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Topic Starter
Colin Hou
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年4月27日 at 21:00:06

Artist: Yoshino Yuuji
Title: Shounin to Ookami to, Tabi no Nibasha
Source: Spice and Wolf
Tags: Horo Lawrence OST Impossiblexu
BPM: 106
Filesize: 6190kb
Play Time: 02:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.69 stars, 275 notes)
  2. Impossiblexu's Easy (0.94 stars, 108 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 442 notes)
  4. Normal (3.61 stars, 187 notes)
Download: Yoshino Yuuji - Shounin to Ookami to, Tabi no Nibasha
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Horo~

#4/19 [Hard] is completed, customer override added. [Insane] is coming.
#4/22 [Insane] is completed. [Normal] is done, too. Moved to pending.
#4/25 [Impossiblexu's Easy] added.
Redownload if you get this map before 4/26.

Hope you didn't get.osb file cuz I have no idea why it come up again and again :3
Kuroneko-sHerald
Artist: Yoshino Hiroshi

Tags: Spice & Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and Travel


Note: If you change Artist or Title, you must full submit. Before doing the full submit, make sure that the folder of the beatmap is named "14726 Yoshino Yuuji - Shounin to Ookami to, Tabi no Nibasha", otherwise you should encounter some problems.
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Artist: Yoshino Hiroshi

Check this and why Yuuji? because Yūji = Yuuji (surely ū is not available in url.)

Tags: Spice & Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and Travel

done.

Note: If you change Artist or Title, you must full submit. Before doing the full submit, make sure that the folder of the beatmap is named "14726 Yoshino Yuuji - Shounin to Ookami to, Tabi no Nibasha", otherwise you should encounter some problems.

Not quite sure for this.

Turned to a BAT for help, and he said this is not necessary if i am the owner of the map.
thx for the info modding~
Kuroneko-sHerald

Colin Hou wrote:

Check this and why Yuuji? because Yūji = Yuuji (surely ū is not available in url.)
Ok, I've done some research. The artist name is actually Yuji Yoshino, not Yuuji, as confermed in the link you gave (that says (吉野裕司, Yoshino Yuji), here and here. Moreover, wiki support special character like ū, ō or other as you can see here.



Turned to a BAT for help, and he said this is not necessary if i am the owner of the map.

I've encountered problem even if the map was mine. Also other people have had problem, so, just to be sure, I always inform people that should change Artist or title :D
Anyway thanks, now I can update my OST with the correct artist name :)
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

Check this and why Yuuji? because Yūji = Yuuji (surely ū is not available in url.)
Ok, I've done some research. The artist name is actually Yuji Yoshino, not Yuuji, as confermed in the link you gave (that says (吉野裕司, Yoshino Yuji), here and here. Moreover, wiki support special character like ū, ō or other as you can see here.



Turned to a BAT for help, and he said this is not necessary if i am the owner of the map.

I've encountered problem even if the map was mine. Also other people have had problem, so, just to be sure, I always inform people that should change Artist or title :D
Anyway thanks, now I can update my OST with the correct artist name :)

Umm, I think either way is OK then. http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... hp?id=8063

By searching Yoshino Yuuji or Yoshino Yuji can both get him ><
Kuroneko-sHerald

Colin Hou wrote:

Umm, I think either way is OK then. http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... hp?id=8063

By searching Yoshino Yuuji or Yoshino Yuji can both get him ><
I ask to a Japanese and answer: "Yuji is better"
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

Umm, I think either way is OK then. http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... hp?id=8063

By searching Yoshino Yuuji or Yoshino Yuji can both get him ><
I ask to a Japanese and answer: "Yuji is better"
Thank you!
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
This beatmap set needs an "Easy" and Normal isnt Easy enough
I can barely hear any hitsounds with the low volume, can you increase the volume?

[Normal]
This is very close to an easy, to get it to be an easy remove any 1/2 timeline spaced notes or turn them into sliders, and make: 00:04:617 (5,1) a shorter jump. Alternatively you can make a new diff and let it be an Easy
Otherwise is fine.

[Hard]
All looks fine to me.

[Insane]
OD+2 This makes the notes look less cluttered and chaotic
01:24:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Ehh try to not throw in a double in mid of a stream, plus is there a reason for there to be so high combos?
As it stands right now this beatmap is too confusing rather than fun with jumps and cool symetric patterns and the like, instead of switching directions every now and then couldnt you consider using other elements to create an insane rather than just keep going straight with barely any jumping and lots of turning back, sudden doubles/triples and the like? Like what you do between 01:51:598 and 01:53:721.

I dont mind if you change or not Insane, but if you want to make something more fun to play you may consider it, anyways, there a few other errors that prevent me from giving you a star right now, unless you can explain to me the why of it or fix them, PM me when u want me to take a look at that again and then i'll give you a star if deserved. Good Luck! ~
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Leave as tags only Spice & Wolf OST.
After you've modded and saved all, delete the .osb and do a full submit.

[Normal]
00:12:542 (5) - Flip vertically.
00:14:806 (2,3,4) - If you follow the one up of this, just flip vertically this 3 too!

[Hard]
Isn't your distance spacing a bit Huge for this diff?
Anyway, it's okay.

[Insane]
Whoa! It's okay! I like this diff more than the others xD

All! starred ;D
orioncomet
[Normal]
01:13:108 (3) - a bit hidden note for Normal, imo
01:14:240 (4) - feel so close
02:39:004 - check this timing selection, maybe you forgot to change something with it?

[Hard]
- Overall difficulty too low and hard to read those some streams note, and this diff seem a bit Insane
02:39:004 - check this timing selection

[Insane]
- Some combocolour on this diff are too long. could you check and add some new combo.
00:15:655 (7) - new combo? too far and this combocolour seem too long.
00:20:183 (6) - ^
00:33:202 (5) - ^
01:16:504 (1) - too short
01:32:919 (8) - new combo?
01:33:909 (4,5) - spacing?
01:34:476 (6) - new combo?
01:34:617 (2) - spacing?
01:52:730 (5) - new combo?
02:10:843 (1) - too short
02:20:466 (2) - spacing?
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Sakura301 wrote:

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
This beatmap set needs an "Easy" and Normal isnt Easy enough

3.35 star rating is enough to be a easiest diff. maybe i can make a Easy when i got time.(exams week :S)

I can barely hear any hitsounds with the low volume, can you increase the volume?

i think you actually heard it but you think that is the BGM... cuz they are quite like.(the hitsound whistle's volume is even higher than the BGM)

[Normal]
This is very close to an easy, to get it to be an easy remove any 1/2 timeline spaced notes or turn them into sliders, and make: 00:04:617 (5,1) a shorter jump. Alternatively you can make a new diff and let it be an Easy
Otherwise is fine.

maybe a Easy will be done.

[Hard]
All looks fine to me.

[Insane]
OD+2 This makes the notes look less cluttered and chaotic

done.

01:24:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Ehh try to not throw in a double in mid of a stream, plus is there a reason for there to be so high combos?

ahh, remapped that part.

As it stands right now this beatmap is too confusing rather than fun with jumps and cool symetric patterns and the like, instead of switching directions every now and then couldnt you consider using other elements to create an insane rather than just keep going straight with barely any jumping and lots of turning back, sudden doubles/triples and the like? Like what you do between 01:51:598 and 01:53:721.

I dont mind if you change or not Insane, but if you want to make something more fun to play you may consider it, anyways, there a few other errors that prevent me from giving you a star right now, unless you can explain to me the why of it or fix them, PM me when u want me to take a look at that again and then i'll give you a star if deserved. Good Luck! ~

first time to make a really Insane diff, still seeking a good way :3 thx for your time.
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Leave as tags only Spice & Wolf OST.

what u c is just the album's name @_@

After you've modded and saved all, delete the .osb and do a full submit.

this file generated every time i press 'save' cuz of the use of SB sound. I will remove it when this map is really done.

[Normal]
00:12:542 (5) - Flip vertically. done.
00:14:806 (2,3,4) - If you follow the one up of this, just flip vertically this 3 too! unnecessary.

[Hard]
Isn't your distance spacing a bit Huge for this diff? Huge?
Anyway, it's okay.

[Insane]
Whoa! It's okay! I like this diff more than the others xD

All! starred ;D
thx for modding!
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

orioncomet wrote:

[Normal]
01:13:108 (3) - a bit hidden note for Normal, imo
01:14:240 (4) - feel so close

my mistake. it should be what it is now. :S

02:39:004 - check this timing selection, maybe you forgot to change something with it?

done. i really forgot...

[Hard]
- Overall difficulty too low and hard to read those some streams note, and this diff seem a bit Insane
02:39:004 - check this timing selection

OD+1 and another forgotten timing selection. +_+

[Insane]
- Some combocolour on this diff are too long. could you check and add some new combo.
00:15:655 (7) - new combo? too far and this combocolour seem too long.
00:20:183 (6) - ^
00:33:202 (5) - ^
01:16:504 (1) - too short
01:32:919 (8) - new combo?
01:33:909 (4,5) - spacing? ?
01:34:476 (6) - new combo?
01:34:617 (2) - spacing? x1.6 there..
01:52:730 (5) - new combo?
02:10:843 (1) - too short
02:20:466 (2) - spacing? there is x1.6

the combos are based on the music, they're a bit long but fine. the spinners are short but easy to get a 300.
maybe i'll change a new combo way but that's quite hard in some part.
Dotsu
[General]
三个难度只有Insane有两个短转盘?试着在其他难度里也添加一些转盘。(转盘Auto得分不能小于2000)
1/4的slider弯曲的太严重会有点难看
[Normal]
非常Easy的Normal…… 把难度增大些 建议HP+2 overrall+1
00:13:674(1):重复+1
[Hard]
对于Hard太简单了吧 建议同上HP+2 overrall+1
Note 间距也太小了 改大些
像这里:02:23:862
不接触比较好
另外Combo之间有些跳得有点远 有些地方有些太近 应该统一一下
00:06:881(5):放在4的正上方
00:09:711(1):圆滑些
00:22:164(10):延长至00:22:730
01:27:825(3,4,5,6,7)有点乱 重新放置一下
01:36:183(2)对称一下
[Insane]
00:13:815(1,2,3……,16,17,18):Combo不能超过15.后面也是
00:14:805(6):左一格
01:50:466(10,11,12,13,14,15)有点看不明白

总之非常好的图!需要的话我可以做个Easy

忘了说 这些都仅仅是建议
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

impossiblexu wrote:

[General]
三个难度只有Insane有两个短转盘?试着在其他难度里也添加一些转盘。(转盘Auto得分不能小于2000)
转盘要加的话只能是短转盘,因为很紧凑的音乐...所以只在insane里才会出现.
1/4的slider弯曲的太严重会有点难看
01:26:693 (1) 是指这里把? 改成Bezier的了 :3
[Normal]
非常Easy的Normal…… 把难度增大些 建议HP+2 overrall+1
done.
00:13:674(1):重复+1
加了个note.
[Hard]
对于Hard太简单了吧 建议同上HP+2 overrall+1
HP+2 OD暂时不变(再加我能打出的100会多很多 :S)
Note 间距也太小了 改大些
像这里:02:23:862
不接触比较好
间距小所以加了很多跳...如果减小Circle Size的话...就变Insane了 :D 我是按自己的实力来谱这个难度的 花的功夫也最多
另外Combo之间有些跳得有点远 有些地方有些太近 应该统一一下
00:06:881(5):放在4的正上方 done.
00:09:711(1):圆滑些 done.
00:22:164(10):延长至00:22:730 x0.5处理
01:27:825(3,4,5,6,7)有点乱 重新放置一下 done.
01:36:183(2)对称一下 这个不必要的 :3 那个形状是故意做出来的``
[Insane]
00:13:815(1,2,3……,16,17,18):Combo不能超过15.后面也是 没有很好的combo方案啊 ~_~
00:14:805(6):左一格 移不动..距离正常的啊...
01:50:466(10,11,12,13,14,15)有点看不明白 01:50:608处留了个空而已 按照一个往返的stream打就可以

总之非常好的图!需要的话我可以做个Easy
作业做完啦~~

Easy的话 拜托啦 :) 最怕做Easy了...不小心就变Normal
wmfchris
暫時沒大問題
明天再看 先star
soulfear
:lol:
al2e10
AL2e's modmodmod

[Insane]
- Spacing
00:08:579 (13,1) - Too far
- Combo problem
00:20:183 (6) - New combo
00:52:164 (9) - ^
01:29:098 (12) - ^
01:33:202 (9) - ^
02:05:183 (11) - ^
02:21:315 (5) - ^ Because it was change the Distance spacing
02:22:164 (8) - ^
- Spinner
01:16:504 (1) - Too short
02:10:843 (1) - ^

[Hard]
- Combo problem
01:10:843 (9) - New combo

[ALL]
Um... I can just say, it boring ~.~

But STAR ~
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

al2e10 wrote:

AL2e's modmodmod

[Insane]
- Spacing
00:08:579 (13,1) - Too far

no

- Combo problem
00:20:183 (6) - New combo
00:52:164 (9) - ^
01:29:098 (12) - ^
01:33:202 (9) - ^
02:05:183 (11) - ^
02:21:315 (5) - ^ Because it was change the Distance spacing
02:22:164 (8) - ^

fixed some

- Spinner
01:16:504 (1) - Too short replaced by a slider
02:10:843 (1) - ^ no.

[Hard]
- Combo problem
01:10:843 (9) - New combo done.

[ALL]
Um... I can just say, it boring ~.~

;_;

But STAR ~
Sure
[Normal] & [Hard]
Fine!


[Insane]
00:07:447 (5) - I won't say badly. This is no good spacing, even though it is insane IMO.
00:11:976 (5) - ^
01:49:900 (6) - ^
01:50:466 (10) - ^
02:00:655 (5) - ^
02:09:711 (5) - ^
02:10:843 (1) - Too short spinner. Spin bonus should be over 2000 by auto.


STAR~*
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

ykcarrot wrote:

[Normal] & [Hard]
Fine!


[Insane]
00:07:447 (5) - I won't say badly. This is no good spacing, even though it is insane IMO.
00:11:976 (5) - ^
01:49:900 (6) - ^
01:50:466 (10) - ^
02:00:655 (5) - ^
02:09:711 (5) - ^

changed combos there for player's attention.

02:10:843 (1) - Too short spinner. Spin bonus should be over 2000 by auto.

not hard to get a 300 and it's an end spinner :3

STAR~*
thx for modding :3
Dotsu
Easy完成!!! :D


Download: Yoshino Yuuji - Shounin to Ookami to, Tabi no Nibasha (Colin Hou) [Impossiblexu's Easy].osu
(没有BG Combo Color同Normal 另外如果不喜欢00:34:617(4)的slider可以换掉)
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

impossiblexu wrote:

Easy完成!!! :D

(没有BG Combo Color同Normal 另外如果不喜欢00:34:617(4)的slider可以换掉)
虽然很有迷惑性 但是还是先留着吧~~ updated!
Leorda
NI HAO

Aha, a carnival song

[General]
Delete "Spice" "&" and "Wolf", since that word in source

[Impossibexu's Easy]
00:34:617 (4) - This slider is weird, and difficult for beginner player, make it curve or parallel
01:19:900 (4) - I think this slider is too difficlt for beginner player, don't let the starpoint overlap the endpoint


[Normal]
Hm..... I think the Circle Size is bigger for normal diff, IMO. Increase the Circle Size only one tick?
00:04:617 (5) - Really, I don't this object is stack with 4 at the end fo slider
02:28:957 (8) - Make symetric?

[Hard]
01:28:815 (6) - New combo?
01:33:202 (6) - ^
02:05:183 (9) - ^
02:09:994 (8) - ^

[Insane]
I think the bg is not fit for diff, maybe?
00:39:004 (8) - I think overlap doesn't looks right
01:22:589 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - OMG!!!! IT"S CONFUSING!!!!!!!!
02:10:843 (1) - Unrankable Spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000, current is 1000)


Good song
STAR
Garven
[General]
I love the hit sounds you found for this.
There are no spinners in Normal and Hard, and one really short one in Insane. Maybe try to find a spot to put one in so there will be at least one point where there can be some score variance.

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
00:34:617 (4) - Neat.
02:38:013 (1) - I feel the new combos at the end here are unnecessary, but I can see what you were going for.

[Normal]
02:39:145 (1) - Maybe instead of a slider for the last three notes, use three normal beats? It would feel a bit better of a finish to the song.

[Hard]
Mostly nazi for this difficulty, but:
00:14:523 (2) - Turn off grid snap and move this beat between the 1 and 3 more evenly. Be wary of 00:15:655 (4)'s position if you do this.
00:47:353 (6,7) - Same thing with these two.
00:49:900 (1) - The low OD make this pattern a little difficult to read.
02:02:919 (4) - Maybe point the end of this slider more towards 5?

[Insane]
The bg almost felt like it didn't belong with the other three. I don't know why... maybe it's the gradient background color with it?
The sudden changes in slider speed were really confusing the first time through.
00:40:277 (4,1) - This felt kind like too much of a jump right after a slow slider with such a small amount of time between beats.
01:22:589 (3) - Man, that killed me fast, haha.
01:31:504 (3,4) - This felt unnatural. Maybe flip the position of 3 and 4? Unless this is what you were going for...
02:10:843 (1) - This spinner feels really short. I'm sure people will call it out on being so, though I had no problem with it.
02:39:145 (1,2) - As with Normal, this felt kind of anti-climactic.

Good stuff!
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

Aha, a carnival song

[General]
Delete "Spice" "&" and "Wolf", since that word in source

Spice & Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and Travel That's the album name.

[Impossibexu's Easy]
00:34:617 (4) - This slider is weird, and difficult for beginner player, make it curve or parallel
01:19:900 (4) - I think this slider is too difficlt for beginner player, don't let the starpoint overlap the endpoint


done.

[Normal]
Hm..... I think the Circle Size is bigger for normal diff, IMO. Increase the Circle Size only one tick? done.
00:04:617 (5) - Really, I don't this object is stack with 4 at the end fo slider exchanged 4 and 5
02:28:957 (8) - Make symetric? no.

[Hard]
01:28:815 (6) - New combo?
01:33:202 (6) - ^
done.
02:05:183 (9) - ^
02:09:994 (8) - ^
no.

[Insane]
I think the bg is not fit for diff, maybe? orz.
00:39:004 (8) - I think overlap doesn't looks right
done.
01:22:589 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - OMG!!!! IT"S CONFUSING!!!!!!!! I'm crazy XD
02:10:843 (1) - Unrankable Spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000, current is 1000)not difficult for a 300.

Good song
STAR
Thx for modding O(∩_∩)O~~
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Garven wrote:

[General]
I love the hit sounds you found for this.
There are no spinners in Normal and Hard, and one really short one in Insane. Maybe try to find a spot to put one in so there will be at least one point where there can be some score variance.

I tried but failed.

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
00:34:617 (4) - Neat. done.
02:38:013 (1) - I feel the new combos at the end here are unnecessary, but I can see what you were going for. :3

[Normal]
02:39:145 (1) - Maybe instead of a slider for the last three notes, use three normal beats? It would feel a bit better of a finish to the song. done. x1.5 jumps then.

[Hard]
Mostly nazi for this difficulty, but:
00:14:523 (2) - Turn off grid snap and move this beat between the 1 and 3 more evenly. Be wary of 00:15:655 (4)'s position if you do this. done. I copied 2 for 4 XD
00:47:353 (6,7) - Same thing with these two. done.
00:49:900 (1) - The low OD make this pattern a little difficult to read. ye, but fine.
02:02:919 (4) - Maybe point the end of this slider more towards 5? done.

[Insane]
The bg almost felt like it didn't belong with the other three. I don't know why... maybe it's the gradient background color with it? changed to a new one.
The sudden changes in slider speed were really confusing the first time through. :3
00:40:277 (4,1) - This felt kind like too much of a jump right after a slow slider with such a small amount of time between beats. get shorter.
01:22:589 (3) - Man, that killed me fast, haha. XD
01:31:504 (3,4) - This felt unnatural. Maybe flip the position of 3 and 4? Unless this is what you were going for... yep.
02:10:843 (1) - This spinner feels really short. I'm sure people will call it out on being so, though I had no problem with it. everyone modded this map pointed this out. but it's not difficult to get a 300.
02:39:145 (1,2) - As with Normal, this felt kind of anti-climactic. done. another back jump :3

Good stuff!
XD
Kecco
Really handsome song~

•Overall•
Offset : 653

•Insane•
01:26:549 (6) - Wrong spacing. Please fix it, maybe moving it a bit further.
01:35:181 (8) - Make it finish on 01:35:606
01:49:757 (5,6) - Fix the spacing, please. It can confuse the player.
02:09:709 (1) - ^
02:10:841 (1) - LoL, It's really quick. Try to fix it in another way.

That's all.
I really love this song and this map, Good Job! ♫
Star~ ♪
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Kecco wrote:

Really handsome song~

•Overall•
Offset : 653 done.

•Insane•
01:26:549 (6) - Wrong spacing. Please fix it, maybe moving it a bit further. done. placed it based on x0.8.
01:35:181 (8) - Make it finish on 01:35:606 that's the drum.
01:49:757 (5,6) - Fix the spacing, please. It can confuse the player. done.
02:09:709 (1) - ^ I think it's fine, well, fixed.
02:10:841 (1) - LoL, It's really quick. Try to fix it in another way. I'd like to keep it :3

That's all.
I really love this song and this map, Good Job! ♫

Star~ ♪
thx for your time XD
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[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission"

[Hard]


Topic Starter
Colin Hou

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • Delete the osb file, then "Full Submission"

[Hard]

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Orz
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Yeah, the .osb is still there. Have you tried deleting that yet? or did you delete it, and then it came back?
  2. Offset: 651 (not very different to yours. Thats just what I got. That was pretty hard to time actually.)
  3. "Wolf" is in the tags twice. You only have to have it in their once, So I'd delete one of them.
[IMPOSSIBLEXU'S EASY]

Awesome

[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

Resnap all notes

Apart from that. Very good :)

[INSANE]

00:07:304 (8,1) - Having jumps like this on the end of streams is very frustrating to play for most people. I'd delete this jump.
00:11:832 (10,1) - ^
01:22:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This can be awkward to read and play because of all of the overlapping. prhaps you could put these into a different pattern, so its more clear and looks better?

Nice map. Insane is a little overmapped for my tastes, but overall, its nicely made.

Starred
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Yeah, the .osb is still there. Have you tried deleting that yet? or did you delete it, and then it came back?
    I just deleted this file for 3 times. I checked my folder before I fully submitted last time (after xxheroxx's mod), now I still don't have it. Maybe that's all for the use of SB sound. :o
  2. Offset: 651 (not very different to yours. Thats just what I got. That was pretty hard to time actually.)
    Yep, very hard to find a 100% correct offset, I got 655 and you got 651, then let it be 653 :3
  3. "Wolf" is in the tags twice. You only have to have it in their once, So I'd delete one of them.
    Spice & Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and Travel
    this is the title of the music album name, the colored part can't be seperated. or I have to delete all the words.
[IMPOSSIBLEXU'S EASY]

Awesome

[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

Resnap all notes

Apart from that. Very good :)

[INSANE]

00:07:304 (8,1) - Having jumps like this on the end of streams is very frustrating to play for most people. I'd delete this jump.
00:11:832 (10,1) - ^

done.

01:22:587 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This can be awkward to read and play because of all of the overlapping. prhaps you could put these into a different pattern, so its more clear and looks better?

did some change to new combo. the hit rule is easier now.

Nice map. Insane is a little overmapped for my tastes, but overall, its nicely made.

Starred
thx for helping me again XD (I will do another full submit again, plz don't come up, osb ~_~)
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Impossiblexu's Easy
fine
Normal
Also fine
Hard
01:08:011 (1,2,3) - minor spacing issue
Insane
00:18:624 (3,4) - right 1 grid
01:24:568 (4) - up 1 grid?
01:51:596 (5) - new combo
02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable

nice, but some of the streams in Insane diff are hard to read
STAR anyways
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Impossiblexu's Easy
fine
Normal
Also fine
Hard
01:08:011 (1,2,3) - minor spacing issue done.
Insane
00:18:624 (3,4) - right 1 grid done.
01:24:568 (4) - up 1 grid? done.
01:51:596 (5) - new combo no.
02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable no. no more explain...

nice, but some of the streams in Insane diff are hard to read
Or I should change the diff name to [CoLazy Hou] orz

STAR anyways
thx for your tiny fixs ;)
Breeze
[General]
  1. [Impossiblexu's Easy]难度的Stack Leniency是0.5,其他3个难度是0.6,我没记错的话这个应该要统一的
  2. Spice Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and这些没必要加到tag里吧,都包含太广没有特指性啊,Spice Wolf这些在source里有的更不用加进去了
[Normal]
  1. 我注意到这个难度好像没用到自定义音效,跟其他难度听起不太一样,为什么不用呢?
[Hard]
  1. 01:34:615 (1) - slider开头和结尾换下位置感觉好些,test的时候总会觉得现在的结尾处那才是开始o.o
[Insane]
  1. 01:19:049 (7-11) - 哎哟,有点乱 *_*不太看得清
  2. 01:22:587 (1-10) - ^
  3. 02:10:841 (S) - 这个spinner是unrankable的,太短了
  4. 02:21:030 (4) - New combo? 因为这里开始jump
  5. 02:39:426 (2,3) - New combo? 不规则spacing ._.
nice map
star
Arusha Shuna

Colin Hou wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable no. no more explain...[/notice]
you sure about this? It's crucial for ranking you know, one "unrankable" spinner can make the whole map unrankable (also some BATs may rant about this :/)

ok, i don't have the rights to change your mind. this is your map, not mine. good luck though ;)

P.S. : do NOT kudosu this post, thank you very much
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. [Impossiblexu's Easy]难度的Stack Leniency是0.5,其他3个难度是0.6,我没记错的话这个应该要统一的
    done 貌似某天在群里误人了 Orz
  2. Spice Wolf TV animation OST Music of Wolf and这些没必要加到tag里吧,都包含太广没有特指性啊,Spice Wolf这些在source里有的更不用加进去了
    其实我也不想加,具体看这个帖子的第一个回复 Orz 现在就保留OST好了
[Normal]
  1. 我注意到这个难度好像没用到自定义音效,跟其他难度听起不太一样,为什么不用呢? 这个原因和xxheroxx的红线Mod一样, 改offset弄出来的...o_0``
[Hard]
  1. 01:34:615 (1) - slider开头和结尾换下位置感觉好些,test的时候总会觉得现在的结尾处那才是开始o.o OD很低 这个骗retry的地方还是留着吧 :3否则太送分了
[Insane]
  1. 01:19:049 (7-11) - 哎哟,有点乱 *_*不太看得清
  2. 01:22:587 (1-10) - ^
    newcombo做了下变动 应该会好读点 :)
  3. 02:10:841 (S) - 这个spinner是unrankable的,太短了 我还是改掉好了 233 (群众纷纷表示...)
  4. 02:21:030 (4) - New combo? 因为这里开始jump
  5. 02:39:426 (2,3) - New combo? 不规则spacing ._.
    改掉了~
nice map
star
:)

Arusha Shuna wrote:

02:10:841 (1) - unrankable spinner, at least auto mod must get bonus of 2000 to make it rankable no. no more explain...[/notice]

you sure about this? It's crucial for ranking you know, one "unrankable" spinner can make the whole map unrankable (also some BATs may rant about this :/)

ok, i don't have the rights to change your mind. this is your map, not mine. good luck though ;)

P.S. : do NOT kudosu this post, thank you very much
thx for your recheck, I will remove that spinner, really thx ^o^
mtmcl
Bub
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

mtmcl wrote:

Bub
ty mark XD
Mafiamaster
Lol, sounds like video game town music~

Ranked!
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Mafiamaster wrote:

Lol, sounds like video game town music~

Ranked!
thx, Mafia :)
Cyclone
Sounds like Secret of Mana or something. Though i'm just basing this on the preview. Have yet to actually download it.
alvisto
Cool map. Nice hitsounds. ;p
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