7!! - Orange (Anime Ver.)

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[FreeSong's Hard]
  • HP-1 对于Hard来说HP7有点高 已-1
    去掉widescreen support fixed
    00:05:179 (2) - 顺时针旋转4°可以blanket得更好 hao
    00:05:179 (2,1,2,1) - 这里的NC我推荐这样 fixed.
    00:15:644 (3) - 太靠上了,碰到分数板就不美观了 已左挪
    00:21:923 (1,1,2,3,4) - 这种遮挡看起来有点乱,而且00:25:412 (4) - 略靠下
    我改了一下,你可以参考:改成你那样子啦 不过调了调心的形状;w;
    167,55,21923,6,0,P|191:115|279:139,1,155.999992858887
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    00:29:598 (4) - whistle 下面全部音效除了蓝色字说明的的都fixed
    00:30:295 (7) - whistle
    00:31:342 (2,3) - 不推荐这么stack,试试这样如何? 哇! 神fix www
    00:32:389 (4) - whistle
    00:35:179 (6) - 开头whistle
    00:37:970 (4) - whistle
    00:40:761 (4) - ^
    00:43:551 (4) - ^
    00:48:958 (4) - 开头whistle
    00:53:319 (1) - 这里用normal音效,开头finish,音量30%效果不错
    00:55:586 (4) - drum-finish
    00:55:761 (5) - 去掉drum-clap 后来感受了下觉得换成drum-finish比较好
    00:56:109 kiai应该从这里开始
    00:56:807 (2) - 这里不太好看啊 fixed
    01:06:749 (8) - drum-finish
    01:06:923 (9) - 去掉drum-clap 同上个蓝
    01:10:063 (1,3,5) - 这三个尾巴叠到同一点上比较好看 fixed
    01:14:772 (6) - (78,90) ^
    01:21:923 (2) - 太靠下了,推荐(256,352) ^
    01:22:621 (1) - 这个我不确定是否rankable 把尾巴揪出去了一点
    01:22:621 (1,2) - 一个开头加whistle,一个结尾加whistle 好.
Thanks for your mod :)
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TitleUnicode:オレンジ
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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JJburstOwO

Citrus wrote:

As your request~
[JJburst's Normal]
  • AR-2,7对于normal来说有点高
    00:38:668 (4) - 这里会被人吐槽的,建议改成一个circle
    虽说这么改还是会被吐槽↓
    00:43:551 (3) - 这里也是,建议减少一个折返
    00:53:319 (1) - 加finish,绿线音量改为30%比较好
    01:21:923 (4,1) - 如果改成AR5的话,这里会因为stack的原因不太好看,放里面怎么样?另把01:22:621 (1) - 开头结尾都加whistle
all fixed~ 谢谢-L-

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Title:Orange
TitleUnicode:オレンジ
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:JJburst's Normal
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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Kamio Misuzu
[FreeSong‘s Hard]
00:15:644 (3) - 看到前面有人提到了,不过依旧推荐往左下角移动一下。第一PC的时候确实感觉挺奇怪的,怎么飞这么高...试试放在 500|16 这附近
00:25:412 (4) - 这个也是,稍微往上面提一点。放note最好不要拉到最外面的边界上去,下面有人开了显示击打精准那个彩色条会碰到的owo
00:58:202 (5,1) - ^
01:21:923 (2) - ^
00:48:958 (4,5) - 合并?感觉要好点
00:59:772 (3,4) - 这里突然没跟vocal有点奇怪
01:11:458 (5) - 去掉头上的whistle
01:14:947 (7) - 对应01:10:761 (3,4,5) - ,前面分节奏分那么细,这里用一个slider压过去感觉有点不太好。
  1. 如果要和前面保持一致,whistle那个建议保持一样。
  2. 如果要跟vocal,那么建议slider7在01:15:295 -结束,1在01:15:470 - 开始


[Hard]
01:05:702 (4,5) - 要我的话就删删删,这么强的钢琴音给我一秒回味下(233
01:15:470 (8) - 要么删掉要么去掉whistle吧。再给1上加个whistle
01:22:621 (2) - 不考虑拉长点吗

[Melt's Hard]
不加个kiai嘛?
00:58:551 - 加个note?

[JJburst’s normal]
差点写成JJburst’s JJ...
00:38:668 (4) - normal放这个会不会有点凶残了。。
00:43:551 (3,4) - 这里好像也稍微有点小难,考虑一下跟vocal把00:44:249 - 这里空一下
Ethercastle
24clap之王女仆mei
送你一颗星
FreeSongs

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[FreeSong‘s Hard]
00:15:644 (3) - 看到前面有人提到了,不过依旧推荐往左下角移动一下。第一PC的时候确实感觉挺奇怪的,怎么飞这么高...试试放在 500|16 这附近 已经改掉啦, 其实是mei没更新
00:25:412 (4) - 这个也是,稍微往上面提一点。放note最好不要拉到最外面的边界上去,下面有人开了显示击打精准那个彩色条会碰到的owo 这个也改掉啦
00:58:202 (5,1) - ^ 好。
01:21:923 (2) - ^ ^
00:48:958 (4,5) - 合并?感觉要好点 神fixwww
00:59:772 (3,4) - 这里突然没跟vocal有点奇怪 这里我也不太清楚怎么下比较好 而且vocal也不太清楚具体在哪几个点, 我就干脆一带而过了
01:11:458 (5) - 去掉头上的whistle
01:14:947 (7) - 对应01:10:761 (3,4,5) - ,前面分节奏分那么细,这里用一个slider压过去感觉有点不太好。改成下面说的那样了
  1. 如果要和前面保持一致,whistle那个建议保持一样。保持一致惹
  2. 如果要跟vocal,那么建议slider7在01:15:295 -结束,1在01:15:470 - 开始 我干脆在这里01:15:470 - 又加了个circle


感谢你的modww
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Topic Starter
Mei

Citrus wrote:

[Hard]
  • HP-1
    00:01:516 (3) - 把尾巴的滑块移动到(388,233)
    00:09:365 (2) - 去掉whistle
    00:10:063 (3) - whistle
    00:53:319 (1) - 这么大声有点突然,因为歌曲本身很轻柔,所以建议降低音量,并把结尾也改成normal音效

[Melt's Hard]
  • 音效音量再大一点比较好,因为和其他难度相比低了一半左右
    不加kiai吗?
    00:53:319 (1) - 结尾也改成normal
    找不到什么了,因为已经哭瞎了


不射还是人?

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Hard]
01:05:702 (4,5) - 要我的话就删删删,这么强的钢琴音给我一秒回味下(233改起来太麻烦了。-。
01:15:470 (8) - 要么删掉要么去掉whistle吧。再给1上加个whistle
01:22:621 (2) - 不考虑拉长点吗.-.为啥

[Melt's Hard]
不加个kiai嘛?
00:58:551 - 加个note?

Ethercastle wrote:

24clap之王女仆mei
送你一颗星呃,虽然不是女仆不过还是谢谢
others fixed
Monstrata
hihi~ from PM request :). Good luck, Mei & friends ^^

[General]

01:07:272 - This would be a nice spot for a Kiai fountain. End Kiai at 01:07:098 - And begin it again here.~

[FreeSong's Hard]

00:11:982 (2,3) - Relative to the other notes, this is a pretty big jump (even though in game play, it's perfectly fine). You may want to consider another pattern here instead of symmetry with 1. This section of the song is very calm, almost completely vocals with minimal piano accompaniment.
00:30:993 (1,2) - Because this is just two sliders, having a change in angle just makes it seem a bit random instead of a pattern. I really think angle-shifts are effective only after you have 3 or more sliders so players can see a pattern. I recommend making 2 the same angle as 1.
00:32:389 (4,5,6,7) - Also, this pattern is a bit messy imo... It's mainly the 6 that looks slightly out of place. Of course this is just my opinion. I've modded this section, here is my screen, see if this pattern works better. Screen
00:33:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is unnecessarily tricky... From (1 to 2), you have normal distance spacing, from (2 to 3) you then have a stack, then from (3 to 4) you have a jump before returning to normal spacing for (4 to 5). Consider angling slider 3 elsewhere... maybe something like this?
00:38:668 (6) - You could put a 1/4 slider here if you want.
00:53:319 (1) - Damn, I was hoping to see a jump here for the hardest diff in the mapset.
01:10:063 (1,3,5) - Check your slider-end stacks here.

[Hard]

00:27:505 (5,1) - Check blanket.
00:28:202 (1) - Maybe 1/8 repeat slider?
00:41:807 (2) - This note doesn't really snap to anything imo... I think this is partially because 00:41:284 (1) - Ends up covering both notes in the vocals here that are supposed to be held. How about Something like this?. I think this better maps the note at 00:41:633 - . And still gives a nice transition into 3. You might want to nerf the jump, i think the jump fits better from 3 to 1, but its up to you :).
01:02:912 (3,4,5,6) - This might be a bit misleading. 01:02:912 (3,4) - Are separated by 1/4 but there is a full 1/2 gap between 01:03:435 (5,6) - ... Yet their positions are very similar, which might lead players to clicking 6 too early. Consider putting 5 elsewhere so it's more clear that there is a longer gap compared to 3, 4.

[Melt's Hard]

There is no Kiai Time???

00:06:400 (1) - It's barely audible... For a calm section like this I really don't think this needs to be mapped :P.
00:32:389 (4,5,1) - 4, to 5 is a big jump and then you go from 5 to 1 Which actually has a 1/2 gap in between. Try and make the spacing more congruent with how much of a gap is between each note. Either create a bigger gap from 5, 1, or (probably better) reduce spacing from 4 to 5.
00:48:958 - Might want to map this note.
01:19:133 (1) - How about ending the slider at 01:19:133 (1) - ? Scale down the heart just a bit.

[JJBurst's Normal]

Please check AIMod... There are some spacing issues that should not be present in a Normal.

00:13:900 (3) - Why not have the note at 00:13:551 - to keep with the 1/1 rhythm?
00:40:063 (2,3) - You should just mimic the slider at 00:40:761 (4) - . This part is unnecessarily overmapped imo. You could simplify it. Unlike below, these 1/4 sliders don't exactly reflect the melody very well.
00:43:551 (3,4) - This makes more sense because it reflects the vocals. ^
00:47:737 (1,2) - Check blankets.
00:53:668 (2,1) - Pretty big jump for a Normal... Plus this breaks flow because of the 180 degree motion the player has to make after jumping from 2, to the slider.
01:19:133 (3) - Why is there SV increase by 1.25x on a Normal :S
Narcissu
[hard]

00:21:226 (1,2) - 換成折返或者分開,因為大部分是1/2 疊尾的做法,混搭1/1的疊尾會有誤導性

01:12:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這邊我覺得應該做難一點,所以我覺得1/2 都分開比較好

00:56:109 - 我覺得normal 的 finish 比較合……

01:18:435 (1) - 僅僅結尾一個轉盤比較正常吧

藍線用完了我覺得都可以刪了【%&……

[jjbast'normal]

0.75-1.0 的變速對normal 來說太過分了,建議修正成0.9-1.0 ,降低基礎SV為1.8

00:16:691 (3,1) - 00:40:063 (2,3,4) - 這兩類1/4 的用法對於新人來說是很難的讀圖梗,尤其是右面那個,我也聽不出連續使用1/4 滑條兩個的理由……1/2 一個滑條就可以了

[Melt's Hard]

本身很稀疏的節奏還用高CS ,看上去過於空曠了,

01:19:133 (1) - 這錨點……這絕對是我拉的……這侵犯版權啊啊啊啊
FreeSongs

monstrata wrote:

[FreeSong's Hard]

00:11:982 (2,3) - Relative to the other notes, this is a pretty big jump (even though in game play, it's perfectly fine). You may want to consider another pattern here instead of symmetry with 1. This section of the song is very calm, almost completely vocals with minimal piano accompaniment.
00:30:993 (1,2) - Because this is just two sliders, having a change in angle just makes it seem a bit random instead of a pattern. I really think angle-shifts are effective only after you have 3 or more sliders so players can see a pattern. I recommend making 2 the same angle as 1.
00:32:389 (4,5,6,7) - Also, this pattern is a bit messy imo... It's mainly the 6 that looks slightly out of place. Of course this is just my opinion. I've modded this section, here is my screen, see if this pattern works better. Screen
00:33:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is unnecessarily tricky... From (1 to 2), you have normal distance spacing, from (2 to 3) you then have a stack, then from (3 to 4) you have a jump before returning to normal spacing for (4 to 5). Consider angling slider 3 elsewhere... maybe something like this?
00:38:668 (6) - You could put a 1/4 slider here if you want.
00:53:319 (1) - Damn, I was hoping to see a jump here for the hardest diff in the mapset.
01:10:063 (1,3,5) - Check your slider-end stacks here.
Fixed everything you mentioned above :)
Thanks for your mod!


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Topic Starter
Mei

monstrata wrote:

hihi~ from PM request :). Good luck, Mei & friends ^^

[General]

01:07:272 - This would be a nice spot for a Kiai fountain. End Kiai at 01:07:098 - And begin it again here.~

[Hard]

00:27:505 (5,1) - Check blanket.i think it is fine here
00:28:202 (1) - Maybe 1/8 repeat slider?that will be so hard for a soft song ;w;
00:41:807 (2) - This note doesn't really snap to anything imo... I think this is partially because 00:41:284 (1) - Ends up covering both notes in the vocals here that are supposed to be held. How about Something like this?. I think this better maps the note at 00:41:633 - . And still gives a nice transition into 3. You might want to nerf the jump, i think the jump fits better from 3 to 1, but its up to you :).made some change with reference of this
01:02:912 (3,4,5,6) - This might be a bit misleading. 01:02:912 (3,4) - Are separated by 1/4 but there is a full 1/2 gap between 01:03:435 (5,6) - ... Yet their positions are very similar, which might lead players to clicking 6 too early. Consider putting 5 elsewhere so it's more clear that there is a longer gap compared to 3, 4.

[Melt's Hard]

There is no Kiai Time???

00:06:400 (1) - It's barely audible... For a calm section like this I really don't think this needs to be mapped :P.
00:32:389 (4,5,1) - 4, to 5 is a big jump and then you go from 5 to 1 Which actually has a 1/2 gap in between. Try and make the spacing more congruent with how much of a gap is between each note. Either create a bigger gap from 5, 1, or (probably better) reduce spacing from 4 to 5.
00:48:958 - Might want to map this note.
01:19:133 (1) - How about ending the slider at 01:19:133 (1) - ? Scale down the heart just a bit. I tried scale but after that the spacing with next note will be pretty confused... so i have to keep my current one and maybe fixed this later ;w;

Narcissu wrote:

prprprprprpr辅导员[hard]

00:21:226 (1,2) - 換成折返或者分開,因為大部分是1/2 疊尾的做法,混搭1/1的疊尾會有誤導性我感觉这里叠好一点,先保留这样

01:12:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這邊我覺得應該做難一點,所以我覺得1/2 都分開比較好可怕,我要萌萌送分

00:56:109 - 我覺得normal 的 finish 比較合……

01:18:435 (1) - 僅僅結尾一個轉盤比較正常吧拉不出滑条_(:3

藍線用完了我覺得都可以刪了【%&……居然对我的帅气蓝线有意见



[Melt's Hard]

本身很稀疏的節奏還用高CS ,看上去過於空曠了,

01:19:133 (1) - 這錨點……這絕對是我拉的……這侵犯版權啊啊啊啊orz被你发现了,这是我偷的,但是报警请找melt
others fixed ;w;
Melt
自己改了下音效,加了个kiai(
最后那里的sldier改了一下:3

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Frobe
hello~ from PM request

[JJburst's Normal]
  1. ar,od -1?
  2. 00:16:691 (3,1) - i think this pattern is very dangerous ;w;


[Melt's Hard]
  1. ar -1?
    pass :3



[FreeSong's Hard]
  1. 00:32:389 (4,5,6,7) - i think have better to little changing this pattern.
  2. 00:41:284 (7) - i think that is better to if you add the whistle on the tail of the slider.
  3. 00:48:958 (4) - what do you think about the slider end to add a whistle?
  4. 00:49:830 (5,6,7) - what do you think of my opinion for this pattern?
  5. 01:22:621 (1) - if you want this slider to have a better shape, how about moving x:452 y:232


[Hard]
  1. 00:02:389 - i think this beat is not fit in a song.
  2. 00:08:493 (5) - i think better to remove this whistle, and add to 00:08:668 - whistle.
  3. 00:10:761 (4) - same as above my opinion. 00:10:761 (4) - remove whstle, add to 00:11:458 (1) - whistle
  4. 00:21:226 (1) - remove nc?
  5. 00:41:284 (1) - ^


star~
Xinchii
Hello ~~ from PM

[General]
  1. 我覺得這個.mp3音量有點小 , 聽起來扁扁的
    要不要試試看這個 http://puu.sh/gaZYI.mp3
    專輯裡的Tv size版本 , 我自己轉成.mp3 192kbps了
    應該跟這個是一樣的 , 不過Offest好像要再加個200左右

[JJburst's Normal]
  1. 00:28:551 (1,2) - 00:31:342 (1,2) - , 01:09:714 (5,1) - 阿阿我覺得最底難度還用這種梗好危險阿 , 要不要換一下;w;
  2. 00:43:551 (3) - 跟(4)一樣做成彎的 ?
  3. 01:00:295 (3) - 稍微包住(1)好像比較好看
  4. 01:17:737 (3) - 這個不要壓在(1)下面好了 , 畫面不太好看

[Melt's Hard]
  1. 01:23:319 (3) - Ctrl+G ? 感覺Ctrl+G之後這組的移動比較好玩 , 下上下很像提琴www
  2. 沒惹

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:389 (5) - 這邊除了歌詞之外沒什麼其他的音 , 我覺得保持間距好像比較好
  2. 00:21:226 (1) - remove NC , 不知道這邊為什麼有個NC lol

[FreeSong's Hard]
  1. 00:05:179 (1) - Add whistle at slider start吧 , 00:07:970 (1) - 這邊都有加
  2. 00:22:621 (2) - 雖然前面很多變速的NC了 , 不過這邊重音應該也繼續NC吧 , 順便強調這顆萌萌心<3
  3. 00:56:807 (2) - miss a clap at start ?
  4. 01:03:086 (3) - 這個還是放在(1)的尾巴吧 ? 感覺這首歌高潮的部分還是不太適合疊在尾巴 , 給一點移動感覺比較好
  5. 01:05:354 (3) - 試試看放在x:84|y:124左右的地方 ? 有一點角度感覺也好玩 , 跟(1)的頭還有(2)的尾巴作一個三角感覺也整齊
  6. 01:06:226 (6) - 這個可以像01:05:005 (2) - 一樣做成彎的 , 感覺比較好看

mod之前又看了一集
又哭了一次 ;___;

Good luck and star ~! :)
alacat
Hello Mei :3 as request about metadata.

Title: オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Romanised Title: Orange(Anime Ver.)


Official artist website : http://7oops.com/news/

from news lol This song hasn't been on sale yet :? haha anyway good luck Mei ~
Vert
好想做个I
为啥不把最高难度命名成insane啊,这样自由度还高一点
FreeSongs

Frobe wrote:

[FreeSong's Hard]
  1. 00:32:389 (4,5,6,7) - i think have better to little changing this pattern. applied.
  2. 00:41:284 (7) - i think that is better to if you add the whistle on the tail of the slider. ^
  3. 00:48:958 (4) - what do you think about the slider end to add a whistle? ^
  4. 00:49:830 (5,6,7) - what do you think of my opinion for this pattern? uhmmm. I don't quiet like the flow, but I made some changes to improve it
  5. 01:22:621 (1) - if you want this slider to have a better shape, how about moving x:452 y:232 I prefer mine because 01:22:621 (1,2) - form a perfect blanket

Thanks for your mod :)

Xinchii wrote:

[FreeSong's Hard]
  1. 00:05:179 (1) - Add whistle at slider start吧 , 00:07:970 (1) - 這邊都有加
  2. 00:22:621 (2) - 雖然前面很多變速的NC了 , 不過這邊重音應該也繼續NC吧 , 順便強調這顆萌萌心<3 <3
  3. 00:56:807 (2) - miss a clap at start ? fixed
  4. 01:03:086 (3) - 這個還是放在(1)的尾巴吧 ? 感覺這首歌高潮的部分還是不太適合疊在尾巴 , 給一點移動感覺比較好 虽然感觉读图可能会有障碍 不过还是改了
  5. 01:05:354 (3) - 試試看放在x:84|y:124左右的地方 ? 有一點角度感覺也好玩 , 跟(1)的頭還有(2)的尾巴作一個三角感覺也整齊
  6. 01:06:226 (6) - 這個可以像01:05:005 (2) - 一樣做成彎的 , 感覺比較好看 赞!;w;

谢谢你的mod;w;
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54714
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.3
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Orange
TitleUnicode:オレンジ
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
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BeatmapSetID:260797

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Topic Starter
Mei
fixed all, thank you Frobe and Xinchii, and thank you for metadata help alacat san >.<

Euphoria wrote:

好想做个I
为啥不把最高难度命名成insane啊,这样自由度还高一点
因为他是个hard啊
JJburstOwO

monstrata wrote:

hihi~ from PM request :). Good luck, Mei & friends ^^

[JJBurst's Normal]

Please check AIMod... There are some spacing issues that should not be present in a Normal.

00:13:900 (3) - Why not have the note at 00:13:551 - to keep with the 1/1 rhythm?
00:40:063 (2,3) - You should just mimic the slider at 00:40:761 (4) - . This part is unnecessarily overmapped imo. You could simplify it. Unlike below, these 1/4 sliders don't exactly reflect the melody very well.
00:43:551 (3,4) - This makes more sense because it reflects the vocals. ^
00:47:737 (1,2) - Check blankets.
00:53:668 (2,1) - Pretty big jump for a Normal... Plus this breaks flow because of the 180 degree motion the player has to make after jumping from 2, to the slider.
01:19:133 (3) - Why is there SV increase by 1.25x on a Normal :S
all fixed~

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54714
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:JJburst's Normal
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
BeatmapID:618921
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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hehe
hi there, beautiful song.

General

FreeSongs' Hard

  1. 00:20:877 (1,1) - NCs are not necessary for 'reading' since you can't really tell their lengths from a glance, consider removing.
  2. 00:20:877 (1) - uhm what's with the shape? use a redpoint https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826177
  3. 00:22:621 (1,2) - improve so that both sliderhead and start end at same place? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826184
  4. 00:25:412 (4) - hmm the sound is not on the timeline... not sure how you gonna fix this.
  5. 00:57:854 - suggest having a note here instead of sliderend
  6. 01:13:551 (3,5) - don't like the shape.. its very half-half. i think you should make it do that the elbow is more obvious

Hard

  1. 01:18:435 - maybe add note and spinner after?

Melt's Hard

  1. 00:08:493 (4) - do circle+1/1 slider like1 the rest?
  2. 00:28:202 - duplicate green line
  3. 00:33:086 - you missed a sound here~
  4. 00:43:551 (3,4,1) - DS is the same, but the rhythm spacing is different. 1/4 to 1/2. i suggest shift 00:44:423 (1) - 1/4 forward and extend it.
  5. 00:56:284 - why no kiai... :(
  6. 01:19:133 (1) - symmetry?

thats all, good luck
FreeSongs

handsome wrote:

FreeSongs' Hard

  1. 00:20:877 (1,1) - NCs are not necessary for 'reading' since you can't really tell their lengths from a glance, consider removing. removed
  2. 00:20:877 (1) - uhm what's with the shape? use a redpoint https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826177 uhmm... yours is almost as same as mine
  3. 00:22:621 (1,2) - improve so that both sliderhead and start end at same place? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2826184 fixed
  4. 00:25:412 (4) - hmm the sound is not on the timeline... not sure how you gonna fix this. not sure about this. shouldnt be a big issue since the note is only a little bit off
  5. 00:57:854 - suggest having a note here instead of sliderend sorry, i think it doesn't fit here...
  6. 01:13:551 (3,5) - don't like the shape.. its very half-half. i think you should make it do that the elbow is more obvious changed
Thanks for your mod!
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: hey.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54714
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9

[Metadata]
Title:Orange(Anime Ver.)
TitleUnicode:オレンジ(アニメVer.)
Artist:7!!
ArtistUnicode:7!!
Creator:Mei
Version:FreeSong's Hard
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:shigatsu wa kimi no uso your lie in april ending Melt JJburstOwO Freesongs
BeatmapID:644989
BeatmapSetID:260797

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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468,256,66226,2,0,P|472:308|460:352,1,60.0000022888184,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,156,66575,1,8,0:3:0:0:
348,232,66749,1,4,0:3:0:0:
348,104,66923,1,4,0:3:0:0:
332,124,67272,6,0,B|276:148|236:140|236:140|260:100,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,40,67795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,67970,2,0,P|172:196|160:108,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,68493,1,2,0:0:0:0:
57,207,68668,2,0,B|72:200|72:200|52:152|76:100,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,172,69365,2,0,B|316:180|316:180|336:228|312:280,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,96,69889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,154,70063,6,0,P|260:172|204:156,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,88,70586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,38,70761,2,0,L|204:156,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,260,71284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
99,198,71458,2,0,P|145:161|204:156,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,344,72156,2,0,P|317:353|263:329,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,260,72679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,224,72854,6,0,P|328:180|328:92,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,32,73377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,112,73551,2,0,B|88:112|88:112|112:80,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,8,74075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,196,74249,2,0,B|12:196|12:196|36:168,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,96,74772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,280,74947,2,0,P|168:260|196:212,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,132,75470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,208,75644,6,0,L|445:234,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,40,76342,2,0,L|300:72,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,92,76865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,200,77040,2,0,P|156:176|116:96,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,77737,2,0,P|304:268|224:308,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,140,78435,6,0,P|104:84|120:20,1,120.000004577637,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,23,79133,2,0,P|407:81|396:140,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,79830,1,8,0:3:0:0:
352,224,80179,1,4,0:3:0:0:
80,304,80528,1,6,0:3:0:0:
432,304,80877,1,6,0:3:0:0:
256,32,81226,5,10,0:0:0:0:
256,352,81923,1,6,0:0:0:0:
512,232,82621,6,0,B|428:260|404:216|404:216|424:256,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,264,83319,2,0,P|340:168|424:140,1,191.999994140625,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84191,12,0,85761,0:0:0:0:
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