wendao wrote:

http://puu.sh/e8QLD.rar

fk hitsound

• [General]

1. Timing Points : 01:52:906 (Change the hitsound to *SC:2* Because Timing Points all using *SC:2*) check -> http://puu.sh/ebNsR/185b3ce507.png
2. add tag : wendao (you write wendao2000) let's considering this .
3. The folder size is 10.6 MB Without SB / Video (are you using too much Hitsound ? or something ?) maybe delete unused hitsound ?
4. You write in your post : (*for someone to make the SB instead*) . Maybe turn on the Widescreen Support ?
5. Turn on "Letterbox during break" ? because wendao's GD have a break

• [ Hard]

1. 00:07:709 (4,1) - blanked maybe ?
2. 00:21:074 - add not ?
3. 00:42:907 (1) - move to the "right" a bit to make better flow to 00:43:407 (2,3)
4. 00:44:241 (4,5) - can you reduce the space ? maybe move (5) to (x:208 y:104)
5. 00:58:906 (2) - can you just make straight to 00:59:406 (3) - ? or you try make blanked over here ? "idk"
6. 01:48:906 (4) - improve this slider ? to make better flow to 01:49:573 (5)
7. 02:04:905 (1) - Ctrl+G?
8. 02:06:905 (1) - ^
9. 02:30:904 (8,9) - blanked well
10. 03:03:571 (2) - Ctrl+G?
11. 03:23:238 (2) - eh ? weird slider over here
12. 03:27:238 (4) - can you just straighten to 03:26:904 (3) - to make better flow
13. 03:55:903 (6,1) - blanked well ? maybe move (6) to the "left" a bit ?
14. 04:16:070 (3) - improve this slider ? to make better flow with 04:15:570 (2)
15. 04:19:903 (7) - remove ?
16. 04:30:903 (1,2) - blanked well
17. 04:33:569 (4,5) - Ctrl+G here ? maybe , i think following flow of 04:34:403 (2,3,4) - will be better

• [ Insane]

1. 00:30:741 (9) - can you just straighten with 00:30:908 (1)
2. 00:37:574 (2,3) - blanked well
3. 01:01:573 (2,3) - straighten
4. 01:07:740 - add not ?
5. 02:51:238 (5,1) - blanked well also (1) Ctrl+G

• [ wendao's Extra]

1. 02:51:238 (11) - unsnapped slider (end)
2. unsnapped inherited (green) section at 02:51:550 - snap to 02:51:571
3. 02:21:571 (1,2) - swap? Ctrl+G but keep the flow before
4. 04:38:903 (1) - This spinner is 9333 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play

• [Inconsistency in Kiai Times]
  
  [Easy]

  1. Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:573, ends on 01:19:573
  2. Kiai #2: Starts on 02:11:571, ends on 02:35:571
  3. Kiai #3: Starts on 03:40:237, ends on 04:28:236
  
  
  [Normal]
• Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:573, ends on 01:19:573
• Kiai #2: Starts on 02:11:571, ends on 02:35:571
• Kiai #3: Starts on 03:42:903, ends on 04:28:236
  

• [AIMOD Says]

1. For Easy & wendao's Extra
   
   

Sky Trias wrote:

• [General]

1. Timing Points : 01:52:906 (Change the hitsound to *SC:2* Because Timing Points all using *SC:2*) check -> http://puu.sh/ebNsR/185b3ce507.png sound here doesn't matter since some of the diffs was covered with green lines, also since Easy don't use green line, this is crucial to be preserved
2. add tag : wendao (you write wendao2000) let's considering this . wendao2000 was his previous username that has map ranked, so instead of using both wendao2000 and wendao, I used only wendao2000 so you can search both keywords on that
3. The folder size is 10.6 MB Without SB / Video (are you using too much Hitsound ? or something ?) maybe delete unused hitsound ? lol we need all of them, can't delete
4. You write in your post : (*for someone to make the SB instead*) . Maybe turn on the Widescreen Support ? later if there's SB I'll change that
5. Turn on "Letterbox during break" ? because wendao's GD have a break I hate letterbox tbh

• [ Hard]

1. 00:07:709 (4,1) - blanked maybe ? that's a blanket already orz
2. 00:21:074 - add not ? ok
3. 00:42:907 (1) - move to the "right" a bit to make better flow to 00:43:407 (2,3) not necessary
4. 00:44:241 (4,5) - can you reduce the space ? maybe move (5) to (x:208 y:104) mini jump there to emphasize the violin
5. 00:58:906 (2) - can you just make straight to 00:59:406 (3) - ? or you try make blanked over here ? "idk" it's blanket, lol you didn't see my blanket well ):
6. 01:48:906 (4) - improve this slider ? to make better flow to 01:49:573 (5) done
7. 02:04:905 (1) - Ctrl+G? on purpose, triangular shape
8. 02:06:905 (1) - ^ on purpose, following the previous patten
9. 02:30:904 (8,9) - blanked well fixed
10. 03:03:571 (2) - Ctrl+G? bad flow orz
11. 03:23:238 (2) - eh ? weird slider over here on purpose lol
12. 03:27:238 (4) - can you just straighten to 03:26:904 (3) - to make better flow rotate (3) instead
13. 03:55:903 (6,1) - blanked well ? maybe move (6) to the "left" a bit ? it is blanketed well ):
    here

    
14. 04:16:070 (3) - improve this slider ? to make better flow with 04:15:570 (2) blanket, well I fixed it a bit
15. 04:19:903 (7) - remove ? ok
16. 04:30:903 (1,2) - blanked well fixed
17. 04:33:569 (4,5) - Ctrl+G here ? maybe , i think following flow of 04:34:403 (2,3,4) - will be better imo this one is an upward flow, so ctrl G might broke them

• [ Insane]

1. 00:30:741 (9) - can you just straighten with 00:30:908 (1) fixed
2. 00:37:574 (2,3) - blanked well this is not a blanket btw, oh well, fixed
3. 01:01:573 (2,3) - straighten instead of straightening it, I stack it to (1)'s tail
4. 01:07:740 - add not ? ok
5. 02:51:238 (5,1) - blanked well also (1) Ctrl+G fix blanket, why ctrl G? not necessary

• [Inconsistency in Kiai Times]
  fixed Easy's Kiai

Sky Trias wrote:

• [ wendao's Extra]

1. 02:51:238 (11) - unsnapped slider (end) 1/16
2. unsnapped inherited (green) section at 02:51:550 - snap to 02:51:571 ^
3. 02:21:571 (1,2) - swap? Ctrl+G but keep the flow before kept
4. 04:38:903 (1) - This spinner is 9333 ms long, which is longer than 7500 ms; it may get tiring to play happy30 get rekt || kept

• [Inconsistency in Kiai Times]
  
  [wendao's Extra]

  1. Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:573, ends on 01:16:406
  2. Kiai #2: Starts on 01:16:740, ends on 01:19:573
  3. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:47:573, ends on 01:52:906
  4. Kiai #4: Starts on 02:11:571, ends on 02:32:571
  5. Kiai #5: Starts on 02:32:738, ends on 02:35:571
  6. Kiai #6: Starts on 02:56:904, ends on 03:07:071
  7. Kiai #7: Starts on 03:42:903, ends on 03:43:070
  8. Kiai #8: Starts on 03:45:570, ends on 03:48:237
  9. Kiai #9: Starts on 03:50:903, ends on 03:52:737
  10. Kiai #10: Starts on 03:53:570, ends on 04:04:236
  11. Kiai #11: Starts on 04:04:570, ends on 04:25:070
  12. Kiai #12: Starts on 04:25:403, ends on 04:28:236

it's not a problem for GD mapper (I did the same here)

• [AIMOD Says]

1. For Easy & wendao's Extra
   
   

that's not really a problem

wendao wrote:

added some hitsound, pls update

DemoNoidX wrote:

Normal

00:50:907 - Remove slider
00:50:907 - Slider starts, 00:51:241 - Slider ends
At 00:51:574 - 00:51:907 - 00:52:241 - 00:52:574 - Add hit circles
00:50:907 (3) - on this part, I follow the violin

Shift slider 01:12:906 (1) - , to 01:12:740 - ok, and I lenghten the slider to 01:13:240 -
01:13:240 - Add hit circle because this is Normal diff, I preder a slider rather than HC ^
01:32:573 - Add hit circle a faint sound, so I don't add
01:33:906 - Remove hit circle a strong beat
01:35:240 - Add hit circle same reason, faint
01:38:573 - Add hit circle ^
01:39:240 - Remove hit circle same reason, strong
01:40:573 - Add hit circle faint
01:48:573 - Add hit circle ^
04:04:903 - 04:05:070 - Add hit circles emphasize the cymbal sound there, so a pause looks cool

Hard

00:48:907 (2) - Remove reverse slider so it ends at 00:49:241 I prefer reverse
00:49:574 - Add hit circle ^
00:49:907 (3) - Remove reverse slider so it ends at 00:50:241 ^
00:50:574 - Add hit circle ^
01:13:740 - Add hit circle following the vocal here so I don't add, also 4 HCs in a row are too crowded here, the kiai is not as intense as the last one
01:14:073 - remove hit circle and shift slider from 01:14:240 to 01:14:073 and remove reverse so it ends at 01:14:406 it sounds weird, so I prefer not to change
01:14:573 - 01:14:740 - 01:14:906 - Add hit circles
Extend slider at 01:47:573 (1) up to 01:48:073 follow the violin sound, also those multiple HCs are overmapped
02:16:738 - Add hit circle faint sound
04:26:570 (3) - Make it a reverse slider and remove hit circle from 04:26:903 a strong beat on 04:26:903 (4) - so I prefer not to change

Insane

Remove slider from 01:05:906 and add hit circles at 01:05:906 - 01:06:073 I want to preserve a pattern here 01:05:573 (2,3) -

Remove slider from 01:07:240 and add hit circle
Add slider at 01:07:406 that extends up to 01:07:740 -
ok, sounds nice

End slider at 01:11:156 so remove circle at 01:11:240 maybe?.. I don't get what you mean here, since that's a stream part
Extend slider 02:12:238 (3) up to 02:12:571 and remove hit circle at 02:12:571 ok
02:13:405 - Add hit circle added

theramdans wrote:

[Easy]omg what a handsome easy diff lol :3 lol
01:27:240 (1,2) - flow being cut a bit, move 2 (and 3 too, because it blankets) upper-right, like 279||139 moved, also did on the last part
02:56:404 (2) - maybe a break after this? not sure orz ok
04:21:570 (3,4) - curve either or both of them I want to preserve the edgy part here lol
[Normal]00:12:909 (3) - move this a little bit to left so it elongates from the previous (2) lol this one is on purpose so it will be exactly in the middle of the screen to prepare spinner
00:22:574 (5,6) - seems like you overlooked this, stack them properly ok
00:40:907 (1) - NC? coz the beginning of vocal is strong, and it is the 3/4 part , it is so noticeable ^
00:41:907 (1) - un-NC, instead NC at 00:42:907 - ^
00:45:907 (2,3) - seems like you overlooked this, stack them properly (minor ftw but noticeable) fixed
01:12:906 (1) - make this and the following (2) look like this, it follows the vocal better ok
01:34:240 (3) - NC here, I feel it makes the NC-ing consistent in this part (every 2 notes) fixed some NC on my own pattern
01:54:572 (2,3) - this blanket almost overlap! lol~ shifted the middle point a bit
02:27:404 (5) - NC, because the combo became too long here ok
02:34:071 (6) - NC, same reason^ ^
02:35:238 (4) - move a bit to the right, so the flow 'opens' towards that way I fix the previous instead of this one
03:04:904 (3) - NC, because it is already another verse of the crazy violin part :p ok
03:15:571 (3) - NC, because loooooooooooong sliders lol ok
[Hard]00:10:109 (1) - y to 203 ok
00:33:241 (4,5) - seems like you overlooked this, stack them properly (minor ftw but noticeable) fixed
01:11:740 (1,2) - fix blanket ^
01:13:073 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:16:240 (5) - move to 86||143 ok
01:17:073 (1,2) - fix blanket (kinda minor) fixed
01:32:240 (2) - y to 92 ^
01:46:906 (5) - y to 24 ^
02:01:905 (3) - x to 132 ^
02:04:905 (1) - y to 232 ^
02:19:905 (1,2) - fix blanket (very minor) ^
02:27:904 (3) - move 331||327 ^
03:02:238 (1) - y to 164 ^
03:40:237 - have a beat here, then move the spinner 1/2 , 1/3, or 1/6 further away prefer 1/4 though
03:59:070 (2,3) - fix blanket (very minor) fixed
04:02:570 (5,6) - ^ ^
04:30:903 (1,2) - ^ ^
O.O No Breaks yes
[Insane]03:02:238 - to 03:06:154 - I think the amount of streams can be reduced a little by putting a few 1/4 repeat sliders, buuuut it is your call to make decision
It fits the crazy violin though lol lol I'll let this be
04:21:736 (5,6) - try ctrl+g this imo the flow can be seen if I preserve this
04:22:070 (7) - ^ flow on this 04:22:070 (7,8,9) -
04:38:653 (4) - NC ? ok
O.O No Breaks too yes [2] (8

wendao wrote:

omg r00d

JeZag wrote:

Extra
This is too pro for a pleb like me
I can still try tho
00:28:408 (6,7,8) - More flow on these notes instead of stack? keep
00:36:908 (1) - Stuff about inaudible in this section still following the vocal tho
00:53:740 (6,7) - Make this into a 1/4 slider to distinguish 00:53:907 (8,9,10,11) from 00:53:407 (4,5,6,7) (judging by your hitsounds and it's more readable) great
00:54:907 (1) - Faster SV and more wild? (just like the guitar) I like slowdown slider
01:52:906 (1) - Inaudible stuff same as above
03:13:904 (5) - Shorten this because imo 03:14:182 should be clicked, not slider tail It'll be weird, since 03:13:571 (4,5) - had 1/1 distance snap, so keep
03:15:238 (5) - ^^^ ^^^
04:01:903 (2) - The only flow in your map that sort of bothers me lol :(
04:07:736 - Can this be clicked? umm... it's just... a variation 'what should be click'd and what should not be'
GG so intense

JeZag wrote:

Easy

00:04:909 I want to click this beat... shorten 00:03:709 (3) - to 2/1 slider and add a hitcircle? oki
00:35:574 (2) - Can you make this point towards 00:36:908 (1)? changed
idk how beginners think, but it would be helpful if the slider led the mouse to the right direction (bc all n00bs use mouse right? jkjk)
00:36:908 (1,2) - Some angst here because they don't point towards the next slider uh, the DS..
00:54:240 (3) - I'd prefer this as 1/1 so I can click 00:54:907 as a hitcircle (bsides a 1/2 slider fits the guitar better) this one is kinda too crowded for Easy
00:58:240 (1) - You can change polarity by ending this on 00:59:073 ok
00:59:573 (2) move this onto 00:59:406 afterwards (fits music a lot better) ^
01:03:573 (1,2,3,4) - Change the polarity so it gets on the red ticks (fits music better) ok
01:10:906 (3,1) - Polarity problems: somehow add something 01:11:073 for better readability (best option: 1/2 slider?) ok
01:30:240 (1,1) - Doesn't flow QQ orz, long pause I think its ok
01:42:240 (1,2,1,2,3) - The hitsounds make this spot sound invisible; something players hate (make it louder plssss) okay
01:52:906 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same inaudible hitsound uuh, increase the volume then
02:00:905 (1,2) - These are good, so why aren't 02:02:905 (3,1,1)? The downbeat needs at least some sound >.< if you listen to the song without any objects, it is clear that the part there is louder than the rest
02:11:571 (1,2) - Change polarity again ok
02:14:238 (1,2) - Change polarity and make 02:15:405 (2) end at 02:16:238 and hitcircle at 02:16:571 pls ^
02:19:238 feels like its missing a hitcircle especially after tons of 1/1 slider mapping at 02:16:905 (1,2,3) added
02:31:571 (4,1) - An issue on polarity (add a hitcircle on 02:32:404?) ½ beat will be hard for Easy
02:47:571 (3,1) - Ewww if you can make a better blanket, plz do lol this one is ok like this
02:52:904 (1) - Make this 1/1 otherwise you're advertising for something on 02:53:404 that doesn't exist, making it sound awk ok changed
02:54:238 (3,1) - Polarity issues same reason as 02:47:571 (3,1) -
03:01:071 (4,1) - ^^^ ^
03:12:238 Song is literally begging for a note here (might not have vocals, but it feels right >.<) >begging, lol ok added
03:14:237 (2,3) - Iffy flow 03:15:571 (3) looks nice but might not be nice to play for beginner sad ): - preserve this for a while
03:18:238 (1) - If you control + G this you can tell that the 03:15:571 (3) blanket before isn't that good fixed
03:29:238 (4,1) - rip flow also missing whistle on head D: on purpose
I would shorten 03:29:238 (4) to 2/1 slider instead of 3/1 and add something at 03:30:238 to click (also remap a bit for flow) changed flow to something else
03:32:904 Hitcircle here plz ok
03:34:238 (5) - Aimed towards 03:36:238 (1)? kk
03:36:238 (1,2) - This is a bit off perfect symmetry; 03:37:237 (2) needs to be up a bit more moved
03:41:570 (2) - Again, make this 1/1 and add 03:42:237 prefer 2/1
03:42:903 (1,2) - Change polarity for song ok
03:45:570 (3) - Maybe have this end on 03:46:737 but I'm afraid of polarity this one is ok imo
03:50:903 (2,3,4) - Make this on red ticks again blah blah blah (and extend 03:52:070 (4) ofc) kk
04:05:570 (1) - Awk bc song says it should start 04:05:403 changed
(I get how you use 04:04:236 (3) finish as like a grand pause, but the break is just awkward at 04:05:403) )):
04:06:903 (2,3) - Red tick stuff also 04:08:070 (3) cannot be repeated slider if red tick stuff were to work out I'll preserve this, because (3) is following the violin
04:24:903 (1) - 1/2 and 04:25:570 (2) on 04:25:403 ok
04:25:403 (2) - Plz break this up and map it because it makes note density from 04:26:903 (3,4) look awkward changed
04:37:570 (3) - Make the timing point start at the spinner because this slider tail should be heard moved
whew! \hurray/

Normal

00:03:309 (3) - whistle? uh no, pattern of hitsound is 1-3 not, 1-3-4
00:04:509 (5) - whistle on slider tail? ^
00:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Tweak things up a bit so you don't sacrifice flow to get 00:12:909 (3) on the center done
00:39:908 (2,1) - Questionable flow (aka none x_x) lol this one was semi-blanketing the body
00:50:907 (3) - This is just lazy: if you were really mapping out the piano/harp/whatever you would have made 00:48:907 (1) one big slider too I'm not lazy ): - btw this was following my anime size ver, but different shape - since if I change it to spinner there will have recovery problem
pls make 3 1/1 sliders instead
01:00:906 (1) - Looks weird: use red anchor points my ultimate S slider D:
01:04:073 (2,3) - Same: use red anchors to make it more cutting edge i guess... same ^
01:04:740 (3) - Don't like the flow to 01:05:573 (4) I'll preserve this for a while since the (4) blankets the (3)
01:08:906 (1) - 1/1 then hitcircle at 01:09:406 too crowded with ½ beats
01:40:906 (3) - Questionable flow to and from this slider blanket ):
01:42:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again inaudible stuff kk change to 50%
01:52:906 (1) - 02:08:905 (3) Inaudible yeh ^
02:20:071 (2,3) - Polarity issue this one is alright imo, since this is Normal
03:10:238 (3) - Add other points so it doesn't look like a 2012 slider ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2564359 pls ) lol done
03:12:904 (1,3) - Since these are 1/1 add stuff at 03:13:904 and 03:15:238 (softer hitsounds on these ofc if you want to emphasize base)
04:15:903 (3,4,5,6) - What happened to red tick mapping? changed (3) to ½
04:23:570 Even though there is no main vocal, this pause is awkward added but different pattern

Hard

00:16:908 (4,1) - icky flow D: there's a pause there so imo its alright
00:31:574 (1) - Sounds akw because it ends "too early" would recommend ending on a later 1/3 or 1/4 tick if you listen carefully there's a sound at the ½ beat
00:35:908 (5) - Awk stuff just relook at song and remap the rhythm plz I put the storng beat on the head, eventhough this one 00:35:908 - is a strong beat, but I can't use 2 HC on 00:35:797 (2) - because ½ stream will be too hard for Hard. also, there's no beat on 00:36:130 - . decided not to add 00:36:463 - so the transition between ½ and ¼ are clear
00:50:907 (1,2) - Different plz (the copy paste is strong) instead, make 3 1/1 sliders without repeat changed
00:52:907 (3) - See if you can map this to center okok
01:01:906 (3,4) - Polarity issue this is Hard, so its ok
01:31:573 (1,2) - Not a good stack fixed
01:42:240 (1) - Starting here inaudible stuff increased the vol
01:47:573 (1,5) - Feel like these should be longer imo imo its fine as it is
01:52:018 (3) - Make this a 1/3 slider and add a 2/3 slider at 01:52:240 changed, also didn't add 01:52:684 - because same reason as above
01:52:906 (1) - Inaudible stuff vol up
02:15:738 (4) - This being the only "hard" and unpredictable thing in your map will make many hard FCers mad lol lol what to do the violin there is awesome
02:23:238 (3) - Map the red tick for vocal idk if I should add, sounds weird orz
02:26:404 (4) - What's the point of this? not in music (i think) should be a stream there, but because this is hard, I change it to slider
02:34:071 (4) - Red anchor pls )): my S slider orz
03:03:571 (2) - Better flow if you ctrl+G uuuh
03:13:571 (2) - Should repeat; right now it sounds weird ok
03:14:904 (4) - Same ^
03:26:238 (1,2,3,4) - Huge note density here but almost none at 03:28:238 (1,2). Why? I follow the vocal
03:38:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Redo your pentagon so that 03:40:237 (6) ends on center without having to stack changed to hex
03:49:237 (3,4) - Map the red ticks instead for vocals ( I get you're going for symmetry but its boring for the players to be just clicking 1/1 hitcircles ) added halves
03:54:570 (3) - Red tick pls kk
04:10:570 (3) - ^^^ ^
04:22:236 (1) - Use red anchors pls the blanket right now doesn't look good this is on purpose orz
04:38:653 (1) - The head should be loud but the tail should not; change the timing point kk
04:39:070 (1) - Remove clap? why

Insane

00:24:130 (2,3) - pls make this double tap closer together x_x (in fact, make all your double taps closer together plzzz) due to different beats, there are various beats => ½, ⅓, and ¼ - it is hard to differentiate
Gave up orz song's too long and I'm too tired lol, I really appreciate your mod. changed some volumes and the last greentick

Setsurei wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 07, 2015 at 2:27:46 PM

Artist: Mayama Rika
Title: Liar Mask
Source: アカメが斬る！
Tags: Akame ga Kill! kiru 2nd Opening second WHITE FOX Square Enix Full wendao2000 Harez
BPM: 150
Filesize: 10815kb
Play Time: 04:44
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.48 stars, 241 notes)
2. Hard (3.03 stars, 540 notes)
3. Insane (4.98 stars, 803 notes)
4. Normal (1.99 stars, 363 notes)
5. wendao's Extra (5.33 stars, 1075 notes)

Download: Mayama Rika - Liar Mask
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Akame ga Kill! 2nd Opening Full ver. \:D/ (the anime size ver: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/222671)

decided to map this full because Mayama Rika and the song is awesome
(not intended to upload the PV, I'm looking for someone to make the SB instead
I'm too lazy to make one lol. PM me if you're interested)

by me
by wendao

DemoNoidX wrote:

I'm gonna guess he's trying to say to add a HC here 00:36:491 - and here 00:36:658 - in the hard diff so it kinda goes with the beat? o-o
...Just assuming! c:

Setsurei wrote:

JeZag wrote:

00:35:908 (5) - Awk stuff just relook at song and remap the rhythm plz I put the storng beat on the head, eventhough this one 00:35:908 - is a strong beat, but I can't use 2 HC on 00:35:797 (2) - because ⅓ stream will be too hard for Hard. also, there's no beat on 00:36:130 - . decided not to add 00:36:463 - so the transition are clear

1. 02:08:905 - volume is really low. I recommend at least turn up 40%

1. 00:35:574 (3,4) - it is really uncomfortable to play. I can't catch what rhythm you followed. couldn't be better if you change this just 1/1 repeated slider one.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:08:240 (5) - HP bar little touched
2. 02:20:571 (3,4) - it doesn't supported by anything. what about this rhythm? look at 3~5
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 04:31:403 (3,4,5,6) - the number of clicks here seems pretty high considering even the kiai doesn't have stuff like this, it would better for more sliders here

• 
  I'm sorry, but I want to say map's SV is quite a bit low compared with traditional insane SV. so I'm afraid to say many things. because, I have scarcely no experience to deal with low SV map. so I'm just gonna tell you things that I catched noticeable.

1. 00:32:574 (4) - it doesn't supported by anything sounds. I recommend following vocals, so how about increasing this to 00:32:824 here?
2. 02:22:238 (1) - a little uncomfortable to play imo. what about Ctrl + G?
3. 02:32:404 (2) - um. don't you think it is really big jump?
4. 02:53:904 (4) - not 3/4, but 1/2. downbeat is already ended to 02:54:071 here

1. 01:05:906 (5,6,7,8) - it has no reason to decrease distance. it is much better to hear and play for you to add decrescendo like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:11:073 (8) - every sound of here is turning down, so just a circle is much better to play. after you did like 01:16:406 (8) this.
3. 01:19:740 - Normal sample set is much better than drum
4. 01:26:073 (12,1,2) - its rhythm seems to quite a bit messy. I can't catch that what rhythm you followed. how about changing like this? look at 12,1,2
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:30:240 (1) - I want to esteem your mapping style, but SV changing width is really large. it is really easy to lead 100 or else bad something. how about changing this at least x0.5?
6. 02:46:238 - it seems useless timing. there is same timing that before already existed
7. 02:50:571 (7,8,9,10) - a little uncomfortable to play. what about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 03:19:738 (1) - finish?
9. 04:19:903 - same opinion as 02:46:238
10. 04:27:486 (3) - this one seems to overmapped. I recommend delete this
11. 04:38:903 (1) - how about adding decrescendo like this? now isn't good to finish the song really.
    
    SPOILER

    
    

scanter wrote:

Easy

1. 02:08:905 - volume is really low. I recommend at least turn up 40% uh oh, I forgot that part, lol thanks. increased to 50% since the other diffs are using 50%

Normal

1. 00:35:574 (3,4) - it is really uncomfortable to play. I can't catch what rhythm you followed. couldn't be better if you change this just 1/1 repeated slider one. it was once 1/1 repeat lol, well change it back to it since it is easier

Hard

1. 01:08:240 (5) - HP bar little touched moved
2. 02:20:571 (3,4) - it doesn't supported by anything. what about this rhythm? look at 3~5 changed, nice sound
3. 04:31:403 (3,4,5,6) - the number of clicks here seems pretty high considering even the kiai doesn't have stuff like this, it would better for more sliders here ok, changed (4,5) to slider

Insane

• 
  I'm sorry, but I want to say map's SV is quite a bit low compared with traditional insane SV. so I'm afraid to say many things. because, I have scarcely no experience to deal with low SV map. so I'm just gonna tell you things that I catched noticeable. the reason I use low SV: I can use high DS without trouble, the slider multiplier works better on lower SV too since I really need slow sliders

1. 00:32:574 (4) - it doesn't supported by anything sounds. I recommend following vocals, so how about increasing this to 00:32:824 here? I am following a strong sound 00:32:686 - here
2. 02:22:238 (1) - a little uncomfortable to play imo. what about Ctrl + G? ok
3. 02:32:404 (2) - um. don't you think it is really big jump? imo this is suitable
4. 02:53:904 (4) - not 3/4, but 1/2. downbeat is already ended to 02:54:071 here changed

AllStar12 wrote:

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:16:129 (2,3,4,5) - Might want to ask more people about this or a BAT. Personally think this can catch people off guard since some of them are on 1/6 tick and there's nothing to indicate that they're on 1/6 ticks. Not saying it's a mistake, just want you to check this just in case. Also see some notes that are also on 1/6 tick further on. if you listen carefully there's note/vocal there so I put it there
2. 01:10:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Would say this part sounds bit too loud to be on 70%. Would be suitable to have this part on 50% the reason I put 70% is to differentiate the refrain part
3. 01:31:573 (1) - Could try to make this blanket bit better. fixed
4. 01:35:240 (3,4) - Sounds unnecessary to having the slider end on the blue tick. Better to just have it just a slider end where the circle note is. since there's no sound on 01:35:406 - and to emphasize the sound at 01:35:573 - , I decided to go it with 3/4

• 
  

  Hard

  
  Do find it strange for this to have higher speed than Insane :S well this part doesn't have high DS so I put SV higher than Insane, I did explain this matter on previous mod

1. 01:51:572 (1,2,3) - Would say these would be more fitting for an insane than in Hard. Maybe find a better alternative solution for this part? this part is more confusing than what I have right now, I'll preserve this for a while
2. 03:04:904 (1) - Could make this bit better by making it symmetrical using either the vertical or horizontal line. If you want to make it symmetrical and need help with it, message me about it.I'll change to something abstract rather than make it symmetrical lol

• 
  

  Normal

1. 01:04:073 (2) - Would say to smooth out the curve on 3rd point a bit. The path seems too curve so would feel weird for players in that level. shape changed

Fort wrote:

hi o/

wendao's Extra:
00:28:408 (6,7,8) - asli ane gk bisa ngebedain pattern 1/2 sama 1/3 di stack ini, menurut ane unstack aja note ini
00:31:908 (2) - coba pindahkan ke 00:31:797 - soalnya pattern selanjutnya itu berlangsung 1/3 beat pattern kept
00:54:907 (1) - ctrl+g itu lebih enak (biar sebanding gitu dgn jump slider sebelumnya) ga doyan ganti pattern 00:54:240 (1,2,3,4) - biar flow lebih enak
1st kiai lumayan bagus ini
01:20:656 (6,6) - menurut ane ini sebaiknya unstack, soalnya susah beat disini (dan kesannya itu keliatan seperti 1/2 karena note selanjutnya) no
01:25:740 (2,3) - sebenarnya ada 2 pilihan disini, 1. 01:25:740 (2) - diusahakan slider arrow gk nempel di slider 3, 2. pindahkan 01:25:906 (3) - ke x336y96 atau apa lah yg penting enggak overlap gitu well... tetep di 2.0x aja deh
01:26:573 (5,6,7) - distance inconsistency (ini asli ngebingungin soalnya keliatan kaya 1/2 pattern, sama kaya pattern selanjutnya) kept, beware of trap (keinspirasi dari map sebelah juga sih)
01:48:462 (7,8,9,10) - ugh, diusahakan note ini gk overlap, atau samakan kaya pattern ini 01:50:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - lagi dipikirin
02:11:155 (2,1,2,3,4) - suer ane bisa pass ini strim wkwkwkwkwkwk, Keep this pls :3 I usually use that pattern... but it's a random pattern... ``
02:23:238 - sepertinya timeline ini harus disini clickable object (slider selanjutnya itu follow vocal) mencoba yang baru
02:35:571 (1) - HR it, it''ll be "W" , "W" is Wendao :3 well itu ga sengaja ``
02:51:238 (11,1) - wow (pantesan di testplay dpt 100 mulu) melepas bosan dengan menambah slider 1/16
03:08:016 (2,3,4,2,3,4,2,3,4) - menurut ane ini, pattern ini lebih pas kalau pakai 1/2 pattern (tapi mungkin itu cuma perasaan ane aja ya) no
03:41:903 (3) - yay overlap, geli liatnya yaelah dikit doang .-. || fixed
04:30:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ane masih bingung sama pattern ini, kok sudden 1/6 strim pattern, kan sebelumnya kau pakai 1/4 triplet, jadi menurut ane usahain NC 04:31:570 (6,6) - sama kaya 04:34:236 (1) - ok

oke clear, Good luck!

Smoothie World wrote:

Hai, M4M

You said to do 1 but I did 2 diffs so enjoy? xD

[wendao's Extra]
This map is already near perfect so excuse me if I don't help a WHOLE lot. This is just very nitpicky stuff :p
00:34:241 (1,2,3) - This gap at 00:34:797 feels really awkward. Consider changing the rhythm of this part up a bit. somehow I can't change this pattern... so kept for now
01:13:240 (3,6) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack. I love manual stack
02:22:571 (2) - End of this slider looks pretty sloppy in my eyes. It doesn't change gameplay and doesn't fit in well with the rest of the sliders. Maybe attempt to neaten it up a bit / change it? it was just experimental slider lol fixed
02:31:404 (1,2) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack. it's better to have manual stack here, so kept
02:45:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other. moved
02:51:238 (11,1) - Please don't make these this close together q_q. Just bring it back to the purple tick. 04:25:070 (1,1) is a good example. :( 1-2 more mod and I will change
02:54:737 (2) - Move this left a bit or stack it under 02:54:238 (1) kept
03:04:321 (2) - I'd recommend moving this directly under the stream as opposed to to the left a bit but this is very minor.
By the way I fking love the stream part!
03:19:571 (10) - NC? still part of 03:18:904 (7,8,9) - so no
03:48:403 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is so much fun thanks!
04:14:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other. umm... I don't know if I can change this or not kept
04:31:570 (6,7,8,9) - Neaten huh? I think it's neat as is
04:37:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - Round this a bit? Again really minor. nope

Smoothie World wrote:

[Insane]
00:45:907 (3,4,5) - Clean this up a bit. Keep the flow going. The notes kinda just go straight instead of curving (well they curve a bit but not a good amount) fixed
01:20:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Blanket fixed
01:22:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something about this feels wonky. Consider http://puu.sh/fx92J/1d9dfbe123.png I prefer to preserve mine
01:24:740 (6,1) - Bad flow this is on purpose though, it is forward to the next combo
01:25:906 (5,6,1) - Inconsistent distance snapping here doesn't feel good since 5-6 are with the previous DS pattern, and DS changes afterwards, I NC it. so imo its ok
01:33:906 (7,8,1) - Wonky spacing fixed
01:49:684 (3,4) - Swap these two. Make the reverse slider come after the regular slider ok
02:12:238 (3) - Make this a 'fancy' slider. Feels out of place with sliders like 02:10:905 (5) (5) was following the electric guitar tho, so (3) doesn't need that wavy
02:36:071 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow. Adds a cool little jump there as well well, ok then
02:48:238 (5,6,1) - The song here suggests a break in flow but you have the exact opposite. Would feel more natural if you broke the flow a little bit here. ctrl+G the (6)
03:15:571 (1,2) - Eh make the second slider the same as the first but mirrored on a vertical axis. actually the (2)'s tail was stacked to 03:17:904 (6) - , so I'll change the slider, but preserve the spot
03:19:571 (8) - Curve slider beginning to the right instead to keep a good flow. uuh, I was doing this so it won't overlap though
03:18:238 (7) - NC ok
04:10:070 (2,6) - Blanket off VERY slightly. fixed
04:20:904 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bad rhythm here. Doesn't really go with the music in terms of slider and circle placement. well, I tried to fill up kiai as much as I can and also the position for me is neat imo so, I'll preserve this for a while
04:23:904 (4,1) - Blanket better (1 into 4) fixed

You are a really gooooood slider maker!! I like those curvy sliders you made XDD

PS: If you can use red font to reply me that I will feel really good to read XD thx!

Extra

1. 00:20:241 (4) - NC
2. 02:35:571 (1) - hmmm...
3. overall it's really good except there're some overmapping at the beginning..

Insane

1. 00:35:241 (2,3) - not really fit the rhythm，I suggest to change to a short slider.
2. 00:52:907 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think if you can make those pair parallel but not in a strait line will be better. I made a example
3. 01:16:240 (2,3) - try make this distance become obviously longer than 3-4
4. 02:15:405 (4) - because there is a pause before so I think ctrl+G will be better
5. 02:56:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - toooooo many XD I think if you can change 6 to 8 of them to short flying slider will be better feeling XD.
6. 04:38:653 (1) - try to tilt it instead of just place them like 180 or 90 degrees. for example you can spin it
   
   for like 30-70 degrees.
7. Generally this diff seems have some parts much more difficult than other parts but the music doesn't goes that way...
8. Good sliders shapes XD.

Hard

1. 01:04:740 (3) - less curvy will looks better I think.
2. It's a good map.. But I think is too easy to be Hard. It's more like a Normal+.. and I have seen some triplet in others' Hards.. I think you can add some because it's way too easy to make me feel it's a Hard QAQ.. and I suggest you to use CS:4 in this diff..

Normal

1. 00:22:908 (6) - blanket
2. 00:28:908 (1) - ^
3. 00:39:908 (2) - ^
4. 02:48:238 (5) - ^
5. 02:53:404 (3) - ^
   really good diff XD

EASY

1. Nothing to say XD good map also!

Good luck XD

Remilia_CO wrote:

M4M request for p/3855299#p3855299 XD

You are a really gooooood slider maker!! I like those curvy sliders you made XDD :3

PS: If you can use red font to reply me that I will feel really good to read XD thx! why, imo red color are too bright for the eyes lol

Insane

1. 00:35:241 (2,3) - not really fit the rhythm，I suggest to change to a short slider. 00:35:352 - a strong note here so I prefer HC there
2. 00:52:907 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think if you can make those pair parallel but not in a strait line will be better. I made a example I still prefer mine, but that's a nice suggestion though
3. 01:16:240 (2,3) - try make this distance become obviously longer than 3-4 isn't that gap is huge enough? lol I'll preserve this for a while
4. 02:15:405 (4) - because there is a pause before so I think ctrl+G will be better but the flow broke orz
5. 02:56:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - toooooo many XD I think if you can change 6 to 8 of them to short flying slider will be better feeling XD. uh that will be hard
6. 04:38:653 (1) - try to tilt it instead of just place them like 180 or 90 degrees. for example you can spin it I prefer mine
   
   for like 30-70 degrees.
7. Generally this diff seems have some parts much more difficult than other parts but the music doesn't goes that way...
8. Good sliders shapes XD.

Hard

1. 01:04:740 (3) - less curvy will looks better I think. fixed
2. It's a good map.. But I think is too easy to be Hard. It's more like a Normal+.. and I have seen some triplet in others' Hards.. I think you can add some because it's way too easy to make me feel it's a Hard QAQ.. and I suggest you to use CS:4 in this diff.. I'll think for another triplets, for the mean time I'll preserve this. about CS I prefer 3.5 though

Normal

1. 00:22:908 (6) - blanket fixed
2. 00:28:908 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:39:908 (2) - ^ ^
4. 02:48:238 (5) - ^ ^
5. 02:53:404 (3) - ^ ^
   really good diff XD

EASY

1. Nothing to say XD good map also!

Good luck XD

RzHr wrote:

Extra

1. 01:14:073 (1,3) - blanket ? http://puu.sh/fXakt/3cb669ea6d.jpg k
2. 01:13:240 (3,6) - stack ? intentional (manual stack)
3. 02:08:239 (2,1) - blanket ? http://puu.sh/fXamt/56ea61dc5e.jpg organized pattern... ``

yaldo_27 wrote:

Hey M4M

General

- I think you should consider your diff spread. Hard -> Insane has a difference almost 2 stars
- Teach me how2slider


Insane

- 00:02:909 (2) - Change to reverse slider maybe? prefer a long pressuring slow slider instead halving it, the feel is in the middle
- 00:39:241 (2) - Move to 00:39:408 - ? And change this circle 00:38:908 (1) - into slider till 00:39:241 - ? the instrumental doesn't suit with the sliders if I move it there. there's a faint sound that suit reverse here 00:39:408 -
- 02:56:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just too many and somewhat boring maybe change some of it? nerf the diff a bit
- 03:03:071 (11,12,13,14,15) - How about changing it into 1/4 reverse sliders and remove 03:03:488 (16) - ? Deathstream is just too much ^
- 03:04:404 (11,12,13,14,15) - This too and remove 03:04:821 (16) - ? ^
- 03:18:238 (1) - This could be better. Bring 03:17:238 (4) - Closer and you'll se fix blanket
- 03:19:571 (2) - <3
- 04:16:070 (6) - and 04:18:570 (6) - Blanket a bit off, but barely noticeable fixed both


Hard

- 02:15:738 (4,5) - Strange to see this on Hard diff why? imo this one is ok
- 02:23:238 (3) - Move to 02:23:404 - And add notes on 02:23:238 - sure, nice idea
- 03:19:571 (1) - <3
- 03:47:570 (5,3) - This bothers me a little ok, stack
- 04:30:903 (1,6) - This too ^
- 04:31:069 (2) - Move this to x:240 y:188 might be better still prefer mine

Short mod, because amazing map
I don't mod other diff because I didn't find anything wrong with it
Good Luck with this map, hope ranked soon

RzHr wrote:

M4M :>

• General

1. size BGnya ga kegedean ? .-. mungkin pake ini ? :> lol I just realized that the image size is 1mb, ok changed
2. N,H,I widescreen support ? :> nope, it should be the opposite, since I don't use SB I should disable all the widescreen support
   
   Easy
   sebagian besar rasanya di suara, mungkin cuma telingaku :>
3. 00:13:309 (3) - ganti spinner, di diff lain aja spinner semua soalnya :> recovery problem, that's why this is not a spinner
4. 00:14:509 - IP yang ini pindahin ke ujung slider (3), trus vol.nya diganti sekitar 5-20% ? :> ok
5. 01:02:240 (3) - mulainya di 01:02:573 - ? ok
6. 01:06:906 (2,3) - di (3) ga ada suara apa2, giniin ? changed tapi beda dikit
7. 01:16:240 (4,1) - mungkin bisa dibuat blanket ? sebenernya dulu itu blanket, karena ganti length slider jadi lupa benerin :>
8. 02:17:571 (2,3) - kayaknya lebih bagus kalo ngikutin vokal ? prefer mine
9. 02:22:905 (2,1) - ok
10. 02:26:904 (1,2,1) - suara gitar(?) mulainya di 02:27:404 - mungkin diginiin ? kebanyakan polarity changes, ini beatnya ga se 'ketara' yang lain. jadi ga ganti dulu. star ratenya mefet2 N (I nerf-ed some HCs too after these changes)
11. 02:33:904 (2,3) - di (3) ga ada suara apa2 sementara aku biarin dulu
12. 02:44:904 (2) - ini ngikutin suara gitar ? .-. mulainya dari 02:45:238 - aja ? :> dan 02:44:904 - dikosongin aja.... ato dikasi HC ? sengaja ngikutin back vocalnya
13. 03:04:904 (3,1) - yang (3) ujungnya di 03:07:071 - aja, jadi yang (1) bisa ngikutin suara gitar(?)nya (IPnya juga dipindahin ke (1)? di SS ga dipindahin :>) no, prefer mine
14. 03:45:570 (3) - ujungnya di 03:47:070 - buat ngikutin suara drumnya ato di 03:46:737 - buat ngikutin vokalnya polarity stuffs with star rate
15. 03:40:237 (1) - ganti jadi spinner aja, soalnya di diff N,H,I aja spinner same reason about spinner
16. 03:54:237 (2,1) - ok
17. 03:58:236 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3) ga ada suara... imo, ikutin vokalnya lebih bagus kayanya.. preserve dulu sementara
18. 04:15:903 (1,2) - (2) ga ngikutin apa2... ini mau ngikutin yang suara kaya "haaaa" kah ? .-. "namida" or idk what that word is
19. 04:19:570 (1,2,3) - (2) ga ada suara.. changed to something
20. 04:38:903 (1) - mmm... mungkin spinnernya disamain kaya extra ? kepanjangan
    
    Normal
21. 01:42:240 (1) - mungkin diganti posisinya ? entah dimanapun itu why, this is parallel blanket with 01:40:906 (3) -
22. 00:14:509 - IP volnya mungkin dikecilin lagi sekitar 5-20% ? :> ok
23. 01:26:240 (1) - buatku ga masalah sih... imo, tapi mungkin ini bisa bikin panik karena bentuk slidernya... soalnya pas bagian belokan itu kesannya pelan, tiba2 kenceng... from my point of view, justru awalnya itu kesannya lebih kenceng lol, I'll preserve this because my slider is epic
24. 04:38:903 (1) - sama kaya sebelumnya same reason
    
    Hard
25. 03:40:237 (6) - hapus ? spinnernya dimulai dari sini... D: no, ada beat strong disitu
26. 04:39:070 (1) - sama kaya sebelumnya. trus, ng... spinnernya mungkin mulainya dari 04:38:903 - ? :> I prefer this
    
    Insane
    Mungkin starnya bisa diturunin ? hard sama insane jauh banget soalnya nerf-ed on previous mod
27. 01:46:240 (1,2,3,4) - dibuat blanket ? :> itu blanket uda orz, your skin, fix blanket nazi sekalian deh `-`
28. 02:38:238 (1,2) - blanket ? fix
29. 04:39:070 (1) - sama kaya sebelumnya same

GL :> semoga membantu ;_;

NewIpas wrote:

Hello! \o/
M4M from your queue

Easy:

1. 00:57:240 (2) - Make this slider body follows the next slider properly for good flow I fix the other slider instead of this one
2. 01:38:240 (1) - nazi, i think this slider is bad X_X what's bad with this one, oh well I'll add curve in between
3. 01:58:906 (3) - Can you move the last tick of this slider to x:32 y:184 ? I think it's more better nope, this is on purpose, I don't make it to be straight line
4. 02:26:904 (1) - Make this slider's end at 02:27:071 and put the next slider at 02:27:404 and of course make this slider longer no more polarity changes, I had enough. I want to reduce my star rate, not increasing it. also strong beat here 02:27:238 -
5. 03:01:071 (4) - Because the next note is at right, make this slider curve into right side I am following the flow on previous objects, it is NC-ed so its ok
6. 03:45:570 (3) - Put the end of this slider at 03:46:737 same reason, will not change polarity

Normal:

1. 00:24:908 (4,1) - Make this slider have same direction. Move the end of slider (4) to x:204 y:36 I am paralleling 00:23:574 (1,4) - , not 00:26:241 (1,2) -
2. 00:40:907 (1) - Move the middle tick to x:344 y:192 looks ugly
3. 01:54:906 (3) - Move the middle tick to x:396 y:100 fixed
4. 02:04:905 (1) - Make this slider body follows the previous slider for better flow this is on purpose
5. 02:47:571 (3,1) - Don't overlap this for better pattern if I rotate / move this, the flow will be too sharp, and not blanketing 02:47:238 (2) -
6. 03:12:904 (1,2) - Better blanket 03:12:904 (1,3) - mirror slider, so nope
7. 03:54:237 (2,3) - This sound is weird. If you want you can make these part like this; Circle at 03:54:237 , circle at 03:54:570 , and slider starts at 03:54:736 wait a sec, your pasted the wrong time

Hard:

1. 02:44:904 (1,2) - How about blanket? no, on purpose
2. 02:58:238 (5) - Curve it into the right side will shaped weird, this epic on purpose
3. 03:44:070 (3) - nazi, this slider is bad what's bad with this? commenting this slider like the one in Easy, imo this is cool. I changed the Easy's slider because it is long enough to have the curve in. this one is short. so nope

lehmakari wrote:

Easy :
00:38:908 - Reverse it like this DS inconsistency
04:24:903 - Whislte no, I only use claps here
04:38:903 - ADD FINISH whislte clap that will be too loud