-Eternal Love- wrote:

嗨!~ 我的mod來了

Nardo's Inner Oni

00:07:337 - add d? I think there is no obvious sound to be mapped.
00:13:337 - ^ ^
01:08:542 (240) - k It is already a kat.
01:18:007 (288) - d k would fit the background snare there.
04:35:596 (19) - delete? I think keeping the note would result in a greater impact.

祝好運^^

-Eternal Love- wrote:

嗨!~ 我的mod來了

Nardo's Inner Oni

00:07:337 - add d?
00:13:337 - ^
01:08:542 (240) - k
01:18:007 (288) - d
04:35:596 (19) - delete?

祝好運^^

bigfrog wrote:

沒趕上mod真是抱歉QwQ
祝rank順利~~

• General :

1. Nardo's diff offset is 40150 and Wakare's diff offset is 4150, please fix this, use 4150/40150 for consistency timing
2. i found more than 5+ unsnapped object, re-snap all of object please, and don't forget about 1/3 section if you fix this
3. Check AIMOD

Genocide wrote:

Hi, Xinchi summon me from my queue

• General :

1. Nardo's diff offset is 40150 and Wakare's diff offset is 4150, please fix this, use 4150/40150 for consistency timing There are two red lines in total. One at 4150 (160BPM) and the other one at 40150 (168BPM).
2. i found more than 5+ unsnapped object, re-snap all of object please, and don't forget about 1/3 section if you fix this The latest version does not have any unsnapped objects at all.
3. Check AIMOD

[Inner Oni]
00:43:900 (112,113) - ctrl + g?, 00:44:078 (113) - have a deeper voice d k could maintain a better snare consistency since snare occurs at 00:44:078 (113) -
01:09:078 (242,243) - ctrl + g?, 01:09:257 (243) - very high sound, it will be nice if you change it. Comparing the vocal pitch, 01:09:078 (242) - is higher than 01:09:257 (243) - , so k d would fit.
01:29:257 (359,360) - use Finish, for better emphasis + flow They are already big dons.
01:36:667 (406,408) - ctrl + g please. the sound is more high kkddk would result in a smoother flow. Also, the high-pitched sound actually appears at 01:36:935 (409) -
01:38:721 (416,417) - use d k, for more clean sound imo I would prefer focusing on the vocal pitch increase among 01:38:007 (413,416) - by using d and k respectively.
01:40:864 (431,432,433) - d k d please, the sound isn't that high, better use drum background sound. It's a good idea. But regarding 01:40:685 (429,430,431,432,433,434) - , I use ddk at 01:40:685 (429,430,431) - and d k k at 01:41:042 (432,433,434) - respectively to reflect the pitch increase of the instrument sounds there.
01:44:257 (452) - kat, you need more emphasis, otherwise 01:44:257 (452,453,454) - is going high fixed
01:59:257 (534,535) - better ctrl + g, for clean sound I think d k would result in a smoother flow imo.

since i don't like repetitive pattern, can you change this as k? 02:07:203 (579) - 02:08:632 (591,597) - 02:10:774 (609) - , for interesting pattern, i can play that section without seeing the notes `-`I'm following the repetitive guitar strikes there. Changed 02:10:774 (609) - to k though.

02:26:042 (708,709) - don, 02:26:042 - have a low sound If you listen carefully, 02:26:042 (708) - still has a relatively high pitch than 02:26:221 (709) - . That's why I put k d there.
02:58:185 (892,894) - d k, 02:58:185 (892) - has low sound, and 02:58:542 (894) - using kat to add more power of this K 02:58:720 (895) - I followed the vocal there. We could experience a pitch drop across 02:58:185 (892,893,894) -
04:13:542 (1325) - use kat, the sound is similar with 04:13:007 (1324) - The sound is lower than 04:13:007 (1324,1326) - , so d would be fine imo.
05:00:685 (166,167) - k d, the sound is high at 05:00:685 (166) - same as 01:59:257 (534,535) -
05:09:435 (217,218,219,220) - kkd d , 05:09:614 (219) - the sound at here is deep and 05:09:792 (220) - is high, would be nice if you change this A snare sound could be heard at 05:09:792 (220) - , that's why I used k for a stricter snare consistency.

Xinchii wrote:

Thanks Genocide ~

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wow I can pass it

Gamu wrote:

Hello.
sorry for the delay ;w;

[ General]

1. Romanised Title: Datte Datte Aa Mujou
   I'm not sure, but this is correct in my opinion. Umm , ok I will try this ~
2. Tags: 內田彩 ⇒ 内田彩 lol , language is so profound XDD
   This is wrong.

[ Insane]

1. I'd like to recommend that you reduce the HP Drain Rate because this song is long. Maybe HP6 is the appropriate setting.
2. 00:16:150 (1) - At the start point, soft-hitfinish is better than soft-hitwhistle. Like this: 00:22:150 (1).
3. 00:37:150 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap(S:C2) and change the volume to 40%~50%. It will make a good sound! fixed ~ but I set on 30% , seems better for me
4. 01:18:721 (5) - Add a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
5. 01:19:792 (1) - Remove a new combo. The reason is the same as above.
6. 01:20:149 (5) - Add a new combo. ^
7. 01:21:399 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
8. 01:29:971 (6) - ^
9. 02:24:435 (5) - ^
10. 02:26:399 (2) - ^
11. 02:45:864 (1) - soft-hitwhistle is missing at the end point.
12. 02:53:007 (1) - Remove a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
13. 02:54:435 (12) - Add a new combo. The reason is the same as above.
14. 02:55:864 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
15. 03:07:292 (5) - Add a finish at the start point.
16. 03:09:971 (1) - ^
17. 03:18:542 (6) - ^
18. 04:38:721 (1) - ^
19. 04:43:007 (1) - ^
20. 04:45:864 (5) - ^
21. 04:47:292 (1) - ^
22. 04:48:721 (5) - ^
23. 04:53:542 (2) - Add a soft-hitwhistle or soft-hitclap at the start point?
24. 05:01:578 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish at the start point.
25. 05:22:114 (3) - Add a soft-hitclap.
26. 05:22:471 (4) - Change to soft-hitclap.
27. 05:22:828 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap.
28. 05:23:007 (2) - Change to soft-hitclap.
29. 05:24:792 (T) - The volume of this green line is too low. At least 30%.
30. 05:25:149 (1) - Change to soft-hitclap.
31. 05:25:328 (2) - Add a soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle.
32. 05:25:685 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap
33. 05:25:864 (2) - Add a soft-hitfinish.
34. 05:26:221 (1) - Change to soft-hitclap.
35. 05:26:399 (2) - Add a soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle.
36. 05:26:935 (1) - ^
37. 05:28:185 (2) - Rhythm suggestion. Remove this circle and move the start point of the spinner to 05:27:024 and move the end point of the spinner to 05:32:292.
    
    image & code

    
    

    120,256,326935,5,6,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,327024,12,0,332292,0:0:0:0:

Many hitsounds are missing, and some new combos are strange.
I want to strongly recommend that you fix it!
Call me back :3

Gamu wrote:

Recheck time.

[ General]

1. Incorrect title again. Datte Datte Aa Mujou
   Please use capital letters.
2. It is necessary to unify the Tags. 内田彩 is correct.
   
   Tags

   - [Nardo's Inner Oni] : ラブライブ lovelive muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 内田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 Nardoxyribonucleic
   
   - [Wakare] : ラブライブ lovelive muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 內田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 Nardoxyribonucleic

.......Great sorry for my broken eyes orz... fixed

1. Remove the osb.file from folder. It is unnecessary.

Ah , I really didn't see .osb here this time lol --->
http://puu.sh/hASGL.png
http://puu.sh/hASHq.jpg

[ Wakare]

1. 00:37:150 (1) - default-clap doesn't fit to the song. Please use the custom sound (S:C1).
2. 01:28:899 (2) - Add a clap.
3. 01:29:257 (3) - Add a whistle.
4. 01:29:614 (4) - Add a clap.
5. 02:26:399 (2) - Remove a finish at the start point in order to keep your hitsound pattern
6. 02:47:828 (5) - Add a whistle at the start point.
7. 03:17:471 (2) - Add a clap.
8. 03:17:828 (3) - Add a whistle.
9. 03:18:185 (4) - Add a clap.
10. 03:44:435 (1) - Add a finish.
11. 03:57:292 (1) - CTRL+G. It will be better than before.
12. 03:58:007 (4) - ^
13. 05:25:864 (2) - Add a clap instead of finish.
14. 05:26:935 (1) - Add a finish instead of clap.

All fixed here ~!

Call me back again.

Konei wrote:

Coming from my queue, everything checks out and the map plays very nicely well done!

Bubbled #2.

CLSW wrote:

Support this because it's lovelive <3
Good luck!