kiddly wrote:

IKU的歌……不错呢

[Easy]
00:11:043 (1,2) - 我看了下整张图二分拍有spacing的地方就三个,你不如把他们全都stack了这样整张图整齐很多.~修正

[Hard]
改名叫normal,然后insane改名叫hard好了.~修正
关于mapset,作为hard OD感觉低了点作为normal HD又太高了……我建议降3格HD做normal好了.~修正
00:39:075 - 这线干吗用的,没看懂……
00:39:343 - ^ ~都刪掉了
如果上面两条线就是为了加一格音量的话那真没啥必要……都听不出来……

[Rox's Hard]
00:42:696 (1) - 在这放个note后面再接spinner会不会更好呢,前面也是这样做的.~修正
Just like 00:25:529 (4,1) .
其他挺好的.

[Insane]
OD-1,HD-1 or2.本来这首歌也不适合作难,没必要勉强做个insane的mapset.做hard就好了.~修正
节奏比较散的歌OD高了打起来非常非常非常不爽.~知道了!!
00:39:075 - 同hard.
00:39:343 - ^~都刪掉了
摆放方面说实话有些单调，可以参考你的guest diff,多用一些造型的slider.~好的

大概就这些.

3kinnagi wrote:

star for IKU and the nice map

Shockwave wrote:

The second ending of Index :3

Star and good luck with your first beatmap

Clare wrote:

來晚了 抱歉><"

[Easy]
恩..把Song setup-audio裡的lead-in 條到0
00:29:821 (5) - new combo
01:02:546 (1,2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變大了?(改間距後忘記改這邊 )
00:39:209 (T) - 這條音量線擺到Slider末端00:39:477 去是沒問題的爾且比較好,note把線放在前面是防止點早了但是slider不會有點早的問題 所以放上去沒問題=w=
我覺得easy難度note不要疊超過2個會比較好:3

[Normal]
00:29:821 (2) - 把這Slider改成一個note?然後00:30:357 (3) 放到00:30:089來,結尾00:31:430
00:47:525 (7) - 這個也是?改成一個note然後後面的00:48:061 放到00:47:793來 在這00:48:061折返,在00:48:329 結尾
01:08:716 (8) - 為什麼要用1/4拍呢?1/2拍不好嗎?

[Rox's Hard]
00:11:043 (T) - let the green line before the note
nice diff

[Hard]
很好,對我來說沒問題!

nice map!
star!

jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]
00:38:941 (4) - new combo

[Normal]
00:05:678 (6) - new combo
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too blind for a normal diff, maybe make it so that it is easier to read

[Rox's hard]
00:25:663 (1) - start on red tick at 00:25:797

[hard]
fine

all fix~
_________________

is this really your first map......my respect to ya and enjoy my star

thanks~

Kecco wrote:

Lol, this map is entirely good. It hasn't serious problems.

Offset : +4 ms = 2.464 ~ Resnap All Notes

+Star

Mystearica wrote:

[Hard]

00:57:454 (1) - This spinner feels like it should be mapped normally?~fixed
01:14:621 (1) - This one too~fixed
01:21:864 (1) - How about starting this spinner at 01:21:059 and finishing it on 01:23:205 then map the ending normally? You can use decreasing volume to fade out your notes ~I tried to do it but bpm is slow here so I didn't make changes

[Rox's Hard]

00:25:801 (1) - 00:27:142 vocals start here again so either remove the spinner and start mapping here or end it earlier or on this place and add a couple notes to match up~fixed
01:21:864 (1) - Same suggestion on this spinner as Hard

[Normal]

00:44:176 - Switch to soft here is a little sudden imo, since you've got that 5 hit there, so maybe change to soft on 00:44:578 (3) - ?~fixed
01:21:864 (1) - Spinner same as above

[Easy]

01:21:864 (1) - same :p

整体挺好的, 加油. 第一张做到这样不容易了.

soulfear wrote:

加油加油

1. Offset: 2470
2. MP3 has low quality. I suggest you find higher quality mp3.

1. 00:29:825 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 00:38:945 (1) - ^
3. 00:45:114 - Useless section. Delete it.
4. 01:05:233 (5,6,1) - Spacing.
5. 01:12:207 (1) - Remove new combo.

1. 00:58:258 (1) - Remove new combo.

Midget wrote:

~Overall~

1. Offset: 2470~fixed
2. MP3 has low quality. I suggest you find higher quality mp3.~I will look for it

~Easy~

1. 00:29:825 (1) - Remove new combo.~fixed
2. 00:38:945 (1) - ^~fixed
3. 00:45:114 - Useless section. Delete it.~Change the volume and Audio. So don't delete it.
4. 01:05:233 (5,6,1) - Spacing.~fixed
5. 01:12:207 (1) - Remove new combo.~fixed

~Rox's Hard~

1. 00:58:258 (1) - Remove new combo.~fixed

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Orange combo color doesn't fit here, maybe change to another color.~fixed
-- Better quality .mp3 would be good ^_^
-- I don't really think the BPM should be 111.838, 111.84 would be a bit better. Offset 2,460 works better for me, get a second opinion though =P~fixed
-- Is the audio lead in necessary? Remove from all diffs? (Easy doesn't have it btw so add audio lead in to that if you still want it)~fixed

Easy:

-- Quite a lot of gaps here, maybe add some notes to them?~fixed

00:41:097 (1) - Imo make this spinner longer (00:43:243) because it's Easy.~fixed
00:57:460 (1) - Change to soft?~fixed
01:04:702 (4) - Difficult for Easy, move note from under the return?~fixed
01:18:115 -- Raise volume 1-2 ticks?~fixed

Normal:

-- Not sure about slider tick rate 2 here, it sounds weird at times. The custom slider tick is good. (Like [Easy] would be good imo)

00:32:513 (1,2,3) - Try to avoid jumps on normal please.~fixed
00:33:318 (1) - Silence? (You could probably extend this out for long to, 00:35:195 maybe?)~fixed
00:43:779 (1,2) - I think this is too hard for a normal, maybe make it all 1 returning slider.~fixed
01:17:444 -- Raise volume 1-2 ticks.~fixed

Rox's Hard:

00:25:794 (1) - Start at 00:25:662?
01:17:292 (1) - The slider ticks don't sound very good here, silence?

Hard:

00:21:235 (5) - New combo.~fixed
00:33:573 (1) - Silence and extend to 00:35:195? ~ Feels too short atm.~fixed
00:59:992 -- Raise volume by 1-2 ticks?~fixed
01:17:426 -- Raise volume by 1-2 ticks? Too quiet compared to previous section. ~fixed

Not bad, star

Alace wrote:

4 page modding lol
It`s a really nice mapset, forgive my nazi about hitsounds

Slidertick 1 sounds more better XD (Normal and hard are tick 2)~hard fixed. Normal have some problem
Softclap sounds much better than normalclap in this song, normalhit sounds really good when it places on heavy beat
I suggest use soft-hitsoundset in the whole song~good idea

<Easy+Normal>
you use softclap as slidertick to keep your clap patterns,
Nprmal and soft claps are mixed in some parts, like 00:02:460 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) (Easy)~fixed
they don`t really sound good to me,but normalclap is not good for slidertick too

<Rox's Hard>
really love this diff <3~I love,too
00:02:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - those papa papa clap patterns are a bit noisy XD (Hard sounds better)~fixed
01:17:299 (1) - this slider sounds so good XD

<Hard>
all good XD

feel free to nug me in game if you need any help

Eirene wrote:

first... I have no problem with the timing.~really?..I think this is not perfect
then I didn't find issue so here is just my opinion about hitsounds :3

[Hard]:
only 2 hitsound patterns that are a little strange imo
00:32:502 (1,2,3,4) - remove one or two whistle ?? 4 whistles in a row is :s . try to remove on (2) or on (1)&(3)~fixed
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4,5) - you might add 2 or 3 whistles on this stream. on (1) and (4) for exemple ?~fixed

[Rox's Hard]:
~

[Normal]:
good diff
00:43:769 (1) - same thing about hitsounds than for the Hard~fixed

[Easy]:
00:19:895 (1) - remove the 2nd whistle ??~fixed

that's all ... feel free to ignore my remarks

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
Don't use gray combo color, because that color is same at multiplayer when the player gets failed~fixed

[Easy]
00:21:236 (2) - Too short for easy diff~fixed
00:54:498 (x) - Add note with clap?~fixed
01:21:322 (4) - Too short for easy diff~fixed

[Normal]
Fine~

[Rox's Hard]
Fine~

[Hard]
Rename it to "Insane"?

00:33:575 (1) - Perhaps move forward to red tick and cut short, so that following the vocal?~fixed

Good song
STAR