1. Cute (3.59 stars, 212 notes)
2. DJPop's Cool (4.94 stars, 564 notes)
3. Flat-chested (1.22 stars, 115 notes)
4. Tsundere~ (4.99 stars, 633 notes)

safe_osu wrote:

มาแล้วครับ แจกดาวโลดครับ STAR!! -.-

[overall]
it seem ok, I enjoy it! but too few finish sound, add some finish sound please

[cute]
01:38:500 should follow vocal -- move to 01:38:318 and change to slider (set end at 01:38:682)
02:16:681 should follow vocal -- (6) change to 4 times / (7) move to 02:17:590 / (8) move to 02:17:954 and change end to 02:18:863
02:19:227 add hit circle
02:19:590 change to 4 times
03:05:772 should follow vocal -- same as above
03:15:226 should follow vocal -- same as above

[Tsundere~]
01:03:228 should follow beat -- (1) change end to 01:03:409 / (2) chage end to 01:03:773 no, i don't wanna change it
02:18:863 should follow beat -- same as above no either
02:22:500 add new combo
02:23:772 delete new combo
02:24:681 add new combo
02:25:409 delete new combo
02:26:681 add new combo
03:08:317 should follow beat -- same as above no either

Garven wrote:

[General]
I personally dislike sliders with a tiny graphic for me to follow with my cursor. The non-bright follow circle is also difficult to follow for me. Is that a personal dislike? I better get another complain about that =w=

[Cute]
02:37:227 -> 02:59:590 This is a rather long break. Consider mapping some of it starting from 02:45:772 maybe? It is good for easier diff to have a long brake =w=.

[Tsundere~]
I died in the first 10 seconds of play.That's the taste of Tsundere XD Appears/sounds fine to me though.thanks

I guess all I have are personal gripes rather than mods. Looks great, though! Star~ thanks

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:

- Remove "anime" from tags. It'll be set as the genre. roger
- Though it'll get removed anyway, just FYI, there are two spaces between "ova" and "anime" in Tsundere~, so be wary of that. roger
- Delete .osb and Full Submit Deleted and full submitted

Cute:

Combo Mod~
00:20:683 (9) - New Combo here instead of 00:21:773 (1)
00:33:410 (2) - New Combo here instead of 00:32:864 (1)
01:45:045 (2) - New Combo here instead of 01:44:500 (1)
02:19:590 (10) - New Combo here instead of 02:20:681 (1)
02:28:318 (3) - New Combo here instead of 02:27:227 (1)
03:09:045 (6) - New Combo here instead of 03:10:499 (1)

02:16:681 (6) - New Combo.
02:25:409 (5) - ^
03:02:863 (5) - ^
03:12:317 (4) - ^
03:17:772 (6) - ^
03:20:317 (10) - ^

^ fixed

Normal Mod~
02:37:045 ~ 02:59:590 - This is a pretty long break... it is the solo guitar part, nothing to map anyway and i don't want the score beyond 10M

Tsundere~

If orioncomet and DJPop are going to make an Insane(? Must be if estimate 5 stars), I don't really see the point of this diff. No need 3 Insanes 0.0. IMO, you should just get rid of this diff, and make an Easy diff.

If this was Hard, or if orioncomet/DJPop were going to make Hard, it'll be okay, but... eh. i told them to make insane XD

I mod anyway, in case you disagree >.< actually, this is the difficulty between hard and insane =w=

Combo Mod~
00:47:955 (4) - New Combo, because beginning of jump damn, u right XD

Normal Mod~
02:37:045 ~ 02:59:590 - This is a pretty long break... for the easiest difficulty, long brake will help them recover their energy XD

YGOkid8 wrote:

between Hard and Insane is...
what, still sounds and looks like an Insane to me
But yea, you need an Easy. A Normal and 3 Insanish beatmaps will be looked at Approved, so...

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  • Offset: 2870 (resnap all notes)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Delete these files: "button-left.png", "button-middle.png" and "button-right.png"
  • Offset: 2870 (resnap all notes)

LoweH wrote:

Hi

Flat-chested
00:54:869 (4) - Add new timing here without audio or lower audio (?)

nicemap Starrr**

termerys wrote:

LoweH wrote:

Hi

Flat-chested
00:54:869 (4) - Add new timing here without audio or lower audio (?)

nicemap Starrr**

umm..., there's no timing point there, if there's mistake in time, it have another timing point at 00:55:233 which is have kiai.

Leorda wrote:

[DJPop's Cool]
02:34:504 (B) - The break are too long, map something else?
Not fit.
03:36:595 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:36:504 (5), and then move this spinner to 03:36:504 and extend to 03:38:140?
X
03:39:504 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:39:413 (4), and then move this spinner to 03:39:413 and extend to 03:40:867?
X

Leorda wrote:

SWASDI!

[Skin]
I don't like when the spinner-metre is cut-off at right-side, the spinner-circle is cut-off the star picture in lower-left, and sliderscorepoint is cut-off. You should fix this umm... i think that the spinner-metre is not that annoyying and for another thing, and for other, let me have time to figure it out.

[Flat-chested] all fixed
00:20:324 (6) - Make symetric and new combo here?
00:23:233 (1) - I think whistle here is not fit at all, use finish instead?
00:31:233 (4) - Add a finish at the end of slider?
00:33:415 (1) - Add a finish?
00:34:869 (1) - ^
00:55:233 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:58:142 (1) - ^
01:01:051 (1) - Add a finish?
01:06:869 (2) - New combo here?
01:30:141 (1) - Add a finish?
01:35:960 (7) - New combo here?
01:38:869 (1) - I think whistle here is not fit at all, use finish instead?
01:47:596 (12) - New combo, since it's long for easy diff
01:50:505 (1) - Add a finish?
01:59:232 (8) - New combo, since it's long for easy diff
02:22:505 (2) - New combo?

[Cute] all done
01:30:141 (1) - Add a finish?
02:15:050 (4) - Ugly slider! Make it curve!
02:17:959 (3) - ^ this one i made it a right angle instead.
02:37:413 (B) - The break are too long, map something else? No thanks
03:04:504 (5) - Ugly slider! Make it curve!
03:13:231 (3) - ^

[DJPop's Cool] i'll let him decide
02:34:504 (B) - The break are too long, map something else?
03:36:595 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:36:504 (5), and then move this spinner to 03:36:504 and extend to 03:38:140?
03:39:504 (1) - How about, delete the object at 03:39:413 (4), and then move this spinner to 03:39:413 and extend to 03:40:867?

[Tsundere] done
00:12:142 (x) - Add note? let them have a little brake for their hand after a long continuous hit circle
01:01:051 (6) - New combo?
01:09:596 (4) - ^
02:11:777 (1) - Move the new combo to 02:11:232 (5)?

Not bad
STAR Kudosu!

VanMoNky wrote:

[DJPop's Cool]
-- Add kiai times like other diffs or make a single kiai time from 03:00:322 to 03:23:595.
Added.
00:36:324 (3,4) - Oh, bad distance snap. Solve this by rotate the (3) vertically. Or something else.
Fixed.
03:11:504 (11,12) - They are stacked up. It's a bad idea.
Done by mistake = ="
Fixed.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Add "DJPop" in the tags box. added
2. The maximum comboburst is 500px width and 767px height. Yours are too big. [!] then, i use the original one
3. The sliderfollowcircle rotates unsmoothly. don't want to fix it because i like this one
4. Remove the star.png image. It's useless. deleted

[Flat-chested] Fixed all
00:07:960 (4) - Distance error.
00:08:688 - Add a note here then add finish.
00:31:233 (4) - Add finish at the end.
00:33:415 (1) - Add finish.
00:34:869 (1) - ^
00:48:324 (1) - Its placement is too hard for easy diff compared with the time between the end of spinner and the beginning of slider. Move it closer to the center.
00:52:324 (1) - ^
00:55:233 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:03:960 (7) - Add new combo, then..
01:05:414 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
01:06:869 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:30:141 (1) - Add finish.
01:35:960 (7,8) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:45:414 (7) - Add new combo.
01:47:596 (12) - Add new combo at the beginning and the end.
01:58:505 (6) - Add new combo.
02:10:868 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
02:19:595 (7) - Add new combo, then..
02:21:050 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
02:34:141 (1) - Add finish.
02:37:050 - This green timing is the last timing you're using. Remove the rest.

[Cute] Added
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes or claps.

[DJPop's Cool] He fixed it.
-- Add kiai times like other diffs or make a single kiai time from 03:00:322 to 03:23:595.
00:36:324 (3,4) - Oh, bad distance snap. Solve this by rotate the (3) vertically. Or something else.
03:11:504 (11,12) - They are stacked up. It's a bad idea.

[Tsundere~]
01:03:233 (1,2) - Extend them one 1/4 tick. if it is 1/4, it is too long for a word
02:18:868 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:00:322 (4) - Add new combo. OK
03:08:322 (1,2) - Extend them one 1/4 tick. like the first one

Star.

Leorda wrote:

SWASDI!

[Skin]
I don't like when the spinner-metre is cut-off at right-side Fixed, the spinner-circle is cut-off the star picture in lower-left Fixed, and sliderscorepoint is cut-off i use the original one instead then. You should fix this

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- kill .osb file
- Your Easy and Normal aren't easy or normal enough for me.
- some break time on some diffs is a bit long.
- Red combocolour really fit with the BG and make those notes really hard to see, fix it.
- offset 2866 - Resnap all note.

[Flat-chested]
- normal hitsound are too loud.
00:52:324 (1) - delete.

[Cute]
- normal hitsound are too loud.
00:23:233 (1) - replace sound whistle with finish.
01:38:869 (1) - ^
03:23:595 (1) - add sound finish.

[DJPop's Cool]
Cool.

[Tsundere~]
- normal hitsound are too loud.
seem fine.