This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月8日 at 9:42:11

Artist: Memme
Title: Chinese Restaurant
Source: Pump It Up Prime
Tags: parkmemme dance simulation arcade M_o_k_o_r_i mokori kloyd Electronic
BPM: 175
Filesize: 8740kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:

1. Advanced (3.3 stars, 304 notes)
2. Beginner (1.46 stars, 109 notes)
3. Hyper (4.24 stars, 424 notes)
4. Kloyd's Another (4.83 stars, 542 notes)
5. Spicy (5.39 stars, 718 notes)
6. Standard (2.05 stars, 179 notes)

Download: Memme - Chinese Restaurant
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kloyd's Another by Kloyd

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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: chinese restaurant.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 72290
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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[Metadata]
Title:Chinese Restaurant
TitleUnicode:Chinese Restaurant
Artist:Memme
ArtistUnicode:Memme
Creator:M o k o r i
Version:Kloyd's spaghetti
Source:Pump It Up Prime
Tags:parkmemme dance simulation arcade M_o_k_o_r_i mokori
BeatmapID:593441
BeatmapSetID:256467

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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Amazing ! Nice Map !

starしえーん！
ランク目指して頑張れなのだー' ' )b゛

俺は麻婆茄子が好きだよ

>ろいどさん

ありがとうです！uploadしときますね(∩・▽・∩)

eLy wrote:

Amazing ! Nice Map !

starしえーん！
ランク目指して頑張れなのだー' ' )b゛

うおおおおおおえりーさんありがとう！
がんばります！

iMage-- wrote:

俺は麻婆茄子が好きだよ

担担麺＞＞＞＞＞＞＞＞麻婆豆腐＞＞＞麻婆茄子

俺は担担麺が好きだよ
(not copy iMagejoke

Mei wrote:

俺は担担麺が好きだよ
(not copy iMagejoke

是坦坦麺最高！(∩・▽・∩)

ore ha spaghetti ga sukidakara diffname sou yattakedo insane ni kaenasai! toka iwaretara kaetemo iiyo

Kloyd wrote:

ore ha spaghetti ga sukidakara diffname sou yattakedo insane ni kaenasai! toka iwaretara kaetemo iiyo

あい！ｗ

From LordRaika's modding team queue

[General]
Kloyd's diff name is unrankable. Only the hardets name can be custom. Rename to Kloyd's Insane
FIX the kiai

6 Kiai in 2 seconds? WHAT?
AFAIK, it unrankable to trigger kiai mulitple times in a row, just for fountains.
It actually happens twice, so fix it in both times
Difficulty curve might be to sharp, 1.46 - 2.09 - 3.47 - 4.81 - 5.40, Gap between NH is very high

[Easy]
00:10:661 (3,1) - Imo, this doesn't flow really good. (3) goes to top right, but (1) starts left of that
00:14:775 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit Imo. Please make it with a grey point (For example at 356:356)
00:31:232 (1,2,3) - IMO, such sliders shouldn't be used in low diffs, as the high angled corner is quite sharp
00:39:461 (1,2) - This has a pretty bad flow, (1) ends going up, while (2) starts under it
00:50:432 - Add note
01:05:518 (3) - Consider changing shape
01:09:632 (1) - Delete Nc
01:11:004 (3) - Give NC
01:28:832 (1) - Weird slider, please change shape
01:30:890 (4,1) - Blanket can be a little better, move (1) to 104:76, grey point at 125:193, end at 244:228
01:42:547 (1,2) - The red points make these sliders look ugly, consider changing it

[Normal]
00:09:290 (1,2) - Please don't stack in Normal (and below)
00:09:975 (3) - Looks unneccessary, there is no sound at the red tick
00:10:490 (4) - Ugly slider, due to red points
00:16:490 (2,3,4) - Please don't stack. Also, 1/2 might be too hard, as it's only normal
00:20:261 (1,1) - Using such sliders is heavily unrecommended, due to the players moving to fast
00:32:261 (4,1) - Improve blanket please
00:40:490 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - All these stacks. Un-stack them, please
00:50:432 - Add note
01:08:604 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Kinda bad flow. The circle (2) flows really weird, due to (4,1), also, the slider (1) feels weird, due to sudden curve
01:15:118 (1) - Might go to low. (I know it's not good if they hit border on top, not sure when it hits it on bottom of the screen), also, it flows kinda badly with the previous note
01:20:604 (1,2,3) - Flows bad, due to slidershape

[Hard]
So many reverses
00:03:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to not use streams in hard difficulty, 5-plets might be too fast, due to "high" BPM (It's high for starter Hard players)
00:17:090 (1) - This feels weird, even though it follow the music good
00:36:547 (1,1) - Blanket doesn't look really good
Taken at 00:37:786
00:43:404 (1) - Doesn't feel good, due to new music starting at the start of the reverse
00:46:147 (1,2) - Fix overlap please
01:02:261 (2,1) - Fix blanket please
01:33:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Tone it down a little
01:45:975 (1,1) - Blanket better

[Kloyd's Spaghetti]
Change diff name
/Off-topic, why spaghetti, AFAIK, that's not chinese. You'd be better of with something Chinese

00:03:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream looks messed up
00:15:975 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - Jumps feel weird and awkward, it doesn't look like they are 1/4 apart
00:25:061 (1,4) - Bad overlap
00:27:461 (2) - Move down to 492:349
00:45:461 (2,3) - (2) Feels weird being at the tail of (3)
01:03:461 (3,4,5) - Move them all to the left, by 1 coordinate
01:33:632 (1,1) - SV change might be too sudden
01:43:747 (1,2) - Jump is WAY TO BIG for being 1/4
01:44:261 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps feel a little weird and awkward
01:47:347 (1) - Spinner is unsnapped

[Spicy]
00:00:719 (1,2) - Not sure if 1/16 is rankable
00:07:490 (2,3,1) - The 1/8 feels weird
00:07:832 (2,1) - Ugly overlap
00:08:090 (1) - Move to 383:149
00:08:604 (1,3) - I really dislike this overlap
00:09:290 (1) - AFAIK, such ends are unrankable, not sure though
00:13:575 (1,2) - Bad flow
00:14:090 (1,2) - ^^
00:41:518 (1,2,3) - Jump to big
00:42:890 (3,4) - 8,49 DS, WTF
00:49:918 (2,3) - Move (3) to 293:142, and then move (2) to 215:146
01:12:032 (1) - This slider looks really ugly, please make it better
01:16:661 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - WHAT?
01:27:632 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - WHAT?
The kiai is too good to mod

I Love this map, you deserve a star :3

nice map br0

baraatje123 wrote:

From LordRaika's modding team queue

[General]
Kloyd's diff name is unrankable. Only the hardets name can be custom. Rename to Kloyd's Insane ⇒ yea i fix it lol
FIX the kiai ⇒ it's made for accent "gyuyyyyy" sounds, so i put those short Kiai with my purpose. maybe it's not unrankable

6 Kiai in 2 seconds? WHAT?
AFAIK, it unrankable to trigger kiai mulitple times in a row, just for fountains.
It actually happens twice, so fix it in both times
Difficulty curve might be to sharp, 1.46 - 2.09 - 3.47 - 4.81 - 5.40, Gap between NH is very high ⇒ 1.42 SD spread is not high imo

[Easy]
00:10:661 (3,1) - Imo, this doesn't flow really good. (3) goes to top right, but (1) starts left of that
00:14:775 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit Imo. Please make it with a grey point (For example at 356:356)
00:31:232 (1,2,3) - IMO, such sliders shouldn't be used in low diffs, as the high angled corner is quite sharp ⇒ keep, because it makes flow
00:39:461 (1,2) - This has a pretty bad flow, (1) ends going up, while (2) starts under it
00:50:432 - Add note ⇒ keep, finished with clap sounds as another all diff
01:05:518 (3) - Consider changing shape ⇒ i like current pattern

SPOILER

01:09:632 (1) - Delete Nc ⇒keep
01:11:004 (3) - Give NC ⇒ added
01:28:832 (1) - Weird slider, please change shape ⇒ keep same reason as above
01:30:890 (4,1) - Blanket can be a little better, move (1) to 104:76, grey point at 125:193, end at 244:228 ⇒ fixed with moving its tail
01:42:547 (1,2) - The red points make these sliders look ugly, consider changing it ⇒ keep same reason as above

[Normal]
00:09:290 (1,2) - Please don't stack in Normal (and below)
00:09:975 (3) - Looks unneccessary, there is no sound at the red tick
00:10:490 (4) - Ugly slider, due to red points
00:16:490 (2,3,4) - Please don't stack. Also, 1/2 might be too hard, as it's only normal ⇒ its almost straight line, so it's not hard imo
00:20:261 (1,1) - Using such sliders is heavily unrecommended, due to the players moving to fast
00:32:261 (4,1) - Improve blanket please
00:40:490 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - All these stacks. Un-stack them, please
00:50:432 - Add note ⇒ same reason as easy
01:08:604 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Kinda bad flow. The circle (2) flows really weird, due to (4,1), also, the slider (1) feels weird, due to sudden curve
01:15:118 (1) - Might go to low. (I know it's not good if they hit border on top, not sure when it hits it on bottom of the screen), also, it flows kinda badly with the previous note
01:20:604 (1,2,3) - Flows bad, due to slidershape

[Hard]
So many reverses
00:03:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to not use streams in hard difficulty, 5-plets might be too fast, due to "high" BPM (It's high for starter Hard players) ⇒ some maps with like those get be ranked, so keep
00:17:090 (1) - This feels weird, even though it follow the music good ⇒ keep
00:36:547 (1,1) - Blanket doesn't look really good

SPOILER

Taken at 00:37:786
00:43:404 (1) - Doesn't feel good, due to new music starting at the start of the reverse ⇒ it fit to music imo ;w;
00:46:147 (1,2) - Fix overlap please
01:02:261 (2,1) - Fix blanket please
01:33:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Tone it down a little ⇒ tone it uped to fit with next big clap sound
01:45:975 (1,1) - Blanket better

SPOILER

[Kloyd's Spaghetti]
Change diff name
/Off-topic, why spaghetti, AFAIK, that's not chinese. You'd be better of with something Chinese

00:03:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream looks messed up
00:15:975 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - Jumps feel weird and awkward, it doesn't look like they are 1/4 apart
00:25:061 (1,4) - Bad overlap
00:27:461 (2) - Move down to 492:349
00:45:461 (2,3) - (2) Feels weird being at the tail of (3)
01:03:461 (3,4,5) - Move them all to the left, by 1 coordinate
01:33:632 (1,1) - SV change might be too sudden
01:43:747 (1,2) - Jump is WAY TO BIG for being 1/4
01:44:261 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps feel a little weird and awkward
01:47:347 (1) - Spinner is unsnapped

[Spicy]
00:00:719 (1,2) - Not sure if 1/16 is rankable ⇒ maybe ok, but if i pointed out about this from QAT or BAT i'll fix
00:07:490 (2,3,1) - The 1/8 feels weird ⇒ it's following music like tremble sound
00:07:832 (2,1) - Ugly overlap ⇒ it's only stacked ;w;
00:08:090 (1) - Move to 383:149 ⇒ ^^
00:08:604 (1,3) - I really dislike this overlap ⇒ consider, but keep
00:09:290 (1) - AFAIK, such ends are unrankable, not sure though ⇒ maybe it's ok
00:13:575 (1,2) - Bad flow ⇒ it makes flow with previous slider, and make easier than ctrl+g ed one
00:14:090 (1,2) - ^^ ⇒ ^^
00:41:518 (1,2,3) - Jump to big ⇒ it put circle between sliders, so able to play them
00:42:890 (3,4) - 8,49 DS, WTF ⇒ fixed with shorten it to 1/2 slider
00:49:918 (2,3) - Move (3) to 293:142, and then move (2) to 215:146 ⇒ yea as you say, i tried to stack them but wtf it can't be completed one after i fix and reenter edit...i try to repair them ;w;
01:12:032 (1) - This slider looks really ugly, please make it better ⇒ it makes from left to down with funny slider(∩・▽・∩)
01:16:661 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - WHAT?　⇒ it's the best fun part with this map
01:27:632 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - WHAT?
The kiai is too good to mod

I Love this map, you deserve a star :3

fixed commented parts and no commented
thanks for mod and your precious star! (∩・▽・∩)

VINXIS wrote:

nice map br0

thank you for shooting VINXIS

General
問題ないと思います

Spicy
01:17:689 - 緑野線がずれてるし直しておこう
00:01:746 (1) - 前後のパターン考えるとここにNCはいらないと思います。
00:05:690 (1) - 00:06:204 (1) - この2個も色変える意味ないと思うので消しとこう
00:08:090 (1) - 完全に重なってるとタイミング読みにくいし、この後の00:08:090 (1,1,2) - も含めてCtr+G使ってこんな感じに変えるのはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/epI8j/be3e6a3e96.jpg
00:09:632 (1) - 1個前のsliderとの重なり方がちょっと雑だったので、waypoint増やしてもう少し丁寧に重ねてあげてみてはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/epIjZ/7454c06833.jpg
00:10:232 (x)-後ろに拾いやすそうな音があるし add note ?
00:10:490 (4) - これのsliderendは何をフォローしてるんだろ？ 00:10:661 - ここのスネアの音で切ったほうがいいと思います
00:15:461 (1) - 00:13:575 (1,2,3,1) - この辺の流れ綺麗だしここも合わせて同じ角度に伸ばしてみてはどうでしょうか
00:18:032 (1,1) - NCいらないと思います
00:23:518 (1,1) - ここも
00:28:832 (1) - ^
00:49:232 (1) - ここもslider1個だけで色変える意味もないので消そう

Kloyd's spaghetti
01:17:690 - Spicyと同じ
00:00:632 (2,3) - ものっすごく見にくいんだけど、これずらしてあげちゃダメ？　http://puu.sh/epJeJ/d90aafcf4a.jpg
00:41:175 (3) - 位置が雑に感じるんだけど、もう少し下に下げてあげたほうが(1)→(2)の流れと同じになってよさそう
00:50:090 (1) - SVの変化でNC付けてるっぽけど、ここは同じカラー内で他にsliderないからつけなくてよさそう
01:43:747 (1,2) - この間が不自然な距離にジャンプしてるしもっと自然につながるように距離狭くしてあげよ http://puu.sh/epJUz/dab96b2ad3.jpg

Hard
00:00:718 (2) - Hardってことを考慮したらリバース1個減らした音取りのほうがよさそう。今のままだと出落ちになる気がする。
00:06:547 (1) - 00:06:375 - ここの音拾ってないのに前のnoteと距離が短いから、勘違いして押しちゃいそう。距離離すか00:06:375 - に3連打置くとかしてあげたほうがいいと思う
00:08:175 - add note
00:23:175 - 急に音の取り方変わってて変だからnote追加して00:23:347 (1) - ここを1/2sliderに変更しよう
00:24:204 (1) - endを00:24:547 - にして00:24:718 - にnote追加したほうが自然な音取りに聞こえる
00:26:604 (1) - NC消そう
00:27:290 (4) - ここにNCいれて00:27:804 (1) - こっち消したほうがパートとして合ってる。
01:00:032 (1,2,1,2,3) - 後半の音が強いし、前半をアンチジャンプっぽくして後半の3つのnoteで飛ばしてあげたほうが曲に合う。音取りはそのままで配置はこんな感じhttp://puu.sh/estnV/c4fd1d125e.jpg
01:20:175 - add note ここみたいな感じで急に音外す場所があるのがすごく気になる。

Normal
00:17:347 (1,2,3,4) - イモムシみたいな配置続いてて見栄え結構悪くなるから、00:18:032 (3) - こういうnote削ってあげて配置でもっと遊んでもいいかも。初心者に対してplayもし易くなると思う。
00:19:918 (3) - ほかの難易度には使われてないホイッスルがnormalにはついててちょっと違和感あった。
00:27:975 (3) - y軸を230ぐらいまで下げよう。きっと流れが良くなる。
00:48:890 (3,1,2,3) - こんな感じの音取りのほうがplayしやすいかなーと。http://puu.sh/esu7X/b30da6f168.jpg

Easy
00:14:775 (4) - カクカクしたsliderより次の00:15:975 (5) - に対応した感じで丸いsliderにしたほうがよさそう http://puu.sh/esuS7/ffaad261cb.jpg
00:41:518 (3) - 微妙な差だけど、少し左にずらして前のsliderからあまり左右にAIMさせない位置に置いた方がやりやすい
01:02:432 (2) - DSのmiss?

以上です！

Laurier wrote:

General
問題ないと思います

Spicy
01:17:689 - 緑野線がずれてるし直しておこう　！！気づかなかった、直しました！
00:01:746 (1) - 前後のパターン考えるとここにNCはいらないと思います。　
00:05:690 (1) - 00:06:204 (1) - この2個も色変える意味ないと思うので消しとこう　１個目はNC消しましたけど２個目は距離変わってる＋1/8スライダーの強調なのでNCはそのままにしました
00:08:090 (1) - 完全に重なってるとタイミング読みにくいし、この後の00:08:090 (1,1,2) - も含めてCtr+G使ってこんな感じに変えるのはどうでしょうか 　http://puu.sh/epI8j/be3e6a3e96.jpg　00:08:090 (1) - をctrl+Gしました！後の二つは前後のaimの流れも考えてkeepしました
00:09:632 (1) - 1個前のsliderとの重なり方がちょっと雑だったので、waypoint増やしてもう少し丁寧に重ねてあげてみてはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/epIjZ/7454c06833.jpg　GOD!
00:10:232 (x)-後ろに拾いやすそうな音があるし add note ? ちょっとここはkeepで！
00:10:490 (4) - これのsliderendは何をフォローしてるんだろ？ 00:10:661 - ここのスネアの音で切ったほうがいいと思います　ご指摘どおり直しました！
00:15:461 (1) - 00:13:575 (1,2,3,1) - この辺の流れ綺麗だしここも合わせて同じ角度に伸ばしてみてはどうでしょうか　そうしました！
00:18:032 (1,1) - NCいらないと思います
00:23:518 (1,1) - ここも
00:28:832 (1) - ^
00:49:232 (1) - ここもslider1個だけで色変える意味もないので消そう

Kloyd's spaghetti
01:17:690 - Spicyと同じ
00:00:632 (2,3) - ものっすごく見にくいんだけど、これずらしてあげちゃダメ？　http://puu.sh/epJeJ/d90aafcf4a.jpg
00:41:175 (3) - 位置が雑に感じるんだけど、もう少し下に下げてあげたほうが(1)→(2)の流れと同じになってよさそう
00:50:090 (1) - SVの変化でNC付けてるっぽけど、ここは同じカラー内で他にsliderないからつけなくてよさそう
01:43:747 (1,2) - この間が不自然な距離にジャンプしてるしもっと自然につながるように距離狭くしてあげよ http://puu.sh/epJUz/dab96b2ad3.jpg

Hard
00:00:718 (2) - Hardってことを考慮したらリバース1個減らした音取りのほうがよさそう。今のままだと出落ちになる気がする。
00:06:547 (1) - 00:06:375 - ここの音拾ってないのに前のnoteと距離が短いから、勘違いして押しちゃいそう。距離離すか00:06:375 - に3連打置くとかしてあげたほうがいいと思う ３連のカタチで修正しました
00:08:175 - add note
00:23:175 - 急に音の取り方変わってて変だからnote追加して00:23:347 (1) - ここを1/2sliderに変更しよう
00:24:204 (1) - endを00:24:547 - にして00:24:718 - にnote追加したほうが自然な音取りに聞こえる　たしかに！！！
00:26:604 (1) - NC消そう
00:27:290 (4) - ここにNCいれて00:27:804 (1) - こっち消したほうがパートとして合ってる。
01:00:032 (1,2,1,2,3) - 後半の音が強いし、前半をアンチジャンプっぽくして後半の3つのnoteで飛ばしてあげたほうが曲に合う。音取りはそのままで配置はこんな感じhttp://puu.sh/estnV/c4fd1d125e.jpg　こっちのほうがしっくり来ますね！
01:20:175 - add note ここみたいな感じで急に音外す場所があるのがすごく気になる。　Hard で３連をどれだけ置いていいかわからずびびって置いてなかったのです;w;

Normal
00:17:347 (1,2,3,4) - イモムシみたいな配置続いてて見栄え結構悪くなるから、00:18:032 (3) - こういうnote削ってあげて配置でもっと遊んでもいいかも。初心者に対してplayもし易くなると思う。
00:19:918 (3) - ほかの難易度には使われてないホイッスルがnormalにはついててちょっと違和感あった。
00:27:975 (3) - y軸を230ぐらいまで下げよう。きっと流れが良くなる。　めっちゃよくなりました(∩・▽・∩)
00:48:890 (3,1,2,3) - こんな感じの音取りのほうがplayしやすいかなーと。http://puu.sh/esu7X/b30da6f168.jpg

Easy
00:14:775 (4) - カクカクしたsliderより次の00:15:975 (5) - に対応した感じで丸いsliderにしたほうがよさそう http://puu.sh/esuS7/ffaad261cb.jpg
00:41:518 (3) - 微妙な差だけど、少し左にずらして前のsliderからあまり左右にAIMさせない位置に置いた方がやりやすい　実際にやってみたら結構体感変わりました
01:02:432 (2) - DSのmiss?

以上です！

赤字以外のノーコメント含む全箇所修正です！modありがとうございました

Oh, just a small suggestion
Use this http://puu.sh/et3kj/180ab31ca1.wav as hitnormal.wav
You might need to rename to soft-hitnormaln (n is number of set != 3/4 as those two are already present)
No Kudosu

baraatje123 wrote:

Oh, just a small suggestion
Use this http://puu.sh/et3kj/180ab31ca1.wav as hitnormal.wav
You might need to rename to soft-hitnormaln (n is number of set != 3/4 as those two are already present)
No Kudosu

wow thanks for nice suggestion baraatje! it sounds fit to this map
though in this mapset, not only many hitsounds are included but also many volumes changes.
so if i add it as hitnormal, maybe lost their presence ;w;

i'm sorry to say don't add it as hitnormal, but consider to add as hitcrap or whistle!!

From my modding queue





Overall this map is pretty good but it requires some work. The map is a bit messy and some of the shapes are really odd. However, after reading my mod you know what the problem is. It's the extremely short combos and the kiai time. I understand they're for HP regen, but there are too many new combos. It makes the map too flashy and makes some of the hard points pointless as most of the comobs are just 1-2 notes. Like I said I suggest you make a lighter insane mode to fill the difficulty gap between hard and insane. However, I do salute you for modding this song. This is a VERY hard song to map. Good job.

heyo, dropping by
mapped this song as well, and have a mp3 that imo sounds a lot nicer http://puu.sh/euYg3.mp3
offset should be 1498 for this

no kd, but good luck!

Xelasto wrote:

From my modding queue

Easy

00:09:290 (1,2,3) - This looks slanted. Fix it fixed
00:12:032 (1,2) - I know it's hard, but try and blanket better. it's already ok imo ;w;
00:15:975 (2) - Curve more it's also already ok, because blanket is made neatly and making more curve is factor to be hard
00:14:775 (1) - Remake this slider. It's a bezier one, which is not good for curves. is the rink correct? if it so, keep it ._.
01:05:518 (3) - Make this a more even zig zag more curve makes hard to aim for new players i think
01:23:347 (1,3) - Improve blanket fixed
01:35:690 (3) - Why the extra point in the middle? Makes it look weird. moved second grid to get it be more natural curve
01:37:061 (1) - Move the top point to the right a tiny bit sure
00:15:975 (2,3) - AI mod says there is a distance error. sry o_o fixed
Do not turn kiai time off and on multiple times. It is unrankable.

This is your best difficulty. I won't bother you about short combos since it's fine in easy. Good job.

Normal

01:02:775 (3,4) - Blanket better keep it, cuz if i change them to be blanket, i have ti make high angled curve and i think it's ugly.
01:04:147 (1) - ^ omg fixed!
01:16:147 (2) - Make straight adjust positions
01:35:004 (3,4,5) - This doesn't look too good. Or mabye that's just me keep it ;w;
01:39:118 (5) - Blanket better fixed
HP drain 4 to make consistency between E-N-H each diff, i keep it
Do not turn kiai time off and on multiple times. It is unrankable.

Very good difficulty, however your problem with short combos is very bad here. Most of the combos in this are like 1-2 notes. That should only be for easy. Otherwise this is a good difficulty.

Hard

00:01:575 (1,2,1,2) - No need for NC (New combo)
00:13:575 (2) - Fix blanket a bit fixed
00:23:861 - Add a note or slider
00:25:575 (5) - Curve less for better blanket down a bit to be blanket
00:30:204 (2,2) - Stack these
00:34:490 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - What's up with the NC? This part isn't that hard. Even without the NC it would give quite a bit of health
00:48:890 (1) - Move this up 1 grid for symmetry it's already symmetry by put them with same Y axis
01:01:404 (1,2,1) - Fix these blankets up. Doesn't look good.
01:03:632 (2,1) - ^
01:21:118 (1,2,1,2) - Blanket better it's copied pattern, so keep it
The kiai time has way too many New combos. This is hard. People expect a hard map.
Do not turn kiai time off and on multiple times. It is unrankable.
Approach rate down by 1 for readability consider

Good job on this difficulty. Just don't do so many combos

Kloyd's Another

00:04:147 (2) - Curve less
00:11:690 (9,10,1) - This looks weird, change 9's shape
00:13:232 (1) - This is unrankable. It goes out of screen
00:27:975 (1) - This is a weird shape. Change it up a bit
00:29:175 (3) - Fix blanket
01:01:918 (4,5) - Don't touch. Looks weird
01:07:404 (4,1) - These bends don't look too good, Mabye ctrl J 1?
01:33:632 (1,1) - These overlap way too much, spread it out a bit.
01:41:004 (1) - This is really weird, mabye bend it around 2?
Approach Rate and Overall difficulty down by 1 so it's more readable
01:47:347 (1) - This isn't snapped
Do not turn kiai time off and on multiple times. It is unrankable.

Sorry if this mod didn't seem like it was very useful, this is my first time modding a stream map. Anyway your biggest problem is that you have too many unnecessary combos like 00:16:833 (1). Also, I suggest making an easier insane mode too fill the huge gap between hard and insane (and I mean HUUUGE gap)

Overall this map is pretty good but it requires some work. The map is a bit messy and some of the shapes are really odd. However, after reading my mod you know what the problem is. It's the extremely short combos and the kiai time. I understand they're for HP regen, but there are too many new combos. It makes the map too flashy and makes some of the hard points pointless as most of the comobs are just 1-2 notes. Like I said I suggest you make a lighter insane mode to fill the difficulty gap between hard and insane. However, I do salute you for modding this song. This is a VERY hard song to map. Good job.

About Kiai: i put short Kiai for accents on beep sound, and maybe it's not unrankable(if it so, i fix it)

i fixed blue lettered and no commented ones!

thanks Xelasto, it was so helpful mod

captin1 wrote:

heyo, dropping by
mapped this song as well, and have a mp3 that imo sounds a lot nicer http://puu.sh/euYg3.mp3
offset should be 1498 for this

no kd, but good luck!

thanks captin, i'll replace it after modder finish their mod!

changed

Hi! From my modding queue! Hope this helps . Good luck~

[Spicy]

00:05:444 (2) - move to 349|250
00:06:987 (3,5) - Stack better.
00:09:730 (1,1) - This part is confusing enough, (confusing hard, not confusing bad), make 00:09:730 (1) - a bit neater? or less weird in shape?
00:14:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really consider another pattern here...This part is really confusing... A lot of overlaps. I get that you are going with the back-forth pattern but you could accomplish this without so much overlapping no? The sliders are in the opposite direction already, so flow is already quite poor (of course, this is extra so I won't be picky about it) but the lack of flow + complete overlap makes this pattern rather poor imo ;P.
00:50:187 (1,2,3) - Stack slider-ends better.
01:08:701 (1,2) - Ctrl G 1 and re-position. It seems really weird to break flow here with 1 going in the opposite direction. The music certainly doesn't suggest this, and you had a similar combo right before.

[Another]

00:14:015 - You miss a strong beat by covering it up with a slider end. You could try shortening 1 to a 3/4th slider and mapping a circle here.
01:03:387 (2,3) - Stack better.
01:08:358 (1,3) - ^
01:09:387 (3,4,5) - This part doesn't flow well.
01:15:558 (1,2) - How about a rhythm like this?
01:27:987 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G 3, and swap position in timeline with 2. Something like this.

[Hard]

00:36:987 (1,2) - Could still fix this blanket a bit.
00:50:187 - Could map a circle here. Reduce the repeat sliders by 2.
01:07:330 (1) - This note is held in the music. Consider making this a slider.

[Normal]

01:17:101 (3,4,1,1) - This part feels really cramped for a Normal.
01:26:187 (3,1) - Fix up this blanket.
01:27:558 (2) - Minor, but bend this curve upwards instead of downwards?
01:44:187 (5,2) - These repeat sliders don't really fit the beat well imo.

[Easy]

00:15:215 (1) - This curve just looks a bit off imo. Not symmetrical.
00:20:701 (1) - Move the mid/end control points: Like this

monstrata wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue! Hope this helps . Good luck~

[Spicy]

00:05:444 (2) - move to 349|250 i think current position is nice
00:06:987 (3,5) - Stack better. fixed
00:09:730 (1,1) - This part is confusing enough, (confusing hard, not confusing bad), make 00:09:730 (1) - a bit neater? or less weird in shape? i like this form　；ｗ；
00:14:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really consider another pattern here...This part is really confusing... A lot of overlaps. I get that you are going with the back-forth pattern but you could accomplish this without so much overlapping no? The sliders are in the opposite direction already, so flow is already quite poor (of course, this is extra so I won't be picky about it) but the lack of flow + complete overlap makes this pattern rather poor imo ;P.　some testplayers passed here for 1st time(it means players usual play extra), so i keep it now. but i consider to make another pattern
00:50:187 (1,2,3) - Stack slider-ends better. sure
01:08:701 (1,2) - Ctrl G 1 and re-position. It seems really weird to break flow here with 1 going in the opposite direction. The music certainly doesn't suggest this, and you had a similar combo right before. ctrl+g pattern is more ugly than current one, and maybe it's not affect to play

[Another]

00:14:015 - You miss a strong beat by covering it up with a slider end. You could try shortening 1 to a 3/4th slider and mapping a circle here.
01:03:387 (2,3) - Stack better.
01:08:358 (1,3) - ^
01:09:387 (3,4,5) - This part doesn't flow well.
01:15:558 (1,2) - How about a rhythm like this?
01:27:987 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G 3, and swap position in timeline with 2. Something like this.

[Hard]

00:36:987 (1,2) - Could still fix this blanket a bit. sure
00:50:187 - Could map a circle here. Reduce the repeat sliders by 2. nice suggestion!
01:07:330 (1) - This note is held in the music. Consider making this a slider. keep it

[Normal]

01:17:101 (3,4,1,1) - This part feels really cramped for a Normal. it's ok imo, so keep ;w;
01:26:187 (3,1) - Fix up this blanket. sure
01:27:558 (2) - Minor, but bend this curve upwards instead of downwards? i like this pattern sry
01:44:187 (5,2) - These repeat sliders don't really fit the beat well imo. fixed to be as same as 00:16:415 (1,2) -

[Easy]

00:15:215 (1) - This curve just looks a bit off imo. Not symmetrical. fixed
00:20:701 (1) - Move the mid/end control points: Like this fixed

thanks for your nice mod!

m4m

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:28:244 (3) - change to a slider end at 00:28:415 - to follow the heavy beat? would be a bit harder to play but it fits the song well

[Normal]
01:45:558 (2) - this sldier doesn't fit the song well. you'd better to change another rhythm to follow the heavy beat at 01:46:072 -

[Hard]
the difficulty setting is too low, raise HP by 1 and OD by 0.5 at least plz

[Spicy]
some of objects are hidden by other objects, they're hard to read:

• 
  00:08:530 (1) -
  00:09:387 (3,4) -
  00:14:187 (2) - 00:14:701 (2,3,4) - 00:15:215 (1) -
  00:20:015 (1) -
  00:32:273 (2,2,2) -

some of sliders seems are unreasonable, they better to be circles:

• 01:17:272 (1,2,3,4) -
  01:28:244 (1,2,3,4) -

01:01:501 (1) - change to a short reverse slider?

nice map, but only 2 things I'm worry about:
the diff gap between Normal and Hard. the gap is a bit big to me
the patterns in Spicy diffs, they are a bit overmapped imo. if you can fix those hidden patterns and change some sliders to circles, the diff would be much better
these are only my personally opinions, if you can get any other team members' support and they are willing to bubble this, feel free to find my again

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:28:244 (3) - change to a slider end at 00:28:415 - to follow the heavy beat? would be a bit harder to play but it fits the song well　fixed

[Normal]
01:45:558 (2) - this sldier doesn't fit the song well. you'd better to change another rhythm to follow the heavy beat at 01:46:072 - replaced notes

[Hard]
the difficulty setting is too low, raise HP by 1 and OD by 0.5 at least plz done

[Spicy]
some of objects are hidden by other objects, they're hard to read:

• 
  00:08:530 (1) - fixed
  00:09:387 (3,4) - fixed
  00:14:187 (2) - 00:14:701 (2,3,4) - 00:15:215 (1) - fixed
  00:20:015 (1) - keep
  00:32:273 (2,2,2) - keep

some of sliders seems are unreasonable, they better to be circles:

• 01:17:272 (1,2,3,4) - sry keep it,these are expressions to make accents with beep sounds and the most important parts for me in this diff ;w;
  01:28:244 (1,2,3,4) -

01:01:501 (1) - change to a short reverse slider? ok

nice map, but only 2 things I'm worry about:
the diff gap between Normal and Hard. the gap is a bit big to me
the patterns in Spicy diffs, they are a bit overmapped imo. if you can fix those hidden patterns and change some sliders to circles, the diff would be much better
these are only my personally opinions, if you can get any other team members' support and they are willing to bubble this, feel free to find my again

thanks wcx! i try to get more opinion about your suggestion

thanks Kloyd, updated~(∩・▽・∩)

As your request


There's a gap between Another and Extra diffs. anyway nice map :3
Good luck with your map.

Fortune wrote:

As your request

Easy

1. 00:01:501 (1) - It seems better to bend slightly and replace 00:03:044 (2) to be headed to 00:01:501 (1)　keep it, i want to make looks simple at first in easy, and moving 00:03:044 (2) - cause DS issue ;w;
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2. 00:09:044 (3) - bend a little current angle is nice to me
3. 00:35:444 (2) - x-axis 1grid right, y-axis 1grid up fixed
4. 01:01:844 (1) - it sould be bended to opposite side foor the natural flow. btw 01:03:215 (3) is okay. if you want a symmetric shapes, then try this. you can do that by moving 01:00:472 (1) little upper. sry, i like it
   
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5. 01:10:072 (1) - remove NC DS is different from another, so keep
6. 01:11:444 (1) - ^ removed
7. 01:28:758, 01:28:844 , 01:29:015, 01:29:101, 01:29:187 - useless timelines these are all used for Kiai end
8. 01:28:930 (2,1) - you would rahter make them straight. if you want 01:28:587 (1,2,1) triangle, try this. that's good!
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9. 01:37:501 (1) - last slider point -> 197||95 moved

Normal

1. 00:00:815 (1,2,3,4) - i'm quite doubted that those rythm are placed by 3/2terms continuely which beginners might miss the timing. isn't it? maybe it's no problem
2. 00:11:615 (5) - you can delete this note as you didn't place a note at 00:14:187 both of 1st and 3rd parts made as same, so i don't have to make also here imo
3. 00:15:730 (2) - ^ keep
4. 00:17:615 (3,1,2) - better flow please keep
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5. 00:23:101 ~ 00:24:472 - how about this rythm? it looks better than 3/2 term in current rythm. nice suggestion, changed!
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6. 00:27:387 - make a slider which starts at 00:27:387 and ends at 00:27:901 keep, i think 00:27:901 (1) - circle is important
7. 00:42:644 (1) - 2nd point -> 299||126 moved
8. 01:05:958 (3,4) - make it pararell please keep it
9. 01:25:844 (2) - 296||243 for flow with 01:24:815 (3,1) ? maybe not need to be zigzag
10. 01:30:987 (1) - 3rd point -> 310||155
11. 01:39:558 (5) - not a problem but 310||247 looks more pretty. if then, 01:40:244 (1) - 333||247 keep
12. 01:43:330 (2,3,4) - there wasn't any triple stack in whole map before. even there's no noticable sound for triple stack, so newbies should be confused. please change 01:43:330 (2,3) into a slider. changed not to be stacked
13. 01:44:701 (2) - rythm suggestion keep

Hard

1. 00:00:815 (1,2,1) - these distances are very confusing since each note has same distace but different term. you can solve this problem by this pattern. changed as your suggestion
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2. 01:00:815 (2) - NC keep
3. 01:45:558 (3,1) - pararell? changed
   cool diff. It might be more awsome if you use more slant sliders.

Kloyd's Another

1. 00:01:758 - 노트 추가해주세요. 뭔가 허전한 느낌이 들어요.
2. 01:11:444 (1,2) - blanket
3. 01:16:072 (3,4,5) - 자세히 들어보면 01:15:558 (1,2) 와 01:16:587 (6,7) 와 같은 부분인데 리듬도 똑같이 해주시는게? 01:13:330 (3,4) - 여기서도 그렇게 하셨구여

Spicy

1. 00:13:672 (3) - ctrl g did ctrl+H
2. 00:27:387 (1) - ^ keep
3. 00:29:443 (4,1) - this stack is unnatural. jump is better here to repeat aim flow, keep it
4. 00:32:015 (1,1,1) - good idea but make their shape better change their pattern more good to look
5. 00:50:100 (7,1,2,3) - overlap i think it's not overlapped
   i like the stream patttern at kiai part

There's a gap between Another and Extra diffs. anyway nice map :3
Good luck with your map.

thanks for mod Fortune, some of suggestion is so nice for me

from in game chat


red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]

1. やりたい事は分かるけどサビ中のKiaiはやりすぎだと思う、こういう可変が激しいとこ、ストリーム中にピカピカされると鬱陶しい(直球)
2. 全Diff Read in 1500引いて
3. 思ったより時間かかったからE.N.Hはまたの機会
4. Easyの01:17:615 - 01:28:587 - Normalの01:12:815 - 緑線が２本引いてあるから消して

[Kloyd's Another]

1. midori sen 2hon arimasu
   
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2. 00:01:158 (3) - kore1/6 rhythm jyanaidesuka?6noga hamatte kikoemasu
3. 00:04:587 - 00:04:930 - 00:05:272 - add whistle backmusic nimo auto omoimasu
4. 00:06:472 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:08:530 - shuutenno whistle iranaito omoimasu,tugi no clap ga kyuukutu desu
6. 00:11:958 - tukerunara Clap jya naidesuka? 00:12:130 - kottiniha whistle attemo iito omoundesuga
7. 00:21:901 (5) - kore iwakan attakedo kaiketu saku mitukarimasenndesita,ichio atamano Clap hazusite nasi nisuruka whistle tukeru dakede kekkou mashini narimasita
8. 00:25:330 (4) - Finish doudesuka kanari takaioto natteru node auto omoimasu
9. 00:43:158 (2,3) - kono nagare muri wo kannjimasita konnano jya dame desuka?
   
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10. 00:45:387 - Finish attemo iito omoimasu
11. 00:48:644 (5) - Clap mo doudesu? auto omoimasu
12. 00:50:187 (10) - kore 1/2 slider no houga yokunaidesuka?
13. 00:50:187 (10,11) - keep nara koko Clap tukeruto iito omoimasu
14. 00:50:872 (2) - kore stack sasenai houga suki desu,ato kokokara Break ha samishiidesu Insane nara hirotte hoshii
15. 01:00:472 (1,1,1) - sekkaku desusi Vol wo sukosidutu agemasenka?
16. 01:12:472 - Clap mo tukemasennka?
17. 01:18:215 - Finish?
18. 01:19:844 (1) - additions Normal Finish toka ikaga?
19. 01:20:872 - kokomo Finish atte iito omoimasu
20. 01:21:558 (1) - koko whistle yori Clap toka Finish nohouga iikato,01:21:387 - kokoto oto tekini kawannainode 01:21:387 - kottini whistle mo tukeruto iikannji ni narisou
21. 01:22:330 (6) - kotti whistle ni site 01:22:415 (1) - kotti Clap nohouga yokunaidesuka?
22. 01:25:072 (3) - Pattern tekinimo kokoha whistle nanodeha?iwakann sugokattadesu
23. 01:31:415 (6) - kokomo Clap yori whistle01:31:501 (7,3,1) - kokoni Clap okuto iito omoimasu
24. 01:32:015 (1) - koitu ha Finish mo hosiidesu
25. 01:38:101 (3) - kore torunara01:37:758 - kotti jyanaidesuka? torunisitemo 01:37:844 (3) - kore nobasu tokanoga yosasou
26. 01:40:844 (3) - ^
27. 01:41:444 - Finish,auto omoimasu]
28. 01:45:387 (4) - Clap hosii
    
    koukaitete aredakedo dore ga aomoji no teian ka midurakute wakaranakatta desu lol
    kirei na humen desita

[Spicy]

1. Aimodが何か言ってる、こういうのは上で一回ずらして元に戻せば消える
   
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2. 緑線２重
   
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3. ^
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4. 00:01:159 (1,2) - ここ1/6じゃない？こっちの方がハマってると思うし試してみて
   
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5. 00:06:987 (3) - こういうのは少し左に傾けたほうが流れると思うよ！
6. 00:13:158 (1) - これ00:13:272 - ここのwhistleかなり浮いて聞こえる、外していいと思うしつけたいなら折り返し地点じゃない？
7. 00:22:672 (8,1) - これなんで上とNC付ける位置違うの？ｗ普通に00:22:415 (5) - これにつけて00:21:730 - 00:22:072 - どっちかのNC消していいと思う
8. 00:22:758 (1) - NCいらない
9. 00:24:301 (7,8) - add Clap　後00:23:615 - これもう１０％くらいVol上げてよくないかな、小さすぎるしそんな音極端に下げるとこでもないと思う
10. 00:25:672 (2) - ここも上と言いたいこと同じ、whistleいらなくないかな、かなり高い音なってるのに低音のホイッスルには違和感しかない
11. 00:31:158 (2) - これも終点whistleいらないと思う、次のClapまでが窮屈で気持ちよくない
12. 00:28:930 (1,2,3) - なんか不格好だし２をx312y312あたりに動かして普通に三角形作ったほうがよさげ
13. 00:39:215 (1) - こういうの多いけど終点何フォローしてるかイマイチ謎だし00:39:472 - ここまで伸ばしたい感ある、現状だと次のキックへの流れが気になったし
14. 00:40:930 (2) - やりたいことは分かるけど、こういうのblanketさせるより00:40:587 (1) - 終点スタックさせた方が次とのメリハリ付いていいと思うよ！
15. 00:42:215 (2) - スローパートでこの連打の開き方はまずいと思った、こっちのが流れるくないか
    
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16. 00:47:015 - 00:47:358 - add Note
17. 00:47:787 (6) - これももう１往復足したほうが曲に合うで、前と繋げて７連でもいいけど任せる
18. 00:48:644 (5) - ここは音強いからキックよりサークルにした方が気持ちいいと思われ
19. 00:50:358 (2) - ここも言いたいこと同じだけど配置気に入ってそうだしいいやｗ
20. 00:53:701 - 00:54:044 - 音あるのに区切ったことに違和感しかなかった、ExDiffだし普通にろんぐすとりーむにしよ
21. 00:56:358 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - こっちはまあ単発でパターン入ってるからこのままでもいいと思うけどね
    01:01:501 (1) - 流石にVol下げてまで1/16はやりすぎじゃない？８でいい
22. 01:11:958 (3,1,2) - こういうのさ、こんなふうにした方が流れるしかっこよくね？01:12:387 (2) - は３の頭にスタックで
    
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23. 01:20:187 (5) - ボディwhistle多分ミスだし消してどうぞ
24. 01:20:701 (4,5,1,4,1,4) - こういうのさ傾けたほうが映えるくない？
    
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25. 01:26:701 (2,3) - 細かいけどちゃんとスタックさせよ
26. 01:31:672 (1) - これも分かるんだけど伸ばすにしても01:31:844 - までだと思うけどね、この連打地点で01:31:844 - 01:31:930 - の強いバック音無視は違和感しかなかった
27. 01:35:958 (1,2) - これも取るにしてもこうじゃない？現状だと違和感しかないのと前のパターンと比べて読みにくい
    
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28. 01:40:930 (3) - 最初と言いたいこと同じで01:41:158 - ここまでリバースさせない？
29. 01:41:958 (2) - ^Clapが窮屈
    
    
    なんか全体的にNC多すぎてめちゃやりづらかった00:48:815 (1) - 01:18:815 (1) - 01:21:558 (1) - 01:24:301 (1) - まあその他もろもろ意義が見いだせない綺麗だから入れました感あるNCはいらないと思う、こういう譜面は少ないほうが読みやすくカッコイイし曲にもあってると思うんだけどね
    、ワンポイントとかで使うのはいいと思うけど使いすぎ感あった
    
    こういう譜面Modあんましないからめちゃ時間かかったよねｗ
    hitsound見る時間なかったから低Diffとかはまたchat頂戴な

mod time:3 hour

gl

みなさんこんにちは。リクエストされてきました

General

1. BG size seems to unrankable factor. I highly recommend changing the BG size 4:3 or 16:9 ratio.
   
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Easy

1. slider-tick no otoga ooki desu. 10% kurai herasu no ha ikaga deshouka?
2. 00:27:215 (2) - startを00:27:387 こちらで始まったほうがもっといいと思います. soshite add finish. end point ha onaji tokoro desu
3. 00:39:215 - muda na timing sen. I highly recommend add 1 circle or delete this timing point.
4. 00:50:872 - add drain break like this?
   
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5. 01:17:615 - ><
6. 01:28:587 - kochimo
7. 01:32:015 - whistle
8. 01:46:415 (1) - how about adding crescendo like this? 曲を締めるのにぴったりだと思います
   
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Normal

1. same as Easy. slider-tick no otoga ooki desu. 10% kurai herasu no ha ikaga deshouka?
2. 01:46:415 (1) - same as Easy
   
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Hard

1. 00:05:444 (2) - approaching circle seems to really hard to read
2. 00:12:472 (1) - hitsound ga chotto okashii. 1 ban no atama ni clap no kawari ni whistle, shitpo ni whistle wo hazushita houga motto niau to omoimasu.
3. 00:20:530 (5,1) - hitsoundの音が違いすぎて重なることはあまり似合わないと思います。stack on 2 instead of 1?
   
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4. 01:47:615 (2) - same as 00:05:444 (2)

Kloyd's Another

1. 00:45:387 - 피니시 빠진듯
2. 00:50:872 (2) - ^
3. 01:02:358 (4) - 갑자기 거리가 줄어드니까 플레이하기 좀 불편하네요. 살짝 띄우시는건 어떰?
4. 01:20:358 (5) - HP바에 살짝 닿음. 저난이도 뿐만 아니라 고난이도에서도 까다로운 플레이어들이 상당히 많습니다.
5. 01:23:787 - 무쓸모 타이밍
6. 01:32:015 - 여기두
7. 01:47:787 (1) - 디크레센도 형식으로 타이밍선을 넣는건 어때요? 노래 시마이하는데 참 좋을거같은데
   
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Spicy

1. 00:05:444 (2) - これはすごくやばい気がします。AutoでPlayすると、Approach circleがすごく見にくい
2. 00:08:872 (3,1) - swap NC?
3. 00:32:357 (2) - unsnapped one o.o!
4. 01:01:844 - 不必要なタイミングポイントっぽいです
5. 01:37:844 (1) - Ctrl + GをしたほうがもっとPlayしやすいです
6. 01:46:415 (1) - Slider endをすこし右に移すのはいかがでしょうか？ちょっと重なったのが気になります
7. 01:47:787 (1) - same as Easy
   
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map ha hotondo dekiagatta moyou desu. GL anyway

-Nanaka- wrote:

from in game chat


red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
bold: should fix.


[General]

1. やりたい事は分かるけどサビ中のKiaiはやりすぎだと思う、こういう可変が激しいとこ、ストリーム中にピカピカされると鬱陶しい(直球)
2. 全Diff Read in 1500引いて
3. 思ったより時間かかったからE.N.Hはまたの機会
4. Easyの01:17:615 - 01:28:587 - Normalの01:12:815 - 緑線が２本引いてあるから消して

⇒全修正しときます！

[Kloyd's Another]

1. midori sen 2hon arimasu
   
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2. 00:01:158 (3) - kore1/6 rhythm jyanaidesuka?6noga hamatte kikoemasu
3. 00:04:587 - 00:04:930 - 00:05:272 - add whistle backmusic nimo auto omoimasu
4. 00:06:472 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:08:530 - shuutenno whistle iranaito omoimasu,tugi no clap ga kyuukutu desu
6. 00:11:958 - tukerunara Clap jya naidesuka? 00:12:130 - kottiniha whistle attemo iito omoundesuga
7. 00:21:901 (5) - kore iwakan attakedo kaiketu saku mitukarimasenndesita,ichio atamano Clap hazusite nasi nisuruka whistle tukeru dakede kekkou mashini narimasita
8. 00:25:330 (4) - Finish doudesuka kanari takaioto natteru node auto omoimasu
9. 00:43:158 (2,3) - kono nagare muri wo kannjimasita konnano jya dame desuka?
   
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10. 00:45:387 - Finish attemo iito omoimasu
11. 00:48:644 (5) - Clap mo doudesu? auto omoimasu
12. 00:50:187 (10) - kore 1/2 slider no houga yokunaidesuka?
13. 00:50:187 (10,11) - keep nara koko Clap tukeruto iito omoimasu
14. 00:50:872 (2) - kore stack sasenai houga suki desu,ato kokokara Break ha samishiidesu Insane nara hirotte hoshii
15. 01:00:472 (1,1,1) - sekkaku desusi Vol wo sukosidutu agemasenka?
16. 01:12:472 - Clap mo tukemasennka?
17. 01:18:215 - Finish?
18. 01:19:844 (1) - additions Normal Finish toka ikaga?
19. 01:20:872 - kokomo Finish atte iito omoimasu
20. 01:21:558 (1) - koko whistle yori Clap toka Finish nohouga iikato,01:21:387 - kokoto oto tekini kawannainode 01:21:387 - kottini whistle mo tukeruto iikannji ni narisou
21. 01:22:330 (6) - kotti whistle ni site 01:22:415 (1) - kotti Clap nohouga yokunaidesuka?
22. 01:25:072 (3) - Pattern tekinimo kokoha whistle nanodeha?iwakann sugokattadesu
23. 01:31:415 (6) - kokomo Clap yori whistle01:31:501 (7,3,1) - kokoni Clap okuto iito omoimasu
24. 01:32:015 (1) - koitu ha Finish mo hosiidesu
25. 01:38:101 (3) - kore torunara01:37:758 - kotti jyanaidesuka? torunisitemo 01:37:844 (3) - kore nobasu tokanoga yosasou
26. 01:40:844 (3) - ^
27. 01:41:444 - Finish,auto omoimasu]
28. 01:45:387 (4) - Clap hosii
    
    koukaitete aredakedo dore ga aomoji no teian ka midurakute wakaranakatta desu lol
    kirei na humen desita

[Spicy]

1. Aimodが何か言ってる、こういうのは上で一回ずらして元に戻せば消える　　fix!
   
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2. 緑線２重 あひいいぃぃ～直しました(∩；▽；∩)　
   
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3. ^(；▽；∩∩)(∩；▽；∩)(∩；▽；∩)(∩；▽；∩)(∩∩；▽；)
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4. 00:01:159 (1,2) - ここ1/6じゃない？こっちの方がハマってると思うし試してみて 前はプルプル言ってるのでそのまま、後ろを1/6にしようか迷いましたがばらばらだと紛らわしいので統一するって意味で1/16で維持しました
   
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5. 00:06:987 (3) - こういうのは少し左に傾けたほうが流れると思うよ！3連あるのでaim止める時間で流れ修正できるのと、00:07:330 (4) - への流れを勘案して維持です；ｗ；
6. 00:13:158 (1) - これ00:13:272 - ここのwhistleかなり浮いて聞こえる、外していいと思うしつけたいなら折り返し地点じゃない？
7. 00:22:672 (8,1) - これなんで上とNC付ける位置違うの？ｗ普通に00:22:415 (5) - これにつけて00:21:730 - 00:22:072 - どっちかのNC消していいと思う　キックの部分のNCはずして2小説ごとにNCで統一しました！
8. 00:22:758 (1) - NCいらない　^^の修正理由からここはNC付けときます～
9. 00:24:301 (7,8) - add Clap　後00:23:615 - これもう１０％くらいVol上げてよくないかな、小さすぎるしそんな音極端に下げるとこでもないと思う
10. 00:25:672 (2) - ここも上と言いたいこと同じ、whistleいらなくないかな、かなり高い音なってるのに低音のホイッスルには違和感しかない
11. 00:31:158 (2) - これも終点whistleいらないと思う、次のClapまでが窮屈で気持ちよくない
12. 00:28:930 (1,2,3) - なんか不格好だし２をx312y312あたりに動かして普通に三角形作ったほうがよさげ　！！修正してその後のスライダーも調整しました！
13. 00:39:215 (1) - こういうの多いけど終点何フォローしてるかイマイチ謎だし00:39:472 - ここまで伸ばしたい感ある、現状だと次のキックへの流れが気になったし　これはバックのクラップ音の強調で置いた1/8ですのでこのままで！
14. 00:40:930 (2) - やりたいことは分かるけど、こういうのblanketさせるより00:40:587 (1) - 終点スタックさせた方が次とのメリハリ付いていいと思うよ！　確かに！！スタックさせました(∩・▽・∩)
15. 00:42:215 (2) - スローパートでこの連打の開き方はまずいと思った、こっちのが流れるくないか　fix!
    
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16. 00:47:015 - 00:47:358 - add Note 00:47:015 にサークル、00:47:358はそのままにしました！
17. 00:47:787 (6) - これももう１往復足したほうが曲に合うで、前と繋げて７連でもいいけど任せる　タタタンの音に合わせたので維持で！
18. 00:48:644 (5) - ここは音強いからキックよりサークルにした方が気持ちいいと思われ　ほわ～んとした音なのでキックにして流す感じにしたかったので維持で；；
19. 00:50:358 (2) - ここも言いたいこと同じだけど配置気に入ってそうだしいいやｗ　お気に入りですｗ
20. 00:53:701 - 00:54:044 - 音あるのに区切ったことに違和感しかなかった、ExDiffだし普通にろんぐすとりーむにしよ　ですね、後半の同じパートと合わせる意味合いもかねてfixです！
21. 00:56:358 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - こっちはまあ単発でパターン入ってるからこのままでもいいと思うけどね
    01:01:501 (1) - 流石にVol下げてまで1/16はやりすぎじゃない？８でいい　8にしましたｗ
22. 01:11:958 (3,1,2) - こういうのさ、こんなふうにした方が流れるしかっこよくね？01:12:387 (2) - は３の頭にスタックで　あなたが神か・・・fix!
    
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23. 01:20:187 (5) - ボディwhistle多分ミスだし消してどうぞ
24. 01:20:701 (4,5,1,4,1,4) - こういうのさ傾けたほうが映えるくない？ 傾けて向きそろえました
    
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25. 01:26:701 (2,3) - 細かいけどちゃんとスタックさせよ　fix;;
26. 01:31:672 (1) - これも分かるんだけど伸ばすにしても01:31:844 - までだと思うけどね、この連打地点で01:31:844 - 01:31:930 - の強いバック音無視は違和感しかなかった 01:31:930まで音なってるので維持で！
27. 01:35:958 (1,2) - これも取るにしてもこうじゃない？現状だと違和感しかないのと前のパターンと比べて読みにくい　はじめの同じ音の部分同様3連に全部音合わせてあるので音とりはこのままで、位置は考えてみます～
    
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28. 01:40:930 (3) - 最初と言いたいこと同じで01:41:158 - ここまでリバースさせない？　リバースのばすとオーバーマップの指摘きそうなのでここはいったん維持で！
29. 01:41:958 (2) - ^Clapが窮屈
    
    
    なんか全体的にNC多すぎてめちゃやりづらかった00:48:815 (1) - 01:18:815 (1) - 01:21:558 (1) - 01:24:301 (1) - まあその他もろもろ意義が見いだせない綺麗だから入れました感あるNCはいらないと思う、こういう譜面は少ないほうが読みやすくカッコイイし曲にもあってると思うんだけどね
    、ワンポイントとかで使うのはいいと思うけど使いすぎ感あった　NC結構いろんな指摘あるので一回考えてみます！
    
    こういう譜面Modあんましないからめちゃ時間かかったよねｗ
    hitsound見る時間なかったから低Diffとかはまたchat頂戴な

mod time:3 hour

gl

ななかさんmodありでした！めっちゃ助かりました！
edit:☆も感謝です！

Just a small mod from my q ;__;

[Normal]
00:00:815 (1) - Remove the repeat and add a circle to the current end. Feel like the first strong sound of the song should really be clicked.
01:37:501 (1,2) - A long stack, such a flowbreaker. Would be better if you kept on going, this gives an annoying pause to the playability.

[Hard]
01:00:472 (1,2,1,2,3) - This kind of spacing change pattern seems really unfair for a Hard diff. Consider making something else.

Other diffs are completely flawless.

Good luck with ranking!

scanter wrote:

みなさんこんにちは。リクエストされてきました　こんにちは

General

1. BG size seems to unrankable factor. I highly recommend changing the BG size 4:3 or 16:9 ratio.
   
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Easy

1. slider-tick no otoga ooki desu. 10% kurai herasu no ha ikaga deshouka?
2. 00:27:215 (2) - startを00:27:387 こちらで始まったほうがもっといいと思います. soshite add finish. end point ha onaji tokoro desu
3. 00:39:215 - muda na timing sen. I highly recommend add 1 circle or delete this timing point.
4. 00:50:872 - add drain break like this?
   
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5. 01:17:615 - ><　＞＜とはなんでしょうか・・・？
6. 01:28:587 - kochimo
7. 01:32:015 - whistle
8. 01:46:415 (1) - how about adding crescendo like this? 曲を締めるのにぴったりだと思います
   
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   all fixです！

Normal

1. same as Easy. slider-tick no otoga ooki desu. 10% kurai herasu no ha ikaga deshouka?
2. 01:46:415 (1) - same as Easy
   
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   [/color]
   こちらもall fix!

Hard

1. 00:05:444 (2) - approaching circle seems to really hard to read この形が気に入ってるのでひとまずkeepで；ｗ；
2. 00:12:472 (1) - hitsound ga chotto okashii. 1 ban no atama ni clap no kawari ni whistle, shitpo ni whistle wo hazushita houga motto niau to omoimasu.　変えました～
3. 00:20:530 (5,1) - hitsoundの音が違いすぎて重なることはあまり似合わないと思います。stack on 2 instead of 1?　00:20:187 (4,5) - の位置をずらして修正しました
   
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4. 01:47:615 (2) - same as 00:05:444 (2) 同じ理由でkeepです

Kloyd's Another

1. 00:45:387 - 피니시 빠진듯
2. 00:50:872 (2) - ^
3. 01:02:358 (4) - 갑자기 거리가 줄어드니까 플레이하기 좀 불편하네요. 살짝 띄우시는건 어떰?
4. 01:20:358 (5) - HP바에 살짝 닿음. 저난이도 뿐만 아니라 고난이도에서도 까다로운 플레이어들이 상당히 많습니다.
5. 01:23:787 - 무쓸모 타이밍
6. 01:32:015 - 여기두
7. 01:47:787 (1) - 디크레센도 형식으로 타이밍선을 넣는건 어때요? 노래 시마이하는데 참 좋을거같은데
   
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Spicy

1. 00:05:444 (2) - これはすごくやばい気がします。AutoでPlayすると、Approach circleがすごく見にくい　これも形が気に入ってるのでkeepですが、考えてみます
2. 00:08:872 (3,1) - swap NC? NCパターン統一するためにこのままで
3. 00:32:357 (2) - unsnapped one o.o!　！！！！fix ;w;
4. 01:01:844 - 不必要なタイミングポイントっぽいです ほんとだ！消しました！
5. 01:37:844 (1) - Ctrl + GをしたほうがもっとPlayしやすいです　nice suggestion!!!!!!
6. 01:46:415 (1) - Slider endをすこし右に移すのはいかがでしょうか？ちょっと重なったのが気になります ずらしました～
7. 01:47:787 (1) - same as Easy　done
   
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map ha hotondo dekiagatta moyou desu. GL anyway

scanterさんmodありがとうございました！いいアドバイスもらえました(∩・▽・∩)

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Just a small mod from my q ;__;

[Normal]
00:00:815 (1) - Remove the repeat and add a circle to the current end. Feel like the first strong sound of the song should really be clicked.　that's good!
01:37:501 (1,2) - A long stack, such a flowbreaker. Would be better if you kept on going, this gives an annoying pause to the playability. fixed

[Hard]
01:00:472 (1,2,1,2,3) - This kind of spacing change pattern seems really unfair for a Hard diff. Consider making something else. keep.the sound is louder from 01:01:158 (1) - , so i made accent. also it's not too hard imo

Other diffs are completely flawless.

Good luck with ranking!

thanks for mod, keep trying~

Hi~ from my queue.
Nice map
[Spicy]
00:05:787 (1,2,3,4) – rearrange in this order: 2,4,1,3
00:14:187 (2,3) – confusing
01:23:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) –I suggest you to use the previous patterns like 01:12:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rather than this to make some repetitions
Nice diff and nice mapped
[Kloyd's Another]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1) –confusing
00:01:758 –add
00:45:901 (2) – I suggest an anti-jump here
[Hard]
No big problems. Nice diff.
[Normal]
00:05:444 (1) –ctrl+g and rearrange 00:06:301 (2) –
00:47:958 – the slider should stop at here
[Easy]
00:18:644 (2) – I suggest a blanket here
00:24:130 (2) -^

great

nikachyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue.
Nice map
[Spicy]
00:05:787 (1,2,3,4) – rearrange in this order: 2,4,1,3 sry keep it, i like this pattern ;w;
00:14:187 (2,3) – confusing ^^
01:23:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) –I suggest you to use the previous patterns like 01:12:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rather than this to make some repetitions ^^
Nice diff and nice mapped
[Kloyd's Another]
00:00:815 (1,2,3,1) –confusing
00:01:758 –add
00:45:901 (2) – I suggest an anti-jump here
[Hard]
No big problems. Nice diff. thanks
[Normal]
00:05:444 (1) –ctrl+g and rearrange 00:06:301 (2) – keep them because of DS
00:47:958 – the slider should stop at here　maybe it'd be constrained if i make like it
[Easy]
00:18:644 (2) – I suggest a blanket here
00:24:130 (2) -^ keep them because of DS

　

thanks for mod!

nold_1702 wrote:

great

ya thanks(∩・▽・∩)

Kudosu star shot! Get this ranked ASAP! Great map

Litharrale wrote:

Kudosu star shot! Get this ranked ASAP! Great map

thanks for your star Litharrale!!

ty kloyd, uploaded (∩・▽・∩)

OMG This is sooo goood
good music
good mapset
absolutely loved this one! (♥ω♥ ) ~♪










My fav song of 2015!

rtech wrote:

OMG This is sooo goood
good music
good mapset
absolutely loved this one! (♥ω♥ ) ~♪

My fav song of 2015!

thanks, enjoy it~

Hi! sorry for the late mod
modder came from: t/267877&start=0

General

Easy

1. I got nothing to say here, its a good map

Normal

1. i can't see anything here anything either :p

Hard

1. 00:29:958 (5,1) - blanket can be better.

Kloyd's Another

1. 01:44:016 (7,1) - blanket can be better.

Spicy

1. 00:12:472 (1) - the shape of this slider seems a bit weird. its just the looks of it, but the 'blanket' seems a bit weird here.
   just want to point that out :p.
2. 01:12:472 (1) - this one too has a weird shape. if you want to make a looping, you have to improve it a bit.
3. 01:47:615 (1) - you can try to not center the 1 in the circle shaped blanket, but the middle of the slider.
   i hope you get what i mean (its basically move the blue slider up a bit )

I'm sorry for this useless mod, it's just a really good map
you get it ranked in no time!

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! sorry for the late mod
modder came from: t/267877&start=0

General

Easy

1. I got nothing to say here, its a good map

Normal

1. i can't see anything here anything either :p

Hard

1. 00:29:958 (5,1) - blanket can be better. fixed

Kloyd's Another

1. 01:44:016 (7,1) - blanket can be better.

Spicy

1. 00:12:472 (1) - the shape of this slider seems a bit weird. its just the looks of it, but the 'blanket' seems a bit weird here.
   just want to point that out :p.
2. 01:12:472 (1) - this one too has a weird shape. if you want to make a looping, you have to improve it a bit.
3. 01:47:615 (1) - you can try to not center the 1 in the circle shaped blanket, but the middle of the slider.
   i hope you get what i mean (its basically move the blue slider up a bit )

I'm sorry for this useless mod, it's just a really good map
you get it ranked in no time!

thanks for mod Fryz3!

[General]
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
00:31:844 (2) - Also can stack better
00:42:472 (3) - If you follow the drum beat voice there (00:41:958 (2) - this),then I think add a note (00:42:472 (3) - this drum beat) will played better.
01:07:672 (2) - Add a note ? Just a imo,I can't understand this follow beat when should beat here (hard to read 01:07:844 (2) - this) ,so add a note to follow the heavy beat will plays good.
01:09:044 (2) - Same above

[Kloyd's Another]
00:24:301 (6) - Maybe can use a ctrl+g make a good flow (Enlarge a bit DS for (4)(5),a bit crowded now)
00:43:672 (4) - Add a NC make easy to read this big jump?

[Spicy]
00:28:072 (1) - Try to stack better?
01:47:615 (1) - Sounds like this backsound hitsound not so loud,reduce to (30%->20%) volume here? (Hard diff in the same place,too)

Very fun map showing support by giving a star kthxbai

smallboat wrote:

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1. Make the last spinner end volume consistent? (Check hard and another diff,10% I suggest)　make them same as all diff, like 30%,25%,20%,15% and at last 10%

[Easy]

1. 01:08:701 (1,1,2) - Feel these snap distance in the same here,feel hard to read for beginner,also can follow the same DS (1.0x or far a bit) tp place them? chenged them to slider and made DS consistency in 1.0x
2. 01:17:615 (1) - Forgot remove NC ? Feel no necessary do a single NC part for easy diff. (Seldom look this NC set at a easy diff I think)
3. 01:25:158 (2) - Overlap on purpose ? Also can move a bit make see clear the pattern. moved a bit and avoid overrapped
4. 01:28:587 (1) - Same as 01:17:615
5. 
   all fixed!

[Normal]

1. 00:03:558 (1) - Cancel this NC,I guess it sill easy to read hrer,not need to do a single NC I think.
2. 00:12:815 (2) - Also can move down a bit do a curve,make plays feeling better.
3. 00:44:701 (1,2) - Maybe also can avoid the single NC set (Remove this NC)
4. 00:47:444 (1) - Same above.
5. 01:46:244 (4) - Also can remove this note,because beat this note has no the play feeling (Not a obviously tune)
   all fixed!

[Hard]
00:31:844 (2) - Also can stack better
00:42:472 (3) - If you follow the drum beat voice there (00:41:958 (2) - this),then I think add a note (00:42:472 (3) - this drum beat) will played better.
01:07:672 (2) - Add a note ? Just a imo,I can't understand this follow beat when should beat here (hard to read 01:07:844 (2) - this) ,so add a note to follow the heavy beat will plays good. added note and also fixed DS
01:09:044 (2) - Same above
all fixed!

[Kloyd's Another]
00:24:301 (6) - Maybe can use a ctrl+g make a good flow (Enlarge a bit DS for (4)(5),a bit crowded now)
00:43:672 (4) - Add a NC make easy to read this big jump?
EDIT: ask him and keep it because of his feelings

[Spicy]
00:28:072 (1) - Try to stack better? fixed
01:47:615 (1) - Sounds like this backsound hitsound not so loud,reduce to (30%->20%) volume here? (Hard diff in the same place,too) keep it only, i want to make it sound absolutely to hear hit sound ;w;

thanks smallboat!!(∩・▽・∩)