00:07:722 (5) - The new combo should go on this one instead.
00:08:114 (3,4,5,6,7) - The jump here is large, so the player is going to be moving fast when they hit the 4. The problem is the stream forces them to curl up in a weird curve with little spacing, so the player has to adjust for that too. This'll likely result in either the player not going fast enough to reach the 4 and muck up the entire stream, or the player to reach the 4 and be going too fast, moving underneath the rest of the stream.
00:09:288 (4) - Consider ending this slider where the slidertick is and starting a new one at 00:09:679 -
00:10:593 (7,8,9) - This stream doesn't quite fit the music, since all that's there in the audio is a wind sound.
00:11:375 (3,4,5) - This is a very easy section to sliderbreak, mostly because of the repeat slider. It's hard to tell if it will have one or two repeats, and even if you know it has two repeats, the acceleration needed to get over to the 4 means going back to the 5 probably isn't going to happen.
00:14:768 (1,4) - Try giving these a bit of a speed boost individually. It's important that they look significantly longer than the others. Try 1x for 1 and 4, then 0.75x for the others.
00:19:462 (5) - This would sound better if it ended on 00:19:984 -
00:21:810 (5,6) - The 6 covers up some important beats here. An alternate setup could work better ->
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245447500:31:985 (1,2) - Avoid overlap, make 2 a bit more to the right
00:33:942 (2,3) - That's a bit too big of a jump, maybe shorten the 2 a bit.
00:39:290 (2,3) - Move these closer to the 1 just a little, it's barely out of a comfortable range
00:42:160 (1,2,1,1,2,1) - You should redo this part, it doesn't fit the buzzing in the music, has readability problems due to sudden spaced out streams and overlapping, and doesn't play well.
00:47:639 (9,1,2,3) - Fun new combo trick for readability, put the new combo on the 9 and 3 and remove the other one. ->
http://puu.sh/e5j9H/59f7be2fe4.jpg00:48:943 (1,5) - Swap these new combos too.
00:52:661 (1) - This should start on the next red tick instead.
00:53:117 (4) - This'd be more fun as just a circle, too much holding going on here
01:04:083 (5) - New combo
01:08:510 (3,3) - Shorten these to fit the vocals, it'd play better and sound better
01:12:228 (1,2,3) - I think something broke
01:12:945 (1,2,3) - The presses here are in weird spots. Try starting the 3 at 01:13:467 - and ending the 2 at 01:13:337 -
01:16:206 (4,6) - Avoid overlap
01:19:207 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these should probably be similar / the same since this is the moment the piano calms down.
01:25:990 (3,4) - This jump is too easy to sliderbreak on.
01:28:599 (2) - Slider length broke
01:38:904 (2) - Slider that ends at 01:39:165 - would be cooler
01:44:644 (5,6,7) - The problem starts here, this part is already fast / unexpected but now the slider is underneath the other objects so it's hard to see. It's too jittery for something this fast, stacking streams in this part is only going to make it frustrating.
01:45:035 (1) - Face this downwards (vertical flip) for less breaks.
01:45:035 (1,2,3) - You'll want the spacing between the slider starts to be the same, for optimal gameplay.
01:51:036 (6) - New combo
01:52:340 (2,3) - Kinda a weird gimmick to have here, also has the problem where the 3 doesn't end at the right time.
01:53:644 (2,1,2,3) - So note how the 2, moving to the 1, is either immediately to the right or down and to the right. If you want to avoid right angle movement (right angles usually suck), reverse the 2 and 3 so the player has to now go to the left. This is either a small angle or a full reverse of motion, which is jump fun.
01:55:471 - Add a circle somewhere, no reason to drop the vocals emphasis now.
01:57:297 (3) - New combo, anything to make this more readable
02:01:732 (2,3,4,5) - 2 isn't overlapping the endpoint properly, also the stream here is ugly / doesn't play well. No need to do a jagged stream gimmick here, just do a normal one into the slider. It's reversing the player's movement already by going back up so no need to make the stream fancy.
02:04:732 (2) - Rams right into the score listing. Would be a lot tidier somewhere else (even below the 1 would work)
02:07:994 (3,3) - Same thing about these being 1/2 to fit the vocalist and play better.
02:16:994 (4,1) - Annoying to read the approach circles so close to the border of the screen. Try more near the middle and to the right, making use of the wide window region.
02:18:429 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Player is instincively going to be trying to press notes on every 1/6 beat here. Might as well let them do that by replacing the 2 slider with two circles, or shorten the 2 like the 1 and add a circle.
02:18:821 (4) - New combo
