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Afilia Saga - S.M.L

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furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Anxient, the ctrl+g seemed pretty cool, changed most of them

01:04:800 (1) - slider end doesn't sync with vocal on blue tick
02:59:850 (6) - remove the jump from 5 and made it blanket the 2 slider
Krauv
50 posts
Joined August 2014
Krauv
Hey, sorry I got to this so late. Got held up with school, jury duty, whatever. Anyway, from Krauv's Queue.

Easy
00:20:400 (1) - move up and right a couple grid spaces to align better with previous slider (makes a straight line)
01:33:600 (2) - move to 01:33:450
01:51:900 (2) - move diagonally (northeast) one grid space
02:06:000 (4) - move down a grid space
04:13:200 (1) - not blanketed to its potential with (3)
04:40:200 (1,2) - unstack
Normal
00:21:600 (3) - blanket (2)?
01:06:000 (1,2,3) - move (3) closer to (2) so the spacing between each slider is the same
01:22:200 (4) - ctrl + g
04:09:600 (3) - ^
Hard
AR to 7.2? (seems incredibly fast)
01:51:150 (3) - stack under (2) to keep consistency
02:01:950 (5) - seems intentional, but I'll say it anyways (felt super strange while playing). spacing
04:17:250 (3) - blanket (2)

Mhmm. These are all suggestive. Don't listen to them if you feel like it. Anyway, good luck on your map.
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Krauv, changed most of what you mentioned except pretty much the ctrl + g
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
Hi
You requested a mod from me via my queue, but I already modded it, so I don't think it'll be useful :P
Sorry (Note: You can ask me via PM if there is an other map you want me to mod)
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
[General]
  1. Add "NouCome" to tags ? since the this anime name is so long so we called it NouCome
  2. I think title should be "S･M･L☆" since the official source have that star symbol in title http://afiliasaga.jp/page/sml/ , http://noucome.jp/goods/?page=cd
  3. Why not use "normal-slidertick"? it canl make hitsound in easy a bit more consistent
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:800 - Why skip this beat? it sound like 00:22:200 - which you mapped it here imo
  2. 00:57:000 (3,2) - Aesthetic- improve stack here
  3. 00:58:500 (4) - Finish sound a bit redundant here
  4. 01:04:800 (1) - Whistle head, tail, repeat arrow to emphasis vocal here ?
  5. 01:17:400 (3) - Ctrl+G make flow here 01:17:400 (3,4,1) - a bit better imo
  6. 01:34:500 (1) - remove NC? I don't see any reason to NC here
  7. 01:45:300 (5,6) - Ctrl+G these and flow seems a bit better here imo
  8. 01:45:600 (1,2) - Remove clap at tail ? sound a bit not right there imo
  9. 01:52:500 (6) - x168 y288 , it greatly improve pattern here a bit imo
  10. 02:58:200 (1) - This NC make NC pattern a bit inconsistent here since you NC like mostly downbeat on in kiai but then you only NC this one
    01:31:800 (5,6,7,8) - ,04:03:000 (6,7,8,9), - Here is the same vocal as the one I mention but you don't nc on 3rd white tick like what you do here 02:58:050 (3,4,1,2) -
  11. 03:27:150 (4,5) - Spacing here seems a bit too sudden I don't think 03:27:300 (5) - is that really impact to make a jumps , well 03:27:300 (5,1) - this one does worth a jumps
  12. 04:17:700 (6,7,1) - Make spacing here consistent , these notes sound same imo and it can make a flow here a bit consistent
  13. 04:19:725 - Add a note here so the rhythm here will be a bit sound better
  14. 04:26:100 (5) - Ctrl+G this would make flow a bit better here 04:25:800 (4,5,1) - imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:300 (4,2) - Blanket ?
  2. 00:14:850 (3,4) - 1/1 slider sound a bit better here
    SPOILER
  3. 00:19:650 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:21:000 (3) - Ctrl+G this might improve flow a bit here 00:20:700 (2,3,4) -
  5. 01:09:600 (1,2,3) - Make spacing consistent here ? sound not right to increase spacing here 01:10:050 (2,3) - imo
  6. 01:43:050 (4,1) - Stack this and it play nice for me
  7. 01:49:200 (1,2) - Not good to jumps like this imo you even break the flow (?) here too 01:49:200 (1,2) - that a bit too much for hard diff imo
  8. 02:03:300 (3) - Ctrl+G this might improve flow here 02:02:850 (2,3,1) - a bit but try to organize spacing after you ctrl+g too if you accept this
  9. 02:04:800 (1,2) - Similiar to 01:49:200 (1,2) -
  10. 02:18:900 (4) - Make it like? so it flow with (1) a bit better
    SPOILER
  11. 02:24:000 (1,2,3) - Make spacing consistent here ? so the pattern here will be consistent too 02:24:000 (1,2,3) - you already make great jumps here 02:24:600 (3,4) - no need to increas spacing here 02:24:300 (2,3) - imo
  12. 02:36:450 (2,3) - This jumps is not that necessary in hard imo since (3) play rather sudden , sudden jumps not always good in hard imo
  13. 02:41:100 (2) - Ctrl+G this would make spacing and flow here 02:40:800 (1,2,3) - a bit better
  14. 03:02:100 (2,3) - Stack here would play a bit better imo
  15. 03:27:300 (4) - I'd place this note like this
    SPOILER
    play better imo
  16. 03:43:800 (3) - Ctrl+G this would make flow and spacing here 03:43:500 (2,3) - a bit better , If you feel aware about how to place (4) try this
    SPOILER

    I think flow and spacing in this diff can be improved a bit
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:200 (5) - x256 y248 ? flow a bit better imo
  2. 01:11:700 (3,4) - Focus on vocal sound a bit better here imo
    SPOILER
  3. 01:20:700 (1) - Just one 1/1 circle is okay here mapping 1/2 beat here sound a bit too much
  4. 01:26:700 (4,5) - Try this ?
    SPOILER
  5. 01:28:500 (2,3) - Similiar to 01:11:700 (3,4) -
  6. 03:02:700 (4,5) - Similiar to 01:26:700 (4,5) -
  7. 04:02:100 (2,3) - Try this ?
    SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:800 (2) - I'd try not to mess vocal much here since it a bit hard for beginners imo eventhough you make repeat slider here
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:200 (2) -, 00:09:600 (2) - ^
  3. 00:12:000 (1,2,3,4) - 4 notes like this in 200 bpm is a bit too exhaust for beginner imo
  4. 00:13:200 (1,2) - This rhythm sound not right to me since you ending (1) on downbeat(big white tick) that sound pretty emphasized here and you also start (2) on not that much emphasized beat, try this
    SPOILER
    if you fixed this , fix the rhythm after this too
  5. 00:34:800 (1,2) - This sound better imo
    SPOILER
  6. 01:47:100 (2) - Ending this slider here 01:47:700 - sound better imo
  7. 01:51:900 (2) - Ending this slider here 01:52:500 - sound better imo
  8. 03:00:000 (2,3) - try this ?
    SPOILER
  9. 03:28:800 (2) - This sound better
    SPOILER
  10. 04:04:800 (2,3) - Same as 03:00:000 (2,3) -
Good luck :)
Meyrink
728 posts
Joined February 2014
Meyrink
Hi o/ ! Try to pick what u like , these are just suggestions owo ! just take more attention to Red Things

General
  1. You Can Also Add "NouKome" To Tags Like In MyAnimeList
  2. BG Is a bit Wierd For ME cuz of titles And Also Wrong Size ! Why not try to find Another BG ? I've Made a BG Hope u like it
    Cute BG
    BG Link : http://puu.sh/gmb5Y/daff8ee9ab.jpg
  3. Easy diff 1,77 stars owo Next time u make a high bpm Song Try lower SV And Simplify rhythms more

Easy
  1. For this BPM And Density maby a higher AR Would work better ! 3.5 or 4
  2. 00:09:600 (2) - Imo this Reverse don't fit there like 00:04:800 (2,2) - u can try this Rhythm
  3. 00:12:000 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard ! i think ! try this maby ? Rhythm
  4. 00:15:000 (2) - idk i didn't like this rhythm there ! Try To make that slider start here 00:14:850 - Like This
  5. 00:17:400 (2) - ^
  6. 00:19:650 (2) - ^
  7. 00:22:200 (2) - Try This Rhythm There
  8. 00:34:800 (1,2) - 1/2 Usage at This bpm in easy diff is too hard imo ! Avoid it , u can just delet this 00:35:850 (2) -
  9. 03:28:800 (2,1) - 1/2 Also here ! Change rhythm there to remove the 1/2
  10. 00:36:900 (2) - i think a Circle fits there more than slider ! even if it will skip this 00:37:200 - !
  11. 00:41:700 (2) - why not to make this instead ? Rhythm
  12. 00:51:600 (2,3) - i'd replace this rhytm with along slider
  13. 00:56:400 (1) - Too Risky to have this stacked under this slider 00:54:000 (1) -it may be unrankable !
  14. 00:58:200 (2) - This Touching HP Bar ! Lower it ! Prove
  15. 01:43:800 (2) - ^
  16. 01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - idk seems hard for me Try this maby ? Rhythm Suggestion
  17. 02:27:600 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  18. 01:04:800 - Why this green point with 0.75 SV ? owo
  19. 02:31:200 - ^
  20. 04:40:200 (1,2) - Avoid Stacks In easy, It's also wierd and sudden because there no stack in all the diff ! remove it and make a 1/1 Slider , Or Just remove it keep it empty i missed there ;w; while testing the map
  21. 04:40:650 (1) - Make Spinner start here 04:40:800 - Better

Normal
  1. 00:27:300 (1) - I'de remove this circle to keep ot consistent with the easy diff ! and it's nice to start from 00:27:600 -
  2. 00:36:150 (3,4) - Personal Rhythm Suggestion Cuz i find That a bit hard to play ! Click Here
  3. 00:45:600 (3,4) - ^
  4. 02:12:000 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:40:500 (2) - imo i think circle is better ! and try to make blanket Rhythm| Placement
  6. 00:49:050 (1) - not really neccesary to put long slider there with vocals ! cuz i skipped this beat 00:49:200 - ! try this Rhythm
  7. 00:55:200 (2,3,4,5) - Kinda Hard Imo ! u can turn this to 2 Sliders for Vocal Like this! ! How about this
    Placements ?
  8. 01:10:800 (1,2,3) - This 1/2 Slider After a 1/1 sound weird for me ! i'd rather use a 1/2 Circle Then a 1/1 Slider ! Like This
  9. 03:42:450 (2,3) - ^
  10. 01:18:000 (1) - Nice Slider hh
  11. 01:20:700 (1) - I Prefer a Circle Instead Of Slider
  12. 01:26:700 (4) - Same thing , and maby other places like this in the diff ! like 01:36:300 (4) - & 02:53:100 (4) - & 03:02:700 (4) - & 03:57:900 (4) - & 04:07:500 (4) - etc..
  13. 02:26:400 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard and a 1/2 Slider after it ! u can turn them to 2x 1/1 sliders
  14. 02:57:300 (2,3,1) - Tricky pattern idk how to improve it to make it more clear
  15. 03:07:500 (3,1,2) - ^
  16. 03:10:800 (1) - i'd put this circle somwhere to avoid stacking under slider 03:09:600 (3) -
  17. 04:40:200 (1,2) - Yup ! This Again
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks CelsiusLK, changed most of it and a few other glaring errors I missed

[Insane]
00:19:800 - left it, removed at 00:22:200 instead to keep pattern
00:58:500 (4) - 4 finishes for 4 sliders just seems to fit for me
01:04:800 (1) - done and repeated on similar sections
01:45:600 (1,2) - double clap is a constant pattern through most of song, don't want to change this part alone

[Hard]
01:43:050 (4,1) - jump would become too far for hard

Thanks Meyrink, some of yours collided with CelsiusLK so I had to pass them as they were already changed

[General]
kept my background but changed the resolution
easy star diff went down a bit :D

[Easy]
02:27:600 (1,2,3,4) - moved it a bit but kept the rhythm to emphasise the 4 beats
01:04:800 - carried over from other diffs but gone now

[Normal]
00:49:050 (1) - prefer following the vocals here
Intelli
842 posts
Joined July 2014
Intelli
Hey, from my q. Sorry it took so long, the queue got filled like crazy.

As always, my mods are subjective. It's your map, bro.

Easy:
  1. 00:34:800 (1) - Make it more in line with the flow of the last combo(it juts upward a bit atm)

  2. 01:24:600 (2) - Curve

  3. 01:27:000 (2) - ^

  4. 01:40:200 (1,2) - Is this in line?

  5. 02:08:100 (1,2) - ^

  6. 02:55:800 (2,1) - ^

  7. 03:10:800 (1) - Remove NC (maybe)

  8. 03:25:050 (1) - Remove NC

  9. 04:40:200 (1,2) - Slider
Pretty good, other then little errors.

Normal:
  1. 00:22:800 (1) - Remove NC (maybe)

  2. 01:25:800 (1,2,3) - Kinda a sudden direction change for a Normal

  3. 01:36:300 (4) - Curve, it doesn't make sense to have a straight slider in the middle of a bunch of curved ones

  4. 02:03:900 (1) - Remove NC

  5. 02:53:100 (4) - Curve

  6. 03:10:800 (1) - Remove NC (maybe)

  7. 03:36:000 (1) - ^

  8. 03:57:900 (4) - Curve (again)

  9. 04:07:500 (4) - ^
Alot better then Easy imo. Well done.

GLHF ranking <3
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks IntelliTroodon, sorry my response also took so long :P

Changed most of it except for a few parts where the numbers didn't correspond with the time and it looked fine to me anyway
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
:333/

Try to use this bg instead?

furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf

Chaoslitz wrote:

:333/

Try to use this bg instead?

SPOILER


oooooo Thanks for the pic :)
XiMerx
384 posts
Joined March 2014
XiMerx
Sup? NM req from my queueue.

  • Ez

  1. 00:39:600 (4) - Do not overlap with 2, it confuses players who had just started.
  2. 01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - W0ah, these 4 sliders can make players screw up a lil bit, put them closer?
  3. 02:27:600 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 04:27:900 (2) - I would recommend repeating this, and place the notes after this at your distance snap.
  5. 04:32:700 (2) - ^
  6. 04:37:500 (2) - ^

  • Insane

  1. 00:48:600 (3,4,5) - I would reverse this, because 5 seems to be more expressive than 3,4. 3,4 becomes slider and 5 becomes 2 hit circles.
  2. 00:56:400 (1) - I would place this in the middle x256 y192
  3. 01:24:000 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+G each
  4. 01:32:100 (6) - Overlap with 2
  5. 01:33:900 (1,2,3) - Converting all these to 1/4 sliders would be more amazing
  6. 03:00:300 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 01:36:300 (2,3,4,5) - The voice goes dragging and hitcircles would be weird. Consider this:

  8. 03:04:200 (3,4,5) - Same idea ^. 03:04:200 (3,4) becomes a slider and 5 becomes 2 hit circles.
Sorry, couldn't mod Normal and Hard because to me, they are good enough.
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks XiMerx, changed all except these few

[Easy]
01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - They are at distance snap so I can't really move them closer

[Insane]
01:24:000 (1,2,3,4) - This would make the flow from previous combo really wierd and I prefer the current distance between each slider
01:32:100 (6) - It's intended to stack on slider end
01:33:900 (1,2,3) - Prefer it at 1/3 to match beat and consistency with other sections
03:04:200 (3,4,5) - Left this one but changed the previous
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
Hello! R4 ticket used from my queue~

[> General <]
  1. - There's an .osb file that you might not use it for your map, i guess to remove it?
  2. - I might think the last three diff's spread has a huge gap. Like Insane and Hard, 4.89SR > 3.72SR which is away by 1.17. And maybe Normal and Hard, 3.72SR > 2.27SR, away by 1.45. It's quite big imo. Well, it might be the reason of the song is too fast, so i think it' not a big deal.
  3. - What "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox during breaks" are used for? If not, unchecked them.
  4. - On tags, "with my" with your... who?
[> Easy <]
  1. 00:28:800 (2) - I might think you'll need to curve a bit more on the first curve of this slider, at least on x:164|y:148 or closer to it.
  2. 00:50:100 (4,2) - Maybe you should split these two notes, not closely to stacking. It's recommended for notes to be very clear for beginners on easier diffs.
  3. 01:12:000 (2) - Not sure but, try making a symmetry here between two curves on this slider.
  4. 01:17:400 (3,1) - I can clearly see this blanket is not quite curved well, recorrect it.
  5. 01:33:900 (3,1) - I might help you with this flow for improving it > http://puu.sh/gMbow/04acd1c5aa.png
  6. 01:45:600 (2,1,2) - Try to do the same pattern as you've done on 01:50:400 (2,1,2) -
  7. 02:29:400 (4,1) - Recorrect blanket~
  8. 02:39:600 (4) - Same as 01:12:000 (2) -
  9. 03:32:400 (1,2) - It could've been neater if both of these sliders had the same sliding position.
  10. - Very good diff.
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:03:600 (1,2) - Idk recorrect double blanket.
  2. 00:12:000 (1,2,3,4) - I feel the spacing here is quite wrong, try to check this.
  3. 00:37:500 (1,2,3,4) - Why not try a symmetry here? it can possibly make circle (3) being blanketed under two sliders.
  4. 01:18:000 (1) - A weird slider to me, i'm not sure if it would be okay for normal players... but that's just my opinion.
  5. 01:34:800 (1,2) - Recorrect double blanket~
  6. 01:49:200 (1,2,3) - ^, maybe idk..
  7. 02:23:100 (2,1,2) - Would've been better if you made a little bit of parallel here.
  8. 02:28:800 (3,2) - Stack, or something?
  9. 02:32:400 (1,2) - Recorrect double blanket~
  10. 02:33:600 (3,4,1) - Almost made a perfect symmetry here, but i don't think it's important imv.
  11. 02:59:700 (3,4) - Make both the same position? same reason as the previous diff.
  12. 03:33:750 (2) - Same as 01:18:000 (1) -
  13. - Quite nice, few double blankets need a few checks.
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:21:300 (4) - Improve playstyle by Ctrl + G on this, might flow good at least.
  2. 00:27:300 (3,1) - Double blanket or something?
  3. 00:45:000 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:50:850 (2,3,1) - I thought a small jump should be between slider (3) and (1), not (2) and (3).
  5. 01:15:300 (4,2) - Is this overlap on purpose?
  6. 01:26:700 (2,3,4) - Balance the spacing here a bit.
  7. 01:54:600 (3,3) - Idk, but trying to blanket here?
  8. 01:58:500 (4) - Replace clap with finish?
  9. 02:20:100 (3,1) - Recorrect blanket~
  10. 02:34:200 (3,4) - ^
  11. 02:36:000 (1,2,3) - I don't feel this fine, i might suggest you to balance the spacing here.
  12. 02:40:725 (5) - Remove this circle, you haven't added it on other parts that's similar to this track.
  13. 03:03:300 (4,3) - A bit perfect stack needed it.
  14. 03:48:600 (3,1) - Spacing~ I know you're trying to make symmetry here, but i prefer to use DS here.
  15. 04:12:450 (3,4) - Recorrect double blanket~
  16. - Almost the same comment as Normal, but few distance spacings aren't well-balanced, so i guess you should check a few times too.
[> Insane <]
  1. 00:21:450 (6,3) - Trying to make blanket?
  2. 00:21:600 (1,2) - Extend a little bit of spacing, for emphasizing with the previosu notes with it ofc.
  3. 00:31:200 (1,2,3,4) - Weird flow here, i wonder that you did increase each note's spacing. Perhaps, try to make a few formation here to make it understandable, like 00:34:800 (1,2,3,4) - for example.
  4. 01:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:17:325 (3) - Ctrl + G or something?
  6. 02:04:500 (6,4) - Stack perfect?
  7. 02:07:650 (3,1) - Is this overlap on purpose??
  8. 02:16:350 (4,1) - Wasn't this kind of flow is against the ranking criteria?!
  9. 02:39:300 (6,1) - Recorrect double blanket~
  10. 03:31:650 (2,3) - Same as 00:21:600 (1,2) -
  11. 03:36:900 (4,1) - Well, you haven't done any 1/4 jump on other tracks like this one, looks way too sudden.
  12. 03:59:400 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:31:200 (1,2,3,4) -
  13. 04:14:250 (5,5) - Recorrect blanket~
  14. - This diff look pretty excellent, some minor issue found here. There might be more than what i mentioned here, so find them.

I kinda liked the song a bit close ;3 Sorry if i can't bring this to the ranking process, but it's the rules not to overdo it much.
Good luck with this!
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Gray Veyron, went through and updated quite a bit that I can't even remember what I changed

-General-
"with my" is part of the english title

-Easy-
01:12:000 (2) - This looks symmetrical to me when i rotate it
01:45:600 (2,1,2) - Looks the same and rotated to me as 01:50:400 (2,1,2)

-Normal-
00:37:500 (1,2,3,4) - Wasn't quite sure what you meant, tried something else instead

-Insane-
Edited quite a number of patterns including those you mentioned
Speed of Snail
548 posts
Joined March 2014
Speed of Snail
Well, I have to say good job so far, there really isn't much for me to really crack down on (granted I'm only looking at hard/insane here).
So this is gonna be me nitpicking, although I'm pretty sure that's what you want anyways.

HARD

First off, Might just be me, but I feel the AR is a little oddly slow for the map and makes it look faster than it actually is, I'd recommend a slight increase to 7.5 or 7.7

00:18:000 - (1,2,3,4) - This Pattern here feels very robotic to play, Id recommend increasing the spacing so that the tails of each are about at the same level and angling the sliders towards the next combo.

00:31:950 - (1,2) - This flick feels a little strenuous for a Hard difficulty, I'd reduce the spacing here slightly.

01:58:350 - (3,4) - I'd recommend slightly spacing these two, the lack on consistency from the flick last time this pattern occurred is visible

02:17:700 - (3) - I don't like the angle of this slider, I'd recommend tilting it slightly so that the head is closer to the tail of the previous slider and that the tail leads to the next slider properly.

03:27:000 - (3,4) - Listening to the song I feel like these two sliders should actually be one longer slider, if you want to cut the length you can always make it snake on 1/12 or 1/16 snap to reduce speed and length.

04:25:650 - (2) - This circle is very high on the grid, while it doesn't seem to have any errors while playing I wouldn't want to take chances with a note that's half off the "map able" grid.

That's it for the Hard, if anything else I'd say it feels very difficult for what's supposed to be a "Hard" map, but seeing as the difficulty spread holds alright it shouldn't be a problem.

INSANE

03:15:300 - 03:37:200 - Honestly, This whole section, There should be notes starting from the initial time there, and when you did have notes later, I felt like they weren't highlighting the guitar which was the dominant track and would've been very fun to play, I'd recommend remapping this entier segment with that in mind.

Yea honestly, Outside that one segment, I didn't see anything I'd want to change in the insane, I played it through maybe 5 or 6 times modding it alone, I could see my self playing this enough to learn and SS it. the Insane is a very good map and I hope you get this ranked soon, GL. :D
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks TheOnlyLeon

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

HARD

First off, Might just be me, but I feel the AR is a little oddly slow for the map and makes it look faster than it actually is, I'd recommend a slight increase to 7.5 or 7.7 Went with 7.4

00:18:000 - (1,2,3,4) - This Pattern here feels very robotic to play, Id recommend increasing the spacing so that the tails of each are about at the same level and angling the sliders towards the next combo. Moved and reangled a bit

00:31:950 - (1,2) - This flick feels a little strenuous for a Hard difficulty, I'd reduce the spacing here slightly. Reduced

01:58:350 - (3,4) - I'd recommend slightly spacing these two, the lack on consistency from the flick last time this pattern occurred is visible Not sure what you meant but kept it to be consistent with previous

02:17:700 - (3) - I don't like the angle of this slider, I'd recommend tilting it slightly so that the head is closer to the tail of the previous slider and that the tail leads to the next slider properly. Adjusted

03:27:000 - (3,4) - Listening to the song I feel like these two sliders should actually be one longer slider, if you want to cut the length you can always make it snake on 1/12 or 1/16 snap to reduce speed and length. Prefer to keep this on 1/2 beat

04:25:650 - (2) - This circle is very high on the grid, while it doesn't seem to have any errors while playing I wouldn't want to take chances with a note that's half off the "map able" grid. Moved

INSANE

03:15:300 - 03:37:200 - Honestly, This whole section, There should be notes starting from the initial time there, and when you did have notes later, I felt like they weren't highlighting the guitar which was the dominant track and would've been very fun to play, I'd recommend remapping this entier segment with that in mind. Remapped some of it, left the break there as the song really needed a break somewhere
Synpoo
616 posts
Joined August 2013
Synpoo
Hi, from my modding queue !

[Insane]
03:15:450 - I feel like this guitar solo should be mapped up until at least 03:20:400 or something if you still want a break in the map.

[Hard]
Consider raising the AR to 8
00:10:050 (2) - put this on the red tick
00:11:250 (2) - ^
00:31:950 (1,2) - could increase the spacing here a bit
04:34:800 (1) - this slider doesn't look as nice as the rest of them

[Easy]
00:22:800 (4) - NC

Couldn't really find any problems honestly...great mapset, and good luck getting it ranked :)
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Synpoo!

Synpoo wrote:

[Insane]
03:15:450 - I feel like this guitar solo should be mapped up until at least 03:20:400 or something if you still want a break in the map. Added some stuff

[Hard]
Consider raising the AR to 8 Used 7.8
00:10:050 (2) - put this on the red tick Shortened slider and added circle in front and adjusted to red tick
00:31:950 (1,2) - could increase the spacing here a bit Seemed fine
04:34:800 (1) - this slider doesn't look as nice as the rest of them Wow it was ugly, better now

[Easy]
00:22:800 (4) - NC Done
DahplA
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Joined March 2014
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General
  1. Maybe add "SML" to tags for lazy people who can't type the periods like me?
Insane
  1. 00:04:800 (1) - Maybe move this so it doesn't touch 00:05:700 (4) -
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:100 (4) - ^
  3. 00:19:500 (2) - Not stacked properly
  4. 00:52:800 (1) - ^
  5. 03:06:900 (6) - Move so it's symmetrical to 03:07:050 (7) - ?
  6. 03:19:050 (6) - This should be mapped to the lyrics.
    SPOILER
  7. 03:31:200 (1) - Not stacked properly
  8. 04:40:200 (1,2) - Maybe change the distance spacing on these because of the last two circles being 1/2 apart, it might confuse people to hitting it too quickly. I'd recommend either making the distance smaller or use fancy slider
  9. 01:04:800 (11) - & 02:31:200 (1) - Isn't this meant to be 3/4?
Hard
  1. 00:10:200 (3) - Was this meant to be stacked?
  2. 00:10:500 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 01:04:800 (5) - & 02:31:200 (5) - You sure this isn't meant to be 3/4?
  4. 02:42:000 (1) - Fix blanket a bit

inb4 /rank
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks DahplA!

DahplA wrote:

General
  1. Maybe add "SML" to tags for lazy people who can't type the periods like me? Haha me too


Insane
  1. 00:04:800 (1) - Maybe move this so it doesn't touch 00:05:700 (4) -
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:100 (4) - ^ Both moved
  3. 00:19:500 (2) - Not stacked properly
  4. 00:52:800 (1) - ^ They seem stacked for me
  5. 03:06:900 (6) - Move so it's symmetrical to 03:07:050 (7) - ? Moved
  6. 03:19:050 (6) - This should be mapped to the lyrics. Changed
    SPOILER
  7. 03:31:200 (1) - Not stacked properly Looks stacked
  8. 04:40:200 (1,2) - Maybe change the distance spacing on these because of the last two circles being 1/2 apart, it might confuse people to hitting it too quickly. I'd recommend either making the distance smaller or use fancy slider Shortened a bit
  9. 01:04:800 (11) - & 02:31:200 (1) - Isn't this meant to be 3/4? Lyrics fall on 2/3
Hard
  1. 00:10:200 (3) - Was this meant to be stacked? Looks stacked
  2. 00:10:500 (1) - Remove NC It's there to tell people its not 1/2
  3. 01:04:800 (5) - & 02:31:200 (5) - You sure this isn't meant to be 3/4? Lyrics fall on 2/3
  4. 02:42:000 (1) - Fix blanket a bit Done
_tasty
161 posts
Joined December 2013
_tasty
STAR~~!
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks ReeChelly!
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki
From ✞Kuki and Moph's Modding Q✞(Sorry it took so long!)

I couldn't find any issues with the easy/normal, but that doesn't mean there aren't, try and get some more modders to focus on these two to make them perfect! :)

Hard
  1. 00:46:350 (3,4) - try this: http://puu.sh/hLuQV/77801aa553.jpg.
  2. 02:52:350 - Map this beat.
Insane
  1. 01:39:300 (5,1) - Could make a small stream here between these notes.
  2. 01:43:500 (2,3,4,5) - Try this here: http://puu.sh/hLvs2/14f9ddb19b.jpg.
  3. 03:37:200 (1) - This is juuust out of snap with the rest of the stream I think, try to fix this if you see a problem.
  4. 04:09:600 (1) - Try making this a reverse slider and removing 04:09:900 (2).
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Kuki!

Kuki wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:46:350 (3,4) - try this: http://puu.sh/hLuQV/77801aa553.jpg. Did this and a few others I spotted
  2. 02:52:350 - Map this beat. Prefer skipping this to match vocals
Insane
  1. 01:39:300 (5,1) - Could make a small stream here between these notes. Stacked for consistency
  2. 01:43:500 (2,3,4,5) - Try this here: http://puu.sh/hLvs2/14f9ddb19b.jpg. Needed the 2nd blue tick for the drum
  3. 03:37:200 (1) - This is juuust out of snap with the rest of the stream I think, try to fix this if you see a problem. Moved a bit
  4. 04:09:600 (1) - Try making this a reverse slider and removing 04:09:900 (2). 04:09:900 (2) Too strong with vocals to remove
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
general:
move offset to 3600

ez:
00:22:050 (3) - start from 00:21:900 ()
01:03:600 (1,2) - fix DS
01:09:600 (3) - normal sample set on repeat
01:19:200 (3) - ^ \\ 01:25:200 (1) - \\ 01:27:600 (1) - \\ 01:30:000 (1) - \\ and for the same sliders on other kiais
01:33:900 (3,1) - fix DS
02:30:000 (1,2) - ^

nrml:
01:19:200 (3) - normal sample set on repeat - and for the same sliders on other kiais

ins:
01:46:500 (2,1) - jump here
01:48:900 (2,1) - ^

not really type of vocals I like, find 2-3 mods and call me
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Sieg!

Changed everything, will find a few more mods
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
Here I am, and here is my mod :)

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:500 (3) - This jump seems out of place
  2. 00:34:800 (1) - Maybe move 1 a bit away from 3
  3. 00:49:050 (5,1) - The vocals, to which (I think) you mapped the slider 1 to, start on 5 already
  4. 00:58:200 (3,4) - Maybe flip 3 and 4 horizontally
  5. 01:18:000 (1) - Maybe flip that vertically
  6. 01:48:750 (1,2) - Looks and plays weird, consider making it go more horizontally
  7. 01:51:150 (1,2) - Like here
  8. 02:12:750 (1) - Maybe move that a bit
  9. 02:27:600 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even when playing, this looks copy/pasted, consider remaking this
  10. 02:56:100 (5,6) - I can't hear anything in the song that would justify these being further spaced than the previous ones
  11. 03:17:100 (2) - Consider filling these empty places with jumps, as you did later
  12. 03:28:800 (1) - You could do a stream here
  13. 04:22:350 (1,2) - Maybe make the ending note not stack with the previous one (same for the following)
That's it, I hope I could help
For further questions, feel free to PM me in-game
Good luck ! :)
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Asonate!

Asonate wrote:

  1. 00:31:500 (3) - This jump seems out of place 2,3,4 makes a triangle
  2. 00:34:800 (1) - Maybe move 1 a bit away from 3 Stacked 1 on 3 instead
  3. 00:49:050 (5,1) - The vocals, to which (I think) you mapped the slider 1 to, start on 5 already Was following the beat this time
  4. 00:58:200 (3,4) - Maybe flip 3 and 4 horizontally I like how it is now more
  5. 01:18:000 (1) - Maybe flip that vertically I prefer it flowing to the next combo instead of previous
  6. 01:48:750 (1,2) - Looks and plays weird, consider making it go more horizontally Moved 1
  7. 01:51:150 (1,2) - Like here
  8. 02:12:750 (1) - Maybe move that a bit Swapped them around
  9. 02:27:600 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even when playing, this looks copy/pasted, consider remaking this Redone
  10. 02:56:100 (5,6) - I can't hear anything in the song that would justify these being further spaced than the previous ones Moved closer
  11. 03:17:100 (2) - Consider filling these empty places with jumps, as you did later Filled
  12. 03:28:800 (1) - You could do a stream here Fine with slider
  13. 04:22:350 (1,2) - Maybe make the ending note not stack with the previous one (same for the following) Moved a couple around
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
Thanks for responding :)
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
[Insane]

  1. 00:17:100 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm, maps the instruments better.
  2. 00:19:500 (2) - Same here. Circle, then Slider so you can emphasize the beat on 00:19:650 - .
  3. 00:31:950 (1) - How about stacking this below 4 so you create a jump from 1>2 instead of from 4>1. Emphasizes vocals much better imo.
  4. 00:42:450 - Theres a beat here you didnt map? :S This is an Insane, feels weird to skip beats especially since you dont seem to be skipping them in later lines.
  5. 00:45:600 (1,2,3,4) - I would space these out more so theyre bigger than 00:44:850 (2,3,4,5) - . Otherwise there is no emphasis.
  6. 00:58:500 (4,1,2) - Deceptive spacing here. Notice how 4>1 is 1/2 spaced, but 1>2 is 1/1 spaced? Yet they are almost the same spacing. Same with
  7. 00:59:850 (4,1) - . If you're going to put 1/1 gaps in your map, you should space them farther apart so its *clear* that theres a 1/1 gap between the two objects and not a large jump. (I would discourage using 1/1 gaps in your Insane to begin with, more often than not they end up just skipping clearly audible beats).
  8. 01:45:600 (1,2) - Not going to use 1/2 circles instead?
  9. 02:02:550 (1,2) - 4 circles instead to be consistent with: 00:36:150 (1,2,3,4) -
  10. 02:24:900 (4,1,2) - Okay, this spacing is good!
  11. 03:13:200 - Theres still vocals... and instruments... why the random break...
  12. 03:27:900 (3,4) - Should have larger spacing here to emphasize the guitar. .
  13. 03:36:000 (1,2) - How about using 1/4 repeat sliders instead? The stream begins on 03:36:000 -
  14. 04:28:800 (1,2) - Circles here would fit better with the vocals. Also, i mentioned this earlier too about consistency. Don't be afraid to use more circles and jumps honestly... You seem to use a lot of 1/2 sliders when circles would fit just as well if not better (because you can map jumps to them and emphasize vocals on like 04:28:950 - and 04:29:250 - Which you can't emphasize when you use 1/2 sliders)
  15. 04:36:300 (3) - Two circles fits better.
[Easy]

  1. 00:12:000 (1) - Remove NC, inconsistent with your pattern.
  2. 00:36:150 (1) - Remove NC.
  3. 00:39:600 (4) - NC, 00:40:800 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:42:600 (2) - NC
  5. 00:43:200 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:44:400 (3) - NC and Remove from 00:45:600 (1) - Now your NC pattern makes more sense. and you don't have random single NC's on like 00:45:600 (1) - .
  7. 01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 sliders are really discouraged on Easies. Also consider that this song is 200 bpm. I've seen maps get disqualified because of 1/2 sliders on 140 bpm maps... Imo, just replace them with circles.
  8. 02:27:600 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  9. 04:10:800 (1) - Just a tip, but, make the control point in the center red instead. Makes the wave curve look nicer.
Tbh, your NC pattern in this diff isn't very consistent. You seem to be NC'ing every 2 measures, but you deviate from this quite often... It results in NC patterns that are very different in length. For example: 00:47:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - The first combo spans 3 measures, the second combo spans 2, and the third combo spans 1, so you already know the first combo is too long and the third combo is too short. Additionally, you have stuff like 00:56:400 (1,2,1,2) - Which *could* work, but I wouldn't recommend it on Easy. Just stay with the 2 measure NC pattern and remove it on 00:57:600 (1) - so visually, beginners can see that the beginning of each new color marks the start of a new line that is 2 measures long. Visual rhythm if you want to call it that. (NC spam is totally fine in higher diffs though)

01:13:200 (4,1,2) - Stuff like this should be one combo. NC on 4., and remove it from 1. Why? because 01:10:800 - Is the beginning of a new 2 measure interval. This 2 measure interval ends on 01:13:200 - (where a new one begins).

Alright, good luck with this set!
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks monstrata, changed pretty much everything (insane suffered my learning process so some stuff are still wierd) except

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]
03:13:200 - Theres still vocals... and instruments... why the random break...I feel after 3 minutes on 200bpm most people would be dying for a break
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hi~ furywolf
form my Queue
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Easy]
  1. 00:45:600 (2) - blanket 00:44:400 (1) - tail point
    SPOILER
    my not good blanket x_x
  2. 01:19:200 (3) - add finish at tail point
  3. 02:25:800 (2,1) - If you can stack this note, beautiful than now
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:200 (1) - blanket this Circle 00:05:700 (2) -
    SPOILER
  2. 00:12:000 (1) - add finish
  3. 00:12:300 (2,3,4) - remove clap
    I think don't need hit sound
  4. 00:31:350 (3) - add NC
    this point is changed Rhythm pattern
  5. 01:00:300 (2,4) - remove finish
    hitting Cymbals point is 01:00:000 (1,3) - only.
  6. 01:33:300 (3,4) - try this Rhythm
  7. 02:59:400 (2,1) - stack!
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:700 (5,6) - If your not reason, stack it
  2. 00:48:900 (4,5) - ctrl + G?
    little jump
  3. 01:37:200 (1,2) - umm I think don't need finish
  4. 01:50:400 (1,2) - I think that you should leave the interval a little more
    01:50:550 (2) - 　move at x180 y224
    01:50:700 (3) - change direction
    SPOILER
  5. 03:43:200 (1) - why not so far of the street pattern hitsound?
  6. 03:51:600 (1) - add finish at head
  7. 04:10:800 (1) - same as above
gl~!!
ai no jumon wo tonaeyou~
furywolf
197 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks litoluna

litoluna wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:200 (3) - add finish at tail point doesn't fit

[Normal]
00:12:300 (2,3,4) - remove clap
I think don't need hit sound i like the claps
00:31:350 (3) - add NC
this point is changed Rhythm pattern keeping nc to every 2 big ticks
01:00:300 (2,4) - remove finish
hitting Cymbals point is 01:00:000 (1,3) - only. i prefer 4 finish
Fixed the rest
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
Hello!

[General]
  • Timing:
  1. BPM: OK!
  2. Offset: OK!

    Folder:
  3. BG: OK! (but quality is not so good)
  4. HS: OK!
  5. LeadIn: OK!

    Other Stuff:
  6. Combo Color: OK!
  7. Song Setup: OK!
  8. General AiMod: You may want to add "SLM☆" to tags
  9. Gap between Hard and Insane is huge, you may want to call this Insane an Extra and map a real Insane
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:400 (1,2,3,4) - This jump is a bit messed up. 00:14:100 (5,1) - This DS should be higher than 00:14:400 (1,2) -, also the DS at 00:14:700 (3,4) - should be higher than 00:14:400 (1,2) - as well
  2. 00:17:550 (4,5) - Swipe DS here to make it sensible
  3. 00:19:050 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:19:500 (2,3) - Increase DS here a bit, you got a very strong rhythm at 00:19:650 (3) - to keep up with this small DS
  5. 00:32:400 (1,4) - Improve this blanket
  6. 00:39:000 (4,5) - Jump here is very random and doesn't emphasizes anything
  7. 00:39:450 (6,1) - Slighly increase the DS here because 00:39:600 (1) - changes the tone of the song
  8. 00:44:250 (5,1) - Make a jump here, using the same DS from 00:43:950 (4,5) - feels very boring to play, and I think 00:44:400 (1) - should get more attention
  9. 00:48:000 (1,2) - Swipe DS here, 00:47:850 (5,1) - this was supposed to have higher DS than 00:48:300 (2,3) -
  10. 00:49:950 (4,5,1) - ^, increase jump to 00:50:400 (1) -
  11. 00:50:700 (2,3,4) - ^, increase jump to 00:51:150 (4) - and make 00:50:700 (2,3) - smaller, too random
  12. 00:51:450 (5,1) - Jump here
  13. 00:53:100 (2,3,4) - Swipe DS here too 00:53:250 (3,4) - you should increase this jump by making 00:53:100 (2,3) - smaller
  14. 00:57:000 (3,4,5) - Shorten DS here, no sense for making it higher , also increase jump here 00:57:450 (5,1) -
  15. 00:58:200 (3,4) - ^
    Well correcting all jumps will take so long and it will be a very painful work, try to look them by yourself, jumps are usually reasonable where you can hear a strong beat, normally the tall white tick and every 2/1, these are normally the strongest ones. You may jump following vocals, but be aware that it may not feel good everywhere. Example 02:10:800 - this point is very strong, so you should create a jump between 02:10:650 (7) - and 02:10:800 (1) - .
  16. 01:06:300 (3,1) - Looks very awkward to stack these I recommend moving 01:07:200 (1) - to somewhere else

    In fact this seens to be the only real issue on this diff, the rest is pretty well done, sliders looks nice overall
[Hard]
  1. 01:17:400 (3,1) - Improve this blanket
  2. 01:43:650 (2,3) - You messed up DS here, the jump should be between these 01:43:650 (2,3) - and not 01:43:200 (1,2) -
  3. 01:56:700 (2,3) - Improve this blanket, just move 01:57:000 (3) - to 21|223
  4. 02:10:800 (1,4) - A bit unpleasant overlap, you could fix it by stacking them
  5. 02:33:000 (3,1) - Would look better if you blanket them, however the spacing here is nice
  6. 02:57:450 (1) - Slider shape is kinda weird, also following vocals here make you lose a beat at 02:57:600 - which sounds very weird imo

    This diff is really good, good job here

I hope this was helpful, don't forget to vote on my Poll
furywolf
197 posts
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Topic Starter
furywolf
Thanks Lumael, I pretty much corrected all your suguestions and am now going through Insane again. I may add a new difficulty soon to bridge the gap
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