dvorak wrote:

Try bpm 111.838 / offset 2448
will go off at 81848 but It is impossible to handle after this timing cuz the change isn't flat.


To Aru > Toaru (source)

>To Aru is wrong to explain source, should be Toaru.

>On ly a few page are written as Toaru , and it was 1st uploader's fault who upload to youtube or torrent.
>If you feel nothing for "on ly" or "so me" , don't need to change.

>If I say more grammatically, Toaru is one word and rentaishi(連体詞) in lexical category.
>That doesn't exist in English. Toaru is new word, aru is used to rentaishi and bit different from toaru.
>This will be too long to write here, but I know native English speaker who can explain this problem.
>So talk with me in Japanese or let me get him to talk with.

>Well Number is Power? BATs are lazy to replace most of them? I welcome any grammatical rebuttal to this.

Neethime wrote:

:D IKU~这歌好听啊
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
试着在一些起始音的地方加finish音效(easy和hard里有些少)

[Easy]
副歌后面的normal音效也用和副歌相同的音量吧
从开到42秒这段为什么不加hitsound呢？试着加些whistle上去(这段的音量也可以试着+10？)暫時先不加 因為照banvi大的說法這裡hitsounds會太大聲
00:46:976 (5,1,2) - spacing,你不能在easy里放跳啊...orz~沒發現這裡有跳
01:21:848 (1) - 在01:26:408 结束

[Rox's Hard]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:12:373 (4) - 左一格，下一格
01:17:288 (1) - 同easy

[Insane]
00:17:201 (7) - new combo
00:40:270 (6) - ^
01:08:168 (7) - ^
01:21:848 (1) - 同easy

Nice map.
+Star

Frill wrote:

[General]

- index (4).jpg is resize 1024x768..As long as it see 1023x767~fix
- Please unite all dif kiai time. ~fix

[Easy]

00:11:031 - I think that this green line is needless. (It is adjusted with offset. )~I changed the red line volume
00:40:002 (5,6) - 1 grid down?~fix

[Rox's Hard]

00:56:339 (1) - ah..remove new combo?~fix
01:13:505 (1) - ^~fix
01:21:820 (1) - Volume is Please make it to the lowered feeling. ~fix

[Insane]

00:18:006 (8) - new combo~I temporarily set the new combo at 00:17:201 (7)

good map!

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
你用的video并没有分离掉音轨，请把video消音以减少文件大小，这是必须的。另外不确定中文字幕是否合适…… ~消音
把roxkyuubiforever加进tags，其他如果你想加的话还可以参考若干电磁炮图的tags~OK
offset:+12，不排除BPM有误的可能~OK BPM我再問問其他人看看
kiai线和变换音量/音效不能用同一根绿线，请在kiai前加线来变更音效/音量然后以相同的音效进入kiai，以及之前Colin提过的音效绿线不要踩note的问题好像还没改掉。~OK 我以為是只有純改音量才不能踩 抱歉
don't change volume/hitsound sample and kiai time with the same timing point.

如果你愿意去要一套电磁炮皮肤效果应该更好。

[Easy]
1.4 Slider Velocity+ 0.8x Distance Spacing对Easy来讲高了（尤其对比你1.4+0.7x的Hard），另这个难度中也有不少的段落更像Normal~OK
HP-1, OD-1~OK
00:14:787 (1) - 不对称的很严重~OK
00:37:856 (2,3) - 关掉grid snap左移到1正下方~將排版改了一下
00:41:075 (1) - 延长到00:44:294？（finish）~OK

[Hard]
为什么不用grid level 3呢？很多小的spacing不等，不一一指出了，例：00:30:345 (3,4,5) - 这里最明显~OK
00:33:296 (1) - spinner过短了~OK
00:58:242 (3,4) - 这两个不能同形状就真的很违和。。~OK
01:17:288 (1) - 这个spinner很没语言……至少等到最后变速段了再弄？转10秒这个压力很大啊~OK

[Rox's Hard]
00:15:323 (3) - this slider is offscreen... should fix.
01:21:848 (1) - end this at 01:26:676?

[Insane]
除了难度设定外没有感到这是Insane其實是因為之前看到有人發3個難度最好是easy/normal和hard insane比較好 才把他從hard改成insane 想辦法把它改難中~
00:47:244 - 加一拍？~OK
01:21:848 (1) - 结束在01:26:676~OK


实话讲我觉得hitsounds mod还言之过早。。。尤其Hard和Insane的mapset是否有必要再考虑下。另外也请不要什么发言都给kud，我mod总感觉有点不爽= =……这个感觉具体化而言就是一种我把一个mod按从[General]到[Insane]拆5个贴发出来的冲动…… 知道了!!(有一個是不小心按到的) 抱歉>< 面壁反省中

• • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  • 00:21:237 (2) - This slider sounds bad: delete it and do something different.

• • 00:08:361 (9,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

• • Offset: 2460 (resnap all notes)
  • 01:21:848 (1) - End this spinner here 01:26:688

kiddly wrote:

IKU的歌……不错呢

[Easy]
00:11:043 (1,2) - 我看了下整张图二分拍有spacing的地方就三个,你不如把他们全都stack了这样整张图整齐很多.~修正

[Hard]
改名叫normal,然后insane改名叫hard好了.~修正
关于mapset,作为hard OD感觉低了点作为normal HD又太高了……我建议降3格HD做normal好了.~修正
00:39:075 - 这线干吗用的,没看懂……
00:39:343 - ^ ~都刪掉了
如果上面两条线就是为了加一格音量的话那真没啥必要……都听不出来……

[Rox's Hard]
00:42:696 (1) - 在这放个note后面再接spinner会不会更好呢,前面也是这样做的.~修正
Just like 00:25:529 (4,1) .
其他挺好的.

[Insane]
OD-1,HD-1 or2.本来这首歌也不适合作难,没必要勉强做个insane的mapset.做hard就好了.~修正
节奏比较散的歌OD高了打起来非常非常非常不爽.~知道了!!
00:39:075 - 同hard.
00:39:343 - ^~都刪掉了
摆放方面说实话有些单调，可以参考你的guest diff,多用一些造型的slider.~好的

大概就这些.

3kinnagi wrote:

star for IKU and the nice map

Shockwave wrote:

The second ending of Index :3

Star and good luck with your first beatmap

Clare wrote:

來晚了 抱歉><"

[Easy]
恩..把Song setup-audio裡的lead-in 條到0
00:29:821 (5) - new combo
01:02:546 (1,2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變大了?(改間距後忘記改這邊 )
00:39:209 (T) - 這條音量線擺到Slider末端00:39:477 去是沒問題的爾且比較好,note把線放在前面是防止點早了但是slider不會有點早的問題 所以放上去沒問題=w=
我覺得easy難度note不要疊超過2個會比較好:3

[Normal]
00:29:821 (2) - 把這Slider改成一個note?然後00:30:357 (3) 放到00:30:089來,結尾00:31:430
00:47:525 (7) - 這個也是?改成一個note然後後面的00:48:061 放到00:47:793來 在這00:48:061折返,在00:48:329 結尾
01:08:716 (8) - 為什麼要用1/4拍呢?1/2拍不好嗎?

[Rox's Hard]
00:11:043 (T) - let the green line before the note
nice diff

[Hard]
很好,對我來說沒問題!

nice map!
star!

jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]
00:38:941 (4) - new combo

[Normal]
00:05:678 (6) - new combo
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too blind for a normal diff, maybe make it so that it is easier to read

[Rox's hard]
00:25:663 (1) - start on red tick at 00:25:797

[hard]
fine

all fix~
_________________

is this really your first map......my respect to ya and enjoy my star

thanks~

Kecco wrote:

Lol, this map is entirely good. It hasn't serious problems.

Offset : +4 ms = 2.464 ~ Resnap All Notes

+Star

Mystearica wrote:

[Hard]

00:57:454 (1) - This spinner feels like it should be mapped normally?~fixed
01:14:621 (1) - This one too~fixed
01:21:864 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 01:21:059 and finishing it on 01:23:205 then map the ending normally? You can use decreasing volume to fade out your notes ~I tried to do it but bpm is slow here so I didn't make changes

[Rox's Hard]

00:25:801 (1) - 00:27:142 vocals start here again so either remove the spinner and start mapping here or end it earlier or on this place and add a couple notes to match up~fixed
01:21:864 (1) - Same suggestion on this spinner as Hard

[Normal]

00:44:176 - Switch to soft here is a little sudden imo, since you've got that 5 hit there, so maybe change to soft on 00:44:578 (3) - ?~fixed
01:21:864 (1) - Spinner same as above

[Easy]

01:21:864 (1) - same :p

整体挺好的, 加油. 第一张做到这样不容易了.

soulfear wrote:

加油加油

1. Offset: 2470
2. MP3 has low quality. I suggest you find higher quality mp3.

1. 00:29:825 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:38:945 (1) - ^
3. 00:45:114 - Useless section. Delete it.
4. 01:05:233 (5,6,1) - Spacing.
5. 01:12:207 (1) - Remove new combo.

1. 00:58:258 (1) - Remove new combo.

Midget wrote:

~Overall~

1. Offset: 2470~fixed
2. MP3 has low quality. I suggest you find higher quality mp3.~I will look for it

~Easy~

1. 00:29:825 (1) - Remove new combo.~fixed
2. 00:38:945 (1) - ^~fixed
3. 00:45:114 - Useless section. Delete it.~Change the volume and Audio. So don't delete it.
4. 01:05:233 (5,6,1) - Spacing.~fixed
5. 01:12:207 (1) - Remove new combo.~fixed

~Rox's Hard~

1. 00:58:258 (1) - Remove new combo.~fixed

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Orange combo color doesn't fit here, maybe change to another color.~fixed
-- Better quality .mp3 would be good ^_^
-- I don't really think the BPM should be 111.838, 111.84 would be a bit better. Offset 2,460 works better for me, get a second opinion though =P~fixed
-- Is the audio lead in necessary? Remove from all diffs? (Easy doesn't have it btw so add audio lead in to that if you still want it)~fixed

Easy:

-- Quite a lot of gaps here, maybe add some notes to them?~fixed

00:41:097 (1) - Imo make this spinner longer (00:43:243) because it's Easy.~fixed
00:57:460 (1) - Change to soft?~fixed
01:04:702 (4) - Difficult for Easy, move note from under the return?~fixed
01:18:115 -- Raise volume 1-2 ticks?~fixed

Normal:

-- Not sure about slider tick rate 2 here, it sounds weird at times. The custom slider tick is good. (Like [Easy] would be good imo)

00:32:513 (1,2,3) - Try to avoid jumps on normal please.~fixed
00:33:318 (1) - Silence? (You could probably extend this out for long to, 00:35:195 maybe?)~fixed
00:43:779 (1,2) - I think this is too hard for a normal, maybe make it all 1 returning slider.~fixed
01:17:444 -- Raise volume 1-2 ticks.~fixed

Rox's Hard:

00:25:794 (1) - Start at 00:25:662?
01:17:292 (1) - The slider ticks don't sound very good here, silence?

Hard:

00:21:235 (5) - New combo.~fixed
00:33:573 (1) - Silence and extend to 00:35:195? ~ Feels too short atm.~fixed
00:59:992 -- Raise volume by 1-2 ticks?~fixed
01:17:426 -- Raise volume by 1-2 ticks? Too quiet compared to previous section. ~fixed

Not bad, star

Alace wrote:

4 page modding lol
It`s a really nice mapset, forgive my nazi about hitsounds

Slidertick 1 sounds more better XD (Normal and hard are tick 2)~hard fixed. Normal have some problem
Softclap sounds much better than normalclap in this song, normalhit sounds really good when it places on heavy beat
I suggest use soft-hitsoundset in the whole song~good idea

<Easy+Normal>
you use softclap as slidertick to keep your clap patterns,
Nprmal and soft claps are mixed in some parts, like 00:02:460 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) (Easy)~fixed
they don`t really sound good to me,but normalclap is not good for slidertick too

<Rox's Hard>
really love this diff <3~I love,too
00:02:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - those papa papa clap patterns are a bit noisy XD (Hard sounds better)~fixed
01:17:299 (1) - this slider sounds so good XD

<Hard>
all good XD

feel free to nug me in game if you need any help

Eirene wrote:

first... I have no problem with the timing.~really?..I think this is not perfect
then I didn't find issue so here is just my opinion about hitsounds :3

[Hard]:
only 2 hitsound patterns that are a little strange imo
00:32:502 (1,2,3,4) - remove one or two whistle ?? 4 whistles in a row is :s . try to remove on (2) or on (1)&(3)~fixed
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4,5) - you might add 2 or 3 whistles on this stream. on (1) and (4) for exemple ?~fixed

[Rox's Hard]:
~

[Normal]:
good diff
00:43:769 (1) - same thing about hitsounds than for the Hard~fixed

[Easy]:
00:19:895 (1) - remove the 2nd whistle ??~fixed

that's all ... feel free to ignore my remarks

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
Don't use gray combo color, because that color is same at multiplayer when the player gets failed~fixed

[Easy]
00:21:236 (2) - Too short for easy diff~fixed
00:54:498 (x) - Add note with clap?~fixed
01:21:322 (4) - Too short for easy diff~fixed

[Normal]
Fine~

[Rox's Hard]
Fine~

[Hard]
Rename it to "Insane"?

00:33:575 (1) - Perhaps move forward to red tick and cut short, so that following the vocal?~fixed

Good song
STAR

Alace wrote:

bubble time