1. Hanjamon's Futsuu (2.22 stars, 179 notes)
2. Kantan (1.2 stars, 100 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.56 stars, 270 notes)
4. Nardo's Oni (3.53 stars, 428 notes)
5. Oni (3.12 stars, 403 notes)

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From in-game PM

General: the TAG 'non non biyori' will be devided by 3 parts. How about just: 'nonnonbiyori'? Then it won't be devided. non non biyori=other ranked map.so keep
Romanized title: Nanairo Biyori(TV Ver.) need a space before the '(' okay.add space.
And you may use 'TV Size' instead of 'TV Ver.'? keep

Kantan

00:34:732 (39) - k? fixed
00:36:524 (42) - how about 00:36:972 fixed
00:37:419 (43) - finish keep
00:48:166 (56) - finish fixed
00:53:091 - d and 00:54:210 - d fixed
00:55:330 (65) - finish fixed
00:56:001 - d fixed
00:57:121 (68) - finish fixed
00:57:792 - k fixed
01:00:703 (71) - finish fixed

guest futsuu

00:21:300 (27,28) - move to 00:21:076
and 00:22:195 (30) - move to 00:21:972
and add k at 00:22:643
00:24:882 (37,38) - move to 00:24:658 and change 38 to k
00:25:778 (40) - move to 00:25:554
00:26:225 - k
00:26:673 - 00:31:598 original version: 'd kdd k ddk d k ddk d '
recommend version: 'dkd dk d dk d k d kd dk'
00:35:852 (65) - move to 00:36:300
00:36:524 (67) - delete and add k at 00:36:972
00:37:419 - 00:40:554 original version: 'd kkd k ddk d'
recommend version: 'd kd k kd dk k'
00:43:240 (83) - move to 00:43:464
.... and recommend kiai time: start from 01:02:494.
'D kkd k ddkd dk d kdd k dkkd dk d kd kkdd kd k ddk d kk k d k K dk dkk dkd dk d kkd kd dkd k.....'
just take the part (or the way) you want to change.

Muzukashii

00:13:016 (4,5) - ctrl + g fixed
00:22:867 (40) - delete? I think the simple 'dk' is very good here. And change ddd k to d ddk? fixed
00:26:225 (54) - k and move00:26:449 (55) - to 00:27:345 and change it to d fixed
00:30:479 (73) - k keep
00:33:389 (86) - k fixed
00:37:195 (101) - delete fixed
and i love those 1/3

oni

00:33:389 (104) - k keep
00:34:509 (109) - k fixed
01:04:733 (78,79,80,81,82) - how about kd kddk? keep
01:05:292 (81,82) - delete keep
01:19:620 (150,151) - delete keep

guest oni

00:19:173 (67) - may delete
00:26:449 (106,107) - delete to shorten the stream.
00:37:195 (165,166) - ^

Enjoy

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From in-game PM

General: the TAG 'non non biyori' will be devided by 3 parts. How about just: 'nonnonbiyori'? Then it won't be devided.
Romanized title: Nanairo Biyori(TV Ver.) need a space before the '('
And you may use 'TV Size' instead of 'TV Ver.'?

guest oni

00:19:173 (67) - may delete I followed the snare sound there.
00:26:449 (106,107) - delete to shorten the stream. Retained for mapping the vocal.
00:37:195 (165,166) - ^ ^

Enjoy

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the Taiko mod you requested via in-game PM!

[Kantan]

1. 00:23:539 (23) - delete? to be consistent with the previous pattern fixed
2. 00:28:912 - add a note here? for rhythm consistency fixed
3. 00:43:240 - ^ fixed
4. 00:57:121 (67) - remove finisher here? I don't think it's needed fixed
5. 00:58:912 (69) - change to d? to vary a bit fixed
6. 00:59:807 (70) - move to 00:59:583 - ? it sounds weird as it is now fixed.but...hard=V=?
7. 01:11:449 (86) - k? sounds better imo fixed
8. 01:23:539 (105) - delete? I don't think it's really needed fixed
9. 01:27:121 (110) - move to 01:26:897 - ? sounds better like this imo keep

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

The diff overall sounds good, but I think you should try to remove some 1/2s? (yes I'm lazy to do a full mod on this diff)

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:979 (6) - move to 00:07:755 - ? the drum sound is here fixed
2. 00:11:561 (6) - move to 00:11:337 - ? same reason as above fixed
3. 00:14:919 - add a d here? fixed
4. 00:15:927 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - this stream is a bit long, cut it at 00:17:494 (15) - ? fixed
5. 00:18:949 (24) - ddk is a bit hard imo, delete? fixed
6. 00:23:203 (41) - ^
7. 00:23:315 (42) - change to d? for consistency fixed
8. 00:28:016 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - this is a bit long, cut this somewhere (I can't give you any suggestions for this, sorry ) keep
9. 00:37:531 (101) - delete? ddk is a bit hard imo keep
10. 00:43:464 (124) - delete? to cut the stream fixed
11. 00:51:748 (18,19,20,21,22) - change to this? fixed
12. 00:57:121 (36) - remove finisher? I don't think it's needed fixed
13. 01:13:912 (97) - delete? to cut the stream keep

[Oni]

1. 00:26:225 (63,64) - Ctrl+G? fixed

[Nardo's Oni]

Looks clean to me, have a star!

That's all, good luck for rank!

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

From in-game PM

General: the TAG 'non non biyori' will be devided by 3 parts. How about just: 'nonnonbiyori'? Then it won't be devided.
Romanized title: Nanairo Biyori(TV Ver.) need a space before the '('
And you may use 'TV Size' instead of 'TV Ver.'?

guest futsuu

00:21:300 (27,28) - move to 00:21:076
and 00:22:195 (30) - move to 00:21:972
and add k at 00:22:643
00:24:882 (37,38) - move to 00:24:658 and change 38 to k
00:25:778 (40) - move to 00:25:554
00:26:225 - k
00:26:673 - 00:31:598 original version: 'd kdd k ddk d k ddk d '
recommend version: 'dkd dk d dk d k d kd dk'
00:35:852 (65) - move to 00:36:300
00:36:524 (67) - delete and add k at 00:36:972
00:37:419 - 00:40:554 original version: 'd kkd k ddk d'
recommend version: 'd kd k kd dk k'
00:43:240 (83) - move to 00:43:464
.... and recommend kiai time: start from 01:02:494.
'D kkd k ddkd dk d kdd k dkkd dk d kd kkdd kd k ddk d kk k d k K dk dkk dkd dk d kkd kd dkd k.....'
just take the part (or the way) you want to change.

Enjoy

Sorry but no changes, all of these suggestions broke the consistency of the diff (and yes, i checked all), about the last part i tried to make changes but is too hard if i change the actual patterns :c

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the Taiko mod you requested via in-game PM!

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

The diff overall sounds good, but I think you should try to remove some 1/2s? (yes I'm lazy to do a full mod on this diff) nah, i think is okay, if someone more suggest i'll do

That's all, good luck for rank!

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the Taiko mod you requested via in-game PM!

[Nardo's Oni]

Looks clean to me, have a star!

That's all, good luck for rank!

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~

[Nardo's Oni]
01:11:673 (336) - delete? (breaktime, same as 01:09:210 (325,326,327) pattern) Retained for a better impact. If this is implemented, the length of the 1/2 + 1/4 stream would be the same as 01:02:942 and 01:06:524 -

good luck!

1. Seems fine

1. 00:20:181 k would emphasize better the following d
2. 00:27:345 ^

1. Fine too

1. 00:15:479 k for consistency ( 00:06:524 - 00:08:315 - 00:10:106 - 00:11:897 - 00:13:688 - all k )

1. 00:26:449 and 00:26:561 remove for break , or remove 00:26:785 only

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~

[Kantan, Hanjamon's Futsuu]
good!

[Muzukashii]
00:37:419 (99,101) - Ctrl+G, and 00:37:531 (100) - move to 00:37:755? fixed
00:39:546 - add d, and 00:39:658 (110,111) - Ctrl+G? (Because most of other 1/4 pattern is ddd) fixed
00:54:882 (28,29) - Ctrl+G? fixed
01:00:255 (46,47) - ^ fixed

[Oni]
00:15:367 (9) - add d? keep

[Nardo's Oni]
01:11:673 (336) - delete? (breaktime, same as 01:09:210 (325,326,327) pattern)

good luck!

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

a short mod ;w;


[ Kantan]

1. Seems fine

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:20:181 k would emphasize better the following d
2. 00:27:345 ^

[ Muzukashii]

1. Fine too

[ Oni]

1. 00:15:479 k for consistency ( 00:06:524 - 00:08:315 - 00:10:106 - 00:11:897 - 00:13:688 - all k ) fixed

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:26:449 and 00:26:561 remove for break , or remove 00:26:785 only

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

a short mod ;w;

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:26:449 and 00:26:561 remove for break , or remove 00:26:785 only Remain unchanged to map the vocal there.

Julie wrote:

My noob mod

General
Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!

Nardo's Oni
00:24:098 - add d, because hear drum noise + for voice too Retained so that the pattern constellation would be similar to 00:20:516 - which is more intuitive to play.
00:41:785 (195) - k like you did here 00:38:203 ddk here could emphasize the relatively high-pitched vocal more comparing 00:40:778 (189,190,191,194,195,196,199,200,201) -
00:42:569 (199,200,201) - ddk? owo dkd could fit the vocal and guitar in a way better.
01:20:628 - you usually add note when there is sound and voice, and there is one without note here xD I prefer keeping a break here since the vocal is just the stretch of "i" sound which is not prominent. The case is similar to 01:06:300 -

GL Charlotte! We need moar nyan pasu~! <3

Julie wrote:

My noob mod

General
Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!

Kantan
00:16:822 (14) - d, keep it consistent with the beginning, should be the same :3 fixed
00:44:583 (54) - replace slider for maybe this : http://puu.sh/dFWBP.jpg ? 13 notes slider, would be easy without , just a suggestion haha xD fixed
01:01:598 (74) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want for voice keep
01:05:181 (80) - d ? fixed
01:12:792 (90) - delete, to keep the rhythm consistent from 01:09:658 fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu
00:37:867 (68,69,70) - maybe not a triple here? since your triple are mostly to match voice, and this one there no voice at 00:38:315 , so 00:38:315 (70) feel awkward to play xD, so maybe delete 00:38:091 (69) ?
00:57:792 (1) - delete? since didn't add anything here 00:56:001 , and to make it consistent
01:01:598 (2) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want voice

Muzukashii
00:09:434 (4) - d since the kat sound here 00:09:546 , so feel weird playing it xD
00:18:278 (20) - delete no sound or move it here 00:18:501
00:32:158 (77) - delete no drum sound
00:35:964 (94) - delete no sound, and voice kinda cut before :3
00:40:778 (114,115) - hmm ctrl+g? feel like these 2 should be the same 00:40:554 (113,114)
00:43:240 (123) - d
00:44:583 (128) - feel like slider ruining the real drum sound for a muzukashii, since I don't hear stream drum here, will be nice matching drum for this part since taiko \o/!! okay.add notes
00:49:285 (10,11) - ctrl+g
00:50:292 (13) - k :3
00:53:875 (24) - k
01:03:166 (54,55,56) - ddd the kat drum noise could be here 01:03:501 , so ddd should be fine + is muzukashii pattern
01:09:210 (78,79,80,81,82,83) - how about this pattern for drum and voice http://puu.sh/dG3OT.jpg Good~.fixed
01:11:449 (86) - d
01:14:807 (102) - K feel like should be stronger
01:15:927 (104,105) - ctrl+g
01:20:181 (119) - k
01:23:986 (133,134) - hmm how about delete 134 and add finish to 133

Almost fixed

Oni
00:11:560 (7) - move it here 00:11:337 , feel kat drum
00:15:927 (10,11,12,13) - this part feel weird, since the red tick sound more important then the blue tick sound, so it should be map >,< okay.try other pattern
00:16:710 - good drum noise here
00:17:046 - ^
00:23:091 (48,49,50,51,52) - feel like this part doesn't match the drum sound >,< like 00:23:315 (50) should be same as 00:23:091 (48) and since voice start at 52 xD okay.change pattern
00:31:486 (92) - add d? I hear drum sound~
00:32:494 (99) - k
00:32:942 (102) - k
00:44:583 (164) - too easy on oni, how about this : http://puu.sh/dG52w.jpg , I just followed the drum sound, nothing special from me lol oh..Nice idea.fixed
00:47:046 + 00:47:158 (4,5) - ddk?
00:47:718 (7,8,9) - ddk or kkd, can hear some alternance
00:48:166 (10) - finish
00:54:434 (31) - delete no sound, feel awkward to play xD
01:14:807 (133) - K, same reason as muzukashii

Almost fixed

Nardo's Oni
00:24:098 - add d, because hear drum noise + for voice too
00:41:785 (195) - k like you did here 00:38:203
00:42:569 (199,200,201) - ddk? owo
01:20:628 - you usually add note when there is sound and voice, and there is one without note here xD

GL Charlotte! We need moar nyan pasu~! <3

mliencheng wrote:

mod from mod queue request

a short mod ;w;

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:20:181 k would emphasize better the following d
2. 00:27:345 ^
   All changed~

Julie wrote:

My noob mod

General
Woahh nice mapset + GDer and GDer map!

Hanjamon's Futsuu
00:37:867 (68,69,70) - maybe not a triple here? since your triple are mostly to match voice, and this one there no voice at 00:38:315 , so 00:38:315 (70) feel awkward to play xD, so maybe delete 00:38:091 (69) ? done and changed a previous similar pattern too
00:57:792 (1) - delete? since didn't add anything here 00:56:001 , and to make it consistent consistency with 00:52:419 (98) -
01:01:598 (2) - hmm delete? no really important sound except if you really want voice moved to 01:02:046 -

GL Charlotte! We need moar nyan pasu~! <3

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, Mod request from my modding queue...

[Nardo's Oni]
Ok, this are going to be hard to mod, but... im going to try lol

00:26:673 (109,111) - Ctrl +G? Is better imo d k could maintain snare consistency there.
01:27:009 (425,426) - Ctrl + G to follow the voice It's a good idea, but dkddkkd could result in a better flow at the end of the song.

Good look, take my star

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, Mod request from my modding queue...

[Kantan]
00:33:389 (37) - Delete it and make 00:32:942 (36) - D to follow the sound fixed
01:15:031 (93) - Move to 01:14:583 - with it you are going to start this partern 01:15:479 (94,95,96,97) - when the vocal start fixed
01:25:778 (110,111,112) - Try something like this: Mouse at 01:26:449 -
fixed

[Futsuu]
OD: -1
00:18:613 (20) - Seguro que no prefieres agregar un K?, quedaría mejor siguiendo la intensidad del sonido
00:26:449 - Podrías agregar un k para empezar junto con la voz, igual podrías hacer eso y después hacer ctrl + g en 00:26:449 (39,40) -
00:37:195 - Lo mismo que lo anterior, pero aquí si queda mejor kd, pero es solo mi opinión....
00:49:957 - 00:51:300 - Se ve muy vació, podrías probar agregando un k aquí 00:50:404 -
01:04:733 (8) - Considera hacerlo d para que quede con el patrón anterior

[Muzukashii]
00:43:464 - Add k fixed
01:24:658 (268) - Make it k and delete this: 01:24:546 (267) - Is more playable keep
01:26:225 (274,275) - ctrl + g follow more the vocal fixed

[Oni]
00:20:404 (38) - k? to follow more the voice fixed
00:23:091 (49,50,51,52,53) - Try something like this: kkddk fixed
00:38:427 (131) - k is more playable fixed
01:19:621 (327) - Delete it _(:3JL keep
01:26:225 (359,360) - Ctrl + G to follow more the voice fixed

[Nardo's Oni]
Ok, this are going to be hard to mod, but... im going to try lol

00:26:673 (109,111) - Ctrl +G? Is better imo
01:27:009 (425,426) - Ctrl + G to follow the voice

Good look, take my star

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hi o/, Mod request from my modding queue...

[Futsuu]
OD: -1 nope, me gusta conservar OD 4 en la Futsuu
00:18:613 (20) - Seguro que no prefieres agregar un K?, quedaría mejor siguiendo la intensidad del sonido pensaba no añadirlo ya que puede ser algo dificil, pero bueno, añadido
00:26:449 - Podrías agregar un k para empezar junto con la voz, igual podrías hacer eso y después hacer ctrl + g en 00:26:449 (39,40) - se que queda bien, de hecho lo habria hecho si no fuera por quise hacer un break
00:37:195 - Lo mismo que lo anterior, pero aquí si queda mejor kd, pero es solo mi opinión.... ^
00:49:957 - 00:51:300 - Se ve muy vació, podrías probar agregando un k aquí 00:50:404 - breaks xD
01:04:733 (8) - Considera hacerlo d para que quede con el patrón anterior es solo el principio del kiai, quiero intentar evitar subir mas la dificultad

Good look, take my star

1. Nothing

1. 01:20:404 (102,103) - How about swap these for consistency?

1. 00:15:927 (16) - k instead of d?
2. 00:46:375 (88) - I think it would be not bad to change to match the melody. How about change to this?

1. 00:18:166 (19) - k? It would be sounds better imo.
   00:46:375 (133) - How about remove this to follow melody?
   00:47:046 - Add d? It sounds empty.
   00:47:270 (136,137,138) - Try to ddd k. It would be better imo.
   00:54:434 (158) - It is a little weird. Remove this.
   00:59:919 (177) - Certainly, hear the drum sound at this point. but It would be better to move to 01:00:031 for consistency imo.

Underflow wrote:

via in-game pm

[General]

1. Nothing

[Kantan]

1. 01:20:404 (102,103) - How about swap these for consistency? fixed

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:15:927 (16) - k instead of d?
2. 00:46:375 (88) - I think it would be not bad to change to match the melody. How about change to this?

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:18:166 (19) - k? It would be sounds better imo. fixed
   00:46:375 (133) - How about remove this to follow melody? fixed
   00:47:046 - Add d? It sounds empty. fixed
   00:47:270 (136,137,138) - Try to ddd k. It would be better imo. fixed
   00:54:434 (158) - It is a little weird. Remove this. keep
   00:59:919 (177) - Certainly, hear the drum sound at this point. but It would be better to move to 01:00:031 for consistency imo. I try 01:00:028 - add d.

あまり役に立たなくてすみません…

Underflow wrote:

via in-game pm

[General]

1. Nothing

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:15:927 (16) - k instead of d? sounds fine with d
2. 00:46:375 (88) - I think it would be not bad to change to match the melody. How about change to this? this sounds weird for me and breaks my consistency..

あまり役に立たなくてすみません…

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:19:173 (67,68) - ctrl+g I followed the snare sound there.

Good luck

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Kantan]

1. 00:28:464 (29) - k keep
2. 01:10:554 (88,89) - ctrl+g keep
3. 01:13:240 (91) - k fixed

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:14:136 (13,14) - ctrl+g
2. 01:09:210 (18) - k
3. 01:10:554 (21) - d
4. 01:11:225 (23) - k
5. 01:16:822 (35) - D and 01:17:270 (36) - k

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:24:658 (46,47) - ctrl+g fixed
2. 00:29:583 (66) - Delete for some break That's right...but,now keep
3. 00:30:703 (71,72) - ctrl+g keep
4. 00:47:718 (137) - k keep

[ Oni]

1. 00:13:016 (5) - d and 00:13:241 (6,7,8,9,10) - change to kdddk or kkddk change d=keep,change to kkddk is good.
2. 00:16:039 (11) - move to 00:16:151 and 00:16:710 (15) - k keep
3. 00:30:703 (89,91) - k keep

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:19:173 (67,68) - ctrl+g

Good luck

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod req by forums pm :3

kantan

good~

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:23:763 - add d?
00:30:479 (50) - move 00:30:031 - ?
00:38:091 - add d?
01:10:554 (21) - move 01:10:330 - ?
01:15:927 - add d?

Muzukashii

00:30:703 (72) - k? fixed
00:38:539 (102) - ^ keep
00:47:046 (135) - remove? keep

Oni

00:11:337 (6) - move 00:11:561 - ? keep
00:13:241 (6) - d? fixed
00:17:718 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - I think this is more suitable fixed
00:30:703 (91) - k? fixed

Nardo's Oni

not bad :3

Good Luck :3

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

1. 00:14:136 (13,14) - ctrl+g changed
2. 01:09:210 (18) - k changed
3. 01:10:554 (21) - d no change here, maybe a bit hard k d k d kd
4. 01:11:225 (23) - k nah, is okay for me and fits well with kd too
5. 01:16:822 (35) - D and 01:17:270 (36) - k sounds good with the actual pattern

Good luck

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod req by forums pm :3

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:23:763 - add d? no, i want more easier this
00:30:479 (50) - move 00:30:031 - ? is okay with the actual pattern
00:38:091 - add d? same as before, more easier
01:10:554 (21) - move 01:10:330 - ? breaks my consistency.. also, too many doublets
01:15:927 - add d? break

Good Luck :3 No changes here, sorry :c

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d nop, rhythm change

00:15:031 (15) - d ^

00:16:822 (17) - k changed, fits good with the next pattern

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd is okay for me with kk, and more easier

good luck

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Kantan]

00:22:195 (21) - d keep

00:33:837 (37) - K keep

00:42:792 (50,51,52) - k keep

01:01:598 (75) - k fixed

01:24:882 (108) - k keep

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d

00:15:031 (15) - d

00:16:822 (17) - k

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd

[Muzukashii]

00:23:763 (43) - d fixed

00:24:434 (45,46,47,1,2,3) - kddkkd changed kdkkdd

00:47:494 (90) - k fixed

[Oni]

00:29:360 (81,82,83,84,85) - dkddk changed dkkdd

01:17:494 (313,314,315,316,317) - ddkdk keep

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu

good luck

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352 The current pattern could follow both the snare at 00:26:225 (106) - and the constant vocal pitch at 00:26:449 (107,108,109) - nicely imo.
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu 可以啊~

good luck

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~

Kantan

00:26:673 (27,28) - 00:26:673 (27) is the lowest point in pitch here and 00:27:569 (28) the highest in the vocals, I think it should be d k instead of k d　fixed
01:14:583 (93) - you used some 1/2 or 1.5 beats before here, I think it will still be simple enough. I don't think this note fits well to the music, it feels out of place, this note would be better if shifted to 01:14:807 with the cymbals there in the music, this current note is just being too awkward right nowfixed
01:23:986 (107) - finish? fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here
00:56:001 - ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song

Muzukashii

00:26:897 (54) - change to d fixed
00:45:031 (128) - maybe change to k, goes along with the guitar fixed

Oni

00:42:792 (153,154,155,156,157) - kdkkd instead of kddkk, then change 00:43:464 (158) to k fixed
01:06:748 (265) - change to k fixed
01:06:972 (266) - change to d, because the vocal pitch here slurs a bit, it goes up and then down again fixed
01:10:106 (282) - change to k fixed

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo


Good Luck

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo ddd would be better since the vocal pitch is constant. Also, d k at 00:30:479 (131,132) - could fit the snare there.

Good Luck

peggaso wrote:

Hi, mod request via mp

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good Nice to hear that~

peggaso wrote:

Hi, mod request via mp

[Kantan]
00:54:210 (66) - Move to 00:53:986 - to make it more playable keep
00:54:882 - Add k to map this part hmm...keep now
01:23:986 (108) - Make it k keep

[Futsuu]
Lo veo bien

[Muzukashii]
00:19:509 (25) - Not necessary keep
00:23:203 (40) - ^ ^
00:23:986 (43) - Change to k fixed

[Oni]
00:07:979 (7) - k keep

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Kantan

00:21:300 (20) - d? fixed
00:28:464 (29,30,31) - ctrl+g? changed ddk
01:16:822 (97) - K? for pitch keep
01:18:613 (99) - k? same reason fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better.
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it.
01:23:763 (50) - add d?
01:23:986 (51) - k or K?

Muzukashi

00:55:330 (162) - why do you put finisher here? suggest remove. fixed
01:05:404 (196) - d? fixed
01:14:248 (232) - suggest move to 01:14:024 (231) - because it plays better there. keep

Oni

00:13:241 (6,7,8,9,10) - How about http://puu.sh/dMfAE/9b7a9bda51.jpg? keep
00:21:412 (41) - k? for vocal fixed
00:35:964 (118) - delete? fixed
00:36:300 (119) - k? for vocal keep
00:37:419 (123,124,125,126,127) - ddddk? keep

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~


Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here the diff need breaks :c
00:56:001 - ^ ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus i'll think about this, is not a bad idea
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting i don't want to break the consistency >.<
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song done, sounds good :3


Good Luck

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better. is okay with the actual pattern, no change for now
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it. listen carefully
01:23:763 (50) - add d? sounds weird...
01:23:986 (51) - k or K? is D now

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
From PM

Kantan

01:14:807 (93) - k? change to K
01:15:479 (94,95,96) - d k k keep

Hanjamon's Futsuu

Fine

Muzukashii

00:47:270 (136,137,138) - k d k change to k d d
01:05:852 (198) - k? fixed
01:15:479 (235,236,237) - d k k keep
01:16:822 (238) - K? fixed
01:26:225 (275,276,277,278) - d d k k keep

Oni

00:33:501にkを追加すると、いかがでしょうか keep
01:08:763と01:10:554にdkdがあればいいと思います.けどプレイヤーに休む時間がないですね..... keep
01:15:479 (308,309,310) - d k k keep
01:26:225 (359,360,361,362) - d d k k keep

Nardo's Oni

01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300?
01:20:404 (387) - ^

ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね! ありがとう=3=/

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
From PM

Nardo's Oni

01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300? I followed the drum kick there.
01:20:404 (387) - ^ ^

ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね!

ts8zs wrote:

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk 00:19:285 (68) - does not have the snare sound that 00:19:061 (66,67) - possess.
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd fixed
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 - I prefer keeping the current pattern since it does not sound bad.
01:23:427 - del I think a 7-plet could result in a better impact in the 2nd part of the kiai.
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D k d K would be better since the vocal at 01:23:986 (408) - is really high-pitched.

ts8zs wrote:

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 -
01:23:427 - del
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D
[Oni]
00:05:852 (5) - del or del 6 keep
00:09:434 (5) - del or del 6 ^
00:13:576 (9) - move to 00:13:128 - fixed
00:28:128 - d fixed
00:42:904 (153) - del fixed
00:45:815 (171) - del keep
[Muzu]
01:25:106 (271) - del hmmm...keep now
[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
01:07:419 (14,15,16,17) - kd kk
[Kantan]
00:33:837 - copy 00:19:509 - fixed
01:27:345 (1) - start at 01:27:121 - hmmm...keep now

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Kantan]
00:38:315 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - change (43) and (46) to k fixed
- i think this sounds more interesting

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:50:628 - add a d here
00:56:001 - add a d here
- did you leave these out on purpose?
01:16:822 (35) - change to big D
- every other line in the kiai stars with a d
- maybe also change the next note to k to take same pattern as 01:02:494 (3,4,5) -

[Muzukashii]
00:12:569 (2,3) - ctrl + g fixed
- i feel like there needs to be a k on 00:12:792
00:31:822 (75) - delete 76　delete
00:32:718 (78,79,80) - change to kkk fixed
- i think this needs a k sound at 00:32:942
01:05:404 (195) - delete fixed
01:19:733 (249) - delete fixed

[Oni]
Good! Nothing

[Nardo's Oni]
00:32:830 - 00:47:942 - i think there should be some breaks here see below

SPOILER

- you can try to fix the rest of it to be like 00:22:643 (87,88) -
00:26:449 (107,108) - delete
00:37:195 (168,169) - delete
00:40:778 (189,190) - delete

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck!