Hai, M4M
You said to do 1 but I did 2 diffs so enjoy? xD
[wendao's Extra]
This map is already near perfect so excuse me if I don't help a WHOLE lot. This is just very nitpicky stuff :p
00:34:241 (1,2,3) - This gap at 00:34:797 feels really awkward. Consider changing the rhythm of this part up a bit.
01:13:240 (3,6) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack.
02:22:571 (2) - End of this slider looks pretty sloppy in my eyes. It doesn't change gameplay and doesn't fit in well with the rest of the sliders. Maybe attempt to neaten it up a bit / change it?
02:31:404 (1,2) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack.
02:45:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other.
02:51:238 (11,1) - Please don't make these this close together q_q. Just bring it back to the purple tick. 04:25:070 (1,1) is a good example.
02:54:737 (2) - Move this left a bit or stack it under 02:54:238 (1)
03:04:321 (2) - I'd recommend moving this directly under the stream as opposed to to the left a bit but this is very minor.
By the way I fking love the stream part!
03:19:571 (10) - NC?
03:48:403 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is so much fun
04:14:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other.
04:31:570 (6,7,8,9) - Neaten
04:37:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - Round this a bit? Again really minor.
[Insane]
00:45:907 (3,4,5) - Clean this up a bit. Keep the flow going. The notes kinda just go straight instead of curving (well they curve a bit but not a good amount)
01:20:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Blanket
01:22:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something about this feels wonky. Consider
http://puu.sh/fx92J/1d9dfbe123.png 01:24:740 (6,1) - Bad flow
01:25:906 (5,6,1) - Inconsistent distance snapping here doesn't feel good
01:33:906 (7,8,1) - Wonky spacing
01:49:684 (3,4) - Swap these two. Make the reverse slider come after the regular slider
02:12:238 (3) - Make this a 'fancy' slider. Feels out of place with sliders like 02:10:905 (5)
02:36:071 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow. Adds a cool little jump there as well
02:48:238 (5,6,1) - The song here suggests a break in flow but you have the exact opposite. Would feel more natural if you broke the flow a little bit here.
03:15:571 (1,2) - Eh make the second slider the same as the first but mirrored on a vertical axis.
03:19:571 (8) - Curve slider beginning to the right instead to keep a good flow.
03:18:238 (7) - NC
04:10:070 (2,6) - Blanket off VERY slightly.
04:20:904 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad rhythm here. Doesn't really go with the music in terms of slider and circle placement.
04:23:904 (4,1) - Blanket better (1 into 4)