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Ishii-Chan - Usual Shitking Railgun

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Thism2
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Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 23 september 2015 at 23:21:42

Artist: Ishii-Chan
Title: Usual Shitking Railgun
Tags: anime otoMAD mad ytpmv to aru kagaku no railgun majutsu index series lapfox trax renard ytp jyu
BPM: 210
Filesize: 23314kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,38 stars, 124 notes)
  2. Hard (3,19 stars, 386 notes)
  3. jyu's Insane (4,72 stars, 525 notes)
  4. Normal (2,19 stars, 197 notes)
Download: Ishii-Chan - Usual Shitking Railgun
Download: Ishii-Chan - Usual Shitking Railgun (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd beatmap and hopefully my first ranked one!
Also special thanks to jyu for GD.

Easy - me
Normal - me
Hard - me
jyu's Insane - jyu

Watch out for the "huh?!" ^^

Pending and ready for BN/modders!

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Moding Thanks
Zarthbenn
Nya_Nya
[ Faded [
WildOne94
Shiguri
Neil Leo
VINXIS
Yauxo
Geronimaa
TheOnlyLeon
neonat
Wafu
Asonate
Mau-nyan
Boobs
Squirrel
Reditum
-Tochi
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History
25-11-2014: Submitted as WIP (only hard done). (checking that the BSS went ok) - failed!
26-11-2014: Tried again to submit as WIP. - success!
27-11-2014: Updated and submitted the easy diff (still WIP). - success!
28-11-2014: Updated and submitted last diff (normal). Now done and pending. - success!
01-12-2014: Updated. Pending and waiting for modders. - success!
08-12-2014: Kind-of remapped the beatmap set with a "simpler" timing. - success!
11-12-2014: Applied mod, updated and submitted. - failed!
12-12-2014: Tried again to submit updates. - failed!
14-12-2014: Was finally able to submit updates. - success!
07-01-2015: (After the holiday break) Applied mod, updated and submitted. - success!
17-01-2015: Applied mod by remapping most of the beatmaps (to fix flow, artistc problems and improve overall quality). Updated and submitted. - success!
17-01-2015: Made som slider speed and spacing changes to easy and normal and some "flow fixes" on hard. Updated and submitted. - success!
25-01-2015: Applied mods, updated and submitted. - success!
27-01-2015: Applied mod, added som slider "kinks" to hard, updated and submitted. - success!
01-02-2015: Applied mod, updated and submitted. Started looking for BAs (BATs). - success!
26-02-2015: Applied new tags. Applied mod, changed most of the hard's style in an attempt to improve the artistics and flow. Updated and submitted. - success!
02-03-2015: Applied mod, updated and submitted. - success!
28-03-2015: Finally got the time to update and submit after a short unwanted break. - success!
06-04-2015: Applied mod, updated and submitted. - success!
18-04-2015: Applied mod, updated and submitted. - success!
18-04-2015: Applied yet another mod, updated and submitted. - success!
23-04-2015: Added custom hitsounds, a new video and som small beatmap changes to the set.- success!
12-05-2015: Made some volume and hitsound improvements.- success!
27-05-2015: Applied mod, updated and submitted. - success!
31-05-2015: Applied mod, updated and submitted. - success!
31-05-2015: Added Asonate's extra difficulty, updated and submitted. - success!
23-06-2015: Made the hard difficulty a little "harder", updated and submitted. - success!
06-07-2015: Added jyu's insane difficulty, updated and submitted. - success!
11-07-2015: Applied mods, added GD contributor names as tags, updated and submitted. - success!
13-08-2015: After a vacation break; mapped a break, made the hard a little harder, updated and submitted.- success!
06-09-2015: Applied mod on my diffs, updated and submitted. - success!
23-09-2015: Applied mod on GD diff, updated and submitted. - success!
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- Soredemo!
- Soredemo? Kono senakatta...
- Dattara, sõ e ni chanai! Tore ga sinde, minas kvader undera. Watashi ga sinuskanai; CHANAI!!
- Huh?!
Last edited by Thism2 , edited 27 times in total.
Zarthbenn
84 posts
Joined December 2013
Zarthbenn
Hello there,

Easy:

01:09:108 (2) - Move to x: 400 to match end of the slider
01:37:108 (3) - Move to x: 448 to be in line with the previous beat and next beat
02:29:108 (4) - Weird positioning with the created symmetry with previous 3 beats (if symmetry was intentional, if so then move 02:25:108 (1) - to x:176 and maybe 02:29:108 (4) - to x:256 y:256)
02:49:679 (2) - lower to y:336 to match previous slider
02:55:965 (5) - raise to y:112 to match previous slider
03:10:822 (1) - lower to y:192 (if intention was to have it in direct middle)
02:10:251 (1) - slider does not really go with anything, maybe move it to 02:04:537 (1) - to go with the string?

Normal:

00:56:822 (4) - Why not have this part in a pattern like this
SPOILER
01:02:822 (1) - Lower a little to have better spacing (more consistent with previous 2 beats that are evenly spaced since all are evenly timed)
01:29:108 (5) - Move to x:192 y:240
01:35:679 (5) - Looks awkwardly placed with created symmetry with the rest of the combo. Maybe move to x:208 y:192?
02:11:394 (1) - Slider feels out of place
02:46:537 (4) - Move to y:272 for symmetry with previous 3 beats. Might have to move 02:46:822 (5) - to x:144 y:192 for spacing then.

Hard:
02:55:537 (4) - Looks a little out of place maybe move it and 02:55:679 (5) - to x:144

Other than that seems like a fun song, good luck!
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Zarthbenn wrote:

Hello there, (Heeey!)

Easy:

01:09:108 (2) - Move to x: 400 to match end of the slider
-> Fixed.
01:37:108 (3) - Move to x: 448 to be in line with the previous beat and next beat
-> Fixed. Nice spotting that!
02:29:108 (4) - Weird positioning with the created symmetry with previous 3 beats (if symmetry was intentional, if so then move 02:25:108 (1) - to x:176 and maybe 02:29:108 (4) - to x:256 y:256)
-> Moved it to x:176. (Yes it was supposed to symetric ^^)
For 02:29:108 (4) - i moved it up to x:256 y:80 and refitted the next couple of beats instead.
02:49:679 (2) - lower to y:336 to match previous slider
-> Fixed!
02:55:965 (5) - raise to y:112 to match previous slider
-> Fixed!
03:10:822 (1) - lower to y:192 (if intention was to have it in direct middle)
-> Fixed! (I'm not sure if i did but i think I'm going have it in the direct middle!)
02:10:251 (1) - slider does not really go with anything, maybe move it to 02:04:537 (1) - to go with the string?
-> I removed the spinner (You mean the spinner right?) and added a slider for the string at 02:04:537 (1) - instead. The idea was that the spinner was supposed to be a kind of "bulid up" after the break, but i think i'm going to go with < break | slider (string part) | break > instead!

Normal:

00:56:822 (4) - Why not have this part in a pattern like this
SPOILER
-> Fixed! That definitely looks nicer, thanks!
01:02:822 (1) - Lower a little to have better spacing (more consistent with previous 2 beats that are evenly spaced since all are evenly timed)
-> Fixed!
01:29:108 (5) - Move to x:192 y:240
-> Fixed! (That's where it was supposed to be anyway...)
01:35:679 (5) - Looks awkwardly placed with created symmetry with the rest of the combo. Maybe move to x:208 y:192?
-> Awkward away! (i.e. Fixed)
02:11:394 (1) - Slider feels out of place
-> Fixed it simmilar to the Easy diff except i kept a much shorter spinner here, just as the second break is about to end. I still think it should be some kind of short "build up" here before the break ends.
02:46:537 (4) - Move to y:272 for symmetry with previous 3 beats. Might have to move 02:46:822 (5) - to x:144 y:192 for spacing then.
-> Fixed!
02:46:822 (5) - was moved to x:160 y:176 instead (i think that's a better pattern).

Hard:
02:55:537 (4) - Looks a little out of place maybe move it and 02:55:679 (5) - to x:144
-> Fixed! (I moved them to x:144 y:272 and made them symmetric with the other pair)

I also remapped the break with the spinner at 02:10:251 (1) - similar to how i changed it in easy and normal.

Other than that seems like a fun song, good luck!
Thank you so much! ^^
Nya_Nya
15 posts
Joined November 2014
Nya_Nya
General
I was looking at the colours. I'm not fussed about what the colours are when I play but it's nice to have the colours of parts of the background. It's a suggestion but have a look at this:
Colour suggestion




Easy
There wasn't many things to correct since you had another person mod it, but.
02:12:537 - A slider feels like it should be here and ending here 02:13:679 - (May edit length accordingly).
02:02:251 - Same as above. End it here 02:03:394 -
03:10:822 (1) - Remove this beat and replace it with a slider until 03:13:108 - It fits nicely.

Alright here comes the fun part, the NC's. I recommend saving before doing this because you may disagree.
Ok. Press CTRL+A then tap Q twice. This selects all of the beats and removes all NC's. 8-) Add a new NC to each of these :P
Enjoy ;)
00:25:108 (1) -
00:53:679 (1) -
00:55:965 (1) -
01:02:822 (1) -
01:07:394 (1) -
01:11:965 (1) -
01:18:822 (1) -
01:21:108 (1) -
01:25:679 (1) -
01:27:965 (1) -
01:30:251 (1) -
01:34:822 (1) -
01:43:965 (1) -
01:53:108 (1) -
02:20:537 (1) -
02:25:108 (1) -
02:29:679 (1) -
02:47:965 (1) -
02:52:251 (1) -
02:54:822 (1) -
02:59:394 (1) -
03:05:679 (1) -

Normal
Like I said in easy. Not much needs to be changed.
00:28:537 (3) - 00:30:822 (1) - Remove NC
03:10:822 (1) - Remove this beat and replace it with a slider until 03:13:108 -

Hard
Previous mod sorted the bits. This diff is brutal (nearly insane). But its well placed out, no change needed.
But like normal can we have a slider at the end please? :3
03:10:822 (1) - Remove this beat and replace it with a slider until 03:13:108 -

This song is done pretty much. Maybe get a few testers and maybe a another mod if you're not too sure :) Sorry for the wait :cry:
I like this song alot btw. So I sent a kudosu 8-)
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Nya_Nya wrote:

General
I was looking at the colours. I'm not fussed about what the colours are when I play but it's nice to have the colours of parts of the background. It's a suggestion but have a look at this:
Colour suggestion
Why, yes. I like it. I'm going to use that!

Easy
There wasn't many things to correct since you had another person mod it, but.
02:12:537 - A slider feels like it should be here and ending here 02:13:679 - (May edit length accordingly). I want to keep the break here. No change.
02:02:251 - Same as above. End it here 02:03:394 - I tested with it a little and ended up removing the break and using two silder that begin/end at those two points instead. (I also made som simmilar changes here in normal and hard)
03:10:822 (1) - Remove this beat and replace it with a slider until 03:13:108 - It fits nicely. Yes it does actually fit very nicely! Going to use that.

Alright here comes the fun part, the NC's. I recommend saving before doing this because you may disagree. (Uh oh)
Ok. Press CTRL+A then tap Q twice. This selects all of the beats and removes all NC's. 8-) Add a new NC to each of these :P
Enjoy ;)
00:25:108 (1) -
00:53:679 (1) -
00:55:965 (1) -
01:02:822 (1) -
01:07:394 (1) -
01:11:965 (1) -
01:18:822 (1) -
01:21:108 (1) -
01:25:679 (1) -
01:27:965 (1) -
01:30:251 (1) -
01:34:822 (1) -
01:43:965 (1) -
01:53:108 (1) -
02:20:537 (1) -
02:25:108 (1) -
02:29:679 (1) -
02:47:965 (1) -
02:52:251 (1) -
02:54:822 (1) -
02:59:394 (1) -
03:05:679 (1) -
I tried it out and i did indeed enjoy it (after some minor changes here and there ^^)!

Normal
Like I said in easy. Not much needs to be changed.
00:28:537 (3) - 00:30:822 (1) - Remove NC Fixed.
03:10:822 (1) - Remove this beat and replace it with a slider until 03:13:108 - Yep. Still works great; that slider.

Hard
Previous mod sorted the bits. This diff is brutal (nearly insane). (Heh, is that i good thing?) But its well placed out, no change needed. (Sounds like a good thing!)
But like normal can we have a slider at the end please? :3 We sure can! ^^
03:10:822 (1) - Remove this beat and replace it with a slider until 03:13:108 - Fixed.

This song is done pretty much. Maybe get a few testers and maybe a another mod if you're not too sure :) Sorry for the wait :cry: No worries!
I like this song alot btw. So I sent a kudosu 8-) Really? Wow! I don't know what to- Thank you!
You mod was very much appreciated and thanks again for the star! ^^
Phos-
773 posts
Joined December 2012
Phos-
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

This mapset needs a lot of work imo, so I'll tell you the general things you should keep in mind if you want it to improve.

If you don't understand something in this post, then feel free to PM me ingame, I'll gladly clear things up ^^

[General]
  1. The offset seems too early, you should try 20,579 instead. A bad offset can make the map very difficult to play and get good accuracy on, since that's the value that syncs the timeline and the music together. Don't forget to resnap every note and kiai after making this change. (Resnap all the notes quickly by selecting "Resnap All Notes" under the grey timing tab.)
[Easy]
  1. The biggest problem here is your flow and patterns, patterns like 00:49:150 (1,2,3) - , 01:32:007 (2,3) - and 03:08:007 (3,4) - don't particularly flow well because the cursor has to make a sudden turn after pressing the note, which plays poorly and jagged. For the best flow, a sliders path should always be in the same direction as the cursor's movement on easy diffs, because beginners don't snap to notes like we do, they just move their cursor towards the next note; if anything is out of place flow-wise, then they will have issues. Therefore, I suggest you look over these and fix them. I've also seen many examples of 90° flow in places, where although it flows ok, it can be very boring if arranged like how 00:23:436 (3,4) - or 01:23:436 (4,5,6) - is arranged. This is because the 90° flow is untitled, which looks and plays boring due to how... well basic it is.
  2. Since this is an easy diff, your spacing must be perfectly consistent at all times. For a beginner, they're still getting the hang of moving to the notes and hitting, by having a constant distance snap though, it will prevent confusion and allow their muscle memory to develop. I've noticed that the distance snap that you've used here tends to fluctuate between 0.90 and 1.10. Although this seems unnoticeable at times, it is still very important to keep it at a constant 1.00. I'm going to point out these two notes, 01:38:864 (4,5) - . These are bad because they are not consistent with the distance snap in any way, so a beginner who has never played the map before will likely mistake this for a 1.00x.
[Normal]
  1. This difficulty shares many of the same problems as easy has, for example; you cannot have your spacing fluctuating from 0.90 to 1.10. This suggestion in particular is a lot more noticible on normal than it is on east because we have patterns like 00:22:864 (2,3,4,1) - or 01:15:436 (2,3,4) - . This in incredibly inconsistent, so you should make sure every note is at around 1.00x spacing.
  2. I've noticed that many of the blankets in this difficulty are poorly done. In case you don't know, blankets are patterns where a hit circle or slider end is parallel to a slider trail going round it. Here are a few examples so you can have more of a general idea:
    Blankets
    There were two types of blankets in that last image ^^
    I've noticed some poorly done blankets throughout this difficulty, such as 00:50:007 (4,5) - or 00:52:293 (4,5) - for example. You know this is bad because the circle is not parallel to the edge of the slider track, causing it to look odd and out of place. Remember, blankets are used to make a pattern look nicer, but if the blanket is poorly done, then it will only end up looking worse. Aside from the two bad blankets that I spotted, I would consider using blankets more frequently, because they are an extremely common mapping technique, and most modern mapping uses them to make a lot of their patterns.
  3. I should also mention that this difficulty can get inconsistent in some parts. If something is inconsistent, then that means that there has been a change in how the map plays or sounds while the music sounds exactly the same. This can be related to hitsounds, rhythm, or comboing. I've noticed that one of the patterns right after the kiais are inconsistent. I'll show you, in the first kiai we have a pretty simple one beat spaced pattern, which is 01:23:436 (1,2,3,4) - . In the second kiai however, the pattern 02:54:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - uses 1/2 to go with the music. Naturally it is harder, and I think that's what you were aiming for; to make it harder at the end. However, this defeats the purpose of osu! being a rhythm game if the music is exactly the same. If the music doesn't change, then why should the rhythm of the notes?
[Hard]
  1. I've noticed that this difficulty contains many unsightly overlaps. In most cases, overlaps are only good when purposely done to indicate a 1/4 or 1/2. But if entire sliders are covered up, even for a short while, it can look pretty messy. Examples of such overlaps I've found would include 00:23:436 (6,8) - or 02:20:579 (1,4) -
  2. 01:34:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like I said above, these blankets are bad because although they look fine in the editor, (despite feeling cramped) stacking leniency comes into play and moves them, meaning that in the actual play mode, it'll look odd, so I suggest moving them further out a bit.

    There isn't too much to say about this difficulty because most of the stuff I said in the previous difficulties also applies to this difficulty.
So yeah, if you can get these glaring issues out of the way then I'm sure this map will be a lot better than it is in it's current state. As I've said firstly in this mod, the most significant issues throughout all difficulties is your flow and aesthetics. Despite that though, you've handled the song's rhythm surprisingly well. Here are a few good guides you should read to help you get a further understanding:
 t/208596 t/37194 https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 t/86329Good luck!
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~ Heey!

This mapset needs a lot of work imo, so I'll tell you the general things you should keep in mind if you want it to improve.

If you don't understand something in this post, then feel free to PM me ingame, I'll gladly clear things up ^^

[General]
  1. The offset seems too early, you should try 20,579 instead. A bad offset can make the map very difficult to play and get good accuracy on, since that's the value that syncs the timeline and the music together. Don't forget to resnap every note and kiai after making this change. (Resnap all the notes quickly by selecting "Resnap All Notes" under the grey timing tab.) Yes! Fixed and resnapped! I had another modder talking about that it felt off and now it does indeed feel much better.
I haven't commented so much on your suggestions since there's no real reason to do so. I understand and agree with what you are saying but since they are general things/advices and not specific errors i would just end up writing "I see, i will keep that in mind as i go through the beatmap" on every one... ^^
[Easy]
  1. The biggest problem here is your flow and patterns, patterns like 00:49:150 (1,2,3) - , 01:32:007 (2,3) - and 03:08:007 (3,4) - don't particularly flow well because the cursor has to make a sudden turn after pressing the note, which plays poorly and jagged. For the best flow, a sliders path should always be in the same direction as the cursor's movement on easy diffs, because beginners don't snap to notes like we do, they just move their cursor towards the next note; if anything is out of place flow-wise, then they will have issues. Therefore, I suggest you look over these and fix them. I've also seen many examples of 90° flow in places, where although it flows ok, it can be very boring if arranged like how 00:23:436 (3,4) - or 01:23:436 (4,5,6) - is arranged. This is because the 90° flow is untitled, which looks and plays boring due to how... well basic it is.
  2. Since this is an easy diff, your spacing must be perfectly consistent at all times. For a beginner, they're still getting the hang of moving to the notes and hitting, by having a constant distance snap though, it will prevent confusion and allow their muscle memory to develop. I've noticed that the distance snap that you've used here tends to fluctuate between 0.90 and 1.10. Although this seems unnoticeable at times, it is still very important to keep it at a constant 1.00. I'm going to point out these two notes, 01:38:864 (4,5) - . These are bad because they are not consistent with the distance snap in any way, so a beginner who has never played the map before will likely mistake this for a 1.00x.
[Normal]
  1. This difficulty shares many of the same problems as easy has, for example; you cannot have your spacing fluctuating from 0.90 to 1.10. This suggestion in particular is a lot more noticible on normal than it is on east because we have patterns like 00:22:864 (2,3,4,1) - or 01:15:436 (2,3,4) - . This in incredibly inconsistent, so you should make sure every note is at around 1.00x spacing.
  2. I've noticed that many of the blankets in this difficulty are poorly done. In case you don't know, blankets are patterns where a hit circle or slider end is parallel to a slider trail going round it. Here are a few examples so you can have more of a general idea:
    Blankets
    There were two types of blankets in that last image ^^ Yeah i see it, and now i understand! A blanket is not putting a slider as a "rainbow" around a hitcircle. Blankets is when you "fold" sliders around other objects, like hitcircles or other objects (Like how a real blanket works ^^). Thanks!

    I've noticed some poorly done blankets throughout this difficulty, such as 00:50:007 (4,5) - or 00:52:293 (4,5) - for example. You know this is bad because the circle is not parallel to the edge of the slider track, causing it to look odd and out of place. Remember, blankets are used to make a pattern look nicer, but if the blanket is poorly done, then it will only end up looking worse. Aside from the two bad blankets that I spotted, I would consider using blankets more frequently, because they are an extremely common mapping technique, and most modern mapping uses them to make a lot of their patterns.
  3. I should also mention that this difficulty can get inconsistent in some parts. If something is inconsistent, then that means that there has been a change in how the map plays or sounds while the music sounds exactly the same. This can be related to hitsounds, rhythm, or comboing. I've noticed that one of the patterns right after the kiais are inconsistent. I'll show you, in the first kiai we have a pretty simple one beat spaced pattern, which is 01:23:436 (1,2,3,4) - . In the second kiai however, the pattern 02:54:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - uses 1/2 to go with the music. Naturally it is harder, and I think that's what you were aiming for; to make it harder at the end. However, this defeats the purpose of osu! being a rhythm game if the music is exactly the same. If the music doesn't change, then why should the rhythm of the notes? Yes, i was imagining the beatmap as level (kind-of like with a boss at the end) but you're right; i's about the rhythm! It was something i had forgotten about! Thanks!
[Hard]
  1. I've noticed that this difficulty contains many unsightly overlaps. In most cases, overlaps are only good when purposely done to indicate a 1/4 or 1/2. But if entire sliders are covered up, even for a short while, it can look pretty messy. Examples of such overlaps I've found would include 00:23:436 (6,8) - or 02:20:579 (1,4) -
  2. 01:34:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like I said above, these blankets are bad because although they look fine in the editor, (despite feeling cramped) stacking leniency comes into play and moves them, meaning that in the actual play mode, it'll look odd, so I suggest moving them further out a bit.

    There isn't too much to say about this difficulty because most of the stuff I said in the previous difficulties also applies to this difficulty.
So yeah, if you can get these glaring issues out of the way then I'm sure this map will be a lot better than it is in it's current state. As I've said firstly in this mod, the most significant issues throughout all difficulties is your flow and aesthetics. Despite that though, you've handled the song's rhythm surprisingly well. Here are a few good guides you should read to help you get a further understanding:
 t/208596 t/37194 https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 t/86329 Those guides was very usefull, thank you!

Good luck!
Thank you very much for this mod/advices!
I think i started waaay to soon with mapping! ^^

When i first made this beatmap set i didn't even know what a "blanket" or "flow" was (or how to make a reverse-slider), but as I started looking at other maps more closely, started getting mods and modding other maps, i started to feel that there was a lot of things that needed to be changed in this beatmap and now i think i got what i needed.

So i am currently in the process of going thougth each beatmap and remap most of it while following your advices, the guides you linked and the exprinece i've gained since i first mapped this!

EDIT (17-01-2015): I've now finished my remapping and I ended up changing quite a lot on all the diffs but the result turned out pretty good i think (i hope).
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
WildOne94
Hey There :D

Easy

Firstly hit Crtl + Shift + A and tick the box next to refresh. Fix these issues (Easy should not have any jumps or different distance snaps)
00:28:578 - This is just an opinion of mine but this would seem better for me ( Drag the start of the break to 00:30:864 )


00:52:579 - remove this note as the next part of the song with the 2 sliders needs a bit more time for beginners
00:58:293 - 01:00:579 - i hate to say and spoil such nice sliders but it's best to reduce both these sliders by 1 white point for easier playing


01:30:293 - 01:32:579 - These should be symmetric/mirrored
01:34:864 - 01:37:150 - ^ (But i recommend using the 01:37:150 shape for both instead)
01:41:721 - I would recommend using a big slider here instead of one note to fill up the gap a little more like this. (use hitsounds too of your choice)


01:47:436 - 01:52:007 - These two circle notes overlap with the sliders next to them. Potentially it might be okay as it looks quite good but overlapping can be seen as bad most times

02:25:150 - 02:27:436 - Should be symmetric/mirrored
02:34:293 - Drag the start of break to this point. (There are also 3 breaks so consider removing this break and adding more notes)
02:50:293 - Too hard for easy and the NC is weird. Try something like this


03:01:721 - 03:04:007 - Should be symmetric/mirrored
03:06:293 - 03:08:579 - ^

Normal

Sort out that one distance snap in the "Ctrl + Shift + A" Menu again
01:14:293 - Blanket this slider a bit better with the previous one by removing anchor and making it look a bit more smoother like this

01:23:436 - 01:25:150 - Improve the flow between these 2 points. My suggestion is like this


01:31:436 - Put the slider more in the middle to make it look better like this. (also for the times at 01:33:721 - 01:36:007)



Etc.

01:41:721 - Like in easy. Change it into a long reverse slider to fill up the gap
02:34:293 - Drag the start of break to this point (or like i said before. remove the break and fill)

I will come back to mod Hard later if u want to Pm me when u have gone through Easy and Normal :D
Hope this helped :3 (sorry if i used puush too much XD, It's just easier to show sometimes)

Best of luck =3
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey There :D Heey!

Easy

Firstly hit Crtl + Shift + A and tick the box next to refresh. Fix these issues (Easy should not have any jumps or different distance snaps) Fixed. Ah, right... AImod. I must've forgotten about that. Thanks!
00:28:578 - This is just an opinion of mine but this would seem better for me ( Drag the start of the break to 00:30:864 ) Fixed. Yeah, that felt better but I had no idea that you could move the start/end of a break. Really helpful tip! ^^


00:52:579 - remove this note as the next part of the song with the 2 sliders needs a bit more time for beginners Fixed.
00:58:293 - 01:00:579 - i hate to say and spoil such nice sliders but it's best to reduce both these sliders by 1 white point for easier playing Fixed. No problem, i just made the middle shorter and moved some notes around!


01:30:293 - 01:32:579 - These should be symmetric/mirrored Fixed.
01:34:864 - 01:37:150 - ^ (But i recommend using the 01:37:150 shape for both instead) Fixed. I changed them a bit too...
01:41:721 - I would recommend using a big slider here instead of one note to fill up the gap a little more like this. (use hitsounds too of your choice) Yeah, a slider is probably better but i didn't want it to start without any sound (from the song) it so i made it start 01:41:721 - here instead.


01:47:436 - 01:52:007 - These two circle notes overlap with the sliders next to them. Potentially it might be okay as it looks quite good but overlapping can be seen as bad most times It think the symmetry and patterns wins over the overlaps so i'm going to leave it unchanged for now...

02:25:150 - 02:27:436 - Should be symmetric/mirrored Fixed.
02:34:293 - Drag the start of break to this point. (There are also 3 breaks so consider removing this break and adding more notes) Fixed. I will consider it. I'll se if i can make somthing that works...
02:50:293 - Too hard for easy and the NC is weird. Try something like this I sorry, but i really want to keep that hitcricle so i just removed the earlier slider and removed NC.



03:01:721 - 03:04:007 - Should be symmetric/mirrored Fixed.
03:06:293 - 03:08:579 - ^ Fixed.

Normal

Sort out that one distance snap in the "Ctrl + Shift + A" Menu again Fixed. Crap, there's allways one you miss... ^^
01:14:293 - Blanket this slider a bit better with the previous one by removing anchor and making it look a bit more smoother like this Fixed.

01:23:436 - 01:25:150 - Improve the flow between these 2 points. My suggestion is like this Fixed.


01:31:436 - Put the slider more in the middle to make it look better like this. (also for the times at 01:33:721 - 01:36:007) Fixed. I also realised that i had a jump 01:36:864 (3) - here so i changed som more sliders.



Etc. I'm assuming you mean the rest of the silder pairs and i kind-of fixed them too. I hope... ^^

01:41:721 - Like in easy. Change it into a long reverse slider to fill up the gap Again, i made the slider start 01:41:721 - here and did a little "extra" here (now let's just hope that's rankable ^^).
02:34:293 - Drag the start of break to this point (or like i said before. remove the break and fill) Fixed. Again, will consider mapping out the break...

I will come back to mod Hard later if u want to Pm me when u have gone through Easy and Normal :D
Hope this helped :3 (sorry if i used puush too much XD, It's just easier to show sometimes) No worries pal! It was nice to see the suggestions.

Best of luck =3
Thank you very much for the mod (and for the tip that you can move a break's start and end)! ^^
(I'll have to think about mapping out the last break or what i'm going to do with it, if i do anything at all)
WildOne94
581 posts
Joined October 2013
WildOne94

WildOne94 wrote:

Hard

Hmmm using 4.5 circle size is a bit much. Making it 4 on the dot or a bit lower though looks good. (4.5 just seems like insane difficult for a hard)
01:06:293 - Whoa this is a big cluster which is hard to tap!. might i suggest these sliders instead




01:08:579 - Swap notes 4 and 5 over


01:28:007 - This note is hard to get to after the reverse slider. Try moving it up a bit
02:09:436 - i know this is a hard part to map in the song but you should keep your beatmap consistent with the breaks as this one does not show up in any of the others.
02:42:293 - This part is a little weird with the flow. try this instead and delete the circle not at 02:42:864 and drag slider back to where it was




02:46:579 - combos 3,4,5,6 could be changed a bit. firstly move the 3 combo so it bends more to face the next note. and then just make the jumps a bit more wider and interesting. maybe like this


03:10:293 - Drag six just a little more to the right. The flow is a bit bad to reach it


Sorry hard is not as long as a mod but i am not that good at modding harder levels. (mostly a ctb player you see >w<)
Hope this helped :3 (sorry if i used puush too much XD, It's just easier to show sometimes)

Best of luck =3
(sorry i accidently did quote instead of edit. no KD's)
Last edited by WildOne94 , edited 1 time in total.
Shiguri
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Shiguri
Hello there, random mod here. (Probably 99.9999% full with New Combo)

Hard
CS should be 4.3
AR should be 7 or 6.8
OD 6.5 maybe
and the HP seems fine
-------
01:00:007 (7) - NC
01:02:293 (7) - ^
01:04:007 (4) - ^
01:06:293 (4) - ^
01:08:579 (4) - ^
01:10:864 (4) - ^
01:13:150 (3) - ^
01:15:436 (3) - ^
01:17:721 (2) - ^
01:41:721 - Set a break
01:44:007 (2) - NC
01:48:579 (2) - ^
01:53:150 (2) - ^
02:17:150 (4) - ^ (and the NC spam goes on....)
02:19:436 (4) - ^
02:21:721 (3) - ^
02:24:007 (4) - ^
02:26:293 (4) - ^
02:28:579 (4) - ^
Jesus Christ, I need to learn to mod without those NC stuff, haha.

Normal
HP 4.4
00:50:864 (4) - NC
00:51:436 (6) - ^
01:00:007 (4) - ^
01:02:293 (4) - ^
01:26:864 (4) - ^
01:41:721 - 01:57:721 - Do the same what I told you on Insane
02:19:436 (4) - NC
02:24:007 (5) - ^
02:50:293 (5) - ^

Easy
01:41:721 - 01:57:721 - Do the same here what I told you on Normal and Insane (surprise)

Well, that was a funny mod..... teach me how2mod.
Good luck and nice song btw!
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2
I'll just qoute the hard part since i've already checked the previous diffs...

WildOne94 wrote:

Hard

Hmmm using 4.5 circle size is a bit much. Making it 4 on the dot or a bit lower though looks good. (4.5 just seems like insane difficult for a hard) Fixed. It feels a bit big though but i will use it for now...
01:06:293 - Whoa this is a big cluster which is hard to tap!. might i suggest these sliders instead Fixed. Yeah that was probably a bit better. ^^




01:08:579 - Swap notes 4 and 5 over Fixed.


01:28:007 - This note is hard to get to after the reverse slider. Try moving it up a bit I didn't think I was good enough so I changed the reverse-sider and hitcircle into two curved sliders instead...
02:09:436 - i know this is a hard part to map in the song but you should keep your beatmap consistent with the breaks as this one does not show up in any of the others. Fixed. Yeah it's very little to go on here but i think i was able to map something out here!
02:42:293 - This part is a little weird with the flow. try this instead and delete the circle not at 02:42:864 and drag slider back to where it was Fixed. Then i also decided to stack the removed hitcircle under the end of the second slider instead.




02:46:579 - combos 3,4,5,6 could be changed a bit. firstly move the 3 combo so it bends more to face the next note. and then just make the jumps a bit more wider and interesting. maybe like this Fixed.


03:10:293 - Drag six just a little more to the right. The flow is a bit bad to reach it Fixed. Actually i changed it a bit more...


Sorry hard is not as long as a mod but i am not that good at modding harder levels. (mostly a ctb player you see >w<) I appreciated it anyway! ^^
Hope this helped :3 (sorry if i used puush too much XD, It's just easier to show sometimes)

Best of luck =3

(sorry i accidently did quote instead of edit. no KD's) No problem, we all make 'stakes ^^
Well thanks again for (completing) the mod!
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2
Two mods on the same day? Yay!

Shiguri wrote:

Hello there, random mod here. Heey! (Probably 99.9999% full with New Combo) Well a mod is a mod so i'll take every mod i can get! ^^

Hard
CS should be 4.3
AR should be 7 or 6.8
OD 6.5 maybe
and the HP seems fine
CS -> 4.3, AR -> 6.8, OD -> 6.5. Fixed.
-------
01:00:007 (7) - NC Fixed.
01:02:293 (7) - ^ Fixed.
01:04:007 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:06:293 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:08:579 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:10:864 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:13:150 (3) - ^ Fixed.
01:15:436 (3) - ^ Fixed.
01:17:721 (2) - ^ Nah
01:41:721 - Set a break An earlier mod made a better suggestion here so I'll go with that one.
01:44:007 (2) - NC Fixed.
01:48:579 (2) - ^ Fixed.
01:53:150 (2) - ^ Fixed.
02:17:150 (4) - ^ Fixed. (and the NC spam goes on....) (...and so does the fixed spam) ^^
02:19:436 (4) - ^ Fixed.
02:21:721 (3) - ^ Fixed.
02:24:007 (4) - ^ Fixed.
02:26:293 (4) - ^ Fixed.
02:28:579 (4) - ^ Fixed. Boy am i glad for ctrl-c/crtl-v!
Jesus Christ, I need to learn to mod without those NC stuff, haha. Hehe, well if it's any confort i think the combos are better now!

Normal
HP 4.4 Fixed.
00:50:864 (4) - NC Fixed.
00:51:436 (6) - ^ Fixed.
01:00:007 (4) - ^ I see what you mean but i think it's better without NC. No change.
01:02:293 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:26:864 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:41:721 - 01:57:721 - Do the same what I told you on Insane Fixed.
02:19:436 (4) - NC Fixed.
02:24:007 (5) - ^ Fixed.
02:50:293 (5) - ^ Fixed.

Easy
01:41:721 - 01:57:721 - Do the same here what I told you on Normal and Insane Fixed.(surprise) Well, i guess i had it comming for me!


Well, that was a funny mod..... teach me how2mod. (not sure if serious or general statment)
But since you modded my map i guess i could give you a little advice:
  1. Before you make your mod. Take a look at the maps earlier mods and se how they do it.
  2. Point out (somewhat) anything strange or out of order that comes to mind. If you noticed it, perhaps it's not as good as it could be...
  3. Also check out this page: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding (if you haven't already ^^)

Good luck and nice song btw!

Shiguri wrote:

I told you on Insane

Shiguri wrote:

Normal and Insane
Are you trying to tell me something, eh?

Thank you for the mod! (even though if it was mostly NC spam) ^^
Factorial
691 posts
Joined August 2013
Factorial
From #modreq
[Easy]
  1. Snap preview point at 01:21:150
  2. 00:30:150 - Remove timing point here. There must be no SV change between a slider.
  3. 00:30:864 - Unsnapped timing section here.
[Normal]
  1. Snap preview point at 01:21:150
  2. 00:30:864 - Add note here. There's clearly a beat.
[Hard]
  1. Snap preview point at 01:21:150
  2. 00:24:579 (2) - Move at 376,48. You may need to adjust 3
  3. 01:35:150 (2,3,4) - Stack
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Neil Leo wrote:

From #modreq Heey!
[Easy]
  1. Snap preview point at 01:21:150 Fixed.
  2. 00:30:150 - Remove timing point here. There must be no SV change between a slider. Fixed. The timing point was only supposed to change the sampleset. Nice spotting that error!
  3. 00:30:864 - Unsnapped timing section here. Fixed.
[Normal]
  1. Snap preview point at 01:21:150 Fixed.
  2. 00:30:864 - Add note here. There's clearly a beat. Fixed. I was unsure on weather i should do that or let the break start there, but after a little testing i decided to have a note there (on all diffs).
[Hard]
  1. Snap preview point at 01:21:150 Fixed.
  2. 00:24:579 (2) - Move at 376,48. You may need to adjust 3 Fixed.
  3. 01:35:150 (2,3,4) - Stack Fixed.
Thanks for your mod! ^^
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
ill just shit on u 4 hte ncs on the easy only. it should help for the ncs in the other two diffs tbh. The style also looks really old but yea w/e i can't really comment on old styles aside from that i personally don't like them rip me >:(

from my mod q

+ = nc
- = remove nc
switch = switch ncs

EZ
00:24:007 (4,1) - switch
00:26:293 (3) - +
00:30:864 (2) - +
00:51:436 (3) - +
00:52:579 (4) - add note here too pls
01:14:293 (2) - +
01:23:436 (3) - +
01:28:007 (3) - +
01:32:579 (3) - +
01:34:864 (5) - +
01:37:150 (7) - +
asdf
01:39:436 (9) - +
01:47:436 (1,2) - switch
01:52:007 (1,2) - switch
02:11:436 (2) - +
02:18:293 (3) - +
02:22:864 (3) - +
02:32:007 (3) - +
02:43:436 (2) - +
02:45:721 (4) - +
02:50:293 (3) - +
02:54:864 (3) - +
02:59:436 (3) - +
03:04:007 (3,1) - switch
03:06:293 (2) - +
03:08:579 (4) - +
kkgoodluckm8
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

VINXIS wrote:

ill just shit on u 4 hte ncs on the easy only. it should help for the ncs in the other two diffs tbh. The style also looks really old but yea w/e i can't really comment on old styles aside from that i personally don't like them rip me >:( Heh, that's fine by me!

from my mod q

+ = nc
- = remove nc
switch = switch ncs Gotcha!

EZ
00:24:007 (4,1) - switch Fixed.
00:26:293 (3) - + Fixed.
00:30:864 (2) - + Fixed.
00:51:436 (3) - + Fixed.
00:52:579 (4) - add note here too pls Fixed. It was removed because someone said it was to hard for new players but i changed some things so that it now should work with a hitcircle there.
01:14:293 (2) - + Fixed.
01:23:436 (3) - + Fixed.
01:28:007 (3) - + Fixed.
01:32:579 (3) - + Fixed.
01:34:864 (5) - + Fixed.
01:37:150 (7) - + Fixed.
asdf qwerty? ^^
01:39:436 (9) - + Fixed.
01:47:436 (1,2) - switch Fixed.
01:52:007 (1,2) - switch Fixed.
02:11:436 (2) - + Fixed.
02:18:293 (3) - + Fixed.
02:22:864 (3) - + Fixed.
02:32:007 (3) - + Fixed.
02:43:436 (2) - + Fixed.
02:45:721 (4) - + Fixed.
02:50:293 (3) - + Fixed.
02:54:864 (3) - + Fixed.
02:59:436 (3) - + Fixed.
03:04:007 (3,1) - switch Fixed.
03:06:293 (2) - + Fixed.
03:08:579 (4) - + Fixed.
kkgoodluckm8
Thanks for your mod! ^^ I will check it out and reply to your mod when i get home later today... - Done!
I will also check out the other diffs and see what i can improve with the combos there!
crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
crabovan
Add lapfox, trax, renard, youtube, poop to tags.
no kd
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

crabovan wrote:

Add lapfox, trax, renard, youtube, poop to tags. Added. (Also added "ytp" to the tags because why not ^^). So they should apprear the next time i update.
no kd
Thanks for the suggestion!
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Yauxo


Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

Unrankable
Suggestion
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
(copy paste end | HistoryTag: ~ Sploosh ~)

[General]
■ General adivce: Stuff like 01:22:007 (3,4) - (in Hard) shouldnt be there. These weird touches look bad and can be improved by alot. Try not to have objects tough like this.

[Hard]
■ 00:23:150 (4,5) - Having these 2 touch looks kinda ugly. How about placing them similar to how 00:21:721 (1,2) - works?
■ 00:25:721 (4) - It's unlikely that people will read this as a 1/2 without messing up before. This looks like a 1/1. Placing it around 344/172 might be the best (and safe) call for it.
■ 00:56:436 (2,3) - Try to avoid pixel-touches like that. Looks kinda ugly :v Moving it by a few pixels doesnt change anything gameplaywise, but makes it look much better
■ 01:00:007 (1,2,3) - You want to move this stack down by 2x4 pixel so that the automatic ingame stacking doesnt do this:

■ 01:14:293 (1) - Space this one further away. It currently sits on the end of 01:13:436 (3) - , whose next object is 1/4 away. Applying that logic to the next objects, this Slider should be 1/4 as well, but isnt - it's 1/2.
■ 01:20:293 (4) - Turn this into a 1/2 Slider so that the red tick (the end of that ... sound) gets supported as well
■ 01:22:721 (5) - Either unstack this one or stack it on 01:22:864 (6) - 's head. Dont stack things under the Sliderend (I mean, you could, but these are unneccessarily difficult to read)
■ 01:26:150 (2,3) - Move this down a slight bit to adjust for the autostacking thing
■ 01:27:864 (7) - This as well. Move it a bit
■ 01:29:579 (4) - ^. In general, make things less touchy please
■ 01:41:721 (2) - NC
■ 01:44:007 (4) - NC (also, next time, a 2 point Slider would work just fine as well http://puu.sh/g89Kg/d2d823207c.jpg
■ 01:52:007 (2) - remove. It doesnt really map any sound so it shouldnt be mapped at all
■ 02:09:436 (1) - Same stacking thing as a similar above. Either unstack or stack on top of the next object for readability
■ 02:13:721 (1) - remove finish
■ 02:19:150 (3) - remove. Again, there is no sound that's mapped here.
■ 02:43:150 (4) - unstack would be much better imo
■ 02:47:150 (4,5,6) - Space these just a liiiiittle bit less
■ 03:10:864 (8) - Space this furter away. Right now it looks like it'll be played at just the same speed as the objects before. NC this as well.

■ Man, this map reminds me of all the very old maps. Early 2010 mapping style, niconico music, aaah. It's not neccessarily a good thing that it's reminding me like this, but it's also not ... bad.
You might want to work on your visuals and aesthetics, but technically nothing's wrong.

[Normal]
■ One thing you WILL have to do: Make sure that all your objects have about the same distance snap. This means, you can either use complete 0.80, complete 1.0 etc - but never use 1.0 on this object, then 1.2 on the next object and 0.8 on the object after that. (Stacks are okay, but try to use as little as possible, as they might be confusing to a new player)

■ 00:23:436 (3,1) - Try to make blankets out of these things. You can use the approach circle to see how good the blanket is.

■ 00:46:864 (1) - Remove this one. In Normal diffs, you have to have at least 750 ms between the Spinner end and the next object. In your case, you have ~650ms, which is not enough
■ 00:50:864 (1,2) - 00:53:150 (1) - I dont think having these single object combos makes too much sense. Just remove them to be more consistent.
■ 01:31:436 (2,3,1) - This might be confusing to read, as this big Slider siddenly connects to the object you were just playing. I'd say that it's better if you make the long Slider as visible as possible, not stacking two ends together
■ 01:43:436 (2,3) - This is also too difficult to read. The player will most likely think that the Slider starts on 2 and not on 3. Either unstack 2 from the Sliderend or move 3 somewhere else
■ 01:44:007 (3) - NC
■ 01:52:007 (2) - remove
■ 02:14:007 (1) - Same Spinner object ms bullshit that everyone has to follow now
■ 02:52:293 (1) - remove NC
■ 02:55:436 (3,4) - I'd unstack these

I'll keep my hands off Easy for now, people are calling me D:
Good luck~
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions. Heey! And don't worry, i will. ^^

[General]
■ General adivce: Stuff like 01:22:007 (3,4) - (in Hard) shouldnt be there. These weird touches look bad and can be improved by alot. Try not to have objects tough like this.Okay, i will se what i can do about it.


[Hard]
■ 00:23:150 (4,5) - Having these 2 touch looks kinda ugly. How about placing them similar to how 00:21:721 (1,2) - works? Fixed.
■ 00:25:721 (4) - It's unlikely that people will read this as a 1/2 without messing up before. This looks like a 1/1. Placing it around 344/172 might be the best (and safe) call for it. Fixed.
■ 00:56:436 (2,3) - Try to avoid pixel-touches like that. Looks kinda ugly :v Moving it by a few pixels doesnt change anything gameplaywise, but makes it look much better Fixed.
■ 01:00:007 (1,2,3) - You want to move this stack down by 2x4 pixel so that the automatic ingame stacking doesnt do this: Fixed. It looks better now. Nice spotting that!
■ 01:14:293 (1) - Space this one further away. It currently sits on the end of 01:13:436 (3) - , whose next object is 1/4 away. Applying that logic to the next objects, this Slider should be 1/4 as well, but isnt - it's 1/2. Fixed.
■ 01:20:293 (4) - Turn this into a 1/2 Slider so that the red tick (the end of that ... sound) gets supported as well Fixed.
■ 01:22:721 (5) - Either unstack this one or stack it on 01:22:864 (6) - 's head. Dont stack things under the Sliderend (I mean, you could, but these are unneccessarily difficult to read) Fixed. Well, i indeed could, but let's keep it simple to read. ^^
■ 01:26:150 (2,3) - Move this down a slight bit to adjust for the autostacking thing Fixed.
■ 01:27:864 (7) - This as well. Move it a bit Also fixed.
■ 01:29:579 (4) - ^. In general, make things less touchy please Fixed. I'll probably look over the map and correct more of these touching matters later...
■ 01:41:721 (2) - NC Fixed.
■ 01:44:007 (4) - NC (also, next time, a 2 point Slider would work just fine as well http://puu.sh/g89Kg/d2d823207c.jpg Fixed. Wow, it's that easy? Then i'll definitely use that next time. Thanks!
■ 01:52:007 (2) - remove. It doesnt really map any sound so it shouldnt be mapped at all Fixed. Hmm... you're right, it doesn't. I think i just added it there because it technically fits to the beat, without checking that it there was a sound there.
■ 02:09:436 (1) - Same stacking thing as a similar above. Either unstack or stack on top of the next object for readability Fixed.
■ 02:13:721 (1) - remove finish Fixed.
■ 02:19:150 (3) - remove. Again, there is no sound that's mapped here. Fixed. I also remove some simmilar notes that was also mapped simmilar to this where there were no actual sound.
■ 02:43:150 (4) - unstack would be much better imo Fixed.
■ 02:47:150 (4,5,6) - Space these just a liiiiittle bit less Fixed.
■ 03:10:864 (8) - Space this furter away. Right now it looks like it'll be played at just the same speed as the objects before. NC this as well. Fixed. Right. Evil distance snap strikes again...

■ Man, this map reminds me of all the very old maps. Early 2010 mapping style, niconico music, aaah. It's not neccessarily a good thing that it's reminding me like this, but it's also not ... bad. Heh, yeah i'll se what i'll do.
You might want to work on your visuals and aesthetics, but technically nothing's wrong.

[Normal]
■ One thing you WILL have to do: Make sure that all your objects have about the same distance snap. This means, you can either use complete 0.80, complete 1.0 etc - but never use 1.0 on this object, then 1.2 on the next object and 0.8 on the object after that. (Stacks are okay, but try to use as little as possible, as they might be confusing to a new player) I'm not sure what you mean by this. I think i've been using only a distance snap of 1.0x, so i will leave it as it is for now... Now i understand what you mean and i've corrected the spacing on the normal (and easy) diff so that is should have complete 1.0 snapping. Thanks!

■ 00:23:436 (3,1) - Try to make blankets out of these things. You can use the approach circle to see how good the blanket is.
Fixed. Yeah, that blanket was a bit poorly done.

■ 00:46:864 (1) - Remove this one. In Normal diffs, you have to have at least 750 ms between the Spinner end and the next object. In your case, you have ~650ms, which is not enough Fixed.
■ 00:50:864 (1,2) - 00:53:150 (1) - I dont think having these single object combos makes too much sense. Just remove them to be more consistent. No, i think they do map the beat pretty good so i won't remove them. But i think i could remove the new combo here, it should be sufficient.
■ 01:31:436 (2,3,1) - This might be confusing to read, as this big Slider siddenly connects to the object you were just playing. I'd say that it's better if you make the long Slider as visible as possible, not stacking two ends together Fixed. I changed some of the sliders and the layout so that this does not happen.
■ 01:43:436 (2,3) - This is also too difficult to read. The player will most likely think that the Slider starts on 2 and not on 3. Either unstack 2 from the Sliderend or move 3 somewhere else Fixed, but i did it in another way, that i think is a bit easier to follow.
■ 01:44:007 (3) - NC Fixed.
■ 01:52:007 (2) - remove Fixed. However, i mapped it out instead, to fill the gap.
■ 02:14:007 (1) - Same Spinner object ms bullshit that everyone has to follow now Fixed.
■ 02:52:293 (1) - remove NC Fixed.
■ 02:55:436 (3,4) - I'd unstack theseFixed. Yeah, i moved them around a bit too so that they would all fit unstacked.

I'll keep my hands off Easy for now, people are calling me D:
Good luck~
Many thanks for your mod!
I'll probably look over the visuals and artistics of the hard diff somewhere in the near future.
Lethargy
159 posts
Joined December 2013
Lethargy
hi ircmod

SPOILER
23:59 Geronimaa: irc mod?
00:00 Thism2: Uh, sure! But it would be my first one...
00:00 Geronimaa: nevermind
00:00 Thism2: Anything i should know?
00:00 Geronimaa: abnout what?
00:01 Thism2: About an irc mod... I've only gotten "normal mods" before...
00:01 Thism2: I don't know ^^
00:01 Geronimaa: well
00:01 Geronimaa: the difference is that im gonna post the mod here in this chat
00:01 Geronimaa: real time
00:01 Geronimaa: so we can actually talk about it
00:02 Geronimaa: and its not onesided mod lackign communication
00:02 Geronimaa: first and foremost
00:02 Geronimaa: id recommend setting higher a
00:02 Thism2: Ah, yes.
00:02 Geronimaa: AR
00:02 Geronimaa: smth like 7,5
00:02 Geronimaa: this makes it feel really hard to read
00:02 Geronimaa: i can read it only cuz i practice playing EZ
00:03 Thism2: Okey... So incresing the AR to around 7,5?
00:03 Geronimaa: 00:23:150 (4) - 
00:03 Geronimaa: try it
00:03 Geronimaa: this slider could be straight
00:04 Geronimaa: like thishttp://puu.sh/giugC/c3f1e8f3dc.jpg
00:04 Geronimaa: it usually looks better
00:04 Geronimaa: 00:24:579 (2) - 
00:04 Geronimaa: this slider
00:04 Geronimaa: you can make it like this http://puu.sh/giukp/62e735de2a.jpg
00:04 Geronimaa: try to switch slidershapes
00:05 Thism2: Right, made 00:23:150 (4) - straight
00:05 Geronimaa: oh btw
00:05 Geronimaa: you DONT have to liste nto me
00:05 Geronimaa: if you dont like it
00:05 Geronimaa: tell me why and we can discuss it
00:05 Geronimaa: and stack these two 00:23:150 (4,1) - 
00:06 Thism2: Ah right, two sided communication ^^
00:06 Geronimaa: yea
00:07 Geronimaa: 00:27:721 (4,5,6) - 
00:07 Thism2: Well, 00:23:150 (4) - looked nicer
00:07 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giuvM/07ef484090.jpg
00:07 Thism2: as stright so il change it
00:07 Geronimaa: alright
00:07 Geronimaa: what about that stuff at 27?
00:08 Thism2: Hmm... let me test it
00:09 Geronimaa: and lol
00:09 Geronimaa: this song is nuts
00:09 Thism2: Yeah, it was good.
00:09 Geronimaa: what was good
00:09 Thism2: Hmm? The song? Ah yeah... weell... ^^
00:10 Thism2: your suggestion at 00:27:721 (4,5,6) - used it
00:10 Geronimaa: ok
00:10 Thism2: also 00:24:579 (2) - this
00:10 Geronimaa: maybe turn this 00:29:150 (2) - 
00:10 Geronimaa: into a reverse slider?
00:10 Geronimaa: like this http://puu.sh/giuPg/b62e7df1ff.jpg
00:11 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giuPP/a2c0df0863.jpg
00:11 Thism2: With half- Yeah, like that ^^ I'll test...
00:13 Thism2: Hmm... I'm not sure
00:13 Geronimaa: 00:29:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
00:14 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giv3M/7d92dd9e5c.jpg
00:14 Geronimaa: like this?
00:14 Geronimaa: cuz the star doesnt really fit in there
00:14 Geronimaa: since those sounds are different
00:14 Geronimaa: so different spacing goes for each
00:16 Geronimaa: 01:00:293 (3) - 
00:16 Thism2: Ah, yeah. You're right. The sounds are different. So it does feel better with your pacinge better
00:16 Geronimaa: make it into a jump?
00:16 Geronimaa: i wouldnt stack these two 01:02:579 (2,1) - 
00:16 Geronimaa: make this straight? 01:03:436 (2) - 
00:17 Geronimaa: this slidershape is weird 01:05:150 (1) - 
00:17 Thism2: 01:00:293 (3) - wait only the 3 or the entire stack?
00:17 Geronimaa: just 3
00:17 Geronimaa: 01:06:293 (1) - 
00:18 Geronimaa: you can make this reverse slider again
00:18 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/givlV/7a49974bf5.jpg
00:18 Geronimaa: 01:09:150 (3) - 
00:19 Geronimaa: make this straight?
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:09:721 (1) - another weird slidershape
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:12:007 (1) - same
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:13:293 (4) - need a circle here
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:13:436 (5) - straight?
00:19 Geronimaa: weird slider 01:14:293 (1) - 
00:20 Geronimaa: 01:16:579 (1) - weird slider
00:20 Geronimaa: 01:17:721 (2) -  same
00:20 Geronimaa: same 01:18:864 (1,2) - 
00:20 Thism2: Well, what do to you suggest instead for the wierd shaped sliders? Straigt or cured slider?
00:20 Geronimaa: depends
00:20 Geronimaa: on where exactly
00:22 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/givGm/0714bfdc7b.jpg
00:22 Geronimaa: but this can work
00:22 Geronimaa: 01:08:007 (2,3) - 
00:22 Geronimaa: unstack
00:23 Geronimaa: this can work as well http://puu.sh/givLF/e6303316ae.jpg
00:24 Geronimaa: turn these 01:23:721 (2,3,4,5) - 
00:24 Geronimaa: into 1/4 sliders isntead?
00:24 Geronimaa: doubles are hard
00:24 Geronimaa: these two straight
00:25 Thism2: Wait, make 01:23:721 (2) - into a 1/4 slider etc.?
00:25 Geronimaa: yes
00:25 Geronimaa: wait no
00:26 Geronimaa: nvm
00:26 Geronimaa: i thought they were 1/4
00:26 Geronimaa: in that case
00:26 Geronimaa: just unstack them
00:26 Thism2: Ah, right now it makes a little more sense ^^
00:26 Geronimaa: here 01:43:150 (2) - 
00:26 Geronimaa: using a kickback?
00:26 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giw0a/0d322cc4c7.jpg
00:27 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giw0A/28ff19df63.jpg
00:27 Geronimaa: this shape is generally awkward 01:48:579 (1) - 
00:27 Geronimaa: so try to replace it
00:29 Thism2: Hehe, it's one of the oldest (first) shapes on the map ^^ Yeah i think i can make i nicer one
00:30 Thism2: Also, thanks for the kickback idea! at 01:43:150 - Probaboy gonna use that
00:30 Geronimaa: you can use this slidershape
00:30 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giwhA/cb8e3dffba.jpg
00:30 Geronimaa: i really like it :D
00:31 Thism2: Really nice! But... some slider points maybe?
00:31 Thism2: Don't know how otherwise ^^
00:32 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giwoz/40bfdf29ee.jpg
00:32 Geronimaa: you should probably change the bpm multiplier so you can fit it
00:33 Thism2: Yep
00:33 Geronimaa: this slidershape doesnt reall fit as well
00:33 Geronimaa: since its one straight sounds
00:34 Geronimaa: and slider acts as if the sound was shaking
00:34 Geronimaa: try this http://puu.sh/giwym/a4edd4b597.jpg
00:34 Geronimaa: this one is nice
00:34 Geronimaa: 02:04:579 (1) - 
00:34 Geronimaa: here you can use kick back 02:13:150 (4,5,6) - 
00:34 Thism2: Right...  know which slider you mean... ^^
00:34 Geronimaa: unstack 02:16:579 (2,3) - 
00:35 Geronimaa: straight 02:19:864 (2,3) - 
00:35 Geronimaa: this slider is awkward 02:21:150 (2) - 
00:35 Geronimaa: so is this 02:46:579 (3) - 
00:36 Geronimaa: here shouldnt be jumps 02:47:150 (4,5,6) - 
00:36 Thism2: 02:13:150 (4,5,6) - replacing them with a 1/2 long kickback  then right? (not 1/4)
00:36 Geronimaa: yes
00:36 Geronimaa: at place of those circles
00:36 Geronimaa: weird slider as well 02:48:007 (1) - 
00:37 Geronimaa: well the rest is pretty much same
00:37 Geronimaa: straighten sliders
00:37 Geronimaa: and make slidershapes more normal
00:37 Geronimaa: well thats it for my mod
00:37 Geronimaa: if yo uhave any question jsut ask me

dat song tho
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Geronimaa wrote:

hi ircmod Heey!

SPOILER
23:59 Geronimaa: irc mod?
00:00 Thism2: Uh, sure! But it would be my first one...
00:00 Geronimaa: nevermind
00:00 Thism2: Anything i should know?
00:00 Geronimaa: abnout what?
00:01 Thism2: About an irc mod... I've only gotten "normal mods" before...
00:01 Thism2: I don't know ^^
00:01 Geronimaa: well
00:01 Geronimaa: the difference is that im gonna post the mod here in this chat
00:01 Geronimaa: real time
00:01 Geronimaa: so we can actually talk about it
00:02 Geronimaa: and its not onesided mod lackign communication
00:02 Geronimaa: first and foremost
00:02 Geronimaa: id recommend setting higher a
00:02 Thism2: Ah, yes.
00:02 Geronimaa: AR
00:02 Geronimaa: smth like 7,5
00:02 Geronimaa: this makes it feel really hard to read
00:02 Geronimaa: i can read it only cuz i practice playing EZ Fixed. Increased it to 7.3 (+0.5)
00:03 Thism2: Okey... So incresing the AR to around 7,5?
00:03 Geronimaa: 00:23:150 (4) -
00:03 Geronimaa: try it
00:03 Geronimaa: this slider could be straight
00:04 Geronimaa: like thishttp://puu.sh/giugC/c3f1e8f3dc.jpg
00:04 Geronimaa: it usually looks better Fixed.
00:04 Geronimaa: 00:24:579 (2) -
00:04 Geronimaa: this slider
00:04 Geronimaa: you can make it like this http://puu.sh/giukp/62e735de2a.jpg Fixed. I liked it
00:04 Geronimaa: try to switch slidershapes
00:05 Thism2: Right, made 00:23:150 (4) - straight
00:05 Geronimaa: oh btw
00:05 Geronimaa: you DONT have to liste nto me
00:05 Geronimaa: if you dont like it
00:05 Geronimaa: tell me why and we can discuss it
00:05 Geronimaa: and stack these two 00:23:150 (4,1) - Fixed. Yes. Stack. Definitely.
00:06 Thism2: Ah right, two sided communication ^^
00:06 Geronimaa: yea
00:07 Geronimaa: 00:27:721 (4,5,6) -
00:07 Thism2: Well, 00:23:150 (4) - looked nicer
00:07 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giuvM/07ef484090.jpg Fixed. It does fit better.
00:07 Thism2: as stright so il change it
00:07 Geronimaa: alright
00:07 Geronimaa: what about that stuff at 27?
00:08 Thism2: Hmm... let me test it
00:09 Geronimaa: and lol
00:09 Geronimaa: this song is nuts Thanks! ^^
00:09 Thism2: Yeah, it was good.
00:09 Geronimaa: what was good
00:09 Thism2: Hmm? The song? Ah yeah... weell... ^^
00:10 Thism2: your suggestion at 00:27:721 (4,5,6) - used it
00:10 Geronimaa: ok
00:10 Thism2: also 00:24:579 (2) - this
00:10 Geronimaa: maybe turn this 00:29:150 (2) -
00:10 Geronimaa: into a reverse slider?
00:10 Geronimaa: like this http://puu.sh/giuPg/b62e7df1ff.jpg
00:11 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giuPP/a2c0df0863.jpg No, it doesn't feel like it fits here. No change.
00:11 Thism2: With half- Yeah, like that ^^ I'll test...
00:13 Thism2: Hmm... I'm not sure
00:13 Geronimaa: 00:29:721 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:14 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giv3M/7d92dd9e5c.jpg
00:14 Geronimaa: like this? Fixed.
00:14 Geronimaa: cuz the star doesnt really fit in there
00:14 Geronimaa: since those sounds are different
00:14 Geronimaa: so different spacing goes for each
00:16 Geronimaa: 01:00:293 (3) -
00:16 Thism2: Ah, yeah. You're right. The sounds are different. So it does feel better with your pacinge better
00:16 Geronimaa: make it into a jump? No. I think it fits better to the song the way it is.
00:16 Geronimaa: i wouldnt stack these two 01:02:579 (2,1) - I think i works quite well stacked. No change.
00:16 Geronimaa: make this straight? 01:03:436 (2) - Fixed.
00:17 Geronimaa: this slidershape is weird 01:05:150 (1) -
00:17 Thism2: 01:00:293 (3) - wait only the 3 or the entire stack?
00:17 Geronimaa: just 3
00:17 Geronimaa: 01:06:293 (1) -
00:18 Geronimaa: you can make this reverse slider again
00:18 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/givlV/7a49974bf5.jpg Fixed.
00:18 Geronimaa: 01:09:150 (3) -
00:19 Geronimaa: make this straight? Fixed.
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:09:721 (1) - another weird slidershape
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:12:007 (1) - same
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:13:293 (4) - need a circle here Yeah, you're right. This one does have an extra beat. Fixed.
00:19 Geronimaa: 01:13:436 (5) - straight? Fixed.
00:19 Geronimaa: weird slider 01:14:293 (1) -
00:20 Geronimaa: 01:16:579 (1) - weird slider
00:20 Geronimaa: 01:17:721 (2) - same
00:20 Geronimaa: same 01:18:864 (1,2) - Changed these into just a one-fixed-point curve.
00:20 Thism2: Well, what do to you suggest instead for the wierd shaped sliders? Straigt or cured slider?
00:20 Geronimaa: depends
00:20 Geronimaa: on where exactly
00:22 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/givGm/0714bfdc7b.jpg
00:22 Geronimaa: but this can work
00:22 Geronimaa: 01:08:007 (2,3) -
00:22 Geronimaa: unstack Fixed.
00:23 Geronimaa: this can work as well http://puu.sh/givLF/e6303316ae.jpg
00:24 Geronimaa: turn these 01:23:721 (2,3,4,5) -
00:24 Geronimaa: into 1/4 sliders isntead?
00:24 Geronimaa: doubles are hard
00:24 Geronimaa: these two straight
00:25 Thism2: Wait, make 01:23:721 (2) - into a 1/4 slider etc.?
00:25 Geronimaa: yes
00:25 Geronimaa: wait no
00:26 Geronimaa: nvm
00:26 Geronimaa: i thought they were 1/4
00:26 Geronimaa: in that case
00:26 Geronimaa: just unstack them Fixed. Unstacked.
00:26 Thism2: Ah, right now it makes a little more sense ^^
00:26 Geronimaa: here 01:43:150 (2) -
00:26 Geronimaa: using a kickback?
00:26 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giw0a/0d322cc4c7.jpg
00:27 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giw0A/28ff19df63.jpg Fixed.
00:27 Geronimaa: this shape is generally awkward 01:48:579 (1) -
00:27 Geronimaa: so try to replace it
00:29 Thism2: Hehe, it's one of the oldest (first) shapes on the map ^^ Yeah i think i can make i nicer one
00:30 Thism2: Also, thanks for the kickback idea! at 01:43:150 - Probaboy gonna use that
00:30 Geronimaa: you can use this slidershape
00:30 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giwhA/cb8e3dffba.jpg
00:30 Geronimaa: i really like it :D Fixed. Thanks. I really liked it to!
00:31 Thism2: Really nice! But... some slider points maybe?
00:31 Thism2: Don't know how otherwise ^^
00:32 Geronimaa: http://puu.sh/giwoz/40bfdf29ee.jpg
00:32 Geronimaa: you should probably change the bpm multiplier so you can fit it I scaled the shape instead to fit. No need to change the bpm mutiplier for just a slider i think.
00:33 Thism2: Yep
00:33 Geronimaa: this slidershape doesnt reall fit as well
00:33 Geronimaa: since its one straight sounds
00:34 Geronimaa: and slider acts as if the sound was shaking
00:34 Geronimaa: try this http://puu.sh/giwym/a4edd4b597.jpg Fixed. Another nice replacement!
00:34 Geronimaa: this one is nice
00:34 Geronimaa: 02:04:579 (1) - Hehe, why thank you!
00:34 Geronimaa: here you can use kick back 02:13:150 (4,5,6) - Fixed.
00:34 Thism2: Right... know which slider you mean... ^^
00:34 Geronimaa: unstack 02:16:579 (2,3) - Fixed.
00:35 Geronimaa: straight 02:19:864 (2,3) - Fixed.
00:35 Geronimaa: this slider is awkward 02:21:150 (2) -
00:35 Geronimaa: so is this 02:46:579 (3) -
00:36 Geronimaa: here shouldnt be jumps 02:47:150 (4,5,6) - Fixed.
00:36 Thism2: 02:13:150 (4,5,6) - replacing them with a 1/2 long kickback then right? (not 1/4)
00:36 Geronimaa: yes
00:36 Geronimaa: at place of those circles
00:36 Geronimaa: weird slider as well 02:48:007 (1) -
00:37 Geronimaa: well the rest is pretty much same
00:37 Geronimaa: straighten sliders
00:37 Geronimaa: and make slidershapes more normal
00:37 Geronimaa: well thats it for my mod
00:37 Geronimaa: if yo uhave any question jsut ask me
I also went over all of the "weird sliders" and straighten some slider.

dat song tho - Indeed!
Thanks for you IRC mod (and the really nice slider suggestions)! ^^
Speed of Snail
548 posts
Joined March 2014
Speed of Snail
Hey, your mod as Requested.

First of all, before I even start modding, pls get an insane/extra diff for this, that would be so fun to play :P

EASY

01:05:150 - (1) I don't like the way this slider flows to the combo 2 circle, since 2 and 3 continue as a semi-circle I'd suggest re-angling this slider way up to match the semi-circle direction it goes here

Honestly, not much to say here, GJ on the Easy so far.

NORMAL

Nice, I'm not going to even mod this cause I'd recommend keeping it as is.

HARD

Miscellaneous - Unsure about the need to use cs 4.3 here, move it down to just 4

00:49:721 - (3) This slider should probably been moved up and to the right to put it in line with combo 1 and 2.

00:50:579 - (5) This slider should be inverted over x-axis, Try making it curve downwards to start instead of up.

01:00:150 - (2) I don't Agree with these first two circles stacking, I'd suggest moving the combo 2 circle in between 1 and 3

01:18:864 - (1-4) For the sake of your maps flow try moving this entire combo up a few grid ticks, but don't change the pattern itself make sure you move up all 4 notes evenly.

01:26:150 - (2) This circle is offset for no reason, stack it on top of the slider head

01:35:150 - (2) try moving this slider right so that the tail aims straight at the next slider head

02:48:436 - (2) This circle should be moved downwards and right of where it is now.

And that's everything, Real nice Easy/Normal, and the Hard just need a little clean-up, nothing major. GJ and GL getting this ranked :D
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, your mod as Requested. Yes!

First of all, before I even start modding, pls get an insane/extra diff for this, that would be so fun to play :P
Now there's an idea, but there's just one problem; I can't play insane diffs, yet, let alone map one. Hmm... maybe i can get someone to make an insane GD for it?

EASY

01:05:150 - (1) I don't like the way this slider flows to the combo 2 circle, since 2 and 3 continue as a semi-circle I'd suggest re-angling this slider way up to match the semi-circle direction it goes here Fixed.

Honestly, not much to say here, GJ on the Easy so far.

NORMAL

Nice, I'm not going to even mod this cause I'd recommend keeping it as is. Oh, thanks! ^^

HARD

Miscellaneous - Unsure about the need to use cs 4.3 here, move it down to just 4 Fixed. I was a little unsure if the patterns would get cluttered if i lowered the CS, but it turned out fine so i'll use 4.

00:49:721 - (3) This slider should probably been moved up and to the right to put it in line with combo 1 and 2. Fixed.

00:50:579 - (5) This slider should be inverted over x-axis, Try making it curve downwards to start instead of up. Fixed. I curved it a bit more down and also moved the next pair of hitcircles. I think this gave the best result.

01:00:150 - (2) I don't Agree with these first two circles stacking, I'd suggest moving the combo 2 circle in between 1 and 3 Fixed.

01:18:864 - (1-4) For the sake of your maps flow try moving this entire combo up a few grid ticks, but don't change the pattern itself make sure you move up all 4 notes evenly. Fixed.

01:26:150 - (2) This circle is offset for no reason, stack it on top of the slider head Fixed.

01:35:150 - (2) try moving this slider right so that the tail aims straight at the next slider head Fixed, but i moved only the head of the slider to the left so that the tail do point to the next slider head but this way i kan keep the slider tail position (it looks nicer).

02:48:436 - (2) This circle should be moved downwards and right of where it is now. Fixed. Also curved the next slider the other way to make it fit better.

And that's everything, Real nice Easy/Normal, and the Hard just need a little clean-up, nothing major. GJ and GL getting this ranked :D Aw yeah!
I'll see if i can find someone willing to make an insane GD for the mapset, but either way, thank you for your mod! ^^
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,535 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Easy

01:00:579 (1,2) - would be better if 01:02:293 (2) was shifted down and more in line with the end of the previous slider
01:16:579 (2) - NC
01:39:721 - don't need this line
01:41:721 (1) - please use a better structured shape
01:44:007 (1) - the angular curves aren't really very nice
01:48:579 (1) - ^
03:05:721 (2,1,2) - can blanket and stack nicely

Would do much better if it didn't look and feel like the patterns and positioning were random...

Normal

01:39:579 - don't need this line
01:44:007 (1) - this isn't a nice shape to use, it looks badly done
03:01:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you ask me, these objects don't complement each other, and the shapes are not matching up into a right pattern

Overall I just don't feel this is right lol...might be the song

Hard

00:30:293 (3,4) - unnecessary anti-jump
01:30:293 (1,2) - why does the spacing differ from 01:31:436 (4,5) when they are the same? Just follow the latter, which looks neater
02:21:721 (3) - NC
02:26:293 (4) - NC
02:30:864 (3) - NC
03:10:864 (8) - NC

The changes in spacing you used just seems too random, and especially the decreases in spacing, it doesn't really look like it was used very well and effectively


Good Luck
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

neonat wrote:

Easy

01:00:579 (1,2) - would be better if 01:02:293 (2) was shifted down and more in line with the end of the previous slider Fixed.
01:16:579 (2) - NC Fixed.
01:39:721 - don't need this line Fixed. It was probably just a leftover from something. Thanks for pointing it out.
01:41:721 (1) - please use a better structured shape Fixed. (i think...)
01:44:007 (1) - the angular curves aren't really very nice Fixed. I tried changing this (and the next slider) to a more fitting shape so that it now probably looks better.
01:48:579 (1) - ^ See above comment.
03:05:721 (2,1,2) - can blanket and stack nicely Fixed.

Would do much better if it didn't look and feel like the patterns and positioning were random...
Random? Not really sure what you mean by that... It is a pretty random song so i think it fits just fine! ^^

Normal

01:39:579 - don't need this line Fixed. Again. Leftover. Removed.
01:44:007 (1) - this isn't a nice shape to use, it looks badly done Fixed. I didn't think it was bad, but the shape i have now might still be better... ^^
03:01:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you ask me, these objects don't complement each other, and the shapes are not matching up into a right pattern
Semi-fixed. I did change the shapes and layout of some of them. But i kept those that i felt still fit well.

Overall I just don't feel this is right lol...might be the song Yeah, it's probably just the song. ^^

Hard

00:30:293 (3,4) - unnecessary anti-jump Fixed. I stacked them instead.
01:30:293 (1,2) - why does the spacing differ from 01:31:436 (4,5) when they are the same? Just follow the latter, which looks neater Fixed. Ops, that was probably just a mistake. You're right, they spacing should have been the same.
02:21:721 (3) - NC Fixed.
02:26:293 (4) - NC Fixed.
02:30:864 (3) - NC Fixed.
03:10:864 (8) - NC Fixed.

The changes in spacing you used just seems too random, and especially the decreases in spacing, it doesn't really look like it was used very well and effectively Then i will try and fix that.

Good Luck
Many thanks for your mod!
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Remove youtube from tags because it doesn't really make sense. Firstly, it was firstly uploaded to nicovideo.jp, however, if we would put 'youtube' or 'nicovideo' or just something else, it would be on everymap. It doesn't make sense, you will find most song from osu! on youtube, so that source is quite obvious, same logic as adding 'song' to tags, I hope you know what I mean.
    Please, don't abuse tags. poop really doesn't stay for a tag. I know you might describe this MAD as a 'poop', but please, don't use profanity in tags, keep them related only to the source.
  2. I would add 'majutsu index' to tags, so if someone looks for "To Aru Majutsu no Index", he will find what he wanted. You know, some of videos, though not many but still, were from To Aru Majutsu no Index, so why should it be just kicked off.
  3. For Normal and Hard - Put end of second kiai time on 03:10:864, because it is more sensible to the song and because you are inconsistent in each diff, which shouldn't be if there is really special reason, which however isn't visible there.
  4. I think drum hitsounds fit more than normal, it currently sounds a bit loud and the claps don't really fit any part of song, so use some nice drum combination or use just custom hitsounds.
  5. I highly recommend CS 3.5 on normal and CS 3 on Easy to make a consistent gap between difficulties. Also, below 3 CS, it is more for slow and very easy maps, but it doesn't really fit current difficulty, as it is a bit harder than slow easy maps.


Hard


  1. Keep widescreen support on, because other diffs just have this enabled and there is no need for inconsistency.
  2. Use AR 7 and OD 6. Current difficulty gap is really huge and it should be balanced a bit.
  3. 00:54:864 (1) - Remove the new combo so it gives constant amount of HP in this part, previously you didn't use combo on such place.
  4. 01:09:721 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Check for new combos in this part. You firstly put new combo for each voice change, but since this time, you sometimes used it for both, sometimes swapped to normal again, it is inconsistent with rest of the map.
  5. 01:30:293 (1,4) - You might want to get a rid off these weird unsymmetrical shapes? Also 02:46:579 (3) - is the same case.

Normal


  1. 02:04:579 (1) - Remove the repeat to be sensible to the song. There is no significant song in the song at the end of the slider, so there should be no repeat at all.
  2. 02:50:293 (1) - Isn't this shape a little better and more sharp?
    SPOILER

Easy


  1. 01:58:007 - Remove this inherited point as it has no function, it doesn't afflict anything because there is one more on 02:01:150

Conclusion: Rankable

Quite fun map, I think parts like 00:30:864 - and 02:34:293 - might have been mapped because it actually is quite significant, while you put just a pause over it, but never mind. Overally, if I consider you are a newbie, you have chances for a rank, shapes and patterns are okay, but most likely because you are new in mapping, your hitsounds are a bit out of place and not really fitting. You might take a look at some maps from... let's say Sieg or even though it's naive, at my map, currently this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289861 You might notice we put hitsounds how they really are in a song or similar and the choice of custom hitsounds is also really fitting with the song, get a bit inspiration and you might maybe improve the hitsounds on this map. Mostly you put it on good place, but you were sometimes overusing and sometimes offusing them and with that clap sound, it just sounds really weird. Just try to improve this a bit and I think you have no problem.

Also have my star and good luck~! :3
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Wafu wrote:

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Remove youtube from tags because it doesn't really make sense. Firstly, it was firstly uploaded to nicovideo.jp, however, if we would put 'youtube' or 'nicovideo' or just something else, it would be on everymap. It doesn't make sense, you will find most song from osu! on youtube, so that source is quite obvious, same logic as adding 'song' to tags, I hope you know what I mean.
    Please, don't abuse tags. poop really doesn't stay for a tag. I know you might describe this MAD as a 'poop', but please, don't use profanity in tags, keep them related only to the source. Fixed. Removed poop and youtube as tags.
  2. I would add 'majutsu index' to tags, so if someone looks for "To Aru Majutsu no Index", he will find what he wanted. You know, some of videos, though not many but still, were from To Aru Majutsu no Index, so why should it be just kicked off. Fixed. Added majutsu and index as tags. At first i didn't even know there was two different series but then, since the title had "railgun", i never thought that it could've been from both of them.
  3. For Normal and Hard - Put end of second kiai time on 03:10:864, because it is more sensible to the song and because you are inconsistent in each diff, which shouldn't be if there is really special reason, which however isn't visible there. Fixed.
  4. I think drum hitsounds fit more than normal, it currently sounds a bit loud and the claps don't really fit any part of song, so use some nice drum combination or use just custom hitsounds. I'm not going to make any changes now but i will consider this and see if i can take time and improve the hitsounds.
  5. I highly recommend CS 3.5 on normal and CS 3 on Easy to make a consistent gap between difficulties. Also, below 3 CS, it is more for slow and very easy maps, but it doesn't really fit current difficulty, as it is a bit harder than slow easy maps. Fixed. CS 3 on easy, and 3.5 on normal.


    Hard


    1. Keep widescreen support on, because other diffs just have this enabled and there is no need for inconsistency. Fixed.
    2. Use AR 7 and OD 6. Current difficulty gap is really huge and it should be balanced a bit. Fixed.
    3. 00:54:864 (1) - Remove the new combo so it gives constant amount of HP in this part, previously you didn't use combo on such place. Fixed.
    4. 01:09:721 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Check for new combos in this part. You firstly put new combo for each voice change, but since this time, you sometimes used it for both, sometimes swapped to normal again, it is inconsistent with rest of the map. Fixed. I fixed so that it now has a new combo for every voice change.
    5. 01:30:293 (1,4) - You might want to get a rid off these weird unsymmetrical shapes? Also 02:46:579 (3) - is the same case. Fixed. (more or less)

    Normal


    1. 02:04:579 (1) - Remove the repeat to be sensible to the song. There is no significant song in the song at the end of the slider, so there should be no repeat at all. Fixed, but i added a hitcircle at 02:08:007 - firstly, because of the otherwise large gap and secondly, because of the "aha" sound there.
    2. 02:50:293 (1) - Isn't this shape a little better and more sharp? Hmm... Yes. Yes it is. Fixed. ^^
      SPOILER

    Easy


    1. 01:58:007 - Remove this inherited point as it has no function, it doesn't afflict anything because there is one more on 02:01:150 Fixed. Well this is embarrasing. A previous modder also spotted some "leftover" points and yet i didn't think of checking if i had more. My bad. ^^

Conclusion: Rankable
You really think so? Then that'll definitely going to keep me going untill it's ranked!

Quite fun map, I think parts like 00:30:864 - and 02:34:293 - might have been mapped because it actually is quite significant, while you put just a pause over it, but never mind. Overally, if I consider you are a newbie, you have chances for a rank, shapes and patterns are okay, but most likely because you are new in mapping, your hitsounds are a bit out of place and not really fitting. You might take a look at some maps from... let's say Sieg or even though it's naive, at my map, currently this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289861 You might notice we put hitsounds how they really are in a song or similar and the choice of custom hitsounds is also really fitting with the song, get a bit inspiration and you might maybe improve the hitsounds on this map. Mostly you put it on good place, but you were sometimes overusing and sometimes offusing them and with that clap sound, it just sounds really weird. Just try to improve this a bit and I think you have no problem.
The reason why i paused over those part was because it was a bit to flashy/intense for me to map when i started mapping this.
As for the hitsounds, when i started mapping this, i wanted to keep things simple and limited so i said to myself that i wasn't going to use any extra/custom things, but now that i've seen how much it's used and how nice it is, i might actually, see if i can get some for it that fits better!

Also have my star and good luck~! :3 Oh wow, thank you! ^^
You're given me something to think about, but it's late here now so i will have to look into the drum/custom hitounds suggestion tomorrow, but anyway;
Big thanks for your mod!

EDIT (2015-04-24):
I decided to use your hitsound suggestions and have now switched to drum hitsounds as base and added som custom hitsound that should fit better with the song.
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
Hello there :)

[Hard]
  1. 01:39:436 (1) - Consider making this a jump
  2. 01:43:150 (2) - I would make this more repeats - Also on normal it starts on a different beat
  3. 01:48:579 (1) - 1/4 before this i would put a stacked note to match the music
  4. 02:28:007 (2) - this should be 1/4 later
Nothing found in Normal

[Easy]
  1. 01:57:721 (2) - Would make this a new combo
  2. 02:29:721 (1) - Consider reworking this blanket
That's it, hope i could help
Just in case you're interested, i think that this map could make for a good extra/insane Diff, and I could make a GD for you :)
If you're interested, feel free to send me a message :)
Good Luck
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Asonate wrote:

Hello there :) Hey! ^^

[Hard]
  1. 01:39:436 (1) - Consider making this a jump Fixed. Hmm... Yes, a jump did feel better!
  2. 01:43:150 (2) - I would make this more repeats - Also on normal it starts on a different beat Fixed. Extened to 8 repeats, from 4 .
    As for the normal diff, I replaced it with a slider that matched this (that starts and end on the same beat as this one). Thanks for spotting this!
  3. 01:48:579 (1) - 1/4 before this i would put a stacked note to match the music Fixed.
  4. 02:28:007 (2) - this should be 1/4 later I'm following the drum beat here so it's on the right beat. No change.
Nothing found in Normal Yay!

[Easy]
  1. 01:57:721 (2) - Would make this a new combo Fixed.
  2. 02:29:721 (1) - Consider reworking this blanket Fixed. Re-blanketed it and changed the pattern a little bit.
That's it, hope i could help
Just in case you're interested, i think that this map could make for a good extra/insane Diff, and I could make a GD for you :)
If you're interested, feel free to send me a message :) Yes, i am very much interested! I've already had someone mention that this song could do with an insane/extra diff but i'm not experienced enough to map one but yeah, i would love it if you want to make one! ^^
Good Luck
Thank you very much for your mod and GD offer (and if you're reading this and i haven't contacted you yet consider this an acceptance for you GD offer)!
Aihuro
329 posts
Joined January 2015
Aihuro
Hey!~ NM from my queue Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! { NM Open }
Well, here goes nothing.

Easy:
  1. 00:26:293 (1,1) - Stack these two sliders better, just move 00:26:293 (1) - at X: 221 Y: 310 to improve the stack.
  2. 01:12:007 (1) - Why not move this slider here instead at X: 316 Y: 152 Something like that maybe?
  3. 02:45:721 (1,1) - Improve the stack please
  4. 03:08:579 (1) - Ctrl+G. It makes a better flow imo.
  5. 03:10:864 (1) - End the slider here maybe?
  6. This diff looks very good, gj~

Normal:
  1. 00:56:007 (3,4,5) - Mm, why not try something else instead of using just circles, like this maybe.
  2. 01:00:579 (1,2,3) - Why not try something like this instead. It looks better and neater imo.
  3. 01:20:007 (3) - I suggest copy and paste with 01:19:436 (2) - and then rotate it 90 degrees Clockwise 2 times. So that it can look like this instead
  4. 01:21:150 (1,2) - The DS here is too close to each other. Please fix it.
  5. 01:30:293 (1,2) - Move this slider 01:31:436 (2) - so that it can be inline with 01:30:293 (1) - Something like this maybe.
  6. 01:39:150 (3,4) - Stack these two notes better please.
  7. 02:27:436 (1,1) - Stack these as well
  8. Also a very nice diff

Hard:
  1. I'm just going to take a quick look at the hard.
  2. 01:27:436 (6,1) - Stack these two notes better please.
  3. 02:16:864 (3,1) - ^
  4. 02:17:579 (2,3) - DS error, please fix it.
  5. 02:29:721 (1,1) - Stack them instead?
  6. 03:08:579 (1,2) - Please improve the Blanket here
  7. Good diff!~ :3

Hope my mod was helpful~
Good Luck ranking this map :)
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Mau-nyan wrote:

Hey!~ NM from my queue Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! { NM Open } Heey!
Well, here goes nothing.

Easy:
  1. 00:26:293 (1,1) - Stack these two sliders better, just move 00:26:293 (1) - at X: 221 Y: 310 to improve the stack. Fixed.
  2. 01:12:007 (1) - Why not move this slider here instead at X: 316 Y: 152 Something like that maybe? Fixed, but i change it a little bit more for flow.
  3. 02:45:721 (1,1) - Improve the stack please Fixed.
  4. 03:08:579 (1) - Ctrl+G. It makes a better flow imo. Fixed.
  5. 03:10:864 (1) - End the slider here maybe? Nah, i like it the way it is now. No change.
  6. This diff looks very good, gj~

Normal:
  1. 00:56:007 (3,4,5) - Mm, why not try something else instead of using just circles, like this maybe. I played around a little with your suggestion and found something that i think is better!
  2. 01:00:579 (1,2,3) - Why not try something like this instead. It looks better and neater imo. Fixed. I think that's kind of what i wanted to achive but didn't get it right.
  3. 01:20:007 (3) - I suggest copy and paste with 01:19:436 (2) - and then rotate it 90 degrees Clockwise 2 times. So that it can look like this instead Fixed.
  4. 01:21:150 (1,2) - The DS here is too close to each other. Please fix it. Fixed.
  5. 01:30:293 (1,2) - Move this slider 01:31:436 (2) - so that it can be inline with 01:30:293 (1) - Something like this maybe. I think the blanketing i have now is nice and this change didn't seem like an improvement compared to what i have now, sorry. No change.
  6. 01:39:150 (3,4) - Stack these two notes better please. Fixed.
  7. 02:27:436 (1,1) - Stack these as well Fixed. Whoops, they should have been stacked already. Thanks.
  8. Also a very nice diff

Hard:
  1. I'm just going to take a quick look at the hard. Ok!
  2. 01:27:436 (6,1) - Stack these two notes better please. Fixed.
  3. 02:16:864 (3,1) - ^ Fixed.
  4. 02:17:579 (2,3) - DS error, please fix it. Fixed.
  5. 02:29:721 (1,1) - Stack them instead? No, I've explicitly placed 02:29:721 (1,1,1) - those like that. No change.
  6. 03:08:579 (1,2) - Please improve the Blanket here Fixed.
  7. Good diff!~ :3

Hope my mod was helpful~
Good Luck ranking this map :) It was really helpful, and thanks! ^^
A big thank you for your mod!
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
Here's my Diff :)

Aso's Challenge
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Usual_Shitking_Railgun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81150
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20578,30864,49150,62864,81150,99436,117721,136007,154293,162293,172579,190864
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.359999

[Metadata]
Title:Usual Shitking Railgun
TitleUnicode:Usual Shitking Railgun
Artist:Ishii-chan
ArtistUnicode:いしいちゃん
Creator:Thism2
Version:Aso's Challenge
Source:
Tags:anime otoMAD mad ytpmv to aru kagaku no railgun majutsu index lapfox trax renard ytp
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.4
OverallDifficulty:8.3
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"Ususal_Shitking_Railgun_Bg3.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Usual_Shitking_Railgun_Mov.flv"
//Break Periods
2,99671,101181
2,111064,112610
2,117921,135467
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 255,128,0
Combo3 : 225,225,225

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Arusamour
424 posts
Joined April 2014
Arusamour
Aso's Challenge (6,3 stars, 814 notes) Quick Modding
00:32:864 (7) - Don't place this here because it's too close to 00:32:436 (6)

00:33:579 (4) - Should be angled more like, x: 252 y: 68

00:37:436 (6) - I would make this slider velocity a lot faster.

00:38:102 (7) - Return arrow on this causes bad flow for 00:38:579 (8). You may want to remap this.

00:39:650 (6) - x: 360 y: 220

00:39:721 (7) - x: 344 y: 196

^ those two make it a lot less messier and play better.

00:40:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would tighten the stream a lot more. (make them closer)

00:53:579 (7) - x: 80 y: 160

00:53:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - move these up higher to match the slider end of 00:53:579 (7).

00:54:007 (5) - x: 281 y: 187
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hey there!
mod from my queue

General
  1. maybe you want to put a warning in the description that even people who usually don't have any problems with videos might want to turn it off. I'm getting a headache watching this. x-x xD
  2. and I'm a little worried cause of the gap between Hard and Insane.. but it might be okay. .o. I'm not sure.
Hard
  1. 00:58:293 - unnecessary green line, delete?
  2. 00:23:436 (5,1) - flow is weird, how about ctrl+h (1) and rotating it a bit, so it starts somewhere in the upper left? that imrpoves flow a lot
  3. 00:28:150 (6,7,1) - similar here, you could rearrange the previous pattern a little to improve this - http://puu.sh/iSOee.jpg
  4. 00:30:864 (5) - completely new sound starts, so you can put NC here
  5. 00:56:007 (1) - whops, this slider looks broken. using only one anchor might look better >o<
  6. 01:00:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you space them out a little? the overlapping parts look messy ;-; (just press ctrl + shift + S and use 1.1 as scale value, looks a lot better!)
  7. 01:04:436 (2) - the end of the slider should be clickable, imo, cause of the more dominant sound. try this rhythm maybe - http://puu.sh/iSOqB.jpg
  8. 01:16:579 (1) - try ctrl + j, rotate by -45° and move to 172|240, this doesn't play as abrupt as the current pattern. you'd just have to do something with 01:17:721 (1) - then, too
  9. 01:20:293 (4,1) - aah, sad you didn't map the part in between. ;-; such a nice opportunity. conisder mapping this, please!
  10. 01:22:579 (5,6,7) - movement from (5) to (6) is meh. how about ctrl+g (6) and then (7) too?
  11. 01:24:579 (6,7,8,9,1) - (6) and (7) emphasize the background sound very nicely, but (8) and (9) break that, I'd suggest to replace (8) and (9) with a 1/1 slider and then add a circle at 01:25:579 - to match the songs pace. - http://puu.sh/iSOJd.jpg
  12. 01:43:150 (2) - the later part of this feels off, because the sound changes. try this rhythm here, maybe you like that better - http://puu.sh/iSOQB.jpg
  13. 02:04:579 (1) - looks nice but I think the sound at 02:06:864 - should be better emphasized. ;-;
jyu's Insane
  1. 01:00:007 (7,8,9) - I love how the spacing increase matches the vocals, but compared to this 01:02:293 (9) - is still too "fast". Consider replacing the slider with two anti-jump circles? - http://puu.sh/iSPw0.jpg
  2. 01:20:579 - only 10% volume? ;-; you can barely hear anything here. I'd prefer if you increase this a bit to ~20%?
  3. 01:32:007 (4,5,1) - flow seems weird here, I'm sure you can improve this. how about http://puu.sh/iSPE6.jpg instead?
That's all, pretty fun diff! :3

and sorry, but I can't play Aso's Challenge. -sucks ta playing- xD

But hopefully I was able to help a little! Good luck with this! :3
*squee*
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Boobs wrote:

Aso's Challenge (6,3 stars, 814 notes) Quick Modding

Squirrel wrote:

hey there! Heey!
mod from my queue

General
  1. maybe you want to put a warning in the description that even people who usually don't have any problems with videos might want to turn it off. I'm getting a headache watching this. x-x xD I know what you mean, that's why i have the epileptic warning on. ^^
    Maybe I'll add a warning in the description too...
  2. and I'm a little worried cause of the gap between Hard and Insane.. but it might be okay. .o. I'm not sure.
Yes, it is a gap but i guess we'll have to see if it is ok or not, but i think i maybe can try and make the hard a little harder and maybe jyu can make his insane a little easier...

Hard
  1. 00:58:293 - unnecessary green line, delete? Fixed.
  2. 00:23:436 (5,1) - flow is weird, how about ctrl+h (1) and rotating it a bit, so it starts somewhere in the upper left? that imrpoves flow a lot Fixed.
  3. 00:28:150 (6,7,1) - similar here, you could rearrange the previous pattern a little to improve this - http://puu.sh/iSOee.jpg Fixed. Yes, that had a better flow.
  4. 00:30:864 (5) - completely new sound starts, so you can put NC here I rather keep as it is since a break starts just after. No change.
  5. 00:56:007 (1) - whops, this slider looks broken. using only one anchor might look better >o< Fixed.Whoops, indeed. Should look better now. ^^
  6. 01:00:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you space them out a little? the overlapping parts look messy ;-; (just press ctrl + shift + S and use 1.1 as scale value, looks a lot better!) Fixed.
  7. 01:04:436 (2) - the end of the slider should be clickable, imo, cause of the more dominant sound. try this rhythm maybe - http://puu.sh/iSOqB.jpg Fixed.
  8. 01:16:579 (1) - try ctrl + j, rotate by -45° and move to 172|240, this doesn't play as abrupt as the current pattern. you'd just have to do something with 01:17:721 (1) - then, too Fixed.
  9. 01:20:293 (4,1) - aah, sad you didn't map the part in between. ;-; such a nice opportunity. conisder mapping this, please! Now that you mention it, i think i will try and map it. ^^
  10. 01:22:579 (5,6,7) - movement from (5) to (6) is meh. how about ctrl+g (6) and then (7) too? Fixed. Yeah, it proabably flows better now.
  11. 01:24:579 (6,7,8,9,1) - (6) and (7) emphasize the background sound very nicely, but (8) and (9) break that, I'd suggest to replace (8) and (9) with a 1/1 slider and then add a circle at 01:25:579 - to match the songs pace. - http://puu.sh/iSOJd.jpg Fixed.
  12. 01:43:150 (2) - the later part of this feels off, because the sound changes. try this rhythm here, maybe you like that better - http://puu.sh/iSOQB.jpg Fixed.
  13. 02:04:579 (1) - looks nice but I think the sound at 02:06:864 - should be better emphasized. ;-; Maybe, but i think i want to keep the whole string sound as one slider for now. No change.
and sorry, but I can't play Aso's Challenge. -sucks ta playing- xD Neither can i, so it's ok, hehe.

But hopefully I was able to help a little! Good luck with this! :3
*squee* ^^
Thanks very much for both of your mods!
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate

Boobs wrote:

Aso's Challenge (6,3 stars, 814 notes) Quick Modding
00:32:864 (7) - Don't place this here because it's too close to 00:32:436 (6) well, i intended it to be so close tho

00:33:579 (4) - Should be angled more like, x: 252 y: 68 it would overlay with the previous 6 then - Moved it a bit

00:37:436 (6) - I would make this slider velocity a lot faster. I'll consider it, if more people complain

00:38:102 (7) - Return arrow on this causes bad flow for 00:38:579 (8). You may want to remap this. The voice is really hard to map to here, so i wanted to keep it with that repeatslider, which gets both words without too advanced rhythm - As before, if more people complain, I'll change it

00:39:650 (6) - x: 360 y: 220 Changed it

00:39:721 (7) - x: 344 y: 196 Moved a bit

^ those two make it a lot less messier and play better.

00:40:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would tighten the stream a lot more. (make them closer) Well, i'm using the same spacing as for all the other streams, so what would make this one special ?

00:53:579 (7) - x: 80 y: 160 My intention is to put these slider on the first stream note

00:53:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - move these up higher to match the slider end of 00:53:579 (7). I want them to follow the slider afterwards - But you made me recognize that they didn't fit the slider perfectly

00:54:007 (5) - x: 281 y: 187 same
Thanks for your mod, it might look too red, but still was really helpful for me; Kudosu for Boobs :)

New Diff: (Renamed to Asona's Challenge)

Asona's Challenge
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jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
mod from my queue

General
  1. and I'm a little worried cause of the gap between Hard and Insane.. but it might be okay. .o. I'm not sure. this also concerns me. i will decrease the difficulty gap in near future
jyu's Insane
  1. 01:00:007 (7,8,9) - I love how the spacing increase matches the vocals, but compared to this 01:02:293 (9) - is still too "fast". Consider replacing the slider with two anti-jump circles? - http://puu.sh/iSPw0.jpg fix. made it a stack
  2. 01:20:579 - only 10% volume? ;-; you can barely hear anything here. I'd prefer if you increase this a bit to ~20%? fix to 25%
  3. 01:32:007 (4,5,1) - flow seems weird here, I'm sure you can improve this. how about http://puu.sh/iSPE6.jpg instead? nice! fix
That's all, pretty fun diff! :3 thank you! :)
Thank you for mod! :)

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[General]
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Title:Usual Shitking Railgun
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Artist:Ishii-chan
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Creator:Thism2
Version:jyu's Insane
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Tags:anime otoMAD mad ytpmv to aru kagaku no railgun majutsu index lapfox trax renard ytp
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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
I'm too tired to think of something funny to say

Overall:
Technically you have to put an 18+ tag because of language in the song's title. Even if there's nothing 18+, someone will get mad over it.

The hardest diff:
Fix your unsnapped notes. If it's intentional, then please do not do that. It's unrankable regardless, but most rhythm doesn't go that in depth.
00:21:721 (1,2) - Ok so nite placement here is really bad. If you're going to place notes, you want to make them as not jerky as possible. And right now I have to jerk awkwardly southwest to hit the next note, and it makes me sad.
00:28:293 (5,6) - ok can you do this jump like
00:29:436 (2,3,4) - Generally if you want to have sped-up sliders, you're going to want to have NCs for that so people can read them. Otherwise it's literally impossible
00:32:864 (7) - I feel like this is a mistake because this placement is just like 0/10 no good. Generally, when you map, you're going to NOT want overlaps on top of hitcircles/slider beginnings
00:34:436 (1,1,1,1) - So the passage is going chromatically down, but you're sort of like bell-curving the sliders, which doesn't make much sense. Also, having it in a line, while it may LOOK creative, doesn't play well at all
00:36:007 (6) - But why this jump? why
00:54:007 (5) - never do this ever again

Ok instaed of me making a long mod post pointing out every issue, I'm going to go ahead and list the general complaints I have with the map

1) Regardless of the difficulty you are making, spacing is important. It's important to have a reference point of what "home plate" is. Even with really jumpy maps, there is a sense of consistency with how notes are being presented. You're not just going to place notes completely at random. Even if people don't really use Distance Snap, they still keep their patterns a relatively similar distance snap. Right now, the notes seem placed at random
2) Slider velocity changes are dumb. I hate how the new trend is to just change slider velocities all the time. It's stupid. But regardless of my personal opinions, your slider velocity changes really don't flow all that well. Firstly, most sliderspeed changes are indicated by a new combo, so the player is aware of something new happening. Maps that use REALLY GOOD sliderspeed changes often will have one color dedicated for fast sliders. But they should be planned out and easy to read. A lot of times, they just seem random. While I see why they sometimes fit in the music, it's still not easily readable, and people that don't know the song will end up being very confused.
3) Patterns are important. Even I don't really always map with patterns, but I generally make sure things are clear and have direction. A lot of times I'm not really sure where I'm throwing my mouse, or what motivation you have for placing the notes. You don't really to have a whole lot of thought when placing patterns, but they should correlate with the music and should be easily readable and enjoyable. Random note placement is nevre good.
4) Hitsounds are fun. Make sure they correlate with the drums, and make sure they're consistent. Claps on the 1st and 3rd small white tick tend to work really good.

Those are the main general points I want to bring out. I'm sorry that this is a short mod and that I haven't gotten to the other diffs yet, but I'd like you to look at the map and look at the fundamentals of mapping that are important to creating a successful beatmap. If I sit here and list every problem, it wouldn't be helpful, as you're not understanding the foundation of what makes a solid map solid, and therefore there's no understanding of why changes are being made, just changing, which is no good.

If you have any questions about how to approach this, please PM me. I'm not on much but I can try to help

Yay.
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
@Reditum
Thanks for your mod !
Even so, I have to tell you that I do fully understand every single Point you made (maybe not as much with SV, but still), but I have to regretfully tell you:
I was (as of recently) fully aware of all these issues, and am currently remapping my GDs. So, your mod considering wrong patterns with fixed times might not be that useful to me (except i keep parts of the old Diff).
Even tho, I am really thankful for your mod, and will keep the points you wrote down in mind while remapping (in 1 week, because Im enjoying my vacation atm)

So, after all Kudosu for Reditum, its really appreciated !
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

Reditum wrote:

I'm too tired to think of something funny to say Well, hey there anyway!

Overall:
Technically you have to put an 18+ tag because of language in the song's title. Even if there's nothing 18+, someone will get mad over it. Hmm... I'm not sure that the word "shit" in "shitking" really is that bad that the beatmap set really needs a 18+ tag when, like you said, there's nothing 18+ in it. I'll leave it for now and maybe add it if someone else also complains about it too. No change.

Yay.
Thank you for your mod and sorry for late reply and kudosu!
tochiii
Elite Storyboarder
1,444 posts
Joined November 2013
tochiii



  • General

  1. +7 or +10 Offset.
  2. Check AiMod:
  3. These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 00:44:864
  4. Object's end is not snapped! 02:24:577
  5. Object's end is not snapped! 02:34:577
  6. These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 02:34:578
  7. Object's end is not snapped! 02:40:434
  8. Object's end is not snapped! 03:08:434
  9. The Artist should be exactly like: Ishii-Chan
  10. Add another combo color?
  11. Disable: Widescreen Support
  12. Disable: epilepsy warning
  13. Add: To Aru Series × Usual Shitking To the Tags.


  • jyu's Insane

  1. 01:05:150 (1,2) - This should be like: http://puu.sh/k0VWe/0765770ddb.png
  2. 01:09:721 (1,2,3) - This should end here 01:09:936 -
  3. 01:10:150 (3) - This should end here 01:10:364 -
  4. 01:14:721 (3) - This should end here 01:14:936 -
  5. 01:43:436 (3) - Mute the end?
  6. 01:44:007 (1) - Mute the repeat at 01:45:150 - ?
  7. 02:09:660 - I don't think this part: 02:09:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Needs to be mapped.
  8. 02:09:231 - And move the break to 02:09:446 - like: http://puu.sh/k0Wtg/a0f44cce7b.png
  9. 02:34:302 (1,2) - Please fix this. It should be like this: http://puu.sh/k0WxV/075b61799b.png


  • Hard

  1. 00:24:007 (1,2) - Avoid this little overlap?
  2. 02:24:721 (3,4) - Fix this stack.
  3. 03:08:579 (1,2) - Improve this blanket.


  • Feedback


    Nice map, good luck!
Thism2
37 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Thism2

-Tochi wrote:


  • General

  1. +7 or +10 Offset. +10 to offset.
  2. Check AiMod:
  3. These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 00:44:864 juy will have to fix this in his diff.
  4. Object's end is not snapped! 02:24:577 ^
  5. Object's end is not snapped! 02:34:577 ^
  6. These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 02:34:578 ^
  7. Object's end is not snapped! 02:40:434 ^
  8. Object's end is not snapped! 03:08:434 ^
  9. The Artist should be exactly like: Ishii-Chan Fixed.
  10. Add another combo color? Added another color.
  11. Disable: Widescreen Support Fixed.
  12. Disable: epilepsy warning I know this is supposed to be for storyboarding but I want to keep this on because of the heavy flashes of lightning in the video. No change.
  13. Add: To Aru Series × Usual Shitking To the Tags. Added series to the tags. The rest of the keywords i already have except from "x" which i don't think i need as a tag. ^^


  • Hard

  1. 00:24:007 (1,2) - Avoid this little overlap? Fixed.
  2. 02:24:721 (3,4) - Fix this stack. Fixed.
  3. 03:08:579 (1,2) - Improve this blanket. I remade it to a blanket that probably works better.


  • Feedback

    Nice map, good luck! Thanks. ^^
Thank you for you mod!
jyu
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jyu
Hi! My deepest apology for the late reply and update ;;;;;;;;;;;

-Tochi wrote:


  • jyu's Insane

  1. 01:05:150 (1,2) - This should be like: http://puu.sh/k0VWe/0765770ddb.png fix
  2. 01:09:721 (1,2,3) - This should end here 01:09:936 - fix
  3. 01:10:150 (3) - This should end here 01:10:364 - fix
  4. 01:14:721 (3) - This should end here 01:14:936 - fix
  5. 01:43:436 (3) - Mute the end? fix
  6. 01:44:007 (1) - Mute the repeat at 01:45:150 - ? fix
  7. 02:09:660 - I don't think this part: 02:09:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Needs to be mapped. fix
  8. 02:09:231 - And move the break to 02:09:446 - like: http://puu.sh/k0Wtg/a0f44cce7b.png fix
  9. 02:34:302 (1,2) - Please fix this. It should be like this: http://puu.sh/k0WxV/075b61799b.png fix
fixed all lmao thanks a lot!!
update : http://puu.sh/kjXkl/d147aa4435.osu
Thism2
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jyu wrote:

Hi! My deepest apology for the late reply and update ;;;;;;;;;;;
...
fixed all lmao thanks a lot!!
update : http://puu.sh/kjXkl/d147aa4435.osu
Diff updated, (i also updated it to the new offset and fixed some minor AiMod things you had forgotten to check ^^).
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