1. Geisha (3,81 stars, 153 notes)
2. Kimono (1,28 stars, 82 notes)
3. Samurai (4,96 stars, 266 notes)

1. [00:11:142(9)]: whistle?
2. [00:13:714(1)]: whistle at the end.
3. [00:15:642(5)]: whistle
4. [00:57:857(T)]: add a circle with clap. location is...easy to find.
5. [01:20:571(1,2)]: add finish at the beginning of the sliders?
6. [01:27:428(1)]: finish is good, add a clap may work better (keep the finish)
7. [01:39:428(1)]: end at 00:399:857 is better.
8. [01:41:142(1)]: let the end of the slider can cover [01:40:285(2)] (lol nazi mod), then the next circle should also do some change.

1. [00:16:285(7)]: new combo
2. [00:16:285(7,8,9,10)]: spacing
3. [00:46:285(2)]: move to [00:46:071]
4. [00:47:571(3)]: move to [00:47:357]
5. [00:57:428(9,10,11)]: add claps, have a try
6. [01:02:357(T)]: add a circle? maybe works well... just like [01:33:214(4)]
7. [01:46:285(13)]: finish
8. [00:51:857(2)]: let 1 cover its start circle well..(lol nazi mod....again...)
9. [01:39:857(3)]: remove the clap?

Colin Hou wrote:

Good work, now just some suggestions~

[General]:
Mostly mod on the hitsound and some nazi mod
The gray SB frightened me a little bit...

[Kimno]:
Nice.

[Geisha]:

1. [00:11:142(9)]: whistle? Done
2. [00:13:714(1)]: whistle at the end. Done
3. [00:15:642(5)]: whistle Done
4. [00:57:857(T)]: add a circle with clap. location is...easy to find. Done
5. [01:20:571(1,2)]: add finish at the beginning of the sliders? Done
6. [01:27:428(1)]: finish is good, add a clap may work better (keep the finish) Done
7. [01:39:428(1)]: end at 00:399:857 is better. Done
8. [01:41:142(1)]: let the end of the slider can cover [01:40:285(2)] (lol nazi mod), then the next circle should also do some change.

Done

[Samurai]:

1. [00:16:285(7)]: new combo Done
2. [00:16:285(7,8,9,10)]: spacing Done
3. [00:46:285(2)]: move to [00:46:071] No
4. [00:47:571(3)]: move to [00:47:357] No
5. [00:57:428(9,10,11)]: add claps, have a try Done
6. [01:02:357(T)]: add a circle? maybe works well... just like [01:33:214(4)] Done
7. [01:46:285(13)]: finish Done
8. [00:51:857(2)]: let 1 cover its start circle well..(lol nazi mod....again...) No
9. [01:39:857(3)]: remove the clap? No

Goooooooooooood Job and have a star~

AngelHoney wrote:

SB

00:44:571 - unexpected..?
MANY STAR.png is sexy~ >////<

Samurai

00:47:464 (3) - ?? Fixed
00:51:428 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked ? color=#00FF00]Fixed[/color]
00:54:857 - add a note ? Added
01:46:714 - add some notes? ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6230 No, sorry

Geisha

00:45:428 (3,5) - ?? Fixed
01:42:857 (1,3) - ^ lol Fixed

Kimono

fine :3

Doki Doki ,yeah i like this SB ☆⌒Σ(≧д≦)ゝ

Sallad4ever wrote:

Waktunya balas budi
Lagunya mirip butterfly

SB
This kind of SB is actually my favorite
00:47:999 the SB is spinning but because of the spinner you can't see it (except Samurai diff) But, you can the SB when you play CtB

Samurai
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is very insane Why?

Well this is not a mod, just my comment
Thanks for always helping me Leorda

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Storyboard images can't exceed 800x600px size, you'll have to resize "MINI SNOW.png" and "SAKURA BIG.png" It's ok when you scale in-game
- I think the two last combocolours are kind of unnecesary, they're so similar to 2nd and 3rd colours oxo No
Storyboard:
- Fade the green coloured background on 44571ms. Fix
- I think that it'd be better if you make the stars on the first chorus (starting on 51428ms) fading at the end of each pulse. No

~Kimono~
00:10:714 (6) - New Combo. 10 is too large for the easiest diffs :/
00:27:428 (6) - ^
00:56:571 (6) - ^
01:45:857 (4) - ^

~Geisha~
00:10:285 (6) - New combo. Fix
00:17:142 (8) - ^ Fix
00:54:857 (x) - Add a note here? It feels like (1) comes earlier. No
01:25:714 (x) - Add a note here too? It sounds empty imo. No
01:41:142 (1) - Delete New Combo. No
01:44:571 (1) - ^ No

~Samurai~
00:08:571 (8) - New Combo. Fix
00:31:821 (5) - Fix spacing here. Fix
00:33:214 (9) - New Combo. Fix
00:39:428 (8) - ^ Fix
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks so "messy" compared to the general spacing of the song. Increase spacing between them a bit?
00:49:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above. Also, make a horizontal flip of this one, the overlap is a bit ugly imo oxo Fix
01:24:428 (8) - New Combo. Fix
01:25:714 (x) - Add a note here? Same reason as [Geisha]No.

Nice map <3 *star*

H-boy wrote:

First of all

Bule:suggestions

Kimono
reduce volume? No

Geisha
reduce volume? No
00:45:642(x) - add a note
00:46:928(x) - ^ No[/color]
01:19:285(x) - ^
01:19:714(x) - ^ No
01:20:142(x) - ^ No
01:20:357(x) - ^[/color] No

Samurai
reduce volume?
01:19:285(x) - add a note No
01:19:499(x) - ^ No
01:19:714(x) - ^ No
01:20:142(x) - ^
01:20:357(x) - ^ No
01:39:857(3) - move one gird down Fix

Star~

haisha_ wrote:

Overall:
the kiai time plus that annoying sotrybaording really hurts peoples eyes, i dunno in my opening the oppping of the picture is just to strong with the kiai time. Why?

kimono:
reduce the audio down abit. really over powering. specially for the easy dif T_T No

Geisha:
00:56:571 [7] new combo? Fix

sumarai:
00:28:928 [5] new combo? Fix
--- story boarding kills my eyes----
01:32:571 [1] spacing is decieving.. hmhmm maybne turn it so that it starts at [3]? Fix

yeahhh..
star ~

• • Offset 6880 (resnap all notes)

• • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick) and end it here 00:37:714 (white tick)
  • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner

• • 00:26:571 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:26:785 (x) - ^
  • 00:26:999 (x) - ^
  • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick)
  • 00:40:928 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:44:357 (x) - ^
  • 00:44:571 (x) - ^
  • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner

Xero_HT wrote:

Yo,


[Overall]
That SB is really annoying in some parts.. Fuck you
Dunno if you need the Thumbs.db data. I'm not in for Storyboarding, so you should know better.

[Geisha]
01:01:928 - Add a cirlce here maybe. No

[Samurai] All Fixed
00:56:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Place them in the mid?
01:01:714 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps don't make any sense to me.
01:32:571 (1,2,3,4) - ^ + they're damn hard here.
01:40:714 (5) - 1 tick to the right

Good Luck with your map!

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Offset 6880 (resnap all notes)

Changed

[Kimono]

• • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick) and end it here 00:37:714 (white tick)
  • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner[/color] Fixed

[Samurai]

• • 00:26:571 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:26:785 (x) - ^ Added
  • 00:26:999 (x) - ^ Added
  • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick) No
  • 00:40:928 (x) - Add a circle Added
  • 00:44:357 (x) - ^ Added
  • 00:44:571 (x) - ^ Added
  • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner[/color] Fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset: about +5? No

[Kimono]
slider tick = 2? No
01:01:737 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use 1 or 2 slider instead. Fixed


[Geisha]
OA=5... now it's really too low... Fixed
00:46:308 (6) - new combo Fixed
01:44:594 (5) - ...this slider... remap? Fixed

[Samurai]
before 00:18:880 (1), use a custom hitsound instead of the whistle? No
00:25:737 (9) - new combo? Fixed
00:27:022 (15,1) - spacing Fixed
00:32:594 (8) - new combo and remove new combo on next (1) Fixed

Shulin wrote:

General

-- Audio volume 70%-80% sounds too high atm. Done
-- Consider using a soft/silent slider slider slide. Done
-- Add an epilepsy warning "Storyboard" > "Display epilepsy warning" Done, but what is Epilepsy Warning?
-- Try to get all SB elements under 800 x 600, 640 x 480 is better though. Done
-- "MANY STAR".png, "MINI SNOW".png, "SAKURA BIG".png, are all over 800 x 600 so you'll have to resize those. Done
-- Delete "thumbs" I can't find the thumbs

Kimono:

00:36:237 (1) - Start one tick earlier for spinning time? No

Geisha:

00:20:165 (x) - Add a note. No
00:34:308 (5) - New combo. Fixed
01:39:451 (1,2) - Less confusing if you follow the rhythm set at 01:37:737 (1,2,3) - Fixed

Samurai:

00:45:022 (1,2) - The overlap doesn't look great imo.
00:48:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really confusing spacing at first. It might be best to start 00:48:022 (1,2) - with your regular spacing instead of an anti jump. Fixed
00:56:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The claps at the end sounds bad. Fixed
01:24:022 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:44:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well this stream doesn't really fit the music ;_; It kinda just feels tacked on... Fixed
01:46:522 to 01:47:808 - empty D: No
01:48:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps don't fit the music. No

Nice overall, but your SB size is unrankable.
~ Star.

1. Snap all sections = ="

1. 00:56:594 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:55:308 (4)
2. 01:32:594 (6) - New Combo.

1. 00:34:308 (5) - New Combo.
2. 00:56:594 (1) - Remove New Combo

Midget wrote:

~Overall~

1. Snap all sections = =" No

~Kimono~

1. 00:56:594 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:55:308 (4) No
2. 01:32:594 (6) - New Combo. Fixed

~Geisha~

1. 00:34:308 (5) - New Combo.Fixed
2. 00:56:594 (1) - Remove New Combo Fixed

Sorry, nothing more found. = ="

LoweH wrote:

Hi!

Kimono
It's fine ~

Geisha
00:40:737 (8) - Add hitsound finish Added

Samurai
00:47:594 (3) - Add hitsound finish No
01:49:308 (5) - Add hitsound finish Added

Nice map, starrr *

1. I can see the Fade code like 0.9988331 and 0.008000013 in your osb.file, when you make fade, you'd better check code in osb.file it's totally fade in or out which means "1" and "0" in code, 0.9988331 is fine then, but 0.008000013 would reslut in some frame lost, so you should fix this at least.
   
   
   This SB killed my eyes

1. Delete Thumbs.db file in your SB folder please, then full submit,how to find it? Tools > Folder Options, and from there, Files and Folders > Make sure "Do not cache thumbnails" is checked. Once it is, select "Apply to All Folders", then hit OK.
   Or Run > cmd.exe
   del %path-to-song-directory%SBThumbs.db
2. No source, it's not from any games? If it is, please add that

1. Offset : 440
   Resnap all note, and at least make KIAI timing section right on ticks

1. 00:36:225 (S) - Seem a little short for a Easy diff., maybe remove it better, then use a slider at 00:36:225-00:37:725 ends with finish would better
2. 01:02:154 (2) - Clap
   
3. 01:51:547 (S) - Spinner ends here seems better

1. 00:18:011 (3) - Forget to add whistle?
2. 00:19:725 (5) - Clap, then add a note at 00:20:154 with clap
3. 00:40:725 (8) - Clap or finish, remove one, mix them two sounds worse
4. 00:51:440 (1) - Finish
5. 01:29:154 (1) - ^
6. 01:39:868 (2) - Clap, and it didn't stack well with then end of 1

1. 00:26:582 (5,6,7,1) - Add whistle?
2. 00:30:868 (1) - Finish
3. 00:48:440 (3,5,7) - New combo please
4. 00:50:154 (3,5,7) - ^
5. 00:51:440 (1) - Finish
6. 01:29:154 (1) - ^
7. 01:36:011 (1) - ^
8. 01:51:547 (S) - Spinner ends here seems better

Breeze wrote:

[SB]

1. I can see the Fade code like 0.9988331 and 0.008000013 in your osb.file, when you make fade, you'd better check code in osb.file it's totally fade in or out which means "1" and "0" in code, 0.9988331 is fine then, but 0.008000013 would reslut in some frame lost, so you should fix this at least. Fixed
   [attachment=0:cf98b]1.jpg[/attachment:cf98b]
   [attachment=1:cf98b]0.jpg[/attachment:cf98b]
   This SB killed my eyes Shut Up

[General]

1. Delete Thumbs.db file in your SB folder please, then full submit,how to find it? Tools > Folder Options, and from there, Files and Folders > Make sure "Do not cache thumbnails" is checked. Once it is, select "Apply to All Folders", then hit OK.
   Or Run > cmd.exe
   del %path-to-song-directory%SBThumbs.db Fixed
2. No source, it's not from any games? If it is, please add that No, this song from album, Party Around The World, not game

[Timing]

1. Offset : 440 No
   Resnap all note, and at least make KIAI timing section right on ticks

[Kimono]
Kimono, ploy kimono? Yes

1. 00:36:225 (S) - Seem a little short for a Easy diff., maybe remove it better, then use a slider at 00:36:225-00:37:725 ends with finish would better Fixed
2. 01:02:154 (2) - Clap Fixed
   
3. 01:51:547 (S) - Spinner ends here seems better Fixed

[Geisha]

1. 00:18:011 (3) - Forget to add whistle? Fixed
2. 00:19:725 (5) - Clap, then add a note at 00:20:154 with clap Fixed
3. 00:40:725 (8) - Clap or finish, remove one, mix them two sounds worse Fixed
4. 00:51:440 (1) - Finish Fixed
5. 01:29:154 (1) - ^ No
6. 01:39:868 (2) - Clap, and it didn't stack well with then end of 1 Fixed

[Samurai]

1. 00:26:582 (5,6,7,1) - Add whistle? Fixed
2. 00:30:868 (1) - Finish Fixed
3. 00:48:440 (3,5,7) - New combo please Fixed
4. 00:50:154 (3,5,7) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:51:440 (1) - Finish Fixed
6. 01:29:154 (1) - ^ No
7. 01:36:011 (1) - ^ No
8. 01:51:547 (S) - Spinner ends here seems better Fixed

nice song
star

orioncomet wrote:

Nothing issue and funny SB though ~ So, Star

orioncomet wrote:

Oh, You don't know yet?
Proto-Bubble system already gone

SPOILER

Ephemeral wrote:

After quite some thought, the proto-bubble system has been discontinued in its use.

So, You can request to BATs without a Proto-Bubble

Shinxyn wrote:

Hmm, you've gotten better at mapping, that's for sure
blah blah blah sb... I don't mind the sb itself, just doesn't seem to fit -this song (just the pulsing part during chorus)-, your choice Hello, that sb is my style. Can you stop complain my sb?!
I support Breeze's offset (actually its -11 of your current offset (6869))

Kimono-
00:36:237 (1) - kinda odd that it reverts to vocal on this slider, would prefer if you started this on either 1/1, but since its a slider... don't really need to Fixed
01:36:879 (1) - I kinda find this note awkward, just cuz it stand out here on its own (though its following vocal it seems), maybe add a hitsound to make it stand out a bit more? (not clap, since it doesn't follow pace)Fixed

Geisha-
00:54:880 - add note? maybe, since it makes it easier to follow, doesn't matter though
why does this diff end on 01:49:737, rather than the other two ending 01:51:558... (personally, I like the map ending where this diff ends, the slow down sounds awkward) NONONONONONONONONONONO
The maps really clean, good

Samurai-
Fine~
01:02:165 (3) - make this a flip of 2? (right a tick) Fixed
01:32:583 (1,2,3,4) - make these flips? NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
01:39:879 (3) - make this a note instead? (cuz its a slider, it has 6 beats instead of last stream which have 5) Fixed

Some of the layering during the snow/cherry blossom fall isn't the same through the song, but I doubt many will notice or care.
Pretty good~

sonnyc wrote:

Hello~~

General
- Green lines are about 12 ms early No

Kimono
Good~

Geisha All Fixed
00:08:797 (4) - No Whistle
00:45:868 (5) - I think you can make a line with more well (3,4)
01:27:440 (1) - No Finish?

Samurai All Fixed
01:46:297 (x) - Add spinner?

Star~~

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Your offset's downbeat is on the wrong tick. The correct offset would be 11. Fixed

[Kimono]
00:48:011 (1) - There's always a slight delay with spinners popping up on the screen, so maybe move this back 1/4 and extend? NO
00:51:440 - I usually find it strange when kiai starts without an accompanying beat, so perhaps try adding a beat (or maybe a slider) on the white tick after the spinner close to the middle where it would be easy to hit? (It's a slow enough bpm to where a note after the spinner wouldn't be too difficult) Added
01:15:439 (1) - Again, maybe move this back 1/4 or 1/2 and extend? :S NO
01:27:439 (1) - ^ NO
01:29:154 - same kiai/note comment as above Added
*Meh, I guess the spinners don't matter, but some felt a bit short and an extra 1/4 or 1/2 would help give players just a tiny bit more reaction/spinning time. :V

[Geisha]
*Same spinner comments as last diff
01:49:725 (1) - ends on the subsequent blue tick on the other diffs... NO

[Samurai]
*spinners blah blah I guess @.@ Shut up
00:36:225 (1) - definitely start this one a white tick earlier and extend =x Fixed
*spinners
*spinners

Such a flashy storyboard.. *O* Nice job~

wmfchris wrote:

Only suggestions, no big problem~ Maybe fine enough so time for BATs? lol

[Samurai]
0:34:296 (1) right 1 grid to that (6,7,1) will be on st. line?

star~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

If you can, can you please remove thumbs.db and do a full resubmit

Kimono: (offset is not the same as the other diffs, so please make the offset 11 in this diff and resnap the notes) Fixed
Combo mod:
00:17:582 (3) - new combo to make a combo for every 8 whole notes like the previous 2 combos Fixed
00:34:296 (3,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to make each combo 8 whole notes long like your previous few combos No
01:25:725 (3) - new combo for the same reason as the previous 2 suggestions No
01:39:439 (3) - ^ Fixed

Geisha:
Combo mod:
You keep on switching between 4 note long combos and 8 note long patterns for a reason I can't discern, so I advise you add new combos for every 4 whole notes throughout the song to keep it consistent. Some few are fixed

Timing section mod:
Change the uninherited timing section's hitsound volume to be exactly the same as the kiai sections's volume (There is a slight difference, and the uninherited section is the only one with the different volume. As a result, I ask you to change it, but if you want to keep it, add a timing section a quarter note before the kiai section with the same hitsound volume as the kiai section) No

Samurai:
Timing section mod:
same as Geisha No

======================
Nice map. Very nice sb. Star.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Must
Should
Suggestion
[General]

Everything is okey.

[Kimono]
00:08:153 - distance
00:38:153 - ^
00:39:011 - ^
01:25:725 - remove new combo?

[Geisha]
00:36:011 - May be remove Spinner and fill some notes?
01:27:439 - ^
01:38:153 - Distance. (This trick with distance poped my bubble in my map >< I don't want the same in this map)

[Samurai]
00:12:011 - This is insane diff right? Delete spin and add streams :3
00:18:868 - ^
00:51:653 - Same distance trick
00:54:225 - ^
01:31:296 - ^
01:31:725 - ^
01:41:153 - as in 00:12:011

Awesome Map. Star :3

abalee wrote:

I can't decide coz the storyboarding have a bad effect on my playing. Sorry.

Star ATM.

Gens wrote:

Oh no, there's a Thumbs.db file in the SB subfolder.
Also, yeah, pretty distracting SB. ~_~
Isn't SMiLE.dk stuff normally from DDR?