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[EZ]00:14:645 - 00:15:018 - Might consider adding another note at these places to make them into jumps for the crashes, and also because it signals the start and end of a new section.
00:20:421 - 00:20:794 - I might consider adding a note in 2 and 4 respectively to represent the guitar there. It also acts a bit like a transition too.
00:32:533 (32533|3) - Might be a cool idea to turn this into a 1/1 LN to act as a transition into the next sentence like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6898242
00:38:869 - to 00:42:223 - You've ignored column 3 D: I'd consider moving some notes like 00:40:359 (40359|1) - to 3
01:15:763 (75763|0) - Similar to how I mentioned that 1/1 LN a while ago, I'd apply it here too
01:48:372 (108372|2,108931|0) - I might consider swapping the columns here, so that the LN is in 1 and the short note in 3 since the cap at 01:48:931 (108931|0,108931|3) - is uncomfortable to hit on weaker fingers like the middle finger (talking about the note in 4 mostly)
02:45:949 - to 02:48:558 - Stop ignoring columns :< I'd consider moving 02:47:813 (167813|0) - to restore balance.
[NM]00:13:713 - 00:14:272 - I can't really understand why you wouldn't have notes here for the drum kicks like at 00:11:291 (11291|0,11477|1) - for example.
01:03:651 - 01:04:024 - Why not add notes for the guitar like you did at 00:20:421 (20421|2,20794|3) - ?
01:22:844 - Column 3 feels a little left out, maybe try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903536
02:37:751 - 02:37:937 - Add notes here for the snare, because the sound is similar to 02:31:788 (151788|1,151974|2,152161|0) -
[HD]00:27:502 (27502|1,27502|0,28061|0,28434|0,28434|3) - I'd consider arranging the notes like this since it's easier to play this way in my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903588
01:48:372 (108372|3,108465|2,108558|1,108651|0,108744|1,108838|2) - More just my personal opinion, but I'm not a really big fan of how this stair plays. Maybe try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903617
[Nowsmart's MX]00:37:564 (37564|0) - I'd consider moving this to 3 since hitting a ministack in 1 while holding an LN in 2 is pretty uncomfortable imo
00:59:412 (59412|1) - Why. Remove this note, there's literally no reason for it to be here cause you already have a double at 00:59:365 - and there's no delay to the sound
01:15:018 (75018|3,75018|2,75204|3,75763|3) - Imo, might be easier to play this if you swapped columns, so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6904055
01:43:713 (103713|0) - Consider moving this to 3 since I think it's easier to hit that way when the LNs are only on the left hand and everything else on the right.
[EZ]00:26:943 (26943|1) - Add whistle
[NM]dunno if Im just bad at checking hitsounds or if you're a really good hitsounder, but no inconsistencies here
[HD]00:17:813 (17813|3) - Dunno why you needed to apply the hitnormal to this note when it automatically plays if there's no assigned hitsound lol
01:41:105 (101105|0,101477|2,101850|1) - Add finishes
01:42:223 (102223|0,102595|0) - ^
01:43:341 (103341|1,103713|1,104086|1,104459|1,104831|0,105204|0) - ^
01:46:322 (106322|0,106695|0,107067|0,107440|0,107813|0,108185|0) - ^
[Nowsmart's MX]01:39:055 (99055|1) - You have 2 hitfinishes here. Replace this one with a hitclap for the snare
General
- Would consider replacing the normal-hitwhistle since you can barely hear it tbh. Might try this one instead http://puu.sh/t0wA1.wav
- Might consider bringing up the HP of HD to 7.5 or so since 7 is really too forgiving at the moment.
Diffs
[EZ]00:14:645 - 00:15:018 - Might consider adding another note at these places to make them into jumps for the crashes, and also because it signals the start and end of a new section.
00:20:421 - 00:20:794 - I might consider adding a note in 2 and 4 respectively to represent the guitar there. It also acts a bit like a transition too.
00:32:533 (32533|3) - Might be a cool idea to turn this into a 1/1 LN to act as a transition into the next sentence like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6898242
00:38:869 - to 00:42:223 - You've ignored column 3 D: I'd consider moving some notes like 00:40:359 (40359|1) - to 3
01:15:763 (75763|0) - Similar to how I mentioned that 1/1 LN a while ago, I'd apply it here too
01:48:372 (108372|2,108931|0) - I might consider swapping the columns here, so that the LN is in 1 and the short note in 3 since the cap at 01:48:931 (108931|0,108931|3) - is uncomfortable to hit on weaker fingers like the middle finger (talking about the note in 4 mostly)
02:45:949 - to 02:48:558 - Stop ignoring columns :< I'd consider moving 02:47:813 (167813|0) - to restore balance.
[NM]00:13:713 - 00:14:272 - I can't really understand why you wouldn't have notes here for the drum kicks like at 00:11:291 (11291|0,11477|1) - for example.
01:03:651 - 01:04:024 - Why not add notes for the guitar like you did at 00:20:421 (20421|2,20794|3) - ?
01:22:844 - Column 3 feels a little left out, maybe try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903536
02:37:751 - 02:37:937 - Add notes here for the snare, because the sound is similar to 02:31:788 (151788|1,151974|2,152161|0) -
[HD]00:27:502 (27502|1,27502|0,28061|0,28434|0,28434|3) - I'd consider arranging the notes like this since it's easier to play this way in my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903588
01:48:372 (108372|3,108465|2,108558|1,108651|0,108744|1,108838|2) - More just my personal opinion, but I'm not a really big fan of how this stair plays. Maybe try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6903617
[Nowsmart's MX]00:37:564 (37564|0) - I'd consider moving this to 3 since hitting a ministack in 1 while holding an LN in 2 is pretty uncomfortable imo
00:59:412 (59412|1) - Why. Remove this note, there's literally no reason for it to be here cause you already have a double at 00:59:365 - and there's no delay to the sound
01:15:018 (75018|3,75018|2,75204|3,75763|3) - Imo, might be easier to play this if you swapped columns, so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6904055
01:43:713 (103713|0) - Consider moving this to 3 since I think it's easier to hit that way when the LNs are only on the left hand and everything else on the right.
Hitsounds
[EZ]00:26:943 (26943|1) - Add whistle
[NM]dunno if Im just bad at checking hitsounds or if you're a really good hitsounder, but no inconsistencies here
[HD]00:17:813 (17813|3) - Dunno why you needed to apply the hitnormal to this note when it automatically plays if there's no assigned hitsound lol
01:41:105 (101105|0,101477|2,101850|1) - Add finishes
01:42:223 (102223|0,102595|0) - ^
01:43:341 (103341|1,103713|1,104086|1,104459|1,104831|0,105204|0) - ^
01:46:322 (106322|0,106695|0,107067|0,107440|0,107813|0,108185|0) - ^
[Nowsmart's MX]01:39:055 (99055|1) - You have 2 hitfinishes here. Replace this one with a hitclap for the snare
