Gamu wrote:

Hello.
sorry for the delay ;w;

[ General]

1. Romanised Title: Datte Datte Aa Mujou
   I'm not sure, but this is correct in my opinion. Umm , ok I will try this ~
2. Tags: 內田彩 ⇒ 内田彩 lol , language is so profound XDD
   This is wrong.

[ Insane]

1. I'd like to recommend that you reduce the HP Drain Rate because this song is long. Maybe HP6 is the appropriate setting.
2. 00:16:150 (1) - At the start point, soft-hitfinish is better than soft-hitwhistle. Like this: 00:22:150 (1).
3. 00:37:150 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap(S:C2) and change the volume to 40%~50%. It will make a good sound! fixed ~ but I set on 30% , seems better for me
4. 01:18:721 (5) - Add a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
5. 01:19:792 (1) - Remove a new combo. The reason is the same as above.
6. 01:20:149 (5) - Add a new combo. ^
7. 01:21:399 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
8. 01:29:971 (6) - ^
9. 02:24:435 (5) - ^
10. 02:26:399 (2) - ^
11. 02:45:864 (1) - soft-hitwhistle is missing at the end point.
12. 02:53:007 (1) - Remove a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
13. 02:54:435 (12) - Add a new combo. The reason is the same as above.
14. 02:55:864 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
15. 03:07:292 (5) - Add a finish at the start point.
16. 03:09:971 (1) - ^
17. 03:18:542 (6) - ^
18. 04:38:721 (1) - ^
19. 04:43:007 (1) - ^
20. 04:45:864 (5) - ^
21. 04:47:292 (1) - ^
22. 04:48:721 (5) - ^
23. 04:53:542 (2) - Add a soft-hitwhistle or soft-hitclap at the start point?
24. 05:01:578 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish at the start point.
25. 05:22:114 (3) - Add a soft-hitclap.
26. 05:22:471 (4) - Change to soft-hitclap.
27. 05:22:828 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap.
28. 05:23:007 (2) - Change to soft-hitclap.
29. 05:24:792 (T) - The volume of this green line is too low. At least 30%.
30. 05:25:149 (1) - Change to soft-hitclap.
31. 05:25:328 (2) - Add a soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle.
32. 05:25:685 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap
33. 05:25:864 (2) - Add a soft-hitfinish.
34. 05:26:221 (1) - Change to soft-hitclap.
35. 05:26:399 (2) - Add a soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle.
36. 05:26:935 (1) - ^
37. 05:28:185 (2) - Rhythm suggestion. Remove this circle and move the start point of the spinner to 05:27:024 and move the end point of the spinner to 05:32:292.
    
    image & code

    
    

    120,256,326935,5,6,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,327024,12,0,332292,0:0:0:0:

Many hitsounds are missing, and some new combos are strange.
I want to strongly recommend that you fix it!
Call me back :3

Gamu wrote:

Recheck time.

[ General]

1. Incorrect title again. Datte Datte Aa Mujou
   Please use capital letters.
2. It is necessary to unify the Tags. 内田彩 is correct.
   
   Tags

   - [Nardo's Inner Oni] : ラブライブ lovelive muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 内田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 Nardoxyribonucleic
   
   - [Wakare] : ラブライブ lovelive muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 內田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 Nardoxyribonucleic

.......Great sorry for my broken eyes orz... fixed

1. Remove the osb.file from folder. It is unnecessary.

Ah , I really didn't see .osb here this time lol --->
http://puu.sh/hASGL.png
http://puu.sh/hASHq.jpg

[ Wakare]

1. 00:37:150 (1) - default-clap doesn't fit to the song. Please use the custom sound (S:C1).
2. 01:28:899 (2) - Add a clap.
3. 01:29:257 (3) - Add a whistle.
4. 01:29:614 (4) - Add a clap.
5. 02:26:399 (2) - Remove a finish at the start point in order to keep your hitsound pattern
6. 02:47:828 (5) - Add a whistle at the start point.
7. 03:17:471 (2) - Add a clap.
8. 03:17:828 (3) - Add a whistle.
9. 03:18:185 (4) - Add a clap.
10. 03:44:435 (1) - Add a finish.
11. 03:57:292 (1) - CTRL+G. It will be better than before.
12. 03:58:007 (4) - ^
13. 05:25:864 (2) - Add a clap instead of finish.
14. 05:26:935 (1) - Add a finish instead of clap.

All fixed here ~!

Call me back again.

Konei wrote:

Coming from my queue, everything checks out and the map plays very nicely well done!

Bubbled #2.

CLSW wrote:

Support this because it's lovelive <3
Good luck!