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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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Guu
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Joined July 2008
Guu
[imouto's Hard]
00:46:597 (5,1) - 节奏不太好预读，推荐如下
01:04:425 (1) - 有点容易被坑，还是改单点或者1/2滑条吧
01:49:854 (1) - 这转盘略长……
02:17:454 - 还是不要空着，尤其这个间距容易以为红线有节奏，结果按早，断了= = 前面那个1/4往返也有点干扰
02:28:425 - 同上
02:22:425 (5) - 惯性思维容易读错，强烈建议和前面一样用五连往返
看了下kiai后半部分也空了一些红线，间距上木有问题但窝觉得统一填满比较好

妹桑排列很有特色呢w

[insane]
00:51:568 (3,4) - 位置对换一下？
01:36:140 (1) - 莫名地觉得ctrl+g比较好
我太弱渣挑不出问题丽
爷爷风骚神图受我一扑通: (扑通)
Fushimi Rio
1,399 posts
Joined November 2011
Fushimi Rio

Guu wrote:

[imouto's Hard]
00:46:597 (5,1) - 节奏不太好预读，推荐如下 好
01:04:425 (1) - 有点容易被坑，还是改单点或者1/2滑条吧 改了
01:49:854 (1) - 这转盘略长…… 还好吧 我觉得
02:17:454 - 还是不要空着，尤其这个间距容易以为红线有节奏，结果按早，断了= = 前面那个1/4往返也有点干扰 图里所有0.2的ds都是空拍 前面也有很多这样的地方
02:28:425 - 同上
02:22:425 (5) - 惯性思维容易读错，强烈建议和前面一样用五连往返 这个改了
看了下kiai后半部分也空了一些红线，间距上木有问题但窝觉得统一填满比较好 star会直接变成I 还是算了

妹桑排列很有特色呢w
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131111
Countdown: 1
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (Short ver.)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (Short ver.)
Artist:TwoThirds & Feint feat Veela
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds & Feint feat Veela
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass Electron
BeatmapID:583063
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247,94,134711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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koreapenguin
1,746 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Heeeey yooooooooo


General
  1. how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors
  2. i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right
  3. i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled
  4. add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags
  5. sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably
  6. @Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P



Alpaca's Easy
  1. Nothing to say, but i think this diff is unbalance. compare 00:22:082 - ~ 02:33:482 - with 02:33:740 - ~ 03:14:797 - note's density, anyway don't mind about this it just my personal think



Normal
  1. 01:05:968 (1) - add finish on slider head, i guess missing. same here 01:49:854 (1) -
  2. 01:10:768 (4,1) - i don't want recommend use this on beginner diff, it would be unnatural to play and read. also seep shape is not good, just make sure
  3. 02:09:054 (1,1) - not enough recovery time behind this spinner, increase it by at least a half beat



imouto's Hard
  1. some anti-jumps it's really doesn't fit this diff it just make more harder imo
  2. 00:35:111 (6) - it's wrong, hear it in detail 00:35:197 - there is have no sound. so how about chagne just 1/2 slider?
  3. 00:37:854 (6) - same as ^
  4. 00:55:340 - add note here, it's not enough to empty. becuz there is have strong sound don't ignore that, it's make some weird
  5. 01:00:654 (1) - i don't think this spinner is match with song, it doesn't really fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere imo
  6. 01:15:911 (1,1) - delet new combo, there are not special enough to newcombo
  7. 01:20:025 (1) - delet new combo here, same as 01:18:311 (1,2) - and 01:21:054 (1,1) - swap newcombo here for consistency, also it would be easier to read
  8. 02:49:854 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh... streams i'm not sure about this just don't want recommend this

    about spread Normal > Hard... i'm not sure about this ; ^ ; i think hard diff is too hard so... you must ask to QAT,BATs



Insane
  1. 01:09:054 (2,3) - hum.. does it play well? i think it's really hard to read and play,you need some opinions
  2. 01:49:511 (6) - add finish on slider tail
  3. 02:34:767 (6) - unsnap end, 02:39:225 (1) - same. check ai mod
  4. 02:09:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - it's overmapped on blue tick, i think string sounds is can't be beat or rhythm confirm with Natsu, Xinely
Last edited by koreapenguin , edited 1 time in total.
Fushimi Rio
1,399 posts
Joined November 2011
Fushimi Rio

koreapenguin wrote:

[notice]Heeeey yooooooooo

imouto's Hard
  1. some anti-jumps it's really doesn't fit this diff it just make more harder imo well...I'll change some when I got better solutions.
  2. 01:00:654 (1) - i don't think this spinner is match with song, it doesn't really fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere imo I thought it's quite natural. Maybe because same spinners didn't appear in recent maps?

    about spread... i'm not sure about this ; ^ ; i think hard diff is too hard so... you must ask to QAT,BATs
Others were fixed. Thx for modding!

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131111
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682,197625
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7000009

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (Short ver.)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (Short ver.)
Artist:TwoThirds & Feint feat Veela
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds & Feint feat Veela
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass Electron
BeatmapID:583063
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88111,109104
2,175882,184532
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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286,119,145511,5,8,0:0:0:0:
286,119,145682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,192,145854,2,0,P|339:236|339:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,189,146196,5,8,0:0:0:0:
243,189,146367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,262,146539,2,0,P|190:306|190:333,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,313,146882,2,0,P|285:357|298:380,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,322,147225,2,0,P|392:354|415:367,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,284,147568,2,0,P|498:273|439:201,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,222,148082,2,0,P|405:206|420:198,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,249,148597,6,0,P|356:237|328:218,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,163,148940,2,0,P|240:135|223:105,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,91,149283,6,0,P|340:101|369:119,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,174,149626,2,0,P|456:199|473:230,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
502,307,149969,6,0,P|509:340|508:375,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,352,150312,2,0,P|402:324|385:294,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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385,294,151168,6,0,P|372:327|354:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,187,151511,2,0,P|295:216|307:249,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,203,151854,6,0,P|161:170|180:141,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,311,152197,2,0,P|238:281|226:248,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152882,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,166,153225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,208,153397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,250,153568,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,141,153740,5,12,0:0:0:0:
229,73,153911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,26,154083,2,0,P|340:12|366:10,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,73,154425,5,8,0:0:0:0:
306,39,154596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,34,154768,2,0,P|432:43|455:53,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,39,155111,5,8,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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464,85,155968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,106,156654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,106,157168,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,176,157339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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298,240,158197,6,0,P|295:283|289:308,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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226,173,159568,6,0,P|263:196|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,278,159911,2,0,P|357:317|364:341,1,70
240,270,160254,6,0,P|263:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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302,199,163854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,210,164025,2,0,L|400:248,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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302,199,164540,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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304,64,164882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,17,165054,2,0,P|193:3|167:1,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,165396,5,8,0:0:0:0:
227,30,165567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,39,166253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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69,76,166939,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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297,58,167454,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,97,167625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,159,167797,2,0,P|144:197|138:222,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,97,168139,5,8,0:0:0:0:
177,167,168310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,248,168482,2,0,P|162:291|168:316,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,247,168825,2,0,P|312:203|306:178,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,231,169168,6,0,P|238:274|244:299,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,230,169511,2,0,P|388:186|382:161,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,200,169854,2,0,P|310:221|314:237,4,35,0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,170539,6,0,P|272:188|255:207,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,170882,2,0,P|188:316|183:341,1,70
255,208,171225,6,0,P|213:194|188:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,190,171568,2,0,P|60:199|37:209,1,70
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113,56,172254,2,0,P|80:26|59:13,1,70
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228,136,173282,6,0,P|286:124|301:117,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,84,173625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,236,173968,2,0,P|300:290|297:307,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,170,174311,6,0,P|413:224|416:241,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,373,174654,2,0,P|416:324|403:313,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,270,174997,2,0,P|283:246|266:243,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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172,235,175425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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466,248,189740,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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83,328,190769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,160,191111,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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396,199,194540,2,0,L|425:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,333,194882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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286,129,195740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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286,129,196597,1,10,0:0:0:0:
325,196,196768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,129,196940,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,263,197111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,131,197282,2,0,L|173:75,4,35,2|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

另：我这个没改tag啊
Streliteela
406 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela

koreapenguin wrote:

Heeeey yooooooooo Hiiiiiiiii~~~OwO~~~


General
  1. how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors Yep really... added~ :)
  2. i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right Fixed this~Thanks for point out this important matter~
  3. i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled Remove 'countdown' now~
  4. add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags
    Add all gders to tags. P.S. Alpaca is short for AlpacaCokelat (https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1841032)
  5. sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably Reduce 10% of all the hitsound, seems better now~
  6. @Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P
    Yes really, I've changed the offset to 154ms and it sounds better now~ :)



Normal
  1. 01:05:968 (1) - add finish on slider head, i guess missing. same here 01:49:854 (1) - Fixed~
  2. 01:10:768 (4,1) - i don't want recommend use this on beginner diff, it would be unnatural to play and read. also seep shape is not good, just make sure
    Changed the slider to two notes now~
  3. 02:09:054 (1,1) - not enough recovery time behind this spinner, increase it by at least a half beat
    Fixed~ move the end to 02:11:125 -



Insane
  1. 01:09:054 (2,3) - hum.. does it play well? i think it's really hard to read and play,you need some opinions Changed it to another pattern, seems better now~
  2. 01:49:511 (6) - add finish on slider tail oops I forgot to add :o fixed it~ :)
  3. 02:34:767 (6) - unsnap end, 02:39:225 (1) - same. check ai mod Fixed~
  4. 02:09:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - it's overmapped on blue tick, i think string sounds is can't be beat or rhythm confirm with Natsu, Xinely
    I'm not sure about this. I know this part is a bit strange, but I still can't find a better way to fix this part. So I deicide to keep it and wait for some more suggestions. Thx a lot for pointing out this problem~I'll try my best to fix in the future~
Thanks a lot for your modding~ It really helps me a lot. :)
Mei
1,051 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
[insane]
  1. 01:02:211 (3) - 可以加个nc
  2. 01:10:782 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点怪，建议ctrl+g
  3. 01:28:268 (1) - 这一段开始nc变得有点不规律了起来，有的地方类似这个01:36:154 (1,1) - 是按人声分了多个nc，有些地方又是按白线来分的比如01:33:411 (1) - ，建议统一一下

  4. 02:15:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以摆个正五边形，类似这种感觉
  5. 02:17:039 (2,3,4,1) - 这间距有点坑._.不过我没打过也不确定能不恩呢打
  6. 02:22:096 (4,5) - 这里ctrl+g好打
  7. 02:38:554 (1) - 这减速略坑
[imouto‘s hard]
  1. 00:22:782 (1,1) - 去掉nc
  2. 00:46:782 (1) - 这个clap是不是加错位置
  3. 02:16:611 (6,1) - 建议换个nc，后面类似的地方也这样
  4. 02:38:896 (3) - 尾巴上加clap，类似的地方也是

    毫无人性，打爆
[normal]
  1. 00:31:696 (1) - 这nc可以去掉，保持2长白线1nc
  2. 01:27:925 (1) - 这个默认的clap让我有点出戏

easy还不错
其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
insane做的蛮棒就是怎么感觉到了kiai就乱了，总之rank加油，给你一颗小星星w
FaiVillager
152 posts
Joined October 2012
FaiVillager
来了来了~

这图做的挺精致~ 我喜欢~

[insane]
总体上不错
但是感觉有一部分滑条拐得有点过了而看起来很不舒服 可能需要修改一下？（不少哦）
00:23:797 (3) - 这个就有一点拐多了 考虑少拐点 其他类似情况自己修一下吧（其实无所谓;w; 只是我觉得不好而已）
00:26:025 (7,1) - 7和1的开头放在一条直线上 这种梗可以适当增加两个滑条之间的ds
00:28:940 (1) - 下边往左偏点
顺带我感觉这图开始部分和结尾的风格不太一样 主要是弯滑条的有无 建议统一一下
00:50:711 (6,1) - 和上边的一样
00:58:082 (2,3,4) - 堆在一起了不太好看
01:03:140 (6) - 这个地方根据滑条的形状决定连打的样子吧 这里做成弧线不太好看
01:39:225 (1,1) - 这两个用01:40:768 (2) - 的approach circle来修的更完美
01:58:768 (3,4) - 一个曲线一个折现放在一起我个人不太推荐（看情况，星爷的其实还不错，但是和节奏关系很大）
02:17:025 (2,3,4) - 和之后的类似连打难度相对与这个图的整体有些偏大 而且这部分做1.5x确实太快了，因为曲子本身没变。 考虑降低速度吧

另外音量整体降低点吧 有点大。

[normal]
这个其实也最好统一一下风格，折线和曲线完全混搭会比较奇怪 个人推荐主一种另外一种适当添加以保证风味
00:24:140 (5,1) - 曲子在这部分属于两个小节，跨小节的对称滑条我不推荐
00:35:454 (6,1,2) - 摆成一条直线
01:10:768 (4,1) - 这种遮盖不太好 （没有大问题）
02:15:911 (3) - 用缩圈调整下 这个偏差比较大
02:30:311 (4,2) - 调成对称或者有关系的角度吧 看起来怪怪的
02:45:054 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个曲率不一样 如果愿意的话可以细调
02:50:197 (1,2,3) -
给你放了一个正三角，你自己可以这么修改

因为是NM所以GD暂时不mod了，最近比较忙.-.
Streliteela
406 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Mei wrote:

[insane]
  1. 01:02:211 (3) - 可以加个nc 好，已加
  2. 01:10:782 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点怪，建议ctrl+g 这个暂时先不改，刻意做的
  3. 01:28:268 (1) - 这一段开始nc变得有点不规律了起来，有的地方类似这个01:36:154 (1,1) - 是按人声分了多个nc，有些地方又是按白线来分的比如01:33:411 (1) - ，建议统一一下 嗯好的，已改

  4. 02:15:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以摆个正五边形，类似这种感觉 图形梗用太多了这里就不想用了_(:з」∠)_
  5. 02:17:039 (2,3,4,1) - 这间距有点坑._.不过我没打过也不确定能不恩呢打
    这块已经改排列了，确实很多人说间距坑又遮挡太丧病。顺便钱语十级_(:з」∠)_

  6. 02:22:096 (4,5) - 这里ctrl+g好打 这里暂时保留，再等看看其他人的想法
  7. 02:38:554 (1) - 这减速略坑 囍，嚎嚎嚎！（被打死
[imouto‘s hard]


  • 毫无人性，打爆 打的好！

[normal]
  1. 00:31:696 (1) - 这nc可以去掉，保持2长白线1nc 好的已改
  2. 01:27:925 (1) - 这个默认的clap让我有点出戏
噗……手贱多按了个clap，我也是醉了orz

easy还不错
其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
insane做的蛮棒就是怎么感觉到了kiai就乱了，总之rank加油，给你一颗小星星w
感谢mei酱滴摸以及star~~ :)
Streliteela
406 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela

FaiVillager wrote:

来了来了~ 欢迎欢迎OwO~

这图做的挺精致~ 我喜欢~ ^_^

[insane]
总体上不错
但是感觉有一部分滑条拐得有点过了而看起来很不舒服 可能需要修改一下？（不少哦）
第一次做insane没什么经验，滑条什么的形状确实有些诡异orz

00:23:797 (3) - 这个就有一点拐多了 考虑少拐点 其他类似情况自己修一下吧（其实无所谓;w; 只是我觉得不好而已）
稍稍改直了一些

00:26:025 (7,1) - 7和1的开头放在一条直线上 这种梗可以适当增加两个滑条之间的ds
这样改的话感觉flow就不太好了，先暂时不改

00:28:940 (1) - 下边往左偏点 好的

顺带我感觉这图开始部分和结尾的风格不太一样 主要是弯滑条的有无 建议统一一下 结尾有意稍稍减少了一些排列上的硬度所以弯滑条用的多了些，因为快结束了嘛缓和一下w

00:50:711 (6,1) - 和上边的一样 嗯这里也是，改完flow感觉不好，暂时保留

00:58:082 (2,3,4) - 堆在一起了不太好看 刻意做成这个样子的，其实打起来还可以只是edit面板里看着会有点挤

01:03:140 (6) - 这个地方根据滑条的形状决定连打的样子吧 这里做成弧线不太好看 同样是为了照顾flow

01:39:225 (1,1) - 这两个用01:40:768 (2) - 的approach circle来修的更完美 好的已改

01:58:768 (3,4) - 一个曲线一个折现放在一起我个人不太推荐（看情况，星爷的其实还不错，但是和节奏关系很大）
作为星爷脑残粉表示挺想试一试这种style的_(:з」∠)_

02:17:025 (2,3,4) - 和之后的类似连打难度相对与这个图的整体有些偏大 而且这部分做1.5x确实太快了，因为曲子本身没变。 考虑降低速度吧
这个要改的话就要改太多了，1.5x个人感觉打起来还挺爽_(:з」∠)_，而且这歌节奏太单一如果kiai的sv平平就没什么激情了w

另外音量整体降低点吧 有点大。 减了10%，感觉再减就要听不出来音效了_(:з」∠)_

[normal]
这个其实也最好统一一下风格，折线和曲线完全混搭会比较奇怪 个人推荐主一种另外一种适当添加以保证风味
这大概也算是一种风格（？

00:24:140 (5,1) - 曲子在这部分属于两个小节，跨小节的对称滑条我不推荐 感觉还好吧_(:з」∠)_

00:35:454 (6,1,2) - 摆成一条直线 这个调了好久……确实改了但我还是不确定是不是已经一条直线了orz

01:10:768 (4,1) - 这种遮盖不太好 （没有大问题） 移动了一下note位置从滑条头挪到滑条尾了，感觉好很多

02:15:911 (3) - 用缩圈调整下 这个偏差比较大 嗯确实，已改

02:30:311 (4,2) - 调成对称或者有关系的角度吧 看起来怪怪的 改成平行了w
02:45:054 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个曲率不一样 如果愿意的话可以细调 好难调啊不想调了sad

02:50:197 (1,2,3) -
给你放了一个正三角，你自己可以这么修改
这个好高端，已改w

因为是NM所以GD暂时不mod了，最近比较忙.-.
没关系~图摸的很好很受益w
感谢摸图~~ :)
Fushimi Rio
1,399 posts
Joined November 2011
Fushimi Rio

Mei wrote:

[notice][imouto‘s hard]
  1. 00:22:782 (1,1) - 去掉nc 前面的去掉了
  2. 00:46:782 (1) - 这个clap是不是加错位置 是
  3. 02:16:611 (6,1) - 建议换个nc，后面类似的地方也这样 好
  4. 02:38:896 (3) - 尾巴上加clap，类似的地方也是 哦

    毫无人性，打爆 老毛病大概已没救

其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
唉也是 我看看mapper怎么说 不介意的话我就再补个hard得了 我思考了一下最好还是不要让我来免得再次疯狂坠毁
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Zetera
Medal Hunter
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Joined November 2010
Zetera
Hi. You solved the ~Puzzle~ , so you won a mod. I am not good at modding standard tho, also, this mapset seems to be quite soilid


[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad.
(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further.
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago.

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.

[Normal]

|02:08:382 (6,7) - You could use the pattern you used before by repeating 6, then you could turn 7 into a circle and place it at the beginning of the spinner and delay the spinner by 1/4 tick. Just a minor suggestion though.
|03:01:868 (2,7) - a slight stack overlap that you should fix.

[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty.
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example )
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this.

[Insane]

This diff is Sick , I love it.

|01:14:554 (1,1,1) - What about flipping 01:14:896 (1) - with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G (turning it around by 180°)?

Have 2 stars, I want to see this ranked. Good luck.
Streliteela
406 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Sala- wrote:

Hi. You solved the ~Puzzle~ , so you won a mod. hi lol~~ :)

I am not good at modding standard tho, also, this mapset seems to be quite soilid
Never mind. this modding is nice and helps me (and especially my GDers) a lot~


[Normal]

|02:08:382 (6,7) - You could use the pattern you used before by repeating 6, then you could turn 7 into a circle and place it at the beginning of the spinner and delay the spinner by 1/4 tick. Just a minor suggestion though.
Good suggestion~ but still I want to keep it and wait for more suggestions from other people

|03:01:868 (2,7) - a slight stack overlap that you should fix. Yep fixed this~


[Insane]

This diff is Sick , I love it. 8-)

|01:14:554 (1,1,1) - What about flipping 01:14:896 (1) - with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G (turning it around by 180°)?
ehh...it seems a little bit weird... :o

Have 2 stars, I want to see this ranked. Good luck.
Thanks a lot for your modding and stars~~ :)
Fushimi Rio
1,399 posts
Joined November 2011
Fushimi Rio

Sala- wrote:

[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
seems I have different taste from others fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up
osu file format v13

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Fushimi Rio
1,399 posts
Joined November 2011
Fushimi Rio

Sala- wrote:

[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
seems I have different taste from others fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682,197625
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88125,109118
2,175896,184546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Fushimi Rio
1,399 posts
Joined November 2011
Fushimi Rio

Sala- wrote:

[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
seems I have different taste from others fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682,197625
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88125,109118
2,175896,184546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
In Guu's request.

General

  1. 可能还需要一个简单的Hard，现在的Hard过难，可以当light insane做了

Alpaca's Easy


  • fine

Normal

  1. 02:37:525 (4) - 这个遮挡可能会被挑

imouto's Hard

  1. HP-1
  2. 关于01:16:954 - 01:27:925这段，节奏和音效有点乱
  3. 01:18:496 - 漏了个音...
  4. 01:21:239 - ^
  5. 01:23:982 - ^
  6. 01:19:010 (4) - 这个clap去掉，01:19:353 (6) - 这个加上clap，和01:17:811 (4,5) - 一致，后面也一样，延续C----CC的自创节奏+音效，或者干脆跟着BGM来，不用自创节奏和音效

Insane

  1. 00:53:639 (1) - X246 Y181
  2. 01:14:811 - 漏了一个音，但想改必须摈弃目前这个梗。小问题，取舍在你
  3. 01:25:182 (1) - 左移一格
  4. 01:27:925 - 02:11:811 - 完全没有音效单薄了一些。可以用whistle丰富一下这段的音效，比如在01:28:268 (1,3) - 滑条尾、01:30:668 (1) - 等等类似的24clap
  5. 02:36:839 (3,4) - 以及02:37:354 (6,7) - 都对调一下，顺时针flow对于从02:36:154

    (7,8,9,10) - 到02:37:868 (1) - 的衔接更符合习惯，也流畅一些
  6. 02:49:696 - 这个drum被减速滑条盖过，坚持用滑条覆盖的话不妨加红点强调一下，愿意摈弃只要恢复原SV即可
  7. 02:51:068 - 同上，如果前面的减速还是为了强调Vocal，这里就有点莫名了
  8. 02:52:439 - 同上
  9. 03:11:982 (7) - 单纯觉得Ctrl+G易读也干净一点

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!
Streliteela
406 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Autumn wrote:

In Guu's request.

General

  1. 可能还需要一个简单的Hard，现在的Hard过难，可以当light insane做了
    嗯这个有考虑过，再等另外一个GD。如果能满足要求就把现在这个hard作为light insane

Normal

  1. 02:37:525 (4) - 这个遮挡可能会被挑 不太想改这里的pattern，先暂时保留

Insane

  1. 00:53:639 (1) - X246 Y181 好已改
  2. 01:14:811 - 漏了一个音，但想改必须摈弃目前这个梗。小问题，取舍在你 还是想留这个梗
  3. 01:25:182 (1) - 左移一格 好的
  4. 01:27:925 - 02:11:811 - 完全没有音效单薄了一些。可以用whistle丰富一下这段的音效，比如在01:28:268 (1,3) - 滑条尾、01:30:668 (1) - 等等类似的24clap 嗯好建议，已经加了一些音效
  5. 02:36:839 (3,4) - 以及02:37:354 (6,7) - 都对调一下，顺时针flow对于从02:36:154 (7,8,9,10) - 到02:37:868 (1) - 的衔接更符合习惯，也流畅一些
    好建议，已改
  6. 02:49:696 - 这个drum被减速滑条盖过，坚持用滑条覆盖的话不妨加红点强调一下，愿意摈弃只要恢复原SV即可
  7. 02:51:068 - 同上，如果前面的减速还是为了强调Vocal，这里就有点莫名了
  8. 02:52:439 - 同上
    以上三个地方没有改，因为这块是刻意做的一个梗。这三个减速滑条是因为长音刻意安排的，配合变间距单点以后让图更有张力
  9. 03:11:982 (7) - 单纯觉得Ctrl+G易读也干净一点 嗯已改

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!
感谢摸图~~ :)
jyu
1,338 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

koreapenguin wrote:

[notice]Heeeey yooooooooo


General
  1. how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors
  2. i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right
  3. i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled
  4. add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags i think alpacacokelat is fine
  5. sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably
  6. @Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P



Alpaca's Easy
  1. Nothing to say, but i think this diff is unbalance. compare 00:22:082 - ~ 02:33:482 - with 02:33:740 - ~ 03:14:797 - note's density, anyway don't mind about this it just my personal think
yeah i intentionally made the density different even though both sections are absolutely similiar, but one of them is at the beginning song meanwhile the other is at the last part of the song, so yeah

Sala- wrote:

[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad. fix
(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further. that's a good point idk i kinda hesitated placing two consecutive circles in easy but yeah i should try this
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago. i just realized other diffs dont use spinner lmao fix

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.
Thank you for mods! :)
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585893
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2.5
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-Faded-
752 posts
Joined December 2012
-Faded-
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]
  1. Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
  2. The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.


[Easy]
  1. 01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail.
  2. 01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them.
  3. 01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap.
  4. 02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well.
  5. 02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern.
  6. 02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats)


[Normal]
  1. 01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
  2. 02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
  3. 02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
  4. 03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.


[Hard]
  1. 00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward
  2. 00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end?
  3. 01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

    You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better.
  4. 01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map.
  5. 01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play.
  6. 02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few.
  7. 02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty.


[Insane]
  1. 01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
  2. 02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
  3. 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
  4. 02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
  5. 02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.


Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!
jyu
1,338 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[Easy]
  1. 01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail. fix
  2. 01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them. fix
  3. 01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap. the ds wont let me ;w;
  4. 02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well. somehow the beat here isn't strong like any other downbeat so i didnt add clap
  5. 02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern. following the vocals
  6. 02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats) fix
Thank you for mod! :)
osu file format v13

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348,188,81411,2,0,P|398:128|389:50,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,82439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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276,268,84154,2,0,B|319:231|319:231|343:191|343:191|383:151,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85182,12,12,87925,0:0:0:0:
56,92,109868,6,0,B|104:152|72:268|72:268|164:264|212:236|244:124|224:48,1,479.999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,56,120839,6,0,B|132:68|132:68|100:100,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,148,122382,2,0,B|420:160|420:160|452:192,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,300,123582,6,0,P|240:316|164:312,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,156,125125,2,0,P|336:140|412:144,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,236,126325,6,0,B|200:236|200:236|168:252|168:252|104:252,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,127868,2,0,B|328:104|328:104|360:120|360:120|424:120,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129068,12,4,131811,0:0:0:0:
252,60,133182,6,0,B|240:32|140:60|140:60|84:144|116:184,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,134554,2,0,P|184:292|300:304,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,172,136268,2,0,L|92:84,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,56,137296,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,96,137639,2,0,P|392:132|316:212,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,139696,6,0,L|104:128,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,140382,2,0,P|64:244|108:356,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,142439,6,0,P|280:188|344:160,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,100,143125,2,0,P|436:128|440:244,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,336,144496,2,0,B|248:324|228:284|228:284|208:328|160:340,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,264,145525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,168,145868,2,0,P|116:128|224:92,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,136,146896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,92,147239,2,0,L|424:172,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,148268,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,296,148611,2,0,B|164:264|112:268|112:268|84:236|100:184,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,272,150668,6,0,L|372:176,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,116,151354,2,0,P|260:88|160:96,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,152382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,152725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,300,153068,2,0,P|256:320|292:320,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,268,153754,6,0,L|348:184,1,79.9999999999999,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,154439,2,0,L|236:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,155125,2,0,L|132:104,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,104,155811,2,0,L|54:181,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,276,156496,6,0,P|96:304|148:324,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,316,157182,2,0,P|280:312|324:320,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,157868,2,0,P|448:305|469:272,2,79.9999999999999,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,159239,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,116,159582,2,0,P|164:104|132:112,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,160268,2,0,B|72:296|72:296|104:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,96,161982,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,72,162325,2,0,L|376:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,128,163354,2,0,P|472:176|464:216,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,280,164039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,312,164382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,296,164725,6,0,L|124:288,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,196,165411,2,0,L|96:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,166096,2,0,L|252:44,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,124,166782,2,0,L|392:144,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,167468,6,0,P|428:264|476:300,2,79.9999999999999,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,236,168496,2,0,B|280:248|280:248|236:240,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,169182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,204,169525,2,0,P|80:176|164:80,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,170554,6,0,P|312:92|432:80,3,160,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,168,172954,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,228,173296,2,0,B|352:248|352:248|228:252,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,264,174325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,174668,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,84,175011,2,0,P|120:68|192:52,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,92,175696,5,12,0:0:0:0:
348,56,176039,2,0,P|392:112|416:200,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,276,177411,2,0,P|196:220|172:132,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,48,178439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
72,120,178782,2,0,L|40:284,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,324,180154,2,0,B|260:292|260:292|384:288,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,181182,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,140,181525,2,0,L|177:143,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,312,182896,2,0,L|255:308,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,183925,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,200,184268,2,0,P|424:152|416:40,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,185982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,186325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,288,186668,6,0,L|104:204,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,187354,2,0,L|165:131,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,52,188039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,188382,2,0,P|376:96|472:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,164,189411,6,0,L|444:248,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,196,190096,2,0,L|344:280,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,190782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,260,191125,2,0,P|164:224|80:276,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,184,192154,6,0,P|64:156|108:140,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,192839,2,0,P|244:112|276:96,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,52,193525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,80,193868,2,0,L|428:252,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,300,194896,5,8,0:0:0:0:
276,244,195239,2,0,L|200:280,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,172,196268,2,0,P|328:128|296:92,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,108,196954,2,0,P|180:116|128:112,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,68,197639,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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