Ikeda Ayako - Prism (TV Size)

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Pokie
Hello.

[KoromoAmae]
00:53:726 (2,3,4) - make it more closely

don't kudosu this post :| star~
thepianist
Hello!

[Overall]
That yellow combo color is a bit bright during kiai.

[Kyoko]
00:42:956 (4,5) - Hm, perhaps replace with a 1/2 repeating slider? (Example below)
00:46:228 (3,4) - ^
00:51:410 (1,2,3) - As an easier difficulty, I would suggest this one be a repeating slider.

[Fumie]
00:29:317 (3) - I don't see why this is a repeating slider.
01:03:408 (1,2) - Personally, I don't really like this overlap, although it is passable.

[Isako]
00:20:453 (4) - Remove?
00:20:590 (5) - Extend to white tick?
00:22:499 (x) - Note?
00:29:181 (2) - Personally, I don't think this is needed
00:31:226 (x) - Note?

Congrats on your first map. ^^ *Star~
Topic Starter
KoromoAmae
Made a bunch of edits from thepianist's mod.
Louis Cyphre
[General]
Perfect

[Kyoko]
Perfect. Very good.

[Fumie]
00:15:953 - new combo
00:37:499 - ^

00:58:226 - Distance
01:09:135 - new combo
[Isako]
00:37:499 - new combo
01:18:613 - move right 1 tick.

What a nice map. I think it's time to ask BAT's for modding :D
Good Luck :3 Star
Topic Starter
KoromoAmae
Adjustments done from lucifer's mod.
IceBeam
Hello,KoromoAmae.

Good attemp at mapping.Also,pretty song,I like it,so star~

Here's some modding,if you'll use it,please don't forget to feed me kudos.


[General]
As I see,all 3 difficulties have the same Slider Velocity.Changing the Velocity will help you to increase the difference between each tempo.Also,it will change the spacing,especially,if you use Distance Snap so properly.Increasing HP Drain,Overall Difficulty and by lowering Circle Size your map doesn't becomes really harder in general.It only affects the Star Rating,in addition,high Overall Difficulty makes your map hard to read.So,this is just my advise,maybe you can find some new solutions and ideas in your new maps.

[Kyoko]
Looks pretty fine,only some suggestions:
00:48:681 (3) - adding a circle?
00:58:772 (3) - ^
01:04:772 (4) - probably,making a slider(reverse-slider)?

[Fumie]
Almost perfect.
00:24:135 (4) - adding a circle to follow the lyrics?

[Isako]
This one really dissapoints me a bit.It's up to you,but you can do much better,if'd you used another velocity(spacing).
00:13:226 (7) - remove or put it to 00:13:499
00:15:953 (1) - try to find better rhytm in this combo part.
00:33:953 (1) - this part is really hard to read.
00:47:044 (9) - this one is a bit out of lyrics.
00:53:590 (1) - really cruel monent.I really want you to change it.
01:02:317 (1) - streaming after the spinner upsets me a little.
01:18:681 (1) - this beat was out of other diffs. and with such a big Overall Difficulty it's really hard to expect.


So,good luck to your map.
Eirene
-> your yellow and your orange are a bit strange ... that does not look good with the BG and others colours
( imo remove at least the last orange which is really :/ )

[Isako] :
only one thing :
00:53:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I guess i'm not a bad player, but the 1rst I played the map, this spacing makes my eyes bleeding >.<
so you might use a kind of warning ... personnaly I don't know how this could be improved :)
( really nazi, sorry >.< but nothing to say otherwise >.< )

[Fumie] :
nothing ...

[Kyoko] :
nothing about the map, but I have the same feeling than Colin Hou : the BPM is low, so you should make circles bigger

otherwise the music is :3, star *.*
Frill
[Kyoko]

00:46:226 (3) - add a clap in return
01:15:135 (1,2) - add whistle

[Fumie]

01:15:135 (1,2,4) - add a whistle

[Isako]

01:15:135 (1,2,4) - add a whistle


Good map.

+Star
KRZY
[Kyoko]
00:14:317 (2) - See no reason for this to be out of spacing, keep within the distance snap
00:20:590 (4) - Add a clap?
00:22:772 (1) - ^
00:24:953 (5) - ^
00:29:044 (3) - ^
00:31:499 (1) - ^

[Fumie]
00:40:226 (1) - Remove clap?
00:42:954 (7) - ^

[Isako]
00:45:681 (5) - Align horizontally with the previous slider?



Difficult map to mod, I seem to be out of ideas on this one. Sorry T.T

I'll leave it to the more experienced and skilled modders to make this map better.

Good luck with your first map! Star!
Kecco
•Overall•
Ok.

•Isako•
00:30:408 (4) - 1 grid up and 1 right?

•Fumie•
00:58:226 (1) - Spacing error.

•Kyoko•
Ok.
DNR
First map, nice ;3~.

Overall:
:3~

Easy:
00:13:772 (1) - What, the spacing. It's possible to have this properly spaced and have that big slider properly spaced without messing the slider up :D~.
00:22:772 (1) - Remove clap
00:23:044 (2) - Add clap
00:29:317 (4) - Add whistle
00:42:953 (4) - Add whistle on repeat
00:44:863 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
00:46:226 (3) - Add whistle on repeat
00:48:954 (3) - Just something that might be kinda cools, add an inherited timing section with normal hitsounds on the end of this slider, and then move it back to soft 1/4 away. It goes with the music ;3~.
00:53:590 (1) - Add finish
00:54:681 - I think it'd be nice if you made this section use normal hitsounds, and then edited all of the hitsounds to your liking~.

Normal:
00:09:953 (1) - Add finish
00:10:499 (3) - Add whistle
00:13:772 (4) - ^
00:51:408 (1,2,3) - I think it'd be nice if these were all put on normal hitsounds (Make sure to put it 1/4 before so it makes the same effect no matter how early you hit it~
00:54:681 - Same as normal

Insane:
1/8 what is this really neccesary
00:09:953 (1) - Add whistle
00:10:499 (4) - ^
00:10:772 (5) - Add finish
00:12:681 (5) - Add whistle
00:14:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as previous
00:15:953 (1) - Add whistle
00:17:044 (5) - ^
Oh my god I love you you put creavitity into stream hitsounds.

~
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