This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sexta-feira, 19 de novembro de 2010 at 22:15:01

Artist: COOL&CREATE
Title: U.N. Owen Was Her? (A capella)
Source: Touhou
Tags: embodiment of the scarlet devil Natteke ignorethis Rokodo Flandre Scarlet BeatMario
BPM: 100
Filesize: 4638kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0,8 stars, 57 notes)
2. Hard (4,53 stars, 278 notes)
3. ignore's Extra Stage (5 stars, 611 notes)
4. Lunatteke (5 stars, 479 notes)
5. Normal (3,43 stars, 195 notes)
6. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 892 notes)

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N. Owen Was Her? (A capella)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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gonna remmap it all~ orz

nice map!

Nice Map Teta

Good map.

Owen *o*

This is my Diff of music

Download: Cool&Create - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [Troni's Easy].osu

rs

AWESOME BEATMAP!! ;P COOL

[General]
Add 'Troni' to the tags
Set a preview point(Timing -> the most bottom option)

[Troni's Easy]
00:30:065 (5) - Unsnapped, snap it onto the blue tick. And new combo.
00:31:297 (1) - Remove new combo after you make 00:30:065 (5) the new combo.
00:51:697 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:497 (1) - Remove new combo
01:01:297 (1) - Remove new combo
01:06:097 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
00:23:015 (3) - Move this closer to 00:21:215 (2) -
01:29:197 (6) - Unsnapped, remove the repeat and make it end on 01:29:497
01:40:897 (5) - Unsnapped, re-size it to this:

Starred :3

starred!

*Normal*
00:21:215 its off beat move it to the left on the timeline or make smaller
00:33:397 Also off beat by a bit move it once to the left on the time line see if that fixes it

I dont see alot of problems with it just near the end make sure you dont leave huge blanks in the song like that especially for easy you may wanna fill in the whole song alot of people dont like short songs regardless of if its easy Dx its just an annoyance and far to easy to get em all =O ^^ Gl

[Easy]
00:30:247 Move this beat one tick back to 00:30:097
00:46:897 End this slider either at 00:48:097 or 00:48:997
00:49:297 End this slider at the third beat (second white tick after the tall white one)
00:51:697 ^
00:54:097 ^
00:56:497 ^
01:01:297 ^

[Normal]
00:11:915 End this slider at 00:12:065
00:35:947 End this slider at 00:36:397
01:03:397 [5, 1] Spacing.
01:03:697 End this slider at 01:04:597
01:06:097 End this slider at 01:06:997
01:25:297 End this slider at 01:27:097 (just move the return corner up a grid or two)

Get more difficulties in there! This song is too awesome to only have an easy and normal. D:

upd

IRC Modded



Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [Natteke's Lunatic].osu

everything fixed~

:3

looooove it

uhh the map seems fine

making my dif atm. wait for me :3 star'd

take a look on a part of my diff

rate it plz ;]

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [Lilly's Hard].osu

Prooving that my diff is passable:



Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [Natteke's Lunatic].osu

Star'd :3

Hi hi

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Change Title to: U.N. Owen Was Her? (Vocal Version) (I think Vocal Version fits better than just Vocal, but that part it's up to you xD)
- Add Touhou as Source.
- Delete touhou from Tags.

~Troni's Easy~
00:06:215 (1) - Extend to the next red tick.
00:08:615 (1) - Move 1/4 later (white tick) and shorten the end to the white tick.
00:38:497 (1) + 00:42:097 (3) - I don't think slider velocity changes would be good to begginers but... maybe making a SB warning will solve this.
00:51:697 (2) - Fix Spacing, also, maybe copypaste (1) and make a vertical and horizontal flip?

~Normal~
00:13:715 (7) - New Combo.
00:15:215 (11) - Unexpected velocity change o.o
00:23:015 (3,4) - Fix Spacing.
00:27:815 (5) - New Combo.
00:31:447 (6) - Move it 1/4 later (red tick)
00:41:047 (5) - ^. Also, the repeat point isn't snapped, you should re-make the slider and do it like 00:31:447 (6)
00:42:097 (6) - New Combo.
00:46:297 (5) - ^
01:30:097 (8) - ^
01:38:647 (6) - Move 1/4 later (red tick)
01:44:497 (7) - New Combo.
02:03:397 (7) - ^

~Natteke's Lunatic~
- Maybe decrease Overall Difficulty a bit?

00:21:665 (4) - Unexpected minijump.
00:25:715 (1,2,3) - Fix Spacing.
01:00:097 (5) - I'm not sure if this is rankable or not, I played it fine so I guess it's okay xD
01:02:497 (5) - ^


So funny song xD *star*

Flannnn ~ XD

Finished my dif, Natteke's way too easy compared to mine XD

BTW, the title should be U.N. Owen was Her? (Vocal)

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [ignore's Lunatic].osu

I will do some fixes on my diff after I come from college.

omg ignorethis, you've made a monster :O Maybe I should rename mine to "Natteke's Insane/Hard" ?
teta don't change anything yet, I will take mod myself

Natteke desu wrote:

your diff is "COOL%26CREATE" when downloaded o.0

It's normal, just manually fix it :3

Natteke desu wrote:

omg ignorethis, you've made a monster :O Maybe I should rename mine to "Natteke's Insane/Hard" ?

ok xD, btw I'm having my map modded, will reupload soon

EDIT: this is the latest modded version do not DL the version above

fixed a careless bug

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [ignore's Lunatic].osu

ignorethis wrote:

EDIT: this is the latest modded version do not DL the version above

00:36:697 (5) - overlapped slider



upd:

Fixed some and mapped to the end like ignorethis did. Teta, do you wanna rename my diff to "Natteke's Insane" ? Two Lunatics doesnt look good :3

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268) [Natteke's Lunatic].osu

Great!

*Easy*
01:07:522-(3):To Far away from (2) move it closer
01:07:972-(4):To far away from (3)

Awesome jobs~

*Normal*
01:38:572 -(6): To close to (5) move it to the right some more

Thats about it gj so far ^^

delete the .osb file and full submit again should be fine.

When map is popular it gets mods quick, when DxS is busy he forgets to mod, when he reached the map its already been checked out. Sorry.

Couldn't find anything else, all the updates ruined my modding anyways. d:

"Title: U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal)"

Title is wrong, should be "U.N." and not "U.N"

fixed the name, deleted the .osb file, but Osu! autogenerates and empty one (197 bytes, i think), that doesn't have any SB on it. :33

can this get ranked nao? :3

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

What's with those 7 seconds at the end of the mp3, which is silenced? Cut it.

Normal:

00:32:497 (7) - New combo.
00:42:097 (6) - ^
01:30:097 (8) - ^
01:44:497 (7) - ^
02:03:697 (8) - ^

That's it, star. *:

i think some new combos aren't needed, but i think (lol) i applied some of them.
:3

Hard:

00:20:615 (1) Clap to the sliders end
00:21:215 (3) Clap
00:22:115 (4) Clap only to the sliders end
00:22:415 (5) Clap
00:24:815 (9) Finish
00:32:197 (7) ^
00:34:897 (1) ^
00:39:688 (7) ^
00:44:487 (1) ^
01:09:67 Finish to this spinner
01:13:297 (5) Finish, new combo?
01:17:497 (8) Finish
01:23:497 Finish to this spinner
01:27:697 (1) Clap
01:28:297 (3) ^
01:28:747 (5) ^
01:36:097 Finish to this spinner
01:42:097 (1.3.4.5) Claps to these circles (not to 2 )
01:46:297 Finish to this spinner

About half of 'em are suggestions, see which ones you like ^^
Where's my kudos you bastard >.<
Already starred~

I like it


Boa

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

1. Kinda hard to check the timing on this, but It seems to work
2. You wanted to change the name of this to "U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal)" right? Because the actual map is still called "U.N. Owen Was Her (A cappella)". Change the name for all of the diffs and then full resubmit. That should do it. Oh, and it should be U.N Owen Was Her?
3. Put "Touhou" in the tags instead of the source? This is a remix of a Touhou song, but it isn't in a Touhou game, so it shouldn't be in the source.
4. Delete the .osb

[EASY]

'tis fine

[NORMAL]

01:57:847 (6) - This slider feels weird where it is to me. move it 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter if you do this.)
02:02:647 (6) - ^

[HARD]

02:02:647 (6) - Add an extra repeat?

[NATTEKE'S LUNATIC]

00:42:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Im not too keen on these jumps here. Remove them perhaps?

[IGNORE'S EXTRA STAGE]

00:36:397 (4) - I guess this 2x BPM slider is there to keep symmetry, but I don't think it plays very well. I would stick to a 1x BPM slider here. personally.
00:56:947 (4,5) - On my playthrough, I couldn't see this jump at all. I would stack (5) on (1) instead (and add a new combo on (5))
01:48:397 (6,7,8,9,10) - Im not very fond of all this overlapping here, especially since its in a odd pattern so it isn't predictable. Perhaps move these so they don't overlap? or put them in a more predictable pattern (like in a circle or something)?

I lol'd. Nice map. I feel that it could use a new timing section, with Offset: 29,542, BPM: 100.0 since that part of the song comes in earlier, but the notes snapped on that feels awkward, so it works better as it is, so I wouldn't bother with that.

Starred

Fixed mine.

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N. Owen Was Her (A capella) (Teta268) [Natteke's Lunatic].osu

Fixed, now we just have to w8 ignorethis to fix his diff :3

Well maybe you can't wait until my Biochem. test finished(it's on 20th and that's tomorrow)...
Tooooo fast. Submitted 15th and until 19th got SP +31? lol

So yeah

Easy:
00:01:415 - For these 4 spinners, put loud hitshounds.
00:03:815 (1) - Add a whistle and remove clap
00:10:415 (1) - Add finish
00:20:615 - Add inherited timing section before here, so the hitsounds can go back to soft.
00:35:497 (3) - Add clap
00:38:497 (1) - Shorten this slider to the red tick. (Note: This will mess up spacing. You can keep this where it is if you don't want to adjust, but it sounds better how I've placed it.)
00:39:697 - Add a note here.
00:40:297 (2) - Add clap
00:42:097 (3) - Add finish at the end of this
00:46:897 (5) - Add clap at the end of this.
01:04:297 - Oh god spacing. Rotate this 90 degrees and adjust using distance snap. Adjust as neccesary blah blah ~.

Normal:
00:15:215 (11) - Eww. Half-time sliders generally are for the effect of slowing down. There is a part where you placed this where it seemingly slows down, but the repeats are uneccesary. Take the repeats out and move the inherited timing point to the end of the slider.
00:23:615 (4) - Add clap
00:24:065 (5) - Remove clap.
00:26:015 (2) - Add clap
00:27:215 (4) - ^
00:39:997 (1) - Aah jump.
00:47:797 - Add note and remove spinner
00:48:097 - Move spinner here on the white tick and end in the same place.
01:31:897 (13) - Shorten to the red tick. Add clap on the end.
01:54:097 (1) - Remove spinner
01:58:897 (1) - Aah jump.

Hard:
00:01:415 (1) - Add clap at end and remove finish
00:06:215 (1) - ^
00:22:715 (1) - What new combo. Also tiny spacing issue.
00:33:397 - Add note here with whistle
00:34:597 - Add note here with finish
00:39:997 (1) - Spacing ;-;
00:42:097 (1) - ^
00:54:547 (1) - ^
01:07:297 (1) - It wouldn't be a bad idea to add x2 spacing here (just end it after (3), but this is only a suggestion.
01:07:297 (1) - Add clap
01:07:747 (2) - ^
01:08:197 (3) - Add finish
01:21:997 (1) - What random spinner
01:22:897 - Might go better here
01:50:497 (1) - Remove new combo

Natteke's Lunatic:
00:20:015 (1) - Oh god this reminds me so much of Super Sky High Man. I'd prefer a really fast slider here instead of a stream (I know this makes it look and play a bit more boring than you'd probably like it, but still ;-;.)
00:43:297 (1) - ^
00:51:397 (6) - Add clap
00:53:797 (6) - ^
02:24:097 (1) - Kinda useless streams from here on out. x2 spaced notes would work here.

ignore's extra stage.
01:17:497 (11) - I'm personally fine with this, but I'm not neccesarily sure if other people like it. Be prepared to change.

Overall, Natteke's Lunatic and ignore's Exta are good, but I'm not neccesarily a big fan of Easy, Normal, or Hard.

my test finished a few hours ago, and I made taiko map for this
well I think it's Oni lvl. 7. pretty simple(and can be boring if you are really expert) patterns, but due to high BPM, it's quite hard. Yes, it's kinda easier than previous one (U. N Owen was death note, I mean)
(Of course oni is hard for begginers...)

Oh and you can change the name of the diff anyway you want.

Download: COOL&CREATE - U.N. Owen Was Her (A capella) (Teta268) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Natteke desu wrote:

CDFA wrote:

Natteke's Lunatic:
00:20:015 (1) - Oh god this reminds me so much of Super Sky High Man. I'd prefer a really fast slide r here instead of a stream (I know this makes it look and play a bit more boring than you'd probably like it, but still ;-;.) - No
00:43:297 (1) - ^ - No
00:51:397 (6) - Add clap - No
00:53:797 (6) - ^ - No
02:24:097 (1) - Kinda useless streams from here on out. x2 spaced notes would work here. - No

NO!

ok.

Hi :3

In blue suggestion, In red maybe important

[General]
-Cool&Create - U.N Owen Was Her (Vocal) (Teta268).osb if u don't use it, kill it :3
-colouring___Flandre_Scarlet_by_Felicia_Val.jpeg resize to 1024x768
-Use same kiai time in normal and hard

Nice =)

StaR

[Easy]
Didnt find problems here

[Normal]
No problems here either

[Hard]
Umm no problems? DX

Umm how can i get kudos if i dont find any problems in ur map ;_;
Anyways i like ur mapping style so +Star ^^

Move "Touhou" to Source from the tags.
Remove capella from tags as it's already in the title.

[Hard]
00:38:497 (7) - Move a little farther away from 6 like how 4 is from 3.
00:50:197 (2,3,4) - Evenly space these.
02:13:297 (1) - Move this a bit farther from 4's endpoint so it doesn't seem others have to hit it right away.
02:16:897 (6) - New combo.
02:19:297 (6) - ^
00:42:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing doesn't make sense here. Especially between 2 and 3.

[ignore]
00:36:397 (4) - Make this a new combo since it's a slider speed change.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Move "Touhou" to Source from the tags.
Remove capella from tags as it's already in the title.

[Hard]
00:38:497 (7) - Move a little farther away from 6 like how 4 is from 3.
00:50:197 (2,3,4) - Evenly space these.
02:13:297 (1) - Move this a bit farther from 4's endpoint so it doesn't seem others have to hit it right away.
02:16:897 (6) - New combo.
02:19:297 (6) - ^
00:42:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing doesn't make sense here. Especially between 2 and 3.

[ignore]
00:36:397 (4) - Make this a new combo since it's a slider speed change.

shouldn't it be like this :3 :

[Hard]
00:38:497 (7) - Move a little farther away from 6 like how 4 is from 3.
00:50:197 (2,3,4) - Evenly space these.

[Natteke]
02:13:297 (1) - Move this a bit farther from 4's endpoint so it doesn't seem others have to hit it right away.
02:16:897 (6) - New combo.
02:19:297 (6) - ^
00:42:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing doesn't make sense here. Especially between 2 and 3.

[ignore]
00:36:397 (4) - Make this a new combo since it's a slider speed change.

Probably

Owen [2] *-*

Did ya fix my suggestions yet?