1. Another (5 stars, 428 notes)
2. Hyper (4.27 stars, 219 notes)
3. Normal (3.21 stars, 179 notes)

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Stack Laniency: add 1-2 ticks
  • You should make another diff

• • 00:36:510 (2) - Add a slider-repetition
  • 00:38:132 (2) - ^
  • 01:31:247 (5) - New combo

• • 00:08:532 (1,1) - Delete these circles
  • 01:13:202 (1,1) - There should be no 1/4 notes after spinners. It most likely doesn't play well.
  • 01:19:993 (11) - New combo
  • 01:49:389 (4,1) - This jump is evil; fix the spacing
  • 02:05:404 (11) - New combo

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Stack Laniency: add 1-2 ticks done.
  • You should make another diff yep, a [Normal] is needed.

[Relaxing]

• • 00:36:510 (2) - Add a slider-repetition
  • 00:38:132 (2) - ^
  • 01:31:247 (5) - New combo

all done.

[Lunatic]

• • 00:08:532 (1,1) - Delete these circles
  • 01:13:202 (1,1) - There should be no 1/4 notes after spinners. It most likely doesn't play well.
  • 01:19:993 (11) - New combo
  • 01:49:389 (4,1) - This jump is evil; fix the spacing
  • 02:05:404 (11) - New combo

all done. that jump now is quite tiny.

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

I feel it's time for mod4mod

[General]
1) Epic Of Zektbach -Ristaccia- is an album, please delete at source oh, thx.
2) The black combo color is odd to see, try something else? Temp background, some changes will be done after I finish the SB.

[Lunatic]
01:33:272 (1,2,3,1) - Make it curve? sorry,but no.

Nice song
STAR

soulfear wrote:

[Relaxing]
01:01:241 (2) - a bit hard to beat. done.

01:57:194 (1) - reduce a back.
01:58:005 (2) - change its begin at 01:58:005 and add a back.
01:58:815 (3) - reduce a back.
01:59:626 - add note. it's fine now.

02:19:899 (1) - don't stack it with 02:18:683 (6). done.
02:20:710 (4) - stack it with 02:20:305 (3)'s end. no.
[Lunatic]
OA+1 done.
00:36:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - don't put a slider in them...hard to read and beat.
all circles?
00:42:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ...
00:54:754 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ...
00:57:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - the place is hard to beat. it's fine
01:00:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well,this is a little better..but I think it's ok. ...

star.

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Sorry but I thought you should make easier difficulty then 3star, Your [Relaxing] look like a Hard really

will have a tour next days so don't have much time recently. will consider how to map one.

[Relaxing]
01:06:106 (4) - spacing? or new combo

u mean (5)? my mistake and fixed

That all for me, Starr ^^

1. 删掉osb文件

1. 01:43:814 (5) - 加clap?
2. 02:49:092 (1) - 加finish
3. 02:52:336 (1) - ^
4. 02:55:579 (1) - ^
5. 02:58:823 (S) - 不用silence吧? 结束用finish感觉挺好

1. 01:14:824 (x) - 这里加个和01:15:026一样的timing section,以防玩的时候点早了声音不同

1. offset: 413 (yours feels a little late)

Yeah, this is definately too hard for the easiest difficulty. You should either make this diff easier, or make an easier difficulty (actuay, i would make an easier difficulty and make this easier as well if you can. Its not fitting for a "relaxing" diff to be this hard )

Astom wrote:

In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-Zektbach - Turii ~Panta Rhei~ (Colin Hou).osb Erase this file, u don't use it i said i'll update the SB later.
-Use same kiai time in both diff done.
-U need another diff with less of 3,5 stars done.

Mmm very nice but Lunatic is too hard =( maybe reduce OD or increse circle size. OD decreased.

StaR

LKs wrote:

offest=429?
add another easier diff done.

Relaxing

[00:36:10]~[01:02:05] 用normal-hitnormal来代替clap，soft-clap感觉不太fit这歌 （建议使用custom hitsound而不是加绿线）

太复杂了 *_* 暂时先不动

Lunatic

not bad

star

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. 删掉osb文件

[Relaxing]

1. 01:43:814 (5) - 加clap? 唔 换了个姿势结果声音忘记重加了
2. 02:49:092 (1) - 加finish
3. 02:52:336 (1) - ^
4. 02:55:579 (1) - ^
5. 02:58:823 (S) - 不用silence吧? 结束用finish感觉挺好

[Lunatic]

1. 01:14:824 (x) - 这里加个和01:15:026一样的timing section,以防玩的时候点早了声音不同

万事俱备只欠Easy,Normal =w=

all done.

star

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

1. offset: 413 (yours feels a little late) done.

[RELAXING]

Yeah, this is definately too hard for the easiest difficulty. You should either make this diff easier, or make an easier difficulty (actuay, i would make an easier difficulty and make this easier as well if you can. Its not fitting for a "relaxing" diff to be this hard )

Apart from that, looks good

Greener is now available~

[LUNATIC]

Lower the Overall Difficulty by 1 notch? feels a little high to me done.

00:57:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Because of how the hitcircles all overlap each other here, I found it hard to read when I played it. Perhaps you could put these in a different pattern that don't overlap?

done. stacks are much easier.

the bit with the notes on 1/3 were odd, but they worked pretty well actually.

Nice map. My only major issue in this is the easier difficulty really. Good job

Starred

YGOkid8 wrote:

i request to make an easy. This map is in need of one.

The [Greener] is made for this...

Greener:

Normal Mod~
02:30:026 (1,2,3) - Adjust so (2) is on the y axis done.

Relaxing:

Combo Mod~
01:06:096 (4) - New Combo. done.

Normal Mod~
02:25:566 (7) - Make this more symmetrical done.

Nazi Mod~
00:48:662 (2) - Move to x axis to fully align with (1) 3_3 maybe do some change on (1) is better
00:50:689 (1,2) - Make it like this: done.

SPOILER

Lunatic:

Combo Mod~
02:02:860 (6) - New Combo.
02:10:564 (6) - ^

all done.

Nazi Mod~
01:55:562 (1,2) - What? (2) isn't parallel to (1)? ._.

lol so careful, done.

Colin Hou wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

i request to make an easy. This map is in need of one.

The [Greener] is made for this...

YGOkid8 wrote:

Wait what? Greener is meant to be easy? I thought it was Normal! You need to make a few more changes then.

- Maybe: Reduce HP Drain Rate by 1
- Definitely: Reduce Overall Difficulty by at least 2
- Maybe: Reduce Slider Velocity (this would mean you'd have to go through the map and do a small re-map...)

Real1 wrote:

I can only find SUGGESTIONS in this map!

[Greener]
02:06:104 (1,2,3) - I really can't feel the rhythm in these, very much. I suggest mapping it in another way, or maybe making the spinner before it, longer. If you delete 1 and 2, but keep (3) and end spinner at 02:06:509, where (2) used to be, it sounds much better.

ye, much better now ^^

[Relaxing]
02:18:673 (6) - I suggest making this slider longer. Maybe end it at next red or white tick. oh, that should be 0.5x there.
02:42:595 (x) - Add a note here with a finish? done.
02:56:988 (1) - I think it should end like in Greener. done.

[Lunatic]
Fine stuff.

Big shiny star.

Dusty wrote:

Tags: add Akiko Shikata?
She did vocals for this song.

done.

[Greener]
01:15:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These didn't stack properly and look ugly, if you increase the Stack Leniency in Song Setup>Advanced tab it looks better.

that doesn't work well, so replaces the notes there.

[Relaxing]
02:13:402 (1) - is this supposed to be a slow/longer slider?

ye, x0.5, a mistake. >///<

[Lunatic]
00:32:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It might sound better if you silence sliderticks for this section

quite difficult to do. even in 1/6...

gdeath wrote:

Overall :
使用以下附件中custom hitsound，解压后吧.wav文件放进你图的目录里就行了
以下mod的地方都给改好了。take a look ^^
还有就是换了custom hitsound感觉volume有点轻，你可以自己适当微调下volume

尝试了一下, 音量调到最大还是有点怪...还是用自带的音效吧

[Relaxing]
降低slidertick为1.0
这样听起来更好些

恩, 好了很多 ^^

[Lunatic]
01:49:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里一连串的whistle听起来感觉不好
01:57:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

果然好多了

02:30:026 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 一连串finish也不好,remove了finish并适当的加了custom clap

保留了finish, 音量上降低了点.

Awesome mappset.
Star!

PS:个人也很喜欢Zektbach这种类似SH式的叙事风格的曲子

minyeob wrote:

[Relaxing]
00:50:689 (1) - Unsnapped orz I suggest decreasing the length by using 1/4 beat snap divisor.
00:53:933 (1) - Same as above
00:57:176 (1) - Same as above

Fix and reconnect me ><

minyeob wrote:

Orz

CDFA wrote:

Greener!:
A bit fast for the easiest diff, but meh.
01:36:100 (2) - It kinda rolls back on itself, which looks kinda wierd.
......

<3~.

Sakura301 wrote:

Yes i do mod bubbled maps
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
title.png is part of SB and is over SB image limitations (800x600) right now its 813x330 size consider cropping it or rezising it 1024x768 is the limit.

[Greener]
01:15:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/2 spaced notes for the easiest difficulty? not very newbie friendly
01:18:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

This is a diff of 3.21 star rating... Like a Normal

[Relaxing]
02:52:326 (1) - Out of bounds (very partially so i will point it as minor)
02:55:164 (1) - ^

Osz

[Lunatic]
Why do you use 1/3 snap here when you use 1/4 on the other 2 diffs?

some part is 1/3, some is 1/4

Sakura301 wrote:

BG Limit is 1024x728, SB elements 800x600 those are the limits im aware of, also current ranking criteria needs you to have an Easy that's less than 3 stars, i dont really look into the stars much, but i do look into stuff that prevents a Normal from being an Easy like 1/2 spaced notes

Lizbeth wrote:

Lunatic
00:47:310 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part confuse me... all objects have the same distance in time line, but in charts are in groups of triples... make me think that between those triples is a bigger space in time line, it was hard to read new combo at the (4)s
00:57:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - same here no.
01:49:379 (4,1) - same no.
01:57:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ no.

Relaxing
I suggest decrease overall diff. no.
apart from that, map is good

Greener
i think slider velocity is to high for the easiest diff
notes after spinners are to fast imo
just keep it like it is now, sorry.

nice map, star~ =)

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Hmm...

[Lunatic]:
02:04:482 (1) - You should remove one repeat here, and then have a new combo start at 02:05:293 (5) - while removing the New combo that's one note after. I say this because the first slider's repeat were like this, so someone can easily assume that this repeat is the same amount. Because it's not, it might lead to some confusion and misses. It's not easy for someone to evaluate when a repeat slider'll end at such blazing speed like this. x:

Just a suggestion. XD Tell me what you think.

Really awesome map otherwise. Epic artist <3

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Why not use beatmania diff names?

Beginner / Normal / Hyper / Another ?

Colin Hou wrote:

oh, kirby where are you... @_@

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

oh, kirby where are you... @_@

Hiii ~