Astom wrote:

Wenaz x3
En rojo tal vez importante, En azul sugerencias

[General]
-Recuerda usar AIMod para evitar errores como el que te menciono en Hard

[Hard]
-00:06:826 (1) Este circle no esta bien puesto en la linea de tiempo (Object ins't snapped). Rayos a duras penas vi eso, Corregido
-00:55:360 (1) Terminalo en 00:55:785 Ehh, parece que el "Ra" en esa parte esta en medio de ambos ticks, asi que da igual en cualquiera que este XD
-01:20:041 (4) Este slider se ve mucho mejor que todos los demas del map, quisa deberias intentar mejorar el aspecto de algunos sliders y hacerlos mas como este Tomare eso en cuenta para futuros beatmaps, es dificil para mi usar Bézier
-Intenta formar algunas curvas con los circles, se ven demaciados "cuadrados" en las formas.
No creo que sea aun lo suficientemente experta para tratar diseños con curvas X_X
-Intenta hacer saltos con los circles, para hacer esto de forma facil agrega una linea de tiempo con velocidad x2 antes de la seccion donde vallan los circles con salto y usa distance snap, automaticamente aumenta la distancia, cuando termines borra la linea de tiempo con velocidad x2, otra cosa importante es que uses esto en un combo nuevo hasta que termine porque sino AIMod te arrojara errores x3Ehh eso no se me habia ocurrido antes, aunque creo que es un poco tarde para cambiarlo

Ia eso en general no veo que este mal pero podria ser mucho mejor =)
Sldos x3 y StaR

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Try Offset: +4ms [6 854] and Resnap all note Done

[Normal]
00:52:812 (8) - remove sound clap True it sounds kind of off there, Done
00:55:365 (1) - replace sound clap with finish Nice suggestion ^^ Done
01:23:450 (1) - silent last spinner It is supposed to have some kind of Fade Out through it, silencing it would contradict the purpose of the fade out

[Hard]
00:18:126 (4) - move this note to 1/2 backward (00:17:913) Done
00:30:892 (4) - ^ (00:30:679) Done
00:42:599 (6) - replace sound clap with finish Personally i think it sounds better with clap there
00:46:003 (3) - ^ This one does sound better with finish
00:47:599 (5) - remove sound finish Agree, Done
00:49:408 (6) - replace sound clap with finish Again i think this sounds better with Clap
00:55:365 (1) - replace sond clap with finish at begin of silder Agree, Done
00:55:360 (1) - end this silder at white tick (00:55:785) Umm i guess the mod above you was right then, Done
01:08:982 (1) - replace sound clap with finish at last silder Actually replaced clap with finish at start of this slider and left clap at the end
01:08:126 (5) - remove sound clap at last silder Removed clap from the end
01:21:743 (5) - remove sound clap at last silder ^
01:22:700 (1) - stat this spinner at white tick and end this spinner as the same and silent last spinner as well Likewise the Fade-Out is supposed to happen instead of just a silent spinner

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
could use with some more whistles before the kiai Will try, but im still not sure where to add them
00:17:917 (5) - I don't really think finishes work on this slider Removed
00:21:109 (5) - add whistle Done
00:31:321 (6) - ^ Done
00:44:300 (3) - add clap to the start Done
00:47:704 (3) - make it a clap? I think it sounds better with the finish
00:52:811 (8) - add whistle Done, i agree
01:08:130 (7) - move left to align with the slider Fixed, thanks for pointing it out, must have forgotten in some resnapping

Hard:
again needs more hitsounds before the kiai Again, im not good with hitsounds but i'll try =P
00:06:849 (1) - isn't snapped I thought i fixed that Oo that (1) has a life of its own DX
00:11:534 (4) - add clap Oh yeah missed that one
00:12:492 (4) - clap doesn't sound good Moved the clap to the end of the slider, hope it's better there
00:31:109 (1) - extend to 00:33:236 Done
00:53:981 (10) - doesn't seem to fit in very well..might want to try mapping it in a different way Remapped that section
01:08:130 (5) - could look neater How about this new design then =)
01:10:683 (2,3,4) - align? Wow i missed that, thanks for pointing it out =)
01:21:747 (5) - make neater? Already did as well =D
01:21:747 (5) - extend 1/2 Done
01:23:023 (6) - add note Done
01:23:023 (1) - start at 01:23:449 like normal Done

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

General:
Consider getting a new MP3, this quality on this one is very poor. You will need a new offset if you do so, and I highly recommend you do. I already got the best i can get, the TV-Size version is like impossible to find X_X
Consider adding me more hitsounds. I'm not good with hitsounds at all X_X

Hard:
00:53:236 (6) - Make this a regular note. Done
00:53:555 (7) - Move this to 00:53:449, and readjust spacing. Done
01:08:130 (5) - End this at 01:08:555. I think this one's fine as it is XD
01:21:534 (5) - End this at 01:22:172. Done

Normal:
Fine but could use a bit more... organization? Ehh what do u mean? X_X


Overall:
Work on your hitsounds a bit and try making some patterns! Good luck.I thought i did make some patterns there DX

YGOkid8 wrote:

Normal:

Nazi Mod~
00:24:300 (3,4,5,6) - Fix them so (3,4) are exactly parallel with (5,6) Fixed, thanks

Hard:

Normal Mod~
01:23:236 (1) - Start spinner on 01:23:449 instead (like Normal) Done

emaal wrote:

~[Normal]~

00:49:406(3): add a finish? Agree, changed clap into a finish



~[Hard]~

00:13:662 (x): What about mapping this so it follows her vocals, like you do in the rest of the song? Moved (3) in the timeline so it matches her vocal
01:08:662 (slider-end): add a clap. Although i was trying to add claps every white tick, this clap here does look good


Almost no problems

H-boy wrote:

Normal

00:40:045(1) - add a whistle Done
00:41:747(1) - ^ ^
00:43:449(1) - add a whistle at the begin Huh begin o.o this isnt a slider, i did add a whistle to the note tho
00:46:853(1) - add a whistleDone
00:48:555(1) - ^ Done
00:50:257(1) - ^ Done

Hard
Good job~ Thanks ^^

Star~

Dusty wrote:

<suggestions disclaimer>

[Normal]
00:16:853 (3) - I usually think making Bezier-curve sliders are better, even though sometimes they're harder to make. Catmull sliders usually look more lumpy to me. When i learn to do bezier sliders better i'll use them more often ^^

Personally, I like a slider like this (or maybe this?) better. Yeah, i should learn to use bezier more often

00:31:534 (7) - I love rainbow sliders. That's just me, though. Done, also how do u upload screenshots like that? o.o they always lay in my screenshot folder

00:33:662 (1,2,3,4) - Put this more to the right, and then 00:36:640 (1,2,3,4,5) more on the left side? That makes the map more balanced, IMO Moved 00:36:640 (1) - but the other one cant without having to mess with distance snapping and remapping that section a bit

00:46:853 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, this is exactly the same as 00:40:045 (1,2,3,1,2,3), so maybe flip it? Good idea, also thought it would be nice to flip horizontally the next segment

[Hard]
00:11:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think these 1/4 notes follow the music well... maybe make them 1/2 streams, or delete the 1/4th notes? 00:11:960 (1,2,3,4) - is following the background sounds, while 5 and 6 are following the lyrics, do u think maybe i should use new combo on 5?

00:43:449 (2) - This has a lot of repeats, I think maybe you should split up the slider into 2 or 3 sliders? Good idea, done

01:03:449 (8,9,10,11) - This stacking confuses me Umm i wasnt expecting that to confuse anyone, the confusing hitcircles were earlier =P well if this is confusing it makes it harder, right?

01:08:130 (5) - End on a white tick Ugh why does everyone think this should end on the white tick when i clearly see the lyrics fade out on the blue tick ;_; Guess i'll fix it then
01:08:981 (1) - Maybe make this repeat once and delete (2)? Yeah also had to remap that next part a bit

Dusty wrote:

To upload screenshots you have to hold the "Shift" key down before/when you press F11

(don't kudosu)

YGOkid8 wrote:

Dusty wrote:

To upload screenshots you have to hold the "Shift" key down before/when you press F11

(don't kudosu)

uh, it's F12, not F11

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Offset is a bit early. Try 6,870 and resnap on both diffs. Done

[Normal]
00:16:215 (1,2,3) - Unpredictable triplet pattern. Try to avoid using offbeats (blue ticks) in the easiest difficulty. I suggest making 1,2,3 into a repeating slider, and then start the longer one that you had on 00:17:066 instead. I... really dont know what to say, i'm crying right now seeing this, basically either make an Easy diff that i sux at doing or screw the pattern i had there? ;_; Edit: Look below
00:29:832 (2,3,4) - Repeating slider please. ^
00:55:364 (1) - Rule of thumb: Kiai almost always starts on the beginning of a measure; This applies here. It would look much better starting on 00:56:215 instead of the lead-in. Almost always huh?, plus isnt it starting at the beginning of the chorus X_X need more feedback on this
00:57:066 (4,5,6) - repeating slider Dang this again? Note below
01:00:470 (7,8,9) - ^ ^ ^
01:10:683 (4,5) - Or you could do something like this for the various triplet patterns throughout the song (or a slider for the first two beats and a circle for the third works too) This does sound WAAAY better to me than repeating sliders
01:14:087 (7,8,9) - fix Fixed
01:23:449 (1) - Having four inherited sections on this sounds weird. Just silence it (or keep the volume down) from the beginning instead of randomly switching at the end (multiple times). Well James was the one who suggested the Fade out, but since ppl dont seem to like it i'll just completely silence it instead
*This difficulty is much too hard to be the easiest one. The streams of 1/2 beats and semi-large distance spacing is too difficult. Since there are only two diffs in this mapset to begin with, could you make an easier diff (or get a guest one)? I'd hate to see normal knocked down in difficulty since there isn't a big spread of difficulties to begin with... I've seen a newbie clear this song although i do think it is kind of hard, and i'm not good at making Easy Diffs, everytime i try making an Easy diff, ppl say "This looks like Normal"

[Hard]
*Same kiai/spinner comments as Normal
00:11:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What? NO. This is completely stupid and unpredictable spacing. Change it. I knew someone would complain about this after changing the timing on those beats, and if i DS those it just looks plain ugly X_X so i'll need more feedback on this
01:03:449 (8,9,10) - Don't do things like this. The (9) is too hard to read because there's only 1/4 spacing in time between 8 and 9, but 1/2 between 9 and 10. Umm, the lyrics? o.o *sigh* fine i guess i'll change it, since i hope to get this ranked someday
01:17:066 (7,8,9) - ^ ^
01:21:747 (6) - o_o you really need to work on making sliders... (many others too; they only need three/four anchors at most) Oh, dont worry about that im learning to make better sliders
*I hate to say it, but this difficulty just felt very sloppy to me. The beginning started as just simple 1/1 beats with box/square spacing and no patterns at all. Then, I see 1/2 beats instead of nice triplet ones that were in Normal. I'd really like to see more patterns used and more mapping to the lyrics (like Normal) than just simple 1/1 or 1/2 beats. :V Well thanks for your input, although i really dont know what to say to it

Good luck!

Sakura301 wrote:

I... really dont know what to say, i'm crying right now seeing this, basically either make an Easy diff that i sux at doing or screw the pattern i had there? ;_;

Sakura301 wrote:

I've seen a newbie clear this song although i do think it is kind of hard, and i'm not good at making Easy Diffs, everytime i try making an Easy diff, ppl say "This looks like Normal"

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Offset is a bit early. Try 6,870 and resnap on both diffs. Done

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
00:06:879~00:13:262:How about use normal hitsounds? Volume 50%~60%.
00:40:922~00:54:326:Also use normal hitsounds will be better. Will have to think about this, my creativity is blocked right now and i cant really think correctly and compare X_X

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Offset is a bit early. Try 6,870 and resnap on both diffs. Done

Your offset is 6880 now, not 6870. I agree to Derekku Chan. You should -10~15ms. Unless u downloaded the map earlier than derekku chan, there is something weird with my computer saving changes OR uploading maps, sometimes stuff i do seems to get lost like some hitsounds on my guest diff in another song, anyways, it is supposed to be 6,870 already (it was when i just opened my map, and no i didnt have "Update availaible")

-Normal-
00:30:486 (3) - Spacing is wrong. Fixed... i hope
00:55:360 - move this green line to 00:55:390 My bad... that must have been a very old error X_X since i never bothered changing that
01:23:420 - remove this green line. So Kiai time lasts through that too?, ugh X_X cant think so i guess i'll do so, err nvm i think i see what u mean now
-Hard- Oh i see, i forgot to adjust the timing on Hard, but not on Normal
00:06:853 (1) - unsnap note Dont u mean snap? X_X fixed i think
01:17:092 (7) - end this slider at 01:17:517Umm i dont see any 517 do u mean here? X_X http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5833
00:55:360 - move this green line to 00:55:390

1. You need an easier difficulty because [Normal] is more like [Hard]

1. Fix timing,
2. I hope you used 0,8 DS here because I will post spacing fixes up to it,
3. 00:16:869 (2) - Spacing (1 grid up),
4. 00:27:933 (4,5) - Maybe move 1 grid to the left?
5. 00:31:337 (5,6) - Spacing (1 grid left),
6. 00:37:508 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing (1 grid down),
7. 00:44:316 (3,4) - Move 1 grid up?
8. 00:55:805 (2) - Fix spacing,
9. 00:56:657 (3,4,5,6) - If ^'d, then move 1 grid down,
10. 01:00:486 (7,8,9) - Spacing (1 grid left),
11. 01:08:146 (7) - Fix spacing,
12. 01:14:103 (7,8,9) - Fix spacing on every note (!),
13. You need an easier difficulty.

1. Fix timing,
2. 00:12:827 (5,6) - I don't like 1/4 here, two 1/1 beats would sound better,
3. 00:21:763 (6) - Ugly, move 1 grid up,
4. 00:24:742 (6) - Ugly slider,
5. 00:31:337 (1) - 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2,
6. 00:46:018 (5) - 1 grid down looks better,
7. 01:14:103 (7,8,9,10) - Move 1 grid to the right,
8. 01:17:720 (8) - Make it straight?
9. It looks much better than [Normal].

Ephemeral wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?dnjmkyqtz2m

New mp3 is v1 VBR with 128 min 192 max, if anybody cares

BPM: 140
Offset: 465 (+/- 10ms) But with this offset everything ends in a blue tick after accomodating X_X Nvm it was just that i forgot to adjust the BPM too

You'll basically need to resequence the entire mapset to accommodate the new mp3. Timing sections and notes will all be half a stanza or more out of alignment using the new mp3. I'm right now on that, but that offset... is what i feel is kind of off X_X

The new mp3 itself isn't particularly good, but it'll just have to do.

Garven wrote:

As per your request in #mod, a glance at [Hard] to try and find anomolies...

00:30:679 This isn't following the vocal, though I'm not sure if it was intentionally off. It does follow the lyric Oo listen closely
00:53:393 [3, 4] Weird spacing here Fixed
00:58:322 [5] Not sure if this slider was intentionally not following the lyrics or not. Place beats on 00:58:215, 00:58:536, then 00:58:750 if you're wanting to change that. 00:58:215 (5) is a sustained vocal note, hence the slider
01:08:929 [5] Move this slider to the white tick at 01:09:036 Fixed
01:09:893 [1] Check the anchor on this slider - move it one grid point further out. It seems to have shrunk or something and messed up the rhythm. Fixed

Sakura301 wrote:

Garven wrote:

As per your request in #mod, a glance at [Hard] to try and find anomolies...

00:30:679 This isn't following the vocal, though I'm not sure if it was intentionally off. It does follow the lyric Oo listen closely

Actually, the [3] slider is on the wrong beat if you want to follow the lyrics - you need to start it on 00:30:786 (the blue tick) and shorten the slider so it ends on the same beat that it originally did.

Aditionally with the IRC modding, thanks for ur input +kudos