This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 11월 15일 월요일 at 오전 4:35:48

Artist: Girls' Generation & Super Junior
Title: Seoul Song
Tags: snsd sj _llkey_18
BPM: 123
Filesize: 20182kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:

1. Beginner (2.34 stars, 234 notes)
2. Challenging (4.24 stars, 323 notes)
3. Happy Seoul (4.63 stars, 382 notes)
4. llkey's Insane (4.91 stars, 470 notes)

Download: Girls' Generation & Super Junior - Seoul Song
Download: Girls' Generation & Super Junior - Seoul Song (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first map..

Please play with video >_<

+Video info+
h264
640x480
510kbps

Why nobody give me advice even a look T^T

~
:-)

rab star~!

nice

star:3

star`

星星

4/23

Hard - Changed distance. repositioned all beats, Diff Rename to 'Excellent!'
Noraml - maked Circle size, HP drain and Overall lower, Diff Rename to 'Improve yourself'
Easy - Diff Rename to 'Starter'

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Star because i love this song ( A little ^^ )

star~ ^^

스타
모딩큐가 다 별제한있는것도 아니니 한번 돌아보세요
(아니 맵퍼로써는 꼭 돌아야 하는듯)

[General]

1. Audio = 7 (F4누르시고 Audio텝가셔서 7칸으로 맞춰주시면 됩니다.)
2. 제안이지만 Tag에 소시맴버,슈주맴버 이름 껴넣는거 어떨까요?
3. 그리고 Tag에 k pop이라고 넣는건 요즘 거의 필수일꺼라고 생각합니다. 곡제목에 seoul이란 말이 포함되있으니 이런것들도 지워주시길...

01:33:132 (x) - 01:34:595로 Kiai타임 옮기세요.
02:32:644 (x) - Kiai타임이 왜 여기서 끝납니까?...02:36:547에서 끝내세요.
02:44:839 (x) - Kiai타임 시작
02:52:156 (x) - Kiai타임 끝

[Starter]

00:40:937 (3) - 밑으로 한칸 왼쪽으로 한칸
00:49:717 (1) - 뉴콤보
01:05:083 (3) - 01:05:327로 옮기세요.
01:20:449 (4,5,6,8) - /4 -왼쪽으로 한칸 / 5 - 왼쪽으로 두칸 / 6 - 왼쪽으로 한칸 / 8 - 오른쪽으로 한칸

01:33:132 (1,3) - /1 - 뉴콤보 삭제 /3 - 뉴콤보
01:44:351 (3) - 초보자들이 알아보기 어렵습니다.
02:47:766 (3) - 호루라기
02:57:278 (6) - 02:58:010에 슬라이더 끝내세요.
03:16:547 (2) - 피니쉬 삭제
03:30:205 (1) - 스페이스가.. ㅡㅡ;
03:41:912 (3) - 초보자들이 알아보기 어렵습니다.
03:46:547 (2) - 삭제
03:47:034 (4) - Repeat 없세세요.

[Improve yourself]

01:05:693 (3) - 01:05:815로 옮김 끝박자는 빨간선
01:07:278 (6) - 하얀선에 끝내세요.
01:52:888 (8) - ^
02:08:498 (7) - ^
03:27:034 (9) - Repeat가 가려져서 보이지 않습니다.. 보이도록 스페이싱을 수정해주세요.

[Excellent!]

01:51:425 (5) - 이거 끝박자 뭐임??...파란선도 아니고 1/8 노란선...
01:52:156 (7) - ^
02:44:839 (4) - 피니쉬
02:52:644 (1) - 뉴콤보?..
03:45:693 (1) - 시작지점 하얀선

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셤끝나면 시간남으면 게스트 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요?

lRasl wrote:

[General]

1. Audio = 7 (F4누르시고 Audio텝가셔서 7칸으로 맞춰주시면 됩니다.)
2. 제안이지만 Tag에 소시맴버,슈주맴버 이름 껴넣는거 어떨까요?
3. 그리고 Tag에 k pop이라고 넣는건 요즘 거의 필수일꺼라고 생각합니다. 곡제목에 seoul이란 말이 포함되있으니 이런것들도 지워주시길...

01:33:132 (x) - 01:34:595로 Kiai타임 옮기세요.
02:32:644 (x) - Kiai타임이 왜 여기서 끝납니까?...02:36:547에서 끝내세요.
02:44:839 (x) - Kiai타임 시작
02:52:156 (x) - Kiai타임 끝

[Starter]

00:40:937 (3) - 밑으로 한칸 왼쪽으로 한칸
00:49:717 (1) - 뉴콤보
01:05:083 (3) - 01:05:327로 옮기세요.
01:20:449 (4,5,6,8) - /4 -왼쪽으로 한칸 / 5 - 왼쪽으로 두칸 / 6 - 왼쪽으로 한칸 / 8 - 오른쪽으로 한칸

01:33:132 (1,3) - /1 - 뉴콤보 삭제 /3 - 뉴콤보
01:44:351 (3) - 초보자들이 알아보기 어렵습니다.
02:47:766 (3) - 호루라기
02:57:278 (6) - 02:58:010에 슬라이더 끝내세요.
03:16:547 (2) - 피니쉬 삭제
03:30:205 (1) - 스페이스가.. ㅡㅡ;
03:41:912 (3) - 초보자들이 알아보기 어렵습니다.
03:46:547 (2) - 삭제
03:47:034 (4) - Repeat 없세세요.

[Improve yourself]

01:05:693 (3) - 01:05:815로 옮김 끝박자는 빨간선
01:07:278 (6) - 하얀선에 끝내세요.
01:52:888 (8) - ^
02:08:498 (7) - ^
03:27:034 (9) - Repeat가 가려져서 보이지 않습니다.. 보이도록 스페이싱을 수정해주세요.

[Excellent!]

01:51:425 (5) - 이거 끝박자 뭐임??...파란선도 아니고 1/8 노란선...
01:52:156 (7) - ^
02:44:839 (4) - 피니쉬
02:52:644 (1) - 뉴콤보?..
03:45:693 (1) - 시작지점 하얀선

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셤끝나면 시간남으면 게스트 난이도 만들어봐도 될까요?

All Done
감사합니다

最近才想起來忘了mod這張圖...O.O

Excellent

(一開始到00:27:766的 kiai沒必要
PreviewTime 和其他難度不同 統一下

00:48:498 - add a note
00:56:303 - ^
01:52:644 - ^
02:00:327 - ^
02:38:254 (4) - 移到右邊的藍線上
02:38:986 - add a note
02:40:205 - ^
03:16:059 - kiai從03:19:961開始
03:25:083 (5) - 移到右邊的藍線上

Improve

00:25:327 (3) - 做成和4一樣的slider
00:27:522 (3) - 移到左邊的白線上
00:31:425 (2) - 移到左邊的白線上 然後多2個來回
00:38:254 (7,1,2,3,4) - 移上去一格
00:45:327 - add a note
00:46:181 - ^
00:47:766 (9) - new combo
00:49:230 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:230 (1) - 從右邊的紅線上開始 (結尾處不變)
00:52:888 (3) - 移到(2)右邊的紅線上
01:24:351 (3,7) - 重疊
01:26:791 (1,4) - ^
01:28:986 (2,3,4) - (像這樣的排列 最好讓(3)(4)往右一格 讓他看起來對稱
01:37:034 (3,1) - 重疊
02:16:059 (3,4) - 移上去一格
02:30:693 (4) - ^
02:37:034 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這一串最好對稱點 要不然太亂
02:47:278 (2,4) - 4疊在2上面
02:59:961 (3,4) - 移上去一格
03:17:522 (4,6) - 重疊
03:19:473 (9) - 移上去一格
03:23:864 (1,4) - 重疊

簡單難度我就不再看了..O.O 反正差不大多啦:3

AngelHoney wrote:

最近才想起來忘了mod這張圖...O.O

Excellent

(一開始到00:27:766的 kiai沒必要
PreviewTime 和其他難度不同 統一下

00:48:498 - add a note
00:56:303 - ^
01:52:644 - ^
02:00:327 - ^
02:38:254 (4) - 移到右邊的藍線上
02:38:986 - add a note
02:40:205 - ^
03:16:059 - kiai從03:19:961開始
03:25:083 (5) - 移到右邊的藍線上

Improve

00:25:327 (3) - 做成和4一樣的slider
00:27:522 (3) - 移到左邊的白線上
00:31:425 (2) - 移到左邊的白線上 然後多2個來回
00:38:254 (7,1,2,3,4) - 移上去一格
00:45:327 - add a note
00:46:181 - ^
00:47:766 (9) - new combo
00:49:230 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:230 (1) - 從右邊的紅線上開始 (結尾處不變)
00:52:888 (3) - 移到(2)右邊的紅線上
01:24:351 (3,7) - 重疊
01:26:791 (1,4) - ^
01:28:986 (2,3,4) - (像這樣的排列 最好讓(3)(4)往右一格 讓他看起來對稱
01:37:034 (3,1) - 重疊
02:16:059 (3,4) - 移上去一格
02:30:693 (4) - ^
02:37:034 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這一串最好對稱點 要不然太亂
02:47:278 (2,4) - 4疊在2上面
02:59:961 (3,4) - 移上去一格
03:17:522 (4,6) - 重疊
03:19:473 (9) - 移上去一格
03:23:864 (1,4) - 重疊

簡單難度我就不再看了..O.O 反正差不大多啦:3

All done
非常感谢！

i love sunny

ohi,

[General]
Offset + ~7
Remove Girls Generation, Super Junior and Seoul Song from tags as they are in the title/artist already.
Video file is too big IMO. Compress it.
Video also needs an offset.

[Starter]

01:02:644 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:376 (2) - new combo
OR
01:05:327 (3) - new combo
01:20:449 (4,5) - 1 tick to the right
01:21:425 (6) - 1 tick to the right and 1 up
01:21:912 (7,8) - 1 tick to the right
01:36:547 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:010 (4) - 1 tick down
01:38:498 (5) - new combo
02:41:425 (8) - new combo
02:44:839 (3) - 1 tick down + new combo
02:46:791 (1) - remove new combo
02:47:278 (2,3,4) - 1 tick up
02:48:742 (1) - stack under 7
02:54:595 (2) - 1 tick up + new combo
02:56:059 (5,6) - 1 tick up
03:18:986 (7) - 1 tick up
03:21:912 (5) - 1 tick to the right
03:31:669 (4) - new combo

sleepy now.
other diffs. dont have that many issues.

good map and song.

+star

Xero_HT wrote:

ohi,

[General]
Offset + ~7
Remove Girls Generation, Super Junior and Seoul Song from tags as they are in the title/artist already.
Video file is too big IMO. Compress it.
Video also needs an offset.

[Starter]

01:02:644 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:376 (2) - new combo
OR
01:05:327 (3) - new combo
01:20:449 (4,5) - 1 tick to the right
01:21:425 (6) - 1 tick to the right and 1 up
01:21:912 (7,8) - 1 tick to the right
01:36:547 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:010 (4) - 1 tick down
01:38:498 (5) - new combo
02:41:425 (8) - new combo
02:44:839 (3) - 1 tick down + new combo
02:46:791 (1) - remove new combo
02:47:278 (2,3,4) - 1 tick up
02:48:742 (1) - stack under 7
02:54:595 (2) - 1 tick up + new combo
02:56:059 (5,6) - 1 tick up
03:18:986 (7) - 1 tick up
03:21:912 (5) - 1 tick to the right
03:31:669 (4) - new combo

sleepy now.
other diffs. dont have that many issues.

good map and song.

+star

Done!
Thanks!

p.s. If compress the video smaller than now, it will be have too bad quality to watch even will do better to delete video.
but video have story like rhythm star's story board, so I won't delete it
I don't know video offset's mean. if it means video sync with mp3, I made mp3 file from video's audio channel so it have not problem

Filler post..will post when I wake up.

[Overall] (I lol'd at the intro to the map)
I like the High Quality of song and video, offset and BPM seem fine same with sync'ing
Remove all kiai re-add kiai in these spots (If BAT's complain about the kiai then reduce to only ending kiai) O_o
01:18:986 - 01:48:742 (Kiai focuses on the main verse rather than being spread out in 6 sections which is way too much.)
02:29:230 - 02:52:156
03:19:961 - 03:39:230

Remove all tags except SNSD. Others aren't important enough to stay. Remove source. (I'll find you a new source) Seoul theme song is not it.
Diff names sound weird I like [Boring] [Relaxing] [Sunny Holic Mix] better. Your choice (: How about [Just Friends] [Friends?] [Best Friends] ?_? That sounds comforting...

[Starter] It's [Beginner]
00:53:376 (5) - Ew, on a easy diff? Change to different shape. Not easy friendly.
01:02:156 (5) - Align with 6 vertically.
01:06:059 (3) - ^ Align with 4 vertically.
01:31:181 (1) - Same slider as 53:376
01:42:888 (2) - ^
02:02:400 (2,3) - Align vertically with (4,5)
02:41:425 (1) - Same with the sliders...
02:57:278 (5) - Horizontal flip?
03:28:254 (8) - Same wavy slider... (You should know where all those sliders are at. No need for me to point them all out).

[Challenging]
Spacing feels a little off. Raise the Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 and Adjust some hidden notes as you go along. (You should at least give some notice before putting overlapping circles)

00:38:254 (7) - Confusing, Move this to make room for the next combo set.
00:40:693 (3) - Move above (4) Weird combo set here.....
00:44:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is Correct form. Use this combo as a guide.
01:29:473 (3) - Stack under (2) to make this work better.
02:03:620 (5) - Make this a long wavy slider and remove tiny break.
02:59:473 (2,3,4) - Stop doing this pattern!! (Really hard to follow like the others)
It's pretty obvious where you are making mistakes. When you get more mods For sure I will post more if you want.

P.S. I like the new diff names.

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Filler post..will post when I wake up.

[Overall] (I lol'd at the intro to the map)
I like the High Quality of song and video, offset and BPM seem fine same with sync'ing
Remove all kiai re-add kiai in these spots (If BAT's complain about the kiai then reduce to only ending kiai) O_o
01:18:986 - 01:48:742
02:29:230 - 02:52:156
03:19:961 - 03:39:230

Remove all tags except SNSD. Others aren't important enough to stay. Remove source. Seoul theme song is not it.
Diff names sound weird I like [Boring] [Relaxing] [Sunny Holic Mix] better. Your choice (:

Ahh...school...Sorry I'll post more.

I made kiai time like that you mod for me at the begining, but some people say my map have too much kiai time, reduce it
I'll modify as your mod, hope no BAT complain about this

About source, what should i fill in it? I know it can't be blank..

Diff names could you make new diff names that same meaning as now and not sounds weird for me?
Boring and Relaxing are unsuitable for newbies and Sunny Holic Mix sounds like guest diff..

I'll wait for your modding finish and update all at once

p.s. oh, thank you for your SP from kudosu

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Filler post..will post when I wake up.

[Overall] (I lol'd at the intro to the map)
I like the High Quality of song and video, offset and BPM seem fine same with sync'ing
Remove all kiai re-add kiai in these spots (If BAT's complain about the kiai then reduce to only ending kiai) O_o
01:18:986 - 01:48:742 (Kiai focuses on the main verse rather than being spread out in 6 sections which is way too much.)
02:29:230 - 02:52:156
03:19:961 - 03:39:230

Remove all tags except SNSD. Others aren't important enough to stay. Remove source. (I'll find you a new source) Seoul theme song is not it.
Diff names sound weird I like [Boring] [Relaxing] [Sunny Holic Mix] better. Your choice (: How about [Just Friends] [Friends?] [Best Friends] ?_? That sounds comforting...

[Starter] Call it [Just Friends]
00:53:376 (5) - Ew, on a easy diff? Change to different shape. Not easy friendly.
01:02:156 (5) - Align with 6 vertically.
01:06:059 (3) - ^ Align with 4 vertically.
01:31:181 (1) - Same slider as 53:376
01:42:888 (2) - ^
02:02:400 (2,3) - Align vertically with (4,5)
02:41:425 (1) - Same with the sliders...
02:57:278 (5) - Horizontal flip?
03:28:254 (8) - Same wavy slider... (You should know where all those sliders are at. No need for me to point them all out).

Part 1 done.
Feel free to remind if I forget to most more on other diffs. You can start updating now.

Done! I removed all slow sliders(wavy slider) in easy diff
video is based on love story so i think diff name named friend is not suitalbe ^-^;;
anyway i changed diff names, check it

S E O U L ~

General:

-- Remove countdown, it's not necessary because of the video.
-- Offset 24,338 imo.

Beginner:

00:41:912 (4,5,6) - Consider using a returning slider here, blue ticks are hard for Easy players.
00:46:303 (x) - Note?
01:09:230 (1,2,3,4) - Too close to 01:07:278 (6) -
01:43:864 (x) - Note?
01:54:108 (1) - Too far from 01:52:888 (5) -
01:58:010 (1,2) - Use a slider here imo.
02:07:034 (3,4,5) - Maybe reduce overlap here.
02:40:327 (6,7) - ^

Overall: Try to make the blue ticks easier by adding sliders (Or alternatively you could increase the distance snap a little so they are easier to see), you could also align some notes if you wanted ^_^

Challenge:

-- As DxS has pointed out this difficulty is a bit confusing. There is too much overlapping, and the overall difficulty feels too low.
-- Reduce circle size by 1.
-- Raise overall difficulty by 1 or 2.

01:27:994 (5) - Expected this at 01:28:116 because you follow the vocal for all the map.
02:03:116 (3,4,5) - Confusing.
02:38:238 (5) - Expected this at 02:38:360
02:52:628 (1) - Add a return.
03:25:067 (5) - Expected at 03:25:189


Happy Seoul:

-- Reduce overall difficulty by 1 tick.
-- Overall I think it might flow better if you added a few more notes.

00:32:140 (6) - New combo.
00:32:628 (x) - Note?
00:35:799 (x) - ^
01:05:677 (3,4) - Hard to follow, maybe just stick to the vocal?
01:27:994 (4) - I kind of expected this at 01:28:116 following the vocal. You could add a note at 01:28:238 instead I guess.
01:29:951 (x) - Note?
01:34:579 (4) - New combo
01:40:677 (x) - Note?
02:15:805 (x) - ^
02:44:823 (4) - New combo.
02:50:921 (x) - Note.
03:31:653 (4) - New combo.
03:37:750 (x) - Note.

Good overall.

DeathxShinigami wrote:

[Challenging]
Spacing feels a little off. Raise the Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 and Adjust some hidden notes as you go along. (You should at least give some notice before putting overlapping circles)

00:38:254 (7) - Confusing, Move this to make room for the next combo set.
00:40:693 (3) - Move above (4) Weird combo set here.....
00:44:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is Correct form. Use this combo as a guide.
01:29:473 (3) - Stack under (2) to make this work better.
02:03:620 (5) - Make this a long wavy slider and remove tiny break.
02:59:473 (2,3,4) - Stop doing this pattern!! (Really hard to follow like the others)
It's pretty obvious where you are making mistakes. When you get more mods For sure I will post more if you want.

P.S. I like the new diff names.

Done! Thank you for your modding!

Shulin wrote:

S E O U L ~

General:

-- Remove countdown, it's not necessary because of the video.
-- Offset 24,338 imo.

Beginner:

00:41:912 (4,5,6) - Consider using a returning slider here, blue ticks are hard for Easy players.
00:46:303 (x) - Note?
01:09:230 (1,2,3,4) - Too close to 01:07:278 (6) -
01:43:864 (x) - Note?
01:54:108 (1) - Too far from 01:52:888 (5) -
01:58:010 (1,2) - Use a slider here imo.
02:07:034 (3,4,5) - Maybe reduce overlap here.
02:40:327 (6,7) - ^

Overall: Try to make the blue ticks easier by adding sliders (Or alternatively you could increase the distance snap a little so they are easier to see), you could also align some notes if you wanted ^_^

Challenge:

-- As DxS has pointed out this difficulty is a bit confusing. There is too much overlapping, and the overall difficulty feels too low.
-- Reduce circle size by 1.
-- Raise overall difficulty by 1 or 2.

01:27:994 (5) - Expected this at 01:28:116 because you follow the vocal for all the map.
02:03:116 (3,4,5) - Confusing.
02:38:238 (5) - Expected this at 02:38:360
02:52:628 (1) - Add a return.
03:25:067 (5) - Expected at 03:25:189


Happy Seoul:

-- Reduce overall difficulty by 1 tick.
-- Overall I think it might flow better if you added a few more notes.

00:32:140 (6) - New combo.
00:32:628 (x) - Note?
00:35:799 (x) - ^
01:05:677 (3,4) - Hard to follow, maybe just stick to the vocal?
01:27:994 (4) - I kind of expected this at 01:28:116 following the vocal. You could add a note at 01:28:238 instead I guess.
01:29:951 (x) - Note?
01:34:579 (4) - New combo
01:40:677 (x) - Note?
02:15:805 (x) - ^
02:44:823 (4) - New combo.
02:50:921 (x) - Note.
03:31:653 (4) - New combo.
03:37:750 (x) - Note.

Good overall.

God! I haven't noticed that offset have problem. Thank you!
And your modding is very helpful! Cool! Thank you very very much >_<!!

Sunny Holic wrote:

All done
非常感谢！

wow! Sunny Holic님

중국어도 할줄 아시네요.

스타~

RE1359EBA wrote:

wow! Sunny Holic님

중국어도 할줄 아시네요.

스타~

읭?ㅎ 첨뵙는뎅 누구세염?

Star~

Hi<3

Beginner
00:32:140 (3) - Hitsound Finish

Challenging
00:39:945 (1) - Hitsound Finish

Happy Seoul
It's fine

awesome map, so sweet - starr** <3

LoweH wrote:

Hi<3

Beginner
00:32:140 (3) - Hitsound Finish

Challenging
00:39:945 (1) - Hitsound Finish

Happy Seoul
It's fine

awesome map, so sweet - starr** <3

Done thanks

star~

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • "END.jpeg" should be 800x600 pixels

[Beginner]

• • 02:06:775 (x) - Add a circle

[Challenging]

• • 01:47:018 (1) - End this spinner here 01:49:701 (white tick)
  • 01:50:189 (x) - Add a circle
  • 03:45:677 (1) - Start this slider here 03:45:799 (white tick)

[Happy Seoul]

• • 01:47:018 (1) - End this spinner here 01:49:701 (white tick)
  • 01:50:189 (x) - Add a circle

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • "END.jpeg" should be 800x600 pixels

[Beginner]

• • 02:06:775 (x) - Add a circle

[Challenging]

• • 01:47:018 (1) - End this spinner here 01:49:701 (white tick)
  • 01:50:189 (x) - Add a circle
  • 03:45:677 (1) - Start this slider here 03:45:799 (white tick)

[Happy Seoul]

• • 01:47:018 (1) - End this spinner here 01:49:701 (white tick)
  • 01:50:189 (x) - Add a circle

All Done!
I never thought that. Good modding, thanks!

HiHi!

[Beginner]
Maybe rename to "Easy"? I can't really agree with a song wich has 1/4 notes being called a "Beginner", even though it's not a normal.
Mostly hitsound modding ^^! I hope you agree with me on these.
Also
00:27:262 (x) Add a slider up to 00:27:750 with a whistle?
00:33:604 (4) New combo?
00:43:360 (x) Add circle? (with clap)
00:58:970 (x) ^ (with clap)
01:44:823 (x) ^ (with clap)
01:45:311 (5) Remove circle?
02:03:848 Delete this break?

Phew... Well, I checkd the other diffs, and I would say similar stuff 'bout the hitsounds, but I would take a lot of time, so to sum it up (wich I should have done from the start...)

Clap every two beats on non-main beats. That may work on MOST places, not all of them. Also, dont abuse from finishes, only use then on main beats.

As for placement and combo patterns, evrything seems ok, so I'll star this :3

Krisom wrote:

HiHi!

[Beginner]
Maybe rename to "Easy"? I can't really agree with a song wich has 1/4 notes being called a "Beginner", even though it's not a normal.
Mostly hitsound modding ^^! I hope you agree with me on these.

SPOILER

00:25:311 (3) Remove clap
00:28:238 (1) ^
00:28:726 (2) Add Clap at the start
00:29:701 (3) Remove whistle. add clap?
00:33:604 (4) Add clap
00:35:555 (6) ^
00:36:043 (1) Add clap, remove whistle
00:36:531 (2) Remove whistle
00:37:018 (3) Remove clap. Add whistle?
00:37:506 (4) Add Clap.
00:39:945 (1) Remove clap. Add finish?
00:40:433 (2) Add clap.
00:43:848 (1) Remove whistle
00:45:311 (2) Add clap.
00:45:799 (3) Remove clap and whistle
00:46:287 (4) Add clap.
00:46:775 (5) Remove clap.
00:47:262 (1) Add clap only at the start.
00:48:238 (2) Add clap.
00:48:726 (3) Remove clap and whistle
00:49:214 (4) Add clap.
00:51:165 (3) ^
00:52:140 (2) ^
00:53:360 (5) ^?
00:56:043 (2) ^ (both on the end and the start)
00:59:457 (1) Remove clap.
00:59:945 (2) Add clap (Only at the start)
01:00:921 (3) ^
01:01:409 (4) ^ (Only at the end)
01:05:799 (2) ^
01:07:018 (5) ^?
01:19:945 (3) Remove finish
01:20:433 (4) Remove finish, Add clap
01:21:409 (6) Add clap
01:22:384 (8) Add clap
01:22:872 (1) Add clap (Only at the end)
01:23:848 (2) ^ (Only at the end)
01:25:311 (4) Add clap
01:25:799 (5) Remove clap
01:26:287 (6) Add clap
01:26:775 (1) Remove clap. Add finish?
01:27:262 (2) Add clap
01:27:750 (3) Remove clap from the start, add it at the end.
01:28:726 (4) Remove clap.
01:29:701 (5) ^
01:34:579 (1) Add clap (Only at the end)
01:35:555 (2) ^ (Only at the end)
01:36:531 (3) Remove clap.
01:37:018 (4) Remove finish.
01:37:506 (5) Remove both clap and finish.
01:37:994 (6) Remove finish, add clap.
01:38:482 (1,2,3,4) Add clap (Only at the end)
01:42:872 (2) Add clap
01:43:848 (3) ^
01:44:335 (4) Remove finish
01:45:799 (6) Remove finish, add clap.
...
->Considering that from that point on foward the song is similar and your note placements is similar too, follow the above suggestions for the rest of the song whenever you think they may fit.

Also
00:27:262 (x) Add a slider up to 00:27:750 with a whistle?
00:33:604 (4) New combo?
00:43:360 (x) Add circle? (with clap)
00:58:970 (x) ^ (with clap)
01:44:823 (x) ^ (with clap)
01:45:311 (5) Remove circle?
02:03:848 Delete this break?

Phew... Well, I checkd the other diffs, and I would say similar stuff 'bout the hitsounds, but I would take a lot of time, so to sum it up (wich I should have done from the start...)

Clap every two beats on non-main beats. That may work on MOST places, not all of them. Also, dont abuse from finishes, only use then on main beats.

As for placement and combo patterns, evrything seems ok, so I'll star this :3

Done! X Clap X Clap pattern is really good! thank you for your modding

Beginner name is fine. @ Krisom just go type beginner into osu! and see what you get at song select c;

Nice map, star and kudosu star for make it simple and good ^^

Challenging

00:50:433 (5) - Overlapping previous notes



Starr'd =]

animask wrote:

Challenging

00:50:433 (5) - Overlapping previous notes



Starr'd =]

oh, good! thank you

Hello Sunny Holic.

[Beginner]
01:26:775 (1) - Allign to other circles?
02:57:262 (5) - Allign better?

[Challenging]
00:25:799 (4) - Allign better?
00:26:775 (2) - ^
01:06:896 (5) - I know it was purposely,but better move to 01:06:775.
01:22:872 (1) - Allign better.
02:08:116 (6) - ^
02:35:311 (2) - ^
03:22:872 (9) - ^

[Happy Seoul]
Fine.

Well,haven't found something wrong,nice work.Switch off a Grid Snap,and allign the moments I've spotted.Good luck,star~

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello Sunny Holic.

[Beginner]
01:26:775 (1) - Allign to other circles?
02:57:262 (5) - Allign better?

[Challenging]
00:25:799 (4) - Allign better?
00:26:775 (2) - ^
01:06:896 (5) - I know it was purposely,but better move to 01:06:775.
01:22:872 (1) - Allign better.
02:08:116 (6) - ^
02:35:311 (2) - ^
03:22:872 (9) - ^

[Happy Seoul]
Fine.

Well,haven't found something wrong,nice work.Switch off a Grid Snap,and allign the moments I've spotted.Good luck,star~

Thank you~
actually I don't understand 'align better' mean well..

S!E!O!U!L!
Nice song and map~!

[Beginner]
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
01:01:409 (4) - Remove 01:02:140 (5) and end here?
01:03:360 (7) - End with 01:04:092 ?
01:46:287 (1) - End with 01:48:238 ?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:48:238 - ^

[Challenging]
Diff name "Challenger"?
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
00:48:482 - Add note?
00:56:531 - ^
01:54:579 (2) - End with 01:54:945 ?
02:00:189 (7) - Move to 02:00:311 ?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:49:214 - ^

[Happy Seoul]
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
01:40:921 (7) - End with red tick?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:49:214 - ^

STAR~!

안녕하세요 ><
많이 늦었네요

우선 위에 모딩 와있죠? 그거부터 해주시고....

스토리보드 해놓으신 것 같은데////
이거보는 사람이 얼마나 될까요 ?_?
이대로 방지해두면 랭크가 되지 않습니다. 고치시거나 아얘 없애주세요.

[Beginner]
01:01:409 (4) - 1/4박 길이 줄여보는것도 좋을 듯? 이건 안 고치셔도 되요.
03:16:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - [써클 패턴] 음 슬라이드 노트 중간에 몇개 넣어 주시면 안될까요

다음에 또 놀러올게요 ㅎ

kino77 wrote:

S!E!O!U!L!
Nice song and map~!

[Beginner]
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
01:01:409 (4) - Remove 01:02:140 (5) and end here?
01:03:360 (7) - End with 01:04:092 ?
01:46:287 (1) - End with 01:48:238 ?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:48:238 - ^

[Challenging]
Diff name "Challenger"?
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
00:48:482 - Add note?
00:56:531 - ^
01:54:579 (2) - End with 01:54:945 ?
02:00:189 (7) - Move to 02:00:311 ?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:49:214 - ^

[Happy Seoul]
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
01:40:921 (7) - End with red tick?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:49:214 - ^

STAR~!

very helpful! thank you

minyeob wrote:

안녕하세요 ><
많이 늦었네요

우선 위에 모딩 와있죠? 그거부터 해주시고....

스토리보드 해놓으신 것 같은데////
이거보는 사람이 얼마나 될까요 ?_?
이대로 방지해두면 랭크가 되지 않습니다. 고치시거나 아얘 없애주세요.

[Beginner]
01:01:409 (4) - 1/4박 길이 줄여보는것도 좋을 듯? 이건 안 고치셔도 되요.
03:16:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - [써클 패턴] 음 슬라이드 노트 중간에 몇개 넣어 주시면 안될까요

다음에 또 놀러올게요 ㅎ

01:01:409 (4) 이거는 맵 전체 노트 보컬라인을 기본으로 넣은거라.. 괜히 했어 괜히 보컬으로 했어... 약간 후회 ㅎ;
03:16:043 고쳤습니당. 감사.. 만들적엔 몰랐는데 지금보니 확실히 좀 이상 ㅎㅎ;

그리구 스토리보드는요, 별다른 스토리보드는 없구요, 맨 마지막 끝에 엔딩 그림 하나 나오게 해놨어요
이게 왜 해논거냐면요, 이게 없으면 곡이 다 끝나지도 않았는데 노트 다 끝났다고 바로 점수계산 해버리더라구요..
마지막에 그림 하나가 있어야 바로 점수 나와버리지 않고 skip 버튼이 뜨는데 누르면 점수 나오고 안누르면
동영상 끝까지 다 나오고 끝나면 점수 계산 되더라구요.. 즉 노래와 동영상이 완벽하게 끝나게 하기 위해서 넣은거에요

맵 봐주셔서 감사감사열매