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Pomplamoose - Telephone

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Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 April 2010 at 17:40:43

Artist: Pomplamoose
Title: Telephone
Tags: Tribute to Famous People Lady Gaga Beyonce
BPM: 120.97
Filesize: 8587kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.29 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Hard (4.69 stars, 224 notes)
  3. Normal (4.05 stars, 188 notes)
Download: Pomplamoose - Telephone
Download: Pomplamoose - Telephone (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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*ring ring*
Jinxy
Remove the .PNG version of the wallpaper? It doesn't look like you use it.

Starred.
Garven
[General]
Maybe from 01:59:889 to the end slowly fade out the hit sound volume.
The three kiai times soak up almost 1/3 of the play time. Maybe save it for the final chorus?

[Easy]
I've heard a lot about frowning on jumps in easy modes, though with what you have set up for the chorus, it'd kill your design. (00:34:086 [1, 1]) I dunno what to tell you. D:
00:32:350 It sounds weird to have a third whistle after the two before it (applies to same spots later on in map)
01:07:316 [2, 1] Spacing.
01:16:740 [3] Delete clap on first hit of slider.
01:25:667 [1] Delete clap
01:26:659 [3] ^

[Normal]
00:20:695 Add clap
00:21:687 Add clap
00:24:663 Add clap
00:25:655 Add clap
00:28:630 Remove clap
00:28:878 Remove clap
00:29:622 Remove clap
00:29:870 Remove clap
00:31:606 Remove clap, add whistle
00:31:854 Remove clap, add whistle
Try that sound pattern out for the chorus and see what you think.
01:21:204 May as well have the whistle hit on the end of the slider too

[Hard]
00:28:878 [2] Lower one grid point.
00:36:814 [2] ^
01:48:234 [2] ^ (raise one)

I really liked hard. Nice and fun to play, even if it is mostly copy/paste. Star~
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

JInxyjem wrote:

Remove the .PNG version of the wallpaper? It doesn't look like you use it.

Starred.
Oh yesh.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Maybe from 01:59:889 to the end slowly fade out the hit sound volume.
The three kiai times soak up almost 1/3 of the play time. Maybe save it for the final chorus? OK.

[Easy]
I've heard a lot about frowning on jumps in easy modes, though with what you have set up for the chorus, it'd kill your design. (00:34:086 [1, 1]) I dunno what to tell you. D: D:
00:32:350 It sounds weird to have a third whistle after the two before it (applies to same spots later on in map) Yup.
01:07:316 [2, 1] Spacing. Yup.
01:16:740 [3] Delete clap on first hit of slider.
01:25:667 [1] Delete clap
01:26:659 [3] ^ Yessah.

[Normal]
00:20:695 Add clap
00:21:687 Add clap
00:24:663 Add clap
00:25:655 Add clap
00:28:630 Remove clap
00:28:878 Remove clap
00:29:622 Remove clap
00:29:870 Remove clap
00:31:606 Remove clap, add whistle
00:31:854 Remove clap, add whistle
Try that sound pattern out for the chorus and see what you think.
01:21:204 May as well have the whistle hit on the end of the slider too Fixed up all these wierd hitsoundings. Must have set them all to clap...

[Hard]
00:28:878 [2] Lower one grid point.
00:36:814 [2] ^
01:48:234 [2] ^ (raise one) Yup.

I really liked hard. Nice and fun to play, even if it is mostly copy/paste. Star~
Thanks.
-Xero-
Pretty cool song and very good mapping too!

[Overall]
Source/Tags: Youtube ?

[Easy]
Nothing.

[Normal]
Nothin'.

[Hard]
Not a thin'.
EDIT: 00:25:903 (7,8,9) - 1 tick down (very nazi..)

+star
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Xero_HT wrote:

Pretty cool song and very good mapping too! Thanks.

[Hard]
Not a thin'.
EDIT: 00:25:903 (7,8,9) - 1 tick down (very nazi..) But a sexy nazi. ;p
Thanks.
Sakura
[Easy]
No problems found

[Normal]
No problems found

[Hard]
Umm.. AIMod points a few spacing errors but they are too minor in my opinion, but you may want to use AIMod and see if they are really relevant, they didnt hinder me in anyway tho.
No problems found

Ok this one deserves +Star! Good job
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
I believe they're mostly symmetry stuff.
maal
[General]
Tags shouldn't be starting with big letters. So, remove the big letters.
Remove your .osb file.
You don't need a source to this. I know you don't have one, but Xero told you to have one.

~[Easy]~
00:43:758(x): Could you cut this break down a bit? It's 16 seconds long.

~[Normal]~
Good~

~[Hard]~
01:55:426(1,3): Offscreen, move some squares to the right (Nazi).
Great!

You haven't kudosu'd meee D:
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

emaal wrote:

[General]
Tags shouldn't be starting with big letters. So, remove the big letters. I suppose.
Remove your .osb file. Yup.
You don't need a source to this. I know you don't have one, but Xero told you to have one. I know. ;p

~[Easy]~
00:43:758(x): Could you cut this break down a bit? It's 16 seconds long. Done on all of the diffs.

~[Normal]~
Good~

~[Hard]~
01:55:426(1,3): Offscreen, move some squares to the right (Nazi). No they aren't.
Great!
Thanks.
gyt
lol song, nice map :)
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Offset 8300 (resnap all notes)
    • "PomplamooseWallpaper.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels
    • Delete the osb file, then "full submission"
[Hard]

  • • 00:44:010 (x) - Add a circle
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]
• "PomplamooseWallpaper.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels
• Delete the osb file, then "full submission"
OK.
Thanks.
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted
!WARNING!NAZI!

Easy
00:46:238 (5) - up 1 grid and left 1 grid to make the spacing more consistent?
01:26:659 (3) - right 1 grid
02:02:121 (3) - remove finish?
Normal
pro :D
Hard
01:33:479 (2) - up 1 grid
01:33:851 (4,5,6) - can you fix this triplet? the spacing looks kinda strange~
01:37:447 (2) - up 1 grid
01:37:819 (4,5,6) - can you fix this triplet? the spacing looks kinda strange~

Nice! STAR!
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Easy
00:46:238 (5) - up 1 grid and left 1 grid to make the spacing more consistent?
01:26:659 (3) - right 1 grid Yup.
02:02:121 (3) - remove finish? Nah.

Hard
01:33:479 (2) - up 1 grid
01:33:851 (4,5,6) - can you fix this triplet? the spacing looks kinda strange~
01:37:447 (2) - up 1 grid
01:37:819 (4,5,6) - can you fix this triplet? the spacing looks kinda strange~ Yup.
Thanks!
Crimmi
Here we go.

[Easy]
Nada.

[Normal]
00:14:603 (4) align with (3)
Other wise, it's all good =]

[Hard]
00:23:175 (10) Align with (9)
No Problems Other wise.

*Star*
orioncomet
Already random modded when you request in #mod XD!
And nothing error :P Goodjob, I like the music, Starr
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

CrimmiSkye wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:603 (4) align with (3) No, it's on the center line perfectly.
Other wise, it's all good =]

[Hard]
00:23:175 (10) Align with (9) It's meant to be like that.
No Problems Other wise.
Wojjan
IRC Moddon.
Starring for good measure.
Also a present.
DeathxShinigami
Cool! Star.
NoHitter
Easy
00:36:070 (1) - Big jump for an easy. Flip horizontally and readjust? (I know you want symmetry, but it's generally better to stick with distance snap in Easy)
01:39:555 (x) - Weird way to start a break. I would suggest adding a note here.

Normal
00:22:679 (7) - Spacing. But really not that noticeable. (In fact it plays fine)
01:39:555 (x) - It really sounds better with a note here starting the break.

Hard
01:39:555 (x) - ^

Copy-pasting here works effectively. (and beautifully)

How do you make your sliders look that good :(
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
Done all that stuff. Thankye.
Ekaru
Great job! There are no errors in this map, but I have plenty of suggestions:

Hard:

00:13:999 (5) - Make it a diagonal step between (4) and (6). Both looks and plays better IMO. (might have to move 6 slightly)
00:35:326 (6) - Stack a hit circle under this one. 1/2 a beat after (6) I mean. Try it and see how it feels.
00:43:262 (6) - ^
00:46:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing confused me during play. Respace to be consistent please.
01:03:597 (4) - Believe it or not this is also noticeable. Move 1 grid to the right.
01:11:532 (4) - ^ Except to the left since it goes to the left.
01:17:484 (7) - Move this 1 grid down. Move the (5) before it 1 grid up. Why? To prevent this "ACK" overlapping while keeping the symmetry.
01:31:991 (2,3) - Try stacking these two and see how it feels.
01:35:959 (2,3) - ^
01:54:682 (6) - See the (6) at 35 seconds in.
01:59:146 (4) - See the two (4) from earlier as well.

Normal:

Only annoying thing to me is the 1/2 spacing. Consider spacing those out a tad more so they don't overlap like that.

Easy:

-Stack most of your 1/2s. No, really.
-If it comes after a slider, don't stack it. Instead, move it until it's no longer touching the slider endpoint. You can't put it under the slider endpoint 'cuz this often confuses newbies. If it's not after a slider, though, then stack it.
-01:29:635 (1) - Feels weird, too short for an Easy, and the note 1 beat afterward is too short of a recovery time for newbies. Trust me, spinners are one of the toughest things for newbies. It's hard for them to spin fast at first and even harder to recover fast. Most players who've been playing for a while forget this because we're used to decelerating really fast, but newbies aren't used to this.

Good job, just a few suggestions that aren't necessary but I feel would help the map out a bit. Star!
GladiOol
[General]
  1. Put Lady Gaga and Beyonce in TAGs?
[Easy]

00:49:957 (4) - Finish hitsound on the slider please.

Star~
Cyclone
Bubbled.
Larto
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