Demetori - Innocent Treasures · forum

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-04-29T12:22:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 maja 2010 at 09:54:37

Artist: Demetori
Title: Innocent Treasures
Source: Touhou
Tags: SteRRuM
BPM: 189
Filesize: 3243kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:

Easy (3,05 stars, 132 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 449 notes)
Normal (4,42 stars, 220 notes)
SteRRuM's Treasure (4,9 stars, 463 notes)

Download: Demetori - Innocent Treasures
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SteRRuM's Treasure - SteRRuM

Easy done.

Last edited by fartownik 2010-05-30T07:55:50+00:00, edited 12 times in total.

Niko

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Niko 2010-04-29T14:25:09+00:00

Awesome!
+Star

SteRRuM

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SteRRuM 2010-05-04T20:59:20+00:00

New MP3
New offset: 592

Gonna post my diff later.

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Edit: Here'z my diff :3

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-05T11:41:57+00:00

Aligator, SteRRuM Mount.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-05-05T15:24:00+00:00

[insane]
0:04:083 (2,3,4) Not sure about this... spacing?
0:14:877 (1) left 1 grid
0:42:337 (4) right 1 grid?
1:00:829 (2) Maybe too difficult to jump this within 1/4 beat? down 3 grid?
1:48:369 (5) right 1 grid for spacing and symmetry

[Sterrum]
0:01:861 (3) down 1 grid
0:21:702 (4) right 1 grid
0:33:289 (6) right 1 grid?
0:41:226 (2) left 1 grid?

star~

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-06T21:39:41+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[insane]
0:04:083 (2,3,4) Not sure about this... spacing?
0:14:877 (1) left 1 grid
0:42:337 (4) right 1 grid?
1:00:829 (2) Maybe too difficult to jump this within 1/4 beat? down 3 grid?
1:48:369 (5) right 1 grid for spacing and symmetry

[Sterrum]
0:01:861 (3) down 1 grid
0:21:702 (4) right 1 grid
0:33:289 (6) right 1 grid?
0:41:226 (2) left 1 grid?

star~

Thanks for modding, Fixed some of this.

Hikato

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Hikato 2010-05-06T21:57:04+00:00

+ star~

<3

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-05-07T17:53:42+00:00

[General]
This map set still needs an easier difficulty [Normal] is too hard for newbies
Why is there a picture of Shou ._. shouldnt there be a pic of ZUN?

[Normal]
Fine

[SteRRuM's Treasure]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine (Although i'd advice to read Remmy's quote on my siggy)

Pretty nice map +Star

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-07T20:36:48+00:00

Sakura301 wrote:
[General]
This map set still needs an easier difficulty [Normal] is too hard for newbies Yes, I'm already making an easy.
Why is there a picture of Shou ._. shouldnt there be a pic of ZUN? - Wut

[Normal]
Fine

[SteRRuM's Treasure]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine (Although i'd advice to read Remmy's quote on my siggy) -
Remmy wrote:
citation
But this one has to be.

Pretty nice map +Star

Nothing worth kudosu, but anyways thanks for modding by your own choice.

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-05-24T07:21:48+00:00

This is my second favourite (if not my favourite) demetori song

Im both happy and annoyed that you mapped it, Since I was thinking of mapping this, and I would make a diff if I already hadn't already had a bunch of guest diffs to do.

Haven't seen the map yet, but I will.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-05-25T17:51:47+00:00

Must
Should

Offset: 591

[Easy]
01:23:765 - distance

[Treasure]
01:49:639 - new combo

It's awesome guys, good job :: ) Star~

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-25T18:09:07+00:00

Louis Cyphre wrote:
Must
Should

Offset: 591

[Easy]
01:23:765 - distance

[Treasure]
01:49:639 - new combo

It's awesome guys, good job :: ) Star~

Thanks. Don't get the offset change, so I won't fix it.

Asutarotto

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Asutarotto 2010-05-26T14:48:24+00:00

Hello~

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
delete the blank .osb and full submit.

[Easy]
Delete useless green lines from 00:21:384 to 00:28:924
A suggestion is that you may use less 1/2 sliders since it's a Easy,right?

[Normal]
Seems fine to me,but maybe too hard for a normal?

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And I can't find mistakes in two insanes,but this is what I want to say,these two diffs are all insane enough and have similar maxmium score, could you make one easier?But it's all up to you.

Nice map.
+Star

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-26T14:51:08+00:00

no-7 wrote:
Hello~

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
delete the blank .osb and full submit.

[Easy]
Delete useless green lines from 00:21:384 to 00:28:924
A suggestion is that you may use less 1/2 sliders since it's a Easy,right?

[Normal]
Seems fine to me,but maybe too hard for a normal?

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And I can't find mistakes in two insanes,but this what I want to say,these two diffs are all insane enough and have similar maxmium score, could you make one easier?But it's all up to you.

Don't kudosu since I don't give you much help

Nice map.
+Star

Your post was helpful, in a little piece, but it was, so I give you kudosu. Thanks for mod.

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-26T22:42:02+00:00

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~Easy~
- Maybe use 0.5 Slider TIck Rate? 1 sounds weird on some places o.o

00:03:289 (1) - The repeat for this slider sounds weird too :/

~Normal~
- I suggest to change the name to Hard (or at least Normal+), it has a lot of 1/2 streams xD

00:14:877 (5) - Another weird repeat >.<
00:41:384 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:464 (1,2) - ^
00:55:353 (4) - ^
01:47:099 (5) - Can you move this slider a bit down so at least you can see half of the combo number? It's a bit hard to distinguish like that =x

~SteRRuM's Treasure~
- Decrease OVerall Difficulty by 1? I played it well, but I'm just saying this to make the diff jump a bit less harder xwx

01:10:591 (1) - Ugh +2000 spinner T.T
01:40:908 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Couldn't you just make a straight line...? This is so hard to follow at such a high speed ._.
01:51:781 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as above :/

~Insane~
01:22:019 (1) - Extend to white tick?
01:23:289 (1) - ^
01:27:099 (1) - ^
01:28:369 (1) - ^

Crazy map, good luck with it! ^^ *star*

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-05-27T12:00:23+00:00

Hello fartownik.

[Easy]
00:09:797 (3) - A bit out of rhytm.Maybe make 2 sliders or single circles? Notes:[00:09:797 (3) - 00:10:273 (4)] and [00:10:591 (5) - 00:10:908 (6)].
00:11:067 (1) - Remove it,if you followed my suggestion,it's out of the rhytm imo.
00:11:384 (7) - Adding a circle?
00:14:877 (3) - Same suggestion as above.
01:30:988 - Just an opinion,but I don't like silencing here.

[Normal]
00:14:877 (5) - Something bad with with this slider.And the whole combo moment sounds bad to me.Try to find something out with following notes:[00:14:877 (5),00:15:353 (6),00:15:670 (7),00:15:988 (8),00:16:464 (9)]
00:55:353 (4) - Again something wrong with such a slider,but this one sounds really awful.Do something with it,please.

[SteRRuM's Treasure]
Fine,only some suggestions:
00:49:321 (3) - Maybe change a whistle with 00:49:480 (4)? Sounds better to me.
00:59:004 (5) - Adding some hitsound here? Finish maybe?
01:20:591 (9) - Maybe adding a finish?
01:40:908 (3) - Try to find better histound combination here,sounds a bit rough.

[Insane]
Maybe make OD -1? It's insane enough.
00:20:591 (1) - Wow,how cruel are you to put such a short spinner here? By the way,Auto mode spins only 1000 score here,so,I think it's out of ranking.

Well,epic music and map.Good luck with it,I hope it will be even better.Star~

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-27T13:27:42+00:00

Thanks Beuchi-chan and SadKangaroo for modding. Fixed some of your advices.

tieff

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tieff 2010-05-27T17:56:13+00:00

Bubble, but feel free to pop.

Mok

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Mok 2010-05-27T19:18:17+00:00

I has bubble so i won't mod and i'll leave a star <3

Lemon Water_old

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Lemon Water_old 2010-05-28T00:20:36+00:00

haauu. star~

Gens

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Gens 2010-05-29T21:54:22+00:00

Man.

[Easy]

Blue ticks at the start sound really awkward... 00:00:750 (1) and 00:03:289 (1). And beats like 00:11:067 (1) - this feel like they should be 1/2 backward. I can't really hear whatever you're following...

[Normal]

01:24:718 (1) - I felt this spinner was out of place.

[Insane]

01:00:511 (1,2,3,1) - This sounds way too off, or out of place...
01:22:019 (1) - Why finish it on a blue tick?
01:23:289 (1) - Same.
01:27:099 (1) - Same
02:02:178 (1,2,3) - I'm sure these must be on 1/3.

Quick pop for the moment.

Real1

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Real1 2010-05-29T21:54:34+00:00

Oops, this map is already bubbled. I won't bother modding it then. Nice job. Have a star!

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-30T08:00:29+00:00

Gens wrote:
Man.

[Easy]
Blue ticks at the start sound really awkward... 00:00:750 (1) and 00:03:289 (1). And beats like 00:11:067 (1) - this feel like they should be 1/2 backward. I can't really hear whatever you're following... - About the blue ticks at the start - something has f***ed up when I changed offset, it wasn't like that before. Thanks for noticing this. Fixed.
[Normal]

01:24:718 (1) - I felt this spinner was out of place. IMO it's ok.

[Insane]

01:00:511 (1,2,3,1) - This sounds way too off, or out of place... Down arrow~
01:22:019 (1) - Why finish it on a blue tick? - Done.
01:23:289 (1) - Same. - Done.
01:27:099 (1) - Same - Done.
02:02:178 (1,2,3) - I'm sure these must be on 1/3. - They were before the offset change. Fixed too.

Quick pop for the moment.

Thanks for modding, I don't know how didn't I notice these things before. Fixed most