LordRaika wrote:

Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue


osuu~
Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound Mod

very impressive pattern for me, well i dont care bout rankable or not XD haha since most modder above say so orz
btw i can see that u dont use hitsound at all BUT u do add some default hitsound,
so i have a very damn good and fast hitsound mod, follow the step below ^^

[Hitsound]

• First download this 4 , rename and put inside song folder.

1. Download and rename this into soft-hitclap.wav
   Rename into soft-hitnormal.wav
   Rename into normal-hitnormal.wav
   Rename into normal-hitclap.wav
   then put all of them inside song folder ^^
2. Then on every dif, press F6 > CTRL+A > select Audio tab, > choose Custom1 > ok.
   Check your whole dif's hitsound ^^ , im sure it will sounds whole better if u follow the above step just right...
3. THat's all thou, feel free to adjust the volume, or catch me in-game if u have things to ask...
   finally it might be a good idea to use and add silent hitsound on soft-sliderslide and normal-sldierslide as well...

^^b GL for ranked....
very nice std dif...

FaiVillager wrote:

Hi~~
here for the M4M :3

Really nice song with superable hitsound style(though few can be better), big love~

[insane]
first you can use a none-sound track for the slidertick and sliderslide(pm your mail if you need it, I have)
the begining part of the song I suggest vol down for 10% or 5%
00:09:350 (3,4) - a little bit unflowThis is fine.
00:17:922 (4) - have a turn at 00:18:228 ,using new shapeRedid the slider here .
00:21:442 hitsoung normal after the time is inaudible, try another?K
00:50:217 (3) - try push it at the begin of 00:50:524 (1) - Tried, don't really like the way it flows sry .
00:58:024 (2,4,6,8) - I think this is fine. I want this pattern slightly more angled, not so vertical.

01:07:207 (7) - x120 y328K
01:21:902 (10) - x112 y176I like this actually xD. Changed it, though the coordinates you gave were kinda off. (But I know what you meant)
01:28:789 (2,3,4) - seems strange for me, maybe change the shape of stream?I think this is okay, but ill try and curve the stream a bit.
01:58:075 (2,3,2,3) - remove finish soundYea too many.
02:12:182 (4,5) - This is okay. Keeping.

03:06:901 (1) - hum, maybe choose to fit the voice using shorter slider and circle?I try, but I kind of like it like this .
03:13:789 (4,5) - Not a bad idea. Will definitely try. I only worry that angle of curve on 5 will create bad flow into later sliders. Will play around with angles.

03:59:707 (1) - perfect shape, welldone!Arigatou~
04:04:452 (1) - start here 04:04:529Wow, you're right. Will change on all my difficulties too!

[Hard]
00:02:615 (2) - forgot to use the ar circle?Its the opening section. So quieter, and less distance spacing. Will keep, since rest of this section also has smaller-than-normal blankets.
00:13:024 (5,6) - not in the same curveFixed it a bit. Less curve.
00:14:095 (1,2) - Yea this is better thnx~

00:40:268 (9) - a voice clap starts at 3/4 ,so better change it
01:19:146 (1) - too shortI will check if it's too short. Imo it's okay, but i also understand this is Hard diff, so might just take the spinner out.
01:20:217 (1) - remove the whistle or turn down the volRemoved whistle
01:35:524 (5,6,7) - Aligned them better.

02:05:064 (1) - Okay.

02:28:330 (5) - only use finish sound at the endFixed
03:27:258 (1) - ^ for the startK
03:39:809 (2,3) - maybe too far away?Remapped around here. I wanted the jump to be on the 2, not the 3 anyways.
03:54:503 (2) - remove finish soundOkay

[Normal]
pretty fine for me, little to fix:
00:48:075 (1) - x132 y124Fixed. Also moved 2 to even out spacing.
00:56:952 (1) - Kay. I like this, better flow .

01:49:299 (1) - x424
02:50:524 (1,2) - not in same curveFixed it up a bit.
03:54:350 (1,2) - use a slider Yea this makes a lot of sense haha.
04:02:288 - don't use such a long spinner in easy & normalI don't know about this. I know short spinner is bad, but long spinner should be okay. Not really any way to reduce this/cut in half, or map anything else either . I don't want to use the slider I made for Insane because its too difficult for beginners to follow the path imo .

[Easy]
no obvious problem, seems fine~Great ^^.

Hope these could help you~

monstrata wrote:

This is the link to the original image: http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/ ... 87dk3w.png
I believe the resolution isn't correct but I could use some help changing it.

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

metadate check request from my queue


Artist : ok
Romanised Artist : ok
Ritle : ok
Source : ok
Tags : delete sword art online
add mother's rosario opening
BG : 1024×576 → 1024×768 or 1366×768


good luck >w</

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

monstrata wrote:

This is the link to the original image: http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/ ... 87dk3w.png
I believe the resolution isn't correct but I could use some help changing it.

that image is actually just the preview from this page. That page also has a full size image, which happens to be exactly 1366x768 (which is the highest 16:9 res osu allows). Here is a direct link to it.

no kudosu

1. The 'hit' for the soft and normal custom sets is too low, I can barely hear it while playing, it is necessary to to hear them clearly to have feedback.
2. The slidertick is really strong and it is unencessary in almost 90% of the places, you have to either manually mute it in the slider using new inherited points, or modify the sliderticks, or the hitsound itself.

1. 00:06:136 (4,5) - Still, try to blanket those a bit better, the curve in 5 is not following the circlehit properly. Look closely: http://puu.sh/ek56Z/6f5183a274.jpg
2. 00:06:442 (5) - The whistles don't fit here at all..
3. 00:08:891 (1) - One whistle in the start is enough, the second one is unnecessary. If you want to follow the music more properly add an other whistle at the start of 00:09:350 (3) -
4. 00:12:564 (4) - I remember you said you play without hitsounds, do you add hitsounds by mistake or was this intentional? The clap is wrong and shouldn't be used here.
5. I think you should activate the hitsound and go over them again, some are random and some don't fit at all..
6. 00:30:932 (1) - Move to x=132 to flow with the stream better
7. I think I noticed something, when you want to add a hitsound to a slider, press either on the HEAD or the END of it, after it glows red, pick the hitsound, because it seems like you attach hitsounds to the sliders themselves..
8. 03:46:238 (1) - If you can make the slider go a bit more after the circle it'd look much much better.
9. 03:54:350 (1) - There's no beat on the end of it and it feels too forced, I'd remove it.
10. 03:59:707 (1) - It looks cool but it ends and starts in awkward places, the finish isn't necessary in the beginning(it is a finish!), and the slider ends on a place that has no beat at all, if you can make it end on the place where the spinner starts, that'd be great.

1. 00:06:442 (1,2) - You should try to improve the blanket here.
2. 00:10:115 (3,4) - Change those sliders, they don't look the best and they blanket each other really poorly.
3. 00:15:779 (6,1) - Blanket can be improved here too.
4. 00:17:922 (3,4) - A slider that starts on 3 and ends on the start of 4 will sound much better because it follows the vocals more properly here.
5. 00:37:360 (5,6) - It is really cool but it is tooooo much confusing for Hard, you should change it.
6. 00:40:728 (1,2,3,4) - You don't follow the vocals here, and if you want to follow the beat you are missing strong beats and it plays really awkwardly.
7. 00:43:177 (1,2,3,4) - Try to avoid those overlaps.
8. 00:52:513 - Why isn't there a note? The pause in kiai time is just awkward, this part is intense, follow the beat!
9. 00:56:952 (2,3) - You can improve the blanket here.
10. 01:23:585 (5,6) - ^
11. 01:57:871 (7) - Use 1/3 BSP.. It is a slider. Also, why soft hitsounds? There are clearly strong drums, you should put some hitsounds here as well.
12. 02:24:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit random...
13. 02:45:013 (1,3) - Stack properly.
14. 03:06:901 (1) - Blanket better.
15. 03:08:126 (3) - ^
16. 03:10:881 (6) - ^
    
    The hitsounds need some work here too

1. since it is a pretty long map, im going to find the minor things that needs to be changed.
   normally i do it but... it would take a damm long time to do that hope you understand o.0
2. i dont know if you just didn't wanna do it or was going to do it, but are you gonna give the NC colors?
   it might help a bit, and the map looks imo better that way

1. 00:24:809 (5) - NC here
2. 00:27:258 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:30:932 (1,2) - blanket can be better
4. 00:32:156 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:50:524 (1,2) - ^ (use approach cirlce of 00:53:585 (2) - at 00:53:126 )
6. 01:07:360 (2) - i think you shouldn't follow the vocals here. you could try this:
   
   01:07:054 (1) - this is the first note of this combo, 01:07:666 (2) - is were the first slider begins.
   the second slider remains the same.
7. 01:20:217 (1) - i think you should place it on: 01:19:911 (1) - i read some music stuff, and it concludes that you shouldn't skip
   the (in this case the big white line) too often. anyway, i think you should follow the beat instead of the vocals here :p
8. 01:51:748 (3,1) - switch NC
9. 02:26:646 (2) - i think it is better to remove this one and set the previous slider at: 02:26:034 (1) - , so it will end on the removed circle.
   again, has to do wtih vocals and beats.
10. 02:48:381 (1) - ^ (i hope you know what i mean here :p)
11. 03:17:768 (1) - ^
12. 02:57:871 (1) - i couldnt help to not notice this, but the hitsound you use here is not in sync.
    i dont think you can use a finish hitsound here, but im no expert in hitsound so your choice.

1. i think you should reduce the HP drain rate from 5,0 to 4,0. it is pretty high for normal.
2. 00:02:615 (3) - slider has the wrong DC on it. try to move it a bit to the right.
3. 00:03:381 (1,2) - switch NC
4. 00:05:371 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:16:238 (4,1) - ^
6. 00:48:075 (1,2,3) - now i now why the hitsounds bothers me! they are way too loud, you need lower the volume.
7. 00:49:758 (1) - you dont want to overuse slider that begins on a red line(called ofbeats). try this:
   
8. 01:03:993 (5) - i think this slider is hard to see. when i played it, i expected it to be as long as the previous one. this one is a bit odd.
   you need to or change the length of it, or place it somehwere else.
9. 01:27:258 (1) - ^
10. 01:20:217 (1) - let this slider end on: 01:20:524
11. 01:23:279 (1,2) - switch NC
12. 01:23:279 (1,3) - blanket could be better. (use ctrl + g on slider 1 and approach circle at: 01:22:973 from 1)
13. 01:56:646 (5) - NC here
14. 01:58:483 (1,2) - switch NC
15. 02:16:238 (1) - if you add a hitsound here, maybe it's better if you do it on all three sliders.
16. 02:19:146 (1) - better place it on:02:18:993 (1) - dont follow vocals, beat is better imo.
17. 02:27:258 (5) - NC here
18. 02:57:258 (1,2) - switch NC
19. 03:00:320 (3) - NC here
20. 03:01:850 (1) - remove NC
21. 03:02:768 (4) - NC here
22. 03:05:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is a nice flower ( it really is ), but its quit hard to see which slider to follow first and to continue.
    you need to place them differently (sorry for your flower )
23. 03:55:575 (4,5,6) - ^
24. 03:12:564 (1,2) - blanket can be better.
25. 03:27:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - plz. dont use those hitsounds here. it kinda ruins the music imo.
26. 03:38:891 (1,2) - switch NC.

1. 00:21:136 (1) - use whistle hitsound here
2. 00:21:442 (2) - i feel like this slider is hidden behind the previous sliders.
3. 00:31:391 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:37:054 (4,5,6) - ^ ( the last 2 especially)
5. 00:55:422 (2) - remove hitsound
6. 01:02:156 (1,3) - switch NC
7. 01:05:217 (5,1) - ^
8. 01:09:656 (4,1) - again, the last slider is quite hidden between the previous ones. there are a few others,
   but i'm not gonna mention them anymore in this diff(it is pretty straight forward repeating myself).
9. 01:40:422 (3,4,5) - ^(this is really the last one i mention ;p)
10. 01:23:585 (5) - NC here
11. 01:24:044 (6,7) - can be a better blanket
12. 01:35:830 (7) - NC here
13. 01:38:126 (4,1,2,3) - if you put a circle on the end of the slider,while not seeing the beginning of the slider,
    it is REALLY confusing. i recommend you place the 4 differently. (you dont have to do exactly that, but at least change something here)
14. 01:52:973 (5) - NC here
15. 01:55:115 (1,2) - switch NC
16. 01:58:483 (1,2) - ^
17. 02:03:381 (1,2) - ^
18. 02:06:442 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - reduce the volume of the hitsound plz.
19. 02:18:075 (1,3) - switch NC
20. 02:46:850 (1,2) - the distance is in my belief to big. it is too sudden and out of the place to increase the DC.
21. 02:52:973 (6,1) - switch NC
22. 03:08:891 (1,2) - ^
23. 03:27:258 (1) - remove or reduce the volume of these hitsounds on these shaped sliders.
24. 03:41:952 (5,1) - switch NC
25. 03:58:024 (2) - ctrl + G?

1. i can't say too much about this, since i don't do 5 star maps that often. but i can tell you a few things.
2. 01:57:871 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these notes stand way too close to eachother. you might want to expand the distance.
3. 02:25:728 (1,2) - switch NC
4. 02:37:513 (1) - there are some slider that can't be in a map because it is unlcear, i think this could be one of those.
   if you ignore it anyway the map becomes unrankable i don't know the details, but i certainly would do something about the weird shaped slider.
5. 03:18:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes are placed weirdly, i would change it.
6. 03:27:258 (1) - again, reduce volume or delete hitsounds on these shaped sliders.
7. 03:43:100 (5) - i don't think you ever used the blue tickle. i might be wrong, but i wouldn't recommend just putting one note in the song on a blue tickle.
8. 03:59:707 (1) - ummm... when i was scrolling to the end of the song, i swa a giant(butterly?). it kind of filled the screen and as a result,
   i shocked because i didn't expect that. i wouldn't throw it away because it is a nice piece of slider art( that is a compliment ),
   but i dont think you should use it in the map. just do a spinner, it may be one of those slider that make your map unrankable

Avishay wrote:

Oh shit, I promised I will recheck, my OS corrupted my whole C:\ drive so I didn't have it good lately, I will mod it now again and edit this post.

[General]

1. The 'hit' for the soft and normal custom sets is too low, I can barely hear it while playing, it is necessary to to hear them clearly to have feedback.Alright, will fix.
2. The slidertick is really strong and it is unencessary in almost 90% of the places, you have to either manually mute it in the slider using new inherited points, or modify the sliderticks, or the hitsound itself.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:136 (4,5) - Still, try to blanket those a bit better, the curve in 5 is not following the circlehit properly. Look closely: http://puu.sh/ek56Z/6f5183a274.jpgFixed.
2. 00:06:442 (5) - The whistles don't fit here at all..REmoved.
3. 00:08:891 (1) - One whistle in the start is enough, the second one is unnecessary. If you want to follow the music more properly add an other whistle at the start of 00:09:350 (3) - K
4. 00:12:564 (4) - I remember you said you play without hitsounds, do you add hitsounds by mistake or was this intentional? The clap is wrong and shouldn't be used here.I'll remove this.
5. I think you should activate the hitsound and go over them again, some are random and some don't fit at all..
6. 00:30:932 (1) - Move to x=132 to flow with the stream betterK
7. I think I noticed something, when you want to add a hitsound to a slider, press either on the HEAD or the END of it, after it glows red, pick the hitsound, because it seems like you attach hitsounds to the sliders themselves..
8. 03:46:238 (1) - If you can make the slider go a bit more after the circle it'd look much much better.I like this idea. Increased SV slightly to compensate.
9. 03:54:350 (1) - There's no beat on the end of it and it feels too forced, I'd remove it.I like this . Will keep.
10. 03:59:707 (1) - It looks cool but it ends and starts in awkward places, the finish isn't necessary in the beginning(it is a finish!), and the slider ends on a place that has no beat at all, if you can make it end on the place where the spinner starts, that'd be great.Removed the finish from the slider-head and lowered SV so slider ends on spinner. Had to move spinner back a bit too.

Overall this diff is fun and nice to play but the hitsounds should be improved a bit here.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:442 (1,2) - You should try to improve the blanket here.Shifted 2 a bit more to the left.
2. 00:10:115 (3,4) - Change those sliders, they don't look the best and they blanket each other really poorly.Improved blanket.
3. 00:15:779 (6,1) - Blanket can be improved here too.^
4. 00:17:922 (3,4) - A slider that starts on 3 and ends on the start of 4 will sound much better because it follows the vocals more properly here. I'll try. I like this idea.
5. 00:37:360 (5,6) - It is really cool but it is tooooo much confusing for Hard, you should change it.Will keep for now, i really like patterns like this haha. I would like another opinion on this, sorry!
6. 00:40:728 (1,2,3,4) - You don't follow the vocals here, and if you want to follow the beat you are missing strong beats and it plays really awkwardly.Remapped this part.
7. 00:43:177 (1,2,3,4) - Try to avoid those overlaps.K
8. 00:52:513 - Why isn't there a note? The pause in kiai time is just awkward, this part is intense, follow the beat!It's to give time for players to move to 2, but I might remap the repeat slider... Not sure about this because for sure there is no beat on this note, it would be the slider-end for a slider that began on 00:52:360 - If i remapped this part. Will wait for another opinion though! I think this gap is okay.
9. 00:56:952 (2,3) - You can improve the blanket here.K
10. 01:23:585 (5,6) - ^
11. 01:57:871 (7) - Use 1/3 BSP.. It is a slider. Also, why soft hitsounds? There are clearly strong drums, you should put some hitsounds here as well.K
12. 02:24:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit random...I like this.
13. 02:45:013 (1,3) - Stack properly.K
14. 03:06:901 (1) - Blanket better.K
15. 03:08:126 (3) - ^
16. 03:10:881 (6) - ^
    
    The hitsounds need some work here too

Eitherway, sorry about forgeting the re-check, if you have any question feel free to ask, good luck!

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: p/3583378#p3583378

General

1. since it is a pretty long map, im going to find the minor things that needs to be changed.
   normally i do it but... it would take a damm long time to do that hope you understand o.0
2. i dont know if you just didn't wanna do it or was going to do it, but are you gonna give the NC colors?
   it might help a bit, and the map looks imo better that way

Easy

1. 00:24:809 (5) - NC hereK
2. 00:27:258 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:30:932 (1,2) - blanket can be betterFixed
4. 00:32:156 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:50:524 (1,2) - ^ (use approach cirlce of 00:53:585 (2) - at 00:53:126 )
6. 01:07:360 (2) - i think you shouldn't follow the vocals here. you could try this:I like this idea a lot!
   
   01:07:054 (1) - this is the first note of this combo, 01:07:666 (2) - is were the first slider begins.
   the second slider remains the same.
7. 01:20:217 (1) - i think you should place it on: 01:19:911 (1) - i read some music stuff, and it concludes that you shouldn't skip
   the (in this case the big white line) too often. anyway, i think you should follow the beat instead of the vocals here :pI don't know about this. I think it might be confusing for players since there is only a really feint beat on the white tick, and the vocals come in after.
8. 01:51:748 (3,1) - switch NCK
9. 02:26:646 (2) - i think it is better to remove this one and set the previous slider at: 02:26:034 (1) - , so it will end on the removed circle.
   again, has to do wtih vocals and beats.I'd like to keep the circle here.
10. 02:48:381 (1) - ^ (i hope you know what i mean here :p) Would like to keep this too.
11. 03:17:768 (1) - ^ Ahhh. Slider should begin on 03:17:462 - my bad! Now it fits.
12. 02:57:871 (1) - i couldnt help to not notice this, but the hitsound you use here is not in sync.Took out the random finish on the slider-head lol.
    i dont think you can use a finish hitsound here, but im no expert in hitsound so your choice.

Normal

1. i think you should reduce the HP drain rate from 5,0 to 4,0. it is pretty high for normal.Okay.
2. 00:02:615 (3) - slider has the wrong DC on it. try to move it a bit to the right.K
3. 00:03:381 (1,2) - switch NC
4. 00:05:371 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:16:238 (4,1) - ^
6. 00:48:075 (1,2,3) - now i now why the hitsounds bothers me! they are way too loud, you need lower the volume.Lowered to 35%
7. 00:49:758 (1) - you dont want to overuse slider that begins on a red line(called ofbeats). try this:I like it better like this because a 1/2 note in front of the slider doesn't really play out nicely imo when it's right before the Kiai Time.
   
8. 01:03:993 (5) - i think this slider is hard to see. when i played it, i expected it to be as long as the previous one. this one is a bit odd.
   you need to or change the length of it, or place it somehwere else.My style, you see it a lot in Hard/Insane. I think players are still able to reat this because only the mid-point is overlapped. Will see what others say, though!
9. 01:27:258 (1) - ^
10. 01:20:217 (1) - let this slider end on: 01:20:524Kay.
11. 01:23:279 (1,2) - switch NCK
12. 01:23:279 (1,3) - blanket could be better. (use ctrl + g on slider 1 and approach circle at: 01:22:973 from 1)Fixed.
13. 01:56:646 (5) - NC hereK
14. 01:58:483 (1,2) - switch NCK
15. 02:16:238 (1) - if you add a hitsound here, maybe it's better if you do it on all three sliders.Took out hitsound.
16. 02:19:146 (1) - better place it on:02:18:993 (1) - dont follow vocals, beat is better imo.I like this idea. Changed.
17. 02:27:258 (5) - NC here
18. 02:57:258 (1,2) - switch NC
19. 03:00:320 (3) - NC here
20. 03:01:850 (1) - remove NC
21. 03:02:768 (4) - NC hereK to all^
22. 03:05:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is a nice flower ( it really is ), but its quit hard to see which slider to follow first and to continue.Remapped. I agree it's hard to see which slider to follow because of the lower AR, wasn't considering that.
    you need to place them differently (sorry for your flower )
23. 03:55:575 (4,5,6) - ^Made it a longer repeat slider
24. 03:12:564 (1,2) - blanket can be better.Fixed.
25. 03:27:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - plz. dont use those hitsounds here. it kinda ruins the music imo.I like them, but i agree they are excessive on the Normal as there are not a lot of notes to emphasize the hitsounds. Removed the finishes.
26. 03:38:891 (1,2) - switch NC.K

Hard

1. 00:21:136 (1) - use whistle hitsound hereK
2. 00:21:442 (2) - i feel like this slider is hidden behind the previous sliders.Keeping
3. 00:31:391 (2,3) - ^Keep
4. 00:37:054 (4,5,6) - ^ ( the last 2 especially)I fixed this slider a bit. Still slight overlap but almost fully visible.
5. 00:55:422 (2) - remove hitsoundFixed
6. 01:02:156 (1,3) - switch NCK
7. 01:05:217 (5,1) - ^
8. 01:09:656 (4,1) - again, the last slider is quite hidden between the previous ones. there are a few others,
   but i'm not gonna mention them anymore in this diff(it is pretty straight forward repeating myself).
9. 01:40:422 (3,4,5) - ^(this is really the last one i mention ;p)
10. 01:23:585 (5) - NC hereK
11. 01:24:044 (6,7) - can be a better blanketFixed
12. 01:35:830 (7) - NC hereK
13. 01:38:126 (4,1,2,3) - if you put a circle on the end of the slider,while not seeing the beginning of the slider,
    it is REALLY confusing. i recommend you place the 4 differently. (you dont have to do exactly that, but at least change something here)Yep. Repositioned the sliders.
14. 01:52:973 (5) - NC hereFixed all~
15. 01:55:115 (1,2) - switch NC
16. 01:58:483 (1,2) - ^
17. 02:03:381 (1,2) - ^
18. 02:06:442 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - reduce the volume of the hitsound plz.Yep
19. 02:18:075 (1,3) - switch NC
20. 02:46:850 (1,2) - the distance is in my belief to big. it is too sudden and out of the place to increase the DC.Made the DS shorter, but i feel a slight jump is justified here.
21. 02:52:973 (6,1) - switch NCK
22. 03:08:891 (1,2) - ^
23. 03:27:258 (1) - remove or reduce the volume of these hitsounds on these shaped sliders.Fixed them all.
24. 03:41:952 (5,1) - switch NCK
25. 03:58:024 (2) - ctrl + G?I don't see why :S.

Insane

1. i can't say too much about this, since i don't do 5 star maps that often. but i can tell you a few things.
2. 01:57:871 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these notes stand way too close to eachother. you might want to expand the distance.Increased scaling .
3. 02:25:728 (1,2) - switch NC
4. 02:37:513 (1) - there are some slider that can't be in a map because it is unlcear, i think this could be one of those.
   if you ignore it anyway the map becomes unrankable i don't know the details, but i certainly would do something about the weird shaped slider.I like the slider like this, but i will have this double-checked to make sure it is rankable, same with the final slider.
5. 03:18:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes are placed weirdly, i would change it.Remapped this whole part . After going through the map i agree this pattern is really lame compared to the others.
6. 03:27:258 (1) - again, reduce volume or delete hitsounds on these shaped sliders.Reduced all
7. 03:43:100 (5) - i don't think you ever used the blue tickle. i might be wrong, but i wouldn't recommend just putting one note in the song on a blue tickleYea i took it out. I generally dislike short streams anyways..
8. 03:59:707 (1) - ummm... when i was scrolling to the end of the song, i swa a giant(butterly?). it kind of filled the screen and as a result,
   i shocked because i didn't expect that. i wouldn't throw it away because it is a nice piece of slider art( that is a compliment ),
   but i dont think you should use it in the map. just do a spinner, it may be one of those slider that make your map unrankableOmg... It's the Sleeping Knights emblem!!! The winged-heart!! Not a butterfly LOL!

This took my while, but i at least hope it is useful to you
gl with it!

Ruineko wrote:

Hello, here is a promised M4M~ It turned out to a longpost O^O''

[Overall]

SPOILER

My opinion is fully self-taste based and also my first mod ever. Sorry for any typos and mistakes.
Overall feeling: I liked the map, but some places were not very nice.
First thing that I thought after first playing - hitsounds are too low... There is no need in map if I just want to hear a song. Btw volume of Normal and Finish sounds is too disbalanced. I think you should to make normal hits louder, it was more comfortable to play with louder ones, but even 100% of those custom sounds are very low. Or is it called 2014 mapping? I'm really not familiar with it. Whistles are a bit out of theme maybe... Or more likely it is my whistle disliking only. Also in whole thing it sounds too plain, I can suggest more accents with finishsounds in kiai sections, the most part must be most powerful and loud - then no point in kiai if not to make it such I think.
I'll try to write it below, because I can instinctively add it and forget to say where it is.
One more point - too many sliders and same snowflake pattern, well, it may be your style but I suggest to replace some sliders with circle formations for more fun.
Btw grid is so tiny that my formations might be skewed, do not mind, just see the main idea.
PS: I may forget to mention some points so I'll leave you my mod in .osu file here. Sorry if you wanted my mod to be more textful in this post, sometimes I can not find words to describe what I want to say ><

Yep Hitsound volume has been addressed, I will have them all fixed up by next update, thanks .

[Hard]
At first sight I noticed only some major flaws (as it looked for me, ofc) but while proper exploring its number became much bigger. Also maybe it will take not a one single day to make it better. I liked the song and became too serious maybe.) I'm glad you like the song . I find when i like the song i can give a much better mod too!

Longmod

00:05:371 (3) - new circle formationI don't want the intro to be too complex. Even on Insane, the Intro was probably ~3 star level difficulty.
00:08:891 (1) - new rhythm following, such a lovely place to follow.) Not sure about this. Though i agree the repeat slider skips some of the beats... I will see if I can think up a pattern that fits better without making it more complicated.
00:14:860 (4) - new formation Keeping,
00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - there it would be nice to make a sound % gradation from low to high with some accents. My sample might be too loud, but hope you got the idea. I get the idea. I used the pattern/slider velocity increase to emphasize the build up though. I dont think volume changes will be that noticeable, might have to increase the volume % considerably .
00:23:891 (1) - new formation. I don't know about these...
00:24:962 (6) - ― l l ―
00:27:105 (3) - ― l l ―
00:33:993 (2,3,4) - ― l l ―
00:37:054 (4,5,6) - changed form a bit. Fixed.
00:40:268 (9,10) - changed formation.Changed slightly.
00:41:187 (2) - insert circle maybe.Remapped this part.
00:46:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - full horizontal flip: last slider should end closer to next circles.Made it intentionally far from the circles to create a jump.
00:48:075 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - new formation.I like it this way.
00:52:820 (3) - longer slider (maybe), suits nice I think.Might be too easy .
01:00:932 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think It might be nice V-formation stream.Will consider. I want to emphasize the vocals here though.
first kiai+ 01:09:962 (1) till 01:18:840 (7) - some finishsounds added, too much to be written here whole. Added finish, but thats about it .
Second verse+bridge are looking nice.(01:20:217 (1) - ~ 01:47:922 (4) - )
01:48:228 (5) - changing formation and longer (7) slider to follow words.Made slider longer.
00:49:758 (1) - shorter slider to follow words more.Keeping .
02:00:932 (1) - a bit boring sliders, followed words more.No, this part is quiet. Not supposed to be complex.
02:06:442 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - changing placement: upper field is too naked.) Also it is boring to make last 2 circles in same position as next slider (same situation as before). Keeping,
02:08:126 (1) - same, longer slider is seems too... how to put it... slow maybe? Wanted to follow words more.Keeping.
02:10:881 (2) - new formation. Idk...
02:13:024 (9) - circle added, it was too naked there. But maybe not very necessary.Not necessary.
02:13:636 (2) - ― l l ―
02:20:371 (10) - ― l l ―
02:24:503 (1,2,3,4) - those finishes were really out of place, too much. Btw this kiai should be done like first one I think (mean finishsounds). Maybe I'll remake it too. If you want it though.)Made volume lower and took out the finishes from slider-ends.
02:27:717 (3) - new formation, it can be made like forte (circle 02:27:717 (3) - + long slider 02:28:024 (4) - 02:28:330 (4) - ) or like (short slider 02:27:717 (3) - 02:27:871 (3) - + long slider). I like first version more though.Its fine as it is right now.
02:39:197 (5) - added circle.
02:39:656 (2) - removed circle, longer slider 1.Keeping
02:40:115 (3) - longer slider. Btw can be used in previous point.Keeping
02:40:575 (1) - longer slider to follow guitar.
02:42:411 (2,3,4) - boring sliders, changed to circles.Sliders are okay. No good patterns to match the music here if Circles (they were actually circles before, but i made them sliders cuz i feel it is better here.)
Also recommend to replace whistles to finishes in this guitar solo.
02:48:381 (1) - till 02:52:973 (6) - strange following throughout this part... Changed a lot.I remapped this part slightly.
Skipped to next major place:
03:10:575 (5) - this minislider is bad, looks like 2 circles, even knowing that I always failed it. Changed to 1 circle.Remapped this part from an earlier mod. I think its much more readable now so i'm keeping the slider.
03:10:881 (6,1) - changed slider and added a circle to follow piano. Keeping
03:11:952 (2) - shortened slider.Keeping
03:15:013 (1) - start of too-many-sliders place. First short ones replaced with my favorite circle formation :3 But you can make any other ofc.
First part of 3rd kiai is done with nice finishsounds, but why there are no in last part and till the end? Too plain. Changed it.It's fine imo. Keeping
03:38:738 (4) - changed formation.Keeping
03:45:626 (3) - too low slider, moved (2,3) higher. Also next S-slider too.
03:52:054 (2) - changed following.
03:54:350 (1) - strange following... Changed it too till the end.Keep
03:57:871 (1) - this last slider might be replaced to a circle. Keeping
03:59:095 (1) - 1st spinner better to end at 04:04:146 because of last note and last spinner one appearing too fast and it scared me first time that i failed xD. It's just you lol. Keeping

So it became a 3.65 map with it, but still ok for hard.) Here is a map http://puu.sh/el1Wn.zip

[Insane]
I just watched autoplaying but I wanted to change a lot of things there, but this is hard for me to testplay so maybe I have no right to say so.) But there are a lot of insane players now so they can help you more.
So I just can recommend changing hitsounds once more (close to what I said in Hard earlier) and more intuitive following to the rhythm/lyrics. Yep. Hitsounds x__x
I liked ~50/50 of sliders/circles percentage, nice balance.
Lovely final sliderart.) But I really hate it while playing though xD.

[Normal]
This one is nice I think, I'm not good with Normals while playing, but this one was rather good and relaxing. Following was smoother than in harder ones, or maybe that's because of big simpleness for me. The only things I found to change are ending spinners (see Hard mod) and ending with confusing part:
03:50:677 (3,4,5) - shortened (3), deleted (5) slider and made a repeating (4). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495597 I actually like this pattern better. I don't really like the repeat, since the beats are the same here.
03:55:575 (4,5,6) - this triangle is too confusing, maybe it's better to make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495615 Remapped .
Also maybe these parts, not sure:
01:20:217 (1) - shortened slider till 01:20:524 ... but maybe for normal it is not needed. Fixed.

[Easy]
Was pretty smooth too, but ending is confusing again:
03:17:768 (1) - slider is too late, moved it to 03:17:462 (1) - but this looks more like an accidental moving.) Fixed.
03:46:238 (4) - ends too low on the field maybe, moved it up. Still 100% visible and on screen when you play so it's good.
03:47:462 (1) - this is very confusing slider. I think it's okay.
03:46:238 (4,1,2,3) - changed formation nearly like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495811 I don't like squiggly sliders on Easy, makes it hard for beginners to play imo . So i tend to stick with straight/bezier.

Well, I think this is all i can say for now. Also if you liked my mod I can help you more with Hard difficulty, just tell me.)
Good Luck with further work~

[Seraphin] wrote:

hi

no kd

maybe, I mod other diff later. now, I sleep
all mod is shxt blanket nazi, can ignore all if you want

General

inconsistent tag (AIMod)

maybe play around with a silent sliderslide.wav for some parts

I really feel timing is off
at least, quite a few beats need to be moved forward 1/8, but maybe I'm crazy

Insane

left1 = move left 1 point on grid (grid size: tiny)

00:14:401 (3) - move end tick left1 K
00:15:473 (5) - (for 7) move end and middle tick left 1K
00:27:871 (3) - end point x132y388 Fine as it,
00:28:177 (4) - end point x188y116K
00:29:707 (5) - end point right1 & up1 K
00:33:381 (1) - red point right1 & up1K
00:53:126 (2) - end point up1(?) Had to shift the other sliders too to retain symmetry.
00:55:881 (5) - don't want to blanket this? Blanketted better.
00:59:095 (1) - end point x272y148K
01:00:320 (6) - end point left1 or 2K
01:28:789 (2,3,4) - hard to read imo Remapped.
01:32:768 (2) - end point x254 I think this is the wrong slider. X is 392 here lol.
01:34:452 (4) - end point right1 This is okay as is.
01:36:595 (3) - end point up1Also okay.
01:48:840 (1) - NCK
02:02:615 (5) - end point down1 & right1Kay.
02:08:126 (1) - middle point left1K
02:23:585 (1) - end point x104y316Keep
02:23:891 (2) - end point x160y168Fixed all 4 sliders to keep symmetry.
02:24:197 (3) - end point x0y224
02:24:503 (2) - middle point x48y360, end x72y392
02:33:228 (1) - end point left1Fixed.
02:37:513 (1) - uh ok Ugh you know what im just gonna make this a lame repeat slider. Lol.
02:43:789 (1) - end point x212y104Fixed
02:44:248 (2) - end point x340y168
02:45:013 (1) - end point left1
02:45:473 (2) - if you apply above, move end point left1 alsoBoth fixed.
02:49:605 (6) - move right1, then move end point left2~
02:50:217 (8) - end point x140y232Fixed
02:56:646 (3) - no whistle i thinkTook it out.
03:06:901 (1) - end point x256y132
03:08:126 (3) - end point down1 & right1
03:09:503 (5) - middle point x156y364
03:11:034 (2) - end point right1
03:37:054 (1) - end point down1
03:40:728 (1) - start point right1Fixed all above^
03:59:707 (1) - dam

nice feeling when playing
gl

染 <-- artifact from my computer randomly switching input mode

Malikil wrote:

Hi,
from my queue.
Yup, definitely need to learn the nuances of this whole modding thing. I'm sorry if this is just bad.

Easy
01:20:217 (1) - The end of this slider doesn't really fit with the music putting so much emphasis on the following red mark.I don't want to map on the red-ticks on Easy because of the change in polarity .
01:27:258 (2) - Make this slider shorter so it ends on the long white mark.Ooops fixed.
02:23:585 (5,1) - This seems like a bit of an awkward pause.Made it longer.
03:47:462 (1) - The end of this feels a bit awkward.Fine to me, not sure what to change...

Normal
This seems generally a bit too hard for a normal difficulty. This difficulty is more like a light-Hard than a Normal honestly. It's why I mapped an Easy.
00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,1) - This felt cramped to me
01:02:769 (3,4,5) - Maybe too hard for newer players to read?I think it's readable because only the mid-point is covered But will consider...
01:26:034 (4,5,1) - ^
01:33:381 (1,2) - Try to avoid overlapping sliders too muchKeeping, I want to map the beats here, but that means the distance-snap requires them to overlap .
02:03:381 (3,1,2,3,4) - Again, readability for newer playersKeeping.
02:32:768 to 02:40:268 - Try not to have so many half-beat gaps with such frequency.Emphasizes the rhythm. I think this is okay.
02:43:024 (1) - Make this longer to the white markFixed.
02:48:381 (1,2) - A bit awkwardKeep
03:05:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - This felt a bit crampedDistance Snap . But I like the pattern, and it's not difficult to read, just some overlap.
03:10:115 (1,2) - Try using just one slider ending on 3:10:728I like this idea. Remapped
03:48:075 (1) - End on the earlier red markokay.
03:50:217 to 03:58:942 - The timing in this part doesn't feel very consistentFine to me,
03:59:095 (1) - Consider ending on the previous white mark.Better as it is right now imo.

Hard
00:13:024 (5) - End this on the red mark?i think this is fine.
00:49:758 (1) - Try ending the slider on the white mark, then either adding a note or repeating the slider. Because as it is now it feels like there's something missing here.Keeping. If anything, maybe Circle on 00:49:758 - and then starting slider on 00:49:911 - But i don't like the rhythmic pattern .
00:56:952 (2) - As above, shorten to the white mark then add a note.Keeping.
02:00:932 (1) - Shorten to whiteRemapped this whole part. I decided instead of shortening the slider, I'd make them two circles.
02:08:126 (1) - Same as 00:49:758
03:01:774 (4) - This should start on the white markLol oops. Fixed
03:10:575 (4,5) - I think is sounds better with 4 ending where 5 starts and 5 starting on the next white markRemapped whole thing. You're right. this plays much better.
03:11:952 (1) - End on the white?Yep! This works too, remapped.
03:26:646 (2) - ^Keeping this.
03:38:738 (4) - Try starting this on the white mark, and adding another circle where it starts now.Keeping. Made this slider have a bump to try and capture the "Tsu" that she sings.
03:59:095 (1) - End on the previous white mark?Keeping.

Insane
This difficulty is right at the upper limit of my ability, so gameplay-wise I can't really offer much. As far as I can tell it seems good but for a few minor things:
01:13:636 (1) - Was having the slider body sticking out very slightly past the beginning of the slider intentional?Ooops, fixed this. I must've messed up the slider-head somehow while moving it around.
02:11:187 (1) - The end of the slider is off the top of the grid. I don't know for sure if that's not okay, so if it's fine then feel free to disregard this point.Oooh. Fixed. It's okay to be outside the grid but i noticed the slider touched the hp-bar. Moved it down.
03:59:707 (1) - That's a very pretty slider, but it is sticking out the sides of the grid area.


Good luck getting this ranked, you've got a pretty good map here already.

Fryz3 wrote:

hi again! pretty bad how i said i tried to do a global mod and it turned out to be detailed...
anyway the only thing i wanted to say is that i've seen every episode of sao 2,
and i've never seen the emblem of the sleeping knight, so i apologize for that .
and if you remember, do you know where it was shown in the anime?
i really can't remember it at all.....

pretty useless message for you to read. huh.... well i give you a kudosu just to make up for it, hope it will help

written by a failed sao fan,

Fryz3

trammiexo wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue!

Well, I know you requested for mods on Normal/Hard but I'll do easy too. Thank you very much .

Easy:
-Check AiMod for distance snap issues. It's important to keep a consistent DS. All fixed now, for both Easy and Normal .
00:06:442 (1) - sometimes it;s okay to have overlap on easy difficulty, but the overlap with combo 3 looks sloppy and creates a bad flow. Remapped it into one big slider.
00:18:687 (1,2,3,4) - This can be confusing to new players since they are all together, consider spacing them out or perhaps use some sliders hereI think this is fine.

00:30:932 (1,2) - fix the blanketDone
00:38:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:18:687 Remapped this part into sliders.
00:45:013 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:07:666 (2,3) - Fix blanket
01:20:064 - This is a very strong beat, you can start with something here and from there, it will flow betterAdded a circle. I'm not 100% sure about this. Will try it out and see though, since it is a strong beat as you said.
01:35:217 (2,3) - Fix blanket
02:18:687 (1,2) - these can look confusing for easy difficulty, consider changing the patternMoved a few sliders around, i think it works better now.
Well, since it's pretty late where I live now, I will continue modding this tomorrow or sometime this week. Please do not reward until I come back and finish modding ^^ okay im back lol, well I'm not sure if you applied the mods above but I'm going to continue now : P
03:22:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are all very connected, maybe you should space it outRemapped this part .
03:46:238 (4,1,2,3,4) - Same as above, please adjust this or use different patternHmmm will try... I reduced the ending circles to 2 rather than 3, and made slider longer, will play around with this pattern. I want to map each beat of the vocals at the end but this is also Easy diff... xP.
Note: also make sure you fix any distance snap issues.

Normal:
02:17:922 (4,5,6,7,1) - bad flowTook out 4, remapped slightly.
00:23:432 (6) - Odd placement and creates weird flowExtended slider.
00:23:891 (1,2,3,1) - Bad flowIdk about this. I think it's fine... I changed the spacing of 2 and 3 slightly.
01:29:401 (4,1) - fix blanketK
01:33:381 (1,2) - arrange better. This creates a bad flow Rearranged.
01:33:840 (2,3) - fix this blanket as well
01:48:840 (5,1) - this looks a bit strangeBlanket was off... fixed that, but i'm keeping the 1/2 slider, for a Normal I think this is the most effective way to capture the "stream" that is supposed to occur here without making it difficult.

03:19:299 (2) - the slider head of this does not stack with the slider tail of 03:20:524 (4) stacking them properly will make it neat and cleanFixed all. Had to fix all the sliders before/after too so they all stacked too.

Hard:
00:05:064 (2) - this can be spaced out more for a better blanket and clean flowKeeping this, I want to keep it less spaced and simpler during this section of the song.
00:25:881 (1,2,3) - these can look a bit better. It looks a bit strange for different shaped slider for each one imoI think this is okay... Fixed the slider-stacks tho, since they were a bit off.
00:57:564 (3) - same as 00:05:064 (2)Moved around slightly, but I'm keeping the blanket distance xP.
01:18:840 (7) - insert break time after this? Okay! Didn't know there was enough time to add a break.
Note: The beats were fine, I think spacing of certain objects should be improved.

Overall: The mapset is very nice, mapped well. Some improvements should be taken into account, but overall good job on the timing and beats of the objects. Only one thing I noticed is that each difficulty (I'm not sure about insane though) had different parts mapped. If I were you, I would map the same parts of the song for each difficulty

Hope this mod helps, I'm still pretty new to the modding world ^^' best of luck to you!

1. 00:11:646 (2) - Remove clap, maybe add a whistle
2. 00:30:013 (1,2,3) - I don't think they need to overlap onto each other since they're not 1/4
3. 00:37:666 (6) - Moving this to the right might look nicer instead of the overlap
4. 00:48:075 (1,2) - Move these a bit to the right more, it's a bit to close to the tail of 00:47:462 (4)
5. 01:03:993 (1,2,3,4) - Reposition these a little, looks a bit ugly
6. 01:15:932 (5) - Move to x:368 y:258~ looks much more neat with a tiny bit of space
7. 01:27:717 (2) - Move to x:364 y:232~ same reason
8. 01:28:483 (1,2,3) - Also think these don't need to overlap since they're not 1/4, reposition them a bit
9. 01:37:513 (2) - Move like a centimeter or two to the right, also looks better
10. 01:56:646 (1) - Also a tiny annoying overlap onto 01:56:952 (2)
11. 02:03:993 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/eCzfN/988341f910.jpg

Loony Key wrote:

Easy
1. 02:23:585 (5) - I think to finish the slider here 02:25:115Ooops fixed!

Normal
1. 00:35:524 (4) - move on 00:35:371Keeping. Staying with the pattern.
2. 01:08:891 (1) - finish slider here 01:09:503 | remove - 01:09:656 (2) | increase the distance between the slider and this note - 01:09:962 (3)It's fine as it currently is.
3. 01:43:330 (3) - slider to change the note (sound will be better) 01:43:330Made them circles instead of sliders.

Hard
1. 00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - that moment is difficult to make, propose to reduce the spacings up to 1-1.1, note 6 positioned under 5 or between 5 and 6 note spacings 0.2 (then to beat time on 5 and 6 notes, in general, there must be something to do ) and 00:20:830 (7) - remove, is in my opinion better. This part is supposed to be difficult, it transitions out of the intro
2. 03:39:503 (1,2) - high jump, slide sometimes do not have time to finishKeeping this, intentional jump.

Insane
1. 00:19:758 (4) - I think to removeThis is fine. Follows the previous pattern too.
2. 01:38:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the beginning of better remake streamThis is fine.
3. 01:48:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ too much did not expect of the places it starts I changed the direction of the stream so it flows better coming out of the previous slider.


Very cool map, large gaps I could not find, so good luck with ranking^^

sukiNathan wrote:

[Hard]

Mostly just visual things ;w;

1. 00:11:646 (2) - Remove clap, maybe add a whistleOkay.
2. 00:30:013 (1,2,3) - I don't think they need to overlap onto each other since they're not 1/4I think this is fine.
3. 00:37:666 (6) - Moving this to the right might look nicer instead of the overlapYea, this works. Moved.
4. 00:48:075 (1,2) - Move these a bit to the right more, it's a bit to close to the tail of 00:47:462 (4)
5. 01:03:993 (1,2,3,4) - Reposition these a little, looks a bit uglyFixed the overlaps.
6. 01:15:932 (5) - Move to x:368 y:258~ looks much more neat with a tiny bit of spaceMoved it elsewhere but i get what you mean.
7. 01:27:717 (2) - Move to x:364 y:232~ same reasonMoved the slider around.
8. 01:28:483 (1,2,3) - Also think these don't need to overlap since they're not 1/4, reposition them a bitThis is fine. I just don't want to complicate it too much since i only use this pattern as a substitute for a stream.
9. 01:37:513 (2) - Move like a centimeter or two to the right, also looks betterEnded up shifting a bunch of sliders here haha. Fixed tho .
10. 01:56:646 (1) - Also a tiny annoying overlap onto 01:56:952 (2)Fixed them up.
11. 02:03:993 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/eCzfN/988341f910.jpgEnded up remapping this part, Didn't flow as well as i wanted.

Gaia wrote:

hey, from queue

[General]
yeah the timing is definitely off

[Insane]
You have to use consistent spacing!I know D:. Unless its slow parts (intro) I dont think consistent spacing is necessary on Insane tho.
00:01:544 (1,2,3) - 1 -> 2 uses 1.7x ds, but 2 -> 3 is even closer even though there's a beat of break in between. This is really important because it lets people misread the rhythms and perhaps click too earlyI added a note before 3 so the spacing is more normal.
00:03:381 (1,2,3) - same thing here, 1 -> 3 is consistently using 0.6x ds, that's cool but then you get to 00:04:452 (4,5) - and it kills the spacingI want to keep this for emphasis, but i'll try and rework it...
00:05:371 (1) - same issue, you're better off stacking this for an antijump imoStacked.
I'm not telling u to use DS the whole way through the map, just make things distinguished so that people would be mislead by the placement
^^ this goes for the rest of your map because im not gunna list everythingKay.

00:09:197 (2) - better centre this so it looks and plays better http://puu.sh/eIb1X/e0f5e12ab6.jpgOkay.
00:13:789 - Really big note! I strongly recommend you map this note outYea remapped here.
00:16:238 (1,2) - you mapped the first 2 guitar sounds but not the last one, i suggest u do it too, otherwise it sounds emptyMapped it. Also fixes the distance-snapping issue.
00:17:922 (4) - really isnt following anythingVocals.
00:19:605 - add circle or something, u can stack on 00:19:758 (4) - I want to keep this part really simple. Long gap to prepare for the buildup.
00:29:707 (5,1) - ahh this spacing problem is really bad because 5->1 is the same as 1->2 but the latter is a 1/4 jump s:
00:35:830 (1,2) - really random slider art, doesnt match with eachother too so mehRemapped this part
00:42:564 (3,4) - switch in timeline, it solves spacing issue and also is more fun to play i thinkRemapped this part. I switched 1/2 instead actually. (And remapped the combo before)
00:49:911 (2) - why not stack on 00:48:228 (2) - ?Why not. Stacked.
01:07:973 (10) - doesnt look so good with the overlapSlight overlap was intentional, but i fixed up 9 since it wasn't overlapping symmetrically with 8. (Reduced overlap too)
01:09:962 (1) - I'm not so sure about the rankability of these sliders, personally I'd avoid them completely t/256438I'm well aware of this I want it for purely visual emphasis. They are the same speed as normal sliders. They are easy to fix though once i get a BAT to look at them haha.
01:12:411 (1) - 01:13:636 (1) - 01:14:860 (1) - etc, and tbh they dont fit the song eitherTo emphasize the bass.
01:18:534 (1) - this is unrankable I'm pretty sure, the ratio for the bump and the actual slider is too big o3oAlright this one i'll take out. Make them normal sliders.

NC

00:34:452 (5) -
00:37:054 (5) -
00:39:350 (6) - Keep
00:40:422 (1) - remove NC
00:44:401 (5) -
00:54:197 (6) -
00:54:809 (1) - Remove NCKeeping
00:55:422 (3) - Keep
00:56:646 (9) - Keep
01:00:320 (6) -
01:00:932 (1) - remove NC
01:01:544 (5) -
01:02:156 (1) -
01:02:768 (5) - remove NCKeep

Changed the rest.

ok so your New Combo pattern is totally whack, respecially in the kiai. You're switching between every measure and every 2 measures which is a very confusing thing to do, especially when the music doesnt change much rhythmically
I suggest to NC every measure (every time there is a white tick), it makes ur NCing clean and simple.
i stopped looking after my last point so just go through and look for more

I decided to keep some NC because starting a new combo mid-pattern seems odd to me.

I'll stop here, I saw some pretty cool patterns but they're just really unpolished right now

btw, 03:59:707 (1) - this is awesome, good job (:
one thing though, it's probably unrankalbe because the sides are overlapping and don't have a definite course throughout the slider Will wait for BAT before reducing this back to a generic spinner ;___;

SPOILER

anyways, good luck and have fun!

Owntrolf wrote:

General
The soft-hitnormal doesnt feel that audible to me, heck even the slider sound is louder than the soft-hitnormalWill check
I dont really think normal-hitwhistle is that good(justmebecauseimanormalwhistlehater)Will try and find a better hitwhistle, i realize i use them a lot.
You probably wont need letterbox or widescreen support since you dont have a storyboardYep

Easy
00:20:217 (2,3,4) - Try not to use too many single taps, you can just delete 2 and 4 and keep 3 and its fine(theres some others in the map)K. Remapped and simplified.
03:42:564 (2,3) - Naziblanketggwp

Normal
00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,1) - To a beginner this might look like tldr (theres some other parts that are similar to this)Keeping them .
01:41:646 (4,2) - Nazistackgg fixed.
02:00:932 (3,1,2) - Naziblanket
03:01:238 (2,2) - Nazistack

Hard
Some parts of it look clustered, usually when you do things with sliders such as 00:30:013 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
The slider overlaps might be a bit hard such as 00:39:350 (6,7,8) - since they You all start at the same pointIt's cluttered, but I like this haha. My style I guess. Maybe they might be slightly more difficult to read for beginners, but they're definitely easy to play.
00:45:320 (6,7) - Maybe replace these 2 with circle + 1/1 repeat I'll try this.
00:49:758 (1,2) - Swap positions in timing, circle then slider I feel that the drumbeat at 00:50:217 - is stronger so Slider then Circle. Keeping
01:50:217 (2,3) - ^ similar thing here you could always just change it to circle + 1/1 + circleYea I like this! Remapped.
02:23:585 (7) - Rip flowFixed
02:25:728 (5) - ^Remapped
03:10:575 (4,5) - Naziblanket That 1 pixel to the left.

Insane
00:05:371 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change to something like this I like current rhythm better.
00:18:993 - and 00:19:605 - Maybe add notes hereKeeping it simple to emphasize buildup.
01:17:629 - and 01:17:654 - What are these green points for, theres a bunch of similar things around the mapFixed them all
01:51:442 (4) - Maybe change to 1/2 sliderI think circle is fine. I want to give more time to transition, since the jump is cross-screen.
01:59:554 (2) - Reduce to 1/1 slider and put a circle on the white tick where it used to endI don't want to follow the red-tick beats here. Keeping simple rhythm and following vocals.
02:08:126 (1) - Maybe move to the next white tick and add a circle where it used to startWill consider. It definitely works. My only concern is the number of 1/2 sliders I use following this part. I wanted to add some variety (1/1 slider). But definitely will try this.
03:26:493 (1) - ^This one i used the slider-bump to emphasize the note. Since the drumbeat is different on this part, I felt the rhythm pattern should be a bit different too.

1. 00:06:442 (1,2) - Should follow piano sounds here, current rhythm makes little sense
2. 00:08:891 (1) - Follow the music better here
3. 00:17:922 (3) - end 1/2 beat early
4. 00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many circles in a row for a hard diff
5. 00:30:013 (1,2,3) - Space them far enough apart so they don't overlap and it's not a confusing jumbled mess like this. You have 1/2 beat between each of these repeat sliders so you shouldn't be spacing them like they were 1/4 or 1/8
6. 00:30:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm pretty sure this is too hard to read to be allowed in a hard
7. 00:41:952 (4,5) - Why aren't you just following the 1/1 beats here?
8. 00:54:809 (1) - ^
9. 00:55:422 (2,3,4,5) - It'd make more sense to follow vocals here and have the 1/2 sliders in the previous measure.
10. 00:56:952 (2) - You have this habit of skipping over the white 1/1 beat tick to end the slider after it, but this doesn't follow the music. I'm going to stop mentioning when you do these, but keep in mind that you should really change these. They are all over kiai time mostly.
11. 01:00:932 (4,5,6,7) - Should make them consistent, all circles or all 1/2 sliders
12. 01:19:911 - add note here
13. 01:28:483 (1,2,3) - Same thing I said earlier
14. 01:54:197 (9,10,1) - Fix spacing here
15. 01:57:871 (7,1) - You can't do this. This conflicts with the rhythm you used in insane, which is the correct one. The music is on 2/3 ticks here, snapping your hard's slider to 3/4 is wrong. Follow the insane's rhythm.
16. 02:14:248 - should map this
17. 02:14:860 ^
18. 02:39:350 (1,2) - Avoid overlap
19. 03:38:279 (1,2,3) - Aren't these jumps a little big?
20. 03:42:258 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same thing I said earlier about too many circles

1. 00:10:115 (7) - You shouldn't be using finishes here because there is no cymbal in the music. If you wanted to emphasize those notes, then replace the hitsound files with something quieter.
2. 00:18:687 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is deceptive, it looks like 1/2. should put the circles farther away or extend sliders
3. 00:49:758 (1,2,3) - traversing the whole screen in this short of a time is too much for this part of the song
4. 01:09:962 (1) - I don't get what you're trying to do here, since you'd normally use those slider shapes to slow down the slider. Adding a timing section to increase its speed ruins the point.
5. Also others like 01:12:411 (1) - 01:13:636 (1) - 01:14:860 (1) - if the sliders are basically the same speed you shouldn't be new combo spamming them.
6. 01:21:697 - 01:21:850 - there are sounds on 1/6 ticks if you want to map them
7. 01:56:340 (1) - You wanna curve this the other way to flow better
8. 01:58:483 (1) - Remove NC since it's part of the same rhythm
9. 02:25:575 (6,1) - Rotate the slider to improve the flow, awkward atm
10. 02:26:952 (5,6,1) -You should change the angle here because it's weird to play in a straight line especially when you want to emphasize 02:27:258 (1) -
11. 02:33:687 - should map something here
12. 02:36:136 ^
13. 02:41:493 (6,7,1) - Same thing I said about straight lines
14. 02:42:871 (7,1) - Change direction of slider because this flows awkwardly
15. 03:29:554 (6,7) - awkward movement, should rotate the slider
16. 03:34:452 (6,7) - ^
17. 03:46:238 (1) - o.o try using some red points to make crazy sliders more easily
18. 03:59:707 (1) - You really shouldn't do this, it's too easy for a player to sliderbreak a couple times and die. Just put a second spinner here.

• Going to focus on rhythm here

1. 00:04:452 (2,3) - A bit excesive, extend 2 to where 3 is in the timeline and delete 3, it fits better with the song
2. 00:12:564 (4) - Split this slider into a 1/2 and a circle to follow the vocal better
3. 00:17:615 (3) - It would play better if the slider was on the white tick, swap it with 00:17:462 (2) - . Always try to start them on white ticks.
4. 00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to avoid overmaping like this
5. 00:40:268 - The stream should start here, listen to the drums.
6. 00:37:666 - There can be a triple here, i would map it since it's the hardest diff
7. 00:45:932 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g this 00:45:932 (2,3) - , then this 00:46:085 (3,4) - , then this 00:46:238 (4,5) - . It makes a funnier jump pattern that fits better on the map imo
8. 00:52:743 (4,1) - There are some things wrong here. The circle 4 is overmapped and should be deleted. And you should move the slider 1 to 00:52:973 - here to make the downbeat clickable and more satisfying since it has a cymbal sound. Also the same thing that sliders should start on the white tick in most cases.
   My suggestion:
   
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9. 00:59:095 (1,2,3) - This would sound better if it was 3 1/2 sliders, following the drums
10. 01:00:932 (1,2,3) - Overmapped triple? it comes out of nowhere since you don't use triples like that on the rest of the map so you should remove it
11. 01:21:825 - Add a circle for a triple
12. 01:59:554 (2) - Make it shorter to 01:59:860 - and add circle 02:00:013 - , i think that way it follows better the vocals.
13. 02:00:166 (3) - You should do the same here ^, shorten to 02:00:626 -
14. 02:01:544 (3) - ^ to 02:01:850 -
15. 02:03:993 (1,2) - It would be more effective if this was a 1/1 slider only, like you did with this one 02:04:605 (4) -
16. 02:08:126 (1,2) - Swap them on the timeline to follow vocals better.
17. 02:10:728 (5,6) - 1/1 like you did here 00:52:360 (3) - to avoid making it all 1/2 sliders and stuff
18. 02:11:187 (1) - Same as 00:52:743 (4,1) - , the thing about the downbeat
19. 02:12:182 (4) - Delete it?
20. 03:06:901 (1) - Change rhythm to this? to follow vocals
    
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21. 03:08:126 (3) - End here 03:08:432 - . I know you are following the piano here but the vocals seem stronger.
22. 03:08:891 (1,2) - Same thing same reason ^
23. 03:11:034 (2) - Map the piano notes since you made the switch them here 03:10:115 (3,4,5) -
    Suggestion:
    
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24. 03:11:952 (1) - End here? 03:12:258 -
25. 03:12:564 (2,3,4,5) - Why not follow vocals?
26. 03:12:564 (2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g for better flow?
27. 03:18:381 (4) - ^
28. 03:18:381 (4) - This should be split into a circle and a 1/2 slider, not only for vocals but for the drum.
29. 03:27:258 (1,2,3,4) - Not something you have to change but it's the only part you use rhythms like this. 03:28:024 (3,4) - Well this one is the one you should change, you can leave the other one.
30. 03:36:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this a complete stream, not something you have to change but it would be beter for rhythm
31. 03:59:707 (1) - Nice slider! But im not sure about it's rankability
    
    The diff is fun to play but it still needs some work on rhythm flow and hitsounds

• Some problems with the rhythm here too

1. 00:06:442 (1,2) - Why are these 3/2? I think it would sound better if they were 1/1 like you did here 00:10:115 (4,5) -
2. 00:08:891 (1) - What are you mapping with this? i suggest two sliders here would be better
   
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3. 00:13:024 (5) - This should end on the red tick
4. 00:13:636 (6,1) - How about this rhythm? i think it's more fitting to the voice and piano (just switch the circle and the slider on the timeline and reposition)
5. 00:17:922 (3) - You should shorten this to the red tick 00:18:228 -
6. 00:26:340 (2,3) - This looks nice and all but feels forced
7. 00:33:993 (2,3) - I think this kind of jumps are to be avoided on a hard
8. 00:41:952 (4,5) - Both of these sliders should end on the white tick, right now they aren't mapped to anything and sound weird.
9. 00:47:768 (5,1) - Another jump, you can keep them if you want
10. 00:49:758 (1,2) - Swap them on the timeline
11. 00:54:809 (1) - You should end this on the white tick
12. 00:56:952 (2) - ^
13. 01:03:228 (3) - This one on the red tick, if you change this use another slider here:
    
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14. 01:12:411 (1) - Remove repeat and add a 1/2 slider here? 01:12:411 (1) -
15. 01:20:217 (1) - How about shortening this here 01:20:524 - and add a circle here 01:20:830 - ?
16. 01:24:044 (2) - End this on the previous red tick
17. 01:26:034 (6) - ^, you can add a circle to fill the blank space
18. 01:31:391 (4) - ^^, also the circle
19. 01:35:830 (1) - ^, + circle
20. 01:48:228 (5,6,7) - You really like this pattern haha, how about shortening this 01:48:840 (7) - by 1/2 beat, move it here 01:48:993 - and add a circle
21. 01:48:840 - and stack it on the slider's head
    
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22. 01:49:299 (1) - End on previous red tick and fill the blank space with a small 1/2 slider 01:49:911 -
23. 02:08:126 (1,2) - Same, switch them on the timeline.
24. 02:12:564 (6,1,2,3) - Idk what you were trying to do here but i suggest to remap this small part to be similar to the first and last kiai
25. 02:20:524 (1) - End on previous white tick, you can't just end sliders wherever you want :/
26. 02:26:187 (6,7,8) - Move these 1/2 a beat forward on the timeline and add a circle on the head of the first slider here 02:26:187 - . This is to make those sliders start on the white tick, also makes this one 02:26:952 (9) - follow the voice better
    
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27. 02:38:585 (3,4) - Why repeat sliders? overmapped
28. 02:42:105 (1,2,3) - This sounds weird, move them back 1/2 beat and move 02:41:799 (5) - here:
    
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    and then you can add a circle here 02:42:871 - on the head of the slider 02:43:024 (1) -
29. 02:48:687 (3) - This should end on the red tick, vocals --- then add a circle for the strong beat 02:48:993 -
30. 02:50:524 (1) - Remove repeat and add circle here 02:50:983 -
31. 02:59:707 (7) - End on white tick?
32. 03:02:768 (1,2,3,4) - You can do something that follows voice better
    
    I'll stop here :p
    Comments are the same as insane

1. 00:34:605 (3,4) - I'd move this back 1/2 a beat on the timeline to follow better the gutar (i think?) then reposition and stuff
2. 01:02:768 (3,4,5) - You have to use this pattern on all your diffs :p
3. 01:30:013 (1) - This should be a 1/1 slider, 01:30:320 - strong beat here, then fill blank space with a circle 01:30:626 -
4. 01:33:840 (2) - Move it here 01:33:993 - and make it shorter to a 1/1 slider, it's better for the vocals and drums
5. 01:47:768 (2) - This should be a 1/2 slider like you did here 01:42:871 (2) -
6. 02:18:687 (6,1) - Delete these two and replace with a slider, the music changes here and the vocals you were following with previous notes end here
7. 02:27:258 (1) - Should be shorter, a 1/2 slider, better to follow the vocals and to change polarity to red ticks
8. 02:46:850 (1) - ^
9. 03:50:217 (3) - ^^
10. 03:52:666 (3) - ^^^
11. 03:55:115 (3) - ^^^^
    
    Better than the other two difficulties, but still can use some more mods.

xxdeathx wrote:

From my queue

[Hard]

1. 00:06:442 (1,2) - Should follow piano sounds here, current rhythm makes little senseRemapped
2. 00:08:891 (1) - Follow the music better here I don't want to complicate things here, trying to stick with simple rhythm since the music is also quiet here.
3. 00:17:922 (3) - end 1/2 beat earlyK
4. 00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many circles in a row for a hard diffMade 1, 2 into a slider instead. Kept the rest as circles.
5. 00:30:013 (1,2,3) - Space them far enough apart so they don't overlap and it's not a confusing jumbled mess like this. You have 1/2 beat between each of these repeat sliders so you shouldn't be spacing them like they were 1/4 or 1/8Changed their angles + position.
6. 00:30:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm pretty sure this is too hard to read to be allowed in a hard Guess i'll remap this.
7. 00:41:952 (4,5) - Why aren't you just following the 1/1 beats here? Remapping.
8. 00:54:809 (1) - ^
9. 00:55:422 (2,3,4,5) - It'd make more sense to follow vocals here and have the 1/2 sliders in the previous measure.Yea. I'll remap this part.
10. 00:56:952 (2) - You have this habit of skipping over the white 1/1 beat tick to end the slider after it, but this doesn't follow the music. I'm going to stop mentioning when you do these, but keep in mind that you should really change these. They are all over kiai time mostly.Alright.
11. 01:00:932 (4,5,6,7) - Should make them consistent, all circles or all 1/2 sliders All circles then. I worry i spam too many 1/2 sliders x___x
12. 01:19:911 - add note hereK
13. 01:28:483 (1,2,3) - Same thing I said earlierRepositioned.
14. 01:54:197 (9,10,1) - Fix spacing hereEnded up remapping this part. 2 1/1 sliders instead.
15. 01:57:871 (7,1) - You can't do this. This conflicts with the rhythm you used in insane, which is the correct one. The music is on 2/3 ticks here, snapping your hard's slider to 3/4 is wrong. Follow the insane's rhythm.Fixed.
16. 02:14:248 - should map thisRemapped this whole section.
17. 02:14:860 ^
18. 02:39:350 (1,2) - Avoid overlapFixed.
19. 03:38:279 (1,2,3) - Aren't these jumps a little big?Fixed.
20. 03:42:258 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same thing I said earlier about too many circlesMade 1, 2 slider instead.

Needs a lot of work with rhythm, since a lot of the rhythms you choose don't make any sense relative to the music. I just wanted to avoid too many 1/2 slider spam. Will try and use more 1/1 sliders and repeats too.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:115 (7) - You shouldn't be using finishes here because there is no cymbal in the music. If you wanted to emphasize those notes, then replace the hitsound files with something quieter. Removed.
2. 00:18:687 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is deceptive, it looks like 1/2. should put the circles farther away or extend slidersRemapped this part.
3. 00:49:758 (1,2,3) - traversing the whole screen in this short of a time is too much for this part of the songShortened the distance.
4. 01:09:962 (1) - I don't get what you're trying to do here, since you'd normally use those slider shapes to slow down the slider. Adding a timing section to increase its speed ruins the point.Yea, i wanted the sliders to mimic a normal slider, but wiggle for effect. I've made them just normal sliders now.
5. Also others like 01:12:411 (1) - 01:13:636 (1) - 01:14:860 (1) - if the sliders are basically the same speed you shouldn't be new combo spamming them.Yea.
6. 01:21:697 - 01:21:850 - there are sounds on 1/6 ticks if you want to map themI don't think this is necessary.
7. 01:56:340 (1) - You wanna curve this the other way to flow betterI think the flow here is okay.
8. 01:58:483 (1) - Remove NC since it's part of the same rhythmK
9. 02:25:575 (6,1) - Rotate the slider to improve the flow, awkward atmYep. Rotated, flow definitely poor here.
10. 02:26:952 (5,6,1) -You should change the angle here because it's weird to play in a straight line especially when you want to emphasize 02:27:258 (1) - Changed the angle.
11. 02:33:687 - should map something hereKay.
12. 02:36:136 ^ Keeping this since the beat isn't as audible as the previous one.
13. 02:41:493 (6,7,1) - Same thing I said about straight linesI like this pattern. There is a marked decrease in spacing which I personally enjoy.
14. 02:42:871 (7,1) - Change direction of slider because this flows awkwardlyCtrl+H and repositioned.
15. 03:29:554 (6,7) - awkward movement, should rotate the sliderIll think of another pattern here... I want the pattern to be different from previous Kiai Times since the rhythm is different too. Need more ideas lol.
16. 03:34:452 (6,7) - ^Fixed.
17. 03:46:238 (1) - o.o try using some red points to make crazy sliders more easilyI didn't think i needed them for loops haha.
18. 03:59:707 (1) - You really shouldn't do this, it's too easy for a player to sliderbreak a couple times and die. Just put a second spinner here.Got some suggestions from #modhelp, I'm going to re-make this slider with only one big wing rather an 3, so the path is 100% visible.

Your hitsounds are really quiet, especially the hitnormals. I can't hear any of the notes.

How to clap hitsound: put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white tick when it appears in the music. Most of the time it will be at these times, maybe they will add extra claps in other places, but you don't want to use claps when they don't belong.

The normal whistles though, it's best if you remove them all for now since you have some covering the entire slider, which people don't like now. They are meant to emphasize parts of the music and are used on circles or slider heads/tails, not slider bodies.

Atsuro wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]
The hitsounds are a bit inaudible

[Insane]

• Going to focus on rhythm here

1. 00:04:452 (2,3) - A bit excesive, extend 2 to where 3 is in the timeline and delete 3, it fits better with the songThis is fine.
2. 00:12:564 (4) - Split this slider into a 1/2 and a circle to follow the vocal better Keeping simple rhythm.
3. 00:17:615 (3) - It would play better if the slider was on the white tick, swap it with 00:17:462 (2) - . Always try to start them on white ticks. Tried. I think this is fine too.
4. 00:19:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to avoid overmaping like this Following drums, also i think this stream emphasizes the build up well.
5. 00:40:268 - The stream should start here, listen to the drums.Yep fixed.
6. 00:37:666 - There can be a triple here, i would map it since it's the hardest diffI don't really like streams/stacks in general unless i feel they really emphasize something xPP.
7. 00:45:932 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g this 00:45:932 (2,3) - , then this 00:46:085 (3,4) - , then this 00:46:238 (4,5) - . It makes a funnier jump pattern that fits better on the map imo yea! I like this . I might not Ctrl+G 3,4 tho, so it's a X pattern instead of Z pattern but definitely better like this .
8. 00:52:743 (4,1) - There are some things wrong here. The circle 4 is overmapped and should be deleted. And you should move the slider 1 to 00:52:973 - here to make the downbeat clickable and more satisfying since it has a cymbal sound. Also the same thing that sliders should start on the white tick in most cases. Ended up remapping this whole part. Tried your suggestion and kept your rhythm but changed all the patterns haha.
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9. 00:59:095 (1,2,3) - This would sound better if it was 3 1/2 sliders, following the drums I want to follow the vocals here.
10. 01:00:932 (1,2,3) - Overmapped triple? it comes out of nowhere since you don't use triples like that on the rest of the map so you should remove itRemapped.
11. 01:21:825 - Add a circle for a triple This is fine.
12. 01:59:554 (2) - Make it shorter to 01:59:860 - and add circle 02:00:013 - , i think that way it follows better the vocals.
13. 02:00:166 (3) - You should do the same here ^, shorten to 02:00:626 -
14. 02:01:544 (3) - ^ to 02:01:850 - Remapped all above^
15. 02:03:993 (1,2) - It would be more effective if this was a 1/1 slider only, like you did with this one 02:04:605 (4) - ^
16. 02:08:126 (1,2) - Swap them on the timeline to follow vocals better. Both follow the vocals equally well, but Circle on 2 has the benefit of also getting the drum hit.
17. 02:10:728 (5,6) - 1/1 like you did here 00:52:360 (3) - to avoid making it all 1/2 sliders and stuff Remapped this part.
18. 02:11:187 (1) - Same as 00:52:743 (4,1) - , the thing about the downbeat ^
19. 02:12:182 (4) - Delete it? Vocals
20. 03:06:901 (1) - Change rhythm to this? to follow vocals Making the rhythm simpler here.
    
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21. 03:08:126 (3) - End here 03:08:432 - . I know you are following the piano here but the vocals seem stronger. I don't want to follow vocals so much here, since I pretty much follow the piano for the rest of the section.
22. 03:08:891 (1,2) - Same thing same reason ^
23. 03:11:034 (2) - Map the piano notes since you made the switch them here 03:10:115 (3,4,5) - Yep
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24. 03:11:952 (1) - End here? 03:12:258 - K
25. 03:12:564 (2,3,4,5) - Why not follow vocals?Keeping simple rhythm.
26. 03:12:564 (2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g for better flow? K
27. 03:18:381 (4) - ^ This is okay.
28. 03:18:381 (4) - This should be split into a circle and a 1/2 slider, not only for vocals but for the drum.
29. 03:27:258 (1,2,3,4) - Not something you have to change but it's the only part you use rhythms like this. 03:28:024 (3,4) - Well this one is the one you should change, you can leave the other one. Done on purpose because the rhythm is different from the other choruses.
30. 03:36:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this a complete stream, not something you have to change but it would be beter for rhythm Would prefer to keep.
31. 03:59:707 (1) - Nice slider! But im not sure about it's rankability Remapping it
    
    The diff is fun to play but it still needs some work on rhythm flow and hitsounds Hitsound overhaul imcoming~

[Hard]

• Some problems with the rhythm here too

1. 00:06:442 (1,2) - Why are these 3/2? I think it would sound better if they were 1/1 like you did here 00:10:115 (4,5) - Fixed from earlier mod.
2. 00:08:891 (1) - What are you mapping with this? i suggest two sliders here would be better Remapped
   
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3. 00:13:024 (5) - This should end on the red tick K
4. 00:13:636 (6,1) - How about this rhythm? i think it's more fitting to the voice and piano (just switch the circle and the slider on the timeline and reposition) Tried. It's good, will play around with it, i have another pattern i want to try too.
5. 00:17:922 (3) - You should shorten this to the red tick 00:18:228 -
6. 00:26:340 (2,3) - This looks nice and all but feels forcedRemapped.
7. 00:33:993 (2,3) - I think this kind of jumps are to be avoided on a hardMade it simpler.
8. 00:41:952 (4,5) - Both of these sliders should end on the white tick, right now they aren't mapped to anything and sound weird. Remapped.
9. 00:47:768 (5,1) - Another jump, you can keep them if you want Keep, ya.
10. 00:49:758 (1,2) - Swap them on the timeline Better like this imo.
11. 00:54:809 (1) - You should end this on the white tick Yep
12. 00:56:952 (2) - ^K
13. 01:03:228 (3) - This one on the red tick, if you change this use another slider here: This one is okay imo.
    
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14. 01:12:411 (1) - Remove repeat and add a 1/2 slider here? 01:12:411 (1) - Yea i like this.
15. 01:20:217 (1) - How about shortening this here 01:20:524 - and add a circle here 01:20:830 - ? I want a simpler rhythm here.
16. 01:24:044 (2) - End this on the previous red tickRemapped from earlier mod.
17. 01:26:034 (6) - ^, you can add a circle to fill the blank space Remapped
18. 01:31:391 (4) - ^^, also the circle Made it a shorter slider instead.
19. 01:35:830 (1) - ^, + circle K
20. 01:48:228 (5,6,7) - You really like this pattern haha, how about shortening this 01:48:840 (7) - by 1/2 beat, move it here 01:48:993 - and add a circle Tried. I have another pattern in mind too.
21. 01:48:840 - and stack it on the slider's head
    
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22. 01:49:299 (1) - End on previous red tick and fill the blank space with a small 1/2 slider 01:49:911 - I think the 2/1 slider fits here.
23. 02:08:126 (1,2) - Same, switch them on the timeline.
24. 02:12:564 (6,1,2,3) - Idk what you were trying to do here but i suggest to remap this small part to be similar to the first and last kiai Remapped from earlier mod.
25. 02:20:524 (1) - End on previous white tick, you can't just end sliders wherever you want :/ I know x___x fixed.
26. 02:26:187 (6,7,8) - Move these 1/2 a beat forward on the timeline and add a circle on the head of the first slider here 02:26:187 - . This is to make those sliders start on the white tick, also makes this one 02:26:952 (9) - follow the voice betterRemapped
    
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27. 02:38:585 (3,4) - Why repeat sliders? overmapped I thought the repeat sliders were okay, but ill try and remap, since people are saying they are unnecessary.
28. 02:42:105 (1,2,3) - This sounds weird, move them back 1/2 beat and move 02:41:799 (5) - here: This sounds fine to me :S. The beats are on the red-ticks.
    
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    and then you can add a circle here 02:42:871 - on the head of the slider 02:43:024 (1) -
29. 02:48:687 (3) - This should end on the red tick, vocals --- then add a circle for the strong beat 02:48:993 - K, remapped.
30. 02:50:524 (1) - Remove repeat and add circle here 02:50:983 - Ended up remapping this whole part.
31. 02:59:707 (7) - End on white tick?
32. 03:02:768 (1,2,3,4) - You can do something that follows voice better Remapped whole section.
    
    I'll stop here :p
    Comments are the same as insane

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1. 00:34:605 (3,4) - I'd move this back 1/2 a beat on the timeline to follow better the gutar (i think?) then reposition and stuff I don't want to switch polarity here, since it's only for the guitar (and then i'd have to switch back right after too).
2. 01:02:768 (3,4,5) - You have to use this pattern on all your diffs :p YES!! >///<
3. 01:30:013 (1) - This should be a 1/1 slider, 01:30:320 - strong beat here, then fill blank space with a circle 01:30:626 - Fixed.
4. 01:33:840 (2) - Move it here 01:33:993 - and make it shorter to a 1/1 slider, it's better for the vocals and drums Agreed
5. 01:47:768 (2) - This should be a 1/2 slider like you did here 01:42:871 (2) -K
6. 02:18:687 (6,1) - Delete these two and replace with a slider, the music changes here and the vocals you were following with previous notes end hereK
7. 02:27:258 (1) - Should be shorter, a 1/2 slider, better to follow the vocals and to change polarity to red ticksFixed all except...
8. 02:46:850 (1) - ^
9. 03:50:217 (3) - ^^Keeping this one since the rhythm is just slightly different from the rest.
10. 03:52:666 (3) - ^^^
11. 03:55:115 (3) - ^^^^
    
    Better than the other two difficulties, but still can use some more mods.

That's all from me, GL!

-Nya- wrote:

Hello!~
Request from PM.
Well, here's my mod:

General:
Uncheck “Enable countdown” and “Widescreen support” in all the diffs since you don’t have a storyboard. Will do.I don’t suggest using the default colours since they look pretty ugly. Rather use colours that support the background image.Definitely.Add these two sound files to your song’s folder to silence those sliderslides which can get quite annoying.
http://puu.sh/eMwMt/81a8b32cc5.wav
http://puu.sh/eMwSX/b439209b44.wavDidn't even know these existed o___O tyyyyyy

I won't be commenting on hitsounds, mainly because i've completely redid the hitsounds for all the difficulties, sorry D:. But yes, all whistles have been deleted, a vast majority didn't fit to begin with.

Easy:
00:11:952 (1) – Not really such a good placement for flow purposes. I would rather stack that circle on 00:09:503 (2) – I agree. Repositioned.00:21:136 – I think a 35% sound sampleset is too low here. Maybe raise the volume a bit. 00:27:258 (2) – Rather place this circle here:Changed the shape of slider for better flow.

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00:28:483 (1,2) – I don’t suggest using those whistles here. It sounds pretty bad.00:36:442 (2,1) – I don’t like it that these sliders are slightly touching. Rather avoid it by making a blanket.Made it a blanket.

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00:40:728 (1,2) – Same here about those whistle sounds. I don’t suggest ever making the slides of the sliders whistle sounds.01:22:666 (3,4,5) – I don’t really suggest something like this in an Easy diff. Maybe change these two circles: 01:22:666 (3,4) - into a slider.Alright, remapped this part.

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01:43:177 (3) – Try to stack this circle perfectly on top of the tail of 01:39:503 (1) – K01:49:299 (1,2,1) - Remove the whistle sounds please.02:23:585 (5) – End this slider here: 02:25:422 – Sounds much betterI agree.03:01:544 (1) – Remove the whistle sound03:22:360 (1) - ^03:24:809 (3) – Move this slider a bit downwards to make it more parallel with 03:22:360 (1) – Moved the other slider upwards instead xD.

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03:27:258 (1) – Stack this slider’s head on the head of 03:24:809 (3) – Fixed.03:46:238 (4) – Remove the whistle sound03:47:768 (1) - ^03:49:299 – Why didn’t you map further on from here like you did in your other diffs. Wanted to keep it easy. I decided not to map the other instrumental sections of the song on Easy so I kept this part unmapped too.

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00:19:911 (1,2,3,4) – Rather try this: I don't want to space it out too much.

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00:25:881 (1) – Remove the whistle sound. There are other places as well, but I’m not going to point out every single one.00:35:830 (1) – Do this:Did something similar, Ctrl+G the other slider since the one in your picture follows a bit pattern.

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Just copy and paste 00:34:605 (3) – and then Ctrl+G01:45:626 (3) – Try this: This is fine i think... Both flow just as well imo.

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02:18:687 (6,1) – Maybe rather change these two circles into a slider.Yep

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02:38:585 (2,3) – Rather this: Okay!

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02:41:340 (2) – Just move this circle a bit to the left to improve the blanket with 02:40:575 (1) – Fixed the slider since the circles are part of a hex-pattern.02:48:687 (2) – Rather do this:Good idea. Better flow too!

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Copy and paste 02:48:381 (1) – and then Ctrl+H02:59:095 (1) – I’d say remove new combo hereK03:37:054 – Always try to place a circle or the start of a slider on a strong beat like this Remapped this part.

Hard:
Again, like in the previous two diffs, please remove those whistle sounds.00:56:340 (5) – I’d say add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:56:646 (1) – K01:06:748 (5) – Rather do this: Yea. I like this! Makes sense.

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01:10:728 (3) – Rather place this one somewhere here:Okay.

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01:16:544 – I don’t like this pause. Place a note there. I think this pause is okay. Creating some distance for player to jump/move.Maybe place a spinner from here: 01:19:070 – to 01:19:911 – Spinner is too short for Hard. 400 rpm to get +1000 x__x 01:35:217 (4) – Again, rather place it like this:Ended up remapping this part.

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01:57:258 (3,4,5,6) – Half circle shape instead? I like this back-forth pattern .

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02:43:024 (1,2) – Fix the distance. The circle is too close to the slider.Fixed02:57:258 (3,4) - ^ Fixed it slightly. This is part of another pattern so I didn't shift it as much as other one.02:59:707 (7,1) – And move these two a bit further away from each other, so 03:00:320 (1) – is not touching 02:59:707 (7) – slightlyRemapped.03:06:901 (1) – I’d say rather follow the vocals hereOkay. Added circle, and made slider shorter!

Overall, good mapset. The tidyness of it can still be improved though.
Good Luck!

Sala- wrote:

Hi, have a horribly late mod, please.

[General]

This might be just me, but I'd say that hitsounds are not loud enough on occasions. Hitsounds have all been redone .
The hitclaps are used really freely, but I don't think that is a godd idea because of its function. I would rather maintain a constant beat with them.

[Easy]

|00:24:809 (1) - Falsely snapped, it needs to end on the previous tick. Fixed.
|02:23:585 (5) - Follows a weird rhythm, I would make it shorter (end on 02:24:809 - , because it is a big white tick or on 02:25:115 - because the vocals end there, even though they stop sounding at your position.) Fixed.


[Normal]

|01:22:513 - Unsnapped timing section? Deleted.
|01:45:626 (3) - Was that sound intended? (Wasn't used in any other diff)
|01:52:360 (2,4) - unclean stack, there are some more minor ones. Fixed.

[Hard]

|00:08:891 (6,7) - Those sliders cause problems because of 00:10:115 (9,10) - . They almost have the same spacing, even though they have different time lapses between each other slider. Please decrease the spacing between 6 and 7 or increase it between 9 and 10.Didn't realize this. I ended up remapping this section and the next part too.
|01:57:258 (3,4,5,6,7) - really unclean spacing, I would recommend using DS. Fixed it up a bit.
|03:38:279 (1,2,3,4) - I expected 4 to be hald a beat snap away from 3, which was not the case. I think it would be better if you used the 3 circles as a path to slider 4 instead of making a sudden, unindicated jump. This makes sense. I wanted to have a jump from 3 to 4 but I thought of a pattern that was pretty fun so no more jump xD.

[Insane]

This diff is quite solid. it only had some parts with a weird antiflow, but I think that's totally manageable. Also, this has some cool jumps. So there is nothing to be said about this difficulty. Thanks ^^


Good Luck with your mapset.