[Kyoko]
00:14:317 (2) - Align with both start and end. Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597
00:17:590 (3) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:18:681 (1) - ^
[Fumie]
00:10:772 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:13:772 (4,5) - How about move 1 grid down?
00:15:953 (6,7,8) - Umm... I worried about this pattern... Maybe I prefer other pattern instead of this...
00:20:590 (3,4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:59:044 (4,5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
[Isako]
00:31:772 (2) - [Suggestion] It seems little hidden...
00:34:908 (8,1) - Not good jump ;_;
00:35:726 (6,1) - ^
01:16:226 (1) - [Suggestion] Make its end slience?
Good luck for your 1st song :3
00:14:317 (2) - Align with both start and end. Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8597
00:17:590 (3) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:18:681 (1) - ^
[Fumie]
00:10:772 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:13:772 (4,5) - How about move 1 grid down?
00:15:953 (6,7,8) - Umm... I worried about this pattern... Maybe I prefer other pattern instead of this...
00:20:590 (3,4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:59:044 (4,5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
[Isako]
00:31:772 (2) - [Suggestion] It seems little hidden...
00:34:908 (8,1) - Not good jump ;_;
00:35:726 (6,1) - ^
01:16:226 (1) - [Suggestion] Make its end slience?
Good luck for your 1st song :3