orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- BPM 129
- Offset 8394
- You need an Easy diff, Your Normal is a bit too hard for newb.
- Disable Countdown
- Your hitsound is a bit weird. xd

[Norma]
00:47:197 (4) - hidden note. [I meant about you to fix it to isn't that hidden or make it look cleaner then that.]

[Hard]
00:08:835 (4) - spacing
00:22:320 (1) - spacing
00:50:685 (5) - hidden note

S i R i R u wrote:

Fisrt !

offset ใช้อันแรกพอ ที่เหลือใช้เป็น Gleen ไม่ต้องไปแดงมันหมด =w="

ชื่อตัวเอง ไมต้องใส่ ใน TAG มันใส่เฉพาะ กรณี ไป Guest Dif กับคนอื่น

BG Colors.

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* normal 4.3 แบบนี้ คาดว่าโดนสั่งทำ Easy แน่ๆเลย =w=

Normal

*ReSnap All Note

• 00:28:830 (6) - New Combo
  00:31:504 (1) - เลื่อนมา 00:31:620
  01:13:238 (5) - เลื่อนมา 01:13:006 แล้วไว้บนสี่ เข้ากว่านะ
  01:13:703 (7) - โน๊ตตรงนี้ ละ เลื่อน Spin ไปนิดดีกว่า

Hard

*ReSnap All Note

• 00:07:904 - เพิ่มโน๊ตตรงนี้ บน 1 น่าจะเข้ากับจังหวะกว่านิด + finish ละ เอา new Combo 1 เดิมออก
  00:08:835 (4) - ตัดออก เข้ากว่านะ
  00:09:997 (8) - เสียง ดังตรงนี้ คิดว่าไม่เข้านะ เอา gleen ออก ใช้เสียงปกติ ดีกว่า
  00:09:300 (6) - whistle
  
  แบบเสียง Classic ไปก่อน ถ้ายังทำเสียงไม่ค่อยคุ้น เช่น แบบด้านบน ขาวแรก เริ่มด้วย Finishd
  ต่อมา เสียงที่ใช้เป็นจังหวะของหมอ เว้น ขาวไป 1 ละ ใส่ อีก ในตัวต่อมา
  
  ประมาณ (w = ขาว)
  
  w(finish) w(เสียงจังหวะ) w(ว่าง) w (เสียงจังหวะ) w(ว่าง)
  
  00:17:902 (9) - new combo
  00:22:669 (1) - ลบ เสียง
  00:22:785 (2) - เพิ่มโน๊ต
  00:24:994 (1) - new combo
  00:25:110 (1) - ลบ new combo
  00:26:854 (6,1) - ^ แบบด้านบน
  00:28:597 (6,1) - ^
  00:36:037 (6,1) - ^
  00:38:130 (9,1) - ^
  00:39:990 (9,1) - ^
  00:41:850 (9,1) - ^
  00:43:943 (9,1) - ^
  01:01:380 (11,1) - ^
  01:02:310 (5) - new combo ?
  01:03:473 (10,1) - แบบ สตไล์บนๆ
  01:05:100 (7,1) - ^
  01:06:844 (1) - ลบ new combo มาใส่ตรงนี้น่าจะดีกว่า 01:07:193 (3)
  01:20:678 (1) - จัดจุดจบให้ตรงจังหวะใหม่ -w-

แบบเสียง Classic ไปก่อน ถ้ายังทำเสียงไม่ค่อยคุ้น เช่น แบบด้านบน ขาวแรก เริ่มด้วย Finishd
ต่อมา เสียงที่ใช้เป็นจังหวะของหมอ เว้น ขาวไป 1 ละ ใส่ อีก ในตัวต่อมา

ประมาณ (w = ขาว)

w(finish) w(เสียงจังหวะ) w(ว่าง) w (เสียงจังหวะ) w(ว่าง)

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 487

orioncomet wrote:

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 487

It's the same with my offset xd

Offset: 487
Add an Easy diff.


~Normal~
00:08:394 (1,2) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
00:53:705 - delete timing section
00:54:440 - start Kiai here

~Hard~
00:22:231 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
00:33:045 (2) - move 1/4 left
00:40:021 (1) - ^
00:41:998 (2,3) - move 1/4 right
00:43:975 (1,2) - move 1/4 left
00:46:068 (4) - ^
00:49:789 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
00:50:487 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:53:705 - delete timing section
00:54:440 - start Kiai here
00:56:766 (5) - move 1/4 left
00:58:626 (6) - 1/4 snaps
01:05:952 (6) - delete
01:06:184 (8) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:20:719 (1) - end on 01:24:207

Easy finished!

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:12:812 (1) - too close to (4)
00:16:998 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
00:57:696 (1,2,3) - wrong spacings
01:06:533 (3,4) - ^
01:13:975 (1,1,2) - delete
01:14:207 - add note
01:14:440 - ^
01:14:673 - start spinner here
01:16:766 - end spinner here

~Normal~
00:08:393 (1) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
00:31:649 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
00:33:742 (6) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
01:13:975 (1,1,2,3,4) - place like this
[attachment=0:f2296]0001.jpg[/attachment:f2296]

~Hard~
00:54:905 (5) - move 1/4 left
01:01:766 - add note
01:02:347 (6) - move 1/4 left
01:12:347 (4) - move left & up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:17:347 (2,3) - move 1/4 right


No Star until every diffs look better.

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo
Sorry for the wait

[General]
- Please remove the audio from the video, it's already small enough, but removing it would make the file even smaller and that's even better
^ i can't do this ;w; (don't know how to work with that)

[Easy]
00:14:905 (4) - add finish at the end?
01:19:556 (1) - change into soft hitsound just like in Hard diff?
^ fixed

[Normal]
- Star rating quite high but it plays like normal alright (maybe decrease OD by 2 and HP by 1 ?)
ู^ decrease OD by 1 and HP by 1 instead
00:30:021 (3) - I expect to follow the lyric here, try starting the slider in 00:30:254 then put a circle in 00:30:021
00:57:696 (1,2,3) - Because the previous pattern follow the lyric, this place throws me off, I suggest to delete 3 then put 2 in 00:58:626 and make it into a repeat slider
01:02:231 (4) - the only blue tick note in the diff, either add another blue tick note somewhere before this or make 01:01:882 (3) into slider that goes until 01:02:231 (4)
^ All fixed
Combo mod

SPOILER

00:08:393 (1)~00:19:091 (5) - This place combo follow the pattern of 1 set of combo for 1 stanza, you should follow this pattern for the rest of the combo in this diff for more consistency. (look in the Timing to know the stanza)

^ some of them is fix, but some i can't follow the pattern of stanza when consider about note place and playing pattern.

[Hard]
00:15:603 (1) - the sudden hitsound change to normal is not very good imo
00:23:161 (1) - idk about this it didn't follow anything, so it's kinda random >.<
00:25:021 (1) - ^
00:26:882 (1) - ^
00:34:207 (1) - start the slider in 00:33:975 and end it on 00:34:673
^ Fixed
Combo mod

SPOILER

Same as above, but make it longer. Maybe use 1 set combo for 2 stanza ?

^ same as above

Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll be better
Star

[Easy]
01:19:556 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:20:486 and silence it?
^ fixed without silence it

[Normal]
Looks fine

[Hard]
Looks fine.

1. I don't wanna mod this cuz maybe I'll map this song some times later Well, just a joke

1. 00:37:928 (T) - soft hitsound doesn't fit here, use normal so just remove this time section
2. 00:49:789 (6,1) - this spinner doesn't fit here, try this :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:19:556 (T) - this KIAI is too early, make it start at 01:20:021 (I would even remove it )

1. 00:28:859 (6) - new combo
2. 00:29:324 (1) - cancel new combo
3. 00:31:649 (1) - ^
4. 00:31:882 (2) - new combo
5. 00:33:510 (1) - cancel new combo
6. 00:33:742 (2) - new combo
7. 00:37:928 (T) - remove this time section
8. 01:04:905 (1) - let this start at 01:05:138
9. 01:10:952 (7) - new combo
10. 01:11:649 (1) - cancel new combo
11. this diff has different KIAI from [Easy]?

1. this diff has a totally different way to use soft/normal hitsounds and really not good.
2. 01:23:393 (T) - why the KIAI stopped in the middle of a spinner?

sico91212 wrote:

[hard]
00:09:789 - finish
00:10:021 (8) - no finish
00:11:649 - finsh
00:11:882 (4) - no finish
00:15:603 - no clap
00:15:835 - clap
00:18:626 - clap
00:18:859 - no clap
00:24:673 - finish?
00:25:835 - no clap
00:26:068 - clap
00:27:696 - no clap
00:27:928 - clap
00:28:393 - finish?
00:30:952 - no clap
etc...
ok, i just don't agree the way you set hitsound. But this is just suggestion plz ignore that if you don't like or you feel eird.

^ fixed

00:45:603 (1,2,3,4) - replace
^ fixed
01:10:487 (1) - sounds bad,add green line in 01:10:370 - set30%vol 01:10:603 - 40% 01:10:603 - 55%

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. I don't wanna mod this cuz maybe I'll map this song some times later Well, just a joke

XD

[Easy]:

1. 00:37:928 (T) - soft hitsound doesn't fit here, use normal so just remove this time section
2. 00:49:789 (6,1) - this spinner doesn't fit here, try this :

SPOILER

01:19:556 (T) - this KIAI is too early, make it start at 01:20:021 (I would even remove it )

[Normal]:

1. 00:28:859 (6) - new combo
2. 00:29:324 (1) - cancel new combo
3. 00:31:649 (1) - ^
4. 00:31:882 (2) - new combo
5. 00:33:510 (1) - cancel new combo
6. 00:33:742 (2) - new combo
7. 00:37:928 (T) - remove this time section
8. 01:04:905 (1) - let this start at 01:05:138
9. 01:10:952 (7) - new combo
10. 01:11:649 (1) - cancel new combo
11. this diff has different KIAI from [Easy]?

[Hard]:

1. this diff has a totally different way to use soft/normal hitsounds and really not good.
2. 01:23:393 (T) - why the KIAI stopped in the middle of a spinner?

^ All fixed
Good enough for my star.

no kudosu
star

• • Start kiai here 00:54:440

• • 01:05:138 (9) - New combo

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Easy]

• • Start kiai here 00:54:440

[Normal]

• • 01:05:138 (9) - New combo

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:48:626 (1) - I'd say a new combo here
Other than that, very nice

[Normal]
00:36:300 (3,4) - I'd put a clap at (3)'s start, and a clap at 4, keep the rhythm going through the entire combo
01:05:138 (9) - New combo here, definitely
Again, very nice

[Hard]
00:15:486 - The transition to Normal hitsounds here feels a little forced. Try removing this, or changing it to a slightly louder soft hitsound.
00:22:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section is nigh impossible to hear, and actually should probably start 1/4 earlier.
[color=#40FF00]00:23:622 - It sounds better if you place a note here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9402[/color]
00:38:154 (1,2,3) - Sounds better if the triple is (2,3,4)
00:40:479 (5) - Clap here?
Again, a very nice map.

Your map is very well made; these few things are all I can come up with. Don't give me kudosu if the only things you use are the hitsound suggestions or something.

Have a star.

Leorda wrote:

Swasdi

[File]
Your bg (72289-bakemonogatari_super.png) need to resize to 800x600 (current 600x432)
ู^
thanks for ur suggestion so i decide to change a bg
special thanks : S i R i R U

[Easy]
00:12:114 ~ 00:12:580 (x) - Feels empty
00:17:696 (3) - New combo??
00:33:975 (5) - ^
01:11:184 (4) - ^
01:20:021 (1) - Move backward to 01:19:556 and extend??

[Normal]
00:19:091 (5) - Make it curve??
01:03:742 (7) - New combo??
01:18:859 (5,6) - Stack with 4 at the of slider is not stack perfectly, stack it??

[Hard]
00:08:393 (2) - New combo??
00:17:696 (8) - ^
00:17:928 (1) - Remove new combo??
00:30:254 (7) - New combo?

Nice song
STAR

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Audio sounds really crap. Is it really 320kbps? :/
^ yes, indeed XD maybe it's TV SIZE O_o!
- Sliders are strangely ugly in Easy and Normal, and I figured it's because you use Catmull-Shaped Sliders. Use the Bezier ones, they look MUCH better
- Kiai Time should finish at 01:24:207

Easy:

Normal Mod~
00:49:789 (3,4) - Spacing. It's up close because of the slowdown, but it shouldn't be.
00:52:580 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for Easy
01:14:673 (1,1) - ^
^ spinner is long enough... so they still have a time to manage it..

Normal:
Fine.

Hard:
Fine.

TheVileOne wrote:

Termery’s diff

00:40:128 (4,5,6,7,1) – Straighten the combo by pushing these notes up with distance snap on. Note that you’ll have to redistance snap all the notes after these. thanks but no fix
.

DJPop wrote:

~termerys' staple~
00:20:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wrong spacings it's jump, so i decrease the space then
01:18:957 (2) - delete ok
01:22:793 (3,4,5) - wrong spacings ok

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:48:626 (1) - move 1/2 left (OR) delete it
00:54:440 (1,4) - add hitfinishes
01:00:021 (4) - ^
01:01:882 (2,3) - ^
01:03:277 (5) - remove hitfinish
01:03:742 (6) - add hitfinishes
01:13:045 (7) - new combo
01:14:673 (1) - add hitfinish
01:18:161 (3) - add hitfinish at last note

~Normal~
00:12:812 (2,3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:36:068 (2) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
01:14:673 (1) - add hitfinish

~Hard~
01:05:603 (4,5,6) - wrong spacings

~termerys' staple~
00:20:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - wrong spacings
01:18:957 (2) - delete
01:22:793 (3,4,5) - wrong spacings


+Star

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

termerys' staple:
00:22:807 (1) - Place new timing sections at least 1/2 behind the note when you can, not ontop of the note.
00:35:827 (2) - ^
00:37:687 (1) - ^ < ^Done
00:52:567 (1) - Delete timing section, unused. Sorry, my mistake; forgot to change the volume
01:08:959 (11) - Did u forget to re-add kiai?no, i didn't
01:19:305 (3) - Place new timing sections at least 1/2 behind the note when you can, not ontop of the note. Done
01:17:213 (2) - Spacing, idk if this is an intended anti-jump, but if not, make similar to 01:18:608 (1,2) - anti-jump >w<b
01:19:538 (4,5) - keep this 1x speed? Feels odd with .5 idk, i feel more weird if it's 1x, it's like a slow part of the song

abalee wrote:

Hard:
00:32:114 (1) - : remove clap, or shorten it to 00:32:580 then add a circle in 00:32:812

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~termery's staple~
00:20:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Fix spacing, (3,4,5) and (7,8,9) doesn't have the same spacing as (5.6.7) i fixed by change new combo instead of spacing :3
00:44:662 (7) - Shorten to red tick? It sounds weird imo. OK
01:16:748 (1,2) - Delete New Combo here and add it on (2). Also fix spacing. OK
01:19:305 (3,4) - Fix spacing, I know it's a slowdown, but the spacing makes it look a 1/4, when it's a 1/2
01:23:025 (4,5) - ^ < ^ OK

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Easy~
00:50:719 (6) - Meh, I never liked slowdowns on Easy diffs, but oh well...

~Normal~
- Feels a bit harder than just a Normal, probably because of the high amount of 1/2 streams you have...

00:31:417 (6,7) - I suggest to delete these 2 notes, either to make the map a bit more easier and because I don't think they fit at all if you're following the lyrics.
01:01:417 (1) - Fix spacing? It makes a weird stop there...

^ fix

~Hard~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty 1 tick?
^ fix

Nice map! I'm a bit worried about the audio quality, though... Better talk to a mp3 nazi to confirm? xP (!summon Ephemeral) Anyways, take a star! ^^
^thank you very much i change mp3 file XD so pls re download