1. Breezy (3.34 stars, 105 notes)
2. Calm (1.89 stars, 96 notes)

• Nonsense, you don't suck at timing at all; you're BPM is spot on.
  This timing is for the middle of the song since the beginning and end have no distinguishable beat.
  1. BPM 180 , Offset 21900

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!

• Nonsense, you don't suck at timing at all; you're BPM is spot on.
  This timing is for the middle of the song since the beginning and end have no distinguishable beat.
  1. BPM 180 , Offset 21900

Starred~!

1. I'm not very sure for the offset, but the bpm should be 180.020, I got a offset 2,940.
2. of course the not inherited in the middle of the song is useless.
3. try to get a pro-timing help.
4. remove the .osb file from the folder and do a full submit.

1. OA is a little high. -1 or -2
2. 00:07:606 (1,2,3) - feels quite strange
3. 00:11:605 (1,2,3) - maybe you should use 1/3 beat snap here?
4. 00:48:267 (8,9) - these 2 notes just covers some parts of the HP bar. you should do some changes.

1. seems fine now

Shulin wrote:

Yay a pending Dusty map ^_^

General:

-- Ahh the timing... well I got BPM: 180.00 Offset: 2,905 (much better at the end imo) ~ not confident about it. I'm not sure how you would time the beginning accurately because there's no beats.

Normal:

00:02:953 (1) - Silence?
00:04:786 (1) - Make it longer for normal?
00:45:281 (1,2) - Bit too low imo, the hit300s get cut off slightly.
01:06:612 (2,3) - Bit too high maybe?
01:09:945 (10) - End on the white tick (01:10:278) imo.
01:11:612 (1,2,3) - Awesome <3

Hard:

00:02:953 (1) - Silence this?
01:03:279 (2) - Whistle > clap?

Nice, not much I can add. Star.

Krisom wrote:

Where have I seen that background before?? I know I have, maybe in a movie <_<" Well...

Krisom wrote:

->Normal
Looks normal to me (Lol, you get it? Normal to me, 'cuz it's a normal diff !! Oh, I'm so funny sometimes...)

->Hard
Those sliders are pretty o_o

I can't say anything, I suppose I just separated the diffs to make a silly pun about the normal diff -_-"

Yeah, I'm just wasting your time, go map something else instead of wasting your time reading this D:<!

Star ^^!

Garven wrote:

[General]
The spinnerspin.wav sounds really funky when in use. I don't know if you really want to use it or not... doesn't matter to me, changed to default
The timing feels a little late during the beginning when you focus really hard on when the beats hit compared to the vocals during the beginning, if only because of the singing style. I'm kinda bad at timing so unless people give me numbers I can't really do anything >_>

[Normal]
00:45:238 (1) - This combo is pretty long for the difficulty level, though I dunno where a good spot to split it would be. :/ split at 6
01:08:571 (6) - I'd split this combo up at the 6 or 8. split at 6

[Hard]
01:01:905 (3) - This is sticking into the hp bar a little bit. and moved down

Neat song to map. G'jorb!

Sakura301 wrote:

Source = Ar Tonelico III [Suggestion]

Soaprman wrote:

There were a few minor parts that tripped me up a bit but I think it's more because it's a quiet song at the beginning than anything else. Your mapping is fine.

No modding to be done here~

Krisom wrote:

General-

· Beep! I see 320 kbps. Max allowed is 192 now. You'll have to (sadly) reduce the vibrate. :x
· Sure Ar tonelico III should not go in tags (at least)? The song isn't from that game, though? I just stole the BG from Ar tonelico :D
· Everything else seems fine.

Calm-
I'd like if you used the same timing sections for the spinner volumes in this one as the ones you did in Breezy
00:43:238 (1,2,1,2) - A jump huge spacing in the easiest diff? your call though.
01:11:905 (2) - You, sir, are awesome and I hope one day I'm as awesome as you are.

Breezy-
00:02:905 (1,1) - Make these the same as calm? I'm in fact really annoyed by the slider's end hitsound being that loud, but extending it would be nice too.
00:21:905 (1) - I don't know wich one I like more, the slider or the sliderbody.
00:31:071 (1) - Silence the sliderend?
00:34:905 (1) - I'm just asking this because I know that you can. So, can you try something prettier for this slider *w* Mmm. :|
01:01:905 (3) - End at 01:02:405 - and add a note at 01:02:571?
01:11:905 (1) - Make the volume of this spinner slow at the start and then increase it until it ends to add more epic-ness to the end~


That is all, just suggestions as always, so, yeah, you tell me qhat you fix and I'll gladly come back

YGOkid8 wrote:

forgive me if i'm wrong, but wasn't 256kbps the maximum?
192kbps is the ideal one, but not maximum

Krisom wrote:

vibrate

Xgor wrote:

Random bubble check.

Pretty interesting pick for map.
Some parts felt pretty odd like 00:27:571 (7,8) on [Breezy] but that's more due to the song than the map.
The spacing difference between 1/2 and 1/1 felt pretty weird around 45s but I felt personally that they worked quite well and I wouldn't call it unrankible. So I guess I'm not going to change it?
Well... all I can do is wish this good luck on getting ranked and give a star



But...... 01:04:238 (1,2) - [Breezy] Was this unsymmertry intentional? Oops, no that's a mistake

Dusty wrote:

Xgor wrote:

The spacing difference between 1/2 and 1/1 felt pretty weird around 45s but I felt personally that they worked quite well and I wouldn't call it unrankible. So I guess I'm not going to change it?

Thanks for the random mod!

Alace wrote:

suggest AR-2 in both diffs

Alace wrote:

you are so crazy to pick this kind of song to map
Haha, I know
ranked