Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI · forum

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-01-21T19:55:54+00:00

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]

Looks good~

[Easy]

00:27:140 (2,3,4) - You should improve this triangle, looks somewhat untidy atm. You can easily do this by nudging (3) to the left, and then readjust the other notes to fix spacing.
00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors.

[Normal]

01:01:473 (4,1) - This blanket isn't done very well, making the pattern seem untidy. You should fix it, even if a blanket wasn't your intent it will still look nicer.
01:02:806 (3,4,5) - You should improve this triangle pattern. If you were to make this a nice equilateral triangle, then the pattern will look cleaner imo.
01:11:473 (4) - Add a soft finish at the start of this slider. In this part of the song, you seem to be having a soft finish on every other downbeat, so excluding the finish here will make it inconsistent, causing it to sound odd and out of place.

[Hard]

00:32:140 (4,5) - You've probably done this overlap (and similar ones) intentionally, but tbh I'm not really a fan of it, looks untidy imo.
01:21:806 (4) - The drum finish you've placed at the end of this slider feels out of place, this is the only time you've used this in the music, so it feels weird to hear it for the first time towards the end of the song. Either add more in earlier places or replace this with another hitsound.
01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The random hitsounds you've placed in this slider stream (starts of 01:24:140 (3,4) - for example) don't really sound nice because there isn't a significant enough change in the music to justify them, so they sound weird and out of place. I suggest removing them and keeping the stream's hitsounds consistent.

[Karia's Insane]

00:37:806 (6,1) - I don't really like how a massive portion of (1) is hidden beneath (6), it doesn't look that great and players will likely have trouble reading this. I would change things a bit so a smaller portion of the slider is covered.
01:17:473 (1,1) - The two sliderends aren't properly stacked. Although this is really minor, it's still noticeable because auto stacking doesn't occur with overlaps like these, so it's important that they are precise, otherwise the map will seem untidy.

[Insane]

01:21:806 (5) - Like in your hard diff, this drum finish feels out of place, so consider removing it or adding more.

Nice mapset ^^ There's really not much to point out.

I shot a star, good luck!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-21T21:48:55+00:00

k ill be expecting mah mod soon

/....https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-22T00:53:03+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]
Looks good~
[Easy]
00:27:140 (2,3,4) - You should improve this triangle, looks somewhat untidy atm. You can easily do this by nudging (3) to the left, and then readjust the other notes to fix spacing. wasn't really going for a triangle thing
00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors. i think you gave me the wrong coordinates or something

[Normal]
01:01:473 (4,1) - This blanket isn't done very well, making the pattern seem untidy. You should fix it, even if a blanket wasn't your intent it will still look nicer. adjusted
01:02:806 (3,4,5) - You should improve this triangle pattern. If you were to make this a nice equilateral triangle, then the pattern will look cleaner imo. don't really pay attention to these things in lower difficulties but why not
01:11:473 (4) - Add a soft finish at the start of this slider. In this part of the song, you seem to be having a soft finish on every other downbeat, so excluding the finish here will make it inconsistent, causing it to sound odd and out of place. don't have one in the other difficulties (neither does Karia) so I'd rather not.
[Hard]
00:32:140 (4,5) - You've probably done this overlap (and similar ones) intentionally, but tbh I'm not really a fan of it, looks untidy imo. i like it :3
01:21:806 (4) - The drum finish you've placed at the end of this slider feels out of place, this is the only time you've used this in the music, so it feels weird to hear it for the first time towards the end of the song. Either add more in earlier places or replace this with another hitsound. i guess ill switch to whistle
01:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The random hitsounds you've placed in this slider stream (starts of 01:24:140 (3,4) - for example) don't really sound nice because there isn't a significant enough change in the music to justify them, so they sound weird and out of place. I suggest removing them and keeping the stream's hitsounds consistent. true
[Insane]
01:21:806 (5) - Like in your hard diff, this drum finish feels out of place, so consider removing it or adding more. k
Nice mapset ^^ There's really not much to point out.

I shot a star, good luck!

Thanks for the mod and star!

Kibbleru wrote:
k ill be expecting mah mod soon /....https://osu.ppy.sh/s/262343

Lmao alright, i'll get to it by the end of this weekend b/c finals

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-22T02:28:30+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
[Karia's Insane]
00:37:806 (6,1) - I don't really like how a massive portion of (1) is hidden beneath (6), it doesn't look that great and players will likely have trouble reading this. I would change things a bit so a smaller portion of the slider is covered. I don't dislike this overlap and reading also no problem imo @3@
01:17:473 (1,1) - The two sliderends aren't properly stacked. Although this is really minor, it's still noticeable because auto stacking doesn't occur with overlaps like these, so it's important that they are precise, otherwise the map will seem untidy. fixed

Thanks for modding!

SPOILER

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lolia

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Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-22T10:22:01+00:00

Fixed the hitsounds!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54140,58473
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 5.599997

[Metadata]
Title:FUBUKI
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:ending TV Size kancolle kantai collection karia
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-01-22T16:32:46+00:00

Knotts wrote:
00:37:473 (2,3) - I think this pattern would flow a lot better if you were to move (3) to x:248 y:320, this way the cursor from (2) will already be on its way to the start of (3), and won't have to change direction to hit the next note. Don't forget to move the notes afterwards to prevent spacing errors. i think you gave me the wrong coordinates or something

oops lol, I meant to highlight 00:37:420 (4,1) - instead, and move (1) to coordinates x:428 y:320
Sorry about that >.>

hehe

1,971 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-01-22T18:01:06+00:00

hi nots

l-lewd.. i did not come for lolis

also, p/3744771

Insane

00:09:170 (3) - is dis fakking snapped to 1/12
00:24:253 - as an avid enthusiast of streams, there is a lack of stream here.
00:58:420 (3) - shifting this to somewhere 200,45 is better imo, super antijump to stream is just awkward.
01:24:087 (9) - NC plox
01:25:420 (7) - this too

Hard

nothing major but doesn't it irk you that 1/2 sliderheads and ends touch? dat SV is slow so slow
00:02:087 (1) - distinctly remember this being ctrl+g's before. okay but just to be sure make sure the sliderends stack. that pattern is way better.
00:11:420 (1) - move this a little to the left so it fits with that staggered stream thing you like to do
00:56:420 (5,1) - make this look better its like a half-overlap half-blanket
01:00:587 (4,1) - imo, stack isn't really needed here. use DS instead.
01:05:420 (3,4) - same thing here
01:08:753 (1) - not your best slidershape :p

Normal

just a caution, you're probably gonna need to have a little bit more 1/2 rhythms in here to make the spread a little more smooth from normal to hard.
00:42:753 - have a clicky here, rather than a reverse. muh vocals
01:01:420 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - strongly feel that its fine to have a rhythm like this. it might be repetitive but it captures the repetitive nature of the vocals :phttp://i.imgur.com/npYztAo.png
01:04:753 (1) - maybe have the bend on the tick lol, well actually you're probably gonna make this long slider harder anyway :v

Easy

00:08:753 (1,2) - ctrl+g in rhythm, more suitable to the vocals, imo
00:11:420 (1) - end spinner here 00:12:753 - and start the rhythm here 00:14:087 - . a little awkward now
00:54:087 (1,2) - ahhh awkawrd rhythm, here something simple n good: http://i.imgur.com/3OxW7QL.png

mapset is on point, good luck.

Last edited by hehe 2015-01-23T17:17:17+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-01-22T21:20:37+00:00

Hello Knotts! forum pm

General

* Timing felt a little off for me, and I personally got 738. You should check with more people though, my timing skills aren't that good - and this song sounds a bit tricky anyway ._.

Hitsounds

* Your diffs only.
* 00:01:587 - (Insane) I don't really get why you added a whistle here on the red tick. To me if kinda feels spammed, because directly after that (4)'s head has one. There's no real sound in the song itself where it could go with, and you didn't put it at 00:04:087 (3) - 's end for example. I'd remove the whistle, and add it on the slider head instead.
* 00:02:087 (1) - Optional, but add a whistle for the piano?
* 00:04:420 (4) - Add whistle, same sound as 00:01:753 (3) - ?
* 00:14:087 (1) - Dunno why you have an extra clap here. There's no extra sound other than the cymbal that jumps out to me here. To me, this sound is similar to 00:59:420 (1) -
* 00:17:337 (4) - Add a clap here on the blue tick. Same sound as 00:18:670 (5) -
* 00:21:253 - Remove the clap here? There's nothing in the song itself, just like 00:18:587 (4) -
* 00:47:420 (1) - Sounds so empty here, add whistle or clap ;w;?
* 00:52:753 (1) - Hmm.. I hear a cymbal here, add finish?
* 00:58:587 (1) - I'd add a clap here. There's no sound or anything in the song, I must admit that, but you put a green line here with 20%, making this note more qujiet than the others. Not adding a clap makes this note almost silent.
* 01:04:420 (6) - Sounds more like a cymbal to me >_>

Easy

* 00:24:420 (4) - Optional, but I'd split this slider into two circles so the finish is clickable.

Normal

* 00:19:920 (2,3) - Change this to a slider, like 00:14:587 (2) - ? Would make the rhythm more consistent.
* 00:27:753 (2) - I'd curve it the other way for a smoother flow.

* 00:29:420 (4,5,1,2,3) - This seems to be quite a lot of 1/2 tapping compared to the rest of your diffs. Especially after a short repeat slider at (4) this might confuse some players. Consider removing (5) so this pattern is a bit more simple.
* 00:54:587 (2,3) - I recommend turning these into sliders as well. This rhythm is repeated twice and might be a bit hard for normal players to play this without a small break in between. You don't even have these kind of things in the KIAI time, so I don't recommend doing it in a calmer part like now.
* 00:55:920 (6,7) - If you do the suggestion above, you should apply it here as well.
* 01:10:087 (1,2,3,4) - Consider some tweaking here so it's visually more appealing.

Hard

* 00:09:920 (4) - There should really be something here imo. The vocal note here is much stronger than 00:09:420 (3) - imo. Try something like this?

* 00:31:587 (2) - Remove this note? A gap here fits quite nice imo, and you didn't map 00:38:253 - either.
* 00:40:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm isn't really following the vocals, but it's not following the instruments either... Consider using this rhythm? Would make it a bit simlar to 00:31:420 (4,5) - and it gives more emphasis to both the vocals and the instruments.

Karia's Insane

* 00:03:420 (1) - Since you don't really have a lot of hitsounds in the beginning, I highly suggest to at least put something here. This feels really empty here, while this is quite a strong beat. A whistle or clap would fit perfectly fine here.
* 00:09:309 (4) - Sounds like an overmap to me (plays fine though)
* 00:26:087 (1,2,3) - I'd make (2,3)'s spacing larger than (1,2), because of the whistle at (3).

Insane

* 00:08:420 (4,5,6,1) - I recommend stacking these. The rhythm usage here is already complicated, and you did stack at 00:05:920 (1,2) -
* 00:10:420 (3,4) - The distance here plays a bit awkward after the jumps at (1,2). Consider increasing the spacing here, making (3) a 1/2 slider, or adding another circle at 00:10:587 -? You didn't have any gap in the Hard diff though...
* 00:20:753 (1) - Consider adding a small curve to this slider? Would flow better and especially with a 3/4 slider + note it's smoother to play.

Looks good overall, rhythm and placement looks fine to me!

Good luck :3

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-22T23:56:48+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hello Knotts! forum pm

:idea: General

* Timing felt a little off for me, and I personally got 738. You should check with more people though, my timing skills aren't that good - and this song sounds a bit tricky anyway ._. I'll get some people to check it out

Hitsounds

* Your diffs only.
* 00:01:587 - (Insane) I don't really get why you added a whistle here on the red tick. To me if kinda feels spammed, because directly after that (4)'s head has one. There's no real sound in the song itself where it could go with, and you didn't put it at 00:04:087 (3) - 's end for example. I'd remove the whistle, and add it on the slider head instead. woops
* 00:02:087 (1) - Optional, but add a whistle for the piano? sure
* 00:04:420 (4) - Add whistle, same sound as 00:01:753 (3) - ? done
* 00:14:087 (1) - Dunno why you have an extra clap here. There's no extra sound other than the cymbal that jumps out to me here. To me, this sound is similar to 00:59:420 (1) - k
* 00:17:337 (4) - Add a clap here on the blue tick. Same sound as 00:18:670 (5) - k
* 00:21:253 - Remove the clap here? There's nothing in the song itself, just like 00:18:587 (4) - k
* 00:47:420 (1) - Sounds so empty here, add whistle or clap ;w;? done
* 00:52:753 (1) - Hmm.. I hear a cymbal here, add finish? added
* 00:58:587 (1) - I'd add a clap here. There's no sound or anything in the song, I must admit that, but you put a green line here with 20%, making this note more qujiet than the others. Not adding a clap makes this note almost silent. alright
* 01:04:420 (6) - Sounds more like a cymbal to me >_> sounds like both clap and finish fits here

Easy

* 00:24:420 (4) - Optional, but I'd split this slider into two circles so the finish is clickable. not really a fan of two circles in a row in an easy. Mostly appearance wise

Normal

* 00:19:920 (2,3) - Change this to a slider, like 00:14:587 (2) - ? Would make the rhythm more consistent. i think this one has more emphasis on it so i used circles instead
* 00:27:753 (2) - I'd curve it the other way for a smoother flow. oh cool. hopefully it doesn't destroy the flow from (1) though
* 00:29:420 (4,5,1,2,3) - This seems to be quite a lot of 1/2 tapping compared to the rest of your diffs. Especially after a short repeat slider at (4) this might confuse some players. Consider removing (5) so this pattern is a bit more simple. done
* 00:54:587 (2,3) - I recommend turning these into sliders as well. This rhythm is repeated twice and might be a bit hard for normal players to play this without a small break in between. You don't even have these kind of things in the KIAI time, so I don't recommend doing it in a calmer part like now. ehh, im gonna keep this one. it helps the spread between the normal and hard
* 00:55:920 (6,7) - If you do the suggestion above, you should apply it here as well. ^
* 01:10:087 (1,2,3,4) - Consider some tweaking here so it's visually more appealing. k

Hard

* 00:09:920 (4) - There should really be something here imo. The vocal note here is much stronger than 00:09:420 (3) - imo. Try something like this?
* 00:31:587 (2) - Remove this note? A gap here fits quite nice imo, and you didn't map 00:38:253 - either. it sounds so naked to me yet the one where i did put a gap sounds natural... :3 idk
* 00:40:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm isn't really following the vocals, but it's not following the instruments either... Consider using this rhythm? Would make it a bit simlar to 00:31:420 (4,5) - and it gives more emphasis to both the vocals and the instruments. ehh this already sounds fine to me

Insane

* 00:08:420 (4,5,6,1) - I recommend stacking these. The rhythm usage here is already complicated, and you did stack at 00:05:920 (1,2) - i stacked those because they are 1/2. I don't really like the way 4 objects stacked on 1/3 look together, plus i've played it multiple times and it doesn't really feel weird at all to play
* 00:10:420 (3,4) - The distance here plays a bit awkward after the jumps at (1,2). Consider increasing the spacing here, making (3) a 1/2 slider, or adding another circle at 00:10:587 -? You didn't have any gap in the Hard diff though... added a circle
* 00:20:753 (1) - Consider adding a small curve to this slider? Would flow better and especially with a 3/4 slider + note it's smoother to play. k

Looks good overall, rhythm and placement looks fine to me!

Good luck :3

Thanks for the mod!

[ Joey ]

390 posts

Joined May 2013

[ Joey ] 2015-01-23T00:53:37+00:00

Hey Knotts! Here's my m4m

General
Your offset is pretty off. Offset 811 sounds a lot better to me.

Insane
00:02:144 (1) - Should put a whistle here. It's hard for me to hear any hitsound on this note, especially if you don't have a whistle on it, so you might want to consider increasing the volume on this as well.
00:10:644 (4) - I would prefer if this hitcircle was place somewhere around x:406 y:44. The flow feels a lot better that way.
00:13:477 - It would be cool if you increased the spacing of the stream here to match the music: http://puu.sh/eTkyD/319ac90721.jpg
00:15:394 - Should make a triple right here to match the trumpet sounding thing, much like what you did here 00:17:310 (3,4,5) -
00:18:060 - ^
00:31:394 - Maybe add a triple here too, for the same reason
00:34:060 - ^
00:34:977 (5,6) - I feel this jump should be larger to emphasize the stronger part of the song that start right afterwards.
00:51:144 (4,5) - Should add drum claps on these notes
01:25:144 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd rather not have a closing stream stacked like this. It feels a little anti-climatic. Thats just my personal opinion though.
Really fun diff

Hard
00:09:473 (3) - I don't agree with this slider on 1/3. It doesn't really go with anything in my opinion. And it misses that noice right here 00:09:806 -
00:14:806 (3,4) - Are these suposed to be stacked?
00:45:473 (3) - It would sound better if a cymbal finish was on this slider head
01:25:473 (3,4) - Replacing these last two reverse sliders with hitcircles will give this difficulty a nice finish. It will also make your diff a little harder, which is a good thing because I think the gap in between this diff and the GD Insane is a little big.

Normal
00:11:473 (1) - Add whistle on slider head
00:12:806 - I recommend reducing the volume of this slider tail to about 40%. Right now it sounds a little loud.
00:32:140 (6) - I would prefer if this slider was pointing towards the next slider to improve flow, like this: http://puu.sh/eToYX/844ec0aa60.jpg
01:12:140 (5,6,1) - This combo looks pretty messy to me. Maybe make it more symmetrical

That's all I see!
Good luck!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-23T05:29:03+00:00

[ Joey ] wrote:
Hey Knotts! Here's my m4m

General
Your offset is pretty off. Offset 811 sounds a lot better to me. yeah, but the offsets closer to 700, not 800. ill be getting it checked later

Insane
00:02:144 (1) - Should put a whistle here. It's hard for me to hear any hitsound on this note, especially if you don't have a whistle on it, so you might want to consider increasing the volume on this as well. there's already a whistle here
00:10:644 (4) - I would prefer if this hitcircle was place somewhere around x:406 y:44. The flow feels a lot better that way. not seeing the flow increase
00:13:477 - It would be cool if you increased the spacing of the stream here to match the music: http://puu.sh/eTkyD/319ac90721.jpg i'd rather not do something like that in my insane. it's an easyish insane
00:15:394 - Should make a triple right here to match the trumpet sounding thing, much like what you did here 00:17:310 (3,4,5) - i wasnt really mapping the trumpet here, i was mapping the clap
00:18:060 - ^ since i wasnt mapping the trumpet last time
00:31:394 - Maybe add a triple here too, for the same reason ^
00:34:060 - ^ ^
00:34:977 (5,6) - I feel this jump should be larger to emphasize the stronger part of the song that start right afterwards.
00:51:144 (4,5) - Should add drum claps on these notes i'd rather just keep whistles
01:25:144 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd rather not have a closing stream stacked like this. It feels a little anti-climatic. Thats just my personal opinion though. just keeping it easy cause i hate playing streams
Really fun diff

Hard
00:09:473 (3) - I don't agree with this slider on 1/3. It doesn't really go with anything in my opinion. And it misses that noice right here 00:09:806 - ive been told it was 1/3
00:14:806 (3,4) - Are these suposed to be stacked? your timing and what not is all f'ed up so i dont know what you're talking about but it probably was supposed to be stacked
00:45:473 (3) - It would sound better if a cymbal finish was on this slider head disagree, doesn't sound like a finish to me
01:25:473 (3,4) - Replacing these last two reverse sliders with hitcircles will give this difficulty a nice finish. It will also make your diff a little harder, which is a good thing because I think the gap in between this diff and the GD Insane is a little big. stream of 6 seems a little crazy for a hard, plus the gap between the hard and karia's insane isn't large at all

Normal
00:11:473 (1) - Add whistle on slider head not a fan of how that sounds
00:12:806 - I recommend reducing the volume of this slider tail to about 40%. Right now it sounds a little loud. i can hardly hear it over the stream
00:32:140 (6) - I would prefer if this slider was pointing towards the next slider to improve flow, like this: http://puu.sh/eToYX/844ec0aa60.jpg flow from the circle then becomes awkward. the flow from the two sliders don't play too differently from what you have
01:12:140 (5,6,1) - This combo looks pretty messy to me. Maybe make it more symmetrical done

That's all I see!
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod, I'll get to your map over the weekend

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-23T09:53:11+00:00

handsome wrote:
no love for karia cuz map is already solid Give me a love ww

appleeaterx wrote:
Karia's Insane

* 00:03:420 (1) - Since you don't really have a lot of hitsounds in the beginning, I highly suggest to at least put something here. This feels really empty here, while this is quite a strong beat. A whistle or clap would fit perfectly fine here. Hmm,,already I applied the drum-sampleset on here, but..Ok, added the whistle!
* 00:09:309 (4) - Sounds like an overmap to me (plays fine though) Actually there's no beat here, but this is natural to play and will be not unrankable imo.. I want to keep current rhythm ;w;
* 00:26:087 (1,2,3) - I'd make (2,3)'s spacing larger than (1,2), because of the whistle at (3). Usually I don't mind about DS when I using the jumps. I mapping that just for my personal aesthetic things, and current placement is better to me orz

Thanks for modding!

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[Metadata]
Title:FUBUKI
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
Tags:ending TV Size kantai karia 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

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Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2015-01-23T14:06:47+00:00

Hi there :3
from my hueue~

Easy

01:07:473 (1) - just normal slider curve for better blanket
00:48:806 (2) - improve blanket

rest is fine for me~

Normal

00:08:753 (1) - blanketing to other side for better flow, just ctrl+j and repair the blanket like this
00:46:087 (1) - Improve the blanket maybe like this ?
01:15:087 (5) - stack properly ?

Hard

00:02:087 (1) - i want ctrl+g this cuz it would be more fun
00:07:976 (2) - snap to blue line, im not sure this is 1/6, wait after i test with 50% playback rate, this is the truth
00:09:420 (3) - im pretty sure this is 4/6 slider started in 2/6 *pict
00:16:003 - add note ?
01:12:253 (4) - this is follow what? just remove and stacking (5) with (3)

am i get old mp3 ? i feels the offset is too fast 1/6ms i guess, im download 21 jan (when you change new mp3 & hitsound)
mine the offset is still 754 :l
just finish this here, due i need take a rest for a while
shoots moons for awesome song and map :3

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-01-23T22:08:53+00:00

insane
01:18:087 (1,2,3) - i think for this part it's better to keep the 1/3 up, just use two 2/3 sliders.

nice background by the way

hard
00:09:420 (3) - just do this

SPOILER

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-24T01:10:55+00:00

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Hi there :3
from my hueue~

Easy
01:07:473 (1) - just normal slider curve for better blanket i prefer what i already have :3
00:48:806 (2) - improve blanket adjusted

rest is fine for me~

Normal
00:08:753 (1) - blanketing to other side for better flow, just ctrl+j and repair the blanket like this such a big gap between the objects so i don't think this really matters for the flow
00:46:087 (1) - Improve the blanket maybe like this ? adjusted
01:15:087 (5) - stack properly ? oops, idk how that happened

Hard
00:02:087 (1) - i want ctrl+g this cuz it would be more fun slow part of the song so i dont really want any big spacings here
00:07:976 (2) - snap to blue line, im not sure this is 1/6, wait after i test with 50% playback rate, this is the it's 1/3truth
00:09:420 (3) - im pretty sure this is 4/6 slider started in 2/6 its fine*pict
00:16:003 - add note ? not too necessary
01:12:253 (4) - this is follow what? just remove and stacking (5) with (3) follows the music

am i get old mp3 ? i feels the offset is too fast 1/6ms i guess, im download 21 jan (when you change new mp3 & hitsound)
mine the offset is still 754 :l yeah i'll try to get someone to check the timing
just finish this here, due i need take a rest for a while
shoots moons for awesome song and map :3

handsome wrote:
hi nots

l-lewd.. i did not come for lolis

also, p/3744771 fixed

Insane
00:09:170 (3) - is dis fakking snapped to 1/12 idk how that happened lol
00:24:253 - as an avid enthusiast of streams, there is a lack of stream here. streams = 666
00:58:420 (3) - shifting this to somewhere 200,45 is better imo, super antijump to stream is just awkward. moved it a little further away than how it already was
01:24:087 (9) - NC plox dont see a reason why
01:25:420 (7) - this too ^

Hard
nothing major but doesn't it irk you that 1/2 sliderheads and ends touch? dat SV is slow so slow nah i feel good
00:02:087 (1) - distinctly remember this being ctrl+g's before. okay but just to be sure make sure the sliderends stack. that pattern is way better. its always been like this
00:11:420 (1) - move this a little to the left so it fits with that staggered stream thing you like to do done
00:56:420 (5,1) - make this look better its like a half-overlap half-blanket looks fine to me
01:00:587 (4,1) - imo, stack isn't really needed here. use DS instead. i'd rather keep it to keep my hard not too difficult
01:05:420 (3,4) - same thing here ^
01:08:753 (1) - not your best slidershape :p i use this slider all the time

Normal
just a caution, you're probably gonna need to have a little bit more 1/2 rhythms in here to make the spread a little more smooth from normal to hard.
00:42:753 - have a clicky here, rather than a reverse. muh vocals it's just one long scream, idk what you want me to map
01:01:420 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - strongly feel that its fine to have a rhythm like this. it might be repetitive but it captures the repetitive nature of the vocals :phttp://i.imgur.com/npYztAo.png too many 1/2s in a row to me
01:04:753 (1) - maybe have the bend on the tick lol, well actually you're probably gonna make this long slider harder anyway :v tis fineee

Easy
00:08:753 (1,2) - ctrl+g in rhythm, more suitable to the vocals, imo done
00:11:420 (1) - end spinner here 00:12:753 - and start the rhythm here 00:14:087 - . a little awkward now done
00:54:087 (1,2) - ahhh awkawrd rhythm, here something simple n good: http://i.imgur.com/3OxW7QL.png
i think its fine how it is

mapset is on point, good luck.

Kibbleru wrote:
insane
01:18:087 (1,2,3) - i think for this part it's better to keep the 1/3 up, just use two 2/3 sliders. if you say so

nice background by the way heh, got it from Unsfamiliar

hard
00:09:420 (3) - just do this oh true
SPOILER

Thanks for the mods

Voxnola

729 posts

Joined May 2013

Voxnola 2015-01-24T01:28:26+00:00

Can't wait for my American Express kds

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-24T03:18:10+00:00

Self Modding

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2015-01-25T04:39:37+00:00

[Insane]
00:07:404 (1) - Could finish on 1/3 snap imo (00:07:626 - ), since that's more fit with current pattern
http://puu.sh/eZutT/ad353823eb.jpg
I'm a bit unsure about 00:10:737 - but surely this part 00:10:071 - is 1/3 snap
01:11:904 (4) - This plays better if stacked with (2) imo
01:13:404 (3) - Finish for consistency ?
01:15:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should be 1/3 snap too, i'm worried that following the drum which unclear 1/4 or 1/3 could cause an issue. Since the vocal is clearly 1/3
01:16:737 (1,2) - ^
01:17:404 (1) - End this at 01:17:626 - to fit 01:17:737 (1) -
01:19:404 (1,2) - also should be end at 1/3 snap, that could make more sense with the vocal

Knotts

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Topic Starter

Knotts 2015-01-25T05:17:38+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
[Insane]
00:07:404 (1) - Could finish on 1/3 snap imo (00:07:626 - ), since that's more fit with current pattern alright
http://puu.sh/eZutT/ad353823eb.jpg
I'm a bit unsure about 00:10:737 - but surely this part 00:10:071 - is 1/3 snap ok
01:11:904 (4) - This plays better if stacked with (2) imo nice
01:13:404 (3) - Finish for consistency ? i dont hear a finish here :3
01:15:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should be 1/3 snap too, i'm worried that following the drum which unclear 1/4 or 1/3 could cause an issue. Since the vocal is clearly 1/3 the drums sound like clear 1/4s to me
01:16:737 (1,2) - ^ I like mapping the drums here tho
01:17:404 (1) - End this at 01:17:626 - to fit 01:17:737 (1) - done
01:19:404 (1,2) - also should be end at 1/3 snap, that could make more sense with the vocal sounds like the drum ends on 1/4 though

Thanks for the mod

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-01-25T18:40:44+00:00

i forgot, did i give you the mp3 yet?

http://puu.sh/f0ZE1/44be4aaf6c.mp3

Voxnola

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Voxnola 2015-01-26T01:10:58+00:00

American Express kds pls

I helped with offset

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-01-27T19:08:06+00:00

insane
00:09:000 (4,5,6) - it might be better to just make this a 2/3 slider, cuz i think the drums are on 1/4 but vocals are 1/3
00:59:667 - i swear to fking god there's drums on 1/3 here wtf
01:05:167 (7) - 1/3
01:07:250 (3) - ^

fuck every stream in this song. 01:10:000 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this one is cool tho

okay so the only ones we gotta check are
00:10:889 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
00:59:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

also heres a new mp3 http://puu.sh/f7vP1/68830c62bb.mp3

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-01-30T00:32:31+00:00

did u upload the new mp3? doesn't seem like u did :X
http://puu.sh/fdad3/d3e71c5154.mp3

also wtf is this

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Garven

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Garven 2015-02-04T02:26:30+00:00

Blame Kibb.

[Insane]
00:09:750 (3) - Snap this to 1/6.

00:11:333 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - These are 1/3, not 1/4
00:24:000 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
00:33:333 (1) - End of slider is snapped wrong
00:44:000 (1) - ^ etc. Map unsnapped slider ends consistently please. Either use them during a certain part of the song and repeat it or don't use them at all.
00:45:333 (1,1,1,1) - New combo spam
01:07:917 (2) - Why do you do this in the middle of a 1/3-heavy section?

Kibb: At 0:59, the timpani roll isn't exactly on-time. Making a player try to play in time with that is a bad idea - the 1/4 here are fine in a playability aspect.

Voxnola

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Voxnola 2015-02-04T02:42:23+00:00

rip

Q~Q

Last edited by Voxnola 2015-02-04T03:06:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Knotts

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Knotts 2015-02-04T03:03:09+00:00

See ya guys in June

Voxnola

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Voxnola 2015-02-12T04:56:13+00:00

It's June now guys don't worry

Knotts

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Knotts 2015-02-12T05:04:42+00:00

Garven wrote:
Blame Kibb.

[Insane]
00:09:750 (3) - Snap this to 1/6. fixed i think

00:11:333 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - These are 1/3, not 1/4 fixed
00:24:000 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam but they all have different SV's so NCs are necessary
00:33:333 (1) - End of slider is snapped wrong alright i guess
00:44:000 (1) - ^ etc. Map unsnapped slider ends consistently please. Either use them during a certain part of the song and repeat it or don't use them at all. I like to do this before a circle spam
00:45:333 (1,1,1,1) - New combo spam same as last time
01:07:917 (2) - Why do you do this in the middle of a 1/3-heavy section? it doesn't really seem to cause a problem when playing

Kibb: At 0:59, the timpani roll isn't exactly on-time. Making a player try to play in time with that is a bad idea - the 1/4 here are fine in a playability aspect.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-13T07:15:35+00:00

for both hard and insane, these are structured badly
00:10:335 (1,2,3) - please give them only 1 repeat and have every slider head start on a white tick.

01:17:668 (1,2) - for insane these are snapped 1/3 and for hard they are 1/4? some consistency pls owo. so if you're going with more instrument use 1/4 or vocals 1/3

get karia to look at garven's mod too

lolia

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lolia 2015-02-13T16:07:10+00:00

Checked my parts

Garven wrote:
00:11:333 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - These are 1/3, not 1/4 changed to spinner
00:24:000 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam I want to keep for emphasizing the music

Thanks for modding!

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hehe

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hehe 2015-02-13T17:03:20+00:00

your lie in february

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-20T00:49:58+00:00

fix metadata then call me

edit:
and so this happened

SPOILER

20:08 Kibbleru: lust
20:09 Kibbleru: that part is 1/4 right
20:09 Lust: sup
20:09 Lust: in fubuki?
20:09 Kibbleru: yea
20:09 Kibbleru: this is knott's map
20:09 Kibbleru: 00:50:168 - 
20:09 Kibbleru: sounds like 1/4 to me imo
20:09 Kibbleru: he just used a triplet
20:10 Lust: correct snapping is impossible in kawaiykwik's mp3
20:10 Lust: the new mp3 fixes this and allows it to land on a tick perfectly
20:10 Kibbleru: can u check for this one that it sounds close enough
20:10 Lust: is it a different mp3?
20:10 Kibbleru: cuz this is the one i made
20:10 Kibbleru: yeah
20:10 Kibbleru: i made this mp3
20:10 Lust: link it to me
20:10 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/604817 Nishizawa Shiena - FUBUKI [Karia's Insane]]
20:10 Kibbleru: 00:50:168 - 
20:11 Lust: dling
20:12 Lust: where are these triplets
20:12 Kibbleru: 00:49:906 - 
20:12 Kibbleru: oh
20:12 Lust: ok found them
20:12 Kibbleru: fk this sounds more like on
20:12 Kibbleru: 1/16
20:12 Kibbleru: lol
20:12 Kibbleru: i mean
20:12 Kibbleru: 1/8
20:12 Kibbleru: fk
20:13 Lust: your mp3 sounds more 1/8 ye
20:13 Kibbleru: but this 00:49:989 (6) - definitely sounds on time
20:13 Kibbleru: for simplicity's sake is it fine to leave it like this?
20:13 Lust: just use the new mp3 and save all trouble
20:13 Kibbleru: well
20:13 Kibbleru: i resnapped some other vocals too.
20:13 Kibbleru: and guitar
20:13 Kibbleru: cuz they were off
20:13 Lust: the battle of the correct mp3 rages on
20:14 Kibbleru: i feel like this is okay atm though.
20:14 Kibbleru: cuz mapping 1/8 would just make it somewhat more complicated
20:14 Kibbleru: and the "overmap i guess" is on a red tick
20:15 Kibbleru: which people "overmap" all the time
20:15 Kibbleru: i just want ur approval on this q:
20:16 Lust: 00:49:934 - sound is more on here IMO
20:16 Lust: 00:49:989 - should be fine
20:17 Kibbleru: lol do u want me to make him use 1/8 for that part
20:17 Lust: just do the same thing i recommended in kawaiykwik's map
20:17 Kibbleru: 1/8 repeat?
20:18 Lust: 1/6 repeat starting on 00:49:934 - here
20:18 Lust: https://i.ppy.sh/e948de5381a6e2f19857207c33ad7b027f6b3ef7/687474703a2f2f7075752e73682f67346b56512f333831393631316138362e6a7067
20:18 Lust: I agree!
20:19 Kibbleru: blah wtf
20:19 Lust: try it
20:19 Lust: should be gucci
20:19 Kibbleru: sounds weird af lol.
20:20 Kibbleru: well
20:20 Kibbleru: looks weird af
20:20 Kibbleru: does pishi's mp3 snap it to the thing u recommended?
20:20 Lust: ya
20:21 Kibbleru: fk im just gunna tell him to omit the first sound and map the 1/4 LOL
20:21 Lust: LOL
20:21 Lust: hey man that works
20:21 Lust: just a circle on the blue tick
20:21 Lust: nothing wrong with undermapping some things haha
20:26 Kibbleru:  /savelog
20:26 Kibbleru: fk

so bubbled now

Voxnola

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Voxnola 2015-02-20T01:33:57+00:00

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k did some minor changes

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Gaia

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Gaia 2015-02-20T01:58:24+00:00

Sekai

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Sekai 2015-02-20T02:04:10+00:00

Gaia wrote:

I totally approve that LOL, gratz <3

Faust

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Faust 2015-02-20T03:12:55+00:00

There is a pretty severe unsnapping going on with the Insane difficulty.

On a side note, thought I'd mention that you did a nice job on this, Karia.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-20T03:16:32+00:00

Faust wrote:
There is a pretty severe unsnapping going on with the Insane difficulty.

On a side note, thought I'd mention that you did a nice job on this, Karia.

where? i dont see it

where is it unsnapped?

neonat

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neonat 2015-02-20T03:18:38+00:00

Just checked manually, seems everything is 1ms off the snap, using stable btw

eg.
00:37:240 (3) - should be 00:37:239
00:45:074 (1) - 00:45:073
01:06:740 (4) - 01:06:739

just random objects picked out from around the song

At least this should be what Faust meant

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-20T03:25:41+00:00

should be fine then imo. i think ive talked to charles, b4 through mumble, he said 1 or 2 ms off isn't a big deal. furthermore they are unsnapped later than all the timing points so every thing such as kiai, HS still apply to the objects.

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Faust 2015-02-20T03:31:05+00:00

It wasn't sure if anyone had realized since there was no mention of it pre-ranking.

I don't really recall if AImod or AIBat ever considered 1ms a discrepancy. I have been out of touch either way.

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Kibbleru 2015-02-20T03:34:53+00:00

Faust wrote:
It wasn't sure if anyone had realized since there was no mention of it pre-ranking.

I don't really recall if AImod or AIBat ever considered 1ms a discrepancy. I have been out of touch either way.

no they dont detect 1 ms :X i think they're detect anything over 3 ms or something?

gotta quote this

Andrea wrote:
Cleaned the unnecessary posts.

Please keep the thread in a civil way and respect others like you want to be respected.

Express your opinion but don't be rude or don't insult others, thank you.

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Andrea

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Andrea 2015-02-20T05:04:43+00:00

Cleaned the unnecessary posts.

Please keep the thread in a civil way and respect others like you want to be respected.

Express your opinion but don't be rude or don't insult others, thank you.

Lach

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Lach 2015-02-20T05:40:00+00:00

Thank you for removing part of the actual conversation. Particularly the part about another map of the same song getting disqualified, this one being qualified, and the other one having to wait, and my response to faust.

scanter

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scanter 2015-02-21T01:40:02+00:00

neonat wrote:
Just checked manually, seems everything is 1ms off the snap, using stable btw

eg.
00:37:240 (3) - should be 00:37:239
00:45:074 (1) - 00:45:073
01:06:740 (4) - 01:06:739

just random objects picked out from around the song

At least this should be what Faust meant

as far as I know it isn't an issue. unless it is really harmful to play. well. btw, Knotts and Karia worked hard.

anyway Gratz!

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-21T02:16:09+00:00

i worked hard too *-* those 1/3 were annoying to check

SoyMilk

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SoyMilk 2015-02-22T07:16:10+00:00

This song is <3

troke

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troke 2015-02-22T07:26:40+00:00

whoaaaaaa

erlinadewi-

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erlinadewi- 2015-02-22T08:33:20+00:00

from ending Kantai Collection. i love it~

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2015-02-27T10:40:34+00:00

I can't pass this map >_<

Can i make a Extra diff? although i am not great at mapping

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