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cillia - FIRST [OsuMania]

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-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Takane6 wrote:

IRC Mod
23:34 -SI-: gan
23:35 -SI-: dah di upload
23:35 Takane6: oke
23:36 Takane6: mau mod irc ato post forum aja?
23:37 -SI-: yg HD+ irc aja
23:37 Takane6: eh? itu kan GD?
23:38 -SI-: yg HD+ itu lagi progres ama orang, jadi yg di mod cuman HD sama MX
23:38 -SI-: eh
23:38 -SI-: salah bicara tadi :v
23:38 Takane6: haah~~~
23:38 -SI-: hilangin kata "YG HD+"
23:38 Takane6: oke
23:38 -SI-: yg HD+ GD
23:38 -SI-: (y)
23:39 *Takane6 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/612789 Cillia - FIRST [MX]]
23:40 Takane6: 00:52:970 - delete 1 note (karena gk cocok kalo 2 note yang sbenarnya gk ada sound)
23:42 -SI-: next
23:42 Takane6: 00:51:944 (51944|0,52101|2) - delete (gk kedengeran klo ada suara di garis birunya)
23:43 Takane6: 00:53:601 - delete 1 note (karena gk cocok kalo 2 note yang sbenarnya gk ada sound)
23:44 Takane6: 01:09:470 - no sound, delete
23:45 Takane6: 01:13:970 - ada sound, add 2 note
23:46 Takane6: 01:16:733 (76733|1) - move ke 01:16:812
23:46 Takane6: yang itu semua buat MX ^
23:47 -SI-: ok
23:48 Takane6: 01:22:023 (82023|1,82180|2,82338|1,82496|2,82496|1) - ctrl+h biar lebih enak dimainin
23:50 Takane6: nah!skarang yang HD
23:50 *Takane6 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/621689 Cillia - FIRST [HD]]
23:50 -SI-: ok
23:51 Takane6: 01:14:444 - add note
23:51 Takane6: 01:14:444 - ^
23:51 -SI-: itu timenya kok sama? maksudnya? add note 2x?
23:52 Takane6: eh
23:52 Takane6: tunggu
23:52 Takane6: 01:14:917 - yang ini maksudnya
23:52 Takane6: 01:16:812 - add note
23:52 -SI-: ok
23:53 Takane6: 01:17:444 - add note
23:53 Takane6: dari 02:25:338 sampai 02:35:286 - gak boleh kosong... harus ada note
23:54 -SI-: ok, add note
23:54 Takane6: 02:02:601 - add note
23:54 Takane6: 02:02:680 (122680|2,122680|1) - kenapa di biru? delete
23:55 -SI-: salah perhitungan tuh :v
23:55 -SI-: ok, lanjut
23:55 Takane6: 02:15:549 - add note
23:56 Takane6: udah... itu aja.. 
23:56 -SI-: =="a thanks
thanks for mod diff HD & MX :)
Bray-
Bray-
No Kudosu

SHOOT STAR >w<)/
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Brian_Ex wrote:

No Kudosu

SHOOT STAR >w<)/
thank you very much >w<)/
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in PH Community Modding Team!~ >w<)/
[MOD]

Correct BG image: 1366 x 768 not 1360 x 768
Uncheck > Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard)
|1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
00:48:707 (48707|2,49023|0) - Ctrl + H because as what from your previous pattern like this 00:47:444 (47444|1,47759|3,48075|1,48391|3) - They have the same pattern and rhythm/beats and instrument so do this for pattern and consistency

00:56:286 (56286|2,56601|0) - Ctrl + H same reason^

01:01:338 (61338|1) - Move to |3| ^

02:34:812 (154812|2) - Remove not necessary

02:41:444 (161444|3,161601|2) - Move to |2| - |1| because for pattern and hand balance/relaxation. If a newbie/nub play an EZ map like this with pattern like this one it's too hard for them so making this pattern a ladder make's it more relax able to hand

02:42:707 (162707|0,162865|1) - Move to |3| - |4| same reason^

[NM]
00:48:391 (48391|2,48707|1) - Ctrl + H for pattern and consistency

00:52:496 (52496|1) - Move to |3| for pattern. Same as this 00:50:601 (50601|1,50917|0,50917|1) -

00:56:286 (56286|3,56601|2,56601|1) - SN in |2| while the 2 Noted in |3| - |4| for pattern and consistency. The pattern that makes this consistent is 00:55:023 (55023|2,55338|1,55338|0) - Notice the pattern when you done this

01:22:812 (82812|1) - Move to |3| Pattern, Notice you precious and future patterns

01:49:023 Make this 2 noted as for this, sounds like this one they have 2 noted from your previous and future patterns

02:52:970 (172970|0) - Remove not necessary because of pattern. Refer to this 02:47:917 they have the same sounds but it only have 1 note in it

[HD]
00:41:128 How this become 2 noted while sounds like this one in your pattern is only 1 noted remove 00:41:128 (41128|2) - ?

00:48:707 (48707|1) - Remove not necessary because sounds like this one is only 1 noted just like 00:49:970 and 00:50:601 etc....

01:06:944 (66944|2) - Remove not necessary because there's no specific instrument to it. The guitar pitch just changed but it's not necessary to have SN

01:11:996 (71996|2) - Same reason^

01:18:075 Add note to |2| it's because sounds like this have 2 noted refer to the 2 noted parts in your pattern

01:23:128 Add note to |3| Same reason^ and pattern

01:55:417 (115417|2,115575|0) - Remove not necessary because if you listen closely/clearly there's no specific instrument in there just like before it's just a guitar pitch changed. It doesn't fits to be laddered

02:14:601 (134601|0,134680|1,134838|2) - What does this specify?

02:15:944 (135944|2,136101|1) - ^

02:33:233 (153233|2,153549|1) - Move to |2| - |1| pattern notice this 02:33:865 (153865|3,153865|1,154180|2,154180|0) -

02:46:575 (166575|2) - What does this specify?

02:55:180 (175180|2,175338|3,175338|1,175496|2,175654|3,175654|1) - I highly suggest this part to be SN ladder just like 00:43:023 (43023|0,43101|1,43180|2,43259|3,43338|2,43417|1,43496|0,43575|1,43654|2,43733|3,43812|2,43891|1,43970|2,44049|3,44128|2) - Drumbeat streams

02:59:128 (179128|3,179128|0) - Make this LN until 03:12:075 End of guitar pitch

[MX]
00:29:128 (29128|0) - Move to |2| then 00:29:444 (29444|3) - Move to |2| because of pattern. This one 00:29:444 is together because they have the same sounds as the other notes that are together

00:33:865 (33865|2) - Remove not necessary. Why this become 3 noted suddenly follow your pattern

01:00:391 Make this 3 noted they have the same with 01:01:023 and the others. Do the same with this 01:01:654 make this 3 noted too same reason. Then fix the pattern, always follow your own pattern.

01:04:496 Add note to |1| because it has impact and multiple instruments then 01:04:654 (64654|0) - Move to |4| for pattern and hand balance

........
Follow your pattern. Some parts that needs/must to be 3 noted have only 2 or even 1 just as what i saw in your pattern.

Nice map! Sorry for very late response from our queue~
Hope my MOD helps ;w;
Good luck!~ =w=)b
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-
MOD GraveChaos

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in PH Community Modding Team!~ >w<)/
[MOD]

Correct BG image: 1366 x 768 not 1360 x 768 ok
Uncheck > Song setup > Design > Widescreen support (This only applies to storyboard) ok

|1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
00:48:707 (48707|2,49023|0) - Ctrl + H because as what from your previous pattern like this 00:47:444 (47444|1,47759|3,48075|1,48391|3) - They have the same pattern and rhythm/beats and instrument so do this for pattern and consistency ok

00:56:286 (56286|2,56601|0) - Ctrl + H same reason^ ok

01:01:338 (61338|1) - Move to |3| ^ ok

02:34:812 (154812|2) - Remove not necessary not remove I will make it 02:34:812 (154812|2) - ended in 02:35:286 -

02:41:444 (161444|3,161601|2) - Move to |2| - |1| because for pattern and hand balance/relaxation. If a newbie/nub play an EZ map like this with pattern like this one it's too hard for them so making this pattern a ladder make's it more relax able to hand ok

02:42:707 (162707|0,162865|1) - Move to |3| - |4| same reason^ ok

[NM]
00:48:391 (48391|2,48707|1) - Ctrl + H for pattern and consistency ok

00:52:496 (52496|1) - Move to |3| for pattern. Same as this 00:50:601 (50601|1,50917|0,50917|1) - ok

00:56:286 (56286|3,56601|2,56601|1) - SN in |2| while the 2 Noted in |3| - |4| for pattern and consistency. The pattern that makes this consistent is 00:55:023 (55023|2,55338|1,55338|0) - Notice the pattern when you done this ok

01:22:812 (82812|1) - Move to |3| Pattern, Notice you precious and future patterns ok

01:49:023 Make this 2 noted as for this, sounds like this one they have 2 noted from your previous and future patterns ok

02:52:970 (172970|0) - Remove not necessary because of pattern. Refer to this 02:47:917 they have the same sounds but it only have 1 note in it Remove not necessary because of pattern. Refer to this ok

[HD]
00:41:128 How this become 2 noted while sounds like this one in your pattern is only 1 noted remove 00:41:128 (41128|2) - ? ok

00:48:707 (48707|1) - Remove not necessary because sounds like this one is only 1 noted just like 00:49:970 and 00:50:601 etc.... ok

01:06:944 (66944|2) - Remove not necessary because there's no specific instrument to it. The guitar pitch just changed but it's not necessary to have SN add SN in 01:06:707 - end in 01:07:023 - same like this 01:09:233 -

01:11:996 (71996|2) ok

01:18:075 Add note to |2| it's because sounds like this have 2 noted refer to the 2 note ok

01:23:128 Add note to |3| Same reason^ and pattern ok

01:55:417 (115417|2,115575|0) - Remove not necessary because if you listen closely/clearly there's no specific instrument in there just like before it's just a guitar pitch changed. It doesn't fits to be laddered ok

02:14:601 (134601|0,134680|1,134838|2) - What does this specify? remove note in blue line, and fix it

02:15:944 (135944|2,136101|1) - ^ same^

02:33:233 (153233|2,153549|1) - Move to |2| - |1| pattern notice this 02:33:865 (153865|3,153865|1,154180|2,154180|0) - ok

02:46:575 (166575|2) - What does this specify? same, remove, and fix it

02:55:180 (175180|2,175338|3,175338|1,175496|2,175654|3,175654|1) - I highly suggest this part to be SN ladder just like 00:43:023 (43023|0,43101|1,43180|2,43259|3,43338|2,43417|1,43496|0,43575|1,43654|2,43733|3,43812|2,43891|1,43970|2,44049|3,44128|2) - Drumbeat streams ok, remove, and add SN

02:59:128 (179128|3,179128|0) - Make this LN until 03:12:075 End of guitar pitch sorry too long, and is not suitable, because I took the rhythm most of the drum

[MX]
00:29:128 (29128|0) - Move to |2| then 00:29:444 (29444|3) - Move to |2| because of pattern. This one 00:29:444 is together because they have the same sounds as the other notes that are together ok

00:33:865 (33865|2) - Remove not necessary. Why this become 3 noted suddenly follow your pattern ok

01:00:391 Make this 3 noted they have the same with 01:01:023 and the others. Do the same with this 01:01:654 make this 3 noted too same reason. Then fix the pattern, always follow your own pattern. ok

01:04:496 Add note to |1| because it has impact and multiple instruments then 01:04:654 (64654|0) - Move to |4| for pattern and hand balance ok

........
Follow your pattern. Some parts that needs/must to be 3 noted have only 2 or even 1 just as what i saw in your pattern.

Nice map! Sorry for very late response from our queue~ it's okay ^^
Hope my MOD helps ;w;
Good luck!~ =w=)b

thanks to mod my map, [GraveChaos] :)
Last edited by -SI- , edited 2 times in total.
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Yo~
Personal requested Mod here (Sekalian sm yg MEGAFrim).

Column
|1|2|3|4|

HD
00:38:917 - Add note. The sound here is strong enough for two notes.
00:41:128 (41128|0) - Delete. The sound here aren't that strong for two note.
00:48:707 (48707|3) - ^
01:00:707 (60707|1) - ^
01:04:496 - The snapping felt incorrect. May I suggest something Like this?
01:07:023 - ^Like this?
01:09:549 - ^Like this?
01:10:812 - The notes aren't necessary. Delete.
01:11:996 - No Sound here. Delete.
01:12:075 -
If you follow the vocal synth, I suggest you to do something like this. http://puu.sh/fk2CR/f45ab1d06f.png
If you follow the Drum synth Move 01:12:391 (72391|1) to 01:12:549
01:55:023 - So messed up IMO. Try this http://puu.sh/fk3lp/d59b257ed3.png
01:57:549 - ^http://puu.sh/fk3sV/20e7e0dc11.png
02:00:075 - ^http://puu.sh/fk3yn/d60a54f31a.png
02:02:601 -
If you follow the Vocal synth Try this http://puu.sh/fk3GR/aeb3fa8b2e.png
If you follow the Drum synth Delete 02:02:917 (122917|1)
02:14:601 to 02:14:917 - Not fit to 1/4 IMO. Rearrange the pattern. My suggestion is delete 02:14:601 (134680|1,134838|2) .
02:15:865 to 02:16:180 - ^ Delete 02:15:865 (135944|2,136101|1)
02:24:786 - Delete. The Drum starts at 02:24:865
02:26:286 (146286|1) - Delete. Not that strong.
02:28:812 (148812|1) - ^
MX
00:29:128 - Add a note. 00:24:075 are using 3 notes.
00:33:865 - Delete a note. 00:28:812 are using 2 notes.
00:44:601 - Add a note.
00:45:233 - ^
00:53:128 - Delete a note.
01:04:496 - Pretty messed up. Suggestion. http://puu.sh/fk8Nx/eee6ad55b5.png
01:07:023 - ^http://puu.sh/fk8UL/a58bbcdba0.png
01:09:549 - ^http://puu.sh/fk917/f1ac9be93c.png
01:55:023 - ^http://puu.sh/fk9aL/ad908bbae3.png
01:57:865 - ^Move (117865|2) to 01:57:786, add one note there and on 01:58:023
02:00:075 - ^Try http://puu.sh/fk9wD/f058c2ac98.png
02:03:865 - ^http://puu.sh/fk9Oj/4c336fd2d3.png
02:31:023 - Add a note on 1 or 2
02:31:654 - ^
02:32:286 - ^on 4
02:32:917 - ^
02:33:233 - ^on 1 or 2
02:33:549 - ^on 4
02:33:865 - ^on 1 or 2
02:34:180 - ^on 1 or 4
02:34:496 - ^on 4
02:53:128 to 02:54:707 - What's with the 1/4? There's no sound to follow. I suggest to delete those.

Well, GL with your map. :)
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

MEGAtive wrote:

Yo~
Personal requested Mod here (Sekalian sm yg MEGAFrim).

Column
|1|2|3|4|

HD
00:38:917 - Add note. The sound here is strong enough for two notes. ok
00:41:128 (41128|0) - Delete. The sound here aren't that strong for two note. sorry,This has been in the previous mod
00:48:707 (48707|3) - ^ sorry,This has been in the previous mod
01:00:707 (60707|1) - ^ ok
01:04:496 - The snapping felt incorrect. May I suggest something Like this? i take this
01:07:023 - ^Like this? i take this
01:09:549 - ^Like this? i take this
01:10:812 - The notes aren't necessary. Delete. This has been in the previous mod
01:11:996 - No Sound here. Delete. sorry,This has been in the previous mod
01:12:075 - sorry,This has been in the previous mod
If you follow the vocal synth, I suggest you to do something like this. http://puu.sh/fk2CR/f45ab1d06f.png
If you follow the Drum synth Move 01:12:391 (72391|1) to 01:12:549 i take drum synth
01:55:023 - So messed up IMO. Try this http://puu.sh/fk3lp/d59b257ed3.png i take this
01:57:549 - ^http://puu.sh/fk3sV/20e7e0dc11.png i take this
02:00:075 - ^http://puu.sh/fk3yn/d60a54f31a.png i take this
02:02:601 -
If you follow the Vocal synth Try this http://puu.sh/fk3GR/aeb3fa8b2e.png i take vocal synth
If you follow the Drum synth Delete 02:02:917 (122917|1)
02:14:601 to 02:14:917 - Not fit to 1/4 IMO. Rearrange the pattern. My suggestion is delete 02:14:601 (134680|1,134838|2) . sorry,This has been in the previous mod
02:15:865 to 02:16:180 - ^ Delete 02:15:865 (135944|2,136101|1) sorry,This has been in the previous mod
02:24:786 - Delete. The Drum starts at 02:24:865 ok
02:26:286 (146286|1) - Delete. Not that strong. ok
02:28:812 (148812|1) - ^ ok
MX
00:29:128 - Add a note. 00:24:075 are using 3 notes. ok
00:33:865 - Delete a note. 00:28:812 are using 2 notes. sorry,This has been in the previous mod
00:44:601 - Add a note. sorry,This has been in the previous mod
00:45:233 - ^ sorry,This has been in the previous mod
00:53:128 - Delete a note. sorry,This has been in the previous mod
01:04:496 - Pretty messed up. Suggestion. http://puu.sh/fk8Nx/eee6ad55b5.png take your suggest
01:07:023 - ^http://puu.sh/fk8UL/a58bbcdba0.png take your suggest
01:09:549 - ^http://puu.sh/fk917/f1ac9be93c.png take your suggest
01:55:023 - ^http://puu.sh/fk9aL/ad908bbae3.png take your suggest
01:57:865 - ^Move (117865|2) to 01:57:786, add one note there and on 01:58:023 take your suggest
02:00:075 - ^Try http://puu.sh/fk9wD/f058c2ac98.png take your suggest
02:03:865 - ^http://puu.sh/fk9Oj/4c336fd2d3.png take your suggest
02:31:023 - Add a note on 1 or 2 ok
02:31:654 - ^ ok
02:32:286 - ^on 4 ok
02:32:917 - ^ ok
02:33:233 - ^on 1 or 2 ok
02:33:549 - ^on 4 ok
02:33:865 - ^on 1 or 2 ok
02:34:180 - ^on 1 or 4 ok
02:34:496 - ^on 4 ok
02:53:128 to 02:54:707 - What's with the 1/4? There's no sound to follow. I suggest to delete those.fix it


Well, GL with your map. :)
Thanks to mod my map, MEGAtive :) really halpful ;)
Last edited by -SI- , edited 3 times in total.
-LASU-
343 posts
Joined December 2012
-LASU-
Hi-
|1|2|3|4|
mod
NM
00:39:549 - ~ 00:42:707 - white line add note

MX
01:10:812 - add note 1
01:11:601 - add note 4
01:15:707 - add note
01:16:970 - add note 4
01:19:338 - add note 1
01:37:338 (97338|0) - delete
01:56:601 - add note 4
02:02:601 - add note 2
02:30:391 - add note 1
02:37:023 - ^
02:47:128 - ^
02:51:865 - add note 4
good luck
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

-LASU- wrote:

Hi-
|1|2|3|4|
mod
NM
00:39:549 - ~ 00:42:707 - white line add note ok

MX
01:10:812 - add note 1 sorry
01:11:601 - add note 4 ok
01:15:707 - add note ok
01:16:970 - add note 4 ok
01:19:338 - add note 1 ok
01:37:338 (97338|0) - delete ok
01:56:601 - add note 4 ok
02:02:601 - add note 2 ok
02:30:391 - add note 1 ok
02:37:023 - ^ ok
02:47:128 - ^ ok
02:51:865 - add note 4 ok
good luck
Thanks to mod my map, -LASU- :)
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
Heya..

MOD from ingame chat ^.^

uh.. apa ak bener bener di butuhin di sini? map nya hampir perfect soalnya ^.^

ok deh

[General]

FINE ^.^

[MOD]

EZ
Clear~

NM
00:46:180 (46180|2,46496|1) - Ctrl G, ngikut pattern sebelumnya

00:50:601 (50601|1) - Move ke 3, ngikut atasnya

00:53:286 (53286|3,53444|2,53444|0) - Jadiin 3 - 2&4

dah.. yang lainnya Fine~

HD
00:44:601 (44601|0,44601|1) - Move ke 2&3
00:45:865 (45865|0,45865|1) - ^ 2&4

00:52:338 (52338|1) - Move ke 3 ngikut belakang
ato
00:51:865 (51865|0,51865|1,52023|0,52180|3,52180|2,52338|1) - jadi gini =>

dah ngga ada lagi

tuh kan bener.. sepertinya ak di sini cuman untuk shoot star aja

here ^.^ ps.. bentar nunggu MOD ku doi BM lain di bayar dolo ya ^.^

GL ^.^
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Pharos21 wrote:

Heya..

MOD from ingame chat ^.^

uh.. apa ak bener bener di butuhin di sini? map nya hampir perfect soalnya ^.^

ok deh

[General]

FINE ^.^

[MOD]

EZ
Clear~

NM
00:46:180 (46180|2,46496|1) - Ctrl G, ngikut pattern sebelumnya ok

00:50:601 (50601|1) - Move ke 3, ngikut atasnya ok

00:53:286 (53286|3,53444|2,53444|0) - Jadiin 3 - 2&4 ok

dah.. yang lainnya Fine~

HD
00:44:601 (44601|0,44601|1) - Move ke 2&3 ok
00:45:865 (45865|0,45865|1) - ^ 2&4 ok

00:52:338 (52338|1) - Move ke 3 ngikut belakang
ato
00:51:865 (51865|0,51865|1,52023|0,52180|3,52180|2,52338|1) - jadi gini => take this

dah ngga ada lagi

tuh kan bener.. sepertinya ak di sini cuman untuk shoot star aja

here ^.^ ps.. bentar nunggu MOD ku doi BM lain di bayar dolo ya ^.^

GL ^.^
thanks dah di mod gan =3=)b
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-
THANKS Pharos21 to SHOOT STAR >w< ) /
Lunatic Raccoon
546 posts
Joined May 2013
Lunatic Raccoon
Hi -SI- here comes my requested mod <3
Since it's pretty long, i'll just take MX to mod
General
  1. I'm kind of curious about the Title... Maybe "FIRST" is enough already?
  2. Holy moly, this song is good
MX
  1. 00:30:707 (30707|2) - Move to col 1
  2. 00:42:865 (42865|3) - I think this note is quite unnecessary. Remove?
  3. For kicks like these: 00:45:707 - 00:46:812 - 00:46:970,...(and MANY more). Doubling all of them them would be better. If you don't want it to be too hard then do it like this: Take 00:46:812 as an example, double the note at 00:46:812 only while still keeping the note at 00:46:970 single
  4. 00:59:444 - There's a cymbal here, triple it
  5. Please be careful with note density. All the sounds that you tripled should be keep tripled all the time, except if there isn't any blank space left. And don't triple the sounds that were used as doubles before, except when it's a specifically special sound
  6. 01:13:575 - Add
  7. The rest of the pattern are fine enough to me. But please, be careful on note density
Good luck!
-SI-
105 posts
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Topic Starter
-SI-

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi -SI- here comes my requested mod <3
Since it's pretty long, i'll just take MX to mod
General
  1. I'm kind of curious about the Title... Maybe "FIRST" is enough already?
  2. Holy moly, this song is good thanks <3
MX
  1. 00:30:707 (30707|2) - Move to col 1 ok
  2. 00:42:865 (42865|3) - I think this note is quite unnecessary. Remove? ok
  3. For kicks like these: 00:45:707 - 00:46:812 - 00:46:970,...(and MANY more). Doubling all of them them would be better. If you don't want it to be too hard then do it like this: Take 00:46:812 as an example, double the note at 00:46:812 only while still keeping the note at 00:46:970 single ok
  4. 00:59:444 - There's a cymbal here, triple it ok
  5. Please be careful with note density. All the sounds that you tripled should be keep tripled all the time, except if there isn't any blank space left. And don't triple the sounds that were used as doubles before, except when it's a specifically special sound i will be carefull for the next bm, if i make a new bm again
  6. 01:13:575 - Add ok
  7. The rest of the pattern are fine enough to me. But please, be careful on note density ok

Good luck!
thanks to mod. raccoon :)
update!
pporse
362 posts
Joined October 2014
pporse
hi~

from pm :3

column set
1 2 3 4

MOD
[EZ]
01:15:233 - add note
01:16:496 - ^
01:19:023 - ^
01:20:286 - ^
01:21:549 - ^
01:22:812 - ^
01:25:338 - ^
01:26:601 - ^
01:29:128 - ^
there have drumbass sounds

02:05:128 ~ 02:25:338 - ^ similar part

umm..is ur intention?
probably for EZ diff, u don't use them..right?
if yes, ignore above mod :3
but i think..it is better to add notes

it's up to you :3


[NM]
01:10:970 - add note on 4th column
drumbass sound

and..good :3

nice diff


[HD]
00:43:023 - umm..recommend using drum roll
EZ, NM, HD all same pattern in there (only one LN..)
so i think it needs new pattern.
how about this?


00:46:812 (46812|1,46970|3) - move to 3rd column

00:49:338 (49338|0,49496|0) - move to 3rd or 4th column

00:54:312 - add note on 3rd column
need note in there

01:04:101 - add note on 4th column
drum roll is started at 01:04:101 -

01:20:286 (80286|1) - delete. need not chord
01:20:444 (80444|0) - move to 2nd column

01:56:996 (116996|3,117312|3) - delete. there have no sounds
01:56:917 - add note on 4th column
01:57:233 - add note on 4th column

02:05:444 (125444|2) - move to 2nd column

02:10:417 (130417|2,131207|2) - delete. there have no sounds
02:17:523 (137523|2) - ^

02:25:259 - add note

02:55:180 - use drum roll sound.

[MX]
00:43:023 ~ 00:43:654 - how about using 1/2 snap ?
i know that there is sound on 1/4 snap. but so low
so i recommend to use just 1/2 snap in this part.

01:04:101 - add note

01:12:075 (72075|0) - change endpoint until 01:13:338
01:13:338 - add LN until 01:13:970
01:13:575 (73575|2) - move to 4th column
01:13:654 (73654|3) - delete. there has no sound.
01:13:970 (73970|1) - move to 1st column

01:51:549 (111549|3,111865|1) - the LNs mean vocal sounds?
if yes, misplaced. located on red line
if no, LN is really not suited. change to normal note.

02:08:207 (128207|3) - delete
02:14:680 (134680|3,134838|3) - ^
there have no sounds
actually, this map seems to have a lot of overmapping notes.
pattern is good. when i played this map, really fun but...
i don't know that BN (beatmap nominator) accepts it..;w;

good luck :3
Muu-chan
1,605 posts
Joined August 2014
Muu-chan
mark this ^^
done with some irc mod~
SPOILER
2015-02-18 11:38 Muu-chan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2792077
2015-02-18 11:40 -SI-: ok
2015-02-18 11:41 Muu-chan: aku saran hapus aja LN2 kaya gini~ 00:46:496 (46496|1,47128|0,49023|1,49654|3) - 
2015-02-18 11:41 Muu-chan: cuman bikin susah toh ngga nambah star .w.
2015-02-18 11:41 Muu-chan: ga ada suara yg fit juga sama LNnya
2015-02-18 11:41 -SI-: .w.
2015-02-18 11:41 Muu-chan: 00:52:180 (52180|0) - 
2015-02-18 11:42 Muu-chan: karena dominannya drum
2015-02-18 11:42 Muu-chan: jadi agak aneh kalo di kasih LN
2015-02-18 11:42 -SI-: musti apyus aja lnnya
2015-02-18 11:42 Muu-chan: 00:54:707 (54707|3) - 
2015-02-18 11:42 Muu-chan: yups, dihapus aja. jd tambah ribet soalnya .w. ga enak diliat juga
2015-02-18 11:43 -SI-: ok
2015-02-18 11:43 Muu-chan: eh disini ada brp note? 00:44:444 - 
2015-02-18 11:43 -SI-: 2
2015-02-18 11:43 Muu-chan: di kolom brp aja?
2015-02-18 11:44 -SI-: 2,4
2015-02-18 11:44 Muu-chan: kaya gambar kan?
2015-02-18 11:44 Muu-chan: 00:44:444 (44444|3) - yg ini dihapus aja .w.
2015-02-18 11:45 Muu-chan: eh iya terus yg kaya gini 00:44:759 (44759|1,45391|2) - 
2015-02-18 11:45 Muu-chan: ngikutin drum aja, jd mending di hapus
2015-02-18 11:45 -SI-: ok
2015-02-18 11:45 Muu-chan: disini bisa dikasih 00:46:101 - 
2015-02-18 11:45 Muu-chan: nah kaya gini kosong 00:46:654 - kan ngikutin drum
2015-02-18 11:46 Muu-chan: 00:47:286 (47286|2) - dihapus~
2015-02-18 11:46 Muu-chan: 00:47:601 (47601|2) - 
2015-02-18 11:46 Muu-chan: hapus~
2015-02-18 11:46 Muu-chan: coba dengerin lagi drumnya
2015-02-18 11:46 -SI-: ok
2015-02-18 11:47 Muu-chan: 00:47:917 (47917|2) - ^
2015-02-18 11:47 -SI-: masalah LN gimana ? di hps?
2015-02-18 11:47 Muu-chan: 00:48:628 - bisa ditambah
2015-02-18 11:47 Muu-chan: iya dihapus aja
2015-02-18 11:47 Muu-chan: 00:49:812 (49812|0,50128|2) - hapus
2015-02-18 11:47 Muu-chan: 00:50:444 (50444|2) - 
2015-02-18 11:47 Muu-chan: 00:51:154 - bisa ditambah
2015-02-18 11:48 Muu-chan: .w. coba didengerin lagi ya~
2015-02-18 11:48 Muu-chan: sama dibenerin patternnya~
2015-02-18 11:48 Muu-chan: terus LN2 yg ga fit ke suara apapun, di hapus aja .w.
2015-02-18 11:48 -SI-: ok
2015-02-18 11:48 Muu-chan: mau masuk dulu jaa~
2015-02-18 11:48 -SI-: ok .w.
2015-02-18 11:48 -SI-: makasih
2015-02-18 11:49 Muu-chan: jangan takut star berkurang kalo note di hapus atau sebaliknya~
2015-02-18 11:49 Muu-chan: karena star itu berdasar pattern, bukan banyak note nya~ banyak gpp asal cocok sama instrumentnya
2015-02-18 11:50 Muu-chan: kalo ga fit nanti cuman jd ghost note .w.
2015-02-18 11:50 -SI-: aku nga tau, sangka aku star tambah karena kebanyakan note, ternyata tergantung pattern T.T
2015-02-18 11:50 Muu-chan: .w. ahah bukan
2015-02-18 11:50 -SI-: ok, sekarang aku tau :3
2015-02-18 11:50 -SI-: sekarang baru ngerti >w< #bego
2015-02-18 11:50 Muu-chan: gpp , sama2 belajar ko xD
2015-02-18 11:51 -SI-: :)
2015-02-18 11:52 -SI-: semua lndi hps kan?
2015-02-18 11:52 Muu-chan: ya kalo ga fit di hapus aja
2015-02-18 11:53 -SI-: ok
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-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

pporse wrote:

hi~

from pm :3

column set
1 2 3 4

MOD
[EZ]
01:15:233 - add note
01:16:496 - ^
01:19:023 - ^
01:20:286 - ^
01:21:549 - ^
01:22:812 - ^
01:25:338 - ^
01:26:601 - ^
01:29:128 - ^
there have drumbass sounds

02:05:128 ~ 02:25:338 - ^ similar part

umm..is ur intention?
probably for EZ diff, u don't use them..right?
if yes, ignore above mod :3
but i think..it is better to add notes

it's up to you :3 sorry


[NM]
01:10:970 - add note on 4th column ok
drumbass sound

and..good :3

nice diff


[HD]
00:43:023 - umm..recommend using drum roll
EZ, NM, HD all same pattern in there (only one LN..)
so i think it needs new pattern.
how about this? i take this


00:46:812 (46812|1,46970|3) - move to 3rd column ok

00:49:338 (49338|0,49496|0) - move to 3rd or 4th column ok

00:54:312 - add note on 3rd column ok
need note in there

01:04:101 - add note on 4th column ok
drum roll is started at 01:04:101 -

01:20:286 (80286|1) - delete. need not chord ok
01:20:444 (80444|0) - move to 2nd column ok

01:56:996 (116996|3,117312|3) - delete. there have no sounds ok
01:56:917 - add note on 4th column ok
01:57:233 - add note on 4th column ok

02:05:444 (125444|2) - move to 2nd column ok

02:10:417 (130417|2,131207|2) - delete. there have no sounds ok
02:17:523 (137523|2) - ^ ok

02:25:259 - add note ok

02:55:180 - use drum roll sound. ok

[MX]
00:43:023 ~ 00:43:654 - how about using 1/2 snap ?
i know that there is sound on 1/4 snap. but so low
so i recommend to use just 1/2 snap in this part. ok

01:04:101 - add note ok

01:12:075 (72075|0) - change endpoint until 01:13:338 ok
01:13:338 - add LN until 01:13:970 ok
01:13:575 (73575|2) - move to 4th column ok
01:13:654 (73654|3) - delete. there has no sound. ok
01:13:970 (73970|1) - move to 1st column ok

01:51:549 (111549|3,111865|1) - the LNs mean vocal sounds?
if yes, misplaced. located on red line
if no, LN is really not suited. change to normal note. no vocal, delete, and change to normal note

02:08:207 (128207|3) - delete ok
02:14:680 (134680|3,134838|3) - ^ ok
there have no sounds
actually, this map seems to have a lot of overmapping notes.
pattern is good. when i played this map, really fun but...
i don't know that BN (beatmap nominator) accepts it..;w;

good luck :3
Okay pporse,thanks for taking your time
thanks to mod my map :)
update! ^^
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-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Muu-chan wrote:

mark this ^^
okay mbak ^^ /
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Muu-chan wrote:

mark this ^^
ok mbak ^^
juankristal
osu! Alumni
1,408 posts
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juankristal
Hi ! I think you asked me for a mod in-game chat so here is an attempt.

0/1/2/3

MX
00:52:180 (52180|0,52180|1) - Maybe that one needs to be a triple to follow the last patterns. You may also need to change the jacks incoming if you want to change this one
00:52:812 (52812|1,52812|2) - Same goes here
00:57:865 (57865|1,57865|0) - Here is the same but not sure cuz of the volume.
Seems like you use this sometimes, you can recheck it to see if you want to change all of them, some of them or none of them

01:03:944 - Add a note here, the drum stream stars on the previous white I think.
01:24:154 (84154|3) - Delete this one, follows the last patter I guess and also there are no need to put that note there.
01:23:444 (83444|2) - I doubled the whites here on this LN (01:24:391 (84391|2) - But this one I keep it as a single note). Thas to follow the doubles patter previously made by you.
01:24:707 (84707|2) - In this part you can keep the singles because of the new patter with other simples. But you can also make doubles for the whites too.
01:25:733 (85733|2) - Maybe delete that one, fits better at least for me

01:34:338 (94338|0,94654|0) - I dont like this doubles. The drums are allways at the same intensity so keeping all that pattern with simples should be fine.
01:34:496 (94496|0) - Buut, this can be double if you want I think.

01:35:286 (95286|1,95444|2,95601|1) - This is a suggestion. You can follow the sound here too to "fill" the space here.
I suggest you can:
01:35:444 (95444|2) - Move to 3
01:35:365 - Add note (in 2 slot)
01:35:523 - Add note on 2

I wasnt paying attention to this but you need to add more hitsounds I think. 01:39:865 (99865|2) - Here is a Finish one, and you can add the finish also in the others parts of the song where are *crashes* :P

01:41:128 (101128|0,101128|2,101128|3) - Why is this one a triple? Change it to double at least because of the intensity of the sound and the pattern followed.
01:46:338 (106338|0) - Maybe make this one a double because of the drum here?
01:47:444 (107444|0,107444|2,107444|3) - Change this one to double I think, not the same sound that the previous one. Also fits better the next pattern I think

01:47:917 (107917|2,108075|3,108075|1) - Here I suggest the same thing previously. You can follow the other song using a similar pattern. Something like a stair, you may also change the next double to fit the pattern if you keep this suggestion.
01:49:970 (109970|1) - Here is another note where you should add a Finish hitsound.

01:54:075 (114075|3) - About here I also not sure... You used doubles for that sound and now triples in similar patterns. Yeah, there is a double on the previous note but not sure, maybe you can change it too.

01:56:917 (116917|3) - This one is a double I think.
01:56:759 (116759|2,116838|3) - Here is where the jack should be I think. Then finishing with that double as you do in the next patterns. I suggest jacks on slot 2
01:56:680 (116680|1) - You can delete this note too.
01:57:786 - Why there is no notes here? I hear a beat, you should add one. Or move the white one I think is better.

02:01:023 (121023|3,121023|2) - This may be a triple as the previous one, same sound.
02:01:970 (121970|2,121970|0) - Same goes here.

02:07:023 (127023|2,127023|0,127023|1) - This I feel its not a triple too, the sound is not that intense. Change it to double maybe
02:07:338 (127338|2,127338|1) - But this one is a triple indeed :P
02:07:970 (127970|1,127970|0) - Same here, try to keep mapping the same sound with the same amount of keys

02:22:180 (142180|1,142180|0,142180|2) - Same goes here

02:24:707 (144707|0) - Make this double
02:24:786 (144786|1) - Delete that one, the stream stars in the red one.

02:37:812 (157812|3) - Delete hitsounds, avoid having triple hitsounds in the same note, it is too intense xD. Maybe having 2 is not bad, but try with one.


How about this? (I deleted one red because there wasnt any sound here I think)

02:49:496 - Why there is no sound here? Beat :P

02:51:549 (171549|0) - This as a simple maybe is not enought. You can change the red ones doubles to simples and make this a triple or a double.

02:55:101 (175101|0) - Delete this one, the streams starts on the red one

02:55:812 - Drum here, add a note.

You can finish the song with a LN if you want :P

Thats all for now, maybe I will check the other diffs soon. Good luck !
therevenant_old
86 posts
Joined November 2013
therevenant_old
hi there, modu desu from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

SPOILER
EZ

00:19:022 (19022|3) - move 4 to 1
00:29:128 (29128|3) - same, i dunnow if you map like this, but you usually (at least i do) put the lowest pitched note to the left

00:19:022 (19022|3) - 00:24:075 (24075|0) - 00:29:128 (29128|3) - 00:34:180 (34180|0) - 00:38:917 (38917|0) - consider making these long notes (that would end at the note after them) to map the hi-hat cymbals

00:44:444 - add 1, keep your pattern
01:34:970 - same

01:44:601 (104601|3) - no drum combo here this time, so i dont think you need a long note
consider making it a simple note and add 1 at 01:44:759 -

NM

refer to previous diff for what i said about the cymbals at the beginning

00:39:549 (39549|2) - move 3 to 2

00:44:444 - you know what's up, add 1, ill skip this from now on, if you take on my advice, dont forget to add it to the whole song.

00:53:444 (53444|2) - move 3, keep it smouth
01:01:970 (61970|2) - same here

01:38:601 (98601|1) - consider keeping a straight pattern like 01:37:338 (97338|2) - through this whole part, so you get the smooth pattern in the first verse and the straight pattern in the second, if you do so, fix this whole part.

HD

I think that starting HD you can add some moar difficulty in the intro by mapping the keyboard (that electronic/dunstep sound starting at 00:08:917 - )

00:19:022 (19022|2) - do i have to say it again ? up to you

00:39:865 (39865|0) - move 1 to 2

not much to say otherwise.

hoping i made you progress, cyaa~~
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

juankristal wrote:

Hi ! I think you asked me for a mod in-game chat so here is an attempt.

0/1/2/3

MX
00:52:180 (52180|0,52180|1) - Maybe that one needs to be a triple to follow the last patterns. You may also need to change the jacks incoming if you want to change this one i think to, added triple note
00:52:812 (52812|1,52812|2) - Same goes here ok
00:57:865 (57865|1,57865|0) - Here is the same but not sure cuz of the volume. not added,because the volume
Seems like you use this sometimes, you can recheck it to see if you want to change all of them, some of them or none of them

01:03:944 - Add a note here, the drum stream stars on the previous white I think. ok
01:24:154 (84154|3) - Delete this one, follows the last patter I guess and also there are no need to put that note there. delete
01:23:444 (83444|2) - I doubled the whites here on this LN (01:24:391 (84391|2) - But this one I keep it as a single note). Thas to follow the doubles patter previously made by you. sorry,because, i follow previously
01:24:707 (84707|2) - In this part you can keep the singles because of the new patter with other simples. But you can also make doubles for the whites too. single
01:25:733 (85733|2) - Maybe delete that one, fits better at least for me delete

01:34:338 (94338|0,94654|0) - I dont like this doubles. The drums are allways at the same intensity so keeping all that pattern with simples should be fine. ok,delete
01:34:496 (94496|0) - Buut, this can be double if you want I think. sorry,i wll take single note

01:35:286 (95286|1,95444|2,95601|1) - This is a suggestion. You can follow the sound here too to "fill" the space here.
I suggest you can:
01:35:444 (95444|2) - Move to 3
01:35:365 - Add note (in 2 slot)
01:35:523 - Add note on 2 ok,take your suggest

I wasnt paying attention to this but you need to add more hitsounds I think. 01:39:865 (99865|2) - Here is a Finish one, and you can add the finish also in the others parts of the song where are *crashes* :P I will fix / add hitsound, thanks

01:41:128 (101128|0,101128|2,101128|3) - Why is this one a triple? Change it to double at least because of the intensity of the sound and the pattern followed. delete
01:46:338 (106338|0) - Maybe make this one a double because of the drum here? I think, the sound of the drum is not so strong, but the sound of drums will be stronger if in double, i will double this
01:47:444 (107444|0,107444|2,107444|3) - Change this one to double I think, not the same sound that the previous one. Also fits better the next pattern I think delete

01:47:917 (107917|2,108075|3,108075|1) - Here I suggest the same thing previously. You can follow the other song using a similar pattern. Something like a stair, you may also change the next double to fit the pattern if you keep this suggestion. keep your suggest
01:49:970 (109970|1) - Here is another note where you should add a Finish hitsound. This has given hitsound 01:49:970 (109970|3) -

01:54:075 (114075|3) - About here I also not sure... You used doubles for that sound and now triples in similar patterns. Yeah, there is a double on the previous note but not sure, maybe you can change it too. change

01:56:917 (116917|3) - This one is a double I think. add double
01:56:759 (116759|2,116838|3) - Here is where the jack should be I think. Then finishing with that double as you do in the next patterns. I suggest jacks on slot 2 sorry
01:56:680 (116680|1) - You can delete this note too. delete
01:57:786 - Why there is no notes here? I hear a beat, you should add one. Or move the white one I think is better. add note

02:01:023 (121023|3,121023|2) - This may be a triple as the previous one, same sound. add sound
02:01:970 (121970|2,121970|0) - Same goes here. ok

02:07:023 (127023|2,127023|0,127023|1) - This I feel its not a triple too, the sound is not that intense. Change it to double maybe ok
02:07:338 (127338|2,127338|1) - But this one is a triple indeed :P sorry, because I followed the double note
02:07:970 (127970|1,127970|0) - Same here, try to keep mapping the same sound with the same amount of keys ok

02:22:180 (142180|1,142180|0,142180|2) - Same goes here ok

02:24:707 (144707|0) - Make this double ok
02:24:786 (144786|1) - Delete that one, the stream stars in the red one. ok

02:37:812 (157812|3) - Delete hitsounds, avoid having triple hitsounds in the same note, it is too intense xD. Maybe having 2 is not bad, but try with one. xD ok


How about this? (I deleted one red because there wasnt any sound here I think) in red have a sound, take your suggest, but not delete note in red

02:49:496 - Why there is no sound here? Beat :P added note

02:51:549 (171549|0) - This as a simple maybe is not enought. You can change the red ones doubles to simples and make this a triple or a double. ok

02:55:101 (175101|0) - Delete this one, the streams starts on the red one ok

02:55:812 - Drum here, add a note. ok

You can finish the song with a LN if you want :P

Thats all for now, maybe I will check the other diffs soon. Good luck !
Thank you very much to mod :)
-SI-
105 posts
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Topic Starter
-SI-

therevenant wrote:

hi there, modu desu from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

SPOILER
EZ

00:19:022 (19022|3) - move 4 to 1 ok
00:29:128 (29128|3) - same, i dunnow if you map like this, but you usually (at least i do) put the lowest pitched note to the left

00:19:022 (19022|3) - 00:24:075 (24075|0) - 00:29:128 (29128|3) - 00:34:180 (34180|0) - 00:38:917 (38917|0) - consider making these long notes (that would end at the note after them) to map the hi-hat cymbals ok

00:44:444 - add 1, keep your pattern ok
01:34:970 - same ok

01:44:601 (104601|3) - no drum combo here this time, so i dont think you need a long note
consider making it a simple note and add 1 at 01:44:759 - sorry

NM

refer to previous diff for what i said about the cymbals at the beginning sorry

00:39:549 (39549|2) - move 3 to 2 keep on 3

00:44:444 - you know what's up, add 1, ill skip this from now on, if you take on my advice, dont forget to add it to the whole song. ok

00:53:444 (53444|2) - move 3, keep it smouth keep on 3
01:01:970 (61970|2) - same here sorry

01:38:601 (98601|1) - consider keeping a straight pattern like 01:37:338 (97338|2) - through this whole part, so you get the smooth pattern in the first verse and the straight pattern in the second, if you do so, fix this whole part. keep on my pattern

HD

I think that starting HD you can add some moar difficulty in the intro by mapping the keyboard (that electronic/dunstep sound starting at 00:08:917 - ) sorry because, all starting is same

00:19:022 (19022|2) - do i have to say it again ? up to you sorry

00:39:865 (39865|0) - move 1 to 2 sorry

not much to say otherwise.

hoping i made you progress, cyaa~~
sorry :( i can't gift kd, because,Your mod is not so helpful, but, thanks to mod ^^/
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-
okay, update! :)
pervert switch
pervert switch
may be u need add tag : 0401
increase HD star into 3 maybe O_O
how about ori artist on tag :/ ? Kage

and nice song >.>
GL for ranked OwO
RuberusuScarlet
1,476 posts
Joined April 2013
RuberusuScarlet
hi

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

[HD]
00:47:128 - add
01:01:654 - ^

01:14:601 (74601|2) - delete

01:19:496 - add 4 (cymbal)

01:34:496 (94496|3) - move to 2

01:51:233 - one note delete

02:30:707 - add
02:31:338 - ^
02:31:970 - ^
02:32:601 - ^

02:35:286 - add
02:35:286 (155286|2) - hitsound clap move to 2

02:39:865 - add

[NM]
00:55:023 (55023|1) - delete
00:56:286 (56286|2) - ^

02:02:444 - one not delete

02:06:075 (126075|2) - move to 1

02:34:812 (154812|2) - end to 02:35:286 -

[EZ]
HD6 OD6


good luck
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

[HD]
00:47:128 - add ok
01:01:654 - ^ ok

01:14:601 (74601|2) - delete ok

01:19:496 - add 4 (cymbal) ok

01:34:496 (94496|3) - move to 2 ok

01:51:233 - one note delete ok

02:30:707 - add ok
02:31:338 - ^ ok
02:31:970 - ^ ok
02:32:601 - ^ ok

02:35:286 - add ok
02:35:286 (155286|2) - hitsound clap move to 2 ok

02:39:865 - add ok

[NM]
00:55:023 (55023|1) - delete ok
00:56:286 (56286|2) - ^ ok

02:02:444 - one not delete ok

02:06:075 (126075|2) - move to 1 ok

02:34:812 (154812|2) - end to 02:35:286 - ok

[EZ]
HD6 OD6 ok


good luck
thanks so much to mod, ruber :D :D
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-
ok, update! ^^
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Ohai SI -chan ^^b mod request via PM aye~

Will try to help the best I can , I love this version of this song *w*

Collumn = 1/2/3/4

Full Mode Inside
[MX]
00:29:759 (29759|3) - Imo , it could be really nice if you add notes between each double notes for hat sound , it sound really great
exemple : 00:30:391 (30391|3) - here 00:31:023 (31023|1) - here etc , ^^b the part itself looks really good and it's cool to play

00:45:549 (45549|2,45549|1) - remove one of this notes , it's a hat sound you only need one note
00:45:707 (45707|0) - but this should have two notes since it's a kick , you can also keep both like it is since you used this form all the way after this
If you decide to change you 'll have to change every other same part .
00:54:391 (54391|0) - move to 2 (optional) jack is still fine imo up to you
01:04:417 (64417|0) - add to 1 ?
01:05:917 (65917|2,65917|3,66075|1,66075|0,66233|3,66233|2,66391|1,66391|0,66549|2,66549|3,66707|1,66707|0) - eheheh this is fun ^^b
01:36:628 (96628|3) - there is a drum sound here :3
01:51:786 (111786|1) - add
01:51:944 (111944|0) - add ( there is drum sounds here )
02:04:496 (124496|2,124496|1) - add some LN here ? like this following the Guitar ^^b
02:08:680 (128680|1) - remove ( I don't think there is a drum sound here )
02:11:286 (131286|2) - remove (^ same thing imo + the hitsound make it a bit disturbing )
02:41:523 (161523|1,161680|1) - remove imo
02:47:207 (167207|2) - ^ same

^^b fun to play desu~ recheck found thingys : 01:19:417 (79417|2) - < there is no drum sound here imo should remove ^^

[HD]
00:29:759 (29759|3) - like MX diff try to add every white line in 1/1 beat would make a cool flow
00:45:707 (45707|2) - add on 3 , according to 00:48:233 (48233|2,48233|0) -
01:25:496 (85496|1,85496|2) - should be one note
01:25:654 (85654|3) - add to 4
01:29:128 (89128|1,89128|0) - should be one note
01:29:444 (89444|3) - add one more note for snare
01:37:023 (97023|1) - add note
01:44:759 (104759|1) - add on 2
02:02:286 (122286|3,122286|2) - should be one note
02:02:444 (122444|2) - add to 3
02:04:496 (124496|3) - make this ln , end it here : 02:04:970 (124970|2) -
02:11:128 (131128|0) - add to 1
02:21:233 (141233|1) - add to 2
02:45:865 (165865|0) - add to 1
02:49:023 (169023|1) - (optional ) should have 2 notes
02:49:654 (169654|3) - add to 4

Good diff ^^b

[NM]
02:55:338 (175338|3,175338|0) - not sure about the end , just take note in case someone else think the same ^^b
01:45:075 (105075|1) - add note on 2
02:01:654 (121654|3,121654|2,121970|0,121970|1) - Ctrl + J imo it would be better this way

Really cool NM , I ALMOST SS ALMOOOOOST XDDDD

[EZ]
Oh , Really Nice EZ it's EZ so it's Good , because Best EZ's are easy EZs << a bit hard sentence XD

I only suggest one thing for flow , but this thing is applyable on all the part of the diff since it's the same rythm everywhere
01:15:707 (75707|1) - add note ( try to make a rythm of 4 time (( 4 note following each other basically )) like This Basically just make the flow more like a reflex from the player , newcomers will just follow the song rythm and be like WOW THIS IS SO COOL , but in the way you did there is like empty places where you just want to press a key randomly , just try it out you'll feel where to add i'm sure ^^b

Done~ , Good Luck with this Noice~ song~ hauuuuuu~ , ahah Have a nice Day ^^/
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Eternalie wrote:

Ohai SI -chan ^^b mod request via PM aye~

Will try to help the best I can , I love this version of this song *w*

Collumn = 1/2/3/4

Full Mode Inside
[MX]
00:29:759 (29759|3) - Imo , it could be really nice if you add notes between each double notes for hat sound , it sound really great
exemple : 00:30:391 (30391|3) - here 00:31:023 (31023|1) - here etc , ^^b the part itself looks really good and it's cool to play OK

00:45:549 (45549|2,45549|1) - remove one of this notes , it's a hat sound you only need one note
00:45:707 (45707|0) - but this should have two notes since it's a kick , you can also keep both like it is since you used this form all the way after this
If you decide to change you 'll have to change every other same part .
00:54:391 (54391|0) - move to 2 (optional) jack is still fine imo up to you OK
01:04:417 (64417|0) - add to 1 ? i think no
01:05:917 (65917|2,65917|3,66075|1,66075|0,66233|3,66233|2,66391|1,66391|0,66549|2,66549|3,66707|1,66707|0) - eheheh this is fun ^^b thanks ^^b
01:36:628 (96628|3) - there is a drum sound here :3 no :3 because the sound drum is very small
01:51:786 (111786|1) - add no :3
01:51:944 (111944|0) - add ( there is drum sounds here ) no :3
02:04:496 (124496|2,124496|1) - add some LN here ? like this following the Guitar ^^b no, because,break time, *lol
02:08:680 (128680|1) - remove ( I don't think there is a drum sound here ) OK
02:11:286 (131286|2) - remove (^ same thing imo + the hitsound make it a bit disturbing ) OK
02:41:523 (161523|1,161680|1) - remove imo OK
02:47:207 (167207|2) - ^ same OK

^^b fun to play desu~ recheck found thingys : 01:19:417 (79417|2) - < there is no drum sound here imo should remove ^^ OK

[HD]
00:29:759 (29759|3) - like MX diff try to add every white line in 1/1 beat would make a cool flow OK
00:45:707 (45707|2) - add on 3 , according to 00:48:233 (48233|2,48233|0) - OK
01:25:496 (85496|1,85496|2) - should be one note OK
01:25:654 (85654|3) - add to 4 OK
01:29:128 (89128|1,89128|0) - should be one note OK
01:29:444 (89444|3) - add one more note for snare OK
01:37:023 (97023|1) - add note OK
01:44:759 (104759|1) - add on 2 OK
02:02:286 (122286|3,122286|2) - should be one note OK
02:02:444 (122444|2) - add to 3 no
02:04:496 (124496|3) - make this ln , end it here : 02:04:970 (124970|2) - OK
02:11:128 (131128|0) - add to 1 OK
02:21:233 (141233|1) - add to 2 OK
02:45:865 (165865|0) - add to 1 OK
02:49:023 (169023|1) - (optional ) should have 2 notes OK
02:49:654 (169654|3) - add to 4

Good diff ^^b

[NM]
02:55:338 (175338|3,175338|0) - not sure about the end , just take note in case someone else think the same ^^b OK
01:45:075 (105075|1) - add note on 2 sorry
02:01:654 (121654|3,121654|2,121970|0,121970|1) - Ctrl + J imo it would be better this way OK

Really cool NM , I ALMOST SS ALMOOOOOST XDDDD

[EZ]
Oh , Really Nice EZ it's EZ so it's Good , because Best EZ's are easy EZs << a bit hard sentence XD

I only suggest one thing for flow , but this thing is applyable on all the part of the diff since it's the same rythm everywhere
01:15:707 (75707|1) - add note ( try to make a rythm of 4 time (( 4 note following each other basically )) like This Basically just make the flow more like a reflex from the player , newcomers will just follow the song rythm and be like WOW THIS IS SO COOL , but in the way you did there is like empty places where you just want to press a key randomly , just try it out you'll feel where to add i'm sure ^^b okay

Done~ , Good Luck with this Noice~ song~ hauuuuuu~ , ahah Have a nice Day ^^/
thanks so much to mod ^^/
update!
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
[General]

Title : 【重音テト】FIRST【UTAUカバー】 - > FIRST
( Other info not needed )

Artist : cillia

Tags : + niki + utauloid + cover

niki is the mixer

thanks to neo for metadata stuff
23:01 Z3nx: how do you metadata this
23:01 Z3nx: o damn i closed the link
23:01 Z3nx: gimme a sec
23:01 Z3nx: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm22185197
23:02 Z3nx: i suggested Kasane Teto - FIRST for this, quite unsure where to put cillia and niki lol
23:03 neonat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X2yPo4stVX0
23:03 neonat: darude sandstorm
23:03 neonat: lol just kidding
23:04 neonat: cillia
23:04 Z3nx: aaa
23:04 neonat: niki mixed and made video
23:04 neonat: original is by niki
23:04 neonat: cillia covered it
23:05 neonat: Kasane Teto can be anywhere u want
23:05 Z3nx: yea i'm kinda confused by all of these lol
23:05 Z3nx: oh what
23:05 neonat: but would be best in tags
23:05 neonat: don't use cillia feat. Kasane Teto
23:05 neonat: is what I advice
23:05 Z3nx: i see
23:05 neonat: use cillia - FIRST
23:05 neonat: tags utauloid vocaloid kasane teto
23:05 neonat: cover
23:06 Z3nx: ahh gotcha
23:06 Z3nx: thanks o/
23:06 neonat: np
23:06 neonat: just ask whenever there's a problem
23:06 neonat: for metadata
23:06 neonat: small c btw


[MX]

o ok wanted to IRC mod but you're not online haha

00:48:075 (48075|1,48154|2,48233|1) - This triplet looks out of place here, i feel that you should leave these triplets for later, I suggest to remove the 2nd note here

-Consistency-

Most part of the chart is inconsistent in note count for different sounds, it's not wrong, but if it doesn't ruin your patterns/intentions of the map you should try to add/remove notes as suggested

* = Strongly recommend

00:49:338 (49338|1,49338|3) - I suggest to add another note here for the cymbal
01:00:865 (60865|3) - Same here but for the kick
01:07:023 (67023|2,67023|0) - I suggest 3notes for the cymbal due to the first mod
01:11:680 - Might wanna add another note here for the kick
01:16:970 (76970|0,76970|3) - I suggest 3 notes for the cymbal
01:15:707 - ^
01:18:391 (78391|2) - Move downwards by 1/2 or 8th to emphasize the cymbal here
01:19:496 (79496|2) - Add a note for cymbal
01:20:825 - Add 1 or 2 notes for cymbal * strongly recommend to at least add 1 note
01:23:917 (83917|3) - ^ * strongly recommend to at least add 1 note
00:58:338 - might wanna add another note here for the kick
01:27:075 - Might want to add another note for the cymbal
01:28:180 (88180|2) - Move up by 1/2 for the cymbal
01:29:601 - another note for cymbal
01:31:023 (91023|3) - don't think 3 notes here are needed, maybe remove one?
01:32:128 (92128|3) - add 1 for the cymbal


01:18:707 (78707|2) - If you are mapping to the vocals here, this LN should start 1/2 earlier
01:35:286 (95286|1,95365|2,95444|3,95523|2,95601|1) - errr idk, but these 1/4s feel inconsistent, it seems to appear on random places to me, since you didn't map to some of the similar hi-hats
01:42:075 (102075|0) - Same as before, idk what you are mapping to here, the LN placement here feels random
02:11:207 (131207|3,131365|1,131365|0) - yea idk what are you mapping here o_O


errr the whole thing feels way too inconsistent imo, the usage of 1/4s in the chorus doesn't really fit ( eg. 02:20:128 (140128|1) - I would rather have this as a chord instead of a stream due to the cymbal ) | I feel that a strong pattern for these 1/4s would be to have 1/4 streams leading up to a cymbal in the kiai time, something like this 02:43:812 (163812|1,163891|3,163970|2,164049|1,164128|2,164128|3) - OR 02:37:496 (157496|3,157496|0,157575|2,157654|1,157733|0,157812|2,157812|3,157812|1) - OR 02:36:233 (156233|3,156233|0,156312|1,156391|2,156391|0,156470|3,156549|2,156549|1,156549|0) - , in which i think these 1/4s fit rather nicely

uuhhh i think imma just mod one i guess, i'm rather tired/lazy now haha ( ; _ ; )
( why did i spend almost 3 hours on this lol )
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Z3nx wrote:

[General]

Title : 【重音テト】FIRST【UTAUカバー】 - > FIRST
( Other info not needed )

Artist : cillia

Tags : + niki + utauloid + cover

niki is the mixer

thanks to neo for metadata stuff
23:01 Z3nx: how do you metadata this
23:01 Z3nx: o damn i closed the link
23:01 Z3nx: gimme a sec
23:01 Z3nx: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm22185197
23:02 Z3nx: i suggested Kasane Teto - FIRST for this, quite unsure where to put cillia and niki lol
23:03 neonat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X2yPo4stVX0
23:03 neonat: darude sandstorm
23:03 neonat: lol just kidding
23:04 neonat: cillia
23:04 Z3nx: aaa
23:04 neonat: niki mixed and made video
23:04 neonat: original is by niki
23:04 neonat: cillia covered it
23:05 neonat: Kasane Teto can be anywhere u want
23:05 Z3nx: yea i'm kinda confused by all of these lol
23:05 Z3nx: oh what
23:05 neonat: but would be best in tags
23:05 neonat: don't use cillia feat. Kasane Teto
23:05 neonat: is what I advice
23:05 Z3nx: i see
23:05 neonat: use cillia - FIRST
23:05 neonat: tags utauloid vocaloid kasane teto
23:05 neonat: cover
23:06 Z3nx: ahh gotcha
23:06 Z3nx: thanks o/
23:06 neonat: np
23:06 neonat: just ask whenever there's a problem
23:06 neonat: for metadata
23:06 neonat: small c btw


[MX]

o ok wanted to IRC mod but you're not online haha

00:48:075 (48075|1,48154|2,48233|1) - This triplet looks out of place here, i feel that you should leave these triplets for later, I suggest to remove the 2nd note here

-Consistency-

Most part of the chart is inconsistent in note count for different sounds, it's not wrong, but if it doesn't ruin your patterns/intentions of the map you should try to add/remove notes as suggested

* = Strongly recommend

00:49:338 (49338|1,49338|3) - I suggest to add another note here for the cymbal
01:00:865 (60865|3) - Same here but for the kick
01:07:023 (67023|2,67023|0) - I suggest 3notes for the cymbal due to the first mod
01:11:680 - Might wanna add another note here for the kick
01:16:970 (76970|0,76970|3) - I suggest 3 notes for the cymbal
01:15:707 - ^
01:18:391 (78391|2) - Move downwards by 1/2 or 8th to emphasize the cymbal here
01:19:496 (79496|2) - Add a note for cymbal
01:20:825 - Add 1 or 2 notes for cymbal * strongly recommend to at least add 1 note
01:23:917 (83917|3) - ^ * strongly recommend to at least add 1 note
00:58:338 - might wanna add another note here for the kick
01:27:075 - Might want to add another note for the cymbal
01:28:180 (88180|2) - Move up by 1/2 for the cymbal
01:29:601 - another note for cymbal
01:31:023 (91023|3) - don't think 3 notes here are needed, maybe remove one?
01:32:128 (92128|3) - add 1 for the cymbal


01:18:707 (78707|2) - If you are mapping to the vocals here, this LN should start 1/2 earlier
01:35:286 (95286|1,95365|2,95444|3,95523|2,95601|1) - errr idk, but these 1/4s feel inconsistent, it seems to appear on random places to me, since you didn't map to some of the similar hi-hats
01:42:075 (102075|0) - Same as before, idk what you are mapping to here, the LN placement here feels random
02:11:207 (131207|3,131365|1,131365|0) - yea idk what are you mapping here o_O


errr the whole thing feels way too inconsistent imo, the usage of 1/4s in the chorus doesn't really fit ( eg. 02:20:128 (140128|1) - I would rather have this as a chord instead of a stream due to the cymbal ) | I feel that a strong pattern for these 1/4s would be to have 1/4 streams leading up to a cymbal in the kiai time, something like this 02:43:812 (163812|1,163891|3,163970|2,164049|1,164128|2,164128|3) - OR 02:37:496 (157496|3,157496|0,157575|2,157654|1,157733|0,157812|2,157812|3,157812|1) - OR 02:36:233 (156233|3,156233|0,156312|1,156391|2,156391|0,156470|3,156549|2,156549|1,156549|0) - , in which i think these 1/4s fit rather nicely

uuhhh i think imma just mod one i guess, i'm rather tired/lazy now haha ( ; _ ; )
( why did i spend almost 3 hours on this lol )
i'm sorry, MX already I delete, replaced with GD
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

Z3nx wrote:

[General]

Title : 【重音テト】FIRST【UTAUカバー】 - > FIRST
( Other info not needed )

Artist : cillia

Tags : + niki + utauloid + cover

niki is the mixer

thanks to neo for metadata stuff
23:01 Z3nx: how do you metadata this
23:01 Z3nx: o damn i closed the link
23:01 Z3nx: gimme a sec
23:01 Z3nx: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm22185197
23:02 Z3nx: i suggested Kasane Teto - FIRST for this, quite unsure where to put cillia and niki lol
23:03 neonat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X2yPo4stVX0
23:03 neonat: darude sandstorm
23:03 neonat: lol just kidding
23:04 neonat: cillia
23:04 Z3nx: aaa
23:04 neonat: niki mixed and made video
23:04 neonat: original is by niki
23:04 neonat: cillia covered it
23:05 neonat: Kasane Teto can be anywhere u want
23:05 Z3nx: yea i'm kinda confused by all of these lol
23:05 Z3nx: oh what
23:05 neonat: but would be best in tags
23:05 neonat: don't use cillia feat. Kasane Teto
23:05 neonat: is what I advice
23:05 Z3nx: i see
23:05 neonat: use cillia - FIRST
23:05 neonat: tags utauloid vocaloid kasane teto
23:05 neonat: cover
23:06 Z3nx: ahh gotcha
23:06 Z3nx: thanks o/
23:06 neonat: np
23:06 neonat: just ask whenever there's a problem
23:06 neonat: for metadata
23:06 neonat: small c btw
did you read this

ugh, you should have told me earlier about the GD though, scamming my time isn't that much polite


Edit: Not sure if you have noticed, it's cillia not Cillia
Harbyter
Beatmap Nominator
1,364 posts
Joined October 2011
Harbyter

Z3nx wrote:

Z3nx wrote:

[General]

Title : 【重音テト】FIRST【UTAUカバー】 - > FIRST
( Other info not needed )

Artist : cillia

Tags : + niki + utauloid + cover

niki is the mixer

----------------------
did you read this

ugh, you should have told me earlier about the GD though, scamming my time isn't that much polite


Edit: Not sure if you have noticed, it's cillia not Cillia


hello,mod req via queue

[MOD]


Column-1-2-3-4-


will focus on pattern consistency and othe rlittle stuff,but since this song isn't of my taste well, i will do what i can do.. lol


[HD]

00:49:496 (49496|1) - suggest to move here in col 4 00:49:338 - for additional cymbal here,

00:59:444 - add a note 4 here too always for the cymbal

01:02:128 - add a note here, like the previous pattern

01:03:865 - add a note 1 here too,

01:08:286 - sugges to make this pattern like the previous one here 01:05:759 -

01:08:838 - here too

01:11:365 - 01:11:680 - ~

01:17:759 (77759|2,78391|1) - remove??i think following only the drums here is better to catch the rhytm if yes then remove those notes too

01:19:654 (79654|2) - 01:20:917 (80917|2,81391|0) - 01:22:180 (82180|2,82654|2) -
01:24:075 (84075|0,85180|2) - 01:26:444 (86444|0,87233|2) -
01:27:865 (87865|2,87865|0,88496|0,88496|3) -
01:32:049 (92049|3,92286|1,92759|2) - 01:33:391 (93391|2,94023|0) -

01:41:680 - add a note here for the hit hat

well in the next pattern i suggest to follow always the drum


sorry for the poor mod :o
-SI-
105 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
-SI-

Harbyter wrote:

hello,mod req via queue

[MOD]


Column-1-2-3-4-


will focus on pattern consistency and othe rlittle stuff,but since this song isn't of my taste well, i will do what i can do.. lol


[HD]

00:49:496 (49496|1) - suggest to move here in col 4 00:49:338 - for additional cymbal here, ok

00:59:444 - add a note 4 here too always for the cymbal ok

01:02:128 - add a note here, like the previous pattern oh,ok =3=)b

01:03:865 - add a note 1 here too, ok

01:08:286 - sugges to make this pattern like the previous one here 01:05:759 - ok

01:08:838 - here too ok

01:11:365 - 01:11:680 - ~ no to add note

01:17:759 (77759|2,78391|1) - remove??i think following only the drums here is better to catch the rhytm if yes then remove those notes too there have a sound

01:19:654 (79654|2) - 01:20:917 (80917|2,81391|0) - 01:22:180 (82180|2,82654|2) -
01:24:075 (84075|0,85180|2) - 01:26:444 (86444|0,87233|2) -
01:27:865 (87865|2,87865|0,88496|0,88496|3) -
01:32:049 (92049|3,92286|1,92759|2) - 01:33:391 (93391|2,94023|0) -
^ ok.all remove

01:41:680 - add a note here for the hit hat ok

well in the next pattern i suggest to follow always the drum


sorry for the poor mod :o
Thanks to mod ^.^ /
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