YuNa - Secret Game

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maal
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Teras

Emaal wrote:

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Xgor
[All difficulties]
Add Hijiri Tezuka to tags.


[All difficulties (Exept Selee's)]
I think it would be great if you used the hitsounds that Selee used in his/herdifficulty in all difficulties.

[Selee's Beginner]
Lacks Selee in tags (I know it's the difficulty name but it should be in as it's in the other difficulties)

[roflninja's Normal]
Lacks roflninja in tags (I know it's the difficulty name but it should be in as it's in the other difficulties)

[OB's Trump Card]
00:18:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just keep to one spacing here, this part feels has unfitting spacing and is very hard to follow for no reason
00:51:819 (3,4) - No, just no. don't make the spacing larger to a rhythmically tricky part like this. It just don't work.
Ahh ugh, please just disance snap everything. The only part that I see where different spacing worked on this difficulity was on 01:40:199 (1,2,3). Everything else felt just wrong.
00:53:297 (2,3) - Isn't these supposed to be 1/2 later on the timeline, this sounds very odd right now.
01:38:931 (8,9) - ^


00:39:776 (2) - Make this slider straight please.
00:46:114 (1) - Move one grid up so it's aligned and some grids to the right so it's distance snapped correctly (Also move the beat's after so it's correctly spaced there too)

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6)- Kinda looks like you should space this a bit further away from (5)
00:48:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I somewhat get what everything else is following but this stream is just out of place of the song imo. (Atleast (2) You should at least remove that one)
00:56:995 (5) - I think you should move this 1/4 backwards on the time line and make it 1/4 longer to fit the singing.
01:04:495 (1) - Pretty long spinner for being a hard difficulty (I suggest you end it at 01:06:396 (1) or something and map the parts that come after it)
01:33:227 (6) - Space this please, the jump is out of place
01:34:178 (1) - Please spacing this closer to the rest, kinda breaks the flow with two unfitting mini-jumps.

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change.

[Nekoo's Horror]
I would say it would be more fitting if you changed the 0,5x spacing to 0,75x

So.. some things that needs to be looked over but I give you a star at least.
*star*
Topic Starter
Teras

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
Add Hijiri Tezuka to tags.


[All difficulties (Exept Selee's)]
I think it would be great if you used the hitsounds that Selee used in his/herdifficulty in all difficulties.
Can be straight and say that I don't like these hitsounds when I tried them in my diff. I won't use 'em for my diff.



[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6)- Kinda looks like you should space this a bit further away from (5) Yep
00:48:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I somewhat get what everything else is following but this stream is just out of place of the song imo. (Atleast (2) You should at least remove that one) This stream sounds perfectly fine to me, won't do anything to this.
00:56:995 (5) - I think you should move this 1/4 backwards on the time line and make it 1/4 longer to fit the singing. Yep
01:04:495 (1) - Pretty long spinner for being a hard difficulty (I suggest you end it at 01:06:396 (1) or something and map the parts that come after it) Will leave it as it is.
01:33:227 (6) - Space this please, the jump is out of place Fixed
01:34:178 (1) - Please spacing this closer to the rest, kinda breaks the flow with two unfitting mini-jumps. Fixed.

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change. Wat
Ty
Xgor

Teras wrote:

Xgor wrote:

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change. Wat
Ty
FFFF I meant that one for [OB's Trump Card]
Hijiri Tezuka

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
[OB's Trump Card]
00:18:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just keep to one spacing here, this part feels has unfitting spacing and is very hard to follow for no reason
00:51:819 (3,4) - No, just no. don't make the spacing larger to a rhythmically tricky part like this. It just don't work.
Ahh ugh, please just disance snap everything. The only part that I see where different spacing worked on this difficulity was on 01:40:199 (1,2,3). Everything else felt just wrong.
00:53:297 (2,3) - Isn't these supposed to be 1/2 later on the timeline, this sounds very odd right now.
01:38:931 (8,9) - ^


00:39:776 (2) - Make this slider straight please.
00:46:114 (1) - Move one grid up so it's aligned and some grids to the right so it's distance snapped correctly (Also move the beat's after so it's correctly spaced there too)
I would fix all that, but Teras forgot to update my map to the most recent one that I did ;___;

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [Hijiri's Secret Game].osu
jerkaman
really great work every one ;)
Hijiri Tezuka
Live damnit!
Topic Starter
Teras

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Live damnit!
:[
Saten
Selee's Beginner
01:34:283 (2) - remove
01:34:707 (1) - ^
01:35:128 (1) - made this slider super symmetric \:D/
216,336,95128,6,0,C|180:248|64:184|176:128|256:16|336:128|448:184|332:248|296:336,1,1000,2|0

01:40:199 (1) - place this right in the middle
01:41:466 (2,3) - 3 grids left
Edit: 01:35:128 (1) - you might wanna move it one grid down :P

roflninja's Normal
00:57:946 (2) - 1 right and 1 up (Grid level 4)

Hijiri's Secret Game
I guess that you'll remap it :P

Killer Queen
01:14:002 (6,7,1,2,3) - stack properly~

Nekoo's Horror
00:42:734 (1) - stack with previous (6)


:>>>
Selee
Seems my earlier maps can't satisfy my own taste now...could you remove my diff?

sorry...sigh...
Topic Starter
Teras

Selee wrote:

Seems my earlier maps can't satisfy my own taste now...could you remove my diff?

sorry...sigh...
Will do
Chiruno
nice map! :)
Mythol
Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[General]
2 red combo colors, change one~
Inconsistent countdown in Nekoo, but I suggest removing countdown for all diffs.

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><

[Hijiri]
Circle size +1..
00:23:086 (2) - Spacing..
00:23:931 (4) - ^
00:52:030 (4) - NC here, and remove NC on 00:52:664 (1), to help read better
00:53:403 (2) - NC, if you used ^
00:57:523 (5,6,7,8) - Use consistent spacing (x0.9)
01:03:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Must use consistent spacing, very hard to read otherwise.
01:09:142 (4) - Spacing
01:11:889 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:537 (4,5) - ^
01:18:650 (3,4) - ^
01:30:692 (7,8) - ^
01:33:227 (4) - ^
01:37:664 (6) - ^
01:38:931 (8,1) - 8 should start 01:39:142, and 1 should start 01:39:354.
Many spacing issues.. orz

[Killer Queen]
OD -1

[Nekoo]
OD -1
Maybe drain +1..
01:05:551 (4) - NC?
Many finishes missing~
00:19:072 (1) - Finish
00:25:410 (1) - Finish on end
00:39:354 (1) - Finish
00:52:875 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:59:635 (2) - ^
01:01:326 (7) - ^
01:07:875 (1) - Finish on end
01:14:847 (1) - Finish
01:21:607 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:28:368 (1) - Finish

I think mapset still needs some work~
Topic Starter
Teras

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[General]
2 red combo colors, change one~
Inconsistent countdown in Nekoo, but I suggest removing countdown for all diffs.

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><

[Hijiri]
Circle size +1..
00:23:086 (2) - Spacing..
00:23:931 (4) - ^
00:52:030 (4) - NC here, and remove NC on 00:52:664 (1), to help read better
00:53:403 (2) - NC, if you used ^
00:57:523 (5,6,7,8) - Use consistent spacing (x0.9)
01:03:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Must use consistent spacing, very hard to read otherwise.
01:09:142 (4) - Spacing
01:11:889 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:537 (4,5) - ^
01:18:650 (3,4) - ^
01:30:692 (7,8) - ^
01:33:227 (4) - ^
01:37:664 (6) - ^
01:38:931 (8,1) - 8 should start 01:39:142, and 1 should start 01:39:354.
Many spacing issues.. orz

[Killer Queen]
OD -1

[Nekoo]
OD -1
Maybe drain +1..
01:05:551 (4) - NC?
Many finishes missing~
00:19:072 (1) - Finish
00:25:410 (1) - Finish on end
00:39:354 (1) - Finish
00:52:875 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:59:635 (2) - ^
01:01:326 (7) - ^
01:07:875 (1) - Finish on end
01:14:847 (1) - Finish
01:21:607 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:28:368 (1) - Finish

I think mapset still needs some work~
Thanks for the mod, I'll fix what needs ti be fixed once I get my osu working again :-)
roflninja

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><
All done!

Download: YuNa - Secret Game (Teras) [roflninja's Normal].osu
wmfchris
killer queen : D

source: SecretGame -KILLER QUEEN-

- custome hitsound unused in the map, delete them and full submit

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6,7) - putting 1/4 duplets like this doesn't look so good. You can consider stacking them together or reduce their spacing, you applied both of them before.
00:40:833 (6) - remove finish at the end? There's no accent in the music.
00:52:347 (4) - remove finish, having finish on (3) is enough for the 3/4 beating.
01:09:142 (3) - spacing which you can simply fix by down 1 grid

[Secret Game]
00:20:551 (4,5,6,7) - seriously they can be put in a more regular shape...
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - misleading spacing
00:53:403 (2,3) - pretty much out of vocal...
01:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't see the reason to make the spacing gradually smaller...with heeavier beats gradually larger spacing makes more sense

Assuming this is a normal+ - hard diff you should really apply unique spacing for every combo.

In overall the 2 diffs mentioned above may need some improvements, but some good ideas are shown in other diffs.
Topic Starter
Teras

wmfchris wrote:

killer queen : D

source: SecretGame -KILLER QUEEN-

- custome hitsound unused in the map, delete them and full submit

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6,7) - putting 1/4 duplets like this doesn't look so good. You can consider stacking them together or reduce their spacing, you applied both of them before.
00:40:833 (6) - remove finish at the end? There's no accent in the music.
00:52:347 (4) - remove finish, having finish on (3) is enough for the 3/4 beating.
01:09:142 (3) - spacing which you can simply fix by down 1 grid

[Secret Game]
00:20:551 (4,5,6,7) - seriously they can be put in a more regular shape...
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - misleading spacing
00:53:403 (2,3) - pretty much out of vocal...
01:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't see the reason to make the spacing gradually smaller...with heeavier beats gradually larger spacing makes more sense

Assuming this is a normal+ - hard diff you should really apply unique spacing for every combo.

In overall the 2 diffs mentioned above may need some improvements, but some good ideas are shown in other diffs.
Thanks for the mod, and sure they do. Although I want to keep the style i mapped this the same, considering how it have been pending for about 2 years now :-) I will overlook what you said though and fix what I think should be fixed
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