freefish wrote:

2B基地的秘密情人去死吧，看哥射你一脸。

kiddly wrote:

okay

[General]
把"Hitomi Takahashi Gintama”这串从tags里删掉,你artist和source里已经有了.
写个ending啥的就行了.

[Easy]
结束的时间太蛋疼...要么在01:27:716结束,要么再做一段.
slidertick消音效果并不太好.

[Normal]
01:25:898 (2) - 首尾相连是不行的.
关于歌曲结束的时间同Easy.

[Hard]
00:40:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我感觉玩4星难度的玩家读不了这个.
01:33:171 (1,2,1,2) - 同上,我觉得后面一对slider拉开一格就好了.

[Insane]
00:56:807 (2,3) - stack better.
01:54:080 (1,1,2) - normal finish多好啊.
有些地方new combo设置不太好.但是我也不爱一个个挑出来,举例:03:15:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这个就不好.
03:52:034 (1) - 想完全消音的话还是用custom音效比较好.

[hitsound]
感觉主歌的部分有点缺乏变化.比如第一段的第一部分和第二部分背景音有一个跃进,这个时侯改用normal系或者提高音量都不错.
副歌部分可以多用些normal whistle,我觉得挺适合的.
你现在一个部分就是一个音效在用,感觉很单调.特别是你节奏又不复杂.

1. 3个osb文件...太威武了,做掉他们- -
2. Tag可以加点kazura, gindoki什么的吧- -,嘛不加也无所谓

1. 00:35:671 (4) - 这里建议用个normal finish, 声音减小到60%-70%
2. 01:05:898 (x) - 感觉KIAI这开始比较好

1. 00:20:444 (6) - 整个slider加finish感觉会更好
2. 00:57:716 (3) - Normal hitsound貌似更好
3. 01:05:898 (x) - KIAI这开始

1. 01:05:898 (x) - KIAI这开始
2. 01:56:807 (x) - ^

1. 00:09:875 (2,3) - spacing有点怪...容易误读成1/2拍间距的,可能只是我...
2. 01:05:898 (x) - KIAI这开始
3. 01:56:807 (x) - ^
4. 03:09:534 (x) - 这里可以再来个喷泉- -

Breeze wrote:

老中医威武

[General]

1. 3个osb文件...太威武了,做掉他们- -
2. Tag可以加点kazura, gindoki什么的吧- -,嘛不加也无所谓

[Easy]

1. 00:35:671 (4) - 这里建议用个normal finish, 声音减小到60%-70%
2. 01:05:898 (x) - 感觉KIAI这开始比较好

[Normal]

1. 00:20:444 (6) - 整个slider加finish感觉会更好
2. 00:57:716 (3) - Normal hitsound貌似更好
3. 01:05:898 (x) - KIAI这开始

[Hard]

1. 01:05:898 (x) - KIAI这开始
2. 01:56:807 (x) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:09:875 (2,3) - spacing有点怪...容易误读成1/2拍间距的,可能只是我...
2. 01:05:898 (x) - KIAI这开始
3. 01:56:807 (x) - ^
4. 03:09:534 (x) - 这里可以再来个喷泉- -

nice map
star

1. I got Offset: 434. A little later than yours
2. Maybe you could put "vocal" in the tags? (I can't think of many for this song )

Doomsday93 wrote:

Alright then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. I got Offset: 434. A little later than yours
2. Maybe you could put "vocal" in the tags? (I can't think of many for this song )

[EASY]

Nice. Seems fine

[NORMAL]

This feels more like a Hard difficulty than a Normal difficulty. If you keep this difficulty as it is, I could rename this to Normal+.
Increase overall difficulty by 1 notch too?

00:46:580 (1) - Delete this spinner? Im sure a slider or something would work better here, rather than a sudden short spinner.
01:39:762 (4,5,6) - With the low Overall difficulty, this bit is hard to read, since all of the beats are crushed in together. Maybe you could set these out a different way that would make them clearer to read?

[HARD]

00:39:534 (1) - like in Normal, I think something else would fit better here than a short spinner.
00:46:580 (1) - ^
01:30:216 (1) - ^
01:37:489 (1) - ^

[INSANE]

One thing that I don't like in this is that it has a lot of random, quick jumps (such as 00:31:125, 01:31:125, 02:02:034 etc). I don't think they make much sense, and the fact that they are fast jumps doesn't help. Is there any way that you could close these up? I don't think you will, but its an idea.

Apart from the jumps, Nothing else bothered me too much.

Hmm. Overall its alright, but Normal/Easy have a boring layout. The beats were all on Right-Angles. You had an interesting layout in Insane, so maybe you could do something like that for the Normal/Easy difficulty? Maybe not in this map, but it your next map.

Starred

orioncomet wrote:

just some suggestions.

[General]
- dark blue combo color a bit hard to see.. maybe just for me Orz but plz can you make it lighter then this? >.<;

[Easy]
01:00:433 (1) - this note is hidden at repeat silder >_<!

[Normal]
00:44:297 (1,2,3,4) - a bit hard to see for Normal for me
00:49:524 (3,4) - use normal hitsound? [Ex. is on Hard, it's sound really good +-+b]

[Insane]
00:35:434 (3) - remove sound clap here, it's sound a bit weird T.T
00:41:570 (5) - ^
01:40:888 (3) - ^
03:09:524 - start kiai time here look better

<3

wuliang wrote:

老中医咋不做昙天啊,,,这么燃的歌没一个是rank的

deepsea wrote:

2

James2250 wrote:

From looking at previous comments made by BAT's a map should never have (Full Ver.) anywhere on it

I am not going to pop because I do not know exactly where the thread stating it is or how much the BAT team agrees on this but for the next BAT that looks at this, keep that in mind

James2250 wrote:

From looking at previous comments made by BAT's a map should never have (Full Ver.) anywhere on it

I am not going to pop because I do not know exactly where the thread stating it is or how much the BAT team agrees on this but for the next BAT that looks at this, keep that in mind

James2250 wrote:

mmmm I will just forget (Full Ver.) thing for now, if BAT's want to look into it they can

Also I see 320kbps mp3? (Thought it was wrong looking at who modded this map)
Re-downloaded several times and got another MAT to check

Find an mp3 between 128-256kbps or check my sig.
Then call me back and I will see if I can rebubble~

orioncomet wrote:

for new mp3
Offset: 481 sound better to me ><!

about the tittle it sound ウォーアイニー = Uwo Ai Ni ....? (ウォーアイニー = I love you, in chinese)
maybe just different spell >A<

Alace wrote:

the clap in the music is a bit early
drumbeat is a bit late,
i was picking the offset from 460~480
this one is really hard to time XD

EDIT:Lzy silly guy didn`t change the offset after using a new mp3 XDDD

James2250 wrote:

-From what I have seen from google this song is meant to be called "Wo Ai Ni" Double check that and change it (follow this thread so you don't create a duplicate map -- if you are sure it is right at the moment ignore this
-Remove countdown from every difficulty

Easy:
Why not start this at the same place as the other difficulties? Guess it doesn't matter..
01:25:929 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for an Easy (as well as short spinner to add to it) maybe map it a different way
01:40:475 (4,1) - don't really like anti jump but you can keep it if you can't think of another pattern

Normal:
00:09:565 (1,3) - stack this and slider?
00:24:799 (3) - why is this the only one of these that ends on a white tick and not a red?

Hard:
00:11:617 (2) - almost hidden repeat, a few people might miss it
01:33:208 (1,2,1,2) - slightly confusing on first play through

Insane:
01:19:344 (3) - extend 1/2?

You are welcome to ignore anything you disagree with
I apologize for making you wait longer than I should of. Ploy is happy to rebubble after any fixes (according to her )

I'm lazy <_<

deepsea wrote:

2.