Qrool wrote:

Terasss! star~

banvi wrote:

Selee's
ok
roflninja's
00:18:227 (1) remove new combo? or add finish (1,2)
OB's
00:16:748 (3,4) spacing
00:30:058 (2) 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
00:37:664 (4) 1 grid up?
00:38:931 (6) 2 grid right?
00:52:452 (5,1,2) spacing
00:54:354 (6,7) spacing a bit close
01:03:438 (2) 1 grid down?
01:10:199 (3) 1 grid down?
01:14:635 (1) 2 grid right?
01:18:227 (2,3) 1 grid up?
01:20:762 (8) 1 grid down?
01:22:664 (3) 1 grid right?
01:24:988 (1,2) 1 grid up?
01:27:100 (5) ^
01:30:481 (5) 4 grid right & 1 grid up?
Hard
00:32:171 (8) 1 grid down?
00:38:720 (5,6) 1 grid up?
01:10:410 (6,7,8,9) 1 grid up
01:24:776 (1) 1 grid right?
Lucifer
00:13:790 (4) 1 grid left
00:53:509 (1) remove new combo?
00:54:776 (1) ^
01:33:650 (1) ^
01:34:706 (3) new combo?
01:36:185 (1) remove new combo?
01:40:304 (1,2,3) no blue tick. Slide the white tick this previous
01:41:889 (n) I think better add note...
Nekoo's
00:20:762 (7) new combo?
00:22:030 (11) 1 grid left?
00:40:621 (n) add note?
01:05:551 (4) new combo?
01:07:452 (6) ^
01:21:185 (3) No whistle & clap ;_;

overal nicemap!

banvi wrote:

Nekoo's
00:20:762 (7) new combo? No
00:22:030 (11) 1 grid left? Fixed
00:40:621 (n) add note? Fixed
01:05:551 (4) new combo? I honestly can't see any reason to put a new combo here.
01:07:452 (6) ^ ^
01:21:185 (3) No whistle & clap ;_; Removed the clap.

[Lucifer]
Why does this diff have its own colors? I'd make all the diffs have the same.
01:40:304 (1,2,3) - move these notes back 1 tick.
Honestly...I think this diff is overmapped...I'd reccommned deleting it.

Lucifer
00:13:790 (4) 1 grid left
00:53:509 (1) remove new combo?
00:54:776 (1) ^
01:33:650 (1) ^
01:34:706 (3) new combo?
01:36:185 (1) remove new combo?
01:40:304 (1,2,3) no blue tick. Slide the white tick this previous
01:41:889 (n) I think better add note...

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Why are there brackets [] in the tags? Nekoo's name. Though I haven't cared to fix what i did wrong when I added it.



Hard

00:12:311 (1,2,3) - Make spacing equal?? (Lag is stopping me from determining a flow issue at the moment) Spacing is strange here. Fixed it.

00:15:692 (1,2,3) - Also isn't the same lengths if that is what you were going for. ^

00:38:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't sound right to me. 00:38:403 (3) - is an empty note and I think 00:38:720 (5) - needs to go here 00:38:826 - and 00:38:931 (6) - should go 00:39:142 - . Make those changes so that the beat looks like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22196

Keep in mind that 00:38:086 (1) - is on a different beat pattern than the pattern the rest of the combo is trying to replicate. The true start to that pattern is here 00:37:981 - The current I have looks better to me.

00:55:410 (7) - Line this up with note 6 by moving it right 1 unit? Done.

01:20:973 (8) - Make this a part of the combo after it. Aight.



Very well made. Star

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
01:34:178 (1) - sounds odd on blue tick, move to white tick Sounds fine to me.
*star*

James2250 wrote:

Trump Card: Not wanting to be rude, but did you look at AIMod and just nitpicked from there?
I downloaded this from the one you posted and it says update...does that mean it hasn't been added yet? (anyway will mod from one you posted)
00:19:072 (2,3) - spacing Fixed to an extent
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - ^ No
00:24:142 (5,6,7) - ^ No
00:36:396 (7) - new combo Done
00:51:502 (2,3,4) - spacing It's ok....
00:56:255 (2,3) - ^ Fixed to an extent...
01:01:114 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:08:509 (2,3,4) - spacing It's ok....
Ok I would suggest you go through the map again with distance snap and check AIMod for all spacing mistakes (there are more I just didn't list them all) So you're saying that all you did was just look at AIMod -.-
Last timing section isn't doing anything Deleted

Saten-san wrote:

Hi |

You got Shana's tag wrong, it should be w/o any space~

Star~

SPOILER

Emaal wrote:

Ranked.

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
Add Hijiri Tezuka to tags.

[All difficulties (Exept Selee's)]
I think it would be great if you used the hitsounds that Selee used in his/herdifficulty in all difficulties.
Can be straight and say that I don't like these hitsounds when I tried them in my diff. I won't use 'em for my diff.



[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6)- Kinda looks like you should space this a bit further away from (5) Yep
00:48:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I somewhat get what everything else is following but this stream is just out of place of the song imo. (Atleast (2) You should at least remove that one) This stream sounds perfectly fine to me, won't do anything to this.
00:56:995 (5) - I think you should move this 1/4 backwards on the time line and make it 1/4 longer to fit the singing. Yep
01:04:495 (1) - Pretty long spinner for being a hard difficulty (I suggest you end it at 01:06:396 (1) or something and map the parts that come after it) Will leave it as it is.
01:33:227 (6) - Space this please, the jump is out of place Fixed
01:34:178 (1) - Please spacing this closer to the rest, kinda breaks the flow with two unfitting mini-jumps. Fixed.

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change. Wat

Teras wrote:

Xgor wrote:

Also rename this difficulty name due to name change. Wat

Ty

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
[OB's Trump Card]
00:18:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just keep to one spacing here, this part feels has unfitting spacing and is very hard to follow for no reason
00:51:819 (3,4) - No, just no. don't make the spacing larger to a rhythmically tricky part like this. It just don't work.
Ahh ugh, please just disance snap everything. The only part that I see where different spacing worked on this difficulity was on 01:40:199 (1,2,3). Everything else felt just wrong.
00:53:297 (2,3) - Isn't these supposed to be 1/2 later on the timeline, this sounds very odd right now.
01:38:931 (8,9) - ^

00:39:776 (2) - Make this slider straight please.
00:46:114 (1) - Move one grid up so it's aligned and some grids to the right so it's distance snapped correctly (Also move the beat's after so it's correctly spaced there too)

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Live damnit!

216,336,95128,6,0,C|180:248|64:184|176:128|256:16|336:128|448:184|332:248|296:336,1,1000,2|0

SPOILER

Selee wrote:

Seems my earlier maps can't satisfy my own taste now...could you remove my diff?

sorry...sigh...

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[General]
2 red combo colors, change one~
Inconsistent countdown in Nekoo, but I suggest removing countdown for all diffs.

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><

[Hijiri]
Circle size +1..
00:23:086 (2) - Spacing..
00:23:931 (4) - ^
00:52:030 (4) - NC here, and remove NC on 00:52:664 (1), to help read better
00:53:403 (2) - NC, if you used ^
00:57:523 (5,6,7,8) - Use consistent spacing (x0.9)
01:03:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Must use consistent spacing, very hard to read otherwise.
01:09:142 (4) - Spacing
01:11:889 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:537 (4,5) - ^
01:18:650 (3,4) - ^
01:30:692 (7,8) - ^
01:33:227 (4) - ^
01:37:664 (6) - ^
01:38:931 (8,1) - 8 should start 01:39:142, and 1 should start 01:39:354.
Many spacing issues.. orz

[Killer Queen]
OD -1

[Nekoo]
OD -1
Maybe drain +1..
01:05:551 (4) - NC?
Many finishes missing~
00:19:072 (1) - Finish
00:25:410 (1) - Finish on end
00:39:354 (1) - Finish
00:52:875 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:59:635 (2) - ^
01:01:326 (7) - ^
01:07:875 (1) - Finish on end
01:14:847 (1) - Finish
01:21:607 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:28:368 (1) - Finish

I think mapset still needs some work~

Mythol wrote:

Request from queue~
Very old map :O
Sorry for late x.x

[Normal]
AR +1?
00:24:142 (1,2,3) - I think unstacking is easier to read, like 01:40:199 (1,2,3)
01:34:706 (1) - How about 1/1 repeat slider instead?

01:41:466 (4) - Clap on start?
Very linear... but nothing wrong ><

wmfchris wrote:

killer queen : D

source: SecretGame -KILLER QUEEN-

- custome hitsound unused in the map, delete them and full submit

[Killer Queen]
00:37:452 (6,7) - putting 1/4 duplets like this doesn't look so good. You can consider stacking them together or reduce their spacing, you applied both of them before.
00:40:833 (6) - remove finish at the end? There's no accent in the music.
00:52:347 (4) - remove finish, having finish on (3) is enough for the 3/4 beating.
01:09:142 (3) - spacing which you can simply fix by down 1 grid

[Secret Game]
00:20:551 (4,5,6,7) - seriously they can be put in a more regular shape...
00:22:452 (1,2,3) - misleading spacing
00:53:403 (2,3) - pretty much out of vocal...
01:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't see the reason to make the spacing gradually smaller...with heeavier beats gradually larger spacing makes more sense

Assuming this is a normal+ - hard diff you should really apply unique spacing for every combo.

In overall the 2 diffs mentioned above may need some improvements, but some good ideas are shown in other diffs.