M2U - Space of Soul · forum

MoonFragrance

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-05-05T06:22:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 5월 28일 금요일 at 오후 6:16:30

Artist: M2U
Title: Space of Soul
Source: DJMAX
Tags: TECHNIKA 2 Portable Black Square Bboyan Tari
BPM: 160
Filesize: 9557kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.39 stars, 234 notes)
Maximum (5 stars, 449 notes)
Normal (2.07 stars, 138 notes)
Space of Taiko (4.83 stars, 754 notes)

Download: M2U - Space of Soul
Download: M2U - Space of Soul (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 25th beatmap, Completed
Symponic House Song included in DJMAX Trilogy, Portable BLACK SQUARE and TECHNIKA 2

Composed by M2U
Visualized by Bboyan
Sung by Tari

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-06-20T07:12:54+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

Teras

902 posts

Joined October 2009

Teras 2010-05-22T11:44:23+00:00

Everything looks fine to me in this map. It all flows perfectly with the song and the hitsounds are <3
Just have to ask about this though..

[Tags] DJ MAX
Source: DJMAX

Maybe consider having the same Source as tag or reverse?

I like your DJMAX maps. So I really want this ranked fast

Star and Kudosu star! ~

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-05-22T11:55:37+00:00

Teras wrote:
Just have to ask about this though..

[Tags] DJ MAX
Source: DJMAX

Maybe consider having the same Source as tag or reverse?

I added 'DJ MAX' on tag because some people search DJMAX song by 'DJ MAX' keyword

And thank you to star + kudostar XD

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-05-22T13:06:14+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: about +10

[Normal]
Easy..?
00:19:402 (2) - remove whistle?
00:43:027 (1) - ^
01:04:027 (4,5) - use a slider instead?
01:20:902 (3) - remove whistle on the slider (i mean sliderslide)
01:41:527 (3) - add whistle?
02:02:527 (4) - 1 grid left + 1 grid up may be better?
02:08:714 (3) - 0.5x BPM at this part?

[Hard]
00:26:527 (4) - 1 grid up+ 2 grid left imo.
01:00:277 (5,6) - switch where they placed? since the beat is normal-clap-normal-clap, i think this would let the players have more fun.
01:04:402 (1,2,3) - tiny spacing problem.
01:14:527 (3) - nazi. 1 grid left.
01:50:902 (4,5,6) - tiny spacing problem,
02:08:527 (1) - 0.5x BPM at this part?

[Maximum]
00:10:402 (1) - the spin voice is a bit loud imo.
00:31:402 (1) - remove whistle at the start?
00:51:652 (1) - too short and a little sudden (the break before this is only 2s), players may not be prepared at this time.
01:59:995 - add a beat?
02:05:527 (1,2,3) - strange spacing. (2) 1 grid right.
02:08:714 (1) - 0.5x BPM at this part?

awesome song and map. star& kud star -v-

Ang Ang

44 posts

Joined June 2009

Ang Ang 2010-05-22T13:51:40+00:00

this is good song~
i like it~~
star~~

Ra-s

1,289 posts

Joined May 2009

Ra-s 2010-05-22T14:44:01+00:00

모든건 Suggestion

[General]
.osb 안지우셨나요? 나는 있던데... 아니 효과가 있는지 없는지는 모르겠지만

일단 히트사운드도 아주좋고 배열도 좋고! 점프가 없어도 재밌는맵

[Hard]
00:26:527 (4) - 위로 한칸 왼쪽으로 한칸??... (lv3)

SPOILER

+Star

Louis Cyphre

2,684 posts

Joined October 2009

Louis Cyphre 2010-05-22T15:22:42+00:00

Must
Should
Suggestion

[General]
Remove from tags DJ MAX (it's already in Source)
01:16:402~02:04:777 - you should cut kiai time, it's too long
[Normal]
02:10:777 - replace this slider to 02:10:964 to 02:11:058 and add one repeat.
Other notes seems good to me

[Hard]
Perfect

[Maximum]
160/3 =53.(3) so Beatmap Snap Divisor change to 1/4

Strange song and i like it, good luck and star~

Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

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Joined March 2009

Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-05-22T16:02:53+00:00

[Easy]
파인

[Hard]
00:07:402 (4) - 실수...겠죠
01:29:902 (X) - 노트 추가하는게 더 좋아보입니다.
02:05:902 (1) - 슬라이더 1/4박 더 늘려주세요
02:06:558 (2) - 1/4박 뒤로 한칸 옮겨주세요
02:08:527 (1,2) - 동일

[Insane]
어째서 하드만 이찌?

Hurude Rika

Hurude Rika 2010-05-22T16:21:39+00:00

nice map~

Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2010-05-22T16:29:58+00:00

[Hard]
00:07:402 (4) - 슬라이더 끝을 00:07:964
00:26:527 (4) - 왼쪽으로 3칸 위로 1칸 이동
02:05:902 (1,2) - 아래 그림처럼 바꿔주세요

02:08:527 (1) - 다른 난이도는 02:08:714 레드틱에 노트가 있는데 하드만 화이트틱에 있네요.

[Maximum]
02:06:464 (4) - 02:06:370

스타~*

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-05-22T16:50:54+00:00

[Normal]:

01:16:777 (T) - add note here?

[Hard]:

00:16:402 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:09:652 (3) - a little hidden?
02:10:964 (1) - whistle at the end.

[Maximum]:

Awesome

Epic hitsounds!

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-05-23T00:12:40+00:00

General:
- You have beats that are 2 grids lower from the middle... but update a while ago got rid of the need for that, so replace all those 2 grids lower beats that was intended to go in the middle, and move it 2 grids up.

...I'll come back and edit post later. Dunno why, but I don't feel like modding with something like ^ going on first.

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-05-23T07:00:44+00:00

fixed what i picked :3
thanks for the stars XD

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2010-05-23T07:55:40+00:00

ㅂㅕ
ㄹ

Kim Jin Seok

369 posts

Joined December 2008

Kim Jin Seok 2010-05-23T08:16:17+00:00

필수적으로 고쳐야 할 부분은 없는것 같고, 고치면 더 좋을것 같은 부분만 말할게요...

[Space of Taiko]
00:43:412 (1) ~ 00:49:412 (30) - 이부분 전부 동으로 되어있는데 좀 꾸며주셔도 좋을 것 같네요.
01:37:037 (14,15,16,17,18) - kddkk
01:41:349 (8,9,10,11,12) - ^
01:42:849 (8,9,10,11,12) - ^

+Star..

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-05-23T10:04:05+00:00

Hello MoonFragrance.

Epic map,you worked well on it.Haven't spot something wrong,just some suggestions:

[Normal]
00:45:662 - Adding a circle? I wanted to click at this moment.
01:04:037 (4) - I know you did it purposely,but still,I feel like there's something missing in this moment.Maybe adding a slider at 01:04:412 (5) up to 01:04:787 or even at 01:04:599 (5)?

[Hard]
00:55:412 (1) - Well,I don't really want to suggest something here.Just wanted to say it was a bit hard.
02:10:130 (2) - Maybe using 1/8 grid to put it perfectly timed? 02:10:177 Sounds better to me.

[Space of Taiko]
Well,sounds fine to me,maybe needs some modding from experienced taiko mappers.

[Maximum]
I had some suggestions,but finally,all I've got to say is "Fine".

Good luck with it,have a star~

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2010-05-23T11:24:25+00:00

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• Delete "DJ MAX" from the Tags
• Disable countdown

Vendemmia

Former osu! Champion: 2013

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Vendemmia 2010-05-23T12:01:17+00:00

오 ㅋㅋㅋ 디맥온라인때부터 너무너무 좋아한 Space of Soul ~

star !

Asutarotto

119 posts

Joined April 2009

Asutarotto 2010-05-23T15:44:15+00:00

Hello~

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
-Delete osb and full submit.

[Normal]
00:27:662 (4) - 2 grid right,1 grid down

[Hard]
00:26:537 (4) - 1 grid left
01:06:662 (3,4) - 1 grid left,1 grid down

[Maximum]
00:41:912 (1) - 1 grid right , 1 grid up
00:42:099 (2) - 1 grid right
00:42:287 (3,5) - 1 grid right, 1 grid up

This is quite a awesome map that I can only do some nazi modding……really can't find other problems.And I love this song and M2U too

+Star(I really want to shoot a kudosu star but don't have enough kudosu,sorry)

subarasikibuta

559 posts

Joined May 2009

subarasikibuta 2010-05-23T19:39:29+00:00

miss your maps

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2010-05-24T06:25:39+00:00

Hi MF~!
You always doing well on DJMAX's map~ >w<

[General]
Disable countdown
Delete .osb file and full submit~

[Hard]
02:03:287 (6,7) - Move to white tick after them?
02:06:662 (2) - End with red tick?

GREAT~STARRRR~

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-05-24T08:11:09+00:00

General:
01:40:412 - Re-Kiai Time here?

mm, with the first Kiai Time (and the only one atm), I think it's better to just have the fountain instead of continuous (if you know what I mean). The reason I said Re-Kiai Time above was because I thought that part was more "epic".

...well, feel free to do what you want.

Hard:
00:44:912 (5) - Ugly :/

Sekuyi

181 posts

Joined December 2009

Sekuyi 2010-05-24T12:00:41+00:00

[Normal]
- 02:08:630 ~ (3) spacing

[Hard]
- 00:49:412 ~ (1) put a break after this?

Nice song and really good maps. 'Space of Taiko' is just wow *_*
*************

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2010-05-24T15:06:10+00:00

ANNYEONGHASEYO

[File]
1) Delete .osb and full submit

[Normal]
01:05:912 (3) - Move 3 grid right?
01:08:912 (3) - Move 3 grid left?
02:03:287 (6) - I think I don't like stack with 5, IMO
02:10:787 (1) - Maybe, silence from start of slider??

[Hard]
02:06:662 (2) - Extend this slider to red tick

[Space of Taiko]
Fine~

[Maximum]
00:06:474 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:07:224 (3)?
02:03:849 (8) - New combo? Seems too long
02:10:974 (1) - Move backward to blue tick and add 1 repeating slider?

Good song
STAR

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-05-24T17:09:15+00:00

General
If Tena is the singer, I should think they are the artist, but idk anything about this song so use your own judgement.
That kiai section is huge, I suggest breaking it up to some degree.
The section at the end is near unmappable :/
Good use of custom sounds, though is it me or are some beats silenced? If they are, please add some sound to them.

Normal
Feels like an easy to me
00:31:412 (1) - Shuffle to centre and...
00:34:412 (1) - ...Make this a 180 flip of the last beat?

Hard:
01:01:037 (7) - Doesn't really fit, make a tick earlier?
02:03:193 (6,7) - Doesn't really fit either, but might be better with beats on 02:03:099 and 02:03:849.

Maximum
00:09:099 (6) - Shorten by half a beat?
00:48:193 (1,2) - Same as in Hard]

Cool map, star.

bmin11

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Joined October 2008

bmin11 2010-05-25T00:55:35+00:00

별 놓고 갑니다

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-05-27T03:20:54+00:00

New MV 0.0

~Normal~
00:10:412 (2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:38:162 (2) - timing section is too close
00:40:412 (1) - remove sliderwhistle
02:10:880 (1) - start on right blue tick

~Hard~
00:03:287 (1,2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:10:412 (3) - ^
02:08:724 (1) - end on left white tick

~Maximum~
00:03:287 (1) - remove sliderwhistle
02:09:662 (3) - end on left blue tick

+Star

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-05-28T09:15:30+00:00

Fixed what i picked :3

tieff

Featured Artist

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tieff 2010-05-28T12:23:04+00:00

10/10.

Bubbled.