M4M as promised~ Srry it took a while
. I hope this helps
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[Sincerity]
00:02:441 - Would be nice if you could map a note here instead of slider-end.
00:09:767 (3,4,5) - This spacing is really deceptive. Also the flow from 4 to 5 isn't great imo
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00:11:686 (2,3) - This part of the song is rather calm, and you use a lot of sliders or spaced-out single circles here. Seems odd to put two circles here rather than just a slider.
00:12:558 - This is a good place to start another slider imo. Shorten the previous slider a bit?
00:15:348 - ^
00:20:406 (2,3) - Swap in time-line. Slider into Circle plays better.
00:32:093 (4,5,6,7,8) - Are the overlaps necessary? I feel like there are better ways you could have mapped this without being unnecessarily hard to read since the rest of your map doesn't really employ overlaps.
00:33:488 (1,2,3) - Shorten 1 by 1/2 a beat so you can start 2 at 00:33:837 - . And make 00:34:011 (3) - 1/2 beat longer.
00:37:674 (5,6,7) - Is such a big jump necessary? Main issue is that this jump goes into a repeat slider at 1/12 snap.
00:40:988 (8) - Doesn't really fit imo.... You could map the vocals better without a repeat slider.
00:48:139 - Why not have a slider begin here instead?
00:53:023 - + 00:53:372 - Are really strong beats... And would work really well if you made a jump here.
00:59:999 (5,6,7,8) - For the hardest difficulty, this is kind of undermapped... Maybe add another circle at 01:00:872 - ? it mimics a rhythm you have later here: 01:03:837 (6,7,1) - .
01:05:058 (4) - Better to have two sliders, second slider beginning at 01:05:406 - imo... I don't think a reverse slider plays that well.
01:09:418 (7) - Not going to put two circles here?
01:21:976 (3,4,5) - Might want to check the blankets here.
[Hard]
00:10:813 - Should be a circle and slider should begin at 00:11:162 - . Take out repeat and move the slider to where the old slider should have ended.
00:19:534 (1,2,3) - Spacing's a bit uneven for me...
00:25:813 - No circle here? You just mapped the same sound to 00:22:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - , so when the piano plays here, I kind of expect there to be a circle since the part right before with the same piano sound was mapped to circles.
00:32:441 (4) - Make this repeat?
00:39:418 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't see why the circles here need to be stacked. Especially for 5, 6, because the vocals change between the two notes (so clicking the same location plays a bit odd).
00:43:081 - No circle here?
00:45:174 (2,3,4) - Sudden difficulty jump during a "calm" part of the song... How about just a slider instead?
00:53:023 - Same as Sincerity. Strong beats here that should be mapped. You can end the spinner a bit earlier imo..
01:13:779 (3,4) - Check blanket.
[Normal]
00:04:883 (4) - Slider here? There are more notes here to map, and imo mapping the rhythm is more important here than following the pentagon pattern.
00:08:372 (1,2,3,4) - Tidy up this pattern? 1, 2, 3 are an equilateral triangle, but 4 just looks out of place...
00:13:255 (2,3) - Repeat slider?
00:42:558 (2) - Repeat slider doesn't map well here imo... The note is at 00:43:081 - Which isn't covered by the repeat. Maybe just a full slider instead here?
00:55:813 (1,2) - Check blanket.