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Haruna Luna - Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.-

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Momochikun
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Momochikun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 Januari 2015 at 16:40:01

Artist: Haruna Luna
Title: Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.-
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags: saenai heroine no sodatekata opening xinely no_gu
BPM: 164
Filesize: 19569kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,45 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Gu's Normal (1,72 stars, 131 notes)
  3. Insane (4,19 stars, 327 notes)
  4. Xinely's Hard (3,06 stars, 229 notes)
Download: Haruna Luna - Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.-
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#31 冴えない彼女の育てかた OP
Hard - Xinely
Normal - No_Gu
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 18 times in total.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: kimiiro signal.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60377
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi-iro Signal
TitleUnicode:君色シグナル
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Gu's Normal
Source:冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.96
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,12283,22592
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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done
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
offset check w
2015-01-17 21:30 Vicho: mochi pro desu
2015-01-17 21:31 Momochikun: oh, thanks !
2015-01-17 21:31 Momochikun: i'm not sure with offset tbh
2015-01-17 21:31 Momochikun: could you check ? ._.
2015-01-17 21:33 Vicho: hmm maybe -1092 would be better
2015-01-17 21:33 Vicho: try it and tell me what you think
2015-01-17 21:35 Momochikun: ow it's good
2015-01-17 21:35 Vicho: yay
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
haii Mochi =w=/

[Easy]
Check the greenlines, I'm too lazy to point out all the unnecesary ones. You can use Gu's timing points idk :P

00:12:267 - map it, looks like a 2009 tv size map ;P
00:39:889 (3,1) - move (3) to x448 y372 and (1) to x496 y296
00:41:901 (2) - soft-clap on tail
00:42:816 (3) - soft-whistle on head
00:47:206 (1) - soft-clap on tail maybe

[Gu's Normal]

00:12:267 - same as easy :P

[Hard]
HP5

00:05:682 (2) - move 1 grid up
00:07:145 (3) - ctrl+g maybe?
00:34:218 (2,3) - spacing :P
01:02:206 (2,3,4) - move (3) 2 grids down so you'll keep a consistent spacing between (2) and (4)
01:15:743 (3) - move 1 grid right
01:21:962 (4) - ctrl+g?

[Insane]

00:07:694 (1,2) - blanket
00:33:944 (1) - x360 y80 maybe?
01:02:023 (5) - stack it on 01:02:572 (2) - 's head, it's pretty nice imo :3
01:04:401 (8,1) - stack (1) on (8)'s tail

Really nice map >.o

Good luck :D
HabiHolic
5,399 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic


your request

[General]

  1. Tag add "No_Gu Xinely Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata" please
[Easy]

  1. 00:03:298 (1) - this change is curve slider flow batter imo
    SPOILER
  2. 00:12:444 ~ 00:23:511 - orz. this part so many green line. this not use delete please.
  3. 00:39:883 (3,1) - missing blanket. If the blanket was not the purpose no fixed this.
  4. 00:52:688 (4) - sampleset Normal addition soft batter sound.
  5. 01:06:956 (3) - add finish on the tail
[Gu's Normal]

  1. 00:09:700 (2,3) - Ctrl+G here. If you change the rhythm fits better.
  2. 01:21:590 (5,6) - same (^)
  3. 01:22:322 - add finish here
[Xinely's Hard]

  1. 00:02:383 (2) - this change 1/1 slider? now is awkward..
  2. 00:09:151 (1) - move 268:312? for the shape correction.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:11:712 (3,4,1) - check spacing. a lot of discrepancy.
  4. 00:17:566 (4) - Ctrl+G is flow batter imo
  5. 00:30:188 - note? for the vocal flow,
  6. 00:34:212 (2,3) - Bad jump. changing a constant distance.
[Insane]

  1. 00:06:956 (6,7) - i think this cahnge patten batter 00:07:688 (1,2) - here.
  2. 00:55:981 (1) - missing blanket. If the blanket was not the purpose no fixed this.
  3. 01:02:017 (5) - this (3) slider head overlap batter imo.
that all. Best of Luck~
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
I'm here as requested by on easy/normal there is many timing sections that shouldn't really be there... Once it polishes up with inheriting sections and breaks I will do a full rundown of this mapset, in the meantime please edit a few things to finalize it so I can give you a "perfect" mod. Sorry for the inconvenience. Once it's done PM me anytime and I'll do a mod on it.
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
Hello Mochi! from pm request :3

:idea: General


* As HabiHolic already mentioned, you should at least add the names of the GDers in the tags.
* Title should be "君色シグナル-TV size ver.- "
from the original website
http://www.saenai.tv/music/
* Not sure if you should add the ''-'' in the romanized title, because a lot of other maps just use ''Kimiiro'' Ask for more opinions.

Easy


* There are a lot of green lines that you didn't use at all. Probably because you copied them from the Insane diff, but you know - there's nothing for example at 00:02:749 - 00:02:017 - etc. I recommend you to remove all of the unused green lines.
* 00:05:493 (4) - Same suggestion as Insane. Consider putting a finish on the repeat? Cymbal is present in the song.
* 00:06:225 - I recommend to have this finish clickable, since you did make 00:04:761 (3) - clickable. Try this rhythm?
* 00:34:761 (4) - Something similar as above, I'd split this slider into a 1/1 slider + circle to also catch that finish + vocal at the end.
* 00:45:737 (2) - Curve the this slider the other way for better flow with (3)?
* 00:45:737 (2) - Same as Insane diff. You could try to add some soft whistles here and there, because there are xylophone like sounds here.
* 00:54:151 - Add note here? I can understand why you could put a small break here, but you did map 00:57:078 (2) -
* 01:09:883 (3,1) - Just a personal preference, but I find playing 3 straight sliders in a row a bit boring. Consider using something like this instead?
* 01:15:371 (4) - With a long slider like this, I feel something missing on the white tick you ignored. Try a 1/1 repeat slider? That way you can emphasize the 'no' of the vocals a bit better.
* 01:18:298 (4) - I personally think that again, splitting up this long slider into a 1/1 slider + circle would fit much better. I like the symmetry, but it just doesn't sound right to me, because at 01:18:664 - a new vocal track starts and on 01:19:029 - there's a clap.

Gu's Normal


* 00:01:103 (3) - Soft whistle histle on the slider end? There's a piano like sound there >_> (you did put one on 00:00:920 (2) - )
* 00:01:834 (4) - Here on the slider head as well.
* 00:02:566 (6) - Again, here on the slider end (not going to mention anymore, i have a feeling that it's done intentional :3)
* 00:03:298 (1) - I highly recommend you to add a finish on the slider end, because the cymbal is really clear in the song itself x_x
* 00:05:493 (5) - I understand why you put the repeat on the blue tick, but this way you are skipping the cymbal crash which is present on the white tick. I don't recommend doing that, since especially in the lower diffs beginners rely more on the strong beats anyway.
* 01:06:956 (5) - Add a soft whistle here? Would go great with the extra sound here, which is very similar to 00:39:883 (2,3) -
* 01:08:786 (3,4,5) - A bit nazi, but could you try and move this a bit down for a smoother flow with (2)?
* 01:08:786 (3) - Unsnapped slider.
* 01:10:981 (2) - With this long slider, you are skipping quite a few important beats in the song. I recommend you to just keep the rhythm simple, try something like this?
* 01:24:517 (4) - The sound on the slider end sounds more like a finish to me ._.

Xinely's Hard


* 00:04:761 (1,2,3) - This part itself is almost inaudiable to me, I'd raise the volume a bit.
* 00:04:761 (1) - The slider head really deserved a finish imo, there's a clear cymbal in the song itself.
* 00:05:859 - Same as above, add finish here on the slider end as well?
* 00:10:432 (3) - Optional, but I'd add a clap here. Might not fit your pattern, but Mochi's Insane diff has a 5-note stream using hitnormals from the normal sampleset. Since you don't really use that you could add a clap, because of the extra sound in the song.
* 00:11:895 (4) - This note here is very quiet as well, add hitsound/green line?
* 00:12:078 (1) - Add clap on repeat? It'd also fit your pattern.
* 00:16:286 (4) - I'd really add a note here. The instrument at 00:15:737 (3,1,2) - that you are following now is definitely here, and breaking it up feels a bit awkward and you already have a gap at 00:16:834 (2,3) - so it's not really needed here imo.
* 00:27:444 (3,4,1) - Three times a straight slider in a row might not be that 'exciting' to play. Consider adding some curvers here and there owo?
* 00:53:053 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
* 01:00:737 (3) - Don't really understand why this should be a 1/1 slider. There's literally nothing in the song at 01:00:920 - to 01:01:011 -. I'd prefer something like this - making (3) just a single circle, and add a slider to follow the vocal/piano.

* 01:02:383 (3) - Well there's nothing really here to be mapped, so I'd turn (2) into a 1/2 slider to follow the vocal note instead.
* 01:05:676 (2) - I personally don't hear anything repetitive in the song, so I wouldn't put a repeat here if I were you. Instead I recommend you to split this up into circle + 1/2 slider to emphasize the clap better.
* 01:07:688 (1,2,3,4) - A bit nazi, but consider re-arranging this pattern a little bit so it plays smoother and looks cleaner/symmetrical.
* 01:12:078 (1) - I personally like Mochi's usage of the finish a bit better, sorry ;_; Try a whistle on the head, and a finish on the end?
* 01:13:542 (1) - Yeah, again I don't really hear something in the song that really asks for a repeat, so I'd split this up as well to emphasize the clap better.
* 01:15:737 (3,4) - blanket better lol
* 01:24:517 (3) - This slider fits perfectly with the vocals, but now you are skipping the cymbal crash on the white tick ._. i don't want to recommend a 3/4 slider, but it'd kinda fit here owo

Insane


* 00:05:859 (6) - Add finish? There's a cymbal sound here.
* 00:06:956 (6,7) - I'm a bit confused, I personally don't know what you're following here. There are some noticeable trumpet-like sounds here and there, so I recommend you to follow that instead.
* 00:21:590 (3,4) - CTRL+G for rhythm only? The hold note already starts at the white tick, this way you can also make the bass at 00:21:955 (4) - clickable.
* 00:22:871 (2,3) - Same as above, ctrl+g this one for rhythm as well? For bass sounds like 00:23:055 (3) - you usually put 1/2 sliders, and it'd fit well here imo.
* 00:33:938 (1) - I'd move this one to around (357,79) for a better flow with the previous slider.
* 00:36:042 (2) - and 00:38:968 (3) - The drum finish on the slider end is too loud for me ;_; , especially since 00:36:590 (3) - has more (vocal) stress which is directly after this drum finish. A N:hitnormal or a D:hitnormal is sufficient imo. Also note that there's nothing on 00:43:359 (3) - 's end and that you didn't put any drum finishes in the Easy diff.
* 00:39:517 (4) - Add drum finish on the slider end like 00:36:773 (4) - and 00:42:627 (4) - ?
* 00:45:371 (5) - ^
* 00:45:737 (1,3,4,5) - Use whistle from the soft additions? In the beginning of the mapset, all of your whistles were on the xylophone, so why not put one here ?
* 00:47:200 (1) - I personally can't hear the slider end. It's not unrankable to have silenced ends, but there's a vocal note here - so I highly recommend to raise the volume for this slider end.
* 00:48:664 (1,2) - Same here on 1's end and 2. It's inaudible to me.
* 00:49:944 - and 00:50:036 - Put 1/4 notes here, like at 00:38:237 (1,2) - ?
* 00:57:444 (1) - A bit nazi, but move this one a little up? This flow with the previous slider seems a bit straighter and (2,3) afterwards.
* 01:01:468 (3) - The hitnormal on the slider end from the normal sampleset is really loud, and it kinda overpowers the finish afterwards. Add a green line with 40% only for this slider end, so it has the same volume as 00:59:090 (2,3) - ? This way the finish is more noticeable.
* 01:11:987 (6) - The drum sampleset sounds rather strange here... I'd use the normal sampleset, since this sounds more clap-like than bass-like, and it'd make more sense, because the 5-note stream after this (01:12:810 (3,4,5,6,7) - ) uses the normal sampleset.
* 01:16:103 (1) - I don't recommend having such a long slider here with a repeat. You are ignoring the finish which is now on the repeat. Usually, that's not a big problem, but do note that the tone of the song really changes here - I'd much rather have a circle or a slider start on 01:16:468 -

Nice song and map!

You can have this star and I wish you guys good luck with this mapset ^^
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
wtf u copied my background lol.
Momochikun
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Momochikun
lmao quib i uploaded this mapset 1 day before you,
thanks for mod guys ! i'll check it soon o3o

BSS got lag so i'll add tv size later zzzzz
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Xinely
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Xinely
wtf my reply has gone orz.. sorry ;___;
just pm me if you want it (damn im lazy to reply again orz)
sorry for incovenience and thanks 4 mods >_<

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384,172,61834,6,0,P|380:132|396:88,1,72.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,56,62200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,144,62383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,228,62566,2,0,P|388:259|322:235,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,63115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,256,63298,6,0,L|164:352,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,232,63664,2,0,L|108:88,1,145,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,28,64212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,100,64395,2,0,L|296:100,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,148,64761,6,0,B|408:200|408:240|408:240|392:308,2,145,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,108,65676,2,0,L|228:148,2,72.5,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,56,66225,6,0,P|440:48|520:96,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,172,66773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,66956,2,0,L|328:224,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,252,67322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,204,67505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,260,67688,6,0,P|129:295|137:330,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,368,68054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,360,68237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,312,68420,2,0,P|436:336|516:296,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,216,68969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,140,69152,6,0,L|387:140,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,176,69518,2,0,P|252:208|176:168,1,145,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,70066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,80,70249,2,0,L|64:-8,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,70615,6,0,L|72:304,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,368,71164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,71347,2,0,L|220:340,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,248,71712,2,0,L|256:260,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,308,72078,6,0,P|416:236|368:164,1,145,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,72627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,72810,2,0,P|228:184|184:176,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,73176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,56,73359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,73450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,73542,6,0,L|328:48,2,72.5,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,136,74090,2,0,P|360:156|436:120,1,145,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,80,74639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,24,74822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,75005,6,0,L|363:212,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,75554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,236,75737,2,0,L|256:156,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,76103,2,0,P|260:320|196:304,1,130.499996017456,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,172,76834,5,8,0:0:0:0:
120,92,77017,2,0,L|200:96,1,72.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,77383,2,0,L|340:144,2,72.5,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,208,77932,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,252,78115,2,0,L|356:248,2,72.5,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,328,78664,2,0,L|416:324,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,240,79029,2,0,L|404:244,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,252,79395,6,0,P|222:206|219:135,1,145,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,52,79944,2,0,P|209:108|140:124,1,145,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,108,80493,2,0,P|32:77|26:41,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,124,80859,6,0,L|163:271,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,332,81407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,81590,2,0,L|376:276,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,81956,2,0,L|488:196,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,96,82322,6,0,P|312:76|236:120,1,145,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,82871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,136,83054,2,0,L|80:52,1,72.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,83420,2,0,L|164:244,1,72.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,336,83786,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,344,84151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,84517,2,0,P|232:140|256:80,1,108.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,84883,2,0,P|228:60|187:52,1,72.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,96,85249,6,0,P|60:160|96:228,1,130.499996017456,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,85798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,84,86164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,232,86529,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86621,12,0,88176,0:0:0:0:
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
This anime is really well written and funny

Good choice
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
mochi mochi
xinely brought me here, thank her owo?

[General]
00:12:078 - wtf i dont understand this break

[Easyl]
00:07:688 (2,3) - you should switch in timeline so you can map out the snare!
00:41:347 (1) - actually fix this blanket, its reaaaally off
00:58:176 (4) - (280, 36) better blanket
01:01:834 (1,2,3) - same rhythm >.> u should use the same patterns
01:05:859 - circle here or something o3o?

[Normal]
00:02:383 (5,6) - probably doesnt matter much but move right a bit to avoid the overlap ?
00:32:566 (1,2) - copy paste o3o
00:38:420 (1) - you shouldnt let the slider overlap itself too much, its tricky imo
00:58:725 - maybe a 2nd spinner around here?
01:16:468 (1) - this flow break a bit too strong

[soy sauce]
00:01:743 - 00:04:670 - 有鼓聲喔
00:10:249 - 這裡開始有個stream不確定你知不知道
00:20:676 (5) - 可以放下面一點
00:29:090 (2,3) - 連在一起好像比較好?
00:30:188 - 為甚麼空著o3o
00:41:895 (2) - 00:44:822 (2) - 00:47:749 (2) - etc. 故意沒hitsound嗎
00:46:468 (3,4,5) - 一直線比較好吧
01:15:737 (3) - 包好啦
01:18:664 (3) - 這樣比較均勻 owo http://puu.sh/eIM8f/3b9a067e51.jpg

[insane]
00:07:139 - there's a trumpet sound here so bad place for an extended slider
00:07:688 (1) - why do u hate blankets lol
00:16:468 (1) - theres a sound on the red tick u should consider ?
00:55:981 (1) - wow this blanket is really bad
01:02:017 (5) - i wouldnt recommend stacking this because flow stops
01:03:298 (3,4) - this spacing is on purpose ?
01:19:395 (1) - blanketss maybe o3o?

lol i modded kibb's ver this morning =w=
good luck have fun
Momochikun
1,943 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun

pkhg wrote:

haii Mochi =w=/

[Easy]
Check the greenlines, I'm too lazy to point out all the unnecesary ones. You can use Gu's timing points idk :P

00:12:267 - map it, looks like a 2009 tv size map ;P blame gu
00:39:889 (3,1) - move (3) to x448 y372 and (1) to x496 y296
00:41:901 (2) - soft-clap on tail
00:42:816 (3) - soft-whistle on head
00:47:206 (1) - soft-clap on tail maybe


[Insane]

00:07:694 (1,2) - blanket
00:33:944 (1) - x360 y80 maybe? hm i like it like this
01:02:023 (5) - stack it on 01:02:572 (2) - 's head, it's pretty nice imo :3
01:04:401 (8,1) - stack (1) on (8)'s tail on purpose :3

Really nice map >.o

Good luck :D

HabiHolic wrote:



your request

[General]

  1. Tag add "No_Gu Xinely Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata" please
[Easy]

  1. 00:03:298 (1) - this change is curve slider flow batter imo
    SPOILER
  2. 00:12:444 ~ 00:23:511 - orz. this part so many green line. this not use delete please.
  3. 00:39:883 (3,1) - missing blanket. If the blanket was not the purpose no fixed this.
  4. 00:52:688 (4) - sampleset Normal addition soft batter sound.
  5. 01:06:956 (3) - add finish on the tail nope for these two, i make it consistent with I

[Insane]

  1. 00:06:956 (6,7) - i think this cahnge patten batter 00:07:688 (1,2) - here. i dont get it tbh xD
  2. 00:55:981 (1) - missing blanket. If the blanket was not the purpose no fixed this.
  3. 01:02:017 (5) - this (3) slider head overlap batter imo. did something similiar
that all. Best of Luck~

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Mochi! from pm request :3

:idea: General


* As HabiHolic already mentioned, you should at least add the names of the GDers in the tags.
* Title should be "君色シグナル-TV size ver.- "
from the original website
http://www.saenai.tv/music/
* Not sure if you should add the ''-'' in the romanized title, because a lot of other maps just use ''Kimiiro'' Ask for more opinions.

Easy


* There are a lot of green lines that you didn't use at all. Probably because you copied them from the Insane diff, but you know - there's nothing for example at 00:02:749 - 00:02:017 - etc. I recommend you to remove all of the unused green lines.
* 00:05:493 (4) - Same suggestion as Insane. Consider putting a finish on the repeat? Cymbal is present in the song.
* 00:06:225 - I recommend to have this finish clickable, since you did make 00:04:761 (3) - clickable. Try this rhythm? nope, this kind of rhythm is my favourite
* 00:34:761 (4) - Something similar as above, I'd split this slider into a 1/1 slider + circle to also catch that finish + vocal at the end.
* 00:45:737 (2) - Curve the this slider the other way for better flow with (3)?
* 00:45:737 (2) - Same as Insane diff. You could try to add some soft whistles here and there, because there are xylophone like sounds here.
* 00:54:151 - Add note here? I can understand why you could put a small break here, but you did map 00:57:078 (2) -
* 01:09:883 (3,1) - Just a personal preference, but I find playing 3 straight sliders in a row a bit boring. Consider using something like this instead? lol i like it ><
* 01:15:371 (4) - With a long slider like this, I feel something missing on the white tick you ignored. Try a 1/1 repeat slider? That way you can emphasize the 'no' of the vocals a bit better. i keep this
* 01:18:298 (4) - I personally think that again, splitting up this long slider into a 1/1 slider + circle would fit much better. I like the symmetry, but it just doesn't sound right to me, because at 01:18:664 - a new vocal track starts and on 01:19:029 - there's a clap. ^ for consistency


Insane


* 00:05:859 (6) - Add finish? There's a cymbal sound here.
* 00:06:956 (6,7) - I'm a bit confused, I personally don't know what you're following here. There are some noticeable trumpet-like sounds here and there, so I recommend you to follow that instead. hmm this one was did purposely
* 00:21:590 (3,4) - CTRL+G for rhythm only? The hold note already starts at the white tick, this way you can also make the bass at 00:21:955 (4) - clickable. nope, it'll break pattern
* 00:22:871 (2,3) - Same as above, ctrl+g this one for rhythm as well? For bass sounds like 00:23:055 (3) - you usually put 1/2 sliders, and it'd fit well here imo. its following instrument better
* 00:33:938 (1) - I'd move this one to around (357,79) for a better flow with the previous slider.
* 00:36:042 (2) - and 00:38:968 (3) - The drum finish on the slider end is too loud for me ;_; , especially since 00:36:590 (3) - has more (vocal) stress which is directly after this drum finish. A N:hitnormal or a D:hitnormal is sufficient imo. Also note that there's nothing on 00:43:359 (3) - 's end and that you didn't put any drum finishes in the Easy diff.
* 00:39:517 (4) - Add drum finish on the slider end like 00:36:773 (4) - and 00:42:627 (4) - ?
* 00:45:371 (5) - ^
* 00:45:737 (1,3,4,5) - Use whistle from the soft additions? In the beginning of the mapset, all of your whistles were on the xylophone, so why not put one here ?
* 00:47:200 (1) - I personally can't hear the slider end. It's not unrankable to have silenced ends, but there's a vocal note here - so I highly recommend to raise the volume for this slider end. its same volume with eithers orz
* 00:48:664 (1,2) - Same here on 1's end and 2. It's inaudible to me. ^
* 00:49:944 - and 00:50:036 - Put 1/4 notes here, like at 00:38:237 (1,2) - ?
* 00:57:444 (1) - A bit nazi, but move this one a little up? This flow with the previous slider seems a bit straighter and (2,3) afterwards.
* 01:01:468 (3) - The hitnormal on the slider end from the normal sampleset is really loud, and it kinda overpowers the finish afterwards. Add a green line with 40% only for this slider end, so it has the same volume as 00:59:090 (2,3) - ? This way the finish is more noticeable.
* 01:11:987 (6) - The drum sampleset sounds rather strange here... I'd use the normal sampleset, since this sounds more clap-like than bass-like, and it'd make more sense, because the 5-note stream after this (01:12:810 (3,4,5,6,7) - ) uses the normal sampleset.
* 01:16:103 (1) - I don't recommend having such a long slider here with a repeat. You are ignoring the finish which is now on the repeat. Usually, that's not a big problem, but do note that the tone of the song really changes here - I'd much rather have a circle or a slider start on 01:16:468 -
that's cool imo ~

Nice song and map!

You can have this star and I wish you guys good luck with this mapset ^^

Gaia wrote:

mochi mochi
xinely brought me here, thank her owo?

[General]
00:12:078 - wtf i dont understand this break

[Easyl]
00:07:688 (2,3) - you should switch in timeline so you can map out the snare!
00:41:347 (1) - actually fix this blanket, its reaaaally off
00:58:176 (4) - (280, 36) better blanket
01:01:834 (1,2,3) - same rhythm >.> u should use the same patterns it's fine lol
01:05:859 - circle here or something o3o?



[insane]
00:07:139 - there's a trumpet sound here so bad place for an extended slider why..
00:07:688 (1) - why do u hate blankets lol
00:16:468 (1) - theres a sound on the red tick u should consider ? hmm i think its fine
00:55:981 (1) - wow this blanket is really bad
01:02:017 (5) - i wouldnt recommend stacking this because flow stops
01:03:298 (3,4) - this spacing is on purpose ?
01:19:395 (1) - blanketss maybe o3o?
fix all i cant do blankets lmao
lol i modded kibb's ver this morning =w=
good luck have fun
thanks a lot guys !!
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru

Momochikun wrote:

lmao quib i uploaded this mapset 1 day before you,
thanks for mod guys ! i'll check it soon o3o

BSS got lag so i'll add tv size later zzzzz
waaat when i decided to map this nobody has uploaded it yet :X
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Here now as requested via PM :)


Easy

  1. First off there are a lot of uncessary inheriting timing sections in here especially for an easy difficulty like http://puu.sh/eKUzP/82271f27c0.jpg that's a lot... but I do recommend deleting some that aren't necessary
    00:01:468 (2,3) - These has whistles to start off with how about doing the same here 00:04:395 (2,3) remove finish from (3) and whistle from tail to make it so
  2. 00:05:493 (4) - How about sampleset-soft-finish here to really emphasize that strong beat there
  3. 00:06:590 (1,2) - You can remove whistle from tail and the note because it isn't necessary. Having regular claps there has just the same effect and you hear more of the clap than the whistle so it doesn't really stand out on its own plus these doesn't have it so it's really awkward 00:08:054 (3,1)
  4. 00:12:078 - Is this on purpose beacuse there is a break here that is easily mappable
  5. 00:28:176 (3) - Move whistle from tail and remove whistle here too so it stays consistent to what you were previously doing 00:29:273 (4) - you keep constantly changing rhythms using whistles and it doesn't sound as great as just regular smooth rhythm flow from whistle - claps
  6. 00:29:639 (1) - You can remove whistle from tail here but can keep the next ones as they are because they are fine
  7. 00:34:761 (4) - Try mapping this part out. The trumpet really stands out here and I believe you should map it accordingly like here where the trumpet plays but the slider is just getting rid of potential note being here 00:35:127 Something like this? http://puu.sh/eKVXd/60a667c283.jpg also makes rhythm here unique to flow to the next set of notes :) Like around here 00:38:420 (1,2)
  8. 00:39:883 (3) - Whistle on head instead of tail for same purposes
  9. 00:51:590 (2) - Whistle?
  10. 01:06:956 (4) - Finish on tail?
    Not bad I liked it :)

Gooey's Normal


  1. 00:04:029 (3) - Move up a little for a cleaner flow
  2. 00:10:615 (4) - Spacing error
  3. 00:12:078 - Again why is there a break here that extends for so long...
  4. 00:28:907 (5) - I feel a single clap here at tail is the only one you need otherwise it stands out to much when that repeat doesn't really impact the song in any way but this one is acceptable 00:31:834 (5)
  5. 00:34:029 (3) - I don't know why but I feel a drum should be here somewhere like drum-clap on head? What is your thought on this?
  6. 00:34:761 (4) - If you didn't like drum mentioned above then remove clap on (4) but add it on (5) because it's more fitting
  7. 00:52:322 (4) - Same thing as above but around here
  8. 01:13:176 (6) - How about addition-soft-clap here? To follow with the 1/1 slider claps on tail during this part
  9. 01:15:737 (4,1) - This is almost too close for comfort how about adjusting to where the spacing is as equal to this 01:16:834 (2,3)
  10. 01:18:664 (5) - Clap on tail?
  11. 01:20:859 (4,5) - Adjust something like this to the point where it can stack as well as these 2 being about symmetrical 01:20:127 (3,4) http://puu.sh/eL4mH/d9e933e5f6.jpg
  12. 01:25:249 (1) - Soft-addition because the finish by itself is bland there and not strong enough like how the music may interpret it out to be

InXinely's Hard


  • Disable Widescreen Support
  1. 00:02:932 (3,2) - Personal Suggestion move these 2 notes a little to the right so spacing is equal like so http://puu.sh/eL51v/08ffe9c892.jpg
  2. 00:10:432 (3) - Can be moved a little further with DS to around ~1.2
  3. 00:11:164 (2) - DS here too? Or is this for uniqueness
  4. 00:18:664 (3) - Move to x:88 y:120 so DS is at 1.3 and blanketed a little better
  5. 00:39:334 (3) - Move up more so it doesn't have contact with this note 00:38:420 (1)
  6. 00:46:468 (3,4,5,1) - How about this flow so notes don't collide http://puu.sh/eL5W5/bec2161ea1.jpg
  7. 00:52:688 (3) - Swap hitsounds with a clap here and a whistle on the tail of the previous note, believe it sounds better that way
  8. 01:12:078 (1) - You can also add a whistle on head of the slider
  9. 01:15:737 (3) - Move a little to the right for better blanket

Insane




  • 00:10:615 (9) - Soft-addition finish?
    00:12:627 (3) - Move down a little more so the flow can gradually go up
    00:13:542 (1) - Whistle on head here so the whistle rhythm can start here instead of the next part
    00:14:456 (4,5,6,1) - How about trying this flow so that notes can go in a circle instead of having to stop that circle movement before with where you had (5) and (6) placed at http://puu.sh/eL6VN/04dddde7f3.jpg
    00:25:981 (4) - Unexpected doubleclap that isn't necessary imo so you can remove the clap on tail
    00:38:968 (4) - Move little more to the right for better blanket
    I believe it's fine as it is now :)

I hope this mod helps. If there is anything concerns you can contact me so I can clarify my specifications better. Now I sit back and watch the fight between Momo and Kibbler Commence :)
-Maruk-
322 posts
Joined December 2012
-Maruk-
Hi~ request from PM

[General]

  • Title 【君色シグナル-TV size ver.-】 →【君色シグナル -TV size ver.-】
    　　　　　　　　　　　　↑add space

    Romanised Title ^

    Tag 【opening】【Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata】【Xinely】【No_Gu】

[Xinely's Hard]

  • AR 7.5?

[Insane]

  • 00:27:810 (4) - My opinion. This stack
    img
    01:04:761 (1) - ^
    img
    01:09:517 (5) - I think not fit rhythm. try use this
    img

Good luck
Last edited by -Maruk- , edited 1 time in total.
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
hi

General
title: Kimi-iro to Kimiiro ? I felt more naturally than Kimi-iro.
Disable Widescreen Support in Insane.

Insane
00:06:956 (6) - are you sure ? this slider end isn't follow anything. please end at 00:07:139 -
00:09:700 - 00:09:792 - add note at here.
00:11:164 (3,4,5) - better to fit with sound if you keep the spacing with those notes. 00:11:529 (5) - This sound is not suitable with jump. http://puu.sh/eMoJz/e90c2309eb.jpg
00:15:005 (1) - if you change the direction it will be better flow. for example http://puu.sh/eMnC7/7a643079f6.jpg
00:34:761 (4) - add clap of additional soft . if you feel the noise, please reduce the volume.
00:53:054 (1) - smooth slider is better. http://puu.sh/eMprH/533c9e2b78.jpg

Xinely's Hard
00:09:151 (1,2) - I got confused in abrupt change of this spacing. you should replace (2) or add note at 00:09:700 -
00:58:907 (1) - it will be better flow if you used symmetry form as next slider.
00:53:053 (1) - dont snap the slider.

Gu's Normal
00:12:078 - are you sure? why added break at here.
01:08:786 (3) - dont snap this slider.

Easy
00:18:664 (4) - you should add NC at here. i felt too long this pattern.
00:24:883 (2) - move to in the this little blanket ? http://puu.sh/eMsn7/0ee0177efb.jpg
01:23:420 (2) - add note for follow the vocal. of course don't forget the clap.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

Gaia wrote:

mochi mochi
xinely brought me here, thank her owo?

[soy sauce]
00:01:743 - 00:04:670 - 有鼓聲喔 不该map全部的鼓声，还有有点难
00:10:249 - 這裡開始有個stream不確定你知不知道 跟同上一样，这个是Hard所以一般我不喜欢用stream
00:20:676 (5) - 可以放下面一點 好
00:29:090 (2,3) - 連在一起好像比較好? 好
00:30:188 - 為甚麼空著o3o 不要map,给1/1休息~
00:41:895 (2) - 00:44:822 (2) - 00:47:749 (2) - etc. 故意沒hitsound嗎 加了
00:46:468 (3,4,5) - 一直線比較好吧 too mainstream lol
01:15:737 (3) - 包好啦
01:18:664 (3) - 這樣比較均勻 owo http://puu.sh/eIM8f/3b9a067e51.jpg

Kocari wrote:

InXinely's Hard


  • Disable Widescreen Support
  1. 00:02:932 (3,2) - Personal Suggestion move these 2 notes a little to the right so spacing is equal like so http://puu.sh/eL51v/08ffe9c892.jpg
  2. 00:10:432 (3) - Can be moved a little further with DS to around ~1.2
  3. 00:11:164 (2) - DS here too? Or is this for uniqueness yep intentional coz the cymbal
  4. 00:18:664 (3) - Move to x:88 y:120 so DS is at 1.3 and blanketed a little better
  5. 00:39:334 (3) - Move up more so it doesn't have contact with this note 00:38:420 (1) but flow feels fine so let me keep
  6. 00:46:468 (3,4,5,1) - How about this flow so notes don't collide http://puu.sh/eL5W5/bec2161ea1.jpg let me keep again, same as Gaia's mod, flow still fine here
  7. 00:52:688 (3) - Swap hitsounds with a clap here and a whistle on the tail of the previous note, believe it sounds better that way remove clap on head instead, head and tail have drums so whistle only cant emphasize them at all
  8. 01:12:078 (1) - You can also add a whistle on head of the slider literally i never add whistle with finish coz finish sounds strong and whistle hard to hear at the same time but ok
  9. 01:15:737 (3) - Move a little to the right for better blanket
@Maruk : too mainstream so i prefer 7,3

Laurier wrote:

hi

Xinely's Hard
00:09:151 (1,2) - I got confused in abrupt change of this spacing. you should replace (2) or add note at 00:09:700 -
00:58:907 (1) - it will be better flow if you used symmetry form as next slider. intentional, i'd to try not use symmetrical again ww
00:53:053 (1) - dont snap the slider. that is fine, we arent in easy or normal anymore X_X
thanks 4 mods :3~

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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
as your request

[General]
01:16:651 - not sure about the video here, maybe need to cover sth..
the mp3's quality is not that good imo. vocal are broken some where: 00:21:773 - , 00:25:432 - , 00:28:359 - , etc. I sugggest to change a better mp3

[Gu's Normal]
00:12:444 - 我觉得这里还是map完好点
00:46:468 (3,1) - 这里可以blanket好点，完了也可以让1的尾巴更上一点，现在快接近屏幕边缘了
01:01:468 - 建议删掉这个note，时间间隔有点不太够

[Insane]
cancel wildscreen support
OD 7.5 is better imo
00:27:444 (3,4) - not recommend to stack too much here. suppose now 60% of them are overlapped, I think better to reduce the stacked area under 30%

no much to say
please confirm about the video, and feel free to call me back then
Momochikun
1,943 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
Fixed stuffs in my diff and added video offset, Changed BG too
As for mp3, it's the best that i can found. I think it's error from the original song ><


@poke'd Gu via PM, All diffs Updated

I'm asking someone to censor the video though or we need to remove it orz
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
well, the op from ep 2 actually doesn't even have that sketchy frame, so here is that version (720p). I also rendered a 480p version, since I've heard multiple people complain about 720p videos lagging their lower end systems in game, so you can use that instead if you think it's necessary.

i also took a look at your bg because that's what i do :P it has some fairly significant artifacts from compression (probably on the original before you/someone resized it for osu), so I found the original and smoothed it a bit to reduce artifacting, then combined it with the one you are currently using on order to get rid of the text it normally has. The one you are currently using also has some pretty obvious ringing due to perhaps a sharpen filter (bleh). So instead the new version is just naturally sharp as a result of the downscaling method.
bg

The above image is still lossless png, but here is also a jpg version if filesize is important to you (and still fewer compression artifacts than the one you had previously).
no kds
Momochikun
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun
thanks a lot ! used both of your work :3
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
recheck

there's an unsnapped object in Hard, nothing else..

I become busy irl from these days.. catch me anytime when you see me plz orz

edit: bubbled
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Discuss with mapper,just fix a hitsound at hard diff and a placement in ins diff,
and this mapset looks fine and simple to me.

Qualified ~ !

Momochikun
2015-01-25 17:19 smallboat: Easy and normal are fine
2015-01-25 17:19 Momochikun: yey
2015-01-25 17:20 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/606169 Haruna Luna - Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.- [Xinely's Hard]]
2015-01-25 17:20 smallboat: 00:42:444 (4) - remove whistle in head add clap
2015-01-25 17:20 smallboat: because 00:43:907 (4) - this
2015-01-25 17:22 Momochikun: that's different sound, changed to drum finish instead
2015-01-25 17:22 Momochikun: also change to other similiar part
2015-01-25 17:31 smallboat: okay
2015-01-25 17:31 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/606167 Haruna Luna - Kimiiro Signal-TV size ver.- [Insane]]
2015-01-25 17:31 smallboat: 00:39:883 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2607083
2015-01-25 17:33 Momochikun: ok
2015-01-25 17:39 smallboat: okay check done ,can update
2015-01-25 17:41 Momochikun: done updating !
2015-01-25 17:41 Momochikun: i changed some patterns on Insane too
2015-01-25 17:43 smallboat: okay let me look again
Momochikun
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Topic Starter
Momochikun
Thanks a lot !
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Hinsvar
Well I knew it would be qualified this fast.

Congrats!

\SaekanoHypeTrain/
Arcubin
689 posts
Joined September 2013
Arcubin
wuah... D: mochi fastrank D:

gratz tb :D
Oyatsu
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Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
So fast, gratz Mochi :D
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
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Kibbleru
rip you beat me >_>
Mao
Elite Mapper II
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Joined December 2012
Mao
Fast qq
Ujimatsu Chiya
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Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
omg I can't mod X_x

so fast~

gratz!!
bah_to
35 posts
Joined October 2012
bah_to
Momochikun, the beatmap is lagging when I play it with video. Though I guess it's my osu that has the problem because when I play other beatmaps that use FLV for the vids, I get the same laggy problem.

If it would not be so troubling, can you please change the video to AVI format? Thanks. :D :)
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