lot~

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-09-17T07:02:16+00:00

我晚了一天才mod, 對不起

General

- 獵奇BPM神準啊

~~Easy~~ Normal

- 檢查Previewpoint

00:07:708 (3) - 明顯spacing
00:32:967 (4) - slidertick多的..
00:34:824 (5) - slider中間那點上移1~2 grid
00:36:310 (1) - ^
00:41:139 (2) - 這裡明顯osu的whistle輸了給音樂...我覺得拿掉whistle還沒那麼違和
00:55:997 (4) - 上+左移1 grid?
01:03:426 (3) - 結尾clap
01:14:569 (1) - 這裡spinner的結尾音量降低...

Hard

- 最好AR能減1

01:02:683 (1,2,3) - 間距不一
01:14:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段給我感覺很特別..沒有像要完結試試(3)前移1/2拍

Insane
[list:1db2f]00:01:022 (3) - 加1/2拍長度? 現在感覺那位置太空虛...

大概沒什麼其他可以說的..
不過有一點很好奇..哪些部份是你自己做的?

Last edited by Pokie 2010-09-18T07:28:30+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

jhsd1991

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jhsd1991 2010-09-17T08:36:13+00:00

=3- 各种飘过

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-09-17T12:01:20+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
有hitcircle的话，需要hitcircleoverlay和approachcircle两张图，不想做的话可以去别的皮肤里扒

[Normal]
按照难度来讲，建议大一号圆，不过这个间距下，美观效果可能差了点（note间恰好有一点遮挡。。）。自己考虑吧。。。
OA-1。纯粹为降星。
00:48:196 (1) - 折返处whistle?

[Hard]
00:29:067 (3,1) - 虽然有new combo了，但还是建议spacing，另外12345都叠一起或许也可以考虑换个方法（2&3换个slider延伸出去？）.
00:45:410 (2) - 这个音建议提前1/2放置，听听看。
01:03:797 (6) - 消whistle.
01:09:740 (6) - ^

[Insane]
00:05:480 (3) - 后移1/2。或者在那空位上加个音。
00:34:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉没什么意义。这一堆。
00:40:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同。
00:50:796 (1) - 从这里开始在两点间往返了多次。或许稍微把位置做偏移一点？

已经不错了。

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-17T14:18:30+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
有hitcircle的话，需要hitcircleoverlay和approachcircle两张图，不想做的话可以去别的皮肤里扒 approachcircle等等再说，有时间自己P个……

[Normal]
按照难度来讲，建议大一号圆，不过这个间距下，美观效果可能差了点（note间恰好有一点遮挡。。）。自己考虑吧。。。
OA-1。纯粹为降星。大了一号，不过还是3星OMG……
00:48:196 (1) - 折返处whistle? done.

[Hard]
00:29:067 (3,1) - 虽然有new combo了，但还是建议spacing，另外12345都叠一起或许也可以考虑换个方法（2&3换个slider延伸出去？）. done.
00:45:410 (2) - 这个音建议提前1/2放置，听听看。 GOOD JOB!!!
01:03:797 (6) - 消whistle. done.
01:09:740 (6) - ^ done.

[Insane]
00:05:480 (3) - 后移1/2。或者在那空位上加个音。 no change
00:34:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉没什么意义。这一堆。 done.
00:40:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同。 done.
00:50:796 (1) - 从这里开始在两点间往返了多次。或许稍微把位置做偏移一点？ done.

已经不错了。

Ixen_old

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Ixen_old 2010-09-17T14:33:53+00:00

< <

[Shalon]

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[Shalon] 2010-09-18T04:52:10+00:00

Done

Download: Type-Moon - Severe Person (Dr_dy) [[Shalon]'s taiko].osu

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-18T13:56:51+00:00

Pokie wrote:
我晚了一天才mod, 對不起木有關係啦< <

General
- 獵奇BPM神準啊
機測出如此詭異的數值,當時我也以為有問題,可是也沒找出什麽來...

~~Easy~~ Normal
- 檢查Previewpoint
goodjob~
00:07:708 (3) - 明顯spacing 小白一下:spacing是啥?
00:32:967 (4) - slidertick多的.. 原來不是這樣啊,osu更新之後,我一修改map,自動就變成這樣了...前面需要slidertick音效,改也不是,不改也不是...
00:34:824 (5) - slider中間那點上移1~2 grid goodjob~
00:36:310 (1) - ^ grid goodjob~
00:41:139 (2) - 這裡明顯osu的whistle輸了給音樂...我覺得拿掉whistle還沒那麼違和 done.
00:55:997 (4) - 上+左移1 grid? grid goodjob~
01:03:426 (3) - 結尾clap done.
01:14:569 (1) - 這裡spinner的結尾音量降低... grid goodjob~

Hard
- 最好AR能減1
done.
01:02:683 (1,2,3) - 間距不一 done.
01:14:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這段給我感覺很特別..沒有像要完結試試(3)前移1/2拍 grid goodjob!!!

Insane
[list:ba4eb]00:01:022 (3) - 加1/2拍長度? 現在感覺那位置太空虛... done.加了四分之一.

大概沒什麼其他可以說的..
不過有一點很好奇..哪些部份是你自己做的?

SPOILER

這個問題嘛...我說過觸卡這次只是掛名,我做了大約超過90%...雖然之前我和觸卡合作的map的慣例是:我負責hard以下難度,觸卡負責hard以上難度...

Deye

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Deye 2010-09-18T14:15:39+00:00

[Shalon] wrote:
Done

Although I am not play taiko, but still thank you for your taiko diff~:)

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-09-18T20:45:27+00:00

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/26647

1-2 2-3 間距
你移動(3)就很容易理解我說的spacing問題了..

SPOILER

...了解

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-10-05T11:53:12+00:00

[taiko]
nice.

[insane]
0:58:783 (5) left 1 grid
1:03:611 (7,8,9) left 1 grid
1:06:397 (4) left a bit
1:13:640 (11) down 1 grid
nice arrangement~

[hard]
no error found, but the spacing may not be consistent enough.

star~

Deye

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Deye 2010-10-06T04:59:18+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[taiko]
nice.

[insane]
0:58:783 (5) left 1 grid
1:03:611 (7,8,9) left 1 grid
1:06:397 (4) left a bit
1:13:640 (11) down 1 grid
nice arrangement~

[hard]
no error found, but the spacing may not be consistent enough.

star~

done.

Thank you for the positive

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-11-10T04:33:48+00:00

[General]:

皮肤缺失: hitcircleoverlay.png approchcircle.png
audio lean-in: 2s
slidertick我记得不能静音了已经

[Hard]:

AR +1

重复好多估计裁歌就是因为这个吧太短了...
hitsounds不错 star~

Deye

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Deye 2010-11-11T11:39:14+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:
皮肤缺失: hitcircleoverlay.png approchcircle.png
audio lean-in: 2s
slidertick我记得不能静音了已经
[Hard]:
AR +1
重复好多估计裁歌就是因为这个吧太短了...
hitsounds不错 star~

done.
不是我裁歌,而是我得到的音乐文件原本就是这个样子.....
slidertick有声音呀?
thx~

Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-11-11T13:05:29+00:00

~STAR~

Alace

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Alace 2010-11-26T10:07:04+00:00

BPM:161.50
offset:295

Deye

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Deye 2010-11-26T14:42:00+00:00

Alace wrote:
BPM:161.50
offset:295

now done.
thx very much~:P

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xierbaliti 2010-11-29T08:10:03+00:00

我有罪居然忘记了 <(_ _)>

:<这timing可能大概还是不对吧我打着全是100 D: (好吧我自重

-Overall-
统一一下太鼓和I难度的Lead-in

-taiko-
I find some unsnaped notes ._.
HP+1?
00:01:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - crazy D:

-Insane-
从player的角度看
00:08:839 (12) - 00:10:325 (6) - 00:14:784 (14) - etc. -类似这样的换成clap? whistle有点违和
00:56:115 (10) - 移到00:56:301? 或者干脆去掉这打着不舒服 :<
00:56:858 (2) - 这放3连不太舒服放到后面的00:57:044去做3连?

good!

Deye

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Deye 2010-11-29T10:36:57+00:00

xierbaliti wrote:
我有罪居然忘记了 <(_ _)>

:<这timing可能大概还是不对吧我打着全是100 D: (好吧我自重这个...是快了还是慢了?我推后了5ms,不合适我再改.
-Overall-
统一一下太鼓和I难度的Lead-in

-taiko-
I find some unsnaped notes ._.
HP+1?
00:01:022 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - crazy D: 这个没有动< <
-Insane-
从player的角度看
00:08:839 (12) - 00:10:325 (6) - 00:14:784 (14) - etc. -类似这样的换成clap? whistle有点违和这个没有动< <
00:56:115 (10) - 移到00:56:301? 或者干脆去掉这打着不舒服 :<
00:56:858 (2) - 这放3连不太舒服放到后面的00:57:044去做3连?

good!