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Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!
Kantan00:16:822 (14) -
d, keep it consistent with the beginning, should be the same :3
fixed00:44:583 (54) - replace slider for maybe this :
http://puu.sh/dFWBP.jpg ? 13 notes slider, would be easy without
, just a suggestion haha xD
fixed01:01:598 (74) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want for voice
keep01:05:181 (80) -
d ?
fixed01:12:792 (90) - delete, to keep the rhythm consistent from 01:09:658
fixed
Hanjamon's Futsuu
00:37:867 (68,69,70) - maybe not a triple here? since your triple are mostly to match voice, and this one there no voice at 00:38:315 , so 00:38:315 (70) feel awkward to play xD, so maybe delete 00:38:091 (69) ?
00:57:792 (1) - delete? since didn't add anything here 00:56:001 , and to make it consistent
01:01:598 (2) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want voice
Muzukashii00:09:434 (4) -
d since the kat sound here 00:09:546 , so feel weird playing it xD
00:18:278 (20) - delete no sound or move it here 00:18:501
00:32:158 (77) - delete no drum sound
00:35:964 (94) - delete no sound, and voice kinda cut before :3
00:40:778 (114,115) - hmm ctrl+g? feel like these 2 should be the same 00:40:554 (113,114)
00:43:240 (123) -
d00:44:583 (128) - feel like slider ruining the real drum sound for a muzukashii, since I don't hear stream drum here, will be nice matching drum for this part since taiko \o/!!
okay.add notes00:49:285 (10,11) - ctrl+g
00:50:292 (13) -
k :3
00:53:875 (24) -
k01:03:166 (54,55,56) -
ddd the kat drum noise could be here 01:03:501 , so
ddd should be fine + is muzukashii pattern
01:09:210 (78,79,80,81,82,83) - how about this pattern for drum and voice
http://puu.sh/dG3OT.jpg Good~.fixed01:11:449 (86) -
d01:14:807 (102) -
K feel like should be stronger
01:15:927 (104,105) - ctrl+g
01:20:181 (119) -
k01:23:986 (133,134) - hmm how about delete 134 and add finish to 133
Almost fixed Oni00:11:560 (7) - move it here 00:11:337 , feel kat drum
00:15:927 (10,11,12,13) - this part feel weird, since the red tick sound more important then the blue tick sound, so it should be map >,<
okay.try other pattern00:16:710 - good drum noise here
00:17:046 - ^
00:23:091 (48,49,50,51,52) - feel like this part doesn't match the drum sound >,< like 00:23:315 (50) should be same as 00:23:091 (48) and since voice start at 52 xD
okay.change pattern00:31:486 (92) - add
d? I hear drum sound~
00:32:494 (99) -
k00:32:942 (102) -
k00:44:583 (164) - too easy on oni, how about this :
http://puu.sh/dG52w.jpg , I just followed the drum sound, nothing special from me lol
oh..Nice idea.fixed00:47:046 + 00:47:158 (4,5) -
ddk?
00:47:718 (7,8,9) -
ddk or
kkd, can hear some alternance
00:48:166 (10) - finish
00:54:434 (31) - delete no sound, feel awkward to play xD
01:14:807 (133) -
K, same reason as muzukashii
Almost fixed Nardo's Oni
00:24:098 - add d, because hear drum noise + for voice too
00:41:785 (195) - k like you did here 00:38:203
00:42:569 (199,200,201) - ddk? owo
01:20:628 - you usually add note when there is sound and voice, and there is one without note here xD