just play beginner diff if you dislike---------------

Thanks for mapping this, looks really good. Anyways, even if you aren't ready for mods yet, have one anyway
Beginner
01:46:341 (6,7) - maybe add two circles that land on the white tick marks here to match the syllables, or just replace them with 2 sliders
01:51:674 (6) - consider redoing this slider, as it looks kind of weird
03:34:341 (6) - try making this a spinner, as it is a long held out note at the end
Standard
00:01:008 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, try cutting the 00:01:507 (2) - on some of these patterns, or lessening the amount/changing the pattern, as an overload of these might be a little hard to read/play for newer players
00:21:007 (7,8,9,10) - I feel like these would be better as 2 slider that are double the length of the current ones
00:27:674 (2) - insert a break after this, as it is a rather long time with no notes
02:04:341 (2) - consider redoing this slider, as it looks kind of weird
02:51:674 (1) - considering this is some time after 02:51:007 (3) - , I don't really think they should be right under each other, as it is going into a different phrase, so maybe try moving it with distance snap
03:31:007 (3) - should be deleted, as it doesn't fall on a syllable like all the other notes
03:31:674 (5,6) - consider making these a slider, as they are tied together in the singing
Hyper
00:22:341 (7) - should be a break after this
00:27:674 (2) - should be a break after this
00:30:340 (2) - maybe put a break after this
01:25:674 (7) - feels like there should be 1 more repeat on this slider
02:30:341 (8) - should be a break after this
02:40:341 (7,8) - I would consider adding 1 more repeat to each of these sliders
03:13:091 (1) - there needs to be a break after this spinner
03:34:341 (7) - consider adding a spinner after this or just replacing it with one
Another
Just personal preference here, consider lowering the AR down to 8 or 7, as AR9 is kind of crazy and usually used for the last diff, not the insane. Other than that, there's not really anything else I could find except maybe adding a slider at the end.
Eternal
Too hardcore for me T_T

mrturtle99 wrote:

Thanks for mapping this, looks really good. Anyways, even if you aren't ready for mods yet, have one anyway
Beginner
01:46:341 (6,7) - maybe add two circles that land on the white tick marks here to match the syllables, or just replace them with 2 sliders okay done
01:51:674 (6) - consider redoing this slider, as it looks kind of weird in dubstep part i like to introduce you weird slider, but i will considering of it
03:34:341 (6) - try making this a spinner, as it is a long held out note at the end i think nice idea to add spinners in all diff ending
Standard
00:01:008 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, try cutting the 00:01:507 (2) - on some of these patterns, or lessening the amount/changing the pattern, as an overload of these might be a little hard to read/play for newer players looks good, changed
00:21:007 (7,8,9,10) - I feel like these would be better as 2 slider that are double the length of the current ones okay done
00:27:674 (2) - insert a break after this, as it is a rather long time with no notes i forget to add break here, good job
02:04:341 (2) - consider redoing this slider, as it looks kind of weird change a little
02:51:674 (1) - considering this is some time after 02:51:007 (3) - , I don't really think they should be right under each other, as it is going into a different phrase, so maybe try moving it with distance snap i fix lot of this
03:31:007 (3) - should be deleted, as it doesn't fall on a syllable like all the other notes done
03:31:674 (5,6) - consider making these a slider, as they are tied together in the singing i like circle in there i think
Hyper
00:22:341 (7) - should be a break after this whoa im forgot to add breaks there, fixed all
00:27:674 (2) - should be a break after this
00:30:340 (2) - maybe put a break after this
01:25:674 (7) - feels like there should be 1 more repeat on this sliderokay seems nice
02:30:341 (8) - should be a break after this
02:40:341 (7,8) - I would consider adding 1 more repeat to each of these sliders ugh too hard i think
03:13:091 (1) - there needs to be a break after this spinner
03:34:341 (7) - consider adding a spinner after this or just replacing it with one done
Another
Just personal preference here, consider lowering the AR down to 8 or 7, as AR9 is kind of crazy and usually used for the last diff, not the insane. Other than that, there's not really anything else I could find except maybe adding a slider at the end. whoa AR8 too slow and too hard for read stream pattern in here, considering use AR9 for common insane
Eternal
Too hardcore for me T_T it's okay

okay seems your mod great. thanks for mods!. i like you hehe

tak doakan ranked :3 b

sennank wrote:

tak doakan ranked :3 b

amin~

pls rank too fun

TheGrimOfCrazy wrote:

pls rank too fun

i will rank it someday

Fort Fort Fort :3
as #Request from #Indonesian

sennank wrote:

tak doakan ranked :3 b

Here's my mod

• [General]

1. Audio Lead-in : There is only 1008 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
2. remove Countdown
3. remove Widescreen Support (because no SB in here)
4. can you decrease the Stack Leniency ? it helped player do more streams
5. Change the diff spread name of : Enternal to Black Another (or I think Enteral not right English . Eternal is the right English ( https://translate.google.co.id/?hl=id&tab=wT#auto/id/eternal )

• [ Hyper]

1. 00:38:674 (2) - Ctrl+G
2. 01:41:507 (6,7) - blanked
3. 01:45:341 (6,7,8,9) - excuse me ? can you just make simple 3 stream ? or repeating slider ?
4. 02:00:507 (7) - Ctrl+G
5. 02:28:841 - add not ?
6. 02:47:341 (4,1) - blanked ?
7. 03:02:007 (5,6,7,8) - same as 01:45:341 (6,7,8,9)
8. 03:05:007 (1,2) - i think this just give a blanked than a spacing
9. 03:12:757 (6,7,8,1) - why ? keep making this too much
10. life Slider start here : 03:34:424

• [ Another]

1. Whoa the OD is too high (Can you decrease ??)
   
   [Unsnapped]
   
2. 01:46:007 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
3. 02:29:841 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
4. 02:30:174 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
5. 03:18:674 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
6. 03:20:007 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
7. 03:21:341 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
   []
8. 00:14:007 (5) - Ctrl+G ?
9. 00:24:924 - add not
10. 00:26:257 - ^
11. 00:28:674 (4) - give more space like 00:27:674 (1,3)
12. 00:43:507 - 00:43:591 - add not make same like 00:44:174 (3,4,5) - following the beat imo but it just my recommendation
13. 01:01:007 (1) - move up a bit please i keep miss on this for better flow .. and 01:01:257 (2) - can you give more space over here ? move a bit / anything it just not flowing well with 01:01:341 (3)
14. 01:03:007 (4) - can you just straighten with 01:03:257 (5,6) - ?? same like 01:01:007 (1) - thou
15. 01:55:007 (4,5) - swap ?
16. 02:01:674 (3) - Ctrl+G?
17. 02:26:674 (2) - spacing ? i think you just move to (x:224 y:144) will be better
18. 03:01:674 (3) - just blanked please ? Ctrl+J also Ctrl+G too ..
19. 03:12:174 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G ( recommendation : give more space)
20. (same as Hyper) Spinner start here : 03:34:424

• [ Enternal]
  whoa i dont even know how to mod this
  [Unsnapped]

1. 02:29:841 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
2. 02:30:174 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   []
3. 00:14:257 (12,1) - can you make simple straighten ? i think that's too hard
4. 00:36:257 (4,1) - idk why i keep miss over here (can you make the flow better ?)
5. 00:58:674 (5) - Ctrl+> (maybe like this http://puu.sh/ek96Z/080a5adfd1.jpg)
6. 01:01:341 (5) - Ctrl+G
7. 01:05:007 (1) - same as 00:58:674 (5) - (but like this http://puu.sh/ek9cb/16c35bba56.jpg)
8. 01:46:007 (2) - can you make same like 01:45:674 (1) - (size of slider and longer the slider ?)
9. 02:27:674 (1) - Ctrl+G
10. (same as Hyper Spinner start here : 03:34:424

That's all i can mod
i love the song
GL! Fort

Please aku jangan di bully .. Aku Noob kaka

hi, from pm request o/

[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks
soft-hitfinish, the end of this sounds really sudden. Get other one with a proper fade out.

[Begginer]
Put NC's on every stanza, 00:03:674 (1) - 00:09:007 (1) - 00:14:341 (1) - and so on. Apply it to all diffs.

Delete the following green lines (unless youi'll use them in your hitsounding, in that case just make all 0.75 sections 1.0 on Begginer & Standard)
00:22:674 - 00:22:341 - 00:22:674 - 00:27:341 - 00:27:674 - 00:30:007 - 00:30:341 - 00:33:007 - 00:38:341 - 00:43:674 - 01:05:007 - 02:30:007 - 02:35:341 - 02:35:674 - 03:18:341 - 03:34:341

00:33:007 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of overlap maybe confusing for newbies, make it more simple and readable
00:51:674 (4) - looks a bit ugly imo
01:05:341 - 01:26:341 - this break is Eternal lol, try to map it please. A good start point for this could be 01:15:674 -
01:35:674 (6,2) - fix this overlap
01:49:341 (3) - split this into: circle + 1/1 slider, so you avoid ignoring this beat 01:49:674 -
01:51:674 (7) - ugly ;w;
01:51:674 (7,1) - blanket
01:53:674 (2) - ugly imo
01:56:341 (2,4) - blanket
02:02:341 (5,1) - overlap
02:05:341 (3) - ugly shape owo
02:30:341 - add circle
02:38:007 (4,5) - blanket better
02:45:007 (6) - move 1 grid down for better blanket
02:57:007 (1,2) - awkward flow, move it around 02:55:674 (5) - 's tail
02:59:341 (4,5) - fix blanket

[Standard]
Same about green lines, delete all the ones that i've pointed out in Beginner exept 00:27:341 -
Put NC's on every stanza, same as Beginner

00:07:007 (2,3) - replace (2) with a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat and delete (3)
00:18:174 (4) - delete this?
00:22:174 - add circle
00:42:341 (1,1) - spinner's end it too close to the next note, so i recommend to delete it
00:56:674 (5) - stack on 00:55:674 (3) - better flow imo
00:59:341 (10) - move to x364 y176 for better flow
01:15:674 - same as Begginer, map this
01:29:341 (7) - rotate -49º clockwise from selection centre, better flow and form a nice blanket with 01:30:341 (8) -
01:46:341 (1,2,3,4) - dont stack them
01:49:174 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks a bit ugly
01:51:007 (2) - ^ this slider too
01:53:674 (2) - ^
01:54:674 (4) - ^
02:03:007 (9) - move the last slider controlpoint(node or whatever) to x420 y204
02:04:341 (2) - a bit ugly
02:05:341 (3) - ^
02:27:007 (5,7) - overlap
02:30:341 (11) -the greenline here is messing with the spacing of this note
02:50:341 (1,2,3) -
02:50:341 (1,2,3) - dont stack them
02:54:341 (7,9) - overlap

[Hyper]
NC on every stanza

00:17:507 (2,3,4,5) - swap placement, better flow imo
00:53:674 (8,9,1) - looks a bit awkward, try this http://puu.sh/embgR/125bcbb837.jpg
01:07:341 (6) - ctrl+j and adjust spacing, better flow
01:31:507 (8) - move it to x84 y336
01:53:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it more simple, like extending (4)'s end to 01:54:591 - and deleting (5)
02:30:341 (8) - green line messing with the spacing of this

[Another]

00:14:674 (2,3,4,5) - maybe swap placement? creates a nice jump imo
00:22:007 (7,8,1) - reduce the spacing please, x4.0 on 1/4 is just meh. really hard
00:30:007 (1) - this slider ends here 00:30:216 - on 1/8, if you do this move this 00:30:341 (1) - closer to it
00:27:341 (1) - ^
01:03:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove the nc from (1) and add a nc to every first note of these triplets, nc to this too 01:04:507 (8) -
01:05:841 (4) - pretty much hard to notice it, dont stack please. You have done it many times, fix all of them. It will really help to read.
02:06:007 (3) - ugly shape

[Eternal]

00:27:341 (1) - 00:30:007 (1) - snap these slider's end to 1/8, same as another
00:44:174 (6) - move to x188 x324 for better flow
00:45:674 (4) - ctrl+j flows pretty nice
00:56:341 (8,1) - swap nc and 00:57:007 (5,1) - swap nc too
00:59:341 (5) - add nc
01:01:341 (5) - ctrl+g?
01:14:341 (9) - add nc, also 01:14:341 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - hard to read 'cause all the hitbursts of the previous notes
01:15:674 (1) - make the curve more slighter. Move the last slider controlpoint(or whatever it calls) to x456 y279
01:26:007 (1) - ^ move last controlpoint a few grids up
01:46:341 (3) - nc
02:26:674 (5,6,7,8,1) - covered by the previous notes hitbursts
02:27:674 (1,2) - reduce the spacing
02:37:341 (1,2,3,4,1) - the hitburst thing xD
02:45:341 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

That's all

Good luck >.o

Sky Trias wrote:

Fort Fort Fort :3
as #Request from #Indonesian

sennank wrote:

tak doakan ranked :3 b

Here's my mod

• [General]

1. Audio Lead-in : There is only 1008 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
2. remove Countdown
3. remove Widescreen Support (because no SB in here)
4. can you decrease the Stack Leniency ? it helped player do more streams
5. Change the diff spread name of : Enternal to Black Another (or I think Enteral not right English . Eternal is the right English ( https://translate.google.co.id/?hl=id&tab=wT#auto/id/eternal )

• [ Hyper]

1. 00:38:674 (2) - Ctrl+G didnt want jump
2. 01:41:507 (6,7) - blanked
3. 01:45:341 (6,7,8,9) - excuse me ? can you just make simple 3 stream ? or repeating slider ? try streaming here
4. 02:00:507 (7) - Ctrl+G
5. 02:28:841 - add not ?
6. 02:47:341 (4,1) - blanked ?
7. 03:02:007 (5,6,7,8) - same as 01:45:341 (6,7,8,9)
8. 03:05:007 (1,2) - i think this just give a blanked than a spacing
9. 03:12:757 (6,7,8,1) - why ? keep making this too much
10. life Slider start here : 03:34:424

spinner start here* lol

• [ Another]

1. Whoa the OD is too high (Can you decrease ??) yes!
   
   [Unsnapped]
   
2. 01:46:007 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat) its 1/16
3. 02:29:841 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
4. 02:30:174 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
5. 03:18:674 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end) fix inheritted
6. 03:20:007 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
7. 03:21:341 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
   []
8. 00:14:007 (5) - Ctrl+G ? didnt want jump like that
9. 00:24:924 - add not why? D:
10. 00:26:257 - ^
11. 00:28:674 (4) - give more space like 00:27:674 (1,3)
12. 00:43:507 - 00:43:591 - add not make same like 00:44:174 (3,4,5) - following the beat imo but it just my recommendation thats very sudden
13. 01:01:007 (1) - move up a bit please i keep miss on this for better flow .. and 01:01:257 (2) - can you give more space over here ? move a bit / anything it just not flowing well with 01:01:341 (3)
14. 01:03:007 (4) - can you just straighten with 01:03:257 (5,6) - ?? same like 01:01:007 (1) - thou what?
15. 01:55:007 (4,5) - swap ? maybe no, too hard
16. 02:01:674 (3) - Ctrl+G? too straight and too easy to jump
17. 02:26:674 (2) - spacing ? i think you just move to (x:224 y:144) will be better seems inconsistant distance
18. 03:01:674 (3) - just blanked please ? Ctrl+J also Ctrl+G too .. this one better without blanketing
19. 03:12:174 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G ( recommendation : give more space)
20. (same as Hyper) Spinner start here : 03:34:424 done :3

• [ Enternal]
  whoa i dont even know how to mod this hue
  [Unsnapped]

1. 02:29:841 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 1/16
2. 02:30:174 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
   []
3. 00:14:257 (12,1) - can you make simple straighten ? i think that's too hard i can reach it
4. 00:36:257 (4,1) - idk why i keep miss over here (can you make the flow better ?) it's a distance change stream, so i will consider keep this
5. 00:58:674 (5) - Ctrl+> (maybe like this http://puu.sh/ek96Z/080a5adfd1.jpg)
6. 01:01:341 (5) - Ctrl+G
7. 01:05:007 (1) - same as 00:58:674 (5) - (but like this http://puu.sh/ek9cb/16c35bba56.jpg) the pattern change begins there, so i will make it a jumpstream
8. 01:46:007 (2) - can you make same like 01:45:674 (1) - (size of slider and longer the slider ?)
9. 02:27:674 (1) - Ctrl+G too hard ;_;
10. (same as Hyper Spinner start here : 03:34:424

That's all i can mod
i love the song
GL! Fort

Please aku jangan di bully .. Aku Noob kaka always no for bullying xD

fix all except red one, ty Trias

pkhg wrote:

hi, from pm request o/

[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks huh?? why??
soft-hitfinish, the end of this sounds really sudden. Get other one with a proper fade out. okay i will find some

[Begginer]
Put NC's on every stanza, 00:03:674 (1) - 00:09:007 (1) - 00:14:341 (1) - and so on. Apply it to all diffs. is it to short combo?

Delete the following green lines (unless youi'll use them in your hitsounding, in that case just make all 0.75 sections 1.0 on Begginer & Standard)
00:22:674 - 00:22:341 - 00:22:674 - 00:27:341 - 00:27:674 - 00:30:007 - 00:30:341 - 00:33:007 - 00:38:341 - 00:43:674 - 01:05:007 - 02:30:007 - 02:35:341 - 02:35:674 - 03:18:341 - 03:34:341

00:33:007 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of overlap maybe confusing for newbies, make it more simple and readable fix SV, but all of this slider is simple, but challenging for readable
00:51:674 (4) - looks a bit ugly imo
01:05:341 - 01:26:341 - this break is Eternal lol, try to map it please. A good start point for this could be 01:15:674 - i will do it
01:35:674 (6,2) - fix this overlap i think its okay, it's like a tunnel xD
01:49:341 (3) - split this into: circle + 1/1 slider, so you avoid ignoring this beat 01:49:674 - considering change 01:48:341 (2) - pattern
01:51:674 (7) - ugly ;w; how to dubstep , im just looking for nice slider style there
01:51:674 (7,1) - blanket
01:53:674 (2) - ugly imo mapped a dubstep part in Beginner so freakin hard, fix it later
01:56:341 (2,4) - blanket
02:02:341 (5,1) - overlap i give some challenge there
02:05:341 (3) - ugly shape owo ^same like above
02:30:341 - add circle
02:38:007 (4,5) - blanket better
02:45:007 (6) - move 1 grid down for better blanket
02:57:007 (1,2) - awkward flow, move it around 02:55:674 (5) - 's tail add some reverse in slider
02:59:341 (4,5) - fix blanket

[Standard]
Same about green lines, delete all the ones that i've pointed out in Beginner exept 00:27:341 - make it has hitsounding part, still not hitsounded
Put NC's on every stanza, same as Beginner i think combo too short ;-;

00:07:007 (2,3) - replace (2) with a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat and delete (3)
00:18:174 (4) - delete this?
00:22:174 - add circle
00:42:341 (1,1) - spinner's end it too close to the next note, so i recommend to delete it
00:56:674 (5) - stack on 00:55:674 (3) - better flow imo looks its little overlap with 00:58:341 (9) -
00:59:341 (10) - move to x364 y176 for better flow
01:15:674 - same as Begginer, map this okay ASAP
01:29:341 (7) - rotate -49º clockwise from selection centre, better flow and form a nice blanket with 01:30:341 (8) - it's good but i think i will keep that slider
01:46:341 (1,2,3,4) - dont stack them delete 2,3,4
01:49:174 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks a bit ugly this is how to dubstep XD
01:51:007 (2) - ^ this slider too
01:53:674 (2) - ^
01:54:674 (4) - ^
02:03:007 (9) - move the last slider controlpoint(node or whatever) to x420 y204
02:04:341 (2) - a bit ugly okay fix it
02:05:341 (3) - ^
02:27:007 (5,7) - overlap
02:30:341 (11) -the greenline here is messing with the spacing of this note
02:50:341 (1,2,3) -
02:50:341 (1,2,3) - dont stack them
02:54:341 (7,9) - overlap

[Hyper]
NC on every stanza

00:17:507 (2,3,4,5) - swap placement, better flow imo
00:53:674 (8,9,1) - looks a bit awkward, try this http://puu.sh/embgR/125bcbb837.jpg
01:07:341 (6) - ctrl+j and adjust spacing, better flow
01:31:507 (8) - move it to x84 y336
01:53:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it more simple, like extending (4)'s end to 01:54:591 - and deleting (5)
02:30:341 (8) - green line messing with the spacing of this

[Another]

00:14:674 (2,3,4,5) - maybe swap placement? creates a nice jump imo
00:22:007 (7,8,1) - reduce the spacing please, x4.0 on 1/4 is just meh. really hard
00:30:007 (1) - this slider ends here 00:30:216 - on 1/8, if you do this move this 00:30:341 (1) - closer to it i prefer use only 1/2 on all diffs except beginner
00:27:341 (1) - ^ ^
01:03:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove the nc from (1) and add a nc to every first note of these triplets, nc to this too 01:04:507 (8) - i prefer keep my consistency in stanza combo
01:05:841 (4) - pretty much hard to notice it, dont stack please. You have done it many times, fix all of them. It will really help to read. maybe trap in this one too mean lol, fixed it
02:06:007 (3) - ugly shape

[Eternal]

00:27:341 (1) - 00:30:007 (1) - snap these slider's end to 1/8, same as another ^ same as above
00:44:174 (6) - move to x188 x324 for better flow
00:45:674 (4) - ctrl+j flows pretty nice
00:56:341 (8,1) - swap nc and 00:57:007 (5,1) - swap nc too
00:59:341 (5) - add nc
01:01:341 (5) - ctrl+g?
01:14:341 (9) - add nc, also 01:14:341 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - hard to read 'cause all the hitbursts of the previous notes
01:15:674 (1) - make the curve more slighter. Move the last slider controlpoint(or whatever it calls) to x456 y279
01:26:007 (1) - ^ move last controlpoint a few grids up
01:46:341 (3) - nc
02:26:674 (5,6,7,8,1) - covered by the previous notes hitbursts
02:27:674 (1,2) - reduce the spacing
02:37:341 (1,2,3,4,1) - the hitburst thing xD
02:45:341 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

about hitburst i think i will consider to keep it, but if seems some people complaining about this dont worry i will fix it

That's all

Good luck >.o

okay fixx all except the red one! very great mods. thanks!

ew women

Priti wrote:

ew women

SPOILER

15:02 Priti: i can irc mod
15:02 Fort: 2busy right?
15:02 Priti: nah
15:02 Priti: 2lazy
15:02 Fort: oh...
15:02 Priti: i can do irc mod
15:02 Fort: hahaha too lazy yeah
15:03 Fort: okay then
15:03 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589969 yuyoyuppe - AiAe [Eternal]]
15:04 Priti: u sure title is right?
15:04 Priti: I remember the mania map having different artist
15:06 Priti: 00:16:174 (4) - shorten by one tick 00:16:507 (5) - move 1/4 back 00:16:591 - add circle. It gives better emphasis to the snare in the music.
15:06 Priti: kick*
15:07 Fort: i think no
15:07 Priti: I can't understand the colorhaxing
15:07 Fort: i never put clickable objects in blue lines
15:07 Priti: also your ncing is strange and inconsistent
15:07 Priti: but, listen to da music
15:08 Fort: yeah NC is WIP
15:08 Priti: k whatever
15:08 Fort: cause it has custom color
15:08 Priti: 00:59:257 (4,1) - shouldn't be a jump while 00:59:591 (4,1) - should be due to the cymbal
15:09 Fort: too hard to fix NCs, but soon i will fix that thing
15:09 Fort: 00:59:591 (4,1) - add jump here then
15:09 Priti: wat
15:09 Priti: k
15:10 Priti: whatever
15:10 Priti: 01:46:007 (2) - nc, requires different color imo
15:10 Priti: 02:02:174 (7,8,1) - ew no nasty
15:11 Priti: imo the custom coloring isn't needed
15:11 Fort: custom colours wash my eyes in dubstep part :3
15:11 Fort: but okay i will fix the custom colours
15:12 Priti: only add it to the drumstep part then
15:12 Fort: 02:02:174 (7,8,1) - what should i do with this?
15:12 Priti: rest should be consistent
15:12 Priti: move the slider higher
15:12 Priti: so it doesn't touch
15:12 Fort: okay
15:12 Priti: I'll give you good colors once we are done
15:13 Fort: yeah
15:13 Priti: the ending section
15:13 Priti: is so boring
15:13 Priti: it should be a stream section like the rest
15:13 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589965 yuyoyuppe - AiAe [Another]]
15:13 Fort: ah i dont want to kill player after spinners
15:14 Priti: then
15:14 Priti: make it streamy
15:14 Priti: but not as hard
15:14 Priti: btw
15:14 Priti: Eternal OD9 Another OD8
15:14 Priti: spec me
15:17 Fort: WUT are you insane?
15:17 Priti: no
15:17 Priti: I make sense
15:17 Priti: OD9 OD8
15:17 Priti: btw
15:17 Priti: I might collab a light Extra with Leader
15:17 Priti: I'll need to ask him
15:17 Fort: wait wat?
15:17 Fort: you will send collab Extra to my mapset?
15:17 Priti: yas
15:18 Fort: holy shit
15:18 Priti: ok there's an issue
15:18 Fort: okay then go for it
15:18 Priti: in Another
15:18 Priti: the slider -> circle -> slider stacks
15:18 Priti: unstack oddly
15:18 Priti: causing spacing inconsistencies
15:18 Priti: 00:05:923 (6,7,8,1) - this is super wrong igname
15:18 Priti: ingame*
15:18 Fort: in where
15:20 Priti: 00:42:341 (1) - add a whistle
15:20 Fort: 00:05:923 (6,7,8,1) - about this one i think it looks fine
15:20 Priti: in editor it's fine
15:21 Priti: look at it ingame u shit o3o
15:21 Fort: yeh
15:21 Fort: i play it
15:21 Fort: nothing there
15:21 Priti: 00:05:923 (6,7) - ingame the spacing gets fucked here
15:21 Priti: bby stop being blind
15:22 Fort: oh there
15:22 Priti: 02:29:841 (3) - extend up to the blue tick
15:22 Fort: i didnt realize dat fuk
15:23 Fort: done
15:24 Priti: Hyper
15:24 Priti: 01:06:341 (4) - remove slider whistle
15:24 Fort: done
15:25 Priti: oh also
15:25 Priti: on Another, the ending section is too boring too ><"
15:25 Priti: u lazy bitch
15:26 Priti: on Hyper SV is idiotic
15:26 Fort: im not lazy
15:26 Priti: like
15:26 Priti: 03:19:674 (5,6) - this shit on hyper
15:26 Priti: is just false
15:26 Fort: eh
15:27 Fort: hahaha
15:27 Fort: maybe increase Distance snap
15:27 Priti: Standard is beautiful
15:27 Priti: or just use x1 sv for that part
15:28 Fort: too fast >.<
15:28 Priti: no it's not
15:28 Priti: lol
15:29 Fort: okay then
15:29 Priti: lowdiffs are fine
15:30 Priti: beginner: 03:34:507 (1) - remove finish
15:30 Priti: literally nothing else x3
15:30 Priti: I'll refer a BAT to you
15:30 Priti: once I finish the diff/find out leader doesn't want to make the diff
15:30 Priti: ok?

Updated!!

good luck /o/

love this song

Constantine wrote:

good luck /o/

love this song

ty ty ty <3

Holy Gosh Fort I love you
You make me need to delete one fav and add this :c

i love you too starfy

Oh my god this is a beauty

kawaii map :3

Hey there, M4M!

Beginner


Standard


Hyper


Another


Eternal


Overall, it's a nice mapset. I would improve the flow in some sliders in the easier difficulties that I haven't mentioned as well. And on the Eternal difficulty, I would try to maybe once in a while add a long slider in the most emphasized parts of the vocals in the really streamy parts, just so that it's not entirely all streams.

Good luck with this map!

Breezy wrote:

Hey there, M4M!

Beginner

SPOILER

00:01:008 (1) - Wouldn't it be best to curve this the opposite way? It would then flow right into the next note which would be helpful for beginners.

00:02:341 (3) - Curving this one the opposite way would improve flow as well.

00:04:674 (6,7) - Make this blanket neater, the (6) isn't perfectly centered within this blanket.

00:08:007 (4) - Curving the opposite way would provide better flow.

00:10:674 (8) - ^

00:14:341 (6,8) - If possible, try to make these mirror against each other perfectly so it looks better with appearance.

00:51:007 (3) - In my opinion, CTRL + G would flow better here.

01:26:341 (1) - Curving this the opposite way would give better flow in my opinion.

01:35:674 (6) - ^

01:38:341 (3) - ^

01:40:007 (5) - ^

01:58:341 (1) - This slider is kind of bland in my opinion, maybe make another cool shape out of this?

02:00:674 (3,4) - You can make this blanket a bit neater, the circle is slightly off to the side.

02:02:341 (5) - I would force this reverse slider to go directly into the next note, it would help with flow for beginners.

02:09:341 - It would have been cool if you could map this out, but you don't need to.

02:37:007 (3) - Not a fan of how this slider looks, I would move the red tick up more a bit.

02:46:341 (1) - Curve the opposite way for better flow?

02:57:007 (1) - Ctrl + G for better flow.

02:58:341 (2,4) - If you were trying to blanket these in a way, try to make it a bit neater.

03:18:341 (1,2,3) - I would use sliders with notes around this section of the song, the time it takes until the next note is long, and it would confuse a beginner that is playing with hidden.

03:30:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kind of bland, try to make some sort of symmetrical pattern with these?

Standard

SPOILER

00:01:674 (2) - Ctrl + G for better flow. It's not a good idea to end a reverse slider away from the next note in beginner difficulties.

00:03:007 (4) - I would have this end facing the next note for better flow.

00:03:674 (5) - A curve with this would be cool, would improve the flow.

00:07:007 (2) - So, for these reverse sliders, I would recommend you to go back over these and try and have these end facing the next note. It really, really improves flow and a beginner would have a difficult time with these the way they are facing right now.

00:09:674 (8) - Curve?

00:10:674 (10,11) - Something is iffy about these. This feels a little strange to read from my perspective.

00:12:341 (3) - Curve this the opposite way for flow.

00:19:007 (2) - Move this slightly so that it faces the next slider more.

00:22:174 (9) - I think removing this note plays better in my opinion.

00:27:341 (1,2) - Reverse slider with this?

00:30:007 (1,2) - ^

00:33:007 (1,3) - Ctrl + G these for a more interesting pattern. I think this fits well.

00:38:341 (1,2,3,4) - I'm kind of iffy with this as well, I don't think a beginner can probably read this part.

00:49:007 (1) - Curve opposite way for better flow.

00:56:007 (4) - Try and get this to face the next note.

01:34:007 (6) - ^

01:38:007 (3) - ^

01:45:007 (5) - Curving this the opposite way plays better.

01:49:174 (3) - Instead of this small, triangular appearance, I would just make it all go in one direction so that it doesn't confuse the player.

01:51:007 (2) - This slider sort of bothers me because the timing it ends at sounds like it could be continued more. Maybe make this slider longer?

01:57:007 (10) - This looks better curved the opposite way.

02:09:341 - It would still be cool if you mapped this part out, but not needed.

02:29:674 (6) - From my perspective, this reverse slider doesn't really fit in. I would place notes at the white ticks instead.

02:35:674 (1) - Curving this the opposite way would not only help with flow, but then you can make a blanket with the next note.

02:46:341 (1,2,3,4) - Still iffy on how beginners would read this.

02:58:341 (4) - Have this face the next note more.

03:03:674 (4) - This would look better curved the opposite way.

03:20:007 (5) - ^

03:30:007 (1,2) - I think making this a slider would be cool.

03:31:341 (3,4) - ^

03:33:007 (6,7,8,9,10) - Try to get this to look more of a star shape, the (6) is sloping downwards and it looks sort of awkward.

Hyper

SPOILER

00:01:008 (1) - Curve opposite way for flow.

00:02:341 (5) - ^

00:03:674 (1) - ^

00:14:341 (1,3) - For a better appearance, you could try to have these mirror off of each other over the x-axis.

00:41:674 (3) - To me, this shape is sort of boring. I would make an interesting slider shape out of this.

00:43:674 (1) - Curve opposite way for flow.

00:45:007 (5) - ^

00:49:674 (3) - ^

00:52:341 (3) - ^

01:05:507 (2) - ^

01:06:341 (4) - ^

01:09:507 (5) - ^

01:12:174 (5) - ^

01:22:341 (5) - ^

01:31:007 (7) - ^

01:34:674 (2) - ^

01:39:507 (9) - Stack this on the head of (7)

01:41:007 (5) - I think you know that I'm going to say to curve the opposite way to improve flow xd (But on a side note, I would try to improve flow on some sliders so that they flow towards the next note instead of away, it kind of makes it awkward to play.)

01:45:007 (5) - I would just turn this into a regular stream with the rest of the notes.

01:54:674 (5) - Stack on the tail of (4)?

02:09:341 - I'm still sad you didn't map this

02:22:341 (1) - Ctrl + G for better flow.

02:27:007 (7) - Curve opposite way for flow.

02:36:007 (2) - ^

02:39:674 (5) - ^

02:42:341 (5) - ^

02:55:674 (1) - ^

02:58:341 (1) - ^

03:31:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole section is extremely awkward to play because of the polarity, I would remap this part.

Another

SPOILER

00:01:008 (1) - Curve opposite way for flow.

00:13:841 (4) - This plays better to me if you Ctrl + G it.

00:15:674 (1,2) - Make these sliders the same for an interesting appearance?

00:23:674 (1,2) - This would look nice if you blanketed this.

00:26:591 (2,3) - This felt random to me, I don't think this really fits in. I would just make a slider for the aiaiaiaiaiai here.

00:38:341 (1,2,3,4) - This would be cool if you made these more as jumps in my opinion.

00:43:674 (1) - This doesn't affect the flow, but why not curve this the opposite way for appearance?

00:49:007 (1,2) - If you were trying to blanket this, make it a bit neater.

01:04:507 (8,9) - The position of these circles in this stream kind of looks weird to me, I would have these match the stream more.

01:24:841 (10) - NC would fit better here in my opinion.

01:39:007 (3) - Stack this with the (7)?

01:43:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern here is sort of bleh, maybe make some sort of symmetrical jump pattern here?

01:45:674 (1,2) - Both of these reverse sliders feel like they end too early. I slowed it down to 25% speed and I could hear this part continue on still. I would extend these to be longer a bit.

01:55:174 (5) - I think Ctrl + G would flow better.

02:09:007 (1) - Yay, you mapped this part finally xd (In this portion, it has potential for some larger jumps where you have single notes, I think it would fit in.)

02:11:591 - I still hear the stream continuing here, add a circle here.

02:19:174 (3) - When I Ctrl + G this slider, I kind of like how it feels here. Try it out and see if you like it or not.

02:29:674 (2,3,4,5,1) - I would place these closer to each other because of the fast reverse sliders here, it can break a combo pretty easily.

02:33:174 (2,3,4) - A triplet here doesn't fit to be honest, delete (2) and (3) if I were you.

02:34:507 (2,3,4) - ^

02:40:341 (3) - I feel like this was ended a little too short, I would extend it a bit and move it closer to the upcoming stream.

02:42:257 (7) - The circle in this triplet doesn't have the same slope as the others, this is obviously the biggest problem here. (jokes)

02:47:007 (3,4,5,6) - Why not do some jumps here since you did so with the upcoming circles?

02:51:007 (3) - Maybe emphasize this vocal more with some type of circular slider?

03:03:674 (1) - Make this the same slope as the preceding stream.

03:22:341 (1) - Starting around here, you could create one large stream right here by filling in the empty spaces where circles aren't currently placed in. I think it would fit in nicely.

03:33:924 - A circle can be added here.

Eternal

SPOILER

00:04:841 (11,12,1) - Stack these? The upcoming notes are stacked so it would fit in.

00:14:341 (1) - The spacing of this compared with the preceding stream looks awkward, make it the same DS as the stream right before this note.

00:15:507 (2,3,1) - The current way this is positioned looks bothersome to me, I would just stack these all together.

00:22:674 (2) - To me, this circle doesn't fit in. I would just take the slider right before this and extend it to end where this circle currently is.

00:26:591 (5,6) - These circles don't fit in to me either, I would remove this and just map out the aiaiaiaiai here.

00:36:341 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing of these don't really fit in with this portion of the stream to me, I would make it the same DS.

00:58:674 (5) - Make this the same slope as the preceding stream?

01:00:674 (10) - ^

01:05:007 - This is just a suggestion, but I think around here should be less streamy. The player should have some sort of break from them after a minute of streams.

01:09:007 (1) - The curve here isn't really noticeable, I would curve it more or just not curve it all.

01:35:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - The DS here is kind of random, I would make it the same DS as previous streams.

01:50:007 (8) - The tail of this doesn't look properly stacked, not a huge issue though.

01:50:341 (1) - I think Ctrl + G works better here.

02:05:341 (3) - Not really noticeable, but this doesn't look stacked perfectly either.

02:10:007 (8) - I don't think you need a whistle on the end of this slider, it's out of place.

02:44:674 (1,2,3,4) - This section of the stream looks sort of odd to me, I would make it match the stream more.

03:23:091 - You could add more circles in this area for the stream, I think it would fit well.

Overall, it's a nice mapset. I would improve the flow in some sliders in the easier difficulties that I haven't mentioned as well. And on the Eternal difficulty, I would try to maybe once in a while add a long slider in the most emphasized parts of the vocals in the really streamy parts, just so that it's not entirely all streams.
i didnt follow vocal just it :3
Good luck with this map!

thanks for mod, i fix few of your mod