1. Hard (4.69 stars, 433 notes)
2. Normal (4.13 stars, 344 notes)
3. SHD (5 stars, 777 notes)

Entozer wrote:

Tags: Earthquake KAZE.o2SE o2jam

Chacha17 wrote:

Entozer wrote:

Tags: Earthquake KAZE.o2SE o2jam

Remove all of those words in the tags and put O2Jam in the source. [Entozer: ok.]
BPM is fine. Offset is not 0, but what i've gotten here is 22430. After changing the offset, make sure to re-snap all notes. [Entozer: I don't know what to do here.]

Timing>Re-snap All Notes [Entozer: k.]

And please, use distance snap. [Entozer: =/]

P.S. KAZE.o2SE - Earthquake (Entozer).osb - kill that and fully submit this map after re-snapping the beats on the play field and on the timeline.] [Entozer: done.]

1. Too many unrealistic jumps
   
   *00:52:800* Dont put an element together with a start of a spinner
   01:04:000 (1,2,3) Oh, comeon.. you should put together as I mentioned
   02:27:200 (1) ^
   01:09:400 (5) Delete
   02:25:200 (1) ^
   02:34:400 (10) New combo
   02:35:200 (18) ^

sonnyc wrote:

Hi

8.2

1. Too many unrealistic jumps [Entozer: Hmm. I'll try to fix that soon. It's pretty ok to me.]
   
   *00:52:800* Dont put an element together with a start of a spinner. [Entozer: I thought that was ok, since you could spin after you click the circle, but anyway, done.]
   *01:04:000 (1,2,3) Oh, comeon.. you should put together as I mentioned
   02:27:200 (1) ^ [Entozer: This and above:: done.]
   *01:09:400 (5) Delete
   02:25:200 (1) ^ [Entozer: This and above:: done.]
   02:34:400 (10) New combo
   02:35:200 (18) ^ [Entozer: We'll see how this will work out. Changed.]

.. Star [Entozer: Thanks. Appreciated it. Very much.]

22440,400,4,1,0,100,1,0
115240,-200,4,1,0,100,0,0
140840,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

Chacha17 wrote:

You didn't change the offset. [Entozer: I actually don't know what to do when you said that.]

And there are lots of red lines >_> [Entozer: ...Is that a bad thing? =/ Anyway, lessen'd.]

Why did you use 1/8 beatsnap divisor? o.o [Entozer: I was having fun, and besides, it was still synced.]

Open .osu and paste this to [Timing Points]

22440,400,4,1,0,100,1,0
115240,-200,4,1,0,100,0,0
140840,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

PreviewTime: 60640 [Entozer: Thanks for these numbers.]

Xero_HT wrote:

Wow, that's a .. special map =) [Entozer: Thanks, I guess? :­)]


OPEN AIMOD AND FIX THE UNSNAPPED NOTES! [Entozer: Sorry about that. I am constantly modding my map whenever I can and I have just recently applied what Chacha17 Suggested. I'll make sure to take a look at AIMod everytime before I request for a modding. Thank you.]
01:26:440 (1,...) - I dont think anyone will pass this section, even if it's mapped intuitiv. Not only the speed and the spacing is insane. You'll get confused cause every slider is a new combo. [Entozer: What do you think if I make it go up to 3 before I make a new combo?
02:30:440 (1) - ^ [Entozer: I'll see what I can improvise, and if I can improvise.]
02:36:840 (1) - ^ [Entozer: ^.]
02:38:440 (9) - New Combo [Entozer: done. It feels right now.]
02:48:350 (2,3) - 1 tick to the left [Entozer: done.]

I suggest you to remap some parts. It's just too hard... [Entozer: I will. I'll try and find a way.]

Star for awesome hitsounds! [Entozer: Thank you very much. :­)]

Senbon wrote:

[SHD]

Oh my. This map is superb. I mean really, this is genius. [Entozer: Thanks! :­)]

01:12:240 (7) - New combo [Entozer: done.]
01:26:440 (1,1,1,1) - I agree, you should at least make it up to two or 3 combo marks. [Entozer: Made it into a 2-combo. Edit: It seems that it still doesn't help. I left it at 2-combo anyway.]
01:35:640 (1) - Clap on start? [Entozer:It didn't sound a bit right, so I didn't include it. sorry.]
03:05:640 (1) - Lower the hit sound volume [Entozer: Done. Decreasing volume->Max volume for the final hitsound]

Hope this gets approved. xD Somehow.[Entozer: I hope so. ­:)]

Leorda wrote:

Kumusta!! :­)

[General]
Just suggestion, maybe try to disable the countdown, since the intro is slow [Entozer: I've been thinking that myself too. Removed.]

[File]
The Progress.txt is uneeds, as the ranking criteria said, do not addition file in your beatmap, delete the Progress.txt [Entozer: It was supposed to be a raw back-up changelog. Removed, anyway.]

[SHD]
The circle size is too small, decrease Circle Size only one tick [Entozer: I'll see what others think first, though. thanks.]/color]
00:50:440 (4) - This slider is looks ugly, use bezier to make it preetier [Entozer: Done.]
02:36:040 (10) - Unrankable slider, lol (Do not slider overlap themself, it could be confusing) [Entozer: But I need those tick sounds. =/ I'll find a way though. thanks.]
03:05:640 (1) - Please silence this spinner [Entozer: hmm.. ok. done. I didn't remove the decreasing sound though. It sounds good, in my opinion.Edit: Even though I silenced it, I can still hear the 'finish' hit sound, so I turned it back to max in the end. sorry.]]

Good song
STAR [Entozer: Thanks! :­)]

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~
You may need a warning for all 2xBPM part. [Entozer: I'll do something about it. thanks.]

02:36:040 (10) - Hum.... lol [Entozer: so shortening it still doesn't work huh? =/]

Sorry but I can't mod that, That's so hard for me ;p
I'm so anxious to see that approved

Good luck dude. [Entozer: Thanks! :­)]

DJPop wrote:

Title: Earth Quake


Seriously

• • You should make an easier diff
  • "exclamation_mark.png" contains too much unnecessary transparency.

• • 01:51:840 (5,1) - I don't like this jump; fix the spacing
  • 02:24:040 (x) - Add a circle
  • 02:25:640 (x) - ^
  • 02:27:240 (x) - ^
  • 03:12:040 (timing section) - Delete this timing section

• • This diff is really Insane D: i guess this map will be approved... If you want this map ranked you should make this diff easier
  • 03:12:040 (timing section) - Delete this timing section

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • You should make an easier diff [Entozer: I asked MarioBros777 to make me one...]
  • "exclamation_mark.png" contains too much unnecessary transparency. [Entozer: Sorry. I don't know what you mean by that.]

[Hard]

• • 01:51:840 (5,1) - I don't like this jump; fix the spacing [Entozer: Uhm.. I don't know what you mean exactly by this but, fixed.]
  • 02:24:040 (x) - Add a circle [Entozer: Done]
  • 02:25:640 (x) - ^ [Entozer: Done]
  • 02:27:240 (x) - ^ [Entozer: Done]
  • 03:12:040 (timing section) - Delete this timing section [Entozer: Done]

[SHD]

• • This diff is really Insane D: i guess this map will be approved... If you want this map ranked you should make this diff easier [Entozer: Going for approved. :­) ]
  • 03:12:040 (timing section) - Delete this timing section [Entozer: Done]

Matma Rex wrote:

Get an Easy, but you know that already.

[General]
Explain what you need these red sections for. You can use 0.5x BPM instead. [Entozer: Sorry about that. Removed.
Make kiai times consistent? [Entozer: Uhm... I don't know what you mean by this. sorry.]
You place new combos pretty much at random. Try to make them make more sense. [Entozer: On the SHD diff, I'm trying to make it tag-friendly, if that's okay]

[Hard]
00:49:840 (4,5,1) - spacing (dist. spacing messes up due to 2x BPM on previous section. Also, this section is unnecessary, remove it.) [Entozer: Done]
01:00:840 (1) - this BPM change is quite sudden, but doable, I dont think you need a warning for that. And it's Hard after all. [Entozer: Removed.]
01:54:840 (6,1) - damn confusing. Change it. [Entozer: If you mean the spacing: Changed]
02:24:040 - add note here? [Entozer: Done, as suggested by the above modder]
02:53:240 (1) - make it perfectly vertical. [Entozer: Done]
02:59:940 (5,6,7), 03:01:540 (3,4,5) - confusing and IMO dont fit. [Entozer: Removed/Changed]
03:05:640 (1) - silence the ending? [Entozer: I guess people don't like it. =/ Removed]

[SHD]
You do know that a score or 27 millions isn't rankable? You'll have to try to make the rest ranked, and this diff approved. If it will be approved at all D:
00:29:440 (3,4,5,6), 00:31:040 (4,5,6,7) - ugly, confusing. [Entozer: Changed to Chacha's suggestion.]
01:00:840 (1) - uh, but here an SB warning would be nice. [Entozer: To be honest I remember myself putting a warning there. Thanks for pointing that out, though.]
01:04:840 (3) - place under beginning of previous slider? [Entozer: Done]
01:26:440 ~ 01:39:240 - whoa. That's worse than I Want You. [Entozer: Uhm...?]
02:36:040 (10) - that needs a storyboard warning. Or better, just kill it, it's terrible. [Entozer: I'll see what I can do]
03:05:640 (1) - silence the ending? [Entozer: Done]

Not going to p-bubble that thing no matter what happens. [Entozer: :­( ]

Entozer wrote:

"exclamation_mark.png" contains too much unnecessary transparency. [Entozer: Sorry. I don't know what you mean by that.]

Make kiai times consistent? [Entozer: Uhm... I don't know what you mean by this. sorry.]

Matma Rex wrote:

Can't look at this now, but it probably means that this graphic is bigger than the size of the excl. mark itself, and it's filled with transparency. Trim it. [Entozer: Ah, I see. I'll fix it when I fix my computer. The one I'm using to map only has MSPaint.]

And I meant that kiai times should be the same in all difficulties (although that's not necessary, espec. in guest diffs). [Entozer: okay... Thanks again.]

LKs wrote:

Kumusta

general

A easy diff which less than 3 star is Necessary . [Entozer: I asked Mariobros777 to make me one... I'm not good at mapping.]

Adjust the Stack Leniency ( Only 2~8 you should set, otherwise it is unrankable ). [Entozer: changed]

Hard

[01:12:240] add finish
[01:12:440] remove finish
[01:43:440] remove whistle
[01:46:040] soft-clap
[01:50:640] remove whistle
[01:54:840] remove finish
[01:55:240] add finish . and fix spacing ? [Entozer: All those: Done. Thank you very much. :­)]

SHD

[00:56:040] (1,.......,6) really hard to read. In particular the slider [Entozer: Ah, I'll see what other people will say. I'll keep this in mind though. thanks.
[01:00:840] need a warnning Prompt before 2x [i][Entozer: ...I know I already put one there... added.]

awesome...

star [Entozer: Thanks. :­) ]

H-boy wrote:

Hard
some inheriting sections have the same effect [Entozer: ah. sorry. Fixed.]

00:41:740~00:41:940 turn up the volume
00:45:440(2) - finish
00:46:040(3) - ^
00:46:640(4) - ^
01:12:840(x) - add note
01:13:140(x) - ^
01:13:240(9) - move to right red line

[Entozer: Hard: Fixed.]

SHD
Use normal Circle size? [Entozer: uhm... I'll see what others will say about this]

00:36:440(6) - overlap [Entozer: I'll see what others will say about this too]
00:38:940~00:39:440 - hard to read [Entozer: Fixed. I hope so.]
00:58:240(6) - hard to read [Entozer: Fixed]
01:26:440~01:39:240 - too fast imo [Hmm... I'll keep this in mind.]
02:30:440(1) - hard to read
02:36:840~02:38:340 - too fast imo

[Entozer: 02:27:240 ~ 02:40:040 is supposed to be fast, but I'll see what others will say about it.]

star [Entozer: Thanks :­)]

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
You'll need a diff with lower than 3.00 stars according to the ranking criteria. [Entozer: okay...]

[hard]
It's hard, so maybe each combo can lasts longer? [Entozer: ok. I'll work on it as soon as I can]
0:52:840 (3) down a grid to parallet with (1,2)? [Entozer: Done. thanks.]
1:59:440 (x) According to music a note here is needed.
1:59:640 (x) ^
1:59:840 (3) Remove note
2:00:040 (x) Add a note [Entozer: Added for the first four beat. I'll see if It's okay.]

[SHD]
Wow this makes me think of Lemon Tree and KSO's agony... [Entozer: I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing...]

star [Entozer: thanks! :­)]

gdeath wrote:

[Hard]
fine [Entozer: Yay~]

[SHD]
00:27:090 (4,5) - set the same spacing as 00:26:990 (3,4) [Entozer: okay...]
01:26:440 --->> 01:39:040 too crazy.i dont know whether these crazy patterns are allowed or not...
02:36:840 --->> 02:38:240 ^ [Entozer: I'll see if many people will complain]
it'll be better if you can enlarge 1 circle size [Entozer: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA]

Star! [Entozer: Thanks! :­)]

LoweH wrote:

Hi !


Hard
00:24:840 (6) - New combo here
00:37:640 (7) - New combo here [Entozer: Done]

SHD
General - Map is too hard too for approval * [Entozer: asdsafsfdf It's super hard. =/ It's supposed to be like that :­(]
* Maybe you can fix with slider circle size -1? [Entozer: AAAAAAAAAAAA ok that's it. The fun is out. Changed.]
01:07:240 (1) - Why new combo here (?) [Entozer: Ah. sorry. fixed]
02:30:440 (1) - Too long and too fast [Entozer: I'll keep this in mind. I'll see what other people will say]
02:36:040 (10) - This slider is unrankable [Entozer: Changed to stream.]


Ok starrr** ~ [Entozer: Thanks! :­)]

Thunderstorm wrote:

Wow, really good job, can't find something wrong. [Entozer: Thanks. :­)]
But this might have an easier difficulty

Xero_HT wrote:

This map is really doing well!

+ 3 kds stars!

DONT LET IT DIE!^^

WyndII wrote:

oi! musta tol!

Earth Quake

[General]
Map can't be rank if the diffz are like hard and Insane... it should have a normal/easy [Entozer: I'll make a Normal diff. I asked MarioBros777 for an easy diff.]


[SHD]
Can't read...
Notes on DT part is confusing... [Entozer: I'll take note of that]

[Hard]
00:37:240 - clap?
00:40:440 - ^ [Entozer: Ah. nice. thanks.]
etc etc