Hihi~
Mod by request...
I'm a very new mapper and modder~
so just feel free to follow some of these:
red: rank issues black just suggestions
General:
1.I'd like to use lighter hitcircle colors. I think them fit the BG and this light song better.
If you feel like doing this, turn on "song setup->colours->enable cunstom colours" and change them.
2.You need source and tags for the song.
3.Stack leniency is too low to rank. At least turn it to 4. Turn on "song setup->advance".4.I suguest that you change time-in-lead to 3s since this map starts at the very beginning of the song.
5.Also I don't think this song should have a countdown time...youmay disable it.Turn on "song setup->storyboarding".
6.You'd best use "new combo" when you make a very different spacing. Examples: 00:15:405(1,2,3,4,5) Spacing is totally different for each two circles. The spacing in the same combo should be the same imo. There're too many in this map you may recheck them.7.You are not forced to follow all the song lyrics. But once you start to follow it, please keep following until one sentence is over. Don't let notes disappear suddenly in the middle of a sentence.
Hard:
00:01:342(1,2) unrankable. put circle 1 at the beginning of the slider 2? 00:05:655(4) delete this and add notes at 05:842 06:030 06:217
00:06:780(x) add note
00:07:155(x) ^
00:10:155(x) ^
00:18:967(x) ^
00:12:780(2,1) this two sliders look bad imo. I mean the shape~
00:19:530(x) add note
00:48:592(x) ^
00:48:780(x) ^
00:51:592(x) ^
00:52:155(x) ^
00:52:717(x) ^
00:52:905(1,1) you can make a jump between these two
00:53:467(2,1) ^
00:54:217(2,1) ^
00:55:342(3) remove clap at the end of the slider and add clap at the beginning.
00:55:905(5) remove clap
01:13:304(x) add note
01:15:367(1~6) newcombo 4 and 6. then you can make a jump between 3 and 4, 5 and 6, 6 and1.
01:18:929(x) add note
01:37:492(x) ^
01:38:710(5) move this to 01:38:898 then fix the spacing.
01:38:710(5) I think it doesn't sound good. You may delete this note.
Overall, not bad, needs some more work though~
Star!