SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello Sunny Holic.

[Beginner]
01:26:775 (1) - Allign to other circles?
02:57:262 (5) - Allign better?

[Challenging]
00:25:799 (4) - Allign better?
00:26:775 (2) - ^
01:06:896 (5) - I know it was purposely,but better move to 01:06:775.
01:22:872 (1) - Allign better.
02:08:116 (6) - ^
02:35:311 (2) - ^
03:22:872 (9) - ^

[Happy Seoul]
Fine.

Well,haven't found something wrong,nice work.Switch off a Grid Snap,and allign the moments I've spotted.Good luck,star~

kino77 wrote:

S!E!O!U!L!
Nice song and map~!

[Beginner]
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
01:01:409 (4) - Remove 01:02:140 (5) and end here?
01:03:360 (7) - End with 01:04:092 ?
01:46:287 (1) - End with 01:48:238 ?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:48:238 - ^

[Challenging]
Diff name "Challenger"?
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
00:48:482 - Add note?
00:56:531 - ^
01:54:579 (2) - End with 01:54:945 ?
02:00:189 (7) - Move to 02:00:311 ?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:49:214 - ^

[Happy Seoul]
00:24:335 ~ 00:31:653 - Use soft hitsound?
01:40:921 (7) - End with red tick?
03:00:189 - End KIAI here?
03:49:214 - ^

STAR~!

minyeob wrote:

안녕하세요 ><
많이 늦었네요

우선 위에 모딩 와있죠? 그거부터 해주시고....

스토리보드 해놓으신 것 같은데////
이거보는 사람이 얼마나 될까요 ?_?
이대로 방지해두면 랭크가 되지 않습니다. 고치시거나 아얘 없애주세요.

[Beginner]
01:01:409 (4) - 1/4박 길이 줄여보는것도 좋을 듯? 이건 안 고치셔도 되요.
03:16:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - [써클 패턴] 음 슬라이드 노트 중간에 몇개 넣어 주시면 안될까요

다음에 또 놀러올게요 ㅎ

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Maybe add an Epilepsy Warning? Because of the flashes and all that =x

~Beginner~
- I'd say to increase Overall Difficulty by 1-2 ticks. Things like this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12107 can be pretty confusing sometimes.

02:57:262 (5) - Unstack it? It can be confusing because it's later than you think when you play.

~Challenger~
00:38:482 (1) - Fix spacing? It can be confusing too =x
02:38:726 (1) - Move the reverse arrow point away from the circles, it's hard to see when playing: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12113

~Happy Seoul~
No problems here :3

Nice map <3 *star*

Shinxyn wrote:

wow, awesome video quality
Remove the space from "k pop" or add a dash (though I don't think you'd need it at all since we'll adjust the language and genre...)
I'm unsure about the epilepsy warning~ since it does indeed have some flashes... but not that much.. =|
Preferably move timing panels before notes when changing sample or volume.. err.. just 32,150's timing panel

Beginner-
00:28:248 (1) - ... either stack this properly or don't stack it at all please
00:45:809 (3) - ^ (will have to turn off grid snap if you plan on stacking this)
Hitsounds sound okayish
The notes switch from following the beat to following vocal... it's easy, but sometimes misleading (... I mean the 1/4 notes + lowest overall diff)
But that's okay ._.;

Challenger- "Challenging"? o.o
00:24:335 (1) - first note isn't snapped ><!
... too reliant on distance snap...?
I see lots of places where I could nazi... didn't wanna, but yea..this diff could be arranged a lot better (like stacked better and/or more consistent)

Happy Seoul-
01:52:150 (8,9) - not that I really mind, but considering how much you're following vocal, shouldn't this part be in 1/4? (like the next combo~)
02:15:809 (4) - while completely following vocal while playing, I didn't except this "extra" note... remove imo
03:46:541 (2) - ^ same feeling ><
Could be neater as well, but looks better than [Challenger]

Didn't like the notes with two hitsounds on them, plus you followed vocal on all three, so I can't really comment with hitsounds, but they don't sound bad, so that's okay

ykcarrot wrote:

[Challenging]
03:22:635 (8,9) - 스택리니언시가 높아서 좀 이상하게 보이네요. 03:23:855 (1) 이거를 다른데로 옮기면 괜찮게 보입니다.
아니면 스택리니언시를 낮추는 방법도 있는데 이렇게 되면 다른 난이도도 같이 낮춰야돼는데,
전체적으로 의도하지 않은 모양이 나올 수도 있으니까 그냥 저 부분 노트들 위치를 바꾸는걸 추천합니다.


[llkey]
01:07:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add one more circle and extend slider length like this pic.
[attachment=0:66823]screenshot113.jpg[/attachment:66823]


고고 >.<

Mustaash wrote:

What the hell?

minyeob wrote:

저기 맵을 플레이하면 END 배경이 뜨기전에 스코어화면이 뜹니다만
EDIT: 아 괜찮게 돌아가네요 추후 모딩 드리겠습니다

minyeob wrote:

에에에
[llkey's Insane]
정작 이 난이도의 태그에는 _llkey_18가 빠져있군요

Alace wrote:

sorry nazi time

<Insane>
00:27:269 (5) - sounds bad XD
fixed~
00:40:684 (3,4,5,6) - confusing
fixed~
00:57:513 (9) - new combo ?
done~
00:59:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - super bad spacing here
fixed
01:52:147 (8,9,10) - this is fine but a bit ugly
01:55:806 (6,7,8) - ^
...ugly也没办法……
02:31:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad spacing
这算是jump吧，特意的
03:20:928 (3,4,5) - a bit too wide
fixed~ 3.0x->2.5x
03:38:001 (6,7,8) - bad spacing
这也是jump
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35832
in fact i can play this map easily because i know the song well, but you should think about people who never heard this song

minyeob wrote:

고생 많으셨습니다 >ㅁ<

Explorer09 wrote:

I found a issue which (I think) is critical.
In the "Challenging" difficulty, the note stacking is off. That is, the notes overlaps each other.

This make the map unplayable in the hidden mod.

Also,
00:56:492 (4 and 5) - Without stacking, it's hard to tell which is a slider and which is a normal hit circle. See attached image.

EDIT:
01:54:342 (1 and 2) - Same problem. They're confusing when two notes appear together.

Sunny Holic wrote:

所以呢？ ~.~
(So what?)

Explorer09 wrote:

Sunny Holic wrote:

所以呢？ ~.~
(So what?)

1. 如果這些都是你故意的，那麼請不要這樣

2. 普通玩家(casual players, not hardcore ones)會對這種把戲不太熟悉 - 第一次玩會因此失誤

3. 看一下這難度的前50名分數，你會發現到目前都還沒有人用 Hidden mod 上榜

4. 我並不期待或要求立即改善，這純粹是我的建議，
但我希望下次不要再看到同樣的問題
(no offense, sorry)

Explorer09 wrote:

4. 我並不期待或要求立即改善，這純粹是我的建議，
但我希望下次不要再看到同樣的問題
(no offense, sorry)