1. Easy (2.27 stars, 93 notes)
2. Hard (4.88 stars, 204 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 276 notes)
4. Normal (4.25 stars, 150 notes)

wmfchris wrote:

[overall]
1:26:202 suggestion: end kiai here? Fixed!

[insane]
0:32:548 (5) spacing, left+up 1 grid, correspondingly (6) up 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid+up 1 grid (2,4,6 forms a stright line while 3,5,7 forms another) Fixed!
0:35:241 (3) A bit strange when (1,3)doesn't forms a stright line...? Maybe (3) can move left/up a bit. Fixed!
0:43:895 (1) spacing different from similar pattern later Fixed!
0:57:356 (11) down 1 grid so that it forms a stright line. Also the next (1,2) can be adjusted down a bit (on the same level with (11) or up a bit (on the same level with (10) Fixed!

[hard]
0:39:087 (x) add a note here? Fixed!
0:39:856 (2) seems weird as it's no at the mid-point of (1,3), but fine Fixed!
1:09:279 (7) down+right 1 grid Fixed!

[normal]
0:13:125 (1) spacing Fixed!

(Is it really necessary to add "opening" to tags? I'm not entirely sure myself, but I kept it in tags because I have no other ones atm ^^

Nice song with few errors <3 star

Sakura301 wrote:

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[Easy]
Looks fine to me

[Normal]
00:48:125 (2,1) - Please avoid stuff like this on a Normal 1/4s are a No-No on Normal (the slider may be ok, what bothers me is that the next slider is 1/4 close to it) Deleted the 1/4s.

[Hard]
01:06:971 (1) - Repeat covered by the hitburst of the previous slider Modified the slider.
01:17:741 (1) - Slider completely covered by the previous one Fixed!


[Insane]
Looks fine to me.

Ok, i will need to wait for an answer and maybe a remod before i can give a star considering the previous errors, Good Luck! ~

Sallad4ever wrote:

As requested
Sorry for the wait
Venus to Jesus hehe nice one

[General]
Well I agree that you don't need to put opening as a tag, probably add shaft or you can just emptied it cause the source is plenty enough Okay, removed "opening" ^^


[Easy]
Great

[Normal]
00:30:048 (1) - this slider is a little offbeat because of the repeat, change it into 2 slider like in 00:36:202 (1,2) ? Changed!
00:33:125 (1) - ^ Changed!
01:14:664 (1) - ^ Changed!
00:47:548 (1,2) - unstacked 1 and turn the repeat on 2 upward so that 3 are more visible or if you follow sakura's mod you can change them to this

Modified this part.
00:48:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's kinda strange that this part follow the lyrics almost closely but then the next set are not. well it's not a big problem just me. Changed this part a bit

[Hard]
My favorite diff have a nice flow
01:06:971 (1) - the repeat is hidden by previous note's combo burst, you shoud replace this ! Fixed!
01:18:510 (3) - this is also not good either ! Fixed!
Just like sakura's post because this is very major

[Insane]
00:05:625 (1) - remove NC (new combo) to make it consistent with the next set (2 stanzas in 1 combo set) Fixed!
00:11:587 (1) - ^ Fixed!
01:00:337 (1) - not recommended, you should delete this Fixed!
01:24:471 (2) - hmm.. how about following the lyric more closely instead of using slider? Changed to fit the lyrics.

Very catchy song
Make me want to watch the anime
STAR~~~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i'm not sure about the timing in kiai... i often feel strange and hit about 20-30ms late orz(especially normal)... though when in the editor, it seems nothing wrong. I've left Kiai as it is since I'm not sure what to do with it .__.
i want a better mp3 lol I'm looking for one ^^"

[Easy]
00:16:202 (1) - [nazi] 1 grid right. Fixed!
01:10:433 (1) - remove new combo? Fixed!
01:19:279 (1) - ^ Fixed!
01:25:241 (1) - make this slider symmetrical? Fixed!

[Normal]
00:49:279 (2,3) - (2) 1 grid right, (3) 1 grid up, may be better? Fixed!
01:19:087 - add a note? Fixed!

[Hard]
00:06:779 (6) - [nazi] 1 grid up. Fixed!
00:15:818 (1) - remove new combo? and what about turn up the hitsounds a bit here? Fixed
00:18:510 (8) - [nazi] 1 grid down. Fixed!
00:43:125 (3,4,5) - made me confused... Hmm, I left that part as is because its the same as the later parts.

[Insane]
00:40:048 (2,3,4,5,1) - ...i don't know why beats are like these... Changed this part.
00:41:395 (3,4) - finish, or maybe clap?Added a finish to (4), but kept (3) the same.

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

Green = suggestion

[Normal]
01:22:548 (2) - Add a reverse. Fixed!

[Insane]
00:15:433 (8) - Reduce by 1/4, that sound better. Fixed!
00:15:818 (1) - Add a "Finish" Didn't add one because there's not finish sound in the music at that part.
00:23:702 (1) - New combo Fixed!
01:00:433 (1) - Add note with a "Finish" Modified this part.
01:09:279 (7) - Add a "Finish" at the begin Didn't add one because there's not finish sound in the music at that part.
01:17:741 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:894 (1) - ^ ^

Thank you both ^^

Star~

thepianist wrote:

Hello - thanks for looking at both of my maps ^^ Just a few suggestions - you don't have to follow them if you think they don't work. :]

[Easy]
00:09:664 (4) - (move down a grid? *shot. Or move 00:09:279 (3,4) - up a grid. Sorry ><) Fixed

[Normal]
01:19:087 (3,1) - I think it'll work better if these were combined into one slider. ie Something like this but looks nicer Fixed!

SPOILER

01:22:164 (x) - Same as ^ Fixed!
01:16:010 (x), 01:18:318 (x), 01:24:471 (x), etc... as in the first chorus too - I keep expecting a note. Actually like 00:33:125 (1,2,3) - in hard... Kept this part the same, sorry ):

[Hard]
00:14:856 (4) - Consider V so it follows the vocals better. Hmm...kept it as-is because the clap pattern would be broken if i did this.

SPOILER

00:36:202 (1,2) - I keep expecting a note... Fixed!
00:39:087 (x) - Put one more note in? Fixed!

[Insane]
01:19:087 (1) - Consider V to follow the vocals. Fixed!

SPOILER

or more like 01:22:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

Overall a well made map ^^ *Star

Derekku wrote:

Sorry it took me so long to get to this D:!

[General]
*I recommend ending the kiai earlier (at 00:41:587) so that the next set of notes aren't flashing like it's still kiai time.
*Video size is a bit big for just a tv size song... (11.3MB) and it still has audio ;X
*Offset feels a bit early (especially with the popping drum sound throughout the song...) 3,910 seems to work much better imo. (Remember to resnap on all diffs)

[Easy]
00:13:524 (2) - a bit hidden under the slider.. how about moving this down between 1/3 instead?
00:59:293 (3,4,1) - overlap is a bit messy
*Other than that, a very nice easy~

[Normal]
00:47:562 (1,2) - 1 is kinda unpredictable being in a triplet pattern like this... maybe make 1/2 a slider instead?

[Hard]
00:43:138 (3,4,5) - I see what you're doing, but this feels very awkward to play... Removing the repeats seems to fit better, but it's up to you.
00:44:677 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:215 (2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]
*The only issue I have with this diff is I think that some of the streams are spaced too far-apart.
00:33:909 (4,5,6,7,8) - not too bad, but 6 isn't lined up evenly
00:40:062 (2,3,4,5,1) - try to make it more apparent that this is a stream; right now the odd shape is kinda ambiguous
00:43:139 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd like to see these a bit closer..
00:44:678 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spaced into a straighter line would be less evil ;X
00:46:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - mehh I guess this one is okay
00:47:562 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - again, a bit hard to see that this is a stream. spacing 2,4,5,6,1 a bit closer would be better
01:00:447 (1,2,3,4,1) - a tiny bit closer please

Overall: Very nice job! :B

Weezy wrote:

Sorry for the wait >w<

Easy
- Uncheck letterbox during breaks, breaks aren't being used
00:25:833 (4,1) switch the combos?
00:33:140 (1)
more like this:

SPOILER

Normal
- Uncheck letterbox during breaks, breaks aren't being used
Seems fine

Hard
- Uncheck letterbox during breaks, breaks aren't being used
Seems fine

Insane
- Uncheck letterbox during breaks, breaks aren't being used
01:20:833 (1,2) Delete these and change to a slider?

Awesome map

kissfly wrote:

General
Nice map.There are no clearly problem,So i do some details mod . four dif's finish hitsound is diffierent.I help you integrate it.

Easy
00:03:910 1,finish
00:26:217 1,2 grid diffierent from 2,3
00:30:063 1,finish
00:41:602 4,finish
01:00:833 1,finish
01:10:063 3,last circle's finish remove
01:14:697 1,finish

Normal
00:03:910 1,finish
00:41:602 4,finish
01:14:697 1,finish

Hard
00:30:063 1,finish
00:41:602 4,finish
01:13:140 1,2 finish

Insane
00:03:910 1,finish
00:42:371 1,finish
00:48:525 1,finish
01:20:833 1,finish

Sweet messages:
nice nice nice!!!only take in advance.hitsound you use my mod can be at ease.Hope to rank at once
It's my mod.Hope to like it^ ^
Star

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By mod request,

General
It's easy to tell that you have to snap the timing sections.
Can you do that?
Oh, and if I don't seem to be consistent, can you be consistent in your finishes and claps?

Easy
00:28:525 - add finish?
00:36:217 - ^
01:13:140 - ^
01:25:256 (1,2) - all finish

Normal
00:28:525 - add finish?
00:40:640 (1,2,3) - all finish
00:47:563 - ^
01:13:140 - ^
01:25:256 (1,2,3) - ^

Hard
00:40:640 (1,3,4) - add finish
01:11:602 (1) - ^
01:25:256 (1,2,3) - ^

Insane
00:17:756 (7) - new combo
00:40:640 (1,3) - add finish


Star worthy!

• • Add some Tags

• • 00:43:621 (8) - Delete this circle
  • 00:45:159 (7) - ^
  • 00:46:698 (7) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Add some Tags

[Insane]

• • 00:43:621 (8) - Delete this circle
  • 00:45:159 (7) - ^
  • 00:46:698 (7) - ^

Awesome map, I really like it.

Derekku wrote:

I was going to rank this, but I'd rather it have a better mp3.

After a little searching I found this one: http://puu.sh/GIv Save it and replace the old one with it. The offset is a little bit off, so use 3,840 instead. If you press f3, make sure the checkbox is filled (http://puu.sh/GIx) and press the left arrow (http://puu.sh/GIA) to change 3,910 to 3,840, you shouldn't need to resnap (since it will do it for you). You will, however, need to adjust all of your green inherited sections since they will be much too late. Also, remember to fix the preview point. The video offset felt a little off before, so now I think its okay (unless you want to adjust it as well).

Besides that, I only have a couple minor things I'd like to say that wouldn't have prevented me from ranking this, but are suggestions.

Easy: The diff settings are pretty close to Normal's, so perhaps lower Drain/AR/OD by 1 tick each?
Normal: I think you meant to put a clap at the end of 00:47:503 (1).
Hard: 00:27:179 (1) - Why is this shorter than the spinner on Insane? I suggest removing 3 and starting it there instead.
Hard: 01:24:679 (3,1) - This jump is much larger than I'd expect for a Hard. Could you make it a bit smaller?

Let me know what you'd like to do!

Derekku wrote:

Everything looks good, but I just noticed something. The mp3 I gave you IS of much better quality, but there seems to be a tiny blip at the beginning of the first chorus. It's almost unnoticeable and I only heard it because I'm wearing earphones. I want to double check the offset to make sure that the blip doesn't cause a problem, but I think it's fine. I'll test it when I get home from uni in three hours since I'm on a different computer than I usually mod on. While you're waiting, I have two more tiny things that you might want to look at (but please don't give me more kd):

Normal: 00:59:224 (3) - I thought this looked weird when I modded it last. I think there should be another repeat (with a clap, of course), since you have some type of note on 01:00:378 in all difficulties.
Hard: 01:25:186 (1,2,3,4) - The jump from 01:24:609 (3) to 01:25:186 (1) is still a bit big. If you look at the first chorus, 00:39:993 (3,1) isn't a jump at all. Then, if you look at insane, there aren't any jumps at the end of the choruses. I don't mind if you make the triangle bigger (like you have at the end of the first chorus), but how about rotating it so that (1) is like this instead of this?

Derekku wrote:

Alright, should be good now. I can't rank this because of the timing/mp3 change, but I can definitely rebubble it.