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Arzenvald

Paulmrm wrote:

[Yojimbo's Racist Another]
Buzzagi don't use clever names to hide yourself. // asdf how2hide
00:21:272 - I'd rearrange to this: bzzut // ==a what?
00:33:341 (33341|6) - Move to 5 // ok
00:30:927 - Not sure if you want to give emphasis to the drums or the instruments, but you should use 1/6 here if it's the second. // ok then
00:58:686 - Kinda mad you're doing grace notes in this section but didn't at the start. Go add some grace notes at the start in case it wasn't intentional boiy. // intentional, and keep
01:41:445 - Missing note here // if i could add LN.. :^) keep
01:43:513 - The fact you're just mapping drums is not an excuse to leave this place empty usaguu~~!!! // o_O it's ok to focus percussion, since the synthesizer beat is not really enjoyable.. keep
01:47:220 - Not the same pitch here. Shouldn't jack. // keep
01:49:979 - ^ // ;w; keep
01:52:738 - ^ // keep, trying to even something odd..
01:49:203 - Missing note here // added
02:04:031 (124031|0,124031|2,124031|6) - This chord should be the same as 02:03:513 - // :I ok
02:07:996 - grace notes!111!!1!11! // !!11!!oneoneone!
02:20:755 - nice jack theory // you are lookin nice tho.. :u
yaysu thanks paul!

update nao~ http://puu.sh/frWCP.osu
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

Paulmrm wrote:

Yo paul here o/
Time to mod some stuff

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Beginner]
00:22:134 (22134|4,22738|3,23169|2) - Ctrl+H for pitch revelancy.
00:23:513 - Rhythm is a bit weird here. I think this would express things better: [urlhttp://puu.sh/fi1pv/73f258cf24.png]boop[/url]
00:33:513 - I think placing the note on 00:33:427 - would be better considering the song has both a kick, a note in piano, and the highest pitch in that section of the main melody here. It's also easier to follow, considering it's right in the middle of both chords.
00:47:048 - It feels weird to play this considering you didn't add a note here, but did on 00:47:565 - . Add a note here or delete on of the notes in 00:47:565 - for consistency
00:53:169 (53169|4) - Move to 6 or 7 for pitch. Shouldn't jack with the last note.
00:59:376 (59376|3,59720|5,60065|2,60410|4,60755|1,61100|3,61445|0) - Ctrl+H for pitch.
01:20:065 (80065|6,80065|3,80238|5,80238|2) - Same pitch. Use the same columns for these chords.
01:23:341 (83341|2,83600|4) - Move to 2 and 6.
01:47:910 (107910|6,107910|0) - Move to 3 and 5 so they don't jack with the last chord. (different pitches)
01:56:100 (116100|2) - Move to 01:56:186 - for the same reason as 00:23:513 -
02:27:479 - Add a note to 5 for emphasis. Just a suggestion.

almost fixed all. some mods may be already fixed by previous modder, or maybe you accidentally put a wrong timing

[Standard]
00:12:996 (12996|1,12996|5,13169|2,13169|4) - You could just move these to 1 and 7 considering it's the same pitch. It'll be harder to play but easier to read.
00:44:548 (44548|4) - Same as Beginner.
00:47:393 - You forgot a note here. where ? o_O
00:47:910 (47910|2,48169|2) - Move to 5
00:48:513 (48513|4) - Move to 4 in case you do the suggestion above.
01:28:169 - Add a note here so you have something other than the LN end to express the melody.
01:29:548 - ^
01:47:910 (107910|5,107910|0) - Move to 2 and 7
01:50:669 (110669|6,110669|0) - Move to 2 and 6
01:58:427 (118427|0,118513|4) - Move these to 5 and 7. Expresses pitch better.
02:02:134 (122134|4,122393|1,122651|5) - Descending melody here. Express it in another way like 5 4 3 or 6 4 2
02:03:513 (123513|4,123513|0,123772|1,123772|5,124031|6,124031|2) - Ctrl+H for pitch.
02:04:203 (124203|4,124462|3,124720|2) - ^ I recommend you move the jacks in column 1 to 7 so it doesn't jack with the previous melody.
02:07:824 (127824|0,127824|4) - Move to 2 and 4 or 2 and 6. As long as it doesn't jack with the other columns it should be ok.
02:09:031 (129031|2) - Lower pitch. Move to 2.

some mods may be already fixed by previous modder, but all of your mods here was fixed

[Hyper]
00:13:169 (13169|0,13169|6) - Move these to 2 and 6, same pitch as the other chords.
00:16:962 (16962|5) - Move to 7
00:31:100 (31100|1,31358|3,31617|5) - It's actually descending pitch. Rearrange this section.
00:41:789 (41789|0,41789|2) - Move to 2 and 4
00:56:186 (56186|1) - Move to 5 or 4.
00:58:686 (58686|3,58686|5) - You should make a grace note with this chord here. Adds expressiveness to the map.
01:06:617 (66617|4,66617|6) - Move to 1 and 3. Same pitch
01:06:789 (66789|1,66876|2,66962|3) - Ctrl+H for hand balance in case you do the suggestion above.
01:23:772 - You should add a note here for consistency. Yes, it'll make this section harder, but it feels weird to not have this note there, it breaks the rhythm and flow of the map.
01:43:743 (103743|5) - Move to 4
01:50:669 (110669|6,110669|0) - Move to 3 and 5.
02:03:169 (123169|0,123169|6) - ^
02:14:203 (134203|6,134203|4) - move to 4 and 6
02:16:013 - suggestion to add an LN here

almost all in this diff fixed. i also re-arrange some patterns to more feel better play

[LumiNous]
Mill pls your noodles are already hard enough. OD8,5 feels really tough for it. Change to 8. ok, i also feel the same like you too
00:16:531 - You might want to give more emphasis here since it's where the chord happens in the music. 00:16:617 - just has a really weak drum noise. Listen to it in 25% actually Ichigaki already mentioned it, but because a bad pattern so i made it like the first i mapped it. Okay, i had a ide a to keep this pattern better, re-arrange
00:39:376 - Oh come one. At least makes the chords a bit different from each other here, since they are of different pitch. Not only that but that's also a bit too easy for what you've done so far in this diff xp i think the difficulties in the one that you mentioned was a same hard as the other patterns. But well.. re-arrange according the pitch relevancy
01:44:031 (104031|2) - Should be a higher pitch than the earlier LN. I recommend rearranging things here. oh sorry, i didn't mention it. fixed included the next pattern
02:06:013 - Missing note for the melody here. Add LN ok
02:11:531 - You should really consider rearranging or removing some notes here to make space for you to continue the melody. Suddenly stopping to map a certain layer feels weird when playing. done. delete some circles that may be the one you mentioned
nice /o/

That'll be it. Good stuff!

git this thing ranked soon mill~~
Thanks for a great mod, Paul !
Perfect timing, LordRaika and ExUsagi already update, so i can update all of the diff right now

Now working on updating diff as pporse's mod
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

pporse wrote:

Hi RC :3

xi is GOD xD !!

i love this map ;w; go to ranked !!

this map almost does not have issue :3
so i'll focus on 'suited of pattern' & 'comfort of hands' :D

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Go!
[Beginner]
01:55:927 - add note on 6th or 7th column
there has loud sound

01:58:427 (118427|0) - move to 5th column
01:58:513 (118513|4) - move to 6th column
too spread.. this pattern can be difficult for beginners
they're yet dizzy when find key line @.@
so as possible it is better that don't spread notes in Beginner Diff :) i don't think so, just let it be as a challenging diff (?)

01:59:720 - add note on 3rd column
i recommend that add note in there :3


[Standard]
00:12:996 (12996|1,13169|2) - move to 1st column
00:12:996 (12996|5,13169|4) - move th 7th column
umm..actually they're same sound with 00:12:651 (12651|0,12651|6,12824|6,12824|0) -
so i think it is better to set same key line :3 (if it was ur intention, plz ignore this xD) already changed in previous mods

00:36:186 (36186|0) - move to 4th or 5th column and change to 3/4 LN
this spot needs to 3/4 LN

00:44:548 (44548|4) - move to 00:44:462 -
actually when i play this diff, this note was awkward.
i want that you use drumbass sound at 00:44:462 - :3 already changed in previous mods

00:45:410 (45410|2) - move to 6th column
00:45:582 (45582|0,45582|6) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

02:18:513 (138513|6) - change to normal note or 1/2 LN
02:19:031 - add 1/1 LN on 6th column
02:19:203 (139203|2) - move to 7th column
i think that 02:18:513 (138513|6) is too long compared to the sound ww changed to circles
and it needs LN in there at 02:19:031

02:19:376 (139376|0) - move to 3rd column
02:19:462 (139462|5) - move to 4th column
for hand balance move to 5th column

02:19:634 (139634|1) - move to 3rd column
02:19:462 (139462|5) - move to 02:19:807 - misplaced?
02:19:979 (139979|6) - move to 3rd column
they're same sound. so set same key line

02:24:893 (144893|1,145008|2,145123|3,145353|0,145467|1,145582|2,145841|2) -
to be honest when i played this diff, this section was really awkward T^T
stair pattern is not suited in there.
how about this?
i know it's a great, but i don't wanna put jacks in here, it's too hard even just 1/3 jacks T_T


[Hyper]
02:19:807 (139807|1,139807|4) - move one block to the right
02:19:979 (139979|0) - move to 3rd column

02:24:893 ~ 02:25:582 - same opinion with Standard diff
stair pattern is not suited in there. T^T
how about this?


02:27:479 (147479|2) - move to 5th column
this line is same with 02:27:307 (147307|6,147307|0,147307|2) -
but i think.. It need to be different with that :3

all unreplied mods means fixed all. Mostly mods in a beginner may be already modded and changed by previous modder

diff is so manyyyy lol

next time, i'll mod rest :)

and take my star xD
Thank you for the star, and mods :3
deadbill
mod telah berganti menjadi reference dan kemudian akhirnya menjadi entahlah ane pun tak tahu >.>
@Exusagi , asalnya mau edit GD situ ... jadiin collab aja gitu? @,@

pporse
sry im late ;w;

no kudosu :3

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Go!
[LordRaika's Another]
i found some issues :3

01:44:893 (104893|4) - misplaced
move to 01:44:807

02:20:927 (140927|3,141186|5) - umm....misplaced?
but i cannot find exact place... ;w;

that's all :3

i love this diff's LN pattern <3


[Yojimbo's White Another]
00:32:910 (32910|5) - delete
00:32:881 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:32:939 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap

00:43:858 (43858|4) - move to 7th column
00:43:945 (43945|6) - delete
00:43:916 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:43:973 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap

00:45:410 - add notes on 2nd, 6th column
i think...need more notes in there

00:49:893 (49893|6,49979|3,50065|5,50151|4,50238|2,50324|1) - misplaced?
00:49:893 (49893|6) - move to 00:49:950 - (1/6 snap)
00:49:979 (49979|3) - move to 00:50:008 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:151 (50151|4) - move to 00:50:180 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:295 - add note
00:50:324 (50324|1) - move to 00:50:353 - (1/6 snap)

00:52:479 - add note on 1st column
00:53:169 - add note on 2nd column
i think need note in there

00:55:927 (55927|4,55970|5,56143|4,56186|3,56401|4,56445|5) - umm..i'm not sure it's suited in this part.
if u want to use this pattern,
00:55:970 (55970|2) - move to 00:55:927
need note in there

01:10:065 - add note on 2nd column
there has drumbass sound.

01:16:100 (76100|6,76143|2,76186|5,76229|1) - how about this?


01:24:031 (84031|1) - delete
01:24:031 (84031|6) - move to 5th column
this line has 5 chord to same with 01:23:858 but sound accent is different.
i think need to reduce note in there :3

02:24:893 (144893|4,144893|1) - move to right one block
02:24:893 (144893|1,144893|4,145008|4,145008|1,145123|1,145123|4) - it seems to 3 jack. but in fact, sound is just 2 jack.
so to avoid confusion, it need to move :3


[LumiNous]
00:21:617 - add note on 5th column
00:21:703 - add note on 4th column

00:37:091 (37091|4,37091|2) - misplaced? i think the notes have to be located in 1/3 snap

00:49:893 (49893|6) - delete. there has no sound

00:55:985 (55985|1,55985|4) - umm....i recommend to delete them

00:58:729 - add note on 2nd column (1/8 snap)

01:04:634 (64634|6,64807|4) - they have to be located in 1/3 snap

01:18:513 - i think.. 1/8 drum roll is started in there.

01:44:893 (104893|1,105151|5,105410|3) - misplaced?
when i listened to this part in 25% playback, it was awkward.
01:44:893 (104893|1) - move to 01:44:807
01:45:151 (105151|5) - move to 01:45:065
01:45:410 (105410|3) - move to 01:45:324

good luck xD
Arzenvald

pporse wrote:

sry im late ;w;

no kudosu :3

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Yojimbo's White Another]
00:32:910 (32910|5) - delete
00:32:881 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:32:939 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap // there's only 1/4 sexophone here.. keep

00:43:858 (43858|4) - move to 7th column
00:43:945 (43945|6) - delete
00:43:916 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:43:973 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap // ==a i believe it's 1/4.. keep

00:45:410 - add notes on 2nd, 6th column
i think...need more notes in there // oh sure. >:^)

00:49:893 (49893|6,49979|3,50065|5,50151|4,50238|2,50324|1) - misplaced?
00:49:893 (49893|6) - move to 00:49:950 - (1/6 snap)
00:49:979 (49979|3) - move to 00:50:008 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:151 (50151|4) - move to 00:50:180 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:295 - add note
00:50:324 (50324|1) - move to 00:50:353 - (1/6 snap) // some of them was 1/4.. i will ask another modder about the snapping.. thanks for noticing..

00:52:479 - add note on 1st column
00:53:169 - add note on 2nd column
i think need note in there // added

00:55:927 (55927|4,55970|5,56143|4,56186|3,56401|4,56445|5) - umm..i'm not sure it's suited in this part. // confirmed by ichigaki, yes
if u want to use this pattern,
00:55:970 (55970|2) - move to 00:55:927
need note in there // ok

01:10:065 - add note on 2nd column
there has drumbass sound. // only layer & emphasize the piano, keep

01:16:100 (76100|6,76143|2,76186|5,76229|1) - how about this?
// ok, flipped though

01:24:031 (84031|1) - delete
01:24:031 (84031|6) - move to 5th column
this line has 5 chord to same with 01:23:858 but sound accent is different.
i think need to reduce note in there :3 // ==a ok

02:24:893 (144893|4,144893|1) - move to right one block // nice, ok
02:24:893 (144893|1,144893|4,145008|4,145008|1,145123|1,145123|4) - it seems to 3 jack. but in fact, sound is just 2 jack.
so to avoid confusion, it need to move :3 // ok


good luck xD
wew thanks for the mod pporse! :D it's so helpful

update.. =w=)/ http://puu.sh/fzXdx.osu
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

pporse wrote:

sry im late ;w;

no kudosu :3

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Go!
[LordRaika's Another]
i found some issues :3

01:44:893 (104893|4) - misplaced
move to 01:44:807

02:20:927 (140927|3,141186|5) - umm....misplaced?
but i cannot find exact place... ;w;

that's all :3

i love this diff's LN pattern <3


[Yojimbo's White Another]
00:32:910 (32910|5) - delete
00:32:881 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:32:939 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap

00:43:858 (43858|4) - move to 7th column
00:43:945 (43945|6) - delete
00:43:916 - add note on 6th column (1/6 snap)
00:43:973 - add note on 5th column (1/6 snap)
sounds are located in 1/6 snap

00:45:410 - add notes on 2nd, 6th column
i think...need more notes in there

00:49:893 (49893|6,49979|3,50065|5,50151|4,50238|2,50324|1) - misplaced?
00:49:893 (49893|6) - move to 00:49:950 - (1/6 snap)
00:49:979 (49979|3) - move to 00:50:008 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:151 (50151|4) - move to 00:50:180 - (1/6 snap)
00:50:295 - add note
00:50:324 (50324|1) - move to 00:50:353 - (1/6 snap)

00:52:479 - add note on 1st column
00:53:169 - add note on 2nd column
i think need note in there

00:55:927 (55927|4,55970|5,56143|4,56186|3,56401|4,56445|5) - umm..i'm not sure it's suited in this part.
if u want to use this pattern,
00:55:970 (55970|2) - move to 00:55:927
need note in there

01:10:065 - add note on 2nd column
there has drumbass sound.

01:16:100 (76100|6,76143|2,76186|5,76229|1) - how about this?


01:24:031 (84031|1) - delete
01:24:031 (84031|6) - move to 5th column
this line has 5 chord to same with 01:23:858 but sound accent is different.
i think need to reduce note in there :3

02:24:893 (144893|4,144893|1) - move to right one block
02:24:893 (144893|1,144893|4,145008|4,145008|1,145123|1,145123|4) - it seems to 3 jack. but in fact, sound is just 2 jack.
so to avoid confusion, it need to move :3


[LumiNous]
00:21:617 - add note on 5th column
00:21:703 - add note on 4th column

00:37:091 (37091|4,37091|2) - misplaced? i think the notes have to be located in 1/3 snap

00:49:893 (49893|6) - delete. there has no sound

00:55:985 (55985|1,55985|4) - umm....i recommend to delete them

00:58:729 - add note on 2nd column (1/8 snap)

01:04:634 (64634|6,64807|4) - they have to be located in 1/3 snap

01:18:513 - i think.. 1/8 drum roll is started in there.

01:44:893 (104893|1,105151|5,105410|3) - misplaced?
when i listened to this part in 25% playback, it was awkward.
01:44:893 (104893|1) - move to 01:44:807
01:45:151 (105151|5) - move to 01:45:065
01:45:410 (105410|3) - move to 01:45:324

good luck xD

All fixed in LumiNous, thanks pporse !
I also re-arrange the pattern in LumiNous for a more way beautiful diff
Updated with ExUsagi and also LordRaika diff !
Akasha-


xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Remillion Cross


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

Hitsound check already finished by LordRaika


[Beginner]

SPOILER
  1. 00:17:824 (17824|2) - move to 7th column, I think the pitch is high and should be on the highest column
  2. 00:51:617 (51617|5) - idk this is have sound of not, cause to low for hear ;A; I think following the piano's sound is okay now
  3. 01:11:272 - I think you should add a note in 1 because if you following two notes like on 01:06:617 - with bass
  4. 01:15:496 (75496|2,75755|4) - I think should Ctrl + H this, seems 01:15:496 (75496|2) - is higher pitch than 01:15:755 (75755|4) -
  5. 01:29:203 (89203|2) - I think move this longnote to 4, the pattern is better then and for the pitch too? maybe
  6. 01:39:376 - change the pattern into this? seems have the high pitch and move to low pitch https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2715733
  7. 02:25:123 (145123|3) - this note probably should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  8. 01:05:841 (65841|2) - move to 01:05:812 - , should be on here (1/3)
  9. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - should be on 1/3
  10. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap

    The rest is fine to me ~ Great

[Standard]

SPOILER
  1. 00:25:841 (25841|0) - I was think the long note should be on 00:26:013 -
  2. 00:53:858 - add a note in here, seems have the strong sound
  3. 01:45:410 (105410|0) - this note is on 1/3? 01:45:123 (105123|5) - or this is on 01:45:151 - ? cause beginner have 01:45:123 (105123|5) - on the 01:45:151 -
  4. 02:25:123 (145123|4) - this note probably should be on 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  5. 01:05:841 (65841|0) - should be on 01:05:812 - (1/3)
  6. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - should be on 1/3
  7. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap

[Hyper]

SPOILER
  1. 00:43:858 - At this: change patterns to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2715973 , seems the pitch is going down
  2. 01:07:307 - to 01:07:651 - I dont think players will pass this without 200 points ;A; suggest one is use 1/2 and two is use 1/3 beat snap
  3. 01:43:743 (103743|3) - this note should be on: 01:43:772 - (1/4)
  4. 01:45:123 (105123|5) - should be on 01:45:151 - (1/4), easy diff have the right confirm
  5. 01:58:226 (118226|1) - this note should be on: 01:58:169 - (1/2), follow the easy diff, and heard by 25% play back rate
  6. 02:25:123 (145123|1,145123|5) - hear by 25% playback, those notes should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  7. 02:27:479 (147479|6,147479|3,147479|0) - those hold should be have this end: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716063 (for like the easier's diffs
  8. 01:05:582 (65582|2,65841|0,65841|4) - those are, should be on 01:05:812 - (after snap, this long note will not snap with the end of 1/4, and also, not snap with begin 1/3 but snap with 1/4 so suggest to remove it, and remove 01:05:582 (65582|2) - too?
  9. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - is 1/3 snap
  10. 00:37:048 (37048|5) - is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
  11. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap
  12. 01:00:582 (60582|1) - is should be in 01:00:525 - (1/3 snap)
  13. 02:09:462 (129462|4) - its 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -

[LordRaika's Another]

SPOILER
  1. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - probably should be 1/3 snap
  2. 01:10:180 (70180|5,70180|1) - hold should be begin at 01:10:238 - (1/4)
  3. 02:25:123 (145123|5,145123|1,145123|3) - should be on 02:25:151 - (1/4 snap)
  4. 01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 beat snap
  5. 02:09:462 (129462|1,129462|5) - its 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
    the rest all fine with me w/

[Yojimbo's White Another]

SPOILER
  1. 00:47:048 (47048|0,47048|6,47048|2) - those are need a touch of hitsound-senpai w/
  2. 00:48:901 (48901|4,48988|2,49074|4) - those are, I think I hear its on 1/4 like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716143
  3. 00:49:893 - on here: the begin seems not snap with the song, I think its on here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716151
  4. 02:25:123 (145123|4,145123|1,145123|0) - should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  5. 00:37:048 (37048|2,37048|5) - those are is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
  6. 01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 snap
  7. 02:09:462 (129462|2,129462|6) - its a 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
    Nice diff w/

[LumiNous]

SPOILER
  1. 00:22:709 (22709|5) - really should remove this, seems have sound but tooo low ;A; and also hard to take this with 1/4 too
  2. 00:22:249 (22249|5,22364|3) - those are, 1/4 note, hear with 25% play back
  3. 00:22:565 (22565|3) - piano's sound is on: 00:22:565 -
  4. 00:22:939 (22939|1) - hithat is on: 00:22:910 - and bass 00:23:054 (23054|3) - is on: 00:22:996 -
  5. 00:22:651 - also have a hithat sound in here, depend on you in add a note in here
  6. 00:48:858 (48858|1,48988|3,49074|5) - is 1/4 snap, should be on: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716215 (also the right charts is of Usagi's but I have call him to fix at 1/4 like you
  7. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap
  8. 02:09:462 (129462|3,129462|5,129462|1) - like the begin, it should be on 1/3 snap: move to on 02:09:490 -
  9. 02:25:123 (145123|6,145123|3,145123|1) - those are... really is on 1/4 snap: 02:25:151 -

[Comment]

Done modding, hard time to mod this map D: but glad im done
This is hard to mod and hard to map because have 1/1 1/2 1/3 1/4 1/5 1/6 1/8 beatsnap ~ but glad you was done it
Anyway, if you have complain about my mod on beatsnapping, try to hear it one more time with 25% playback rate, and then recall me to check that, after you guys done fixing, I will check this map one more time of snapping so ... good luck on it then ~
Here is my star <3
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Remillion Cross


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

Hitsound check already finished by LordRaika


[Beginner]

SPOILER
  1. 00:17:824 (17824|2) - move to 7th column, I think the pitch is high and should be on the highest column
  2. 00:51:617 (51617|5) - idk this is have sound of not, cause to low for hear ;A; I think following the piano's sound is okay now
  3. 01:11:272 - I think you should add a note in 1 because if you following two notes like on 01:06:617 - with bass
  4. 01:15:496 (75496|2,75755|4) - I think should Ctrl + H this, seems 01:15:496 (75496|2) - is higher pitch than 01:15:755 (75755|4) -
  5. 01:29:203 (89203|2) - I think move this longnote to 4, the pattern is better then and for the pitch too? maybe
  6. 01:39:376 - change the pattern into this? seems have the high pitch and move to low pitch https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2715733
  7. 02:25:123 (145123|3) - this note probably should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  8. 01:05:841 (65841|2) - move to 01:05:812 - , should be on here (1/3)
  9. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - should be on 1/3
  10. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap

    The rest is fine to me ~ Great

    All fixed. Yeah this song is too hard for map that's why no one want to make valhalla for ranked since it's too complicated

[Standard]

SPOILER
  1. 00:25:841 (25841|0) - I was think the long note should be on 00:26:013 - perhaps using LN in this section wasn't a good choice. re-arrange.
  2. 00:53:858 - add a note in here, seems have the strong sound
  3. 01:45:410 (105410|0) - this note is on 1/3? 01:45:123 (105123|5) - or this is on 01:45:151 - ? cause beginner have 01:45:123 (105123|5) - on the 01:45:151 - the second one that you mentioned wasn't right, but i will re-place in the right timing
  4. 02:25:123 (145123|4) - this note probably should be on 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  5. 01:05:841 (65841|0) - should be on 01:05:812 - (1/3)
  6. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - should be on 1/3
  7. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap

    the rest of the mods was fixed all! Thanks

[Hyper]

SPOILER
  1. 00:43:858 - At this: change patterns to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2715973 , seems the pitch is going down right
  2. 01:07:307 - to 01:07:651 - I dont think players will pass this without 200 points ;A; suggest one is use 1/2 and two is use 1/3 beat snap getting 200 or not, i still have no idea. re-arrange.
  3. 01:43:743 (103743|3) - this note should be on: 01:43:772 - (1/4) ok
  4. 01:45:123 (105123|5) - should be on 01:45:151 - (1/4), easy diff have the right confirm ok
  5. 01:58:226 (118226|1) - this note should be on: 01:58:169 - (1/2), follow the easy diff, and heard by 25% play back rate my bad lol
  6. 02:25:123 (145123|1,145123|5) - hear by 25% playback, those notes should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  7. 02:27:479 (147479|6,147479|3,147479|0) - those hold should be have this end: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716063 (for like the easier's diffs ok
  8. 01:05:582 (65582|2,65841|0,65841|4) - those are, should be on 01:05:812 - (after snap, this long note will not snap with the end of 1/4, and also, not snap with begin 1/3 but snap with 1/4 so suggest to remove it, and remove 01:05:582 (65582|2) - too? dem this song too op, well you're right, but i will re-arrange and use the righto snap
  9. 01:06:962 - to 01:07:651 - is 1/3 snap
  10. 00:37:048 (37048|5) - is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
  11. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap
  12. 01:00:582 (60582|1) - is should be in 01:00:525 - (1/3 snap)
  13. 02:09:462 (129462|4) - its 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -

    Fixed all the rest of mods!

[LordRaika's Another]

SPOILER
  1. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - probably should be 1/3 snap
  2. 01:10:180 (70180|5,70180|1) - hold should be begin at 01:10:238 - (1/4)
  3. 02:25:123 (145123|5,145123|1,145123|3) - should be on 02:25:151 - (1/4 snap)
  4. 01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 beat snap
  5. 02:09:462 (129462|1,129462|5) - its 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
    the rest all fine with me w/

[Yojimbo's White Another]

SPOILER
  1. 00:47:048 (47048|0,47048|6,47048|2) - those are need a touch of hitsound-senpai w/
  2. 00:48:901 (48901|4,48988|2,49074|4) - those are, I think I hear its on 1/4 like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716143
  3. 00:49:893 - on here: the begin seems not snap with the song, I think its on here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716151
  4. 02:25:123 (145123|4,145123|1,145123|0) - should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
  5. 00:37:048 (37048|2,37048|5) - those are is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
  6. 01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 snap
  7. 02:09:462 (129462|2,129462|6) - its a 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
    Nice diff w/

[LumiNous]

SPOILER
  1. 00:22:709 (22709|5) - really should remove this, seems have sound but tooo low ;A; and also hard to take this with 1/4 too not agree, but okay then perhaps you're right
  2. 00:22:249 (22249|5,22364|3) - those are, 1/4 note, hear with 25% play back oh yes, finally you mentioned about it
  3. 00:22:565 (22565|3) - piano's sound is on: 00:22:565 -
  4. 00:22:939 (22939|1) - hithat is on: 00:22:910 - and bass 00:23:054 (23054|3) - is on: 00:22:996 - okay thanks
  5. 00:22:651 - also have a hithat sound in here, depend on you in add a note in here ok
  6. 00:48:858 (48858|1,48988|3,49074|5) - is 1/4 snap, should be on: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716215 (also the right charts is of Usagi's but I have call him to fix at 1/4 like you oh yes, this song was too damn hard
  7. 00:55:927 - to 00:56:617 - is 1/4 beat snap wheee
  8. 02:09:462 (129462|3,129462|5,129462|1) - like the begin, it should be on 1/3 snap: move to on 02:09:490 - ok
  9. 02:25:123 (145123|6,145123|3,145123|1) - those are... really is on 1/4 snap: 02:25:151 - ok

[Comment]

Done modding, hard time to mod this map D: but glad im done
This is hard to mod and hard to map because have 1/1 1/2 1/3 1/4 1/5 1/6 1/8 beatsnap ~ but glad you was done it
Anyway, if you have complain about my mod on beatsnapping, try to hear it one more time with 25% playback rate, and then recall me to check that, after you guys done fixing, I will check this map one more time of snapping so ... good luck on it then ~
Here is my star <3
Thanks, updated with LordRaika! Btw Raika said if he applied all of your mods, but too lazy for reply in thread lol
Waiting for tertel ExUsagi... (dem where is he now. It is sunday and he should be online now)
Arzenvald

Remillion Cross wrote:

00:47:048 (47048|0,47048|6,47048|2) - those are need a touch of hitsound-senpai w/
00:48:901 (48901|4,48988|2,49074|4) - those are, I think I hear its on 1/4 like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716143
00:49:893 - on here: the begin seems not snap with the song, I think its on here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2716151
02:25:123 (145123|4,145123|1,145123|0) - should be on: 02:25:151 - (1/4)
00:37:048 (37048|2,37048|5) - those are is 1/3 beatsnap, hear with 25% play back
01:00:065 - to 01:00:755 - is 1/3 snap
02:09:462 (129462|2,129462|6) - its a 1/3 snap on 02:09:490 -
Nice diff w/
all done.. gg thanks for the mod!
http://puu.sh/fDol9.rar le update (also posted on pm)
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
Updated
Akasha-
xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Okay

Offset no problems with me, charts follow the pitch good, hard map but rankable, no more problems with me w/

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Good luck on this map then w/ I love xi, the map seems great for rank ~ I hope doesn’t have anymore reason for it! Waiting for qualified ~
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
Finally.. thanks Kuo Kyoka !
Starry-
Marking~
we need some hard 7K ranked!

Will process within a week or so - patience until then please! ;w;
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

Starry- wrote:

Marking~
we need some hard 7K ranked!

Will process within a week or so - patience until then please! ;w;
Okie, thanks for notice my maps, Starry- !
Kamikaze
Woohoo, gogo Remi!
Ginshu

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Woohoo, gogo Remi!
Akasha-

LNP- wrote:

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Woohoo, gogo Remi!
NewRulerNA
found issues....... ;_;
[LordRaika's Another]
  1. 01:55:927 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

    each setting is different so it will be an unranklable issue.
  2. 01:13:169 - same as above but same setting

[General]
  1. LR_Clap Loud L.wav and have few delay. it is less than 5ms so not unrankable but I will be glad if you fix .wav.

    http://puu.sh/fJFgh/d9f6153856.zip
    try this sound.
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

NewRulerNA wrote:

found issues....... ;_;
[LordRaika's Another]
  1. 01:55:927 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

    each setting is different so it will be an unranklable issue.
  2. 01:13:169 - same as above but same setting

[General]
  1. LR_Clap Loud L.wav and have few delay. it is less than 5ms so not unrankable but I will be glad if you fix .wav.

    http://puu.sh/fJFgh/d9f6153856.zip
    try this sound.
demn it, will fixed when bancho or bss isn't ded. thanks for mention this to us
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
Updated with LordRaika diffs, waiting for re-bubble
Akasha-
Did the updater updated fully? because after check, I think it not yet update Raika's diff, I will have some more irc check before rebubble too
Akasha-
xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Good

Timing is good for now w/

Rebubbled

Someone please qualified this ~
Takane6

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

xi - Valhalla [Osu!Mania Modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Good

Timing is good for now w/

Rebubbled

Someone please qualified this ~
Yay yay! Go! for ranked :D
Starry-
Checking tomorrow hopefully.
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
Thanks again !
Starry-
[General]

Timing:
Audio:
  • Unrankable:
  1. normal-hitnormal.wav
    Under 100ms.

Here's a link to a edited rankable hitsound that you can replace it with. (right click -> save as)
BG:
Metadata:
Preview Point:
AiMod:

[ODHP Spread]
So we have
OD7 OD7 OD7 OD7.5 OD9 OD8.
I can vouch for OD7 on the easier diffs, I think Hyper needs OD7.5 though, or maybe even OD8. Compared to how many LNs the next diff, Another has.
HP7 HP7 HP7 HP7.5 HP8 HP8.5
A better spread, but again, Hyper isn't too tricky. It's best to raise this to HP7.5 or maybe HP8. You choose.
Rest seems fine, although I'm thinking HP8.5 may be a tiny bit too strict. Should be okay though.

[]

Untick Widescreen Support in all difficulties. Since this map doesn't use a storyboard.

What I also found is that LordRaika's Another has the most SV's compared to all the difficulties, and I think some are just unneeded, or feel awkward. I'm saying this as a player, too.
You should definitely address this within the next update, unless you want me to specifically point out the ones I believe don't play that well in my next check. I just think if you compare these SV's with ones other diffs, since it's a bit weird for the 4/6th diff to have the most SV.

[SV on LordRaika's diff]
8341, to 10755,
This speed up feels quite rough near the end. To be honest, something like this feels a bit smoother to play.

13427,
Feels better if this was more emphasised, and not cutting into the next notes that much. This works well (snapping to 1/4 instead)

23513,
Suggesting the same for this SV. 1.5x, 0.5x, 1.0x.
Makes the pattern snap faster, and the big clap is more emphasised.

28341,
These SV's are nice, but they're not consistent throughout the rest of the map.
Lots of times I hear the same patterns and they aren't being used. So perhaps remove them entirely, or add them all. (Don't particularly suggest adding them all though).
Reference: 122824 this whole kiai section.

48255,
Idk about this, it just feels like lag. Best to remove or try your best to smooth it out.

72824,
Same clap SV I was talking about. Make it 1/4, 3 sections, 1.5x, 0.5x and 1x. (The last section can be placed 1 or 2 more ticks later, since there's a big lead up to the next part in the map).

105927,
Same clap.

115927,
Same clap.

118169,
To be honest, I think you can just make this 0.9x. It better shows the change of pace as the piano is introduced back in.

122565,
I'm thinking you can move this section maybe 1/4 a bit later - it's meant to be a big build up, but it's slower.

02:27:307 (147307|5,147307|1,147307|4,147307|2) - SV this, clap

I must say the use of SV at the end of this difficulty (being 0.70) makes it really hard to hit this:
Maybe just raise it a bit.

Remember these SV's are just examples, and you can adapt to them however you like. Main points are just consistency with the LN SV's in the middle of kiai, smoothing transitions, and emphasis of the clap.
LordRaika
done, i removed all a very very minor SV OwO

yay, the hype is realllllll
we can feel the day draws near >w<


thx for the check Starry~
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
Final Update done.
Akasha-
Almost for qualify w/
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
i can't wait for it
LordRaika
please RC XD go qualify with your dif as well........
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

LordRaika wrote:

please RC XD go qualify with your dif as well........
yeah i want it too but.. seems the condition isn't right now...
Julie
*STALKING*
Shoot my last kudo! gawd I gotta mods more LOL

GO GO GO RANK RANK RANK XD!!
Rumia-
i just took a glance on beginner diff , it does need more work
really kinda a lot

[Beginner]
00:24:117 (24117|3) - this beat is hard for new players , remove it please would be more appropriate.
00:24:893 (24893|3) - i dont think this one is necessary either. focus on the violin is ok imo
00:32:651 (32651|4) - unnecessary
00:36:617 (36617|3) - should've ended here 00:36:962 -
00:46:962 (46962|0,47048|1,47220|6,47393|4,47565|2,47651|1) - seriously for beginner ?
01:59:720 (119720|2) - u catch this for what ? it would be more formal if you just catch 01:59:203 (119203|5,119548|4,119893|3) -

pretty much overused LN for beginner diff some part is not even beginner ,

nevermind i just passing by ~
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
wait, i will destroy my Beginner diff dadadadadadadadadada will update, and re-construct at anything not only for Beginner, but ALL of the diffs except GDs

so this isn't complete yet, thanks for notice my map :D ~
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

Rumia- wrote:

i just took a glance on beginner diff , it does need more work
really kinda a lot

[Beginner]
00:24:117 (24117|3) - this beat is hard for new players , remove it please would be more appropriate.
00:24:893 (24893|3) - i dont think this one is necessary either. focus on the violin is ok imo
00:32:651 (32651|4) - unnecessary
00:36:617 (36617|3) - should've ended here 00:36:962 -
00:46:962 (46962|0,47048|1,47220|6,47393|4,47565|2,47651|1) - seriously for beginner ?
01:59:720 (119720|2) - u catch this for what ? it would be more formal if you just catch 01:59:203 (119203|5,119548|4,119893|3) -

pretty much overused LN for beginner diff some part is not even beginner ,

nevermind i just passing by ~
All fixed.

Like you said, I had already re-construct and easier the pattern in Beginner, Standard, and Hyper. I also keep like a forever alone, self-mod so many times in LumiNous, and got so many mods from modders and testers. Yeah, that's good advice tho.

Thanks~
Harbyter





wtf my acc :o


btw i thought this was a little more harden lol
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross

Harbyter wrote:






wtf my acc :o


btw i thought this was a little more harden lol
whoops you're already figured it
Topic Starter
Remillion Cross
Deleted the LumiNous diff.
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